Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World

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Momochy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年12月3日 at 下午 08:27:23

Artist: Shiena Nishizawa
Title: Brand-new World
Source: 学戦都市アスタリスク
Tags: THE ASTERISK WAR The Academy City on the Water Gakusen Toshi Asterisk tv size opening op -_E_n_j_u_- enju Bearizm Hakurei Yoru toybot litoluna Asahina Momoko M_o_k_o_r_i mokori Kawaiwkyik Rizia
BPM: 205
Filesize: 14190kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bearizm's Easy (1.82 stars, 114 notes)
  2. Extra (5.63 stars, 359 notes)
  3. Hard (3.44 stars, 252 notes)
  4. litoluna's Extra (5.29 stars, 317 notes)
  5. momoko's Extra (6.05 stars, 379 notes)
  6. Normal (2.24 stars, 169 notes)
  7. toybot's Insane (4.76 stars, 322 notes)
  8. wkyik's Asterisk (6.44 stars, 348 notes)
  9. Yoru's Insane (4.18 stars, 297 notes)


Download: Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World
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「Difficulties」

Easy by Bearizm
Normal by me
Hard by me
Insane2 by toybot
Insane3 by Hakurei Yoru
Extra by me
Extra2 by litoluna
Extra3 by Asahina Momoko
Asterisk by Rizia

^Thanks for guest diff ♥^

Lavender
yf_bmp
KaedekaShizuru
appleeaterx
VINXIS
smallboat
DreaM117er
Karen
THANKS!
Lavender
[Extra]
  1. 00:28:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:29:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 211/ 2/12/1 21/12/1/1/2
    把345合成一个滑条才是比较切合的节奏吧
  2. 00:42:118 (3) - 不如叠到00:40:069 (1) - 这里
  3. 01:18:996 (4) - 这里用水滴声非常违和,感觉有点做作,换几个重鼓都好多了
  4. 01:23:679 (1,1) - 没stack好

[Litoluna]
  1. 00:34:655 (5) - a note would follow vocal better
  2. 00:37:435 (3) - 01:14:899 (1) - avoid placing the stress at sliderend, use 3/4+note instead
  3. 00:51:045 (1,2) - idk why you use 2 sliders here, 3 notes would be far better, at least you could replace the first slider with 2 notes.
  4. 00:58:508 (3,4,1) -
  5. 01:04:508 (5) - touched hp bar, pls fix that\

[momoko]
  1. 00:34:801 (3) - 00:39:484 (3) - seems no need to exist owo
  2. 00:49:435 (1) - nice nipples
  3. 01:05:386 (1,3) - swap
  4. 01:23:679 (2,3,4) - NC

[wkyik]
  1. 好量产, nothing to say

idk how2mod 1/2 211/ 2/12/1 21/12/1/1/2 jumpy mappu
yf_bmp
[wkyik]
00:25:435 (3,6) - 不懂这种遮挡的美观度

01:15:484 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 不解释

[Momoko]
00:23:386 (1,3) - detail
00:49:435 (1) - no idea whether it is rankable.
00:51:045 (1,2) - not fit the music. just use 1/2 circles.
01:23:386 (1,2,3) - increasing speed intead of decreasing so that it will fit the music more.

[Extra]
00:14:021 (5) - 不怎么适合配相同的音效,因为这里没有与之前相同的音

[litoluna]
00:58:508 (3,4,1) - This is really sudden.. why not make it same as 01:08:094 (4,1) -

[Yoru]
00:24:850 (1,2) - 这距离具有误导性
Silky
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Topic Starter
Momochy

Mamayu wrote:

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KaedekaShizuru
As request

[柚子]
00:04:069 (1) - 1.3X加速太快 我不觉得这里需要这么快的slider speed 建议1.0
00:14:313 (1,2) - 交换位置;个人建议还要把00:14:313 (1) 放在00:14:021 (3) 下面
00:48:264 (2) - del
01:03:338 (1) - 真的没必要卷成这样
01:15:338 - 不建议漏过这里的drum
01:24:410 (6) - 为什么最后这个突然放这么近 而且我觉得momoko下的节奏更舒服

[Momoko]
00:40:215 (2) - move to X107 Y170
01:17:533 (1,1,1,1) - far DS better I think, after all, here is relatively high pitch

[Extra]
00:47:094 (1) - 跟下vocal吧 你这样虽然依稀听得出是跟伴奏但是真的太弱了 至少也像柚子那样
01:09:484 (2,4,6) - 败笔的normal-whistle

[litoluna]
00:47:094 (4) - same with Enjoy. I prefer following vocal or like Rizia's
others fine

[toybot]
00:32:313 (1) - so why you NC here?
00:42:996 (2,3,4) - Silent the slider tail, 20%Vol.
00:46:508 (2) - ↑
00:47:094 (1) - ↑
00:46:216 - if you want follow the vocal this part, del this circle pls.
01:24:264 (1) - and here. I don't think here need NC.

[红白]
最开始这段完全没有音效?好歹在长白线加一点whistle啊
00:42:996 (1,1,2,1,2) - 超难看好不好 减速后摆起来更简单吧
00:51:045 (1) - 为什么放过00:51:338 这个音?
01:02:752 (3) - 不在重音上更不是NC放这么远合适吗


[Hard]
00:47:094 (1) - same with Extra
01:09:484 (5) - 同 败笔的normal-whistle

[Normal]
01:09:484 (4) - 你懂的

good luck~
Mint
Hello! As your request :3/

:idea: General


* Combo colors are not consistent in all diffs.

Easy


* 00:53:386 (4) - Perhaps make this consistent with 01:02:752 (4,1) - ? I see why you'd do this for the vocals, but skipping a finish and creating a polarity at the same time doesn't seem like the smartest thing to do here.

Yoru's Insane


* 00:00:265 (1) - 20% volume is too low, the objects can be considered not audible enough for ranking standards.
* 00:00:265 - Same issue as Momoko's difficulty, the volume setting isn't consistent either.
* 00:11:972 (1,2) - Highly inappropriate distance, given the actual difficulty of the map itself and how sudden this it.
* 00:24:850 (1,2,3) - Please make a difference in spacing when you have 3/4 patterns. Currently, these are spaced exactly the same, yet different in snaps.
* 00:31:143 (2,3,4) - Quite an awkward angle + large jumps here. Would ease it out a bit if I were you.
* 00:42:118 (4) - Reverse arrow not visible at all.
* 01:17:533 (1) - Finish?

toybot's Insane


* 00:06:264 (2) - I don't really think this drum hitsound is need here. Sounds a bit spammed o_o
* 00:17:533 (4) - Strange to not map out the vocal here as well, when you have 00:18:996 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - later on.

litoluna's Extra


* 00:12:996 (1) - A pity that these are offbeat - (2,3,4) are all clickable and leaving the one beat that actually starts this offbeat is a bit sad :c
* 00:17:679 - Not going to map this vocal out? In this whole calm part every single one of them has been mapped, except this one.
* 00:32:460 (6) - Could use a hitsound.
* 00:40:508 (3) - Would emphasize that clap on the red tick by mapping it out here. Feels strange to leave that out, if the rest is all mapped.
* 00:47:094 (4) - Same as Extra, kinda expected that you'd follow the vocal here?
* 00:49:362 (1) - Also the spinner, completely up to you guys, but I find that atleast starting or ending something on the white tick feels better - the sound won't be left out completely.
* 01:14:899 (1) - Please consider making that finish clickable... it's the lead-in to the next section and leaving it offbeat takes away quite a bit of emphasis here.

Extra


* 00:41:825 (1,2,3,4,1) - Not sure how I feel about this pattern to be really honest. Having (2) overlapped for the most part is already quite confusing, and (3) seems quite close to (2) as well...
* 00:47:094 (1) - Strange to not follow the vocals here? The previous sliders all did.
* 00:49:435 (1) - Perhaps start this on the white tick instead? Would be nicer to have atleast something start/end on the white tick to go with the section change.
* 01:09:484 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Having only default whistles to listen to at a stream, is not really a good thing. It gives little feedback and often plays a bit strange. Consider having a louder/more noticeable hit-normal to go with the default whistles if you still want to keep them.
* 01:23:972 (1,2) - Why suddenly so close? The previous (1,2,1,2) didn't have any distance change, so this comes a bit sudden.
* 01:24:264 (1,2) - Combined with the large spacing, and the complete overlaps here - I personally find this too overdone/hard for sounds that are quite soft.

Momoko's Extra


* 00:00:265 (1) - The uninherited & the inherited timing sections have a different volume setting. Please make this consistent.
* 00:00:704 (2,1) - The pattern looks fine, but the anti-spacing that results here plays a bit lame :c
* 00:10:508 (6) - Kinda expected that this one would have the largest due to the clap ._.
* 00:22:947 (1) - Not sure why you put those weird hitsounds, but I don't really hear anything in the song that could support that and it's quite confusing now.
* 00:49:435 (1) - Uhh... I question whether the red points are rankable here... they mess with the SV/reading...
* 00:51:045 (1,2) - Low SV kicksliders don't play that well at all, due to the overlap with the head & end being too big. Not sure if the kicksliders fit such a <calm> part either... well it's up to you.
* 00:51:338 (3) - rip guitar
* 00:54:118 (1) - Slider end could use a hitsound.
* 00:56:167 (1,2) - Seeing many other jump placements in your difficulty, when playing I expected a DS increase instead? At this point a 2nd vocal track also kicks in so yeah...
* 01:06:264 (2,3,4) - Mixed feelings about the extended sliders here. I personally refrain from putting them when I skip <important> sounds. Yes, they do fit the vocals - but I don't think putting a 3/4 slider at every vocal is an option either.
* 01:06:996 (1) - 01:07:582 (4) - 01:08:752 (4) - Drum sampleset?
* 01:09:045 (6) - Extended slider covers a quite important sounds on the red tick. Having a stream directly after this doesn't make this exactly more comfortable to play either ._.
* 01:11:386 (6) - Putting finishes/cymbals as offbeat in strong sections like these, really take away the emphasis - regardless whether the focus is on the instruments or vocals.
* 01:11:679 (7,1) - //nazi\\ This overlap looks more like an accident lel.
* 01:15:191 (1) - Not sure if you noticed, but everything at this part is focused on the right-side of the screen. Maybe inevitable with a short sized song like this, but given the song and the jumps - I expected more usage of the playfield. The playfield throughout the whole song is quite centered as well (check CTRL+A). Perhaps more of a tip for future maps.
* 01:17:533 (1,1,1,1) - Really anticlimatic to have such low distance for the strongest sound in the song - especially after the jumps before this.
* Also quite an amount of overmaps in the KIAI. Try to tone it down a little, to avoid any problems that might occur later on.

wkyik's Asterisk


* 00:15:484 (1) - Found it quite strange to put the reverse on the white tick here instead. There is ofcourse the ongoing 1/1 beat going on, but the strongest synth is 1/2 later instead... it isn't as noticeable as 00:18:996 (1) - either o_o
* 00:27:191 (1) - 00:29:533 (1) - Drum sampleset?
* 00:49:289 (3) - Were you planning to silence the end? The green line is incorrectly snapped, thus losing it's function.
* 01:02:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - After several plays, I still find these really close. Even your note-to-note spacing never gets small like this in the chorus. Kinda takes away the emphasis, since the overall distance with slider-based patterns is pretty large.
* 01:06:996 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Comes pretty randomly in my eyes... this section doesn't seem as powerful as the section later on. I can understand how 01:07:582 (1,2,1,2) - is large, but I find the other two a bit overdone.
* 01:17:533 (1) - Finish?
* 01:22:216 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Could use some hitsounds as well, considering the sounds you're emphasizing are literally the same as 00:11:972 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - .

Good luck!
Asahina Momoko
almost applied suggestions by everyone, thanks for mod :)

about 00:49:435 (1) - , let me ask some ppl for this since somehow i like this weird shape lol

http://puu.sh/oEnN3/f9c151f247.zip
litoluna
wow thank you for a lot of opinionsuggestions. thanks ;)
http://puu.sh/oEDxC.zip
Girl
Cx
Rizia

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

As request

[柚子]
00:04:069 (1) - 1.3X加速太快 我不觉得这里需要这么快的slider speed 建议1.0 我覺得還可以
00:14:313 (1,2) - 交换位置;个人建议还要把00:14:313 (1) 放在00:14:021 (3) 下面
00:48:264 (2) - del
01:03:338 (1) - 真的没必要卷成这样
01:15:338 - 不建议漏过这里的drum 比較簡單
01:24:410 (6) - 为什么最后这个突然放这么近 而且我觉得momoko下的节奏更舒服

good luck~

appleeaterx wrote:

wkyik's Asterisk


* 00:15:484 (1) - Found it quite strange to put the reverse on the white tick here instead. There is ofcourse the ongoing 1/1 beat going on, but the strongest synth is 1/2 later instead... it isn't as noticeable as 00:18:996 (1) - either o_o follow vocal now
* 00:27:191 (1) - 00:29:533 (1) - Drum sampleset?
* 00:49:289 (3) - Were you planning to silence the end? The green line is incorrectly snapped, thus losing it's function.
* 01:02:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - After several plays, I still find these really close. Even your note-to-note spacing never gets small like this in the chorus. Kinda takes away the emphasis, since the overall distance with slider-based patterns is pretty large.
* 01:06:996 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Comes pretty randomly in my eyes... this section doesn't seem as powerful as the section later on. I can understand how 01:07:582 (1,2,1,2) - is large, but I find the other two a bit overdone. i think increase spacing is fit here
* 01:17:533 (1) - Finish?
* 01:22:216 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Could use some hitsounds as well, considering the sounds you're emphasizing are literally the same as 00:11:972 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - .

Good luck!
osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Brand-new World
TitleUnicode:Brand-new World
Artist:Shiena Nishizawa
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Enjoy
Version:wkyik's Asterisk
Source:学戦都市アスタリスク
Tags:THE ASTERISK WAR The Academy City on the Water Gakusen Toshi Asterisk tv size opening op -_E_n_j_u_- enju Bearizm Hakurei Yoru toybot litoluna Asahina Momoko M_o_k_o_r_i Kawaiwkyik Rizia
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232,288,59240,2,0,P|280:276|332:268,1,90,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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340,176,74752,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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324,328,75923,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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Bearizm
fixed what apple suggested. did some more work on it

http://puu.sh/oI8En.osu
toybot
thanks for suggestions, changed some stuff ---
https://0paste.com/8489.txt
Topic Starter
Momochy

Lavender wrote:

[Extra]
  1. 00:28:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:29:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 211/ 2/12/1 21/12/1/1/2
    把345合成一个滑条才是比较切合的节奏吧 keep吧,現在這樣比較喜歡
  2. 00:42:118 (3) - 不如叠到00:40:069 (1) - 这里
  3. 01:18:996 (4) - 这里用水滴声非常违和,感觉有点做作,换几个重鼓都好多了 還好吧,跟柚子一樣
  4. 01:23:679 (1,1) - 没stack好

yf_bmp wrote:

00:14:021 (5) - 不怎么适合配相同的音效,因为这里没有与之前相同的音

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[Extra]
00:47:094 (1) - 跟下vocal吧 你这样虽然依稀听得出是跟伴奏但是真的太弱了 至少也像柚子那样
01:09:484 (2,4,6) - 败笔的normal-whistle

appleeaterx wrote:

Hello! As your request :3/

:idea: General


* Combo colors are not consistent in all diffs.

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* 00:41:825 (1,2,3,4,1) - Not sure how I feel about this pattern to be really honest. Having (2) overlapped for the most part is already quite confusing, and (3) seems quite close to (2) as well...
* 00:47:094 (1) - Strange to not follow the vocals here? The previous sliders all did.
* 00:49:435 (1) - Perhaps start this on the white tick instead? Would be nicer to have atleast something start/end on the white tick to go with the section change.
* 01:09:484 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Having only default whistles to listen to at a stream, is not really a good thing. It gives little feedback and often plays a bit strange. Consider having a louder/more noticeable hit-normal to go with the default whistles if you still want to keep them.
* 01:23:972 (1,2) - Why suddenly so close? The previous (1,2,1,2) didn't have any distance change, so this comes a bit sudden. I think those are ok :(
* 01:24:264 (1,2) - Combined with the large spacing, and the complete overlaps here - I personally find this too overdone/hard for sounds that are quite soft.^

Good luck!
no reply = fixed
thx for modding!

Edit: updated all diff
VINXIS
ill mod the extras so its even length as the m4m map K

general

  1. add audioleadin to the diffs cuz small intro time

litloluna

  1. 00:22:508 (2) - tbh u cud space it farther from the sliderend it looks better imo http://puu.sh/oSEvH/9b78d8ed50.jpg
  2. 00:39:630 (1,2) - same here tbh Xddd
  3. 01:15:338 (2,4) - ekth4wherui5et4
  4. 01:16:362 (1,3) - tbh space these farther the overlap is rlly bad :L

exatr

  1. 01:03:338 (1,3) - sliderend and circle overlap is rlly ugly/bad efrtuit2rfe
  2. 01:06:996 (1) - i was expecting this to be somewhere higher like to the left of 01:06:704 (4) - sliderend
  3. 01:09:923 (1) - y did u nc? / /

moki

  1. 00:13:143 (1) - start nc here it helps for playability/reading cuz then the player will kno that its a 1/2 space and not something liek 1/1
  2. 00:34:216 (1,2,1,2) - that looks rlly awkward to play :///
  3. 00:44:679 (1,2) - fUK U switch ncs :C
  4. 01:05:240 (4,1,2,3,4) - ur comboing here deosnt follo the song at all and it looks rlly awkward wen its plauyed with the song d
  5. 01:06:557 (4) - i think u fukd up the hitsound here Xd

astearlosl

  1. 00:25:289 (2,3,4) - 4 sud have bigger spacing sudnt it? / /
  2. 01:21:777 (3,4,5) - ? / ? ? ? / / y does 5 have biggest spacing when 3 and 4 are much stronger :L
  3. ur relative difficulty in the map is rlly d..... id suggest nerfing the big jumps u have in the map because ther very off compared to the rest of the map IMo
smallboat
[General]
  1. 你的Hard結尾是01:24:410移動一下使你自己diff一致結束時間。
[Bearizm's Easy]
  1. 00:34:801 (3) - I think this sliderhead should be put at 00:34:655 here, it is a heavy vocal , so if put it will played better imo.
[Normal]
  1. 01:16:362 (1) - 取消NC吧,覺得這蠻簡單的pattern不會太難讀imo
[Hard]
  1. 01:09:484 (5) - 8個折返箭頭用在Hard太長了,分成2組1/4折返吧 :
[Yoru's Insane] 第一條紅線+綠線的音量不一樣這要fix。(建議換成40,20太小聲)
  1. 00:04:655 (2) - 保持一致間距會玩的好點,因為音樂聽起來不是漸變得玩得有點不對勁。
  2. 00:13:435 (3,4) - Ctrl+g互換好像也能成一個好的flow,試試看吧
  3. 01:20:606 (4) - (284|178)左右位置? 現在的flow路線有點偏折
[toybot's Insane]
  1. 01:23:972 (2,1) - Seems not a perfect symmetry pattern, you can use ctrl+h to check it.
[litoluna's Extra]
  1. 00:48:850 (6) - NC here? Because this combo too long and change a new head vocal imo (Compare with extra diff)
  2. 01:19:289 (5,6,7,8,9) - 4 to 5 looks flow have a bit bad, maybe can use ctrl+g for these 5 notes make flow & playing better.
[Extra]
  1. 00:04:069 (1) - 這邊的確是能加速,但是這滑條頭的感覺加速有點過早,個人認為應該是在滑條尾才開始,可以考慮看看。
  2. 00:32:167 (2) - 可以放到135|295左右位置跟前面那些note做half stack,會較整潔。
  3. 01:19:143 (5,1) - 這1/4好像有點遠了,stack at 01:17:533 (1) - 頭吧
[momoko's Extra]
  1. 00:39:337 (2) - Move to 232|239 do a anti-jump stack? (Just like 00:39:776 (2,3,2) - here)
  2. 01:00:411 (5,1) - Swap NC? The head vocal at 01:00:411 (5) - here imo
[wkyik's Asterisk]
  1. 00:04:069 (1) - 跟花生一樣情況
  2. 00:21:338 (1,2) - 好像節奏簡單了些
  3. 01:19:582 (3) - 這1/4的跳的間距沒處理好,往下面移一些做個01:19:582 (3,1) - 的跳吧會play得好。
DreaM117er
Edit:

星星已經射了,補個摸
只摸有問題的難度,大概吧...這個陣容問題不會太多

[Easy]
[Normal]

  • 00:01:435 (2) - 1/1就可以了,這裡沒必要跟紅線,跟不到你要跟的聲音
    00:15:484 (2,3) - 感覺不是很好看啊,要不就兩個都是直的,這樣都是逆向不好看
    00:20:167 (2,3) - 這裡的節奏跟00:18:996 (1) - 藝模一樣會很棒,花生試試看
    01:20:752 (4,5) - 這裡的節奏怪怪的,花生自己仔細聽一次,我想不到要怎麼改比較好
[Hard]
  1. 沒問題
[Yoru]

  • 00:00:265 - 前奏可以加個音效,加上去吧
    00:11:972 (1,2) - 這裡跟z1那個collab一樣,沒有理由別1/4亂飛,而且這是最簡單的Insane
    00:24:850 (1,2) - 這裡沒必要飛,超級強烈建議改掉,而且你也只有這裡飛了。不改也要告訴我為什麼??
[toybot]

  • 01:24:411 (1) - remove NC
  1. Nice work :)
[litoluna]

  • 00:48:264 - no sound here, I think you can move circle to 00:48:557 -
  1. Nothing to say
[Ex]

  • 00:47:094 (1,2) - 短的滑條在前節奏更好
    01:24:411 (2) - 我自己個人啊,覺得結尾不該這要跳遠的,我這只是參考,雖然一樣坑人,但對這曲子來說這樣放感覺比你用跳來的好
[Momoko]
  1. This is Extra, I love this one :)
[Rizia]

  • 01:06:996 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 只有一點,這裡沒有激昂到可以跳這麼遠,後面那裏我可以接受,就這裡我不能接受

Good luck :)
Hakurei Yoru
都改拉都改拉

小m那里……我这里怎么没看见是飞的
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toybot
asymmetry is okay
thanks !!! https://0paste.com/8541.txt
Asahina Momoko
fixed everything from all, thank you!!

about 00:49:435 (1) - , i asked some players and they said they didn't feel weird to play.
also slider tick has a role to guide that bumpy on white tick, so just keep as it is.

http://puu.sh/oZva8/2c92dce8c1.zip
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