Ataraxia wrote:

mi lov stori

03:32:414 (1,2,3) - i think this not fit so good, for real, i think u only made this to use the clap in 03:32:789 - but u break the flow like that (and very hurt) change to 2 circles 1 slider

u could do the classic "pause-stack" (idk how name that xd) , but is That would be weird with no claps on it

-Harpuia- wrote:

[notice][My Love Story]

1. 00:11:594 (1) - I would suggest having a different slider shape for this one. Like, say... A simple curve. imo, with that it can highlight the vocal in a way. Also for differentiation. using back and forth kaya hindi
2. 00:22:858 - Would be nice if the sounds here were to be played actively. I think what can be done here is by moving the spinner end to the white tick prior, lowering its volume, and putting a circle on where the end was. sige na ngaa
3. 00:28:110 (2,3) - Increase the spacing for consistency? (Reference: 00:27:735 (1) - having an increased DS together with the sound)
4. 00:28:485 (3,4) - It seems that the piano thingy is followed more here. If so, the more appropriate patterning, imo, would be a 1/2 slider for 00:28:485 (3) - and a circle at 00:28:860 - .
5. 00:39:171 (4,5) - Decrease spacing for consistency with 00:36:171 (4,5) - .
6. 00:51:923 (1,2,3,4) - Just a minor suggestion. If the vocal is the main thing followed here, maybe try to have a different slider shape for 00:51:923 (1) - to "separate" it, in a way, with 00:52:298 (2,3,4) - . This may be applied to the others. no
7. 01:09:912 (1,2) - A normal 1/1, just like the others, should've been alright. vocal on it red should be slider to make more intense but smh no
8. 01:29:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - <3 <3
9. 01:44:412 (1,2,3,4) - Emphasis on notes here could be improved imo. Move 01:44:787 (3,4) - in a way that 01:44:787 (3) - could be highligheted. i dont like making correct star but ill improve smh
10. 01:43:662 (2,3,4) - 01:46:662 (2,3,4) - ... - This may cause a little bit of confusion. 01:46:662 (2,3) - is a 1/4 stack while 01:46:755 (3,4) - is 1/2. Players may, in some occassions, interpret 01:47:224 (4) - as a 1/4 note. I'm mentioning it just for a precaution. You could leave it as is if you want. theyre extras so i did was to stack becuase its too annoying
11. 02:03:724 (2,1) - Could use a bit more space in between. overkill tbh
12. 02:14:412 (1,2,3,4) - Making this part look more of a "Z" would be nice for aesthetics. this 02:14:787 (2,4) - im really following their closed up
13. 02:23:412 (1,1,2) - Remove NC at 02:24:162 (1) - . (Reference: 00:47:423 (1,2,3) - ) gg i have to fix all nc from the end
14. 02:35:976 (2,3) - The current section of the map tends to not use the stacks like this one, unlike the prior. Consider unstacking for consistency. its called pattern to make, its not like if you dont stack and the other section dont stack.
15. 03:11:226 (1) - Kinda weird to see a sudden 1/4 slider here, it kinda doesn't fit in this part. A triple would be nice. Buuuut that's all imo xd hahah
16. 03:32:601 (2) - Hm... I think try to do this slider thing on to 01:56:787 (3) - as well. weird no claps on it
17. 04:09:147 (2,3) - Lower the spacing? With the previous ones, the first two seem to have more. nope should be big/increased
18. 04:14:022 (5) - Break down into circles like the others?
19. 05:54:788 (1) - <3 <3

Zallies wrote:

HAHAHAH BAKIT AYAW MO TAGALOG ? !

frogyfro wrote:

00:03:605 (1,2,3,4,5) - so you used straight sliders for the first measure, then curvy sliders for the first half of the second measure, and then straight sliders for the last half. i'd either make 00:03:605 (1,2) - straight or 00:05:105 (4,5) - curvy just so you're dealing with this a bit more consisently 00:00:605 - 1,3 are the same, 00:03:605 - 1,2 and 4,5 arent known as vocal change

00:08:159 (3,4) - not sure these slider shapes are justified. sliders w/ red points like this are really harsh looking and it really doesnt fit how relaxing this part of the song is oh straight slider?

00:11:068 (2,1) - i love the gradual slowing down but i feel like the last slider here is a bit too slow compared to the first two. speed up 1 or slow down 2 speeding up destroy rhythm tbh

00:11:594 (1) - pretty sure this is mistimed, feels like it should be a bit later no its fine

00:17:421 (1) - this is a super sudden note, would make sense to break the established pattern. i'd go as far as to drag this note all the way to one of the corners this is where the title started

00:24:548 (4) - the piano sound on the red tick is held, so it would make more sense to do this part with a circle then a slider, rather than one 1/2 slider and a 1/1 pause 00:25:110 - red tick is high rather than sliderend is the high

00:36:733 (5) - uncomfortable movement into this note gives it a ton of emphasis, but its just a hi hat sound. feels like the slider tail of 4 is much more deserving of emphasis than this note. maybe change 4 into a 1/2 slider, and then change 5 into two stacked circles? insane can make different pattern but not hard

00:39:171 (4,5) - although not uncomfortable movement, my same criticism applies with giving 5 too much emphasis. same goes for every reptition of this rhythm yes becuase the music is also repetition

00:48:173 (2) - just a general suggestion for this whole part, maybe you could try something where all notes with vocals are cuved sliders, and then all notes that are just drums/accompaniment are straight? it'd give the vocals a little bit more attention which i think would fit nicely no need to make all fit perfectly, such as pro mappers who don't need to fit every patterns

00:48:923 (1,2,3,4) - curves in these sliders dont make much sense to me. i'd sooner just do straight up and down sliders with each pointing into the next for comfortable movement just because you didnt agree the repeated slider with curve doesnt make not uncomfortable

00:51:173 (3,4) - tilt these a liiiitle bit more up imo change through top also next pattern

00:51:923 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders break flow for no good reason. id change this pattern to have every slider flow into the next downward pattern, why you always react on curvy slider

01:17:974 (2,3,4) - i feel like this pattern puts emphasis on 3 which the song doesnt support. the other iterations of this rhythm do a good job keep emphasis about the same for each of the drum hits. doesnt support? white tick which is high next is low so i stack rather do a jump

01:29:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nothing really wrong with this section, i just feel like you could do a lot more here than just mapping the bass drum. again there's nothing technically wrong here so feel free to deny this

01:47:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the vocals here change from being on every 1/2 to being every 2/1, yet the way you map these jumps feels exactly the same. check out the pattern at 01:19:125 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - in this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/844134 , i think something along these lines would really fit this part well. regardless of what pattern you choose to use, make sure it repeats every 4 circles to give emphasis to the vocals why you showed me an unrankable beatmap? tried to make higher ds modder didnt agree because its too overmap/overkill, and yea its also the same from vocal 1/2 at 1/1 looks like 1/1 vocal trying her best to get through the top so i make same pattern as before aka intense vocal 1/1.

01:56:787 (3,1) - i'd keep filler rhythm going and turn this into a 1/2 slider. really feels like these two notes are lacking the intensity that the rest of the chorus has red tick has nothing

02:34:864 (1) - increase sv even more for this one or decrease sv for the prior slider just to exaggerate the contrast between the two1,1 is a same music tbh

04:18:709 (1,2,3) - nc spam for emphasis? no its abuse

04:24:147 (3,4) - dont hear any instrument playing on every white tick. doesn't make much sense for 3 to be representing two bass drums and then 4 to be representing one snare. should look visually different to highlight the difference between the sounds. extra as much need to be highlighted, sometimes insane doesnt need to they focus on easy patterns.

05:54:788 (1) - i feel like this slider should end on the white tick and not the blue tick. just change sv slightly to get it to snap to white tick fix

Kibbleru wrote:

alright this is a lot less tilting to look at

00:44:775 (2,4) - i think ctrl g makes this pattern nicer imo
00:57:912 (1) - imo its better to place this in the middle
01:46:474 (1) - the finish hitsound kind of lacks impact imo, maybe stack it with a clap too?
same for everything else that is similar to this one ^
02:00:912 (1,2,3,4) - um. how do i explain this. i think you should keep this jump as a part of the same area of the playfield as the previous stuff? 01:59:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - (bottom left corner?)
02:28:568 (3) - whats with the random triplet here? if anything a triplet could do here 02:29:318 - cuz of this sound 02:29:224 -
03:04:664 (5,7) - space this more

05:00:524 (2) - woaah i suggest u get somebody to help you do some timing stuff. it gets wayyy off here.
some red lines probably needed

ok as i said on irc, i suggest you rework a few of the jumps in the kiai (ofc this applies for all the kiais)
sorting by priority here
02:02:412 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:59:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:47:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
at the very least do something about the first one in the list. and ofc do the same to the other kiais.

i hope you can make some more structured jumps.
what do i mean by more structured? like the kind of stuff skystar does (you can check USAO - pendulum for some references)

actually ill just make u an example isntead
i replaced this jump pattern here 02:02:412 - until 02:05:412 -

SPOILER

380,115,122412,5,12,0:1:0:0:
187,230,122599,1,2,0:0:0:0:
373,335,122787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,88,122974,5,12,0:1:0:0:
282,212,123162,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,311,123349,1,2,0:0:0:0:
221,138,123537,69,12,0:1:0:0:
247,305,123724,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,94,123912,5,14,0:1:0:0:
131,167,124099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,190,124287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,71,124474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,256,124662,5,10,0:0:0:0:
312,94,124849,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,271,125037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,11,125224,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Kibbleru wrote:

alright this is a lot less tilting to look at

00:44:775 (2,4) - i think ctrl g makes this pattern nicer imo fine ill switch it
00:57:912 (1) - imo its better to place this in the middle keeping at the left that when i placed on middle, distance snap destroyed so i keep on the left
01:46:474 (1) - the finish hitsound kind of lacks impact imo, maybe stack it with a clap too? added clap
same for everything else that is similar to this one ^
02:00:912 (1,2,3,4) - um. how do i explain this. i think you should keep this jump as a part of the same area of the playfield as the previous stuff? 01:59:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - (bottom left corner?)
02:28:568 (3) - whats with the random triplet here? if anything a triplet could do here 02:29:318 - cuz of this sound 02:29:224 - just as same as 00:26:233 (4) - and 00:32:046 (5) - it is supposedly that part is a high ds becuase of that silent finish.
03:04:664 (5,7) - space this more got it

05:00:524 (2) - woaah i suggest u get somebody to help you do some timing stuff. it gets wayyy off here.
some red lines probably needed found someone ! !

ok as i said on irc, i suggest you rework a few of the jumps in the kiai (ofc this applies for all the kiais)
sorting by priority here
02:02:412 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:59:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:47:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
at the very least do something about the first one in the list. and ofc do the same to the other kiais. oh yea the other parts of kiai 2 too okok

i hope you can make some more structured jumps.
what do i mean by more structured? like the kind of stuff skystar does (you can check USAO - pendulum for some references) skystar has some really big ds, ill try my best to make more structured jumps ! i know its a loved map, but its also rankable jumpy

actually ill just make u an example isntead
i replaced this jump pattern here 02:02:412 - until 02:05:412 -

SPOILER

380,115,122412,5,12,0:1:0:0:
187,230,122599,1,2,0:0:0:0:
373,335,122787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,88,122974,5,12,0:1:0:0:
282,212,123162,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,311,123349,1,2,0:0:0:0:
221,138,123537,69,12,0:1:0:0:
247,305,123724,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,94,123912,5,14,0:1:0:0:
131,167,124099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,190,124287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,71,124474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,256,124662,5,10,0:0:0:0:
312,94,124849,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,271,125037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,11,125224,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Ametrin wrote:

00:26:233 (4) - do u really think there should have a note? like 00:29:233 - is ok since it's not clickable thers a hit finished
00:30:171 - this should be clickable as music get a bit more intense here (and all the same part later) piano is still playing/tried to 1/1 flow on the piano
00:36:546 (5) - ctrl+g making the ds too small
00:38:233 (7) - put it stack with 4 will make more sense guitar rise, making the ds too close
00:44:025 (3,1) - too close imo. just put 3 away like 491|27 woah i though making like ( ) srsly no
00:45:150 (4) - stack with 2 rhythm arent doing the repeated
00:51:923 (1) - ctrl+g to emphasize 00:52:298 (2) -
00:56:048 (4) - ctrl+g? up to u lol ^ same
01:42:747 (4) - put at 01:42:935 (1) - , while 01:42:935 (1) - stack with 01:42:560 (3) - (or somewhere like 332|107), then 01:43:122 (2,3) - ctrl+h to fit the flow making the ds arent so good every new nc, make a new jump pattern
01:47:435 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - uhhh... too random imo tried to make "= jump" xd
01:56:810 (3) - just put a slider here? blank at 01:56:810 (3) - in the intense part feels so weird vocal stopped ikr
01:59:435 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - x_x saem

:skip some part since they are almost same as previous:

04:12:147 (3) - ctrl+g. i cant see the reason why it keep the same direction as 04:11:397 (1) - sure
04:54:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - bad geometry

Kibbleru wrote:

Unused hitsounds:
Old\drum-hitclap.wav
Old\drum-hitfinish.wav
Old\drum-hitwhistle.wav
Old\soft-hitclap.wav
Old\soft-hitfinish.wav
Old\soft-hitwhistle.wav
Old\soft-sliderslide.wav
Old\soft-sliderslide2.wav
Old\soft-slidertick2.wav already done removing all of it

Timings:
00:57:935 (volume level)
02:32:427 (custom set number) guitar on the default of soft-hitwhistle
04:32:397 (volume level)
04:47:425 (volume level)

make sure the red line and green line are the same volume and custom sample number!

Mir wrote:

04:11:397 - Timing from this point on is slightly off. Notes like 04:11:772 - 04:12:147 - 04:12:522 - etc etc are all off.
05:41:439 - Additionally off-timed section.

I really think this map needs way more intricate timing. supercell songs usually have very bad tempo consistency. Try to ask some people that are proficient with timing.

Yukiyo's map has a lot more complex timing. Maybe you can ask to use that timing from pimpG?

Oh yeah provided that gets fixed just get a rebubble.

pimpG wrote:

sup

yes you can use my timing but i suggest you to also use yukiyo's mp3 file.

MapleDialga wrote:

Mir wrote:

04:11:397 - Timing from this point on is slightly off. Notes like 04:11:772 - 04:12:147 - 04:12:522 - etc etc are all off.
05:41:439 - Additionally off-timed section.

I really think this map needs way more intricate timing. supercell songs usually have very bad tempo consistency. Try to ask some people that are proficient with timing.

Yukiyo's map has a lot more complex timing. Maybe you can ask to use that timing from pimpG?

Oh yeah provided that gets fixed just get a rebubble.

Timer here.

I asked Yukiyo for using the timing, but I haven't got a reply, just in case anyone's wondering.

pimpG wrote:

dude I was asked by the mapper for permission to use the timing I created from scratch for Yukiyo's mapset.

btw Zallies i'm suggesting this because there is a lot more off sections than the BN mentioned, and there is no way i'm doing full timing for that song again (i'm adapting some small parts to fit the new mapset but that's it).

timing points for yukiyo's mp3

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what i did was basically removing all of your current red lines, removing yukiyo's green lines then merging them together and resnapped the green lines to new offsets

for now you will have to fix your kiai, volume and double check the sample changes. i can do that myself but i suppose Zallies can do it faster because the mapper knows the mapset better.

i will be back tomorrow.

pimpG wrote:

made some improvements here and there...

your difficulty for yukiyo's mp3: https://puu.sh/xDXgS/122225b7e9.txt

that's all i can do for you until you fix the kiai, volume, recheck the sample changes

now your heart slider will sound better having the slider end in the white tick, remember to fix it too.

also 00:11:135 (2) - on your original timing this note ends on a 1/8 tick, and this was totally not right. when using my timing the correct spot was in the blue tick, so the conversion made it unsnapped. in order to make it end on the blue tick without changing your slider structure, i had to add a custom slider velocity multiplier for it as a temporary fix. it's up to you to keep the custom slider speed for that single note or to remove it and snap it with the main slider velocity multiplier of this section. its okay, ill just remove and do it smaller slider instead

i would like to recheck before bubble.

GL

pimpG wrote:

glad you liked it

don't give me a 3rd kudosu (actually you should not have given me the 2nd either) LOL i didnt know and also u gib effort on my map so i gib more kds DD