Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri] - Sendan Life [Taiko]

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nyanmi-1828
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2019年2月11日 at 22:39:33

Artist: Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri]
Title: Sendan Life
Source: ガラスの花と壊す世界
Tags: vocaloid Chukka やしきん yashikin Glass no Hana to Kowasu Sekai GARAKOWA Restore the World Vitreous Flower Destroy the World KitajimaYN Yuni kai53247
BPM: 227
Filesize: 3729kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.42 stars, 168 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (5.09 stars, 589 notes)
  3. kai's Beginner (0.65 stars, 56 notes)
  4. Kantan (1.46 stars, 95 notes)
  5. Oni (4.26 stars, 462 notes)
  6. Yuni's Inner Oni (5.36 stars, 550 notes)
  7. Yuni's Muzukashii (3.12 stars, 329 notes)


Download: Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri] - Sendan Life
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Overmaped diff⇒Vitreous Oni , yuni's kitigai

_kotachi_'s STD&Taiko map (Hard) : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/461897

Muzu&Inner by KitajimaYN
Beginner by kai53247

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お花畑に、帰らないと…
近未来ってそう思うんじゃない
人が人を棄てるような時代
無惨に折り重なって
痛い痛いと一斉に鳴いた
妄想が不毛なように
誰も私を取り込もうとしない
不安に目を逸らして
有象無象テンション合わせる

綺麗な顔を歪めて
二度と来ない昨日に手を伸ばして
消えてく明日は蜃気楼に
なってしまった世界は夜に向かう

Bye-Bye
望遠鏡の焦点合わして
水平線の消点探した
漏れた溜息が苦くても
水銀灯の照明落として
降参なんて冗談じゃないって
ほんの一瞬だけ笑った
bank78952
がんばってね!

i wanna do this song for rank too XDD
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828

bank78952 wrote:

がんばってね!

i wanna do this song for rank too XDD
ありがとう!ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ

I'll do my best! ( 'ω')b
Akitoshi
(ノ´・ω・)ノ ミ★★★★ シカエシwwwww
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828

Akitoshi wrote:

(ノ´・ω・)ノ ミ★★★★ シカエシwwwww
ありがとう!ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ
bank78952
konnichiwa o/
Random mods (maybe? lolz)
[General]
everything are fine :3
[Oni]
00:22:258 (98) - k
00:28:602 (130) - K for better sound?
00:30:716 (140) - k to follow rhythm
00:37:721 (175) - k ^
00:38:514 (177) - d ^
00:39:835 (182) - k ^ and vocals
00:50:805 (228,229,230) - kdk i think it's better
anyways i feel note is unsnap (1sec unsnap) try to resnap after check and fix my mods
[Muzukashii]
00:20:143 (60) - k to follow rhythm?
00:24:504 (21) - k is better?
00:36:134 (74) - d to follow vocal?
00:38:117 (82) - k high pitch sound here
00:47:368 (119) - move to 00:47:500 - and change to k for better sound?
p.s.i already map this song in taiko but it not good enough ;w; now i map in ctb XD
gl :3
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828

bank78952 wrote:

konnichiwa o/
Random mods (maybe? lolz)
[General]
everything are fine :3
[Oni]
00:22:258 (98) - k ok
00:28:602 (130) - K for better sound? follow vocal here. no change
00:30:716 (140) - k to follow rhythm fix
00:37:721 (175) - k ^ ^
00:38:514 (177) - d ^ ^
00:39:835 (182) - k ^ and vocals ^
00:50:805 (228,229,230) - kdk i think it's better ^
anyways i feel note is unsnap (1sec unsnap) try to resnap after check and fix my mods
p.s.i already map this song in taiko but it not good enough ;w; now i map in ctb XD
gl :3
Thanks~ :)
5urface
M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/433022

General

Pretty decent mapset already, good job
It might be worthwhile to convert the background image to .jpg to save some space (just a suggestion)
The difficulty curve from Futsuu up to Oni feels a little steep but should still be acceptable
The Vitreous Oni might be a little excessive tbh. And how about calling it Ura Oni to stick with the standards?

I don't want to meddle with your mapping style too much so I will focus on suggestions that will keep your style in mind.

Kantan

00:28:601 - how about adding a d here to follow the sound? Also would be consistent with 00:20:143 (18)
01:01:112 (5,6) - I would move these to forward 1 white tick to 01:00:848 and 01:01:376

Futsuu

00:28:601 - This sound is not mapped again... If you are following the vocals that would be fine but it is rather prominent. Just consider mapping this sound ^^
01:09:306 This is a suggestion how this section could also be mapped:

01:11:155 (175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - This triplet section feels a little bit monotone and not quite up to par with the rest of the map. Maybe you could revisit this part again.

Yuni's Muzukashii

00:08:910 (6) - D?

Oni

00:36:135 (169) - k
00:37:324 (174) - how about moving this one up to 00:37:191 to follow the vocals?
01:10:100 (343,344,345) - I would use a ddd triplet here instead


I hope this was at least somewhat helpful ^^
Good luck with your map :3
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828

5urface wrote:

M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/433022

General

Pretty decent mapset already, good job
It might be worthwhile to convert the background image to .jpg to save some space (just a suggestion)
The difficulty curve from Futsuu up to Oni feels a little steep but should still be acceptable
The Vitreous Oni might be a little excessive tbh. And how about calling it Ura Oni to stick with the standards?

I don't want to meddle with your mapping style too much so I will focus on suggestions that will keep your style in mind.

Kantan

00:28:601 - how about adding a d here to follow the sound? Also would be consistent with 00:20:143 (18) umm...I think not follow sound...
01:01:112 (5,6) - I would move these to forward 1 white tick to 01:00:848 and 01:01:376 ok~

Futsuu

00:28:601 - This sound is not mapped again... If you are following the vocals that would be fine but it is rather prominent. Just consider mapping this sound ^^ same as kantan
01:09:306 This is a suggestion how this section could also be mapped: I tryed "d k d k kkd k" ^^

01:11:155 (175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - This triplet section feels a little bit monotone and not quite up to par with the rest of the map. Maybe you could revisit this part again. add notes.

Oni

00:36:135 (169) - k fix
00:37:324 (174) - how about moving this one up to 00:37:191 to follow the vocals? ? I think no sound here
01:10:100 (343,344,345) - I would use a ddd triplet here instead fix


I hope this was at least somewhat helpful ^^
Good luck with your map :3
Thanks for mod~ :)
Micka
Futsuu

00:57:940 (135) - try a big K?

Muzu

00:18:028 (49) - d
00:22:852 - add note?
00:35:738 - ^
00:58:073 (172) - k
01:06:531 (216) - k

so far this diff is fine

Oni

00:58:073 (286,287) - how about a ddk triple?

refined diff, cool

_____________________________________________

Overall this map is pretty refined already, can't find much.
KitajimaYN

RenzMichael wrote:

Futsuu

00:57:940 (135) - try a big K?

Muzu

00:18:028 (49) - d keep
00:22:852 - add note? fixed nice idea
00:35:738 - ^ fixed
00:58:073 (172) - k sorry keep
01:06:531 (216) - k ^

so far this diff is fine really?? thanks! :)

Oni

00:58:073 (286,287) - how about a ddk triple?

refined diff, cool

_____________________________________________

Overall this map is pretty refined already, can't find much.
thanks MOD :)
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828

RenzMichael wrote:

Futsuu

00:57:940 (135) - try a big K?

Oni

00:58:073 (286,287) - how about a ddk triple?

refined diff, cool

_____________________________________________

Overall this map is pretty refined already, can't find much.
Sorry, all keep.

Thanks for mod~ :)
Skylish
Hi, from my taiko modding queue. Sorry for delay and I am back in modding again :D.

[General]

> Check the tag: You should not add cloudsplash16 (or 'Little', how he called himself now) He is not involved in this mapset. Probably, you copied all metadata from the ranked one, right?

> 01:11:156 (366) - kiai should end at here where is the replay of the introduction part.

[Oni]

> The timing points of Oni is different from the others. It is better to unify the timing points among your difficulties. (You can take a look of your Futsuu.)

> 00:11:950 (19,20,21) - / 00:13:007 (27,28,29) - / 00:14:064 (35,36,37) - I prefer not using aany triplets here. There are two main reason: firstly, you use a cleaner pattern at 01:11:156 (366) - which is as same as the beginning part. Secondly, the first part can be lighter to create an effect of layering.

+ Hence, you should use triplets at 01:15:386 (397,398) - / 01:16:443 (405,406) - / 01:17:501 (413,414) - . The principle is just the same. You can see the differences between the head and the tail.

> 00:17:897 (66) - change to d? kkk sounds weird for me.

> 00:27:941 (127) - use dkdK D D?
00:28:073 - is added because you mapped 00:27:544 (125) - the guitar chord with k. 00:28:337 (130,131) - K D sounds rhythmic. 00:28:866 (132) - it should be D because of the presence of strong drum hit.

> 00:44:064 - add k here, drum kick exists.

> 01:04:152 (323,324,325,326) - I can see that why you did not use triplets in the similar pattern in the first part of the Kiai session. However, I think it's the time to add some triplets in these positions now. 01:04:218 - add k here?

> 01:06:332 - same token as above, add d here?

[Yuni's Muzukashii]

> 00:12:214 (20,21,22) - / 00:13:271 (25,26,27) - / ... Using only kkd for the same music is boring, although it is correctly mapped. Maybe try using some kdd for variations.

> If you intend to use Finish at 00:20:407 (1) - , you can increase the note density of the previous pattern b4 the Finish note. 00:19:482 (57) - try dkkdkd (in 1/2)?

You also used a pattern with 6 x 1/2 at 00:18:557 (51) - .

> 00:47:764 (126) - use Finish note, same case at 00:45:650 (114) -

> 00:48:954 (132) - ^, the cymbal crash sound is clear and loud.

> 00:53:843 - add d here? not necessary though

> 00:57:808 (176) - change to k to prevent the repeating use of a single pattern.

> 01:01:509 (193) - change to k to match the cymbal, that's clear again.

> 01:06:266 (221) - change to k, same case before at 00:57:808 (176) -

> Triplets can be used at the second part of the Kiai ( 01:02:698 (200) - )
+ 01:04:284 (209) - / 01:06:399 (222) - / you can use ddd in 1/4 to make the pattern be more complicated.

> 01:11:421 (249,250,251) - / 01:12:478 (254,255,256) - / ... again, kkd pattern is too boring... Try making some variations there.

[Futsuu]

> 00:07:720 (1) - The patterns there are not stable at all. Sometimes the notes are matching on the on-beat drum hit, sometimes on the off-beat drum hit or even virtual notes appear. Try this?

> 00:09:835 (8) - ^. You can copy the structure again because it is as same as the pattern before at 00:07:720 (1) - before. This is Futsuu, I think such repeating structure are acceptable.

> 00:37:323 (80) - / 00:39:438 (85) - / You should match the BGM with 1/4 beat. Try this? [/img]http://puu.sh/p0uhg/6d65379e18.jpg[/img]

> 00:52:390 - / 00:52:918 - add d k respectively here because the drum set exists which can support some notes on it. The space leaving there seems too porous.

> 01:01:509 - add k here, the loud cymbal crash sound was not mapped.

> 01:19:350 - add k here, to symbalise the rising pitch and emphasize the Finish at the end at 01:19:614 (210) - .

That's pretty much. I cannot play Inner Oni or above level, rip me.
I hope my mod is helpful! :D
KitajimaYN

bank78952 wrote:

konnichiwa o/
Random mods (maybe? lolz)
[General]
everything are fine :3
[Muzukashii]
00:20:143 (60) - k to follow rhythm? fixed
00:24:504 (21) - k is better? fixed
00:36:134 (74) - d to follow vocal? keep
00:38:117 (82) - k high pitch sound here fixed
00:47:368 (119) - move to 00:47:500 - and change to k for better sound? fixed
p.s.i already map this song in taiko but it not good enough ;w; now i map in ctb XD
gl :3
thanks mod! :)
KitajimaYN

5urface wrote:

M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/433022

General

Pretty decent mapset already, good job
It might be worthwhile to convert the background image to .jpg to save some space (just a suggestion)
The difficulty curve from Futsuu up to Oni feels a little steep but should still be acceptable
The Vitreous Oni might be a little excessive tbh. And how about calling it Ura Oni to stick with the standards?

I don't want to meddle with your mapping style too much so I will focus on suggestions that will keep your style in mind.


Yuni's Muzukashii

00:08:910 (6) - D? fixed


I hope this was at least somewhat helpful ^^
Good luck with your map :3
thanks MOD! :)
KitajimaYN

Skylish wrote:

Hi, from my taiko modding queue. Sorry for delay and I am back in modding again :D.

[Yuni's Muzukashii]

> 00:12:214 (20,21,22) - / 00:13:271 (25,26,27) - / ... Using only kkd for the same music is boring, although it is correctly mapped. Maybe try using some kdd for variations. hmm keep

> If you intend to use Finish at 00:20:407 (1) - , you can increase the note density of the previous pattern b4 the Finish note. 00:19:482 (57) - try dkkdkd (in 1/2)?

You also used a pattern with 6 x 1/2 at 00:18:557 (51) - .fixed

> 00:47:764 (126) - use Finish note, same case at 00:45:650 (114) - fixed

> 00:48:954 (132) - ^, the cymbal crash sound is clear and loud. fixed

> 00:53:843 - add d here? not necessary though fixed

> 00:57:808 (176) - change to k to prevent the repeating use of a single pattern. fixed so good :D

> 01:01:509 (193) - change to k to match the cymbal, that's clear again. fixed

> 01:06:266 (221) - change to k, same case before at 00:57:808 (176) - fixed

> Triplets can be used at the second part of the Kiai ( 01:02:698 (200) - ) keep
+ 01:04:284 (209) - / 01:06:399 (222) - / you can use ddd in 1/4 to make the pattern be more complicated. high BPM so keep.

> 01:11:421 (249,250,251) - / 01:12:478 (254,255,256) - / ... again, kkd pattern is too boring... Try making some variations there. nice idea

I hope my mod is helpful! :D
thanks mod :)
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828

Skylish wrote:

Hi, from my taiko modding queue. Sorry for delay and I am back in modding again :D.

[General]

> Check the tag: You should not add cloudsplash16 (or 'Little', how he called himself now) He is not involved in this mapset. Probably, you copied all metadata from the ranked one, right? oh...That's right. Thanks ><

> 01:11:156 (366) - kiai should end at here where is the replay of the introduction part. fix

[Oni]

> The timing points of Oni is different from the others. It is better to unify the timing points among your difficulties. (You can take a look of your Futsuu.)fix.

> 00:11:950 (19,20,21) - / 00:13:007 (27,28,29) - / 00:14:064 (35,36,37) - I prefer not using aany triplets here. There are two main reason: firstly, you use a cleaner pattern at 01:11:156 (366) - which is as same as the beginning part. Secondly, the first part can be lighter to create an effect of layering.

+ Hence, you should use triplets at 01:15:386 (397,398) - / 01:16:443 (405,406) - / 01:17:501 (413,414) - . The principle is just the same. You can see the differences between the head and the tail.

> 00:17:897 (66) - change to d? kkk sounds weird for me. fix.

> 00:27:941 (127) - use dkdK D D?
00:28:073 - is added because you mapped 00:27:544 (125) - the guitar chord with k. 00:28:337 (130,131) - K D sounds rhythmic. 00:28:866 (132) - it should be D because of the presence of strong drum hit. umm...follow vocal here. keep

> 00:44:064 - add k here, drum kick exists. fix.

> 01:04:152 (323,324,325,326) - I can see that why you did not use triplets in the similar pattern in the first part of the Kiai session. However, I think it's the time to add some triplets in these positions now. 01:04:218 - add k here? keep

> 01:06:332 - same token as above, add d here? keep

[Futsuu]

> 00:07:720 (1) - The patterns there are not stable at all. Sometimes the notes are matching on the on-beat drum hit, sometimes on the off-beat drum hit or even virtual notes appear. Try this?

> 00:09:835 (8) - ^. You can copy the structure again because it is as same as the pattern before at 00:07:720 (1) - before. This is Futsuu, I think such repeating structure are acceptable.

> 00:37:323 (80) - / 00:39:438 (85) - / You should match the BGM with 1/4 beat. Try this? [/img]http://puu.sh/p0uhg/6d65379e18.jpg[/img]

> 00:52:390 - / 00:52:918 - add d k respectively here because the drum set exists which can support some notes on it. The space leaving there seems too porous.

> 01:01:509 - add k here, the loud cymbal crash sound was not mapped.

> 01:19:350 - add k here, to symbalise the rising pitch and emphasize the Finish at the end at 01:19:614 (210) - .

Futsuu is all keep...><

That's pretty much. I cannot play Inner Oni or above level, rip me.
I hope my mod is helpful! :D
Thanks for mod! :)
yuzu__rinrin
1diffでガバガバなのでnokdsでよろです
15:22 KitajimaYN: あ、そうだまた譜面見てもらってもいいすか?
15:22 *KitajimaYN is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/969751 Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri] - Sendan Life]
15:22 KitajimaYN: 是非おねがいします
15:23 yuzu__rinrin: クソほどやる気出ないし、そこまで難しい譜面は俺見れないよ
15:24 KitajimaYN: んにゃ見て欲しいのはMuzuなんだよね
15:24 KitajimaYN: 一つだけちょこっと見て欲しいなって
15:24 yuzu__rinrin: とりあえずクイックチェックみたいな感じでペラ~って見てみる
15:26 KitajimaYN: お願いしますゾ
15:26 yuzu__rinrin: いま時間ありますかね?
15:27 KitajimaYN: 余裕で
15:27 KitajimaYN: ある
15:27 yuzu__rinrin: 分かり哲也
15:27 yuzu__rinrin: muzuのエディット開いて、どうぞ
15:27 KitajimaYN: hoi
15:28 yuzu__rinrin: 00:17:896 (48) - del ?
15:29 KitajimaYN: fixed
15:29 yuzu__rinrin: 00:18:293 - ここはdかな
15:29 yuzu__rinrin: さっき変えたのなら
15:30 KitajimaYN: おっけい
15:30 yuzu__rinrin: で 00:18:954 (53) - delかな、詰め込みすぎても良くないと思うし
15:31 KitajimaYN: 消しとこう
15:32 yuzu__rinrin: ウ~ン,00:20:936 -
15:33 yuzu__rinrin: こっからなんか dkって言うのが気持ち悪いかもしれん、俺の主観だが
15:33 KitajimaYN: うーんここは1/2の3連にしとこか
15:33 KitajimaYN: ddk
15:33 KitajimaYN: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5210706
15:34 yuzu__rinrin: okdesu
15:34 yuzu__rinrin: 00:25:165 -
15:35 yuzu__rinrin: あ、dね
15:35 KitajimaYN: そこらへんのとこ全部ddkに変更しといあ
15:35 yuzu__rinrin: おk
15:37 yuzu__rinrin: 00:27:808 (41) - を 00:27:940 - に?
15:37 KitajimaYN: おっけい
15:38 yuzu__rinrin: 00:27:676 - ここdにしちゃう?
15:38 KitajimaYN: ウーンここボーカルに合わせてえなあ
15:38 KitajimaYN: 声が多かったカエルってことで
15:39 yuzu__rinrin: wakarimashita
15:40 yuzu__rinrin: あと一番の問題点がパターン化されてないことかも
15:40 yuzu__rinrin: 00:20:407 -
15:40 yuzu__rinrin: 00:28:865 -
15:41 KitajimaYN: fm
15:41 KitajimaYN: 前あったとこと同じにしたほうがいいのかな
15:41 KitajimaYN: よしちょっといじくってみよう
15:41 yuzu__rinrin: 色は違ってもあんまり言われないんだけどここあたりは言われるかもなぁ
15:42 yuzu__rinrin: と言うか色を変えないと面白くないというw
15:43 KitajimaYN: 箇所箇所でパターンと配色を変えてみた
15:43 KitajimaYN: 基本的な構成は前あったところと同じようにしてみた
15:44 yuzu__rinrin: わかった、そこの色はあとでいろいろと考えてみて
15:44 yuzu__rinrin: つぎいきま
15:44 KitajimaYN: おk
15:45 yuzu__rinrin: 00:44:857
15:45 KitajimaYN: ん
15:45 yuzu__rinrin: 00:45:121
15:45 yuzu__rinrin: あみすた
15:46 KitajimaYN: お、うん
15:46 yuzu__rinrin: 00:45:121
15:46 yuzu__rinrin: 座標いかね
15:47 KitajimaYN: 00:45:121 (26) -
15:47 yuzu__rinrin: それ
15:47 KitajimaYN: ここをどうすればいい?
15:47 yuzu__rinrin: そこ消してもよくない?特に音ないし
15:48 yuzu__rinrin: あとよりvoに合うかと
15:48 KitajimaYN: ほんとや
15:48 KitajimaYN: なんもなってへんかった
15:48 KitajimaYN: 勢いで置いてたw
15:48 yuzu__rinrin: Muzuノリノリで置くと無限に言われるのほんとひで
15:49 KitajimaYN: Muzuが一番作りにくいと思う
15:49 KitajimaYN: こなみかん
15:49 yuzu__rinrin: MuzuとFutsuがポッチャマなところある
15:49 yuzu__rinrin: 00:47:500 - k
15:50 KitajimaYN: ナオキ
15:50 KitajimaYN: おっけい
15:51 yuzu__rinrin: 00:49:879 - finisher  シンバル音あるはず?
15:52 KitajimaYN: たしかになってるな
15:52 KitajimaYN: おっけい
15:54 yuzu__rinrin: 01:04:813 - ここdはどうかな? 次のkを高く聞かせたいという主観
15:54 KitajimaYN: いいっすね
15:55 yuzu__rinrin: 01:08:645 - del?
15:57 KitajimaYN: おっけい
15:57 yuzu__rinrin: 01:09:438 - add k
15:58 yuzu__rinrin: ここ入れるとキッツくなるかもしれない
15:59 KitajimaYN: けしたで
15:59 yuzu__rinrin: iya add
16:00 KitajimaYN: あ、そっか
16:00 KitajimaYN: でもここ周辺のパターン変えたから
16:00 KitajimaYN: そこまでキッツくはならない
16:00 yuzu__rinrin: さっき消したしま、多少はね?
16:01 yuzu__rinrin: あとはそこまで気になるところは無いと思う
16:01 KitajimaYN: やったぜ
16:02 yuzu__rinrin: 少しみただけだからまだあり祖う
16:02 KitajimaYN: とりあえず
16:02 KitajimaYN: 更新する
[_Chichinya_]
i'll mod this cuz i love this song :D! GL RANKING THIS BRO LET'S START!!


[General]

- Seens good :O


[Kantan]

- NOPE 00:10:892 (4) - quit the finish
- add k here cuz you need folow the piano in that part in my oppion can be good for the diff :D! 00:11:685 (5) -
- change to d 00:15:121 (11) - follow the pattern if (Y) is good if that is d k d, and is the same sond has before so XD Keep following that
- Move this 00:19:350 (17) - to 00:19:218 (17) - yep use 1/2 in this part :3 sounds better and follow the rhythm
- change to k 00:20:143 (19) - ~ Pian sound
- change to k for more varity 00:28:865 (31) -
- change to d 00:35:209 (38) - Keep the pattern
- change this to K 00:37:323 (42) - trust me... is good for the sound of that part
- You need cut this 00:52:125 (1) - cuz you need put this 00:53:711 (1) - cuz is other piano sound xD ( is a k :O )
- same has before 01:14:328 (31) -

[Futsuu]

- mmm this diff in the beging is a little weird... i'll recomend Remap that part ( 00:07:720 (1) - , 00:11:949 (11) - )
- 00:15:121 (18) - same has before FOLLOW THE PATTERNS XD
- change to k 00:20:143 (31) - piano sound
- maybe you forgot put this note 00:41:553 (85) - a d here please...
- chaneg to k is better XD 00:58:205 (135) - you know follow the voice is <3
- Delete this 01:14:196 (190) - don't make this :C keep this part simple

[Yuni's Muzukashii it's funny cuz my girlfriend is Yuni too haha]

- 00:07:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - this... idk if this can be ranked... so i recommend fix it... keep this note with the finish 00:07:720 (1) -

[Oni]

- change to K 00:09:571 (9) - listen the sound in that part
- add a d here 00:23:183 (104) - sounds good
- mm well i'll recomend make this 00:53:711 (260,261,262) - like and stream ... kkkkd can work (NOTE if you make this stream... don't put things like kkkkD that's unrankeable)
- add a k here 01:19:482 (433) - sound 10/10 :D!

[Yuni's Inner Oni]

- this sounds weird... 00:07:324 (1,2,3) - delete or make it 1/6 or delete this 2 notes 00:07:390 (2,3) -
- add a k in this point 00:27:940 (146) -
- delete this too 00:44:989 (254) -
- make a kkkkk stream 00:53:711 (329) - , 00:53:976 (331) - cuz the piano sound is too strong in that part

[Inner Oni]

- change to K 00:09:571 (9) -
- you should cut this 00:19:351 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) - and make more simple
- add a k here too 00:37:191 (235) -

God damn GOOD inner dude D:!

[Vitreus Oni]

- change this to k 00:11:817 (21) - sounds better
- add a d here 00:24:306 (150) -

[Comments]

WOW THIS MAPSET IS <3 <3 <3 PURE LOVE DUDES ;A; i hope you can rank this very soon dude :3 good Inner Onis, Good Oni XD good all <3 i hope this mod can help you huehue o7 take this 2 KDS too
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828
No reply = fix
This color = keep

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

i'll mod this cuz i love this song :D! GL RANKING THIS BRO LET'S START!!


[General]

- Seens good :O XD


[Kantan]

- NOPE 00:10:892 (4) - quit the finish
- add k here cuz you need folow the piano in that part in my oppion can be good for the diff :D! 00:11:685 (5) - umm...I think not match :< keep here><
- change to d 00:15:121 (11) - follow the pattern if (Y) is good if that is d k d, and is the same sond has before so XD Keep following that fix
- Move this 00:19:350 (17) - to 00:19:218 (17) - yep use 1/2 in this part :3 sounds better and follow the rhythm oh... nice advice :3
- change to k 00:20:143 (19) - ~ Pian sound
- change to k for more varity 00:28:865 (31) -
- change to d 00:35:209 (38) - Keep the pattern
- change this to K 00:37:323 (42) - trust me... is good for the sound of that part
- You need cut this 00:52:125 (1) - cuz you need put this 00:53:711 (1) - cuz is other piano sound xD ( is a k :O ) I fixed here :3 and I put 00:52:125 - ,00:52:125 - ,00:53:051 - XD for follow instrumental <3
- same has before 01:14:328 (31) -

[Futsuu]

- mmm this diff in the beging is a little weird... i'll recomend Remap that part ( 00:07:720 (1) - , 00:11:949 (11) - )
I've changed to

- 00:15:121 (18) - same has before FOLLOW THE PATTERNS XD
- change to k 00:20:143 (31) - piano sound
- maybe you forgot put this note 00:41:553 (85) - a d here please... follow vocal here >< keep
- chaneg to k is better XD 00:58:205 (135) - you know follow the voice is <3
- Delete this 01:14:196 (190) - don't make this :C keep this part simple

[Oni]

- change to K 00:09:571 (9) - listen the sound in that part
- add a d here 00:23:183 (104) - sounds good
- mm well i'll recomend make this 00:53:711 (260,261,262) - like and stream ... kkkkd can work (NOTE if you make this stream... don't put things like kkkkD that's unrankeable) umm...keep.
- add a k here 01:19:482 (433) - sound 10/10 :D!

[Inner Oni]

- change to K 00:09:571 (9) -
- you should cut this 00:19:351 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) - and make more simple okok :) I think too~ >w<
- add a k here too 00:37:191 (235) -

God damn GOOD inner dude D:! Thanks~!!! :):):)

[Vitreus Oni]

- change this to k 00:11:817 (21) - sounds better
- add a d here 00:24:306 (150) -

[Comments]

WOW THIS MAPSET IS <3 <3 <3 PURE LOVE DUDES ;A; i hope you can rank this very soon dude :3 good Inner Onis, Good Oni XD good all <3 i hope this mod can help you huehue o7 take this 2 KDS too
This mod is very helpful \>w</ Thanks a lot! :)
Thanks for mod~ :)
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