From VNO Modding Queue .
I think in general it's quite good. However Extra feels like it can't quite highlight some of the interesting rhythm in this song, while Kanto's Insane is really good at it.
For easier diffs, you should have a think whether it's good to follow the strong note (sometimes they're on the red ticks) or the white ticks for readability.
Good luck!
I think in general it's quite good. However Extra feels like it can't quite highlight some of the interesting rhythm in this song, while Kanto's Insane is really good at it.
For easier diffs, you should have a think whether it's good to follow the strong note (sometimes they're on the red ticks) or the white ticks for readability.
Kanto's Insane
00:28:813 (4,5,1) - yeaaa it's actually 1/6s I think. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5093047 try this.
00:25:813 (4) - you can stack this to 00:26:343 (2) - this since you're stacking 00:25:284 (2,1) - these two to make it slightly more consistent .
00:45:402 (3) - Personally I think sliderend and sliderhead have the same intensity (also the sliderend has slightly higher pitch) so sliderhead on the red tick isn't quite justified. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5093099 try this?
00:49:372 (3) - this slider starts on a blue tick, though correct to the piano sound, is awkward to play and startle the player. Also pattern that go from white tick -> blue tick should only be used when the music is actually complex, the piano sound here is like a improvisation thing. If you choose to follow the piano you have to follow it till the end, else you have to map to 1/2s . Either this osu.ppy.sh/ss/5093143 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5093160 should work.
01:21:578 (2,3,4) - I mean it's technically not wrong but the situation is, the lyrics go like "bo bo ku" each on 1/2s so but the player sees a 1/4 note and might think this is the note for the second "bo" . I'd map those 1/2s as jumps though as all the 1/2 ticks are worth highlighting.
00:25:813 (4) - you can stack this to 00:26:343 (2) - this since you're stacking 00:25:284 (2,1) - these two to make it slightly more consistent .
00:45:402 (3) - Personally I think sliderend and sliderhead have the same intensity (also the sliderend has slightly higher pitch) so sliderhead on the red tick isn't quite justified. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5093099 try this?
00:49:372 (3) - this slider starts on a blue tick, though correct to the piano sound, is awkward to play and startle the player. Also pattern that go from white tick -> blue tick should only be used when the music is actually complex, the piano sound here is like a improvisation thing. If you choose to follow the piano you have to follow it till the end, else you have to map to 1/2s . Either this osu.ppy.sh/ss/5093143 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5093160 should work.
01:21:578 (2,3,4) - I mean it's technically not wrong but the situation is, the lyrics go like "bo bo ku" each on 1/2s so but the player sees a 1/4 note and might think this is the note for the second "bo" . I'd map those 1/2s as jumps though as all the 1/2 ticks are worth highlighting.
Extra
00:14:696 (6,1) - So the vocal sort of stops being intense from 6 so a jump from 6 to 1 might have too much spacing. Consider moving 1 just a bit closer to 6, but not too much otherwise it's like an anti-jump.
00:15:754 (4,5,6) - I think those jumps miss the vocals . So at least 6 shouldn't be highlighted as a note because there isn't a note that's sung here. Consider changing 5 to a 1/2 slider.
00:28:813 (1,2,3) - those are actually 1/6s so ... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5093287 try this?
00:39:402 - a 1/2 filler here might be good because 00:41:696 (1,2) - this basically has the same structure.
01:22:637 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I have some serious gripes about this pattern. It's like a 170bpm spaced stream while messing up with my reading. And to be fair there aren't actual notes on those blue ticks to be highlighted. I'd suggest something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5093356 . I basically stacked the blue tick notes with the 1/2 sliderheads.
00:30:931 (2,3,4,5,6) - Those jumps aren't really justified by the music. It's still a calm section, also the vocals don't go like 1/2s . Consider making 2 and 4 sliders and remove 3 5 .
00:25:990 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Those back and forth patterns don't work well if you don't map the whole song based on this gimmick . Also the music isn't the same everytime you go back and forth: there's an interesting chord progression going on here so I think you can highlight this using a gradually increasing spacing sort of pattern here.
00:44:519 (1,2) - There isn't a note on 2 so 1 should be a 1/2 slider instead .
01:02:519 (4) - Umm this spacing is a bit too much? XDD .
00:15:754 (4,5,6) - I think those jumps miss the vocals . So at least 6 shouldn't be highlighted as a note because there isn't a note that's sung here. Consider changing 5 to a 1/2 slider.
00:28:813 (1,2,3) - those are actually 1/6s so ... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5093287 try this?
00:39:402 - a 1/2 filler here might be good because 00:41:696 (1,2) - this basically has the same structure.
01:22:637 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I have some serious gripes about this pattern. It's like a 170bpm spaced stream while messing up with my reading. And to be fair there aren't actual notes on those blue ticks to be highlighted. I'd suggest something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5093356 . I basically stacked the blue tick notes with the 1/2 sliderheads.
00:30:931 (2,3,4,5,6) - Those jumps aren't really justified by the music. It's still a calm section, also the vocals don't go like 1/2s . Consider making 2 and 4 sliders and remove 3 5 .
00:25:990 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Those back and forth patterns don't work well if you don't map the whole song based on this gimmick . Also the music isn't the same everytime you go back and forth: there's an interesting chord progression going on here so I think you can highlight this using a gradually increasing spacing sort of pattern here.
00:44:519 (1,2) - There isn't a note on 2 so 1 should be a 1/2 slider instead .
01:02:519 (4) - Umm this spacing is a bit too much? XDD .
117's Hard
00:28:637 (4,5,1) - the guitar sound that you hear are actually 1/6s so I would avoid putting a circle on the blue tick here.
00:53:696 (3,4) - select these 2 and ctrl+g because the slider misses the vocals.
01:22:990 (2) - you can move this to the right a bit to avoid overlap.
01:13:284 (2) - move this out a bit because of overlap. Nothing important, just to make it looks neat.
01:11:343 (1) - ^ , move down a bit.
00:53:696 (3,4) - select these 2 and ctrl+g because the slider misses the vocals.
01:22:990 (2) - you can move this to the right a bit to avoid overlap.
01:13:284 (2) - move this out a bit because of overlap. Nothing important, just to make it looks neat.
01:11:343 (1) - ^ , move down a bit.
Normal
00:25:813 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is a bit of a difficulty spike compared to the rest of the section. It's correct that it's more intense here, still it's not enough to justify mapping such high note density here.
00:52:990 (1) - should start on the red tick actually.
00:55:813 (1) - Therefore adding a note on the red tick here should be correct otherwise the player could misread.
00:52:990 (1) - should start on the red tick actually.
00:55:813 (1) - Therefore adding a note on the red tick here should be correct otherwise the player could misread.
Easy
00:47:696 (1,2) - 1 should start on the red tick otherwise the player might be confused when to click 2 because 2 is on a red tick.
00:52:990 (1,2,3) - Those should be shifted backwards to the red ticks because that's where the strong notes are.
01:05:696 (3) - ^
00:52:990 (1,2,3) - Those should be shifted backwards to the red ticks because that's where the strong notes are.
01:05:696 (3) - ^
Good luck!
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