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Sangatsu no Phantasia - Hajimari no Sokudo

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FoxyGrandpa wrote:

00:00:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - 3 and 4 feel very off because you start off with the slider in the beginning following the guitar part. ya i agree. made it a slider

00:24:776 (4,5) - Awkward slider again, Just make 4 a repeating slider. heres its fine becos music has picked up

00:55:835 (4,5,6) - ^^^ ^

I'd say other than these, it looks good!

SherryCherry wrote:

00:18:070 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - The music isnt that intense yet fam :/ as here 00:33:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) . I don't see a need for such a large jump here, especially compared to the distance you use on other jumps. It's a bit inconsistent that you use jumps here, but nowhere else in the intro. This jump actually makes it really hard to go into that stream, at least imo tweaked distances a bit

ikorza wrote:

00:02:894 (1) - morespacing it is the downbeat na its stacked + calmer part of song
00:04:306 (1) - ^ there is already enough spacing and its almost out of grid if i keep going
00:14:718 (2,3,1) - this isnt a triple the piano??
00:18:423 (1) - 1/2 slider instead? no ._. i'm mapping drums
00:20:188 - start note here 1/1 for section intro
00:11:718 (2,3,4,5) - copy the idea you got here over at 00:21:247 (1,2,3,4) - were you have the vocals with higher spacing ok
00:28:306 (1) - more spacing? leading into a slower section
00:35:541 (3) - dont end this on the white tick so change to something like http://puu.sh/q4SL2/9cee090608.jpg 1 is at 00:35:365 (1) - uh, i prefer the spinner tbh
thanks
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Kyle Y

SherryCherry wrote:

ky insane
00:47:012 (2,1,2) - could you please avoid such overlapping
01:04:306 (3,1) - same
Good luck boiz~
remain atm, I don't think this overlapping affect playing.

_IxApplePie_ wrote:

Ky
00:47:188 (3) - you don't need this imo, just copy paste 00:47:012 (2) - beat for this.
remain, they are in different snapping.
Could you mind to send me a message when I have modding? because I seldom check if there is new modding.
Topic Starter
B r o k e n
Could you mind to send me a message when I have modding? because I seldom check if there is new modding.
Sir, yes sir, I'll send you a message when theirs at least 2 mods, sorry for getting mods slowly xD
UndeadCapulet
PANIC QUEUE MOD #9:

Pentori's Insane

  1. 00:10:659 (1,2,3) - I don't get why you skip 00:10:923 but then map 00:11:276 (3) - when there's no real beat there in the song.
  2. 00:35:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - Super weird rhythm for playing a basic drumroll. This will be played as triple -> hold -> click blue tick. Triples feel weird when they end on a red tick because it's not fitting with the quarter note rhythm. And starting a repeat slider on a blue tick is really weird because the basic beat pattern of a song puts emphasis on white and red ticks, not blue ticks. Highly recommend you change this.
  3. 01:13:747 (2) - idk if this vocal slider fits because there's a vocal beat on the white tick still.
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Insane

  1. The spacing of the jump patterns in your intro is the same as the spacing of the jump patterns in your kiai. I don't think this fits at all because the intro is so quiet. In fact most of the superquiet intro is spaced higher than everything after 00:11:365 (1) - , which really doesn't make sense.
  2. 00:54:070 (2,3,4,5,6) - Pretty sure you want this to be a straight line w/ uniform ds? It looks like this right now though.
  3. 01:04:835 (6,7,1) - You should move this further away from 01:04:482 (5) - , or else people will complain about blankets :v
  4. 01:20:365 (4,5,6) - You can't really use a triple here because these piano keys have no snap (and there are 4 of them). The gd'ers got around this by using a repeat slider. (also applies to Hard diff)
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Ky's Insane

  1. 00:36:247 (5) - ? there's nothing here that calls for this 1/8 repeat.. it'd be better if you just mapped out the rest of the drums w/ like a 1/4 repeat or something.
  2. 01:09:953 (1,2,3) - nice
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Easy

Maybe add a break after the kiai, so you don't have 2 whole measures of hp drain.

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Pentori

UndeadCapulet wrote:

PANIC QUEUE MOD #9:

Pentori's Insane

  1. 00:10:659 (1,2,3) - I don't get why you skip 00:10:923 but then map 00:11:276 (3) - when there's no real beat there in the song. slight overmap to place emphasis on downbeat
  2. 00:35:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - Super weird rhythm for playing a basic drumroll. This will be played as triple -> hold -> click blue tick. Triples feel weird when they end on a red tick because it's not fitting with the quarter note rhythm. And starting a repeat slider on a blue tick is really weird because the basic beat pattern of a song puts emphasis on white and red ticks, not blue ticks. Highly recommend you change this. ya i agree. made it work better with 1/4
  3. 01:13:747 (2) - idk if this vocal slider fits because there's a vocal beat on the white tick still. made it a triplet instead
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Topic Starter
B r o k e n

UndeadCapulet wrote:

PANIC QUEUE MOD #9:

Insane

  1. The spacing of the jump patterns in your intro is the same as the spacing of the jump patterns in your kiai. I don't think this fits at all because the intro is so quiet. In fact most of the superquiet intro is spaced higher than everything after 00:11:365 (1) - , which really doesn't make sense. reduced distances for most notes by .2, left pattern as it is
  2. 00:54:070 (2,3,4,5,6) - Pretty sure you want this to be a straight line w/ uniform ds? It looks like this right now though. adjusted, stright line, and 1.2 distance
  3. 01:04:835 (6,7,1) - You should move this further away from 01:04:482 (5) - , or else people will complain about blankets :v adjusted
  4. 01:20:365 (4,5,6) - You can't really use a triple here because these piano keys have no snap (and there are 4 of them). The gd'ers got around this by using a repeat slider.adjusted, snap 1/8 return slider with single note like Ky (also applies to Hard diff)adjusted to like Pentori's

Easy

Maybe add a break after the kiai, so you don't have 2 whole measures of hp drain. adjusted
thank you very much for the mod, really appreciate it :D
Eni
Hi m4m

[General]
  1. Video is missing in Pentori's diff
  2. Instead of having three difficulties named "Insane", try using a different name for the hardest difficulty that relates to the song or anime.
  3. All difficulties by the mapset creator should start and end at the same time.
  4. Similar to this map, please do not use Kyle Y as a tag. Since tags are separated by spaces, the "Y" makes no practical sense since there is already a "Y" in kyle. As such, a better tag would be KyleY.
[Easy]
  1. 00:16:306 (4,3) - Having these objects touch but not stack kind of plays bad, especially since the overlap from the hit will be in a different position than that of the next object. I suggest that you move circle 3 somewhere else instead of blanketing it, as slider 4's track in 00:17:718 (2,3,4) - is really close to the circle. Perfectly playable, but aesthetics wise this looks a bit odd. Additionally, at 00:19:129 - there is a loud sound that the player should tap to. Using a repeat on 00:18:776 (4) - defeats this purpose. Try a circle at 00:18:776 - and a slider at 00:19:129 - to make it play better.
  2. 00:21:247 (3,4,1) - Visually wise, these objects have the same spacing but their horizontal distance between each other varies, making it look somewhat off. Increase the horizontal distance between 00:21:953 (4) - and 00:22:659 (1) -.
  3. 00:37:482 (2,4) - Avoid having these slider heads touch each other, especially in the lowest difficulty. Using the same y-coordinate here does not improve aesthetics. It should be an easy fix by moving 00:38:894 (4) - slightly to the left and adjusting the other objects accordingly.
  4. 00:43:129 (2,4) - This is a no-go. Your slider tail is touching circle 4. Same for the slider tail of 3 and the slider head of 2 at 00:43:835 (3,2) -. Do something like this instead:


    ~
  5. 01:13:482 (1,2,1) - This pattern feels kind of off since 01:16:306 (1) - is positioned strangely at the center when nothing else has been like this prior. Try using a pattern like this instead for more flow:


    ~
[Normal]
  1. Overall you need to fix the overlaps that occur throughout the map. Parts like 00:12:776 (1,3) - and 00:14:188 (4,1) - are not very fun to play and you can space these out better. There is a lot of extra space available to map that prevents an overlap like this from occurring. Use this to your advantage. Please note that although I only listed two timestamps, you should check your overlaps for the entire difficulty.
  2. 00:55:835 (3) - This is the first time you use a sharp slider, almost a minute into the song. This pattern does not appear anywhere else, either. There is not a strong emphasis here, so I strongly suggest that you make it a curved or straight slider instead for consistency.
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:776 (4,1,2) - You should increase the spacing here to be consistent with 00:02:365 (4,5) - and to also prevent the circle head from blobbing into the slider track.
  2. 00:35:188 (5,1,2,3,4) - Try to make this pattern simpler. As it stands, this pattern does not fit the rest of the map. Even though this is a critical part of the song, you can make the pattern much simpler without sacrificing difficulty.
  3. 01:00:423 (3,3) - Similar to what I said about the other slider heads. These should not be touching each other. As you map more, you should start to recognize these mistakes and eventually get better at it.
  4. 01:16:306 (1,3) - The slider tail is hidden behind the slider track of 1. You must fix this as it's outright doesn't fit the "Hard" difficulty and may be DQ'able when the mapset is nominated.
[Ky's Insane]
  1. Plays fine to me. Good job.
[Insane]
  1. 00:31:482 (3,4,5) - Anti-jump doesn't fit here; rather, it's awkward to play since this is the beginning of the emphasis in the song. Increase the spacing similar to how you did it for the other parts.
  2. Overall some objects could be placed better like 00:38:188 (1,4) - and 00:36:776 (1,3) - (these should really be the same slider).
  3. 00:59:365 - During the second part of the chorus you significantly increase the spacing and difficulty, even though it's basically the same rhythm. You should adjust 00:36:776 - to match the patterns that you have in the second part accordingly. One example of an inconsistency in this difficulty is that you use a jump at 01:02:012 (6,1) - but not at 00:39:247 (5,1) - even though it's the same vocal.
  4. 01:27:600 (1) - This slider could be better. Look at the inside edges and you can see that the shape is a bit too sharp on the inside.
[Pentori's Insane]
  1. Looks like the video got removed from this diff somehow. It needs to be fixed ASAP if you want to rank this!
  2. Only major problem I found is that 00:35:541 (3) - has two repeats but 00:35:894 (4) - only has one. Even if you did this intentionally, this does not play very well as both sliders are similar in design and the player would expect to hold the same length for each slider. Is there any reason why you didn't map 00:36:159 -?
Good luck!
Pentori

Project Railgun wrote:

Hi m4m
[Pentori's Insane]
  1. Looks like the video got removed from this diff somehow. It needs to be fixed ASAP if you want to rank this! fix this for me pls
  2. Only major problem I found is that 00:35:541 (3) - has two repeats but 00:35:894 (4) - only has one. Even if you did this intentionally, this does not play very well as both sliders are similar in design and the player would expect to hold the same length for each slider. Is there any reason why you didn't map 00:36:159 -? hm well i originally left out 00:36:159 - because there is no drum there but i guess i'll add it for the sake of playability
Good luck!
thanks

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Topic Starter
B r o k e n

Project Railgun wrote:

Hi m4m I don't remember requesting any m4m, I'll take a look at your maps when I can, I doubt I'll be able to help tho :/,sorry I took a lot longer then I should had to reply to the mod haha,

[General]
  1. Video is missing in Pentori's diff fixed
  2. Instead of having three difficulties named "Insane", try using a different name for the hardest difficulty that relates to the song or anime. maybe, I'll let Pentori decide on that his difficulty
  3. All difficulties by the mapset creator should start and end at the same time. really? well if that's the case I'll go with 1:28
  4. Similar to this map, please do not use Kyle Y as a tag. Since tags are separated by spaces, the "Y" makes no practical sense since there is already a "Y" in kyle. As such, a better tag would be KyleY.
I'll let him decide how he wants his tag to be

[Easy]
  1. 00:16:306 (4,3) - Having these objects touch but not stack kind of plays bad, especially since the overlap from the hit will be in a different position than that of the next object. I suggest that you move circle 3 somewhere else instead of blanketing it, as slider 4's track in 00:17:718 (2,3,4) - is really close to the circle. Perfectly playable, but aesthetics wise this looks a bit odd. Additionally, at 00:19:129 - there is a loud sound that the player should tap to. Using a repeat on 00:18:776 (4) - defeats this purpose. Try a circle at 00:18:776 - and a slider at 00:19:129 - to make it play better. adjusted overlap and change the mention area into slider + slider, to avoid 2 single notes in a row
  2. 00:21:247 (3,4,1) - Visually wise, these objects have the same spacing but their horizontal distance between each other varies, making it look somewhat off. Increase the horizontal distance between 00:21:953 (4) - and 00:22:659 (1) -.adjusted
  3. 00:37:482 (2,4) - Avoid having these slider heads touch each other, especially in the lowest difficulty. Using the same y-coordinate here does not improve aesthetics. It should be an easy fix by moving 00:38:894 (4) - slightly to the left and adjusting the other objects accordingly. did a different adjustment
  4. 00:43:129 (2,4) - This is a no-go. Your slider tail is touching circle 4. Same for the slider tail of 3 and the slider head of 2 at 00:43:835 (3,2) -. Do something like this instead: adjusted


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  5. 01:13:482 (1,2,1) - This pattern feels kind of off since 01:16:306 (1) - is positioned strangely at the center when nothing else has been like this prior. Try using a pattern like this instead for more flow: adjusted


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[Normal]
  1. Overall you need to fix the overlaps that occur throughout the map. Parts like 00:12:776 (1,3) - and 00:14:188 (4,1) - are not very fun to play and you can space these out better. There is a lot of extra space available to map that prevents an overlap like this from occurring. Use this to your advantage. Please note that although I only listed two timestamps, you should check your overlaps for the entire difficulty. adjusted a lot of overlaps that I believe were an issue
  2. 00:55:835 (3) - This is the first time you use a sharp slider, almost a minute into the song. This pattern does not appear anywhere else, either. There is not a strong emphasis here, so I strongly suggest that you make it a curved or straight slider instead for consistency. adjusted
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:776 (4,1,2) - You should increase the spacing here to be consistent with 00:02:365 (4,5) - and to also prevent the circle head from blobbing into the slider track.naw, the intro with small same distance is good as it is
  2. 00:35:188 (5,1,2,3,4) - Try to make this pattern simpler. As it stands, this pattern does not fit the rest of the map. Even though this is a critical part of the song, you can make the pattern much simpler without sacrificing difficulty. removed the single note 1 and 2 extended a kickslider
  3. 01:00:423 (3,3) - Similar to what I said about the other slider heads. These should not be touching each other. As you map more, you should start to recognize these mistakes and eventually get better at it. adjusted
  4. 01:16:306 (1,3) - The slider tail is hidden behind the slider track of 1. You must fix this as it's outright doesn't fit the "Hard" difficulty and may be DQ'able when the mapset is nominated.I always thought about it myself too, if this will be an issue or not too, not so sure
[Insane]
  1. 00:31:482 (3,4,5) - Anti-jump doesn't fit here; rather, it's awkward to play since this is the beginning of the emphasis in the song. Increase the spacing similar to how you did it for the other parts. what I wanted to do in between 00:30:423 (2) - to 00:31:835 (5) - was 3 note small distance into 3 note big distance into 4 5 smaller distance, to make it feel a bit interesting to play, unless just adding more distance makes it better for note 4 and 5, I'll think about it small->bigger jumps->back into small-> then the rest of the afterwards notes all bigger
  2. Overall some objects could be placed better like 00:38:188 (1,4) - and 00:36:776 (1,3) - (these should really be the same slider).
  3. 00:59:365 - During the second part of the chorus you significantly increase the spacing and difficulty, even though it's basically the same rhythm. You should adjust 00:36:776 - to match the patterns that you have in the second part accordingly. One example of an inconsistency in this difficulty is that you use a jump at 01:02:012 (6,1) - but not at 00:39:247 (5,1) - even though it's the same vocal. adjusted 00:39:247 (5,1) will rework some area's distance
  4. 01:27:600 (1) - This slider could be better. Look at the inside edges and you can see that the shape is a bit too sharp on the inside.ughh.... well removed slider added single note with spin forget the slider now haha
Good luck!
thank you for the mod, I really appreciate it :D
Kyle Y

UndeadCapulet wrote:

PANIC QUEUE MOD #9:
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Ky's Insane

  1. 00:36:247 (5) - ? there's nothing here that calls for this 1/8 repeat.. it'd be better if you just mapped out the rest of the drums w/ like a 1/4 repeat or something. remain, please listen carefully in 25% then you will here 1/8 sound.
  2. 01:09:953 (1,2,3) - nice
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Weriko
Hey :p

Mod from queue


Pentori's Insane
00:27:423 (3,4,5,7) - i think you could stack this

00:28:306 (1,1) - stack?

00:42:953 (2,5) - stackkkkk????

..... i think thats all.... everything is perfect :p imo

ky's insane
00:15:247 (6,1) - Blanket police

00:18:070 (4,1) - non important overlap

00:36:247 (5) - i think this is either 1/6 or doesnt exist..... im not sure

00:47:188 (3) - im not sure if 1/6

...


SORRY!!!! if this doesnt help at all ;-;

your map was already good :p

Good luck!!!!


love this song :p
Pentori
no changes sorry, but thanks for taking a look!
those overlaps are all intentional :p
Cerulean Veyron
Hi

Just gonna point out important stuffs so not to enlarge the modpost of repeating issues xdd
[- - General - -]
  • - The Hard diff has it's widescreen support unchecked, while the rest of the diffs are checked tbh. It's the only one tho.
    - Well spread and seems fine here. Gj!

[- - Easy - -]
  1. 00:26:188 (2,3) - Optional objective: You could at least curve one of these sliders since flowing is quite linear imo, well if only that's what you want.
  2. 00:31:835 (4) - Well, probably the same thing as above. But I suggest this one should do a little curve, or maybe a blanket idk. If applied, it might improve structure and aesthetics in the same time. So yeah, just polishing~
  3. 01:16:306 (1,2,3,4) - This sounds a little empty without at least a few whistles. For consistency, try to do the same hitsounding as the Hard/Insane on this diff to fill them.
  4. 01:27:953 (1) - For a short spinner on a 170bpm on easy diffs, I don't think this is highly recommended. And I'm pretty sure it's barely noticeable over beginners to spin that quick tho. I prefer removing 01:27:600 (1) - and start the spinner from there.

[- - Hard - -]
  1. 00:12:070 (2,3,4) - I do like the stacking when circle (3) is on the head of slider (4) instead. It probably has stronger emphasis imo which fits better than the current. It wouldn't hurt the playstyle too, so dw.
  2. 00:17:012 (1,5) - The overlap here is a little awkward. Basically it's not very noticeable in gameplay, but it can be seen if it's being looked at very deep. How about moving it more right? But if you kinda dislike moving things out completely, try not to let slider (5)'s tail touch slider (1)'s head. Moving right or blending in sliders won't hurt aesthetics at all tbh.
  3. 00:22:835 (2,3,4) - Nearly the same thing as 00:12:070 (2,3,4) -, according to the stacking on 00:23:541 (5,6) - . Try to create a little pattern consistency, it'd improve pretty much a lot.
  4. 00:43:659 (1,2) - The rhythm you made previously were better until here. I prefer making a Ctrl + G on these two notes to follow the track more correctly. Not actually the best one but it suits more than the current.
  5. 01:01:659 - Well, at least try filling this part up for the rhythm composition with a little consistent on 00:38:188 (1,2,3,4) -. And speaking about rhythm, it's literally inconsistent removing out that reverse arrow on the slider. Perhaps a circle wouldn't hurt here as well, as long as it's filled for that.
  6. 01:20:365 (3) - Why not add an NC here? HP6 on hard diffs is probably high imo, so adding some more NCs on every measure can help players not to direct-fail on emptiness.

Probably that's all ;p
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
B r o k e n

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hi

Just gonna point out important stuffs so not to enlarge the modpost of repeating issues xdd
[- - General - -]
  • - The Hard diff has it's widescreen support unchecked, while the rest of the diffs are checked tbh. It's the only one tho.was widescreen support only for storyboards? well idk I'm not sure haha, well I'll just check it xD
    - Well spread and seems fine here. Gj!

[- - Easy - -]
  1. 00:26:188 (2,3) - Optional objective: You could at least curve one of these sliders since flowing is quite linear imo, well if only that's what you want. did some adjustments
  2. 00:31:835 (4) - Well, probably the same thing as above. But I suggest this one should do a little curve, or maybe a blanket idk. If applied, it might improve structure and aesthetics in the same time. So yeah, just polishing~ might as blanket
  3. 01:16:306 (1,2,3,4) - This sounds a little empty without at least a few whistles. For consistency, try to do the same hitsounding as the Hard/Insane on this diff to fill them. pointing this out made me realize i had kiai mode ended at wrong time, added whistles
  4. 01:27:953 (1) - For a short spinner on a 170bpm on easy diffs, I don't think this is highly recommended. And I'm pretty sure it's barely noticeable over beginners to spin that quick tho. I prefer removing 01:27:600 (1) - and start the spinner from there.ok, fixed

[- - Hard - -]
  1. 00:12:070 (2,3,4) - I do like the stacking when circle (3) is on the head of slider (4) instead. It probably has stronger emphasis imo which fits better than the current. It wouldn't hurt the playstyle too, so dw.
  2. 00:17:012 (1,5) - The overlap here is a little awkward. Basically it's not very noticeable in gameplay, but it can be seen if it's being looked at very deep. How about moving it more right? But if you kinda dislike moving things out completely, try not to let slider (5)'s tail touch slider (1)'s head. Moving right or blending in sliders won't hurt aesthetics at all tbh. did some adjustments to single note after 1/1 sliders made slider note 5 next to note 1,
  3. 00:22:835 (2,3,4) - Nearly the same thing as 00:12:070 (2,3,4) -, according to the stacking on 00:23:541 (5,6) - . Try to create a little pattern consistency, it'd improve pretty much a lot.kinda understand, did some adjustments
  4. 00:43:659 (1,2) - The rhythm you made previously were better until here. I prefer making a Ctrl + G on these two notes to follow the track more correctly. Not actually the best one but it suits more than the current.adjusted
  5. 01:01:659 - Well, at least try filling this part up for the rhythm composition with a little consistent on 00:38:188 (1,2,3,4) -. And speaking about rhythm, it's literally inconsistent removing out that reverse arrow on the slider. Perhaps a circle wouldn't hurt here as well, as long as it's filled for that. did some adjustments around the area of 00:38:188
  6. 01:20:365 (3) - Why not add an NC here? HP6 on hard diffs is probably high imo, so adding some more NCs on every measure can help players not to direct-fail on emptiness.I probably just forgot to NC it

Probably that's all ;p
Good Luck~
thx a lot, I really appreciate it :D
depzdai
#modreq

Insane
- 00:34:659 (5) - Move it to x:92 y:364. It would make the combo more symmetrical and fun to play with. https://puu.sh/rbOM9/062ddf26f5.png
- 00:40:129 (4) - Move it to x:252 y:252. The combo at 00:39:776 (2,3,4) should have the same DS.
- 00:43:659 (1,2,3,4) - It looks not so aesthetic. In my opinion, changing it like this would make the flow better, even when it affects the flow at 00:43:306 (4,5,1) a bit. https://puu.sh/rbQ0e/11cb70e242.png
- 00:45:600 (3) - Like above. Move it to x:252 y:248. However if you do that, you should also adjust the slider 00:45:953 (6) to keep the blanket. https://puu.sh/rbQ32/fcee26d2bc.png

Ky's Insane
- 01:04:306 (3,4,5) - I wonder if it's a blanket. If it is then you should fix it: https://puu.sh/rbNCR/34b5d82b50.png

Pentori's Insane
- 01:15:247 (2) - Move it to x:192 y:362 to make the DS equal between notes and the combo more aesthetic (or maybe only look better).
Topic Starter
B r o k e n

depzdai wrote:

#modreq

Insane
- 00:34:659 (5) - Move it to x:92 y:364. It would make the combo more symmetrical and fun to play with. https://puu.sh/rbOM9/062ddf26f5.png adjusted, but not to the exact spot
- 00:40:129 (4) - Move it to x:252 y:252. The combo at 00:39:776 (2,3,4) should have the same DS. this area is mapped similar with 01:01:659 (4,5,6,1) - but I'll prob do some adjustments looking at it, I seem to not really like the way it is
- 00:43:659 (1,2,3,4) - It looks not so aesthetic. In my opinion, changing it like this would make the flow better, even when it affects the flow at 00:43:306 (4,5,1) a bit. https://puu.sh/rbQ0e/11cb70e242.png I prefer it like this, it suits in my liking
- 00:45:600 (3) - Like above. Move it to x:252 y:248. However if you do that, you should also adjust the slider 00:45:953 (6) to keep the blanket. https://puu.sh/rbQ32/fcee26d2bc.pngadjusted
from modreq? thx :D, really appreciate it
Naxess
From ... I can't remember xd, but you needed the GDs modded iirc.

General


  1. Looks good.

  2. Regarding the non-GDs,

    1. the hitsounding seems a bit lackluster:

      1. The clap hitsound you're using is relatively weak in comparison with the song. Consider finding a more audible one that fits well to the song.

      2. For example, on all non-GDs, this part, 00:20:894 - , is a very audible snare, yet it only has a whistle. I'd think a clap would be a lot more fitting. This applies to all other snare-like sounds in this section and further on in the song. Even things like this stream, 00:19:306 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - , could use clap hitsounds because of the way the song utilizes them. If you're going to add claps on the snares in the song, consider removing the whistles on said notes for a better effect.

      3. I think your whistle hitsound would fit a lot better as a drum-kick sound due to the way you're using them pre-kiai, but sometimes, like at 00:10:306 - , they don't seem to be reflecting anything at all. You might've placed this one on a vocal, but in that case, if you insist on keeping it, you should reduce the volume of the whistle and place them throughout the whole song, and only on vocals, in order to complement the song well.

      4. In my opinion you should refer to the way Pentori hitsounded their difficulty for, what I see as, a better alternative.
    2. Despite the amount of mods you've gathered for insane, I still feel like it could use more. Even from just briefly looking at it, I can tell that things like note density and emphasis are in need of changes. Or, at least from how I see it. Consider asking for some more mods on your difficulties, especially after what I mentioned with hitsounding, in case you decided to redo them.

Ky's Insane



  • Hit Objects
  1. 00:07:659 (3,4) - The song is still relatively calm, so a 3/4 into a circle with an anti-jump stack doesn't really make sense imo. Consider just making it a 1/1 slider like you've done for 00:01:482 (1) - 00:02:718 (1) - 00:04:129 (1) - 00:06:600 (4) - . Although imo a pattern like 00:06:247 (3,4) - would be preferable.

  2. 00:15:247 (6,1) - 00:12:776 (1) - Spacing these out a bit more would probably emphasize the sounds better. From the looks of it, you seem to be focusing a lot more on the direction of the flow rather than the distance between the notes. Patterns like 00:09:953 (1,2) - work well in calm parts with low SV, but with such high SV you might as well just make a pattern like this for almost the same result.

    This is because of slider leniency. It will allow the player to freely move their cursor around the sliderball without breaking, hence the yellow circle. Try placing sliders you want to emphasize outside or on the edge of this range for best results. Placing them too close will force the player to lose a lot of momentum, which is sometimes preferred and sometimes not, depending on if it's calm section or not for instance.

    Some more examples
    ^ 00:33:953 (1) -
    ^ 00:28:306 (1) -
    etc.

    You've done great on other parts like 00:10:659 (3,4,1,2) - , 00:14:894 (5,6) - and 00:18:070 (4,1) - , so I'm not really sure what happened here.

  3. 00:11:718 (2,3) - 00:12:070 (3,4) - Compare the vocal strength with the spacing using the above knowledge. Why would a higher pitch, 00:12:070 (3) - , be emphasized less than a lower one, 00:12:423 (4) - ? Overall I think this whole part 00:11:718 (2,3,4,1) - has it's emphasis reversed, which I find a bit odd.

  4. 00:35:365 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I found this pattern very strange. Firstly, it completely skips the 1/4 sounds after 00:36:423 - . Secondly, 00:36:159 (4) - is overmapping. Thirdly, the snapping of 00:36:247 (4) - is quite questionable. How about something like this?

  5. 00:45:953 (4,5) - Was this supposed to be a blanket? It looks quite strange atm.

  6. 00:47:012 (2,3,1) - This could be difficult to read and the flow is very sharp. Try placing a single 1/2 slider on 00:47:012 - instead. It may not catch the wub-like sound at 00:47:188 - , but it will be a lot more playable like this.

  7. 00:48:600 (3,4) - Swapping these would emphasize the vocals better, don't you think? I'm not really sure what you're trying to cover at the moment, since the vocal definitely has it's emphasis placed on 00:48:600 - in the song.

  8. 00:49:482 (1,3) - Try keeping overlaps consistent and aesthetic if you're going to use them. Things like this look completely unintentional and doesn't improve the map in any way, or am I wrong? Consider at least taking care of easily visible ones like this. Even ones which overlap more are aesthetically better than the ones that only overlap a little, because it'd look like it was actually meant to be like that.

  9. 00:53:629 - You seem to have missed the stream between 00:53:541 (5,1) - . Why not add it like you did for

  10. 01:13:747 (2,3,4) - Again, this type of rhythm is likely to be hard to read. 01:13:923 - doesn't even have an impact, yet 01:14:012 - does, but it's not clickable. Why not just do this?

  11. 01:27:688 - I'd place a spinner starting from here and ending at 01:28:835 - . It seems like all other difficulties have spinners here too.

  • Hitsounds
  1. 00:00:071 - This section sounds really strange because of the way claps are skipped. I realize you're following vocals and whatnot, but if that prevents the claps from keeping a consistent rhythm, I'd recommend you simply remove the claps and keep silence hitsound-wise like the other difficulties have done it.

  2. 00:33:247 (3) - Some hitsounds seem really off, for example the claps. Claps are usually placed on offbeats, not onbeats. Consider removing the clap here and maybe adding some drum-kick hitsound. Also I can barely hear the claps, maybe you should try a different hitsound and check all your hitsounding again.

  3. Refer to the hitsounds on Pentori's Insane for a good example.

Pentori's Insane



  • Hit Objects
  1. 00:14:188 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - The spacing of these notes are notably larger than the spacing between 00:17:012 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - , which should comparably be more intense because of the buildup, don't you think? Consider moving these two notes, 00:14:365 (2,1) - , closer, if possible.

  2. 00:21:953 (5) - I'd suggest you NC this note for the justification of stream and transition. Like you did at 00:19:129 (1) - , for instance.
    ^ 00:47:365 (3) - Same goes here, refer to 00:29:012 (1) - , where you placed an NC on an strong vocal and onbeat. I'd think this would apply here as well.

  3. 00:33:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Is there any reason why this does not include another NC anywhere? You could for example add NC on 00:34:482 (4) - and 00:34:835 (6) - , which are on vocals, in order to further define your triangles, 00:33:953 (1,2,3) - and 00:34:835 (6,7,8) - . It looks a bit odd atm in comparison with these patterns, 00:14:188 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 00:17:012 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - . I'm honestly curious, so feel free to explain.

  4. 01:27:600 (7) - I'd have placed an NC this downbeat to indicate the end of the stream and beginning of the spinner.

  • Hitsounds

    If I got this correctly,
    whistle reflects piano
    finish reflects cymbal crash
    clap reflects snare
  1. 00:24:776 - Whistle
    ^ 00:27:600 -
    ^ 00:35:365 -
    ^ 00:35:894 -
    ^ 00:36:247 -
    ^ 00:50:894 -
    ^ 00:53:718 -
    ^ 01:07:482 -
    ^ 01:12:070 -
    ^ 01:12:423 -
    ^ 01:13:482 -
    ^ 01:14:894 - Seems like there's a lot around here, maybe you should check the map again for whistle hitsounds, there's more obvious ones further on in the song that you've missed too.

  2. 01:07:659 - This is not a piano sound nor any other unique sound, consider removing the whistle.

  3. Also... these 00:50:012 - 00:50:365 - are not piano sounds. I think you should simply remove these ones for consistency. As far as I can hear, 00:49:835 - , 00:50:188 - and 00:50:541 - are the only sounds from the piano in this combo.

  4. 00:29:629 - Clap, according to how you did your streams, that is.
  5. 00:31:041 - Shouldn't the tail and head have claps like at 00:29:629 - ?

  6. 00:33:953 - For the following two suggestions, consider adding a S:C1 timing section here.
  7. 00:34:306 - 00:34:659 - 00:35:012 - I think this part should have claps here like you've done at 00:17:012 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) -
  8. 00:35:365 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You've placed claps on every 1/4th on previous streams such as 00:19:306 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:22:218 (6,7,8,9,10) - . I'd think there should be more than one clap at least, considering all the snares.

    ^ 00:57:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4) - again, try a S:C1 timing section.

  9. 00:47:365 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try keeping your hitsounding consistent with 00:19:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for this part. (don't forget the sampleset change)

  10. 00:28:306 - Finish
    ^ 00:36:070 -
    ^ 01:10:659 -
    ^ 01:15:423 -

Good luck!
Kibbyyy
Ky's Insane
00:00:776 (3,1) - These slider shapes don't really do with the song in the beginning
00:19:306 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream looks like it was converted from an elbow slider and doesn't look right. Try making it a smooth arc
00:23:541 (3) - I think there might be a blanket issue here
00:36:247 (5) - This doesn't fit with the music
00:47:188 (3) - This slider is just pretty random
00:49:835 (2,3,4) - I feel like it might flow better if the DS was the same for these notes

Pentori's Insane
00:11:718 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps should be closer together. It doesn't feel like the right part of the song to have those bigger jumps
00:17:365 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - I think the jumps should gradually get more difficult as it leads into the next phrase of the song
00:21:953 (5) - This slider doesn't flow very well with the stream
00:33:247 (4,5) - DS should be the same as 00:33:600 (6,7)
00:59:012 (1,2,3,4) - I think this stream could be spaced out from the kick slider a bit more.
01:26:188 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it might have more of an impact if the jumps were a bit more spaced out

I hope this helps! ^3^
Kyle Y
Place Holding

Weriko wrote:

Hey :p

Mod from queue

[ky's insane]00:15:247 (6,1) - Blanket police

00:18:070 (4,1) - non important overlap

00:36:247 (5) - i think this is either 1/6 or doesnt exist..... im not sure

00:47:188 (3) - im not sure if 1/6

love this song :p

depzdai wrote:

#modreq

[Ky's Insane]- 01:04:306 (3,4,5) - I wonder if it's a blanket. If it is then you should fix it: https://puu.sh/rbNCR/34b5d82b50.png

Naxess wrote:

From ... I can't remember xd, but you needed the GDs modded iirc.

Ky's Insane



  • Hit Objects
  1. 00:07:659 (3,4) - The song is still relatively calm, so a 3/4 into a circle with an anti-jump stack doesn't really make sense imo. Consider just making it a 1/1 slider like you've done for 00:01:482 (1) - 00:02:718 (1) - 00:04:129 (1) - 00:06:600 (4) - . Although imo a pattern like 00:06:247 (3,4) - would be preferable.

  2. 00:15:247 (6,1) - 00:12:776 (1) - Spacing these out a bit more would probably emphasize the sounds better. From the looks of it, you seem to be focusing a lot more on the direction of the flow rather than the distance between the notes. Patterns like 00:09:953 (1,2) - work well in calm parts with low SV, but with such high SV you might as well just make a pattern like this for almost the same result.

    This is because of slider leniency. It will allow the player to freely move their cursor around the sliderball without breaking, hence the yellow circle. Try placing sliders you want to emphasize outside or on the edge of this range for best results. Placing them too close will force the player to lose a lot of momentum, which is sometimes preferred and sometimes not, depending on if it's calm section or not for instance.

    Some more examples
    ^ 00:33:953 (1) -
    ^ 00:28:306 (1) -
    etc.

    You've done great on other parts like 00:10:659 (3,4,1,2) - , 00:14:894 (5,6) - and 00:18:070 (4,1) - , so I'm not really sure what happened here.

  3. 00:11:718 (2,3) - 00:12:070 (3,4) - Compare the vocal strength with the spacing using the above knowledge. Why would a higher pitch, 00:12:070 (3) - , be emphasized less than a lower one, 00:12:423 (4) - ? Overall I think this whole part 00:11:718 (2,3,4,1) - has it's emphasis reversed, which I find a bit odd.

  4. 00:35:365 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I found this pattern very strange. Firstly, it completely skips the 1/4 sounds after 00:36:423 - . Secondly, 00:36:159 (4) - is overmapping. Thirdly, the snapping of 00:36:247 (4) - is quite questionable. How about something like this?

  5. 00:45:953 (4,5) - Was this supposed to be a blanket? It looks quite strange atm.

  6. 00:47:012 (2,3,1) - This could be difficult to read and the flow is very sharp. Try placing a single 1/2 slider on 00:47:012 - instead. It may not catch the wub-like sound at 00:47:188 - , but it will be a lot more playable like this.

  7. 00:48:600 (3,4) - Swapping these would emphasize the vocals better, don't you think? I'm not really sure what you're trying to cover at the moment, since the vocal definitely has it's emphasis placed on 00:48:600 - in the song.

  8. 00:49:482 (1,3) - Try keeping overlaps consistent and aesthetic if you're going to use them. Things like this look completely unintentional and doesn't improve the map in any way, or am I wrong? Consider at least taking care of easily visible ones like this. Even ones which overlap more are aesthetically better than the ones that only overlap a little, because it'd look like it was actually meant to be like that.

  9. 00:53:629 - You seem to have missed the stream between 00:53:541 (5,1) - . Why not add it like you did for

  10. 01:13:747 (2,3,4) - Again, this type of rhythm is likely to be hard to read. 01:13:923 - doesn't even have an impact, yet 01:14:012 - does, but it's not clickable. Why not just do this?

  11. 01:27:688 - I'd place a spinner starting from here and ending at 01:28:835 - . It seems like all other difficulties have spinners here too.

  • Hitsounds
  1. 00:00:071 - This section sounds really strange because of the way claps are skipped. I realize you're following vocals and whatnot, but if that prevents the claps from keeping a consistent rhythm, I'd recommend you simply remove the claps and keep silence hitsound-wise like the other difficulties have done it.

  2. 00:33:247 (3) - Some hitsounds seem really off, for example the claps. Claps are usually placed on offbeats, not onbeats. Consider removing the clap here and maybe adding some drum-kick hitsound. Also I can barely hear the claps, maybe you should try a different hitsound and check all your hitsounding again.

  3. Refer to the hitsounds on Pentori's Insane for a good example.

Good luck!

Scarlet_Wolf wrote:

Ky's Insane
00:00:776 (3,1) - These slider shapes don't really do with the song in the beginning
00:19:306 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream looks like it was converted from an elbow slider and doesn't look right. Try making it a smooth arc
00:23:541 (3) - I think there might be a blanket issue here
00:36:247 (5) - This doesn't fit with the music
00:47:188 (3) - This slider is just pretty random
00:49:835 (2,3,4) - I feel like it might flow better if the DS was the same for these notes

I hope this helps! ^3^
Pentori

depzdai wrote:

Pentori's Insane
- 01:15:247 (2) - Move it to x:192 y:362 to make the DS equal between notes and the combo more aesthetic (or maybe only look better). mm but then i lose emphasis

Naxess wrote:

Pentori's Insane



  • Hit Objects
  1. 00:14:188 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - The spacing of these notes are notably larger than the spacing between 00:17:012 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - , which should comparably be more intense because of the buildup, don't you think? Consider moving these two notes, 00:14:365 (2,1) - , closer, if possible.

  2. 00:21:953 (5) - I'd suggest you NC this note for the justification of stream and transition. Like you did at 00:19:129 (1) - , for instance.
    ^ 00:47:365 (3) - Same goes here, refer to 00:29:012 (1) - , where you placed an NC on an strong vocal and onbeat. I'd think this would apply here as well.

  3. 00:33:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Is there any reason why this does not include another NC anywhere? You could for example add NC on 00:34:482 (4) - and 00:34:835 (6) - , which are on vocals, in order to further define your triangles, 00:33:953 (1,2,3) - and 00:34:835 (6,7,8) - . It looks a bit odd atm in comparison with these patterns, 00:14:188 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 00:17:012 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - . I'm honestly curious, so feel free to explain. well lets just say i forgot what consistency meant xd

  4. 01:27:600 (7) - I'd have placed an NC this downbeat to indicate the end of the stream and beginning of the spinner.

  • Hitsounds

    If I got this correctly,
    whistle reflects piano
    finish reflects cymbal crash
    clap reflects snare
  1. 00:24:776 - Whistle
    ^ 00:27:600 -
    ^ 00:35:365 -
    ^ 00:35:894 -
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    ^ 00:53:718 -
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    ^ 01:14:894 - Seems like there's a lot around here, maybe you should check the map again for whistle hitsounds, there's more obvious ones further on in the song that you've missed too.
    so, my method for applying whistles was to add them to downbeats with a strong piano beat. instances such as 00:35:365 - have piano notes but i didn't use a whistle because drums take a strong priority here. but yes, i did miss a lot of downbeat piano notes in the kiai time so thanks for pointing this out

  2. 01:07:659 - This is not a piano sound nor any other unique sound, consider removing the whistle.

  3. Also... these 00:50:012 - 00:50:365 - are not piano sounds. I think you should simply remove these ones for consistency. As far as I can hear, 00:49:835 - , 00:50:188 - and 00:50:541 - are the only sounds from the piano in this combo. i think its ok to hitsound to strings here because i wasn't exactly following every piano beat in the music

  4. 00:29:629 - Clap, according to how you did your streams, that is. i was wondering why this sounded weird zz
  5. 00:31:041 - Shouldn't the tail and head have claps like at 00:29:629 - ?

  6. 00:33:953 - For the following two suggestions, consider adding a S:C1 timing section here.
  7. 00:34:306 - 00:34:659 - 00:35:012 - I think this part should have claps here like you've done at 00:17:012 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - this section is notably different because it's a lot louder and the drummer uses kicks on every 2nd which i didn't hitsound too. for sections like 00:14:188 (1) - the drummer is hitting his sticks which i represented with the soft clap. so since its louder i used N:C1 and didn't hitsound to kicks. yah
  8. 00:35:365 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You've placed claps on every 1/4th on previous streams such as 00:19:306 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:22:218 (6,7,8,9,10) - . I'd think there should be more than one clap at least, considering all the snares. i actually agreed with you here and went ahead and changed it, but then realised my reasoning for having the drum streams in the softer parts was because it contrasted well with the SC:1 sampleset. the streams around kiai time sounded less intense than the others hence i used N:C1 for those streams.

    ^ 00:57:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4) - again, try a S:C1 timing section. used N:C1 for kiai

  9. 00:47:365 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try keeping your hitsounding consistent with 00:19:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for this part. (don't forget the sampleset change) ~

  10. 00:28:306 - Finish
    ^ 00:36:070 -
    ^ 01:10:659 -
    ^ 01:15:423 -
really helpful thanks

Scarlet_Wolf wrote:

Pentori's Insane
00:11:718 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps should be closer together. It doesn't feel like the right part of the song to have those bigger jumps
00:17:365 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - I think the jumps should gradually get more difficult as it leads into the next phrase of the song prefer it this way
00:21:953 (5) - This slider doesn't flow very well with the stream dont see what you mean, the slider points toward to stream
00:33:247 (4,5) - DS should be the same as 00:33:600 (6,7)
00:59:012 (1,2,3,4) - I think this stream could be spaced out from the kick slider a bit more. i dont really want a stream jump
01:26:188 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it might have more of an impact if the jumps were a bit more spaced out decreasing for lowering in pitch
no reply/green = fix
thanks all
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392,320,49835,1,10,1:2:0:0:
434,118,50012,1,2,1:2:0:0:
238,182,50188,1,2,1:2:0:0:
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Topic Starter
B r o k e n

Naxess wrote:

From ... I can't remember xd, but you needed the GDs modded iirc.

General


  1. Looks good.

  2. Regarding the non-GDs,

    1. the hitsounding seems a bit lackluster:

      1. The clap hitsound you're using is relatively weak in comparison with the song. Consider finding a more audible one that fits well to the song. I'll consider it, although I don't really find it as an issue because I use a skin hit sounds are different haha...

      2. For example, on all non-GDs, this part, 00:20:894 - , is a very audible snare, yet it only has a whistle. I'd think a clap would be a lot more fitting. This applies to all other snare-like sounds in this section and further on in the song. Even things like this stream, 00:19:306 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - , could use clap hitsounds because of the way the song utilizes them. If you're going to add claps on the snares in the song, consider removing the whistles on said notes for a better effect. claps are used before kiai mode as a stronger introduction into kiai mode, and I putted it in during kiai time to areas that are quite similar, and of course at the ending to conclude the song, so overall the clap was made to build intro into kiai time and the ending, I don't really see an issue of this

      3. I think your whistle hitsound would fit a lot better as a drum-kick sound due to the way you're using them pre-kiai, but sometimes, like at 00:10:306 - , they don't seem to be reflecting anything at all. You might've placed this one on a vocal, but in that case, if you insist on keeping it, you should reduce the volume of the whistle and place them throughout the whole song, and only on vocals, in order to complement the song well. I'm not so good with hit sounding honestly, keeping it simple all on white ticks expect kiai mode is enough to make me happy about it, I honestly don't really see an issue with it, I'll consider changing the whistle on areas that aren't on kiai mode to some sort of drum hit sound? I honestly would love to use my current skin hit sound for it, but I feel like it would be a bit random throwing in a skin hit sound into a map

      4. In my opinion you should refer to the way Pentori hitsounded their difficulty for, what I see as, a better alternative. I rather not
    2. Despite the amount of mods you've gathered for insane, I still feel like it could use more. Even from just briefly looking at it, I can tell that things like note density and emphasis are in need of changes. Or, at least from how I see it. Consider asking for some more mods on your difficulties, especially after what I mentioned with hitsounding, in case you decided to redo them. I never said that this difficulty was perfect, I was just mainly looking for mods for my GDs because they have the least mods


Good luck! sorry for the super late reply on hit sounds :D ment to do it sooner but I just got.....lazy xD, overall I'm not good with hit sounds and I don't really see an issue with it xD
mardoka
Hi, from my modding queue

[General]
  1. A couple of the diffs could use variable volume at different parts of the song to differentiate the kiai from the rest of the song, etc.
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:188 (1) - prev:1.04x next:1.11x Distance 00:12:776 (3,1) - it's uneven
  2. 00:22:659 (1,2) - blanket a little off
  3. 00:48:070 (1) - DS is uneven
  4. 00:57:600 (2,3) - rip blanket
[Hard]
  1. 00:35:188 (5) - why a 1/4 repeat here? replace with 2 circles imo
  2. 00:36:776 I think 80% volume here would be nice, so that the music doesn't completely drown out the hitsounds.
  3. 00:39:600 (1,3) - blanket of slider 3 tail with slider 1 body is off
  4. 00:47:718 (4,5) - you're already following vocals, so slider here would be nice
  5. 00:50:541 (5,6) - space this equal to 00:50:365 (4,5) -
  6. 00:57:953 (1,2,3,4,5) - why the clickable stream here as opposed to other parts of this measure? I think it would be more fitting to the music for the stream to be 00:59:012 (7) - here. You ignored the drums afterwards which is fine since you're following the vocals but imo if you want to include a stream in this section, the best place to put it is 00:59:012 - 00:59:365 . As for my recommendation, I think this combination of objects could work out great https://puu.sh/ruueC/2dd1d095f8.jpg . And if you care at all https://puu.sh/ruufg/962539ed03.jpg is the placements I used to test. Or if you want to keep the clickable vocals on 00:58:659 (6,7) - then this can work great as well https://puu.sh/ruuCX/c21442bcaa.jpg . Hope I was able to explain well enough here.
  7. 00:59:365 (1,2,3) - this measure should be mapped with the same rhythm as 01:00:776 (1,2,3,4) - imo. Since the musical structure is the same in these two instances :/
  8. 01:14:718 (5,6,1,2,3) - The rhythm choice here is fine but I just think it's a little lame to stack at such a climactic part of the song :c. As for my recommendation: https://puu.sh/ruvjE/c3dce8d70c.jpg I think small jumps here would convey the song well. I know this map or hard diffs in general aren't supposed to be jump heavy so I won't be offended if you don't take my suggestion but at least unstack the notes off the sliders :(... What I did while testing if you care https://puu.sh/ruvKs/f577998cd5.jpg . or something like this http://puu.sh/ruwfU/24bcd1c127.jpg idk
Starting to lose focus so I think I'll stop here x.x

Gl, Hope this helps!

star :^)
Topic Starter
B r o k e n

nubery wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

[General]
  1. A couple of the diffs could use variable volume at different parts of the song to differentiate the kiai from the rest of the song, etc.did soem adjustments
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:188 (1) - prev:1.04x next:1.11x Distance 00:12:776 (3,1) - it's uneven fixed? kinda confused here
  2. 00:22:659 (1,2) - blanket a little off fixed, well looks good to me at least
  3. 00:48:070 (1) - DS is uneven fixed
  4. 00:57:600 (2,3) - rip blanketfixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:35:188 (5) - why a 1/4 repeat here? replace with 2 circles imo drum triple sound
  2. 00:36:776 I think 80% volume here would be nice, so that the music doesn't completely drown out the hitsounds. sure
  3. 00:39:600 (1,3) - blanket of slider 3 tail with slider 1 body is off looks good to me now
  4. 00:47:718 (4,5) - you're already following vocals, so slider here would be nice yep, did some adjustments to note placing and switched into slider
  5. 00:50:541 (5,6) - space this equal to 00:50:365 (4,5) - confused
  6. 00:57:953 (1,2,3,4,5) - why the clickable stream here as opposed to other parts of this measure? I think it would be more fitting to the music for the stream to be 00:59:012 (7) - here. You ignored the drums afterwards which is fine since you're following the vocals but imo if you want to include a stream in this section, the best place to put it is 00:59:012 - 00:59:365 . As for my recommendation, I think this combination of objects could work out great https://puu.sh/ruueC/2dd1d095f8.jpg . And if you care at all https://puu.sh/ruufg/962539ed03.jpg is the placements I used to test. Or if you want to keep the clickable vocals on 00:58:659 (6,7) - then this can work great as well https://puu.sh/ruuCX/c21442bcaa.jpg . Hope I was able to explain well enough here. overall I understand the issue here, did some adjustments, went with 1/4 sliders mapping the entire drum stream
  7. 00:59:365 (1,2,3) - this measure should be mapped with the same rhythm as 01:00:776 (1,2,3,4) - imo. Since the musical structure is the same in these two instances :/ fixed
  8. 01:14:718 (5,6,1,2,3) - The rhythm choice here is fine but I just think it's a little lame to stack at such a climactic part of the song :c. As for my recommendation: https://puu.sh/ruvjE/c3dce8d70c.jpg I think small jumps here would convey the song well. I know this map or hard diffs in general aren't supposed to be jump heavy so I won't be offended if you don't take my suggestion but at least unstack the notes off the sliders :(... What I did while testing if you care https://puu.sh/ruvKs/f577998cd5.jpg . or something like this http://puu.sh/ruwfU/24bcd1c127.jpg idk I like the idea of 2 single notes instead, removed the slider and putted a single note and did a small jump
Starting to lose focus so I think I'll stop here x.x

Gl, Hope this helps!

star :^) really appreciate the mod :D thx for the star too~
Ela
from my queue

[Ky's Insane]
  1. after this 00:36:247 (5) - need something to the "ki-" of the vocal, sounds weird star the next combo in the "-mino..."
  2. 01:22:835 (4) - the piano is the main right here, you ignored the piano at the start with this slider but you followed it perfectly with the next ones, it really sound bad, try something else :?

    nothing more than that
    i really loved your diff (my fav of this set)
    Good work!!

Hard, Insane and Pentori's insane are fine :)
waiting for see it rank!
pkhg
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:953 (1) - why you started to map from here
  2. the kiai in general is too repetitive cuz it consist of only 1/2 sliders. try to use some 1/1 sliders and/or replacing some sliders with circles for some variation
[Normal]
  1. 00:22:659 (1,2,3) - what about http://puu.sh/rRj6P/02d6568e11.jpg | fits the vocals better and the current one is too cluttered
    well i dont like most of your rhythms but that might be just me lol
[Hard]
  1. 01:20:365 (1) - same as pentori's
    mostly aesthetic stuff but im not good modding that
    and again i dont like your rhythms ://
[Ky's Insane]
  1. 00:21:776 (3,4) - circles instead pls
  2. 00:36:247 (5) - why is this 1/8? and why are you stopping the stream this sudden when there are still 1/4 beats to map
  3. 00:47:012 (2,3,1,2) - all of these are overmapped. also why is 00:47:188 (3) - 1/6?
    not a big fan of extended sliders
[Pentori's Insane]
  1. 00:11:365 (1) - 00:19:129 (1) - that clap sound triggers me. this one works way better http://puu.sh/rRkF6/ddef75bf80.wav
  2. 01:20:365 (1) - a 1/6 with 3 reverses fits better cuz the piano isnt snapped and there are 4 beats so yea
gl
Shauma
Really good map. It needs some repairs here and here but, still it's really good. I'm not a mapper but i have a feeling that in hard diff last streams are too fast and hard. It just doesn't suit diff.
Topic Starter
B r o k e n

pkhg wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:953 (1) - why you started to map from here I honestly didn't really know how to map the intro for this difficulty, doing quite a bit of extended sliders felt weird for me, didn't want to map using 1/1 sliders and so because the intro is weaker, so overall I just didn't know to map the intro and figure it's fine to leave it empty and map where the song starts of stronger
  2. the kiai in general is too repetitive cuz it consist of only 1/2 sliders. try to use some 1/1 sliders and/or replacing some sliders with circles for some variationughh... it's map with lots of 1/1 sliders not 1/2 haha, I'll work some adjustments, I honestly don't really know what to do besides 1/1 and 1/1 returns and single note, not so good with extended sliders
[Normal]
  1. 00:22:659 (1,2,3) - what about http://puu.sh/rRj6P/02d6568e11.jpg | fits the vocals better and the current one is too cluttered
    well i dont like most of your rhythms but that might be just me lol adjusted, should had suggested some rhythms for me I may had liked it haha :/
[Hard]
  1. 01:20:365 (1) - same as pentori's ugh, might as well, I felt like it would had been a bit confusing for hard, so I did a 1/4 instead of 1/6
    mostly aesthetic stuff but im not good modding that
    and again i dont like your rhythms ://Should had suggested me some, I may had liked them haha :/
glty for the mod, I really appreciate it

Shauma wrote:

Really good map. It needs some repairs here and here but, still it's really good. I'm not a mapper but i have a feeling that in hard diff last streams are too fast and hard. It just doesn't suit diff.
ty for the feedback, I don't really find the slider streams hard to play, so I'll leave it as it is for now
Topic Starter
B r o k e n
just a post by mistake that I can't delete.... o_o
Pentori
fixed from pkhg's mod
@B r o k e n can you replace soft-hitclap.wav with this one http://puu.sh/rRkF6/ddef75bf80.wav ? thanks
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372,252,51776,2,0,P|357:296|344:341,1,93.5000028533936,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,240,52129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,240,52218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,240,52306,6,0,P|479:195|464:150,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,176,52659,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,72,52835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,72,52923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,72,53012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,252,53188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,104,53365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,320,53541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,320,53629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,320,53718,6,0,P|288:252|284:212,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,120,54070,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,296,54247,2,0,P|183:342|180:372,2,46.7500014266968
276,152,54600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,272,54776,2,0,P|108:276|56:280,1,93.5000028533936,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,228,55041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,228,55129,6,0,P|12:160|20:116,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,48,55482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,184,55659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,32,55835,2,0,P|328:24|372:32,1,93.5000028533936
396,52,56100,2,0,P|400:108|400:156,1,93.5000028533936
420,172,56365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,184,56541,6,0,B|244:156|244:216|336:184,1,187.000005706787,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,272,57070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,104,57247,2,0,P|341:95|384:110,1,93.5000028533936
448,264,57600,2,0,P|452:208|456:160,1,93.5000028533936,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,104,57953,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,58041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,137,58129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,128,58217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,98,58306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,96,58394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
38,122,58482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,166,58570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
41,209,58659,6,0,L|44:272,1,46.7500014266968
152,360,58835,2,0,L|149:297,1,46.7500014266968
180,288,59012,5,8,0:0:0:0:
215,317,59100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,327,59188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,317,59276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,288,59365,6,0,P|348:232|352:184,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,72,59718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,144,59894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,144,59982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,144,60070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,100,60247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,288,60423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,88,60600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,88,60688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,88,60776,6,0,P|288:64|232:80,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,168,61129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
265,236,61306,2,0,P|273:177|281:132,1,93.5000028533936
180,272,61659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,168,61835,2,0,P|111:109|104:64,1,93.5000028533936,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,32,62100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,32,62188,6,0,P|220:24|260:32,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,168,62541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,32,62718,1,2,0:2:0:0:
16,32,62806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,32,62894,1,2,0:2:0:0:
32,164,63070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,63247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,116,63423,1,2,0:2:0:0:
184,116,63511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,116,63599,5,2,0:2:0:0:
108,256,63776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,63953,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,88,64129,1,2,0:2:0:0:
268,88,64218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,88,64306,2,0,P|332:80|368:80,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,104,64570,2,0,P|404:152|394:199,1,93.5000028533936
384,224,64835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,65012,6,0,P|284:164|328:156,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,241,65365,2,0,P|429:231|383:223,1,93.5000028533936,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,244,65718,2,0,P|148:200|156:132,1,93.5000028533936
152,124,65982,2,0,P|104:120|48:120,1,93.5000028533936
28,96,66247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,64,66423,6,0,P|232:112|212:176,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,232,66776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,264,66953,2,0,L|320:256,2,46.7500014266968
76,344,67306,2,0,P|128:328|180:336,1,93.5000028533936,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,332,67659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,332,67747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,332,67835,6,0,P|404:260|356:176,1,187.000005706787,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,116,68365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,256,68541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,68718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
358,177,68894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,340,69070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,340,69159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,340,69247,5,0,0:0:0:0:
216,184,69423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,360,69600,5,8,0:0:0:0:
318,163,69776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,380,69953,6,0,P|452:316|444:276,1,93.5000028533936
424,256,70218,2,0,P|372:248|296:272,1,93.5000028533936
308,284,70482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
122,179,70659,6,0,P|178:183|242:183,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,72,71012,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,248,71188,2,0,P|52:324|56:360,1,93.5000028533936
122,179,71541,2,0,P|128:132|135:86,1,93.5000028533936,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,178,71894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,178,71982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,178,72070,6,0,P|239:186|195:178,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,88,72423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,268,72600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,182,72776,2,0,P|218:134|222:74,1,93.5000028533936
248,68,73041,2,0,P|300:60|360:76,1,93.5000028533936
364,88,73306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,267,73482,6,0,P|411:275|351:259,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,214,73747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,214,73835,2,0,P|259:206|214:214,1,93.5000028533936,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,338,74188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,205,74365,2,0,P|198:158|194:111,1,93.5000028533936,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,140,74718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,172,74894,6,0,P|72:218|68:265,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,348,75247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,190,75423,2,0,P|215:180|163:188,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,280,75776,2,0,P|385:289|432:286,1,93.5000028533936,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,108,76129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,108,76218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,108,76306,6,0,P|435:65|341:112,1,170
428,168,76835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,280,77012,2,0,P|336:224|344:192,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,296,77365,2,0,P|392:341|346:360,1,85
328,356,77629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,356,77718,6,0,P|248:332|156:360,1,170
84,220,78247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,220,78335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,220,78423,2,0,P|120:152|144:120,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,72,78776,2,0,P|304:88|348:84,1,85
376,208,79129,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,208,80365,6,0,L|426:217,3,28.3333333333333,2|2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,176,81600,5,8,0:0:0:0:
108,176,81688,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,176,81776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,176,81865,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,176,81953,6,0,P|176:160|212:164,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,83,82306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,231,82482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,231,82570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,231,82659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,69,82835,1,2,0:0:0:0:
375,183,83012,1,10,0:0:0:0:
212,160,83188,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,72,83365,6,0,P|460:68|504:68,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,183,83718,2,0,P|315:179|271:179,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,73,84070,2,0,P|232:69|276:69,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,172,84423,2,0,P|116:168|72:168,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,84688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,84776,5,10,0:0:0:0:
96,72,84953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,244,85129,5,8,0:0:0:0:
172,73,85306,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,300,85482,5,10,0:0:0:0:
248,74,85659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,85835,5,8,0:0:0:0:
204,184,86012,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,96,86188,5,10,0:0:0:0:
372,292,86365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,116,86541,5,8,0:0:0:0:
432,208,86718,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,288,86894,5,10,0:0:0:0:
388,48,87070,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,32,87158,1,8,0:0:0:0:
306,27,87246,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,32,87335,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,47,87423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
182,52,87511,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,47,87600,5,0,2:0:0:0:
256,192,87688,12,0,88835,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
B r o k e n

Pentori wrote:

fixed from pkhg's mod
@B r o k e n can you replace soft-hitclap.wav with this one http://puu.sh/rRkF6/ddef75bf80.wav ? thanks replaced it
- Frontier -
hi sorry for late mod ;w;
[Easy]
  1. Remove Widescreen Support please since no SB.
  2. 00:31:129 (3) - maybe nc this? since the song emphasize here
  3. 00:40:306 (2,3) - Too far
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:365 (3) - nc this?
  2. 00:17:012 (4) - ^
  3. 00:22:659 (5) - ^
  4. 00:34:659 (3,4) - This isn't the same. Maybe you should fix this.
  5. 00:36:776 (1,2,3) - I think these are too hard for normal diff. Maybe like this? (If you fix this, fix the others too.)
  6. 00:59:365 (1,2,3) - This part the song is the same rhythm like 01:00:776 (1,2,3) but different pattern :cry:
[Hard]
  1. 01:20:365 (1) - This should be 1/12 sliders. Starts at 01:20:335, ends at 01:20:541
[Ky's Insane]
  1. 00:10:659 (3,4) - This part, the pattern should be like this. :roll:
  2. 00:36:247 (5) - Why this 1/8?
I'm not gonna mod the upper diffs because I can't find more mistake.
GL~
Topic Starter
B r o k e n

- Frontier - wrote:

hi sorry for late mod ;w;
[Easy]
  1. Remove Widescreen Support please since no SB. removed
  2. 00:31:129 (3) - maybe nc this? since the song emphasize here fixed NC, a mistake on my part
  3. 00:40:306 (2,3) - Too far fixed
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:365 (3) - nc this? I rather not, I rather keep the consist NC
  2. 00:17:012 (4) - ^ ^
  3. 00:22:659 (5) - ^ ^
  4. 00:34:659 (3,4) - This isn't the same. Maybe you should fix this. fixed
  5. 00:36:776 (1,2,3) - I think these are too hard for normal diff. Maybe like this? (If you fix this, fix the others too.) fixed, looking at this now it was quite ugly haha
  6. 00:59:365 (1,2,3) - This part the song is the same rhythm like 01:00:776 (1,2,3) but different pattern :cry: fixed
[Hard]
  1. 01:20:365 (1) - This should be 1/12 sliders. Starts at 01:20:335, ends at 01:20:541
I'm not gonna mod the upper diffs because I can't find more mistake.
GL~thx for the mod, really appreciate it :D
Winnie
From Modding Queue


Everything that is not stated below passes to be qualified or for different suggestions


[Ky's Insane]
00:47:188 (3) - This one isn't really necessary, I think you can match this for the 1/4 on slider (2). It plays out the vocal and adds a greater emphasis on the stream
01:01:129 (2) - I believe you might be missing a clap here
01:10:482 (3,1) - That one could be ctrl+g for better playability
01:13:482 (1) - Your rhythm starting here is kind of strange. The spacing and playing that it takes it unbalanced. My suggestion would be to implement something like this http://puu.sh/sOAJ6/8b1a69b8b1.jpg Mapping out the vocals made it play very weird. Especially the 1/4 into a reverse 3/4
01:22:835 (4) - This stands out too much. It's skipping lots of usable sounds you can do here. This is the only hold slider you have in the map and it doesn't quite fit imo

[Hard]
Blanket little bit off 00:59:894 (2) -
01:01:306 (6,7) - Why was there a pause in between these? Especially since you followed a clap scheme. It would be a shame to just cut a break there
01:05:718 (2) - Same as ^ here
01:14:894 (6,1,2) - I can see the vocal mapping here but for above it's just strange

[Normal]
I don't know why the song doesn't start mapping right off the bat like the rest of the set does. Can be said for easy as well. It's just inconsistent
00:22:659 (5) - NC can be here for the strong vocal
00:26:894 (1) - If you followed above you can NC here as well. It keeps a 3 note -----> 4 notes then repeats for consistency
00:50:894 (1,2,3,4,1) - You can probably change it to http://puu.sh/sOBr8/c0d70fefa7.jpg (Or make the last slider in the first part a repeat) Keeps the rhythm from being complicated and being too much notes in a section
01:10:659 (1) - Starting here your notes are kinda dense. There's a lot that needs to be played. You can simplify it by making repeats. Gives your more room to work with and doesn't having to keep placing notes together http://puu.sh/sOBGf/e62c8a8037.jpg
01:15:776 (7,8) - You can make this a 1/1 slider. It's more relevant to the vocal than what you have

[Easy]
Not really anything much, all I can say is there is a lot of 1/1 sliders all over the place and it makes it slightly bland. I would add in 1/4 reverse sliders to bring out some parts a little more but it's ok as is.

Hope this helps btw do bring in a BN after 2 more mods it'll get qualified my instincts tells me so.
Topic Starter
B r o k e n

Kocari wrote:

From Modding Queue


Everything that is not stated below passes to be qualified or for different suggestions


[Hard]
Blanket little bit off 00:59:894 (2) - looks good to me now
01:01:306 (6,7) - Why was there a pause in between these? Especially since you followed a clap scheme. It would be a shame to just cut a break there adjusted
01:05:718 (2) - Same as ^ here ^
01:14:894 (6,1,2) - I can see the vocal mapping here but for above it's just strangea bit confused here, I'm guessing you're saying it feels strange because of the empty spaces and I should replace some of the single note with a slider to fill up the offbeat or so? I did had it like that before, but I liked this better and switched it into the single notes, it feels more empathized that way to me

[Normal]
I don't know why the song doesn't start mapping right off the bat like the rest of the set does. Can be said for easy as well. It's just inconsistentok, I'll map the start, a lot of moders said this, it was just that I found it really hard to map it for normal and easy, didn't really know what to do for the intro
00:22:659 (5) - NC can be here for the strong vocal might as well, but doing so does ruins the constant NC i have
00:26:894 (1) - If you followed above you can NC here as well. It keeps a 3 note -----> 4 notes then repeats for consistency NC
00:50:894 (1,2,3,4,1) - You can probably change it to http://puu.sh/sOBr8/c0d70fefa7.jpg (Or make the last slider in the first part a repeat) Keeps the rhythm from being complicated and being too much notes in a section adjusted to same as you suggested
01:10:659 (1) - Starting here your notes are kinda dense. There's a lot that needs to be played. You can simplify it by making repeats. Gives your more room to work with and doesn't having to keep placing notes together http://puu.sh/sOBGf/e62c8a8037.jpg did adjustments, it dropped the star rating under 2* was hopping to keep this diff above 2* tho
01:15:776 (7,8) - You can make this a 1/1 slider. It's more relevant to the vocal than what you haveadjusted

[Easy]
Not really anything much, all I can say is there is a lot of 1/1 sliders all over the place and it makes it slightly bland. I would add in 1/4 reverse sliders to bring out some parts a little more but it's ok as is.I'll work on this a bit then, I'll try to change a few areas

Hope this helps btw do bring in a BN after 2 more mods it'll get qualified my instincts tells me sotyvm for the mod :D, really appreciate it.
BounceBabe
🕓⌛ TWENTY MINUTES ⌛🕓

easy

first off, its not so good to map an easy with so many red ticks. makes it hard for beginners. following vocals is best. sometimes the half beat mapping also doesnt follow anything in particular and only follow vocals half of the time too.

i REALLY really recommend to overhaul the easy in the beginning and reduce the 1/2 in general a lot. focus on vocal, map the important beats, create intuitive and easier rhythm. best thing to do is highlight 00:00:071 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - and move it by a half beat to the right. that will fix most of the rhythm. there you go, much better. now adjust rhythm accordingly to match vocals / instruments where necessary.

00:00:071 (1,2,3) - remeber that sliders are always just 1 click and much easier to play http://puu.sh/sSqiq/d2f27d9aaf.jpg

00:02:718 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - that kind of rhythm hardly follows vocals nor beats at all which is extremely hard. that makes gameplay not secure to play at all. the rhythm is also very intense. try http://puu.sh/sSqnt/75df1f1155.jpg http://puu.sh/sSqnP/6bb3c2c82c.jpg

00:06:953 (3) - follows nothing, vocal starts here 00:07:129 - and the guitar is every half beat too better http://puu.sh/sSqrM/68654cc742.jpg

00:14:188 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you could throw a longer slider into this part that goes with the vocal http://puu.sh/sSqzA/61d9275b8d.jpg same 00:33:953 (1,2) - 00:41:012 (3,4) - 00:55:129 (3,4) - 01:05:012 (1,2) -

^ 00:22:659 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/sSqB6/690c004b06.jpg

01:21:953 (1,2,3,4) - to vary the pattern http://puu.sh/sSqFk/e1504e3cc0.jpg

tbh, the spinner at the end seems a bit short, might be better to add a circle only at 01:27:600 - to conclude the map better.

insane

dunno if its on the other diffs too but the hitsounds are really low and almost inaudible to be rankable at the start. increase them.

00:48:953 (6,7) - jump doesnt quite match here rather use normal ds, add a jump at 00:45:070 (6,1) - instead, same for these 00:50:541 (7,8) - remove 00:50:718 (8,1) - add jump

^ 00:55:659 (4,5) - 00:40:129 (4,5) - normal ds is better. too overdone.

^ 01:00:423 (5,1) -

00:59:012 (7,1) - jump could be larger since its the start of the second half of kiai

00:33:247 (5,6,7,8) - arrangement could be polished a bit if you look at 00:31:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 00:33:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , they are placed nicer

add some larger emphasis jumps for intenser sounds at 00:23:718 (5,1) - 00:27:953 (5,1) - 00:38:012 (6,1) - 00:39:247 (5,1) -

dont think the map needs more jumps tbh. its already really jumpy :p
Topic Starter
B r o k e n

BounceBabe wrote:

🕓⌛ TWENTY MINUTES ⌛🕓
easy

first off, its not so good to map an easy with so many red ticks. makes it hard for beginners. following vocals is best. sometimes the half beat mapping also doesnt follow anything in particular and only follow vocals half of the time too.

i REALLY really recommend to overhaul the easy in the beginning and reduce the 1/2 in general a lot. focus on vocal, map the important beats, create intuitive and easier rhythm. best thing to do is highlight 00:00:071 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - and move it by a half beat to the right. that will fix most of the rhythm. there you go, much better. now adjust rhythm accordingly to match vocals / instruments where necessary. did some adjustments hopefully it's better now, moved slider end to a white tick instead of red, extended some slider and so so

00:00:071 (1,2,3) - remeber that sliders are always just 1 click and much easier to play http://puu.sh/sSqiq/d2f27d9aaf.jpg I was never too sure about mapping an easy like this, no change, I changed the entire start of the song

00:02:718 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - that kind of rhythm hardly follows vocals nor beats at all which is extremely hard. that makes gameplay not secure to play at all. the rhythm is also very intense. try http://puu.sh/sSqnt/75df1f1155.jpg http://puu.sh/sSqnP/6bb3c2c82c.jpg changed entire intro

00:06:953 (3) - follows nothing, vocal starts here 00:07:129 - and the guitar is every half beat too better http://puu.sh/sSqrM/68654cc742.jpg ^

00:14:188 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you could throw a longer slider into this part that goes with the vocal http://puu.sh/sSqzA/61d9275b8d.jpg same 00:33:953 (1,2) - 00:41:012 (3,4) - 00:55:129 (3,4) - 01:05:012 (1,2) - changed

^ 00:22:659 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/sSqB6/690c004b06.jpg changed, but left the 1/1 return slider as it is

01:21:953 (1,2,3,4) - to vary the pattern http://puu.sh/sSqFk/e1504e3cc0.jpg changed, fits well too

tbh, the spinner at the end seems a bit short, might be better to add a circle only at 01:27:600 - to conclude the map better. changed

insane

dunno if its on the other diffs too but the hitsounds are really low and almost inaudible to be rankable at the start. increase them.hit sounds sounds good enough for me, no change unless more complaints

00:48:953 (6,7) - jump doesnt quite match here rather use normal ds, add a jump at 00:45:070 (6,1) - instead, same for these 00:50:541 (7,8) - remove 00:50:718 (8,1) - add jump changed

^ 00:55:659 (4,5)no change, due to the clap on the triple i added distance - 00:40:129 (4,5) - normal ds is better. too overdone.no change, honestly just lazy 01:02:188 map with same distance due to similar sound and so, just lazy to change both of them, no change as for now

^ 01:00:423 (5,1) - no change, i felt like this part here can use some distance for the vocal

00:59:012 (7,1) - jump could be larger since its the start of the second half of kiai added more distance, hopefully the blanket thingy looks fine

00:33:247 (5,6,7,8) - arrangement could be polished a bit if you look at 00:31:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 00:33:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , they are placed nicer did some improvement, looks fairy better now, did some note stacking

add some larger emphasis jumps for intenser sounds at 00:23:718 (5,1) -improved distance for all the piano sliders 00:27:953 (5,1) -improved distance 00:38:012 (6,1)improved by .2 - 00:39:247 (5,1) - improved by .2

dont think the map needs more jumps tbh. its already really jumpy :p
ty for the mod :D I really appreciate it
-Atri-
Kyle Y allowed me to fix his diff (kinda, i also got support from him), he's studying in Taiwan now, although he said he has mac on his hostel, he also said that it doesn't run osu pretty well


Weriko

Weriko wrote:

Hey :p

Mod from queue

[ky's insane]00:15:247 (6,1) - Blanket police Adjusted a little bit, It's a tricky one though

00:18:070 (4,1) - non important overlap Rejected: The overlap is fine for me as long it doesn't hurt the readability too much

00:36:247 (5) - i think this is either 1/6 or doesnt exist..... im not sure Changed into 1/4

00:47:188 (3) - im not sure if 1/6 Rejected: This one is different, This slider is trying to map the transition

love this song :p

depzdai
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depzdai wrote:

#modreq

[Ky's Insane]- 01:04:306 (3,4,5) - I wonder if it's a blanket. If it is then you should fix it: https://puu.sh/rbNCR/34b5d82b50.png
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Naxess

Naxess wrote:

From ... I can't remember xd, but you needed the GDs modded iirc.

Ky's Insane



  • Hit Objects
  1. 00:07:659 (3,4) - The song is still relatively calm, so a 3/4 into a circle with an anti-jump stack doesn't really make sense imo. Consider just making it a 1/1 slider like you've done for 00:01:482 (1) - 00:02:718 (1) - 00:04:129 (1) - 00:06:600 (4) - . Although imo a pattern like 00:06:247 (3,4) - would be preferable. Ky's response: um.... whole song it is play for extended slider...and I think this is not a great problem if I use 3/4 here

  2. 00:15:247 (6,1) - 00:12:776 (1) - Spacing these out a bit more would probably emphasize the sounds better. From the looks of it, you seem to be focusing a lot more on the direction of the flow rather than the distance between the notes. Patterns like 00:09:953 (1,2) - work well in calm parts with low SV, but with such high SV you might as well just make a pattern like this for almost the same result. Rejected: I understand your point but those sliders have enough emphasis imo, they're just in different ways
    00:14:894 (5,6,1) - Those 3 sliders have it's own separate flow, which gives those 3 piano sounds stand out independently
    00:12:776 (1) - This separates the flow from 00:12:423 (4) - , which is a good ways to emphasize the note, too


    This is because of slider leniency. It will allow the player to freely move their cursor around the sliderball without breaking, hence the yellow circle. Try placing sliders you want to emphasize outside or on the edge of this range for best results. Placing them too close will force the player to lose a lot of momentum, which is sometimes preferred and sometimes not, depending on if it's calm section or not for instance.

    Some more examples
    ^ 00:33:953 (1) - Fixed this one though
    ^ 00:28:306 (1) - Rejected: Same thing i mentioned before, this kind of flow separation makes give stand alone, too
    etc.

    You've done great on other parts like 00:10:659 (3,4,1,2) - , 00:14:894 (5,6) - and 00:18:070 (4,1) - , so I'm not really sure what happened here.

  3. 00:11:718 (2,3) - 00:12:070 (3,4) - Compare the vocal strength with the spacing using the above knowledge. Why would a higher pitch, 00:12:070 (3) - , be emphasized less than a lower one, 00:12:423 (4) - ? Overall I think this whole part 00:11:718 (2,3,4,1) - has it's emphasis reversed, which I find a bit odd. Rejected: I guess what he did is to emphasize the beat at 00:12:423 (4) -

  4. 00:35:365 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I found this pattern very strange. Firstly, it completely skips the 1/4 sounds after 00:36:423 - . Secondly, 00:36:159 (4) - is overmapping. Thirdly, the snapping of 00:36:247 (4) - is quite questionable. How about something like this? Fixed differently on previous mod

  5. 00:45:953 (4,5) - Was this supposed to be a blanket? It looks quite strange atm. Rejected: This is intentional, not intended to make a blanket here i guess

  6. 00:47:012 (2,3,1) - This could be difficult to read and the flow is very sharp. Try placing a single 1/2 slider on 00:47:012 - instead. It may not catch the wub-like sound at 00:47:188 - , but it will be a lot more playable like this. I guess your main point is the readability here, so i desired to move 00:47:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - out a little bit, but keeping that 1/6 slider

  7. 00:48:600 (3,4) - Swapping these would emphasize the vocals better, don't you think? I'm not really sure what you're trying to cover at the moment, since the vocal definitely has it's emphasis placed on 00:48:600 - in the song. Fixed in an other way

  8. 00:49:482 (1,3) - Try keeping overlaps consistent and aesthetic if you're going to use them. Things like this look completely unintentional and doesn't improve the map in any way, or am I wrong? Consider at least taking care of easily visible ones like this. Even ones which overlap more are aesthetically better than the ones that only overlap a little, because it'd look like it was actually meant to be like that. Moved down, i guess this overlap isn't intentional

  9. 00:53:629 - You seem to have missed the stream between 00:53:541 (5,1) - . Why not add it like you did for ok

  10. 01:13:747 (2,3,4) - Again, this type of rhythm is likely to be hard to read. 01:13:923 - doesn't even have an impact, yet 01:14:012 - does, but it's not clickable. Why not just do this? Changed into another way

  11. 01:27:688 - I'd place a spinner starting from here and ending at 01:28:835 - . It seems like all other difficulties have spinners here too. Rejected: not importantly necessary

  • Hitsounds
  1. 00:00:071 - This section sounds really strange because of the way claps are skipped. I realize you're following vocals and whatnot, but if that prevents the claps from keeping a consistent rhythm, I'd recommend you simply remove the claps and keep silence hitsound-wise like the other difficulties have done it. Rejected: mappers can ignore a clap if they wish to

  2. 00:33:247 (3) - Some hitsounds seem really off, for example the claps. Claps are usually placed on offbeats, not onbeats. Consider removing the clap here and maybe adding some drum-kick hitsound. Also I can barely hear the claps, maybe you should try a different hitsound and check all your hitsounding again. Removed instead

  3. Refer to the hitsounds on Pentori's Insane for a good example.

Good luck!

Scarlet_Wolf

Scarlet_Wolf wrote:

Ky's Insane
00:00:776 (3,1) - These slider shapes don't really do with the song in the beginning Rejected: not necessary to change
00:19:306 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream looks like it was converted from an elbow slider and doesn't look right. Try making it a smooth arc Rejected: both flows fine, and again, not necessary to change
00:23:541 (3) - I think there might be a blanket issue here Rejected: blanket is fine for me, according to the approch circle
00:36:247 (5) - This doesn't fit with the music Fixed on previous mod
00:47:188 (3) - This slider is just pretty random Rejected: same reason i mentioned on previous mod
00:49:835 (2,3,4) - I feel like it might flow better if the DS was the same for these notes Rejected: The flow is smooth enough, even there's a speed change on the flow

I hope this helps! ^3^
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Freyja Wion

Freyja Wion wrote:

from my queue

[Ky's Insane]
  1. after this 00:36:247 (5) - need something to the "ki-" of the vocal, sounds weird star the next combo in the "-mino..." Rejected: fixed on previous mod to follow the stream
  2. 01:22:835 (4) - the piano is the main right here, you ignored the piano at the start with this slider but you followed it perfectly with the next ones, it really sound bad, try something else :? Changed

    nothing more than that
    i really loved your diff (my fav of this set)
    Good work!!

pkhg

pkhg wrote:

[Ky's Insane]
  1. 00:21:776 (3,4) - circles instead pls Rejected: this follows the music transition and stream
  2. 00:36:247 (5) - why is this 1/8? and why are you stopping the stream this sudden when there are still 1/4 beats to map Fixed on previous mod
  3. 00:47:012 (2,3,1,2) - all of these are overmapped. also why is 00:47:188 (3) - 1/6? Since so many people talking about this, changed
    not a big fan of extended sliders
gl

Thanks for the mod, sry for late

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Juiceys
Easy:
00:14:188 (1) - This is too long compared to the others
00:50:894 (1,3) - Maybe tilt this so its facing northwest to flow better
01:13:482 (1,2) - Crazy flow break here

IIRC for normal diff
22:12 Juiceys: Yo
22:13 Juiceys: modding your map rn
22:13 *Juiceys is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/964312 Sangatsu no Phantasia - Hajimari no Sokudo [Normal]]
22:13 Juiceys: just wanted to say i like how you prevented the normal diff from looking like a crowded mess
22:13 B r o k e n: k
22:14 B r o k e n: ty XD
22:14 B r o k e n: any suggestion to bring start diff to 2*+ would be helpful
22:14 B r o k e n: star*
22:15 Juiceys: I think a DS increase would compliment this difficulty nicely tbh
22:15 Juiceys: it doesnt look bad now but i think it has potential for a higher DS
22:16 B r o k e n: i used .8 .10 looks a big too big, maybe ill go with .9 then
22:16 B r o k e n: a bit*
22:16 Juiceys: yeah sounds nice
22:17 Juiceys: it would help01:21:953 (1) - this end part visually
22:17 Juiceys: because it looks cluttered atm
22:21 B r o k e n: I'll make adjustment to the notes, turn 01:22:835 (2) - into a single note and a slider instead of a return, not so sure how to make it look nice with the return slider there
22:22 Juiceys: I think it looks fine as a reverse tbh
22:22 Juiceys: 01:25:129 (2,4) -
22:22 Juiceys: I think these two could be adjusted though
22:25 Juiceys: I also think things like 00:50:894 (1,2,3,4) - These give newer players no breathing room in terms of playing
22:25 Juiceys: its kind of cramped
22:25 B r o k e n: ill remove note 4 and turn slider 3 into a 1/1 then
22:26 Juiceys: I think you could turn 1 and 2 into a full beat and keep 3 and 4
22:26 Juiceys: because 00:51:953 (4) - has a strong beat i feel should be clicked on
22:28 Juiceys: and add a circle between ( 3 ) and the new slider
22:29 Juiceys: And i think thats about it
22:30 B r o k e n: ok, now just gotta fix to .9 ds
22:30 Juiceys: Alright cool
22:30 Juiceys: Ill savelog this and post it so you can look backon it if you want
22:30 Juiceys: good luck! i like the map

Normal:
00:18:776 (2,2) - The overlap here is ehh move either of them just a little bit to remove it
00:25:129 (4,2) - Blanket?
00:39:247 (3,1) - Lower the right side of ( 1 ) a bit to blanket better
(btw sorry for this nazi mod LOL)
00:52:306 (1,3) - Could possible blanket ( 3 ) with the head of ( 1 )
01:12:776 (3,1) - Blanket
01:20:541 (1) - Could make this a slider that last a full beat that starts at the previous white tick
Topic Starter
B r o k e n

Juiceys wrote:

Easy:
00:14:188 (1) - This is too long compared to the others this is just a 1/1 slider I don't see any problem of it being too long xD
00:50:894 (1,3) - Maybe tilt this so its facing northwest to flow better adjusted
01:13:482 (1,2) - Crazy flow break here adjusted notes

IIRC for normal diff
22:12 Juiceys: Yo
22:13 Juiceys: modding your map rn
22:13 *Juiceys is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/964312 Sangatsu no Phantasia - Hajimari no Sokudo [Normal]]
22:13 Juiceys: just wanted to say i like how you prevented the normal diff from looking like a crowded mess
22:13 B r o k e n: k
22:14 B r o k e n: ty XD
22:14 B r o k e n: any suggestion to bring start diff to 2*+ would be helpful
22:14 B r o k e n: star*
22:15 Juiceys: I think a DS increase would compliment this difficulty nicely tbh
22:15 Juiceys: it doesnt look bad now but i think it has potential for a higher DS
22:16 B r o k e n: i used .8 .10 looks a big too big, maybe ill go with .9 then
22:16 B r o k e n: a bit*
22:16 Juiceys: yeah sounds nice
22:17 Juiceys: it would help01:21:953 (1) - this end part visually curved the slider and the .9 helped improved looks here a bit
22:17 Juiceys: because it looks cluttered atm
22:21 B r o k e n: I'll make adjustment to the notes, turn 01:22:835 (2) - into a single note and a slider instead of a return, not so sure how to make it look nice with the return slider there didnt do this adjustment, the return slider is a lot better
22:22 Juiceys: I think it looks fine as a reverse tbh
22:22 Juiceys: 01:25:129 (2,4) - adjusted slider 4 and notes afterwards, left 2 as it is
22:22 Juiceys: I think these two could be adjusted though
22:25 Juiceys: I also think things like 00:50:894 (1,2,3,4) - These give newer players no breathing room in terms of playing adjusted, hopefully its fine
22:25 Juiceys: its kind of cramped
22:25 B r o k e n: ill remove note 4 and turn slider 3 into a 1/1 then
22:26 Juiceys: I think you could turn 1 and 2 into a full beat and keep 3 and 4
22:26 Juiceys: because 00:51:953 (4) - has a strong beat i feel should be clicked on
22:28 Juiceys: and add a circle between ( 3 ) and the new slider
22:29 Juiceys: And i think thats about it
22:30 B r o k e n: ok, now just gotta fix to .9 ds
22:30 Juiceys: Alright cool
22:30 Juiceys: Ill savelog this and post it so you can look backon it if you want
22:30 Juiceys: good luck! i like the map

Normal:
00:18:776 (2,2) - The overlap here is ehh move either of them just a little bit to remove it overlap fixed after .9DS
00:25:129 (4,2) - Blanket? looks fine now
00:39:247 (3,1) - Lower the right side of ( 1 ) a bit to blanket better looks fine now
(btw sorry for this nazi mod LOL)
00:52:306 (1,3) - Could possible blanket ( 3 ) with the head of ( 1 ) no change, slider 3 goes too high after .9DS
01:12:776 (3,1) - Blanket might as well
01:20:541 (1) - Could make this a slider that last a full beat that starts at the previous white tickno change, i rather have this empty honestly, but moders kept suggesting a note here
thank you very much for the mod, really appreciate it :D
My Angel RangE
Hello~

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00:09:953 (1,2) - same sound 00:10:659 (3,4) . but different DS
00:13:306 (3) - stack look for good
00:14:894 (5,6,1) - over lap, interval very narrow
00:18:423 (1) - this, 00:18:070 (4) - this head with be together (?)
00:48:953 (4,5) - well.. Ds..?

Other difficulty l don't look error

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