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Dilectus

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2016-04-30T11:53:54+00:00

Eos forever <3

13:21 flawful: EOS M4M? LOL
13:22 DavidEd: LOL
13:22 DavidEd: youre making one too? xD
13:22 flawful: I posted my request earlier xd
13:22 *flawful is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/963229 ginkiha - EOS]
13:22 DavidEd: woow thats funny xD
13:22 flawful: wanna M4M? <3
13:22 DavidEd: akitoshi traitor
13:23 flawful: I agree!
13:23 flawful: :^)
13:23 flawful: I asked him to make me an easy diff, so I'm to blame :(
13:23 DavidEd: dont know if m4m would be a good idea though ;_;
13:23 DavidEd: or wait
13:24 flawful: any reason in -particular?
13:24 flawful: coz EOS m4m sounds coool :3
13:24 DavidEd: cause i feel like were gonna force our own maps on each others xD
13:24 flawful: nahhh
13:25 DavidEd: i guess xD
13:25 flawful: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044633 this <3]
13:26 DavidEd: you can mod the gd diffs ;P
13:26 DavidEd: my insane dont need many more mods
13:28 *flawful is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/942814 ginkiha - EOS [Insane]]
13:29 flawful: I can see why
13:29 DavidEd: ;)
13:29 flawful: you're map <3
13:30 flawful: your*
13:31 flawful: damn
13:31 flawful: I need to re-map xD
13:31 *DavidEd is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/963228 ginkiha - EOS [Insane]]
13:31 flawful: do you have my version?
13:32 flawful: it's shit ;_;
13:33 DavidEd: you have better note place ment
13:34 flawful: not really ;_;
13:34 DavidEd: i like it ^^
13:34 DavidEd: there were just few things i noticed
13:34 flawful: oh and, I'll favorite your map
13:34 flawful: because EOS <3
13:35 DavidEd: its the best ^^
13:35 flawful: yes, please tell me what you noticed *^*
13:36 DavidEd: 01:40:866 (4) - you can drag out the repeat like i did in my diff
13:37 flawful: is this the start of an irc mod? xD
13:37 DavidEd: i think so xD
13:37 flawful: if it is I'm ready for it~ <3
13:38 flawful: a'ight, lez do dizzz
13:38 DavidEd: 02:04:180 (3,4) - i think you could probably replace these with something that leads up to the stream
13:39 DavidEd: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044711 something like this or something
13:39 DavidEd: i repeated those words lo
13:40 flawful: that looks awesome
13:40 DavidEd: 02:15:151 (4,5) - same
13:41 flawful: will do o7
13:43 flawful: done lol
13:43 DavidEd: 00:33:666 (3,1) - i dislike these overlaps so stack 1 on 3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044747
13:45 DavidEd: i think if you polish the entire map and fix a couple of overlaps it will look and play amazingly
13:46 DavidEd: 00:57:494 (4) - like these for example, you can stack the sliderend on 00:56:637 (2) - sliderend
13:46 flawful: yea, since one wrong overlap/blanket/DS will lead to another problem and so on~
13:46 DavidEd: stuff like that
13:47 DavidEd: oh and make sure to look at patterns that come after if you fix overlaps and such
13:48 DavidEd: so ds and blankets dont get messed up ^^
13:48 DavidEd: 01:03:666 (2) - stack it on previous 01:02:808 (7) - 
13:50 DavidEd: 01:37:437 - stream jumps dont belong in insanes ;_;
13:51 DavidEd: unless you decrease the spacing between 01:37:694 (4) - and 01:37:780 (1) - 
13:51 flawful: I'll just increase the DS on these 01:37:437 (1,2,3,4) -
13:51 DavidEd: other than that i have no other comment ^^
13:52 DavidEd: or that
13:52 flawful: yea xd
13:52 flawful: just post our chatlog in the forum for free kds <3
13:52 DavidEd: how do i save logs xD
13:52 DavidEd: been so long since i ever did irc
13:52 flawful: ./savelog

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-04-30T12:06:44+00:00

DavidEd wrote:

Eos forever <3

IRC

13:21 flawful: EOS M4M? LOL
13:22 DavidEd: LOL
13:22 DavidEd: youre making one too? xD
13:22 flawful: I posted my request earlier xd
13:22 *flawful is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/963229 ginkiha - EOS]
13:22 DavidEd: woow thats funny xD
13:22 flawful: wanna M4M? <3
13:22 DavidEd: akitoshi traitor
13:23 flawful: I agree!
13:23 flawful: :^)
13:23 flawful: I asked him to make me an easy diff, so I'm to blame :(
13:23 DavidEd: dont know if m4m would be a good idea though ;_;
13:23 DavidEd: or wait
13:24 flawful: any reason in -particular?
13:24 flawful: coz EOS m4m sounds coool :3
13:24 DavidEd: cause i feel like were gonna force our own maps on each others xD
13:24 flawful: nahhh
13:25 DavidEd: i guess xD
13:25 flawful: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044633 this <3]
13:26 DavidEd: you can mod the gd diffs ;P
13:26 DavidEd: my insane dont need many more mods
13:28 *flawful is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/942814 ginkiha - EOS [Insane]]
13:29 flawful: I can see why
13:29 DavidEd: ;)
13:29 flawful: you're map <3
13:30 flawful: your*
13:31 flawful: damn
13:31 flawful: I need to re-map xD
13:31 *DavidEd is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/963228 ginkiha - EOS [Insane]]
13:31 flawful: do you have my version?
13:32 flawful: it's shit ;_;
13:33 DavidEd: you have better note place ment
13:34 flawful: not really ;_;
13:34 DavidEd: i like it ^^
13:34 DavidEd: there were just few things i noticed
13:34 flawful: oh and, I'll favorite your map
13:34 flawful: because EOS <3
13:35 DavidEd: its the best ^^
13:35 flawful: yes, please tell me what you noticed *^*
13:36 DavidEd: 01:40:866 (4) - you can drag out the repeat like i did in my diff
13:37 flawful: is this the start of an irc mod? xD
13:37 DavidEd: i think so xD
13:37 flawful: if it is I'm ready for it~ <3
13:38 flawful: a'ight, lez do dizzz
13:38 DavidEd: 02:04:180 (3,4) - i think you could probably replace these with something that leads up to the stream
13:39 DavidEd: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044711 something like this or something
13:39 DavidEd: i repeated those words lo
13:40 flawful: that looks awesome
13:40 DavidEd: 02:15:151 (4,5) - same
13:41 flawful: will do o7
13:43 flawful: done lol
13:43 DavidEd: 00:33:666 (3,1) - i dislike these overlaps so stack 1 on 3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044747
13:45 DavidEd: i think if you polish the entire map and fix a couple of overlaps it will look and play amazingly
13:46 DavidEd: 00:57:494 (4) - like these for example, you can stack the sliderend on 00:56:637 (2) - sliderend
13:46 flawful: yea, since one wrong overlap/blanket/DS will lead to another problem and so on~
13:46 DavidEd: stuff like that
13:47 DavidEd: oh and make sure to look at patterns that come after if you fix overlaps and such
13:48 DavidEd: so ds and blankets dont get messed up ^^
13:48 DavidEd: 01:03:666 (2) - stack it on previous 01:02:808 (7) - 
13:50 DavidEd: 01:37:437 - stream jumps dont belong in insanes ;_;
13:51 DavidEd: unless you decrease the spacing between 01:37:694 (4) - and 01:37:780 (1) - 
13:51 flawful: I'll just increase the DS on these 01:37:437 (1,2,3,4) -
13:51 DavidEd: other than that i have no other comment ^^
13:52 DavidEd: or that
13:52 flawful: yea xd
13:52 flawful: just post our chatlog in the forum for free kds <3
13:52 DavidEd: how do i save logs xD
13:52 DavidEd: been so long since i ever did irc
13:52 flawful: ./savelog

Forever & ever <3

TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

TyrantsEye2014 2016-05-01T10:38:21+00:00

tagalog mod hindi po ako marunong mag ingles D:

[Akitoshi's Easy]

lol no problems found here
sasuga

[Normal]

00:01:608 (2) - wag mo na lagyan ng reverse arrow dito
00:04:351 (2,3) - lipat mo sa hindi matatakpan ng 00:02:808 (1)
00:16:866 (1) - ganun din dito
00:47:037 (1) - ^ rotate mo nalang then adjust mo nalang yung ibang notes
00:53:551 (1) - taggalin mo po yung NC
00:56:980 (4,5) - crtl+G tapos crtl+G ulit sa 00:56:980 (4) tapos snap mo nalang yung 00:57:665 (5)
01:16:008 (2) - taggalin mo yung slider tapos lagay ka nalang ng circle sa white tick
02:23:380 (7) - remove NC
02:07:608 (1) - ^
02:15:837 (2) - blanket

[Hard]

00:05:551 (1) - nani
00:08:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - aaaaaaaaa ang hirap neto para sa mga average players, lagay ka nalang ng slider
00:19:094 (9,1,2) - woag eto din
00:32:294 (7) - remove NC
00:58:008 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - eto din ang hirap. pwede sana to pag insane or extra
01:03:151 (1,2,1,2) - ^
01:07:266 (4) - remove NC
01:30:408 (7) - lol tanggalin mo yung 1/6
01:33:666 (1) - remove NC
01:50:808 (3) - ^
01:53:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - wtf
01:55:780 (1) - remove NC
02:04:866 (1) - fix blanket
02:05:551 (2) - masyadong malapit
02:08:123 (2,3,4,5,6) - wtf
02:09:666 (1,2,1,2) - slider nalang lagay mo or gawa ka ng masmadaling pattern
02:11:723 (1,2,1,2) - ^
02:13:094 (3,4) - remove NC
02:14:808 (1) - ^
02:24:066 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - wtf is dis

[abanes16's Insane]

00:04:351 (1) - fix blanket
00:05:551 (1) - ^
00:06:580 (3) - ^
00:16:523 (1) - ^
00:57:323 (4,5) - ipaglayo ito ng konti
01:05:208 (7) - remove nc
01:08:637 (1) - fix blanket
01:12:066 (1) - remove nc
01:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - lipat mo sa tabi ng 01:37:780 (4)
02:11:380 (9) - lipat mo sa x:168|y:188 tapos yung 02:11:551 (10) - stack mo sa 02:11:037 (7) -

[Insane]

00:16:866 (2) - move sa x:204|y:208
00:43:094 (2,3) - remove NC
00:43:094 (2,3) - lipat mo sa x:272|y:148
01:03:837 (3) - remove NC
01:08:980 (3) - ^
00:56:294 (1,2) - masmaganda siguro kong streams dito

goodluck :^)

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-01T14:57:26+00:00

Misaka 10032 wrote:
tagalog mod hindi po ako marunong mag ingles D:

[Normal]

00:01:608 (2) - wag mo na lagyan ng reverse arrow dito there's sound so ye, no change
00:04:351 (2,3) - lipat mo sa hindi matatakpan ng 00:02:808 (1) le overlap is fine
00:16:866 (1) - ganun din dito sem
00:47:037 (1) - ^ rotate mo nalang then adjust mo nalang yung ibang notes ^
00:53:551 (1) - taggalin mo po yung NC
00:56:980 (4,5) - crtl+G tapos crtl+G ulit sa 00:56:980 (4) tapos snap mo nalang yung 00:57:665 (5) I don't see the reason for this tbh
01:16:008 (2) - taggalin mo yung slider tapos lagay ka nalang ng circle sa white tick vocals
02:23:380 (7) - remove NC
02:07:608 (1) - ^
02:15:837 (2) - blanket
[Hard]

00:05:551 (1) - nani Chimes
00:08:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - aaaaaaaaa ang hirap neto para sa mga average players, lagay ka nalang ng slider aaaaaaa I'll be keeping this :3
00:19:094 (9,1,2) - woag eto din no change la
00:32:294 (7) - remove NC
00:58:008 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - eto din ang hirap. pwede sana to pag insane or extra Let them have a challenge plox, 3.7* isn't your everyday hard diff anyway
01:03:151 (1,2,1,2) - ^ I'm sorry, but this is part of the style, if I remove this and change it with a mediocre pattern. There would be nothing special about this difficulty
01:07:266 (4) - remove NC mumbled words start here, also it wouldn't be consistent if I removed nc here
01:30:408 (7) - lol tanggalin mo yung 1/6 bakit..?
01:33:666 (1) - remove NC new scale so no
01:50:808 (3) - ^ moved le nc here 01:51:151 (1) - to balance le nc
01:53:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - wtf that's style yo
01:55:780 (1) - remove NC "Onn and onn and oonnnn" so yea, I wont
02:04:866 (1) - fix blanket
02:05:551 (2) - masyadong malapit nah
02:08:123 (2,3,4,5,6) - wtf I'm not making this diff liek le usual 2.9-3.3* so ye
02:09:666 (1,2,1,2) - slider nalang lagay mo or gawa ka ng masmadaling pattern no
02:11:723 (1,2,1,2) - ^ same
02:13:094 (3,4) - remove NC nc was used to highlight le lyrics
02:14:808 (1) - ^
02:24:066 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - wtf is dis I've stated my reasons and I'm keeping this
[Insane]

00:16:866 (2) - move sa x:204|y:208
00:43:094 (2,3) - remove NC le nc here is aesthetically pleasing aaaa
00:43:094 (2,3) - lipat mo sa x:272|y:148 nuhni
01:03:837 (3) - remove NC panget tingnan pag walang nc, it highlights le lyrics yo
01:08:980 (3) - ^ same as le previous
00:56:294 (1,2) - masmaganda siguro kong streams dito I prefer le sliders
goodluck :^)

Salamat :3

no reply = fixed

DeletedUser_6181859

DeletedUser_6181859 2016-05-01T16:32:26+00:00

Hey, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.
P.S. from #modreqs... Another mapset with EOS? Okay, i love this track.
P.P.S. A-E-U-O-A-U-EEEEEEEE-A-E-U-O

Song and beatmaps

Add "drum'n'bass", "of fighters" to Tags
What about change to "Soft"-sample mode?
Add empty (44kb) .wav file for sliderslide.wav

Akitoshi's Easy

hey again:D
00:24:751 (1) - fix sliderpoints (all red or all standart)
00:45:323 (3) - make points away from each other
00:56:294 (3) - fix sliderpoints?
01:27:837 (1) - align (like in %image%)

01:33:323 (1) - end in 01:34:351 ?
01:34:694 (2) - end in 01:35:723 ?
02:00:751 (1) - make like in %image%?

02:03:151 (4) - clap
02:07:608 (3) - normal tight elbow?
02:18:580 (3) - make like in %image%?

Normal

00:02:808 (1,2,3) - don't overlap
00:12:751 (3,1) - align stack
01:01:780 (4,5,6,7,1) - overdose objects
01:05:723 (6,1) - change to slider?
01:22:351 (1) - remove?
01:38:808 (1) - end in 01:40:866
02:00:751 (1,2,3) - change to slider
02:14:808 (8) - set nc here and remove nc in 02:15:151 (1)

Hard

00:05:551 (1) - make 1 repeat instead 3
00:08:980 (5,6) - strange stack
00:10:351 (5,6) - make reversed sliders like in 00:32:294 (7,8)
00:13:780 (1,2,3) - stack
00:19:094 (9,1,2,3) - i think stack isn't good idea
00:20:980 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:42:580 (1,2,3) - remake this pattern
00:47:380 (3,4,5,6,1) - i think stack isn't good idea
01:03:837 (1,2) - don't overlap
01:10:866 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - i think stack isn't good idea
01:36:408 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:37:437 (7) - nc
01:48:408 (1,2,3) - remake this pattern
02:17:894 (2) - Ctrl+G

I guess, you need Advanced~3*
Good luck!
{end of mod}

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-05-01T17:22:14+00:00

100bit wrote:
Akitoshi's Easy
hey again:D
00:24:751 (1) - fix sliderpoints (all red or all standart) intentional
00:45:323 (3) - make points away from each other it's fine dud
00:56:294 (3) - fix sliderpoints? ok
01:27:837 (1) - align (like in %image%) nah, it's Intended

01:33:323 (1) - end in 01:34:351 ? this two sliders emphasized the drums
01:34:694 (2) - end in 01:35:723 ?
02:00:751 (1) - make like in %image%? current one funnier to see

02:03:151 (4) - clap no, I bet it's cymbals
02:07:608 (3) - normal tight elbow? nej
02:18:580 (3) - make like in %image%? I exactly set the red curving point on 02:18:923 - and 02:19:266 - to emphasize the main rhythm.

Thank you for the check!

v

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: eos.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54841
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 32980,87837
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8000009

[Metadata]
Title:EOS
TitleUnicode:EOS
Artist:ginkiha
ArtistUnicode:ginkiha
Creator:flawful
Version:Akitoshi's Easy
Source:BMS
Tags:Akitoshi Dawn Chill DnB abanes16
BeatmapID:963916
BeatmapSetID:448829

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-01T17:37:40+00:00

100bit wrote:
Hey, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate. No problem m8
P.S. from #modreqs... Another mapset with EOS? Okay, i love this track. <3
P.P.S. A-E-U-O-A-U-EEEEEEEE-A-E-U-O I SHOULD ADD THIS TO THE TAGS--//slapped
Song and beatmaps
Add "drum'n'bass", "of fighters" to Tags
What about change to "Soft"-sample mode?
Add empty (44kb) .wav file for sliderslide.wav will do!

Normal
00:02:808 (1,2,3) - don't overlap Remapped
00:12:751 (3,1) - align stack
01:01:780 (4,5,6,7,1) - overdose objects Remapped
01:05:723 (6,1) - change to slider?
01:22:351 (1) - remove? nah
01:38:808 (1) - end in 01:40:866 I ended on the start of the drum things
02:00:751 (1,2,3) - change to slider
02:14:808 (8) - set nc here and remove nc in 02:15:151 (1)
Hard
00:05:551 (1) - make 1 repeat instead 3 hmm?
00:08:980 (5,6) - strange stack
00:10:351 (5,6) - make reversed sliders like in 00:32:294 (7,8) ruins the flow, I'll keep it for now
00:13:780 (1,2,3) - stack
00:19:094 (9,1,2,3) - i think stack isn't good idea
00:20:980 (2,3,4,5) - ^ this plays good tbh
00:42:580 (1,2,3) - remake this pattern
00:47:380 (3,4,5,6,1) - i think stack isn't good idea I'm keeping it
01:03:837 (1,2) - don't overlap
01:10:866 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - i think stack isn't good idea Remapped
01:36:408 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:37:437 (7) - nc
01:48:408 (1,2,3) - remake this pattern nothing seems wrong with this tho?
02:17:894 (2) - Ctrl+G
I guess, you need Advanced~3*
Good luck!
{end of mod}

Thanks for the mod

no reply = fixed

just click

245 posts

Joined May 2014

just click 2016-05-01T19:05:33+00:00

Hey, M4M!

Akitoshi's Easy

00:04:351 (2) - You could make this slider the same as 00:01:608 (2) since they have the same sound.

00:26:123 (3) - Curve towards the tail of this looks slight uneven if you look closely, making it a weird blanket with the next note.

01:02:637 (1,2) - End these on the white ticks? They sound really off the way they are right now compared to the 2 sliders before these.

Nothing really much I can find.

abanes16's Insane

00:01:094 (3) - You could make this slider the same shape as the sliders before it, the shape seems really random and doesn't really fit in.

00:02:294 (3,4,1) - You can form a better blanket with these.

00:05:551 (1) - Curve this more for a better blanket.

00:07:094 (4,6) - You can blanket these.

00:08:294 (5) - Use the same DS for this slider in the stream, it seems very random.

00:10:523 - I hear the stream start here.

00:15:494 (3,6) - You could blanket these, but it might ruin the star pattern you have here, so possibly adjust it if you make this change.

00:18:580 (3,4,5,6) - Star pattern here looks a little uneven, I would fix it up a bit.

00:22:523 (2,4) - Blanket is slightly uneven.

00:26:123 (1) - You could make this similar to 00:24:066 (8) since the song allows it.

00:28:523 (6) - Curve to form a blanket with (3)?

00:32:294 (1,2,3,4) - This section of the stream seems jagged, smooth the stream out more here? You could also try the Convert Slider to Stream feature in "Compose" at the top where File, Edit, View, etc. all are. Try it out a bit so you understand how to use it though.

00:37:094 (1) - Curve slightly more so you can form a blanket with the (4).

00:38:466 - ^

00:43:951 (1) - You could curve this better so that it the curve is very similar to the slider below it if you know what I mean. It's slightly uneven.

00:47:208 (2) - Space this more evenly between the notes.

00:54:923 (1) - Adjust this slightly so that it is even with the stream. It looks uneven.

00:55:608 (3,4) - You could form a better blanket with these.

00:56:294 (1,2,3) - Make sure these all have the same DS, the (3) is further away compared to the other two.

01:00:751 (4) - You could stack this better with the (8).

01:05:037 (6) - This plays better stacked on the (2) because the sudden increase in spacing is random.

01:38:808 (9) - I don't think you need this note, the stream ends at the (8). You could remove this note and start the spinner where this note is instead.

01:42:923 (5,6) - You could make these both the same curvature.

01:59:037 (4,5) - ^

02:04:866 (5,6,7,8) - I would straighten this stream out, it looks weird how it right now.

Insane

00:05:551 (1) - I see why you added this reverse slider, but it just seems very random. I think it would be better if you stuck to the beat of the song still.

00:06:066 (2,3,4) - Make these all the same shape to go with the song?

00:10:523 (2) - Kind of a random kickslider, I would just make this a whole stream.

00:19:437 (2,5) - Blanket these possibly?

00:26:123 (1) - I think these sliders would play better if you made them similar to 00:24:751 (1)

00:42:751 (1,1,1) - Not sure how I feel about this, I think it's better to go with the beat. You could ask others on their opinion though.

01:00:237 (5) - This slider doesn't really feel natural because it skips over the large white tick, which is the main beat. Maybe just use the rhythm you currently have?

01:01:608 (1) - I don't really hear the vocals indicating the kick slider yet, it starts at the (2).

01:04:266 - Stream could start here.

01:44:294 (1) - Curve to form a blanket with the (2)?

01:56:637 (1,2) - Kind of the same thing with these sliders, it plays better if you go by the same beat you have previously. If you want, you could just shorten them, but I don't think it should be timed for the whole thing since it skips over beats.

02:03:408 - Stream could go here still.

02:19:780 (9) - Bad polarity with this slider. It doesn't sound right to start on a red tick and end on a blue one.

02:20:980 (3) - Blanket with the previous slider?

Cool mapset overall. Some neatness could be improved still along with some of the rhythm. Good luck!
Here's a star.

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-01T19:47:55+00:00

Breezy wrote:
Hey, M4M!

Insane

00:05:551 (1) - I see why you added this reverse slider, but it just seems very random. I think it would be better if you stuck to the beat of the song still. I'm keeping this

00:06:066 (2,3,4) - Make these all the same shape to go with the song?

00:10:523 (2) - Kind of a random kickslider, I would just make this a whole stream. Keeping this too!

00:19:437 (2,5) - Blanket these possibly?

00:26:123 (1) - I think these sliders would play better if you made them similar to 00:24:751 (1) They highlight the flute-ish instrument in the background

00:42:751 (1,1,1) - Not sure how I feel about this, I think it's better to go with the beat. You could ask others on their opinion though. those are for the vibrating sounds in the background

01:00:237 (5) - This slider doesn't really feel natural because it skips over the large white tick, which is the main beat. Maybe just use the rhythm you currently have? I don't really see others complaining about this yet, I'm keeping it for now

01:01:608 (1) - I don't really hear the vocals indicating the kick slider yet, it starts at the (2). same ^

01:04:266 - Stream could start here. I wanna highlight the random voice in the song so I wont change anything

01:44:294 (1) - Curve to form a blanket with the (2)?

01:56:637 (1,2) - Kind of the same thing with these sliders, it plays better if you go by the same beat you have previously. If you want, you could just shorten them, but I don't think it should be timed for the whole thing since it skips over beats. I'll wait for more complaints about these sliders before I do any remapping on that part

02:03:408 - Stream could go here still.

02:19:780 (9) - Bad polarity with this slider. It doesn't sound right to start on a red tick and end on a blue one. changed to 1/2 slider then replaced them

02:20:980 (3) - Blanket with the previous slider?

Cool mapset overall. Some neatness could be improved still along with some of the rhythm. Good luck!
Here's a star.

Thank you for the mod and the star!

no reply = fixed

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-05-02T01:21:57+00:00

Misaka 10032 wrote:
tagalog mod hindi po ako marunong mag ingles D:

[abanes16's Insane]

00:04:351 (1) - fix blanket
00:05:551 (1) - ^
00:06:580 (3) - ^
00:16:523 (1) - ^
00:57:323 (4,5) - ipaglayo ito ng konti
01:05:208 (7) - remove nc
01:08:637 (1) - fix blanket
01:12:066 (1) - remove nc
01:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - lipat mo sa tabi ng 01:37:780 (4)
02:11:380 (9) - lipat mo sa x:168|y:188 tapos yung 02:11:551 (10) - stack mo sa 02:11:037 (7) -

goodluck :^)

Maraming salamat sa iyong binigay na tulong dahil sa pag ayos ng aming mapa
walang tugon=ayos

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-05-02T01:56:18+00:00

[quote="Breezy"]Hey, M4M!

abanes16's Insane

00:01:094 (3) - You could make this slider the same shape as the sliders before it, the shape seems really random and doesn't really fit in. ok

00:02:294 (3,4,1) - You can form a better blanket with these.

00:05:551 (1) - Curve this more for a better blanket. hai

00:07:094 (4,6) - You can blanket these. ok

00:08:294 (5) - Use the same DS for this slider in the stream, it seems very random. I'm no using ds tho

00:10:523 - I hear the stream start here.Nah

00:15:494 (3,6) - You could blanket these, but it might ruin the star pattern you have here, so possibly adjust it if you make this change. ok

00:18:580 (3,4,5,6) - Star pattern here looks a little uneven, I would fix it up a bit. ok

00:22:523 (2,4) - Blanket is slightly uneven.ok

00:26:123 (1) - You could make this similar to 00:24:066 (8) since the song allows it. Nah

00:28:523 (6) - Curve to form a blanket with (3)? ok

00:32:294 (1,2,3,4) - This section of the stream seems jagged, smooth the stream out more here? You could also try the Convert Slider to Stream feature in "Compose" at the top where File, Edit, View, etc. all are. Try it out a bit so you understand how to use it though.lol akitoshi sensei alreadt teach me that

00:37:094 (1) - Curve slightly more so you can form a blanket with the (4). nope, the form of the slider will change and it is already stacked at (3)

00:38:466 - ^ok

00:43:951 (1) - You could curve this better so that it the curve is very similar to the slider below it if you know what I mean. It's slightly uneven.ok

00:47:208 (2) - Space this more evenly between the notes.ok

00:54:923 (1) - Adjust this slightly so that it is even with the stream. It looks uneven.ok

00:55:608 (3,4) - You could form a better blanket with these.ok

00:56:294 (1,2,3) - Make sure these all have the same DS, the (3) is further away compared to the other two.ok

01:00:751 (4) - You could stack this better with the (8). ok

01:05:037 (6) - This plays better stacked on the (2) because the sudden increase in spacing is random.ok

01:38:808 (9) - I don't think you need this note, the stream ends at the (8). You could remove this note and start the spinner where this note is instead.Nope

01:42:923 (5,6) - You could make these both the same curvature.ok

01:59:037 (4,5) - ^

02:04:866 (5,6,7,8) - I would straighten this stream out, it looks weird how it right now.ok

Thanks for teh mod

pepe

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Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-05-02T04:05:07+00:00

Breezy wrote:
Akitoshi's Easy

00:04:351 (2) - You could make this slider the same as 00:01:608 (2) since they have the same sound. they are already same beat slider

00:26:123 (3) - Curve towards the tail of this looks slight uneven if you look closely, making it a weird blanket with the next note. maybe fixed, still uneven sliderpoints due to polishing the blanket tho

01:02:637 (1,2) - End these on the white ticks? They sound really off the way they are right now compared to the 2 sliders before these. wat. They already ended on white ticks lol

Nothing really much I can find.

Thanks~

432

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: eos.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54841
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 32980,87837
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8000009

[Metadata]
Title:EOS
TitleUnicode:EOS
Artist:ginkiha
ArtistUnicode:ginkiha
Creator:flawful
Version:Akitoshi's Easy
Source:BMS
Tags:Akitoshi Dawn Chill DnB abanes16 drum'n'bass of fighters
BeatmapID:963916
BeatmapSetID:448829

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Snow-and-sunset.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,77065,86397
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2016-05-02T08:55:28+00:00

Hi~

Insane :

00:10:694 (1) - remove nc
00:11:380 (1) - ^
00:25:780 (5,1) - not stacked properly?
01:08:980 (1) - remove nc
01:40:694 (3) - move to 298,289
02:01:780 (1) - remove nc
02:14:637 (2) - move left to x:85
02:20:294 (1) - remove nc

abanes16's Insane :

00:07:780 (6) - move to 107,286
00:16:523 (1) - make is bit more curved?
00:49:437 - remove finish
01:30:580 - add finish
01:36:066 (5) - ^
01:36:751 - ^^
02:05:723 (3) - remove clap
02:11:723 - remove finish
02:16:694 - 02:17:037 - remove claps and add clap to 02:16:866 (3) - @~@

Hard :

Decrease OD

Rest is up to u -w-

Good Luck~

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-02T10:03:17+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
Hi~

Insane :
00:10:694 (1) - remove nc
00:11:380 (1) - ^
00:25:780 (5,1) - not stacked properly?
01:08:980 (1) - remove nc
01:40:694 (3) - move to 298,289
02:01:780 (1) - remove nc
02:14:637 (2) - move left to x:85
02:20:294 (1) - remove nc
Hard :
Decrease OD
Rest is up to u -w-

Good Luck~

Followed every suggestion~ = w=)
Thanks for modding!

No reply = Fixed

Frozen Child

121 posts

Joined September 2011

Frozen Child 2016-05-02T13:59:21+00:00

Abanes16's Insane
01:16:437 - note?
01:40:866 - add a timing sec ( volume to 30~40% )
02:25:008 - note?

insane
00:05:551 (1) - change the sampleset to soft
02:25:008 - note?

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-05-02T15:06:08+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
Hi~

abanes16's Insane :
00:07:780 (6) - move to 107,286ok
00:16:523 (1) - make is bit more curved? ok
00:49:437 - remove finish ok
01:30:580 - add finishok
01:36:066 (5) - ^ok
01:36:751 - ^^ok
02:05:723 (3) - remove clap no
02:11:723 - remove finish ok
02:16:694 - 02:17:037 - remove claps and add clap to 02:16:866 (3) - @~@
ohhhh nice

Rest is up to u -w-

Good Luck~

Thank for checking my hitsounding

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-05-02T15:08:54+00:00

Abanes16's Insane
01:16:437 - note? no
01:40:866 - add a timing sec ( volume to 30~40% )ok
02:25:008 - note? no

Thanks for checking

updeto des

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: eos.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54841
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 21327,100184
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.600001

[Metadata]
Title:EOS
TitleUnicode:EOS
Artist:ginkiha
ArtistUnicode:ginkiha
Creator:flawful
Version:abanes16's Insane
Source:BMS
Tags:Akitoshi Dawn Chill DnB abanes16
BeatmapID:964509
BeatmapSetID:448829

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Snow-and-sunset.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-02T15:39:50+00:00

Nygma wrote:
insane
00:05:551 (1) - change the sampleset to soft Not necessary
02:25:008 - note? Nah

lol, thanks for checking abanes' diff xd

Miel7

12 posts

Joined December 2015

Miel7 2016-05-02T16:45:20+00:00

Bonjour [Abahne's insane]

00:02:292 the slider you put on X:380 and Y :224

00:05:208 you put on the slider on X:320 and Y :308

00:05:551 The slider you put on X:456 and Y :304

00:06:580 The slider you put on X:228 and Y :112

00:07:094 The slider you put on X :148 and Y :240

00:19:780 Th hit circle put on X :24 and Y :168

[Insane]

00:55:951 Put on the slider on X :248 and Y :328

01:32:294 Put on the slider on X :312 and Y :176

domSaur

1,263 posts

Joined December 2013

domSaur 2016-05-02T17:22:27+00:00

ayy there

[Insane]

00:05:551 (1) - just put a 1/1 here. the 1/4 just does not fit and you've had a 1/1 on the prev beats like this so maintain consistency
00:07:094 (1) - NC
00:32:294 (1,2,3,4) - having the odd and even sliders' distance would it neater.. the spacing of 00:32:294 (1,3) - should also be the spacing of 00:32:466 (2,4) -
01:31:951 (2) - pull this up a liiiiiiitle upwards.. it should not touch 01:31:780 (1) -
01:38:123 (1) - can you also move this slightly away from the streams... this entire section is a bit too cluttered tbh
01:49:094 (1) - NC'ing this will make the 2nd line of circles might make it more neat
01:51:837 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you can think of smth cooler.. in the first verse with the music exactly like this you had 1/4s and 1/8s and now at the 2nd part where the intensity of the song can be heightened, it's downplayed to just 1/2 circles... idk man, im prolly just talking out of my ass so nvm this xd

[abanes]
00:10:694 (6) - there's no reason for this to be outside(or for it to be the only one). Put it back in the stack
01:12:066 (7) - maybe nc. the combo is unnecessarily long
01:28:180 (2,3) - blanket with each other mayb

check AImod as well.
dunno if these are of any help but eh..

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-03T01:26:37+00:00

Miel7 wrote:
Bonjour

[Insane]

00:55:951 Put on the slider on X :248 and Y :328 this doesn't look good lol

01:32:294 Put on the slider on X :312 and Y :176 It's fine as it is xd

Thank you for modding! xd

domSaur wrote:
ayy there ayyy ello = w=)/

[Insane]
[list]
[*]00:05:551 (1) - just put a 1/1 here. the 1/4 just does not fit and you've had a 1/1 on the prev beats like this so maintain consistency the 1/4 was used to put emphasis on the Chimes
[*]00:07:094 (1) - NC
[*]00:32:294 (1,2,3,4) - having the odd and even sliders' distance would it neater.. the spacing of 00:32:294 (1,3) - should also be the spacing of 00:32:466 (2,4) -
[*]01:31:951 (2) - pull this up a liiiiiiitle upwards.. it should not touch 01:31:780 (1) -
[*]01:38:123 (1) - can you also move this slightly away from the streams... this entire section is a bit too cluttered tbh changed most of the positions... I hope it looks cleaner now
[*]01:49:094 (1) - NC'ing this will make the 2nd line of circles might make it more neat
[*]01:51:837 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you can think of smth cooler.. in the first verse with the music exactly like this you had 1/4s and 1/8s and now at the 2nd part where the intensity of the song can be heightened, it's downplayed to just 1/2 circles... idk man, im prolly just talking out of my ass so nvm this xd music was falling so nah xd

dunno if these are of any help but eh..

Thanks for the mod!

no reply = fixed

Last edited by Fraye 2016-05-03T09:02:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-05-03T03:41:35+00:00

[Abahne's insane]

00:02:292 the slider you put on X:380 and Y :224 ok

00:05:208 you put on the slider on X:320 and Y :308 no

00:05:551 The slider you put on X:456 and Y :304 no

00:06:580 The slider you put on X:228 and Y :112 no

00:07:094 The slider you put on X :148 and Y :240 no

00:19:780 Th hit circle put on X :24 and Y :168 no
Thanks 4 checking

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-05-03T04:01:08+00:00

domSaur wrote:
ayy there

[abanes]
[*]00:10:694 (6) - there's no reason for this to be outside(or for it to be the only one). Put it back in the stack ok
[*]01:12:066 (7) - maybe nc. the combo is unnecessarily long ok
[*]01:28:180 (2,3) - blanket with each other mayb[/list] ok

check AImod as well.
dunno if these are of any help but eh..

labyu thanks for modding

updeto onegai

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Mode: 0
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AlienGo

23 posts

Joined March 2013

AlienGo 2016-05-03T17:17:00+00:00

Sry for being so bad >< part one of two

Insane

00:55 AlienGo: erm firstly > was thinking maybe change the slider ticks to 2?
00:55 flawful: why?
00:55 AlienGo: since you use a lot of longer sliders
00:56 flawful: not really "alot" lol
00:56 AlienGo: the ticks would sound better in half beats since the song is half beat heavy
00:56 AlienGo: just a small thing
00:56 flawful: I see
00:57 flawful: anything else?
00:57 AlienGo: 00:08:294 -
00:57 AlienGo: this jump patter
00:57 AlienGo: n
00:57 flawful: yes?
00:58 AlienGo: are you happy with thje spacing? some of it seems a bit random
00:58 AlienGo: 00:09:837 (2,3,4) -
00:58 AlienGo: like these look a bit off
00:58 flawful: I spaced according to the intensity
00:59 flawful: we'll see what others think before I make any changes lol
00:59 AlienGo: ok
00:59 flawful: since you're currently the only one to point that out
00:59 flawful: what else?
01:00 AlienGo: 00:15:151 (1,2) -
01:00 AlienGo: if youre mapping intensity
01:00 AlienGo: maybe widen this one a bit?
01:00 flawful: that's not really a part here the song goes up-beat tho xd
01:00 flawful: where*
01:01 flawful: I sense no intensification aaaaaa
01:01 AlienGo: was following the um
01:01 AlienGo: idek
01:01 AlienGo: what that sound is
01:01 AlienGo: XD
01:01 AlienGo: "whistle"
01:01 flawful: I hear no change even in the whistle :/
01:02 flawful: 00:15:837 (6) - this is where I hear variation in the song lol
01:02 flawful: from here 00:13:780 (1) - to 00:15:751 (5) - is basically the same xd
01:03 AlienGo: aight
01:03 flawful: what else?
01:03 AlienGo: 00:17:208 (3,4) - small thing, spacing to the slider before
01:04 flawful: anything you'd want me to do with that?
01:04 AlienGo: make it the same as those two notes
01:04 AlienGo: its like just a small adjustment left up
01:05 flawful: time stamp pleaaaaase <3
01:05 AlienGo: 00:16:866 (2,3) -
01:05 AlienGo: make that the same as
01:05 AlienGo: 00:17:208 (3,4) -
01:06 AlienGo: pretrty small thing sry haha
01:06 flawful: but they are the same
01:06 AlienGo: its SLIGHTLY off :3
01:06 flawful: oh wait
01:06 flawful: it's .10 OFF
01:06 flawful: HOLY HIT
01:06 AlienGo: LOL
01:07 AlienGo: 00:18:237 (2,3,4,5) -
01:07 flawful: fixed spacing danke
01:07 AlienGo: looks like 2,3,4 are spaced the same but why did you make 4,5 smaller
01:07 AlienGo: ?
01:07 AlienGo: theres no change in the map its a bit random
01:08 AlienGo: maybe mover 3 closer to the end of 2?
01:08 AlienGo: so its a pair jump?
01:08 AlienGo: if that makes sense
01:09 AlienGo: 00:17:208 (3,4,5,6) - so its kinda like this
01:09 AlienGo: OR
01:09 AlienGo: make the spacing gradually smaller over the 4 notes
01:10 flawful: I think it flows good as it is tbh
01:10 AlienGo: ok
01:11 flawful: anything else?
01:11 AlienGo: 00:20:294 (8,9) -
01:11 AlienGo: this jump i think is fine
01:12 AlienGo: but when i play it witht he next two notes
01:12 AlienGo: i always
01:12 flawful: so you want equal spacing
01:12 flawful: d o n e
01:12 AlienGo: misread it the next note as 1,3,2,4 instead of 1,2,3,4
01:14 AlienGo: i understand why you made it 1,2 at the same spot but i always misread it
01:14 AlienGo: maybe cos it overlapped with 9 so moving it may have fixed that
01:15 AlienGo: 00:25:437 (3,5) -
01:15 AlienGo: switch these around?
01:16 AlienGo: the slider seems to be pointing at 5 so i think itll flow better
01:18 flawful: seems like weird flow afterwards idk
01:18 AlienGo: 00:26:808 (2) - slider doesnt seem to be pointing anywhere, perhaps adjust the tail so the elbow and tail point to the next note or move the next note slightly left
01:19 flawful: nah
01:19 flawful: that's the point of the slider lol
01:19 AlienGo: that it doesnt flow?
01:19 AlienGo: point*
01:20 flawful: it flows
01:20 flawful: yea
01:20 AlienGo: 00:30:237 (1) -
01:20 flawful: oh gosh a pun
01:21 AlienGo: wait wrong note
01:21 AlienGo: 00:30:580 (3) -
01:21 AlienGo: i think it should be stacked with 2
01:22 flawful: that sounds like a nice idea lol
01:22 AlienGo: same with the next one XD
01:23 flawful: yea :3
01:23 AlienGo: finally something useful XD
01:23 AlienGo: 00:32:123 (3,1) -
01:23 AlienGo: this is kinda awkward to play
01:23 flawful: I spaced these farther
01:23 flawful: 00:30:751 (1,2,3) -
01:23 AlienGo: i agree
01:23 flawful: since I don't like things inappropriately touching :^)
01:23 AlienGo: since youre building some intensity

01:24 AlienGo: oh you
01:24 AlienGo: hmm just on that point
01:25 flawful: you got kds
01:25 flawful: LOL
01:25 AlienGo: consider also making 00:31:437 (2,3) - stacked? or change the spacing
01:25 flawful: anything else?
01:25 AlienGo: wait i did?
01:25 flawful: n o
01:25 AlienGo: 00:32:123 (3,1) -
01:25 flawful: it would play horrible
01:25 AlienGo: from before
01:25 flawful: n o
01:26 flawful: Im not stacking the next patterns
01:26 AlienGo: al g
01:26 AlienGo: BUT
01:26 flawful: a$$
01:26 flawful: :^)
01:26 AlienGo: did you comment on thejump to the kick slider?
01:26 AlienGo: "kinda awkward to play
01:26 AlienGo: '
01:26 AlienGo: "
01:27 flawful: ?
01:27 flawful: no one's complaining(?)
01:27 flawful: no one else*
01:28 AlienGo: pl
01:28 AlienGo: ok
01:29 flawful: continue lmao
01:30 flawful: if you're gonna say these are irrelevant 00:42:751 (1,1,1) -
01:30 flawful: lower the effect volume to 0%
01:30 AlienGo: no
01:30 AlienGo: i actually quite liked them :3
01:30 flawful: yay \o/
01:30 flawful: <3
01:31 AlienGo: but i dont think it would make sense to lower the vol to 0
01:31 AlienGo: defeats the purpose of making it like that
01:31 flawful: no
01:31 flawful: I just meant
01:31 flawful: to listen to it xd
01:31 flawful: and they're like, the only sound that stands out in that part so ye
01:32 AlienGo: eh i think its good

01:32 flawful: conitnue please xd
01:32 AlienGo: 00:44:808 (4,5,6) -
01:33 AlienGo: why the sudden spacing change from the previous notes?
01:33 flawful: maybe coz
01:33 flawful: I haven't remapped that part yet
01:33 flawful: LOL
01:33 AlienGo: oh LOL
01:33 AlienGo: so its gonna be changed?
01:34 flawful: idk
01:34 AlienGo: up to you as long as you can justufy it XD
01:34 AlienGo: 00:47:723 (5,6) -
01:35 AlienGo: how come these are stacked?
01:35 AlienGo: i mean it looks nice and plays okay
01:35 flawful: no reason
01:35 AlienGo: but a little random haaha
01:35 AlienGo: 00:49:780 (3,4,5) -
01:36 AlienGo: 3,4 not touching?
01:36 flawful: nope
01:36 flawful: that's common nowadays
01:36 AlienGo: yea
01:36 flawful: lmaoo
01:36 AlienGo: but you made them touch previously
01:36 AlienGo: idk just commenting on consistency
01:36 flawful: where
01:36 AlienGo: i guess make them all touch or all not touch
01:36 flawful: I wanna know too

01:37 flawful: l00d^
01:37 flawful: :^)
01:37 AlienGo: 00:36:066 (2,3) -
01:37 AlienGo: youu
01:37 flawful: oh I see
01:39 AlienGo: 00:52:180 (1) - from here to kiai map it more intensely?
01:39 AlienGo: with a more noticable buildup?
01:39 AlienGo: kinda feels safe and flat
01:42 flawful: crash
01:42 flawful: ;_;
01:43 flawful: craaaaaash
01:43 AlienGo:

01:43 AlienGo: 00:52:180 (1) - from here to kiai map it more intensely?
01:44 AlienGo: idk feels flat
01:45 flawful: okay
01:46 flawful: I'll remap that part now
01:46 AlienGo: 01:01:608 (1) - dunno if this needs to be a kickslider
01:46 AlienGo: and the two after silence the ends

01:46 flawful: why?
01:47 AlienGo: IMO
01:47 flawful: those sliders follow the vocals lol
01:47 AlienGo: the reason to map this as kicksliders is to match the vocals,
01:47 flawful: yes
01:47 flawful: that's what I said xd
01:48 AlienGo: however the vocals arent exactly saying syllables on the end parts of the sliders
01:49 AlienGo: so in the end the slider follows how it is sung but the hitsound isnt necessary
01:51 flawful: I'll lessen the volume then
01:51 AlienGo: that should be enough

01:51 flawful: but I honestly don't see the problem here lol
01:52 AlienGo: imo it sounds better silenced
01:52 AlienGo: less cluttered

-[ Prxzm ]-

74 posts

Joined June 2013

-[ Prxzm ]- 2016-05-04T10:40:02+00:00

kds please~ <3

Full-Spread Mod

INSANE
00:18:751 (4,5) - Try to stay consistent with spacing on jumps that don't emphasize a part of the song. Use the same spacing as here: 00:18:751 (4,5) -
00:30:580 (3,1) - This should be emphasized. Set an NC and "Finish" hitsound here 00:30:580 (3) - Then remove the NC here 00:30:751 (1) - and start it here 00:30:922 (2) -
00:31:094 (3,1) - Apply the same changes here. As well, add a "Finish" hitsound to 00:31:266 (1) -
00:31:780 (1,2,3) - Add a "Finish" hitsound to all three of these notes.
00:41:037 (5) - Don't stack this. Consider placing it slightly above of the slider.
00:41:551 (2) - Same here. Consider placing it slightly below the slider to flow with the above change.
00:56:980 (3,4) - The flow here is awkward. Consider changing in a way that improves the flow of the map.
01:37:437 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stream is drawn weird. Consider slightly remapping the stream to look aesthetically pleasing.
01:56:637 (1,2) - This is a very awkward jump. Consider remapping.
02:22:351 (7,8,1) - Flow is awkward. Consider flipping the slider around.

ABANES16'S INSANE
00:11:037 (1) - Please keep the slider point inside the slider.
00:15:837 (4,5) - and 00:16:351 (6,1) - 4,5 is too close, then 6,1 is too far. They're not emphasizing any part of the song, so they should keep the same spacing as before.
00:18:237 (2,3) - Why does this suddenly jump so far apart? Again, it's not emphasizing any part of the song so there shouldn't be a change in distance.
00:19:094 (6,1) - Random distance change again.
00:20:808 (6,1) - Random distance change.
00:20:980 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is an overmap. There's nothing that would fit a stream in the background. The background of the song is gentle and easygoing, and it's not transitioning.
00:21:666 (6,7,1) - If you want to keep the stream, you can move the stream here. It fits the song right here, but it's just an overmap where you have it currently.
00:22:008 (1,2,3,4) - Random distance changes.
00:24:580 (9,1,2,3,4) - Spree of random distance changes.
00:29:208 (2,3,4,5) - Random distance change, but it's consistent. It's nonetheless random, however, but if you want to change the distance snap you should start here 00:27:494 (1) -
00:30:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Right here would make a nice jump area. Consider changing this into a jump section rather than a gentle transition.
00:31:437 (5,6,7,8,9) - Like right here, maybe start the jump section earlier rather than only having it right here.
00:43:608 (5,6) - Right here is an example of a spacing change that does emphasize the song. It's emphasizing the transition into a new verse, therefore it's okay.
00:45:323 (1,2) - Random spacing change not emphasizing any part of the song.
01:27:837 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I like this section. It's fun, lively, and emphasizes the song.
01:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - However, right here that emphasis stops. You went from an aesthetic and flow that's fun and lively, then made a dull and boring stream. Consider making this a spiral or end the stream with slider jumps.
02:02:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Like this stream; it's fun and aesthetically pleasing.
02:08:980 (5,6,7) - Random spacing changes.
02:15:837 (5,6,7,8) - This stream is early. Her voice starts breaking here: 02:16:180 (1) -
02:16:180 (1) - Remap the above, move the stream from here to the start of the next slider.

HARD
00:14:466 (4) - New Combo
00:15:151 (7) - New Combo
00:25:437 (4) - New Combo
00:46:008 (4,5,6) - The flow here is awkward but not enough to impact playstyle. Consider changing for quality of life, but take this with a grain of salt.
00:58:351 (1,2,1,2) - This is hard difficulty. Stack the duplets, don't separate them.
01:03:151 (1,2,1,2) - Same here.
01:01:094 (2,3,4,5) - Also a consistency issue. Why did you separate those but stack these?
01:29:723 (5,6,7,1,2) - Random spacing change that doesn't emphasize the music. This is also only hard difficulty. Consider reducing the distance here: 01:29:723 (5,6,7) -
01:53:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Don't stack these. Consider moving the second set, and the notes that follow, over slightly to the right.
02:09:666 (1,2,1,2) - Stack the duplets.
02:11:723 (1,2,1,2) - Stack the duplets.
02:24:751 (1,2,3,4) - Move over slightly to the right.

NORMAL
00:14:808 (2) - Please keep the slider point inside the slider.
00:15:494 (3) - Same here.
00:44:294 (1) - Same here.
00:44:980 (2) - Same here.
00:45:666 (3) - Same here.
01:05:208 (5,6,1) - Don't make 1/4 notes in Normal difficulty. Remove the circle.
01:22:351 (1) - Why is there a lone spinner right here that's not followed by any notes?

AKITOSHI'S EASY
Perfect map. Spacing is consistent, notes follow the rhythm, no notes or patterns that don't belong in the difficulty, flows well, no points outside of sliders, and so on. Overall 10/10.

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-04T14:35:02+00:00

-[ Snowflake ]- wrote:
kds please~ <3
Full-Spread Mod
INSANE
00:18:751 (4,5) - Try to stay consistent with spacing on jumps that don't emphasize a part of the song. Use the same spacing as here: 00:18:751 (4,5) -
00:30:580 (3,1) - This should be emphasized. Set an NC and "Finish" hitsound here 00:30:580 (3) - Then remove the NC here 00:30:751 (1) - and start it here 00:30:922 (2) -
00:31:094 (3,1) - Apply the same changes here. As well, add a "Finish" hitsound to 00:31:266 (1) -
00:31:780 (1,2,3) - Add a "Finish" hitsound to all three of these notes.
00:41:037 (5) - Don't stack this. Consider placing it slightly above of the slider.
00:41:551 (2) - Same here. Consider placing it slightly below the slider to flow with the above change.
00:56:980 (3,4) - The flow here is awkward. Consider changing in a way that improves the flow of the map.
01:37:437 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stream is drawn weird. Consider slightly remapping the stream to look aesthetically pleasing.
01:56:637 (1,2) - This is a very awkward jump. Consider remapping.
02:22:351 (7,8,1) - Flow is awkward. Consider flipping the slider around.

ABANES16'S INSANE
00:11:037 (1) - Please keep the slider point inside the slider.
00:15:837 (4,5) - and 00:16:351 (6,1) - 4,5 is too close, then 6,1 is too far. They're not emphasizing any part of the song, so they should keep the same spacing as before.
00:18:237 (2,3) - Why does this suddenly jump so far apart? Again, it's not emphasizing any part of the song so there shouldn't be a change in distance.
00:19:094 (6,1) - Random distance change again.
00:20:808 (6,1) - Random distance change.
00:20:980 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is an overmap. There's nothing that would fit a stream in the background. The background of the song is gentle and easygoing, and it's not transitioning.
00:21:666 (6,7,1) - If you want to keep the stream, you can move the stream here. It fits the song right here, but it's just an overmap where you have it currently.
00:22:008 (1,2,3,4) - Random distance changes.
00:24:580 (9,1,2,3,4) - Spree of random distance changes.
00:29:208 (2,3,4,5) - Random distance change, but it's consistent. It's nonetheless random, however, but if you want to change the distance snap you should start here 00:27:494 (1) -
00:30:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Right here would make a nice jump area. Consider changing this into a jump section rather than a gentle transition.
00:31:437 (5,6,7,8,9) - Like right here, maybe start the jump section earlier rather than only having it right here.
00:43:608 (5,6) - Right here is an example of a spacing change that does emphasize the song. It's emphasizing the transition into a new verse, therefore it's okay.
00:45:323 (1,2) - Random spacing change not emphasizing any part of the song.
01:27:837 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I like this section. It's fun, lively, and emphasizes the song.
01:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - However, right here that emphasis stops. You went from an aesthetic and flow that's fun and lively, then made a dull and boring stream. Consider making this a spiral or end the stream with slider jumps.
02:02:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Like this stream; it's fun and aesthetically pleasing.
02:08:980 (5,6,7) - Random spacing changes.
02:15:837 (5,6,7,8) - This stream is early. Her voice starts breaking here: 02:16:180 (1) -
02:16:180 (1) - Remap the above, move the stream from here to the start of the next slider.

HARD
00:14:466 (4) - New Combo
00:15:151 (7) - New Combo
00:25:437 (4) - New Combo
00:46:008 (4,5,6) - The flow here is awkward but not enough to impact playstyle. Consider changing for quality of life, but take this with a grain of salt.
00:58:351 (1,2,1,2) - This is hard difficulty. Stack the duplets, don't separate them.
01:03:151 (1,2,1,2) - Same here.
01:01:094 (2,3,4,5) - Also a consistency issue. Why did you separate those but stack these?
01:29:723 (5,6,7,1,2) - Random spacing change that doesn't emphasize the music. This is also only hard difficulty. Consider reducing the distance here: 01:29:723 (5,6,7) -
01:53:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Don't stack these. Consider moving the second set, and the notes that follow, over slightly to the right.
02:09:666 (1,2,1,2) - Stack the duplets.
02:11:723 (1,2,1,2) - Stack the duplets.
02:24:751 (1,2,3,4) - Move over slightly to the right.

NORMAL
00:14:808 (2) - Please keep the slider point inside the slider.
00:15:494 (3) - Same here.
00:44:294 (1) - Same here.
00:44:980 (2) - Same here.
00:45:666 (3) - Same here.
01:05:208 (5,6,1) - Don't make 1/4 notes in Normal difficulty. Remove the circle.
01:22:351 (1) - Why is there a lone spinner right here that's not followed by any notes?

AKITOSHI'S EASY
Perfect map. Spacing is consistent, notes follow the rhythm, no notes or patterns that don't belong in the difficulty, flows well, no points outside of sliders, and so on. Overall 10/10.

Would give kds anyday :3

Will aply mods later after I get on osu!

Thanks for the mod~ <3

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-05-18T10:24:57+00:00

Hello !, from #modreqs. I like Electronic Instrumental, so I hope I can be helpful here !

General :
I found nothing bad here. It's just my opinion, I think it will be lovelier if the combo colors are 4 colors.
Owner Diffs and the GDs have different Kiai Timing. Maybe you'd consider to equalize it.

Akitoshi's Easy :
Excellent ! (Oh, maybe disabling the Widescreen Support ?, so it's the same like the other diffs)

Normal :
00:58:008 (1) - This slider nicer if it's stacked with 00:56:980 (4) - . But, yours to decide

Hard (Oh my ! I'd like to FL it XD ) :
Excellent !

abanes16's Insane :
Excellent !

Insane :
00:55:523 (3) - Here's a good to place triple. Yours to decide !

Nah, I guess that's all I can give. It's perfect !. I hope I'm correct and won't change the style XD . I hope you'll rank this too, good luck !

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-18T13:12:13+00:00

O-Moei wrote:
Hello !, from #modreqs. I like Electronic Instrumental, so I hope I can be helpful here !

General :
I found nothing bad here. It's just my opinion, I think it will be lovelier if the combo colors are 4 colors.
Owner Diffs and the GDs have different Kiai Timing. Maybe you'd consider to equalize it.

Akitoshi's Easy :
Excellent ! (Oh, maybe disabling the Widescreen Support ?, so it's the same like the other diffs)

Normal :
00:58:008 (1) - This slider nicer if it's stacked with 00:56:980 (4) - . But, yours to decide

Hard (Oh my ! I'd like to FL it XD ) :
Excellent !

abanes16's Insane :
Excellent !

Insane :
00:55:523 (3) - Here's a good to place triple. Yours to decide ! no change

Nah, I guess that's all I can give. It's perfect !. I hope I'm correct and won't change the style XD . I hope you'll rank this too, good luck !

Thank you! <3

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Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Lully 2016-05-20T20:18:28+00:00

little check. :3

insane

00:09:666 (1,2,3,4) - the distance here is weird o:
00:13:780 (1) - is..this.. outscreen?.. o:
00:18:751 (4) - stack with 00:17:894 (1) - ?
00:23:980 (3) - fix distance like dis http://puu.sh/oZ5LI.jpg
00:35:380 (5,6) - put them a lil' bit down that (6) underlaps with (2)'s end and (5) blankets with (1)
00:41:894 (3) - blanket?
00:46:351 (4,1,2) - so much overlap.. o:
00:47:894 (6) - why is this stacked? make it a jump >:
00:50:037 (4) - fix ds o:
00:55:437 (2) - people may think it's a double
00:58:351 (3) - blanket with 00:57:494 (4) -
01:00:751 (1) - sllliiight blanket error?
01:04:351 (2) - ^ o:
01:35:294 (4,5,6,7) - place the stream better
01:38:808 (1) - nice sliderart. ❤ .. - try to make this circle thingy better that there is no.. nop.. o: this thingy here http://puu.sh/oZ6kd.jpg that nop!
02:13:094 (1) - is this sliderart rankable? o: try to rework it .. o:
02:18:066 (3) - fix overlap

wub. :3

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-21T01:17:05+00:00

CookieKivi wrote:
little check. :3

insane
00:09:666 (1,2,3,4) - the distance here is weird o: I'll try to fix this ;_;
00:13:780 (1) - is..this.. outscreen?.. o: nope
00:18:751 (4) - stack with 00:17:894 (1) - ? nah
00:23:980 (3) - fix distance like dis http://puu.sh/oZ5LI.jpg I prefer the current one
00:35:380 (5,6) - put them a lil' bit down that (6) underlaps with (2)'s end and (5) blankets with (1) fixed in my own way
00:41:894 (3) - blanket?
00:46:351 (4,1,2) - so much overlap.. o: c:
00:47:894 (6) - why is this stacked? make it a jump >:
00:50:037 (4) - fix ds o: hmm?
00:55:437 (2) - people may think it's a double am I supposed to change something here?
00:58:351 (3) - blanket with 00:57:494 (4) - it ruins the flow tho :c
01:00:751 (1) - sllliiight blanket error?
01:04:351 (2) - ^ o:
01:35:294 (4,5,6,7) - place the stream better the placement is alright as it is imo, will change if more modders complain about it
01:38:808 (1) - nice sliderart. ❤ .. - try to make this circle thingy better that there is no.. nop.. o: this thingy here http://puu.sh/oZ6kd.jpg that nop! I tried fine-tuning it. I hope it looks better xd
02:13:094 (1) - is this sliderart rankable? o: try to rework it .. o: it's alright
02:18:066 (3) - fix overlap I think it's better when it's a bit off-center so it's easier to read lmao

wub. :3

Thanks for the check ❤

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rbby

197 posts

Joined September 2014

rbby 2016-05-21T02:41:12+00:00

o/

Quick mod (from mod on this map)

Insane

00:02:123 (3) - stack this with sliderend of 00:01:094 (3) -

00:07:608 (2) - stack with sliderhitcircle of 00:06:580 (3) -

00:11:723 (3,5) - ^ with sliderend

00:14:808 (4,4,5,6) - these make a weird overlap. Maybe move 00:15:666 (4,5,6) - to the left so it doesn't overlap with 00:14:808 (4) - ?

00:18:751 (4) - move this up (to x:283 y:181?) so it doesn't overlap with 00:17:894 (1) -

00:21:323 (5) - stack this with 00:20:637 (1) - and 00:21:666 (6) - on 00:21:151 (4) - (to fix that move 00:21:666 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - with it)

00:25:951 (6) - stack this on sliderend of 00:25:094 (2) -

00:28:008 (3) - stack on 00:28:523 (5) -

00:30:408 (2) - ^ on 00:29:551 (3) -

00:34:180 (5) - ^ on 00:33:323 (2) -

01:12:923 (6) - ^ on 01:12:066 (2) -

01:45:494 (6) - ^ on 01:44:637 (2) -

01:56:294 (5) - blanket this with 01:55:608 (2) -

01:58:694 (3) - stack 01:58:694 (3) - on 01:58:008 (1) - and 01:58:866 (4) - on 01:58:351 (2) -

02:18:066 (3) - stack on end of 02:17:380 (1) -

Hope this helps with anything~

hyouri

390 posts

Joined June 2012

hyouri 2016-05-21T13:49:32+00:00

[General]

Tags: Remove "chill" (uselss)
soft-hitfinish3.wav and soft-sliderslide3.wav are never used, consider removing.

[Insane]

00:07:608 (2) - blanket this upon sliderstart of 00:06:580 (3) -
00:08:294 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - weird spacing
00:10:523 (2) - no need for NC
00:16:866 (2) - this has like a weird 0.55x spacing, make it 0.5x
00:22:351 (2) - ^
00:25:094 (2) - ^
00:37:437 (3,5) - blankt
00:47:723 (5,1) - ^
01:02:980 (5) - place this at like x:487|y:206
01:32:294 (1,2) - this spacing should be same as 01:31:780 (1,2) -
01:31:437 (7) - NC
01:31:951 (2) - ^
01:32:466 (2) - ^
01:31:780 (1,1,1) - Remove NC

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-22T13:52:07+00:00

Frostt wrote:
o/

Quick mod (from mod on this map)

Insane

00:02:123 (3) - stack this with sliderend of 00:01:094 (3) -

00:07:608 (2) - stack with sliderhitcircle of 00:06:580 (3) -

00:11:723 (3,5) - ^ with sliderend

00:14:808 (4,4,5,6) - these make a weird overlap. Maybe move 00:15:666 (4,5,6) - to the left so it doesn't overlap with 00:14:808 (4) - ?

00:18:751 (4) - move this up (to x:283 y:181?) so it doesn't overlap with 00:17:894 (1) -

00:21:323 (5) - stack this with 00:20:637 (1) - and 00:21:666 (6) - on 00:21:151 (4) - (to fix that move 00:21:666 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - with it)

00:25:951 (6) - stack this on sliderend of 00:25:094 (2) -

00:28:008 (3) - stack on 00:28:523 (5) -

00:30:408 (2) - ^ on 00:29:551 (3) -

00:34:180 (5) - ^ on 00:33:323 (2) -

01:12:923 (6) - ^ on 01:12:066 (2) -

01:45:494 (6) - ^ on 01:44:637 (2) -

01:56:294 (5) - blanket this with 01:55:608 (2) -

01:58:694 (3) - stack 01:58:694 (3) - on 01:58:008 (1) - and 01:58:866 (4) - on 01:58:351 (2) -

02:18:066 (3) - stack on end of 02:17:380 (1) -
Hope this helps with anything~

Followed some of the stack suggestions, I couldn't really pinpoint which one's I followed since I applied ur mod a few days ago but thanks!

Alveryn wrote:
[General]
Tags: Remove "chill" (uselss)
soft-hitfinish3.wav and soft-sliderslide3.wav are never used, consider removing.
[Insane]
00:07:608 (2) - blanket this upon sliderstart of 00:06:580 (3) -
00:08:294 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - weird spacing umm... you want me to remap all of this eh? huh
00:10:523 (2) - no need for NC
00:16:866 (2) - this has like a weird 0.55x spacing, make it 0.5x
00:22:351 (2) - ^
00:25:094 (2) - ^
00:37:437 (3,5) - blankt did you mean overlap?
00:47:723 (5,1) - ^ nah
01:02:980 (5) - place this at like x:487|y:206
01:32:294 (1,2) - this spacing should be same as 01:31:780 (1,2) -
01:31:437 (7) - NC
01:31:951 (2) - ^
01:32:466 (2) - ^
01:31:780 (1,1,1) - Remove NC

no reply = followed

Thanks!

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2016-05-23T19:02:35+00:00

Because I got stressed so much while mapping ctb and saw this on #modreqs

oh btw, don't get stressed while replying to my mods these are all subjective and by no means objective (unless i put it in bold heh, then it might be worth reading it more seriously o3o)

Insane

The difficulty itself wasn't half bad gameplay wise, but I just couldn't get my head around what you were basing your spacing upon, it seemed pretty hectic and random to me as I played it.

normal font - i have 0 problem with you rejecting it
bold - i expect really good reason for you to reject it
italic - i'm not sure myself lol

00:02:123 (3,4) - It would be much better to have these all circles as there are noticeable piano 1/2s behind these music notes.
00:04:866 (3) - now this is just weird, highly similar sound with just as high emphasis on the 00:05:208 - , it doesn't make sense to have a reverse slider here, just use the same rhythm as 00:02:123 - .
00:05:551 (1) - I flipped out a bit when this appeared during gameplay, its probably due to the reverb sound that made you think 1/4 existed on this place, but if you listen carefully (even without the help of 25% playback speed) you can tell 1/4s don't exist here. So you should use a different rhythm here :>
00:07:094 (1) - compared to last two sliders, the musical notes here are pretty strong enough to justify all circles here.
00:08:294 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - tbh, these jumps didn't connect seamlessly as I hoped it would. I think the biggest flow killer is the transition on these notes: 00:09:151 (3,1) - I would advise keeping the flow direction consistent up until 00:09:666 - , then change it up when you reach that spot. But as it is right now doesn't really impress me.
Section 00:11:037 - to 00:30:237 -
The biggest question mark I have with this section is incredibly low distance you have employed on most of the patterns. Especially since the musical section that comes after uses higher spacing more frequently with weaker sounds, i mean, heck even the intro has pretty similar spacing with CONSIDERABLY weaker background sounds. I don't see why the main part should have lower spacing.
Patterns that do this:
00:11:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:13:094 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:13:780 (1,2,3,4) -
00:15:666 (4,5,6,7) -
00:17:894 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:20:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
00:23:380 (1,2,3,4,5) -

Ok to add even more salt to the wound, I really do not appreciate some of the 1/2 slider spam patterns especially when there are more appropriate rhythm available for them.
e.g.
00:11:380 (2,3,4,5,6) -
This works due to background synths

or if you want more emphasis to the synths at the end

like there are quite a handful of different rhythms you can use other than 1/2 slider spam.
00:13:780 (1,2,3,4) -
and this one
00:16:180 (7) - this one should definitely be circles not slider

I could go on but there are other things to cover so I'll leave you to think about it.
And this issue is not only with this section alone, it exists consistently throughout the whole map as well.
00:42:751 (1,1,1) - I really don't see why and how this makes the map play better because not only it doesn't fit with the music, the reverse slider spam just doesn't add much to the gameplay as well since its not like you are using this as a break from really hard jump you had recently since there is none. So I really don't think you have any valid excuse here to keep this.
00:54:580 (5,6) - hm, i think it would be more comfortable to play if there was slightly more distance between these two sliders. Reason? Testplay and experience o3o
General comment about Kiai:
The rhythm feels quite underwhelming imho. I do understand you want to primarily follow the vocal holds with these long sliders but added with small spacing problem, it just doesn't do the song enough justice. It also creates difficulty spike issue since your 1/4 patterns are spaced like Extra level difficulty while many of the 1/2 patterns are like light insane level spacing. (hint hint: compare 00:59:037 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:09:323 (1,2,3,4) - similar background sound, similar vocals, but WILDLY different spacing :<)

Most of the issues (primarily difficulty gap within the difficulty between 1/4 pattern design and 1/2 pattern design) repeats itself so I won't go on.

tl;dr summary: Increase difficulty of 1/2 patterns to match their difficulty to similar level of 1/4 patterns. Or nerf the 1/4 patterns a bit so they aren't super crazy compared to the 1/2 patterns.

k im out pce
and watch out for overmaps >w>

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-24T00:54:10+00:00

guineaQ wrote:
Because I got stressed so much while mapping ctb and saw this on #modreqs

oh btw, don't get stressed while replying to my mods these are all subjective and by no means objective (unless i put it in bold heh, then it might be worth reading it more seriously o3o)

Insane
The difficulty itself wasn't half bad gameplay wise, but I just couldn't get my head around what you were basing your spacing upon, it seemed pretty hectic and random to me as I played it.

normal font - i have 0 problem with you rejecting it
bold - i expect really good reason for you to reject it
italic - i'm not sure myself lol
00:02:123 (3,4) - It would be much better to have these all circles as there are noticeable piano 1/2s behind these music notes.
00:04:866 (3) - now this is just weird, highly similar sound with just as high emphasis on the 00:05:208 - , it doesn't make sense to have a reverse slider here, just use the same rhythm as 00:02:123 - .
00:05:551 (1) - I flipped out a bit when this appeared during gameplay, its probably due to the reverb sound that made you think 1/4 existed on this place, but if you listen carefully (even without the help of 25% playback speed) you can tell 1/4s don't exist here. So you should use a different rhythm here :>
00:07:094 (1) - compared to last two sliders, the musical notes here are pretty strong enough to justify all circles here.
00:08:294 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - tbh, these jumps didn't connect seamlessly as I hoped it would. I think the biggest flow killer is the transition on these notes: 00:09:151 (3,1) - I would advise keeping the flow direction consistent up until 00:09:666 - , then change it up when you reach that spot. But as it is right now doesn't really impress me.
Section 00:11:037 - to 00:30:237 -
The biggest question mark I have with this section is incredibly low distance you have employed on most of the patterns. Especially since the musical section that comes after uses higher spacing more frequently with weaker sounds, i mean, heck even the intro has pretty similar spacing with CONSIDERABLY weaker background sounds. I don't see why the main part should have lower spacing.
Patterns that do this:
00:11:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:13:094 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:13:780 (1,2,3,4) -
00:15:666 (4,5,6,7) -
00:17:894 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:20:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
00:23:380 (1,2,3,4,5) -

Ok to add even more salt to the wound, I really do not appreciate some of the 1/2 slider spam patterns especially when there are more appropriate rhythm available for them.
e.g.
00:11:380 (2,3,4,5,6) -
This works due to background synths

or if you want more emphasis to the synths at the end

like there are quite a handful of different rhythms you can use other than 1/2 slider spam.
00:13:780 (1,2,3,4) -
and this one
00:16:180 (7) - this one should definitely be circles not slider

I could go on but there are other things to cover so I'll leave you to think about it.
And this issue is not only with this section alone, it exists consistently throughout the whole map as well.
00:42:751 (1,1,1) - I really don't see why and how this makes the map play better because not only it doesn't fit with the music, the reverse slider spam just doesn't add much to the gameplay as well since its not like you are using this as a break from really hard jump you had recently since there is none. So I really don't think you have any valid excuse here to keep this.
00:54:580 (5,6) - hm, i think it would be more comfortable to play if there was slightly more distance between these two sliders. Reason? Testplay and experience o3o
General comment about Kiai:
The rhythm feels quite underwhelming imho. I do understand you want to primarily follow the vocal holds with these long sliders but added with small spacing problem, it just doesn't do the song enough justice. It also creates difficulty spike issue since your 1/4 patterns are spaced like Extra level difficulty while many of the 1/2 patterns are like light insane level spacing. (hint hint: compare 00:59:037 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:09:323 (1,2,3,4) - similar background sound, similar vocals, but WILDLY different spacing :<)
Most of the issues (primarily difficulty gap within the difficulty between 1/4 pattern design and 1/2 pattern design) repeats itself so I won't go on.

tl;dr summary: Increase difficulty of 1/2 patterns to match their difficulty to similar level of 1/4 patterns. Or nerf the 1/4 patterns a bit so they aren't super crazy compared to the 1/2 patterns.

k im out pce
and watch out for overmaps >w>

Reading this makes me want to re-map the whole diff xd(maybe I will?)
You've given me a faaar better view point on how to map songs from now-on... Thanks for the advice!

(I'll be taking it with a bit of salt = v=)/ )

Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Zyl 2016-05-24T23:36:57+00:00

¡Really Cool Song!

Hard GD

And take a star!!

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-25T08:33:50+00:00

Trent83 wrote:
¡Really Cool Song!

Hard GD

And take a star!!

<3

Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Zyl 2016-06-15T23:40:10+00:00

22 days ago...

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-06-17T13:56:45+00:00

Trent83 wrote:
22 days ago...

I didn't feel like mapping these past weeks... But I'll either finish Twilight or just remap the Insane this weekend so don't worry xD

alden

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Joined November 2013

alden 2016-06-21T00:53:07+00:00

random mod

Insane

00:06:066 (4,1) - I don't like how these overlap
00:07:951 (4,2) - same when the stream here and 2
00:11:380 (2) - really feel like this needs emphasis
00:20:808 (2) - u can stagger them like how 00:20:294 (8,9) - are
00:24:580 (6,1) - could blanket these
00:31:266 (1,2,1,2) - weird. Don't like how they overlap
00:37:437 (3,4,5) - maybe like so? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5437562
00:42:580 (5) - NC here remove the other NCs. Seem unnecessary
00:47:037 (2) - should be spaced imo
00:58:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - weird but works maybe tweak a bit
01:01:608 (1,2,3) - I feel like this is overmapped kicksliders shouldn't be there
01:02:808 (7,8) - make it consistent with 01:02:466 (5,6) -?
01:30:923 (3) - make it lead into the tripple
01:48:751 (3) - just stack with 4
01:51:837 (1,1,1,1) - I don't agree with this. Just put NC here 01:52:523 (1) -
02:12:066 (3,4) - make it parallel with 1 and 2
02:23:208 (2,3) - not a fan of these sliders

abane's Insane

00:15:837 (4,5,6) - i think circles here fit the music very well
00:28:008 (3) - blanketing this on top of 00:28:523 (6) - is nice and makes a fine pattern
00:31:608 (1) - NC?
00:32:123 (9) - such a large emphasis on a downbeat is weird the spacing on 00:32:294 (1) - should be larger than 9
00:46:694 (1,2,3) - even the spacing
01:01:608 (2,3,4,5) - if it's a star pattern it can be polished
01:27:837 (1,2) - the red tick in between is audible can be mapped
01:40:866 (6) - NC? D:
01:42:923 (5) - ^
01:43:608 (7,8,9,10) - feels wierd to me
Ok it's been happening a lot. Try putting NC on the big white ticks xd
01:51:151 (1,2) - should be the same as 01:51:494 (3,4) -
01:57:151 (6) - x:36 y:244
02:01:951 (5,1) - these aren't actually flush

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