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Akitoshi

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-04-29T19:30:00+00:00

IRC I'm shitmodder so strangers plz don't open

04:02 flawful: re-dl for shit insane
04:02 Akitoshi: just re-name the diffname ez
04:03 flawful: ayy lmao
04:03 flawful: I never do dat k3k
04:03 Akitoshi: 00:05:551 (1) - can u just put 1/1 slider here lol
04:04 Akitoshi: for consistency thingy with 00:02:808 (1) - 
04:04 flawful: can you just mod my diff via chat? <3
04:04 flawful: sp is lief
04:05 Akitoshi: fix blanket
04:05 Akitoshi: kds pls
04:05 Akitoshi: jk
04:05 Akitoshi: welp lez do dis
04:05 flawful: ocake
04:05 Akitoshi: 00:08:294 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - this section is so messed up with the usage of NC
04:06 flawful: what would you suggest?
04:06 Akitoshi: there should be 3-3-2-4
04:06 Akitoshi: not 3-3-3-3
04:06 flawful: ahh
04:06 Akitoshi: 00:09:666 (3) - nc here
04:07 Akitoshi: 00:09:837 (1) - remove
04:07 Akitoshi: 00:10:694 (1) - remove too
04:07 Akitoshi: 00:31:608 (3,1) - same thing lol
04:08 Akitoshi: 00:35:380 (5) - stack dis to 00:34:351 (1) - 
04:08 Akitoshi: 00:34:694 (2,6) - same
04:09 Akitoshi: 00:38:466 (1) - uhmmm I dun rly have fetish on anti-flow soooo lemme suggest something simple
04:10 Akitoshi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5039753
04:12 flawful: le done <3
04:12 Akitoshi: 00:42:751 (1,1,1) - 
04:12 Akitoshi: I can't hear something 1/8 there tbh
04:12 flawful: there's 1/8 there
04:13 flawful: just subtle heh
04:14 Akitoshi: even if they have sth 1/8 I dun rly think that it's noticeable and necessary to map them
04:14 Akitoshi: welp whatever lez proceed kek
04:14 flawful: okeh
04:14 Akitoshi: 00:53:551 (1,2,3,4) - plz
04:14 Akitoshi: these
04:14 Akitoshi: claps
04:15 Akitoshi: pangit pakinggan lmao
04:15 flawful: LOL
04:15 Akitoshi: 00:58:694 (5) - any reason for sudden anti jump?
04:15 flawful: ^no pattern ideas
04:16 flawful: lmao
04:16 Akitoshi: 00:58:351 (3,4) - maybe move this more left liek around 338|172
04:17 Akitoshi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5039804 so ya 1 2 and 5 can be doritos
04:17 Akitoshi: 01:01:094 (2,3,4) - overmap lol just use 1/2 beats here
04:18 Akitoshi: 01:07:266 (1,2,3,4) - may kulang sa 01:07:866 - 
04:19 Akitoshi: sooo if you want to say you can't create a flow with 01:07:951 (1) - 
04:20 Akitoshi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5039832 here le reference to how2flow
04:20 Akitoshi: 01:31:951 (2,1) - thanks editor
04:21 flawful: wtf
04:21 Akitoshi: 01:28:694 (1,1) - single NCs for wat lol maybe remove NC on 01:28:694 (1,1) - 
04:21 flawful: oh sh1t
04:22 Akitoshi: 01:51:151 (4,5,6,7) - 3bland
04:22 flawful: ^sem
04:22 flawful: should maek doritos 10/10
04:23 Akitoshi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5039857 here's for 2 sliders
04:23 Akitoshi: convert liek dat
04:24 Akitoshi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5039863 and another 4 notes, since ze audio is falling lez put some trolls liek alacat https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5039863
04:24 Akitoshi: nvm double linked
04:25 Akitoshi: 02:02:980 (1) - remove NC
04:25 Akitoshi: 02:04:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - nerf?
04:26 Akitoshi: if u lazi to nerf umm
04:27 Akitoshi: 02:05:208 (5) - bawasan mo reverse then add something 1/2 slider on 02:05:551 - liek deez https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5039880
04:28 Akitoshi: welp daz all5me
04:28 Akitoshi: lemme sleep lmao
04:28 flawful: thanks <3

LeQuack

516 posts

Joined September 2015

LeQuack 2016-04-30T04:04:01+00:00

Here's my mod

Akitoshi's Easy

01:01:780 (3,4) - I would change this to either two sliders that both start and end on white ticks or have the (3) slider end on the previous white tick and have two notes on the next white ticks
01:12:751 (3,4) - Same here
02:10:351 (3,4) - ^
02:21:323 (3,4) - ^
02:27:837 and 02:28:351 - I don't think these timing points should be here, makes the spinner sound weird

Normal

02:05:380 - Maybe add a note here

Hard

01:22:180 (1) - End on the previous white tick (Sounds nicer and allows players to re-adjust before the next note)
02:20:294 (1) - Have to end on the previous red tick

Abanes16's Insane

01:27:837 - 01:41:551 - Way too many hitsounds between these times (Take the less is more approach)

Insane

I think the second kiai should finish at 02:03:494

00:02:808 - This timing point should be soft like the start of the song
00:11:380 - I understand that you want the clap sound from the soft set to be on the slider here but i think it sounds weird having the first note of combo be a different soundset
from the rest of it i suggest making a NC:1 with the same hitsound effect so the other notes are consistent (just copy the soft hitsound in the folder and name it normal-hitclap)
00:28:866 (1) - End on the red tick
00:33:323 - This is a custom soundset yet you have no custom hitsounds for the normal set, just change to default normal
00:40:009 (5) - Only have the whistle on the slide
00:42:751 (1,1,1) - I would make the hitsounds on these a bit louder (around 60%) so you can hear them a bit over the music
00:43:951 - Change to normal hitsounds with your custom clap
01:09:323 (1,1,2,3) - Combos are inconsistent either group them as 1,2 or all together
02:17:037 (4) - End this on the white tick

Really good looking map. Good luck

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-04-30T04:14:25+00:00

LeQuack wrote:
01:01:780 (3,4) - I would change this to either two sliders that both start and end on white ticks or have the (3) slider end on the previous white tick and have two notes on the next white ticks following vocals for avoid repetitives
01:12:751 (3,4) - Same here
02:10:351 (3,4) - ^
02:21:323 (3,4) - ^
02:27:837 and 02:28:351 - I don't think these timing points should be here, makes the spinner sound weird I reduced volume lil by lil there since ze audio is falling too

Thanks for your check~

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-04-30T04:37:48+00:00

abanes16's Insane
First of all you should see how you wrote Insane :p

00:01:608 (4) - NC
00:04:351 (4) - NC
00:07:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make all of this same color
00:12:408 (5) - NC
00:17:894 (5) - NC
00:26:123 (8,9,1,2,3) - Make all of this same color
00:34:351 (5) - NC
00:37:094 (5) - NC
00:39:837 (1) - NC
00:42:580 (1) - NC ?
00:45:323 (5) - NC
00:48:066 (1) - NC
00:50:808 (5) - NC
00:56:294 (5) - NC
01:05:208 (1) - NC
01:08:637 (1) - NC
01:29:208 (1,2,3,4,5) - One combo
01:29:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - One combo (one color by stream feel better when playing imo)
01:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is weird going from 0.5 spaced stream to 0.9, step by step would be better imo (space 0.3 then 0.4 then 0.5...)
01:42:923 (5) - NC
01:45:666 (6) - NC
01:53:894 (5) - NC
01:56:637 (5) - NC
01:59:380 (1) - NC
02:06:237 (1) - NC
02:07:608 (1,2) - One color only for them
02:18:580 (1) - NC
02:21:323 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - One color only for them
02:22:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - One color only for them
02:24:066 (1,2) - One color only for them
02:24:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - One color only for them

My gawd hao to spell Inane
btw thanks for le mod

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-04-30T04:44:24+00:00

Abanes16's Insane

01:27:837 - 01:41:551 - Way too many hitsounds between these times (Take the less is more approach)

okay

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: eos.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54841
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 21327,100184
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.600001

[Metadata]
Title:EOS
TitleUnicode:EOS
Artist:ginkiha
ArtistUnicode:ginkiha
Creator:flawful
Version:abanes16's Insane
Source:BMS
Tags:Akitoshi Dawn Chill DnB abanes16
BeatmapID:964509
BeatmapSetID:448829

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-04-30T04:54:27+00:00

LeQuack wrote:
Here's my mod

Normal
02:05:380 - Maybe add a note here

Hard
01:22:180 (1) - End on the previous white tick (Sounds nicer and allows players to re-adjust before the next note)
02:20:294 (1) - Have to end on the previous red tick

Insane
I think the second kiai should finish at 02:03:494 I'll keep the kiai as it is cuz le song intensity is still the same imo

00:02:808 - This timing point should be soft like the start of the song
00:11:380 - I understand that you want the clap sound from the soft set to be on the slider here but i think it sounds weird having the first note of combo be a different soundset
from the rest of it i suggest making a NC:1 with the same hitsound effect so the other notes are consistent (just copy the soft hitsound in the folder and name it normal-hitclap)
00:28:866 (1) - End on the red tick It fits the song fine as it is imo
00:33:323 - This is a custom soundset yet you have no custom hitsounds for the normal set, just change to default normal
00:40:009 (5) - Only have the whistle on the slide idk what happened here xd fixed~
00:42:751 (1,1,1) - I would make the hitsounds on these a bit louder (around 60%) so you can hear them a bit over the music Changed to 56%
00:43:951 - Change to normal hitsounds with your custom clap
01:09:323 (1,1,2,3) - Combos are inconsistent either group them as 1,2 or all together
02:17:037 (4) - End this on the white tick I'll keep it as it is since it fits the song lmao

Really good looking map. ~~LIES~~ Good luck

Thanks for the mod! <3

NO REPLY = FIXED

AlienGo

23 posts

Joined March 2013

AlienGo 2016-04-30T06:08:17+00:00

Expert LVL

osu file format v14

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Creator:flawful
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Source:BMS
Tags:Akitoshi Dawn Chill Dubstep
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Here's the flawful expert level (lol) :^)

squirrelpascals

982 posts

Joined March 2015

squirrelpascals 2016-04-30T07:10:37+00:00

hai, M4M!

Insane

• 00:12:408 (5) - place this better; its too close to 2

• 00:14:123 (2,3) - blanket this better

• 00:21:837 (8,9,1) - move one up to fit with the stream better?

• 00:24:751 (1,2) - Why this change in rhythm? Also, if you're going to do this overlap offset 2 more

• 00:38:980 (2,3,4,5) - Seperate 2 from 3 and 4 from 5 more. If your going to use this spacing use it consistently (and make the overlap look nicer).

• 00:42:751 (1,1,1) - What? There's no 1/8 rhythm here

• 00:52:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Change something about one of these combos (doesn't have to be the consolation itself). This is repetitive

• 00:59:551 (2,3,4,5) - looks weird under 5 not blanketing xp

• 01:01:094 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Space these consistently. No change in music here. Also nc at 01:01:780 (2) instead of 01:01:608 (1)

• 01:03:151 (1,2) - Space?

• 01:08:466 (2) - move to x212 y52

• 01:28:694 (4) - place at x136 y326

• 01:48:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I see what you were going for here but the placement feels random

• 01:46:694 - You had a hitsound that was playing every other white tick and it stopped here. Why?

• 01:51:837 (1,2,3,4) - This reads like a stream but it isn't. Please space

• 01:59:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing

• 02:03:494 (1,2,3) - Be sure that the correlation between timeline gaps vs. your object placement is consistent. Here it isn't

I like some of the slider shapes you used!

• 00:03:837 (3) - Move to the left to look nicer in between the 2 sliders (same kind of thing with 00:02:294 (6) )

• 00:23:723 (7) - blanket

• 00:24:066 (1) and 00:26:637 (1) - I really don't get this nc. Please keep nc on important beats like here 00:24:751 (3) and here 00:27:494 (4) (big white tick) instead of where you have them now. This goes for the whole diff (01:30:066 (1,2,3,4) - nc 4 instead of 1, etc.)

• 00:37:608 (6) - Space a little bit more

• 00:56:294 (5,6,7) - space consistently

• 01:06:923 (4) - Place at x281 y85?

• 01:07:608 (1) - I feel like you could split up this combo

• 01:10:694 (1,2) - Space these?

• 01:27:837 - put a circle here. something clickable

• 01:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make this spacing increase / the curve of this stream look nicer. Right now it just looks like you tried to make a stream without ds

• 01:49:437 (4,5) - blanket

• 01:54:580 (8,9) - ^

• 02:23:037 (5,7) - ^

• 02:13:094 (1,2) and 02:07:608 (1,2) - I don't see why these are repeat sliders

Good luck!

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-04-30T09:20:06+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
hai, M4M!

Insane
• 00:12:408 (5) - place this better; its too close to 2 It's fine

• 00:14:123 (2,3) - blanket this better

• 00:21:837 (8,9,1) - move one up to fit with the stream better?

• 00:24:751 (1,2) - Why this change in rhythm? Also, if you're going to do this overlap offset 2 more

• 00:38:980 (2,3,4,5) - Seperate 2 from 3 and 4 from 5 more. If your going to use this spacing use it consistently (and make the overlap look nicer).

• 00:42:751 (1,1,1) - What? There's no 1/8 rhythm here lower your effect volume to 0 and you'll hear it

• 00:52:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Change something about one of these combos (doesn't have to be the consolation itself). This is repetitive Being repetitive is the point of this pattern lmao

• 00:59:551 (2,3,4,5) - looks weird under 5 not blanketing xp

• 01:01:094 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Space these consistently. No change in music here. Also nc at 01:01:780 (2) instead of 01:01:608 (1) decided to remap the first 3 1/4s and kept the nc

• 01:03:151 (1,2) - Space? I think it's okay as it is

• 01:08:466 (2) - move to x212 y52

• 01:28:694 (4) - place at x136 y326

• 01:48:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I see what you were going for here but the placement feels random I'll change this later

• 01:46:694 - You had a hitsound that was playing every other white tick and it stopped here. Why? dunno xd

• 01:51:837 (1,2,3,4) - This reads like a stream but it isn't. Please space the way it is, is fine

• 01:59:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing

• 02:03:494 (1,2,3) - Be sure that the correlation between timeline gaps vs. your object placement is consistent. Here it isn't it doesn't break the flow imo

I like some of the slider shapes you used! I'm a sh1t m4pp3r ;_;

Thanks for modding! <3

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Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-04-30T09:25:33+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
hai, M4M!

• 00:03:837 (3) - Move to the left to look nicer in between the 2 sliders (same kind of thing with 00:02:294 (6) )

• 00:23:723 (7) - blanket

• 00:24:066 (1) and 00:26:637 (1) - I really don't get this nc. Please keep nc on important beats like here 00:24:751 (3) and here 00:27:494 (4) (big white tick) instead of where you have them now. This goes for the whole diff (01:30:066 (1,2,3,4) - nc 4 instead of 1, etc.)

• 00:37:608 (6) - Space a little bit more

• 00:56:294 (5,6,7) - space consistently

• 01:06:923 (4) - Place at x281 y85?

• 01:07:608 (1) - I feel like you could split up this combo

• 01:10:694 (1,2) - Space these?

• 01:27:837 - put a circle here. something clickable

• 01:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make this spacing increase / the curve of this stream look nicer. Right now it just looks like you tried to make a stream without ds

• 01:49:437 (4,5) - blanket

• 01:54:580 (8,9) - ^

• 02:23:037 (5,7) - ^

• 02:13:094 (1,2) and 02:07:608 (1,2) - I don't see why these are repeat sliders

Good luck!

Thanks for le mod

updeto des

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: eos.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54841
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 21327,100184
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.600001

[Metadata]
Title:EOS
TitleUnicode:EOS
Artist:ginkiha
ArtistUnicode:ginkiha
Creator:flawful
Version:abanes16's Insane
Source:BMS
Tags:Akitoshi Dawn Chill DnB abanes16
BeatmapID:964509
BeatmapSetID:448829

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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192,21,140294,2,0,L|301:21,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,88,140637,2,0,P|388:140|370:242,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,332,141151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,332,141237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,332,141323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,220,141494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,332,141666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,289,141837,6,0,P|114:289|57:219,1,160
129,119,142351,1,8,0:0:0:0:
38,148,142523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,49,142694,2,0,P|133:32|196:32,1,80
297,102,143037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
245,36,143208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,159,143380,2,0,P|246:189|310:205,1,80
319,331,143723,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,278,143894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,250,144066,2,0,L|460:238,1,80
428,143,144408,2,0,L|331:154,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,86,144751,5,0,0:0:0:0:
306,44,144923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,256,145094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
133,157,145266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,213,145437,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145523,12,0,147837,0:0:0:0:

ReneePrower

90 posts

Joined April 2012

ReneePrower 2016-04-30T09:38:12+00:00

Wow, a lot has changed in the 48 hours since I looked at this map. 0.o

Several people modded (and some things were already changed that I was planning to bring up)
~~Extra~~Insane diff was nerfed
Two GDs were added
I'm in the process of making my own GD (Advanced diff)

I am llllate to the party, for which I apologize; didn't expect to get so busy the past couple of days. ANYWAY, here I am at 3AM against my better judgement, and I am going to finish this mod tonight! Let's go! ;D

[Akitoshi's Easy]

Will mod later if desired ;w;

[Normal]

00:00:066 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved (look at the relation from the perspective of 00:00:751 )
00:02:808 (1,2,3) - Some would say the overlap is not okay. I personally like the aesthetic, but it may have to be changed at some point.
00:11:037 (6,1) - NC should be switched so it falls on the downbeat (unless you're setting up early for the theme of the upcoming section; in that case, I applaud you for the detail and you have an argument for keeping the NC here).
00:20:980 (3,4,5,1) - There's something odd about this pattern. Not sure what about it, it's not like it's that hard to read...but that's from my perspective. I feel like it's just a bit weird to look at for a Normal diff.
00:19:608 (1,3,1,3) - That being said, you sure do like returning to this spot. xD Not a bad thing necessarily, I just think it's funny that this happens so many times in a row.
00:22:008 (1,4) - Not properly stacked.
00:31:608 (1,2,1,2) - I think this could be one combo instead of two.
00:46:351 (4) - Nothing I can hear really calls for the kick here. Although I know it would be difficult to rearrange to have a fluid slider at this point, try playing around with it; the kickslider really isn't necessary.
00:58:008 (1,3) - The ends aren't quite stacked; on (3), Ctrl+Shift+Down and Ctrl+Shift+Right once each.
01:01:780 (4,5,6,7) - Whoaaa, zoom zoom
01:05:208 (5,1) - I want so desperately for there to be some object in-between these on the pickup note~
01:14:123 (5) - Should be an NC here...
01:15:494 (1) - ...and possibly not here. (Though I think this one's also fine, mainly just add one ^there^)
01:22:351 (1) - Personally I would've sacrificed this spinner op. for the sake of mapping all the interesting rhythmic stuff in the next part.
01:41:551 (1,4) - Fix stack pleeeeease~
01:50:466 (2,5) - Not too sure I agree with this overlap.
02:00:751 (1,2,3) - I remember that previously there was another part that did this, (which you must've already changed,) slightly earlier in the song. Possibly at 01:55:266 (1,2) ? Anyway, that's not important; while I see why you'd want to put this rhythm, I don't think it's intuitive especially considering there are no other examples of the rhythm (in circles) in this diff. I'd suggest mapping it more directly to the vocals somehow, making every word part of an object (ie. on, and-onn, and-on are all accounted for, rather than just on, and-onn, and-on)
02:14:808 (8,1) - Definitely switch NC here
02:19:951 (6,1) - ^
02:25:094 (1) - I think to keep consistency across diffs it'd be nice to remove the NC here

[Hard]

00:08:808 (4,5,6) - Nice anti-jump, but sadly (5) is not quite positioned properly. Ctrl+Shift+Down twice (on (5)) and you should be good.
00:21:323 (3,4,5,6) - Something about this plays weird to me. Maybe it's the way they're stacked, I'm not sure, but it doesn't feel as natural as it probably should.
00:26:123 (1,2) - Oooo, pretty~
00:26:808 (2,2) - On the other hand, this isn't stacked properly. T~T
00:28:866 (1) - Try rotating 180°, Ctrl+G, and re-center on (x36,y372). See what you think.
00:32:294 (1,2) - Iz not even angularly symmetrical :V (not necessary, but might look nice)
00:59:037 (1,2) - Improve blanket
01:06:580 (3) - Blanketing the end of 01:06:237 (2) might look nice :3
01:15:323 (4,5,1) - This doesn't look right, did something get bumped out of place? Pls fix
01:27:837 (1,2) - Blanket?
01:28:694 (3,6) - Would be nice if a slight adjustment could be made to stack this (the end of (3), obviously)
01:30:408 (7) - It'd be more fitting to have this snapped to 1/6 BSD instead of 1/8 (therefore having four hits instead of five)
01:33:323 (7,1) - Perhaps switch NC
01:37:437 (7,9) - These should be parallel.
01:53:551 (4,4) - Not stacked properly; either move the slider Ctrl+Shift+Right one or the circle (and the subsequent 01:55:094 (4) ) Ctrl+Shift+Left one
01:57:323 (2) - I'd prefer if this one curved up, essentially a 180° rotated copy of 01:57:666 (3)
02:04:180 (3,1) - The blanket is sooo close </3
02:04:866 (1,3) - Ctrl+Shift+Down one on (3) to fix stack~
02:06:923 (2) - ^Also this one
02:08:123 (2,5,1) - Not a fan of the back-and-forth- stack here; either have them all flush or all layered.
02:09:494 (1) - Why the singular combo? It's not even a hard beat or anything.
02:12:408 (1,2,1) - Same as 02:08:123 (2,5,1) though it's even worse here because of how it's bent around. Please fix the stack.
02:18:923 (3,5) - Ctrl+Shift+Down and Ctrl+Shift+Right once each on (5).

[abanes' Insane]

Will mod later if desired ;w;

[~~Extra~~Insane]

Refraining from modding this diff for now, at your request. I may look at it later, when you're ready with it. ^^

WELP, that was surprisingly long(-ish) for only doing two out of the five diffs! (For now...) I'd say GL with ranking, but... the mapset isn't quite complete yet!

Anyway, really glad we met! You're cool to talk to 'n stuff.

Hope this was helpful!

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-04-30T11:07:35+00:00

RenardPrower wrote:
[*]I'm in the process of making my own GD (Advanced diff) [/list]

[Normal]
00:00:066 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved (look at the relation from the perspective of 00:00:751 )
00:02:808 (1,2,3) - Some would say the overlap is not okay. I personally like the aesthetic, but it may have to be changed at some point.
00:11:037 (6,1) - NC should be switched so it falls on the downbeat (unless you're setting up early for the theme of the upcoming section; in that case, I applaud you for the detail and you have an argument for keeping the NC here).
00:20:980 (3,4,5,1) - There's something odd about this pattern. Not sure what about it, it's not like it's that hard to read...but that's from my perspective. I feel like it's just a bit weird to look at for a Normal diff.
00:19:608 (1,3,1,3) - That being said, you sure do like returning to this spot. xD Not a bad thing necessarily, I just think it's funny that this happens so many times in a row.
00:22:008 (1,4) - Not properly stacked.
00:31:608 (1,2,1,2) - I think this could be one combo instead of two.
00:46:351 (4) - Nothing I can hear really calls for the kick here. Although I know it would be difficult to rearrange to have a fluid slider at this point, try playing around with it; the kickslider really isn't necessary.
00:58:008 (1,3) - The ends aren't quite stacked; on (3), Ctrl+Shift+Down and Ctrl+Shift+Right once each.
01:01:780 (4,5,6,7) - Whoaaa, zoom zoom
01:05:208 (5,1) - I want so desperately for there to be some object in-between these on the pickup note~
01:14:123 (5) - Should be an NC here...
01:15:494 (1) - ...and possibly not here. (Though I think this one's also fine, mainly just add one ^there^)
01:22:351 (1) - Personally I would've sacrificed this spinner op. for the sake of mapping all the interesting rhythmic stuff in the next part.
01:41:551 (1,4) - Fix stack pleeeeease~
01:50:466 (2,5) - Not too sure I agree with this overlap.
02:00:751 (1,2,3) - I remember that previously there was another part that did this, (which you must've already changed,) slightly earlier in the song. Possibly at 01:55:266 (1,2) ? Anyway, that's not important; while I see why you'd want to put this rhythm, I don't think it's intuitive especially considering there are no other examples of the rhythm (in circles) in this diff. I'd suggest mapping it more directly to the vocals somehow, making every word part of an object (ie. on, and-onn, and-on are all accounted for, rather than just on, and-onn, and-on)
02:14:808 (8,1) - Definitely switch NC here
02:19:951 (6,1) - ^
02:25:094 (1) - I think to keep consistency across diffs it'd be nice to remove the NC here

~followed almost all the suggestions

[Hard]
00:08:808 (4,5,6) - Nice anti-jump, but sadly (5) is not quite positioned properly. Ctrl+Shift+Down twice (on (5)) and you should be good.
00:21:323 (3,4,5,6) - Something about this plays weird to me. Maybe it's the way they're stacked, I'm not sure, but it doesn't feel as natural as it probably should.
00:26:123 (1,2) - Oooo, pretty~
00:26:808 (2,2) - On the other hand, this isn't stacked properly. T~T
00:28:866 (1) - Try rotating 180°, Ctrl+G, and re-center on (x36,y372). See what you think.
00:32:294 (1,2) - Iz not even angularly symmetrical :V (not necessary, but might look nice)
00:59:037 (1,2) - Improve blanket
01:06:580 (3) - Blanketing the end of 01:06:237 (2) might look nice :3
01:15:323 (4,5,1) - This doesn't look right, did something get bumped out of place? Pls fix
01:27:837 (1,2) - Blanket?
01:28:694 (3,6) - Would be nice if a slight adjustment could be made to stack this (the end of (3), obviously)
01:30:408 (7) - It'd be more fitting to have this snapped to 1/6 BSD instead of 1/8 (therefore having four hits instead of five)
01:33:323 (7,1) - Perhaps switch NC
01:37:437 (7,9) - These should be parallel.
01:53:551 (4,4) - Not stacked properly; either move the slider Ctrl+Shift+Right one or the circle (and the subsequent 01:55:094 (4) ) Ctrl+Shift+Left one
01:57:323 (2) - I'd prefer if this one curved up, essentially a 180° rotated copy of 01:57:666 (3)
02:04:180 (3,1) - The blanket is sooo close </3
02:04:866 (1,3) - Ctrl+Shift+Down one on (3) to fix stack~
02:06:923 (2) - ^Also this one
02:08:123 (2,5,1) - Not a fan of the back-and-forth- stack here; either have them all flush or all layered.
02:09:494 (1) - Why the singular combo? It's not even a hard beat or anything.
02:12:408 (1,2,1) - Same as 02:08:123 (2,5,1) though it's even worse here because of how it's bent around. Please fix the stack.
02:18:923 (3,5) - Ctrl+Shift+Down and Ctrl+Shift+Right once each on (5).

~That Ctrl+Shift right/left/up/down thing really helped xD

I'd say GL with ranking, but... the mapset isn't quite complete yet! Your Advanced diff Anyway, really glad we met! You're cool to talk to 'n stuff. Hope this was helpful! <3

Your mod was very helpful!

Thanks for modding~

no reply = fixed

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2016-04-30T11:53:54+00:00

Eos forever <3

IRC

13:21 flawful: EOS M4M? LOL
13:22 DavidEd: LOL
13:22 DavidEd: youre making one too? xD
13:22 flawful: I posted my request earlier xd
13:22 *flawful is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/963229 ginkiha - EOS]
13:22 DavidEd: woow thats funny xD
13:22 flawful: wanna M4M? <3
13:22 DavidEd: akitoshi traitor
13:23 flawful: I agree!
13:23 flawful: :^)
13:23 flawful: I asked him to make me an easy diff, so I'm to blame :(
13:23 DavidEd: dont know if m4m would be a good idea though ;_;
13:23 DavidEd: or wait
13:24 flawful: any reason in -particular?
13:24 flawful: coz EOS m4m sounds coool :3
13:24 DavidEd: cause i feel like were gonna force our own maps on each others xD
13:24 flawful: nahhh
13:25 DavidEd: i guess xD
13:25 flawful: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044633 this <3]
13:26 DavidEd: you can mod the gd diffs ;P
13:26 DavidEd: my insane dont need many more mods
13:28 *flawful is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/942814 ginkiha - EOS [Insane]]
13:29 flawful: I can see why
13:29 DavidEd: ;)
13:29 flawful: you're map <3
13:30 flawful: your*
13:31 flawful: damn
13:31 flawful: I need to re-map xD
13:31 *DavidEd is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/963228 ginkiha - EOS [Insane]]
13:31 flawful: do you have my version?
13:32 flawful: it's shit ;_;
13:33 DavidEd: you have better note place ment
13:34 flawful: not really ;_;
13:34 DavidEd: i like it ^^
13:34 DavidEd: there were just few things i noticed
13:34 flawful: oh and, I'll favorite your map
13:34 flawful: because EOS <3
13:35 DavidEd: its the best ^^
13:35 flawful: yes, please tell me what you noticed *^*
13:36 DavidEd: 01:40:866 (4) - you can drag out the repeat like i did in my diff
13:37 flawful: is this the start of an irc mod? xD
13:37 DavidEd: i think so xD
13:37 flawful: if it is I'm ready for it~ <3
13:38 flawful: a'ight, lez do dizzz
13:38 DavidEd: 02:04:180 (3,4) - i think you could probably replace these with something that leads up to the stream
13:39 DavidEd: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044711 something like this or something
13:39 DavidEd: i repeated those words lo
13:40 flawful: that looks awesome
13:40 DavidEd: 02:15:151 (4,5) - same
13:41 flawful: will do o7
13:43 flawful: done lol
13:43 DavidEd: 00:33:666 (3,1) - i dislike these overlaps so stack 1 on 3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044747
13:45 DavidEd: i think if you polish the entire map and fix a couple of overlaps it will look and play amazingly
13:46 DavidEd: 00:57:494 (4) - like these for example, you can stack the sliderend on 00:56:637 (2) - sliderend
13:46 flawful: yea, since one wrong overlap/blanket/DS will lead to another problem and so on~
13:46 DavidEd: stuff like that
13:47 DavidEd: oh and make sure to look at patterns that come after if you fix overlaps and such
13:48 DavidEd: so ds and blankets dont get messed up ^^
13:48 DavidEd: 01:03:666 (2) - stack it on previous 01:02:808 (7) - 
13:50 DavidEd: 01:37:437 - stream jumps dont belong in insanes ;_;
13:51 DavidEd: unless you decrease the spacing between 01:37:694 (4) - and 01:37:780 (1) - 
13:51 flawful: I'll just increase the DS on these 01:37:437 (1,2,3,4) -
13:51 DavidEd: other than that i have no other comment ^^
13:52 DavidEd: or that
13:52 flawful: yea xd
13:52 flawful: just post our chatlog in the forum for free kds <3
13:52 DavidEd: how do i save logs xD
13:52 DavidEd: been so long since i ever did irc
13:52 flawful: ./savelog

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-04-30T12:06:44+00:00

DavidEd wrote:

Eos forever <3

IRC

13:21 flawful: EOS M4M? LOL
13:22 DavidEd: LOL
13:22 DavidEd: youre making one too? xD
13:22 flawful: I posted my request earlier xd
13:22 *flawful is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/963229 ginkiha - EOS]
13:22 DavidEd: woow thats funny xD
13:22 flawful: wanna M4M? <3
13:22 DavidEd: akitoshi traitor
13:23 flawful: I agree!
13:23 flawful: :^)
13:23 flawful: I asked him to make me an easy diff, so I'm to blame :(
13:23 DavidEd: dont know if m4m would be a good idea though ;_;
13:23 DavidEd: or wait
13:24 flawful: any reason in -particular?
13:24 flawful: coz EOS m4m sounds coool :3
13:24 DavidEd: cause i feel like were gonna force our own maps on each others xD
13:24 flawful: nahhh
13:25 DavidEd: i guess xD
13:25 flawful: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044633 this <3]
13:26 DavidEd: you can mod the gd diffs ;P
13:26 DavidEd: my insane dont need many more mods
13:28 *flawful is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/942814 ginkiha - EOS [Insane]]
13:29 flawful: I can see why
13:29 DavidEd: ;)
13:29 flawful: you're map <3
13:30 flawful: your*
13:31 flawful: damn
13:31 flawful: I need to re-map xD
13:31 *DavidEd is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/963228 ginkiha - EOS [Insane]]
13:31 flawful: do you have my version?
13:32 flawful: it's shit ;_;
13:33 DavidEd: you have better note place ment
13:34 flawful: not really ;_;
13:34 DavidEd: i like it ^^
13:34 DavidEd: there were just few things i noticed
13:34 flawful: oh and, I'll favorite your map
13:34 flawful: because EOS <3
13:35 DavidEd: its the best ^^
13:35 flawful: yes, please tell me what you noticed *^*
13:36 DavidEd: 01:40:866 (4) - you can drag out the repeat like i did in my diff
13:37 flawful: is this the start of an irc mod? xD
13:37 DavidEd: i think so xD
13:37 flawful: if it is I'm ready for it~ <3
13:38 flawful: a'ight, lez do dizzz
13:38 DavidEd: 02:04:180 (3,4) - i think you could probably replace these with something that leads up to the stream
13:39 DavidEd: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044711 something like this or something
13:39 DavidEd: i repeated those words lo
13:40 flawful: that looks awesome
13:40 DavidEd: 02:15:151 (4,5) - same
13:41 flawful: will do o7
13:43 flawful: done lol
13:43 DavidEd: 00:33:666 (3,1) - i dislike these overlaps so stack 1 on 3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044747
13:45 DavidEd: i think if you polish the entire map and fix a couple of overlaps it will look and play amazingly
13:46 DavidEd: 00:57:494 (4) - like these for example, you can stack the sliderend on 00:56:637 (2) - sliderend
13:46 flawful: yea, since one wrong overlap/blanket/DS will lead to another problem and so on~
13:46 DavidEd: stuff like that
13:47 DavidEd: oh and make sure to look at patterns that come after if you fix overlaps and such
13:48 DavidEd: so ds and blankets dont get messed up ^^
13:48 DavidEd: 01:03:666 (2) - stack it on previous 01:02:808 (7) - 
13:50 DavidEd: 01:37:437 - stream jumps dont belong in insanes ;_;
13:51 DavidEd: unless you decrease the spacing between 01:37:694 (4) - and 01:37:780 (1) - 
13:51 flawful: I'll just increase the DS on these 01:37:437 (1,2,3,4) -
13:51 DavidEd: other than that i have no other comment ^^
13:52 DavidEd: or that
13:52 flawful: yea xd
13:52 flawful: just post our chatlog in the forum for free kds <3
13:52 DavidEd: how do i save logs xD
13:52 DavidEd: been so long since i ever did irc
13:52 flawful: ./savelog

Forever & ever <3

TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

TyrantsEye2014 2016-05-01T10:38:21+00:00

tagalog mod hindi po ako marunong mag ingles D:

[Akitoshi's Easy]

lol no problems found here
sasuga

[Normal]

00:01:608 (2) - wag mo na lagyan ng reverse arrow dito
00:04:351 (2,3) - lipat mo sa hindi matatakpan ng 00:02:808 (1)
00:16:866 (1) - ganun din dito
00:47:037 (1) - ^ rotate mo nalang then adjust mo nalang yung ibang notes
00:53:551 (1) - taggalin mo po yung NC
00:56:980 (4,5) - crtl+G tapos crtl+G ulit sa 00:56:980 (4) tapos snap mo nalang yung 00:57:665 (5)
01:16:008 (2) - taggalin mo yung slider tapos lagay ka nalang ng circle sa white tick
02:23:380 (7) - remove NC
02:07:608 (1) - ^
02:15:837 (2) - blanket

[Hard]

00:05:551 (1) - nani
00:08:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - aaaaaaaaa ang hirap neto para sa mga average players, lagay ka nalang ng slider
00:19:094 (9,1,2) - woag eto din
00:32:294 (7) - remove NC
00:58:008 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - eto din ang hirap. pwede sana to pag insane or extra
01:03:151 (1,2,1,2) - ^
01:07:266 (4) - remove NC
01:30:408 (7) - lol tanggalin mo yung 1/6
01:33:666 (1) - remove NC
01:50:808 (3) - ^
01:53:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - wtf
01:55:780 (1) - remove NC
02:04:866 (1) - fix blanket
02:05:551 (2) - masyadong malapit
02:08:123 (2,3,4,5,6) - wtf
02:09:666 (1,2,1,2) - slider nalang lagay mo or gawa ka ng masmadaling pattern
02:11:723 (1,2,1,2) - ^
02:13:094 (3,4) - remove NC
02:14:808 (1) - ^
02:24:066 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - wtf is dis

[abanes16's Insane]

00:04:351 (1) - fix blanket
00:05:551 (1) - ^
00:06:580 (3) - ^
00:16:523 (1) - ^
00:57:323 (4,5) - ipaglayo ito ng konti
01:05:208 (7) - remove nc
01:08:637 (1) - fix blanket
01:12:066 (1) - remove nc
01:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - lipat mo sa tabi ng 01:37:780 (4)
02:11:380 (9) - lipat mo sa x:168|y:188 tapos yung 02:11:551 (10) - stack mo sa 02:11:037 (7) -

[Insane]

00:16:866 (2) - move sa x:204|y:208
00:43:094 (2,3) - remove NC
00:43:094 (2,3) - lipat mo sa x:272|y:148
01:03:837 (3) - remove NC
01:08:980 (3) - ^
00:56:294 (1,2) - masmaganda siguro kong streams dito

goodluck :^)

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-01T14:57:26+00:00

Misaka 10032 wrote:
tagalog mod hindi po ako marunong mag ingles D:

[Normal]

00:01:608 (2) - wag mo na lagyan ng reverse arrow dito there's sound so ye, no change
00:04:351 (2,3) - lipat mo sa hindi matatakpan ng 00:02:808 (1) le overlap is fine
00:16:866 (1) - ganun din dito sem
00:47:037 (1) - ^ rotate mo nalang then adjust mo nalang yung ibang notes ^
00:53:551 (1) - taggalin mo po yung NC
00:56:980 (4,5) - crtl+G tapos crtl+G ulit sa 00:56:980 (4) tapos snap mo nalang yung 00:57:665 (5) I don't see the reason for this tbh
01:16:008 (2) - taggalin mo yung slider tapos lagay ka nalang ng circle sa white tick vocals
02:23:380 (7) - remove NC
02:07:608 (1) - ^
02:15:837 (2) - blanket
[Hard]

00:05:551 (1) - nani Chimes
00:08:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - aaaaaaaaa ang hirap neto para sa mga average players, lagay ka nalang ng slider aaaaaaa I'll be keeping this :3
00:19:094 (9,1,2) - woag eto din no change la
00:32:294 (7) - remove NC
00:58:008 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - eto din ang hirap. pwede sana to pag insane or extra Let them have a challenge plox, 3.7* isn't your everyday hard diff anyway
01:03:151 (1,2,1,2) - ^ I'm sorry, but this is part of the style, if I remove this and change it with a mediocre pattern. There would be nothing special about this difficulty
01:07:266 (4) - remove NC mumbled words start here, also it wouldn't be consistent if I removed nc here
01:30:408 (7) - lol tanggalin mo yung 1/6 bakit..?
01:33:666 (1) - remove NC new scale so no
01:50:808 (3) - ^ moved le nc here 01:51:151 (1) - to balance le nc
01:53:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - wtf that's style yo
01:55:780 (1) - remove NC "Onn and onn and oonnnn" so yea, I wont
02:04:866 (1) - fix blanket
02:05:551 (2) - masyadong malapit nah
02:08:123 (2,3,4,5,6) - wtf I'm not making this diff liek le usual 2.9-3.3* so ye
02:09:666 (1,2,1,2) - slider nalang lagay mo or gawa ka ng masmadaling pattern no
02:11:723 (1,2,1,2) - ^ same
02:13:094 (3,4) - remove NC nc was used to highlight le lyrics
02:14:808 (1) - ^
02:24:066 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - wtf is dis I've stated my reasons and I'm keeping this
[Insane]

00:16:866 (2) - move sa x:204|y:208
00:43:094 (2,3) - remove NC le nc here is aesthetically pleasing aaaa
00:43:094 (2,3) - lipat mo sa x:272|y:148 nuhni
01:03:837 (3) - remove NC panget tingnan pag walang nc, it highlights le lyrics yo
01:08:980 (3) - ^ same as le previous
00:56:294 (1,2) - masmaganda siguro kong streams dito I prefer le sliders
goodluck :^)

Salamat :3

no reply = fixed

DeletedUser_6181859

DeletedUser_6181859 2016-05-01T16:32:26+00:00

Hey, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.
P.S. from #modreqs... Another mapset with EOS? Okay, i love this track.
P.P.S. A-E-U-O-A-U-EEEEEEEE-A-E-U-O

Song and beatmaps

Add "drum'n'bass", "of fighters" to Tags
What about change to "Soft"-sample mode?
Add empty (44kb) .wav file for sliderslide.wav

Akitoshi's Easy

hey again:D
00:24:751 (1) - fix sliderpoints (all red or all standart)
00:45:323 (3) - make points away from each other
00:56:294 (3) - fix sliderpoints?
01:27:837 (1) - align (like in %image%)

01:33:323 (1) - end in 01:34:351 ?
01:34:694 (2) - end in 01:35:723 ?
02:00:751 (1) - make like in %image%?

02:03:151 (4) - clap
02:07:608 (3) - normal tight elbow?
02:18:580 (3) - make like in %image%?

Normal

00:02:808 (1,2,3) - don't overlap
00:12:751 (3,1) - align stack
01:01:780 (4,5,6,7,1) - overdose objects
01:05:723 (6,1) - change to slider?
01:22:351 (1) - remove?
01:38:808 (1) - end in 01:40:866
02:00:751 (1,2,3) - change to slider
02:14:808 (8) - set nc here and remove nc in 02:15:151 (1)

Hard

00:05:551 (1) - make 1 repeat instead 3
00:08:980 (5,6) - strange stack
00:10:351 (5,6) - make reversed sliders like in 00:32:294 (7,8)
00:13:780 (1,2,3) - stack
00:19:094 (9,1,2,3) - i think stack isn't good idea
00:20:980 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:42:580 (1,2,3) - remake this pattern
00:47:380 (3,4,5,6,1) - i think stack isn't good idea
01:03:837 (1,2) - don't overlap
01:10:866 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - i think stack isn't good idea
01:36:408 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:37:437 (7) - nc
01:48:408 (1,2,3) - remake this pattern
02:17:894 (2) - Ctrl+G

I guess, you need Advanced~3*
Good luck!
{end of mod}

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-05-01T17:22:14+00:00

100bit wrote:
Akitoshi's Easy
hey again:D
00:24:751 (1) - fix sliderpoints (all red or all standart) intentional
00:45:323 (3) - make points away from each other it's fine dud
00:56:294 (3) - fix sliderpoints? ok
01:27:837 (1) - align (like in %image%) nah, it's Intended

01:33:323 (1) - end in 01:34:351 ? this two sliders emphasized the drums
01:34:694 (2) - end in 01:35:723 ?
02:00:751 (1) - make like in %image%? current one funnier to see

02:03:151 (4) - clap no, I bet it's cymbals
02:07:608 (3) - normal tight elbow? nej
02:18:580 (3) - make like in %image%? I exactly set the red curving point on 02:18:923 - and 02:19:266 - to emphasize the main rhythm.

Thank you for the check!

v

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: eos.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54841
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 32980,87837
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8000009

[Metadata]
Title:EOS
TitleUnicode:EOS
Artist:ginkiha
ArtistUnicode:ginkiha
Creator:flawful
Version:Akitoshi's Easy
Source:BMS
Tags:Akitoshi Dawn Chill DnB abanes16
BeatmapID:963916
BeatmapSetID:448829

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Snow-and-sunset.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,77065,86397
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-01T17:37:40+00:00

100bit wrote:
Hey, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate. No problem m8
P.S. from #modreqs... Another mapset with EOS? Okay, i love this track. <3
P.P.S. A-E-U-O-A-U-EEEEEEEE-A-E-U-O I SHOULD ADD THIS TO THE TAGS--//slapped
Song and beatmaps
Add "drum'n'bass", "of fighters" to Tags
What about change to "Soft"-sample mode?
Add empty (44kb) .wav file for sliderslide.wav will do!

Normal
00:02:808 (1,2,3) - don't overlap Remapped
00:12:751 (3,1) - align stack
01:01:780 (4,5,6,7,1) - overdose objects Remapped
01:05:723 (6,1) - change to slider?
01:22:351 (1) - remove? nah
01:38:808 (1) - end in 01:40:866 I ended on the start of the drum things
02:00:751 (1,2,3) - change to slider
02:14:808 (8) - set nc here and remove nc in 02:15:151 (1)
Hard
00:05:551 (1) - make 1 repeat instead 3 hmm?
00:08:980 (5,6) - strange stack
00:10:351 (5,6) - make reversed sliders like in 00:32:294 (7,8) ruins the flow, I'll keep it for now
00:13:780 (1,2,3) - stack
00:19:094 (9,1,2,3) - i think stack isn't good idea
00:20:980 (2,3,4,5) - ^ this plays good tbh
00:42:580 (1,2,3) - remake this pattern
00:47:380 (3,4,5,6,1) - i think stack isn't good idea I'm keeping it
01:03:837 (1,2) - don't overlap
01:10:866 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - i think stack isn't good idea Remapped
01:36:408 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:37:437 (7) - nc
01:48:408 (1,2,3) - remake this pattern nothing seems wrong with this tho?
02:17:894 (2) - Ctrl+G
I guess, you need Advanced~3*
Good luck!
{end of mod}

Thanks for the mod

no reply = fixed

just click

245 posts

Joined May 2014

just click 2016-05-01T19:05:33+00:00

Hey, M4M!

Akitoshi's Easy

00:04:351 (2) - You could make this slider the same as 00:01:608 (2) since they have the same sound.

00:26:123 (3) - Curve towards the tail of this looks slight uneven if you look closely, making it a weird blanket with the next note.

01:02:637 (1,2) - End these on the white ticks? They sound really off the way they are right now compared to the 2 sliders before these.

Nothing really much I can find.

abanes16's Insane

00:01:094 (3) - You could make this slider the same shape as the sliders before it, the shape seems really random and doesn't really fit in.

00:02:294 (3,4,1) - You can form a better blanket with these.

00:05:551 (1) - Curve this more for a better blanket.

00:07:094 (4,6) - You can blanket these.

00:08:294 (5) - Use the same DS for this slider in the stream, it seems very random.

00:10:523 - I hear the stream start here.

00:15:494 (3,6) - You could blanket these, but it might ruin the star pattern you have here, so possibly adjust it if you make this change.

00:18:580 (3,4,5,6) - Star pattern here looks a little uneven, I would fix it up a bit.

00:22:523 (2,4) - Blanket is slightly uneven.

00:26:123 (1) - You could make this similar to 00:24:066 (8) since the song allows it.

00:28:523 (6) - Curve to form a blanket with (3)?

00:32:294 (1,2,3,4) - This section of the stream seems jagged, smooth the stream out more here? You could also try the Convert Slider to Stream feature in "Compose" at the top where File, Edit, View, etc. all are. Try it out a bit so you understand how to use it though.

00:37:094 (1) - Curve slightly more so you can form a blanket with the (4).

00:38:466 - ^

00:43:951 (1) - You could curve this better so that it the curve is very similar to the slider below it if you know what I mean. It's slightly uneven.

00:47:208 (2) - Space this more evenly between the notes.

00:54:923 (1) - Adjust this slightly so that it is even with the stream. It looks uneven.

00:55:608 (3,4) - You could form a better blanket with these.

00:56:294 (1,2,3) - Make sure these all have the same DS, the (3) is further away compared to the other two.

01:00:751 (4) - You could stack this better with the (8).

01:05:037 (6) - This plays better stacked on the (2) because the sudden increase in spacing is random.

01:38:808 (9) - I don't think you need this note, the stream ends at the (8). You could remove this note and start the spinner where this note is instead.

01:42:923 (5,6) - You could make these both the same curvature.

01:59:037 (4,5) - ^

02:04:866 (5,6,7,8) - I would straighten this stream out, it looks weird how it right now.

Insane

00:05:551 (1) - I see why you added this reverse slider, but it just seems very random. I think it would be better if you stuck to the beat of the song still.

00:06:066 (2,3,4) - Make these all the same shape to go with the song?

00:10:523 (2) - Kind of a random kickslider, I would just make this a whole stream.

00:19:437 (2,5) - Blanket these possibly?

00:26:123 (1) - I think these sliders would play better if you made them similar to 00:24:751 (1)

00:42:751 (1,1,1) - Not sure how I feel about this, I think it's better to go with the beat. You could ask others on their opinion though.

01:00:237 (5) - This slider doesn't really feel natural because it skips over the large white tick, which is the main beat. Maybe just use the rhythm you currently have?

01:01:608 (1) - I don't really hear the vocals indicating the kick slider yet, it starts at the (2).

01:04:266 - Stream could start here.

01:44:294 (1) - Curve to form a blanket with the (2)?

01:56:637 (1,2) - Kind of the same thing with these sliders, it plays better if you go by the same beat you have previously. If you want, you could just shorten them, but I don't think it should be timed for the whole thing since it skips over beats.

02:03:408 - Stream could go here still.

02:19:780 (9) - Bad polarity with this slider. It doesn't sound right to start on a red tick and end on a blue one.

02:20:980 (3) - Blanket with the previous slider?

Cool mapset overall. Some neatness could be improved still along with some of the rhythm. Good luck!
Here's a star.

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-01T19:47:55+00:00

Breezy wrote:
Hey, M4M!

Insane

00:05:551 (1) - I see why you added this reverse slider, but it just seems very random. I think it would be better if you stuck to the beat of the song still. I'm keeping this

00:06:066 (2,3,4) - Make these all the same shape to go with the song?

00:10:523 (2) - Kind of a random kickslider, I would just make this a whole stream. Keeping this too!

00:19:437 (2,5) - Blanket these possibly?

00:26:123 (1) - I think these sliders would play better if you made them similar to 00:24:751 (1) They highlight the flute-ish instrument in the background

00:42:751 (1,1,1) - Not sure how I feel about this, I think it's better to go with the beat. You could ask others on their opinion though. those are for the vibrating sounds in the background

01:00:237 (5) - This slider doesn't really feel natural because it skips over the large white tick, which is the main beat. Maybe just use the rhythm you currently have? I don't really see others complaining about this yet, I'm keeping it for now

01:01:608 (1) - I don't really hear the vocals indicating the kick slider yet, it starts at the (2). same ^

01:04:266 - Stream could start here. I wanna highlight the random voice in the song so I wont change anything

01:44:294 (1) - Curve to form a blanket with the (2)?

01:56:637 (1,2) - Kind of the same thing with these sliders, it plays better if you go by the same beat you have previously. If you want, you could just shorten them, but I don't think it should be timed for the whole thing since it skips over beats. I'll wait for more complaints about these sliders before I do any remapping on that part

02:03:408 - Stream could go here still.

02:19:780 (9) - Bad polarity with this slider. It doesn't sound right to start on a red tick and end on a blue one. changed to 1/2 slider then replaced them

02:20:980 (3) - Blanket with the previous slider?

Cool mapset overall. Some neatness could be improved still along with some of the rhythm. Good luck!
Here's a star.

Thank you for the mod and the star!

no reply = fixed

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-05-02T01:21:57+00:00

Misaka 10032 wrote:
tagalog mod hindi po ako marunong mag ingles D:

[abanes16's Insane]

00:04:351 (1) - fix blanket
00:05:551 (1) - ^
00:06:580 (3) - ^
00:16:523 (1) - ^
00:57:323 (4,5) - ipaglayo ito ng konti
01:05:208 (7) - remove nc
01:08:637 (1) - fix blanket
01:12:066 (1) - remove nc
01:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - lipat mo sa tabi ng 01:37:780 (4)
02:11:380 (9) - lipat mo sa x:168|y:188 tapos yung 02:11:551 (10) - stack mo sa 02:11:037 (7) -

goodluck :^)

Maraming salamat sa iyong binigay na tulong dahil sa pag ayos ng aming mapa
walang tugon=ayos

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-05-02T01:56:18+00:00

[quote="Breezy"]Hey, M4M!

abanes16's Insane

00:01:094 (3) - You could make this slider the same shape as the sliders before it, the shape seems really random and doesn't really fit in. ok

00:02:294 (3,4,1) - You can form a better blanket with these.

00:05:551 (1) - Curve this more for a better blanket. hai

00:07:094 (4,6) - You can blanket these. ok

00:08:294 (5) - Use the same DS for this slider in the stream, it seems very random. I'm no using ds tho

00:10:523 - I hear the stream start here.Nah

00:15:494 (3,6) - You could blanket these, but it might ruin the star pattern you have here, so possibly adjust it if you make this change. ok

00:18:580 (3,4,5,6) - Star pattern here looks a little uneven, I would fix it up a bit. ok

00:22:523 (2,4) - Blanket is slightly uneven.ok

00:26:123 (1) - You could make this similar to 00:24:066 (8) since the song allows it. Nah

00:28:523 (6) - Curve to form a blanket with (3)? ok

00:32:294 (1,2,3,4) - This section of the stream seems jagged, smooth the stream out more here? You could also try the Convert Slider to Stream feature in "Compose" at the top where File, Edit, View, etc. all are. Try it out a bit so you understand how to use it though.lol akitoshi sensei alreadt teach me that

00:37:094 (1) - Curve slightly more so you can form a blanket with the (4). nope, the form of the slider will change and it is already stacked at (3)

00:38:466 - ^ok

00:43:951 (1) - You could curve this better so that it the curve is very similar to the slider below it if you know what I mean. It's slightly uneven.ok

00:47:208 (2) - Space this more evenly between the notes.ok

00:54:923 (1) - Adjust this slightly so that it is even with the stream. It looks uneven.ok

00:55:608 (3,4) - You could form a better blanket with these.ok

00:56:294 (1,2,3) - Make sure these all have the same DS, the (3) is further away compared to the other two.ok

01:00:751 (4) - You could stack this better with the (8). ok

01:05:037 (6) - This plays better stacked on the (2) because the sudden increase in spacing is random.ok

01:38:808 (9) - I don't think you need this note, the stream ends at the (8). You could remove this note and start the spinner where this note is instead.Nope

01:42:923 (5,6) - You could make these both the same curvature.ok

01:59:037 (4,5) - ^

02:04:866 (5,6,7,8) - I would straighten this stream out, it looks weird how it right now.ok

Thanks for teh mod

pepe

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54841
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.600001

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TitleUnicode:EOS
Artist:ginkiha
ArtistUnicode:ginkiha
Creator:flawful
Version:abanes16's Insane
Source:BMS
Tags:Akitoshi Dawn Chill DnB abanes16
BeatmapID:964509
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Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-05-02T04:05:07+00:00

Breezy wrote:
Akitoshi's Easy

00:04:351 (2) - You could make this slider the same as 00:01:608 (2) since they have the same sound. they are already same beat slider

00:26:123 (3) - Curve towards the tail of this looks slight uneven if you look closely, making it a weird blanket with the next note. maybe fixed, still uneven sliderpoints due to polishing the blanket tho

01:02:637 (1,2) - End these on the white ticks? They sound really off the way they are right now compared to the 2 sliders before these. wat. They already ended on white ticks lol

Nothing really much I can find.

Thanks~

432

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: eos.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54841
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8000009

[Metadata]
Title:EOS
TitleUnicode:EOS
Artist:ginkiha
ArtistUnicode:ginkiha
Creator:flawful
Version:Akitoshi's Easy
Source:BMS
Tags:Akitoshi Dawn Chill DnB abanes16 drum'n'bass of fighters
BeatmapID:963916
BeatmapSetID:448829

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

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DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2016-05-02T08:55:28+00:00

Hi~

Insane :

00:10:694 (1) - remove nc
00:11:380 (1) - ^
00:25:780 (5,1) - not stacked properly?
01:08:980 (1) - remove nc
01:40:694 (3) - move to 298,289
02:01:780 (1) - remove nc
02:14:637 (2) - move left to x:85
02:20:294 (1) - remove nc

abanes16's Insane :

00:07:780 (6) - move to 107,286
00:16:523 (1) - make is bit more curved?
00:49:437 - remove finish
01:30:580 - add finish
01:36:066 (5) - ^
01:36:751 - ^^
02:05:723 (3) - remove clap
02:11:723 - remove finish
02:16:694 - 02:17:037 - remove claps and add clap to 02:16:866 (3) - @~@

Hard :

Decrease OD

Rest is up to u -w-

Good Luck~

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-02T10:03:17+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
Hi~

Insane :
00:10:694 (1) - remove nc
00:11:380 (1) - ^
00:25:780 (5,1) - not stacked properly?
01:08:980 (1) - remove nc
01:40:694 (3) - move to 298,289
02:01:780 (1) - remove nc
02:14:637 (2) - move left to x:85
02:20:294 (1) - remove nc
Hard :
Decrease OD
Rest is up to u -w-

Good Luck~

Followed every suggestion~ = w=)
Thanks for modding!

No reply = Fixed

Frozen Child

121 posts

Joined September 2011

Frozen Child 2016-05-02T13:59:21+00:00

Abanes16's Insane
01:16:437 - note?
01:40:866 - add a timing sec ( volume to 30~40% )
02:25:008 - note?

insane
00:05:551 (1) - change the sampleset to soft
02:25:008 - note?

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-05-02T15:06:08+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
Hi~

abanes16's Insane :
00:07:780 (6) - move to 107,286ok
00:16:523 (1) - make is bit more curved? ok
00:49:437 - remove finish ok
01:30:580 - add finishok
01:36:066 (5) - ^ok
01:36:751 - ^^ok
02:05:723 (3) - remove clap no
02:11:723 - remove finish ok
02:16:694 - 02:17:037 - remove claps and add clap to 02:16:866 (3) - @~@
ohhhh nice

Rest is up to u -w-

Good Luck~

Thank for checking my hitsounding

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-05-02T15:08:54+00:00

Abanes16's Insane
01:16:437 - note? no
01:40:866 - add a timing sec ( volume to 30~40% )ok
02:25:008 - note? no

Thanks for checking

updeto des

osu file format v14

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Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-02T15:39:50+00:00

Nygma wrote:
insane
00:05:551 (1) - change the sampleset to soft Not necessary
02:25:008 - note? Nah

lol, thanks for checking abanes' diff xd

Miel7

12 posts

Joined December 2015

Miel7 2016-05-02T16:45:20+00:00

Bonjour [Abahne's insane]

00:02:292 the slider you put on X:380 and Y :224

00:05:208 you put on the slider on X:320 and Y :308

00:05:551 The slider you put on X:456 and Y :304

00:06:580 The slider you put on X:228 and Y :112

00:07:094 The slider you put on X :148 and Y :240

00:19:780 Th hit circle put on X :24 and Y :168

[Insane]

00:55:951 Put on the slider on X :248 and Y :328

01:32:294 Put on the slider on X :312 and Y :176

domSaur

1,263 posts

Joined December 2013

domSaur 2016-05-02T17:22:27+00:00

ayy there

[Insane]

00:05:551 (1) - just put a 1/1 here. the 1/4 just does not fit and you've had a 1/1 on the prev beats like this so maintain consistency
00:07:094 (1) - NC
00:32:294 (1,2,3,4) - having the odd and even sliders' distance would it neater.. the spacing of 00:32:294 (1,3) - should also be the spacing of 00:32:466 (2,4) -
01:31:951 (2) - pull this up a liiiiiiitle upwards.. it should not touch 01:31:780 (1) -
01:38:123 (1) - can you also move this slightly away from the streams... this entire section is a bit too cluttered tbh
01:49:094 (1) - NC'ing this will make the 2nd line of circles might make it more neat
01:51:837 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you can think of smth cooler.. in the first verse with the music exactly like this you had 1/4s and 1/8s and now at the 2nd part where the intensity of the song can be heightened, it's downplayed to just 1/2 circles... idk man, im prolly just talking out of my ass so nvm this xd

[abanes]
00:10:694 (6) - there's no reason for this to be outside(or for it to be the only one). Put it back in the stack
01:12:066 (7) - maybe nc. the combo is unnecessarily long
01:28:180 (2,3) - blanket with each other mayb

check AImod as well.
dunno if these are of any help but eh..

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-03T01:26:37+00:00

Miel7 wrote:
Bonjour

[Insane]

00:55:951 Put on the slider on X :248 and Y :328 this doesn't look good lol

01:32:294 Put on the slider on X :312 and Y :176 It's fine as it is xd

Thank you for modding! xd

domSaur wrote:
ayy there ayyy ello = w=)/

[Insane]
[list]
[*]00:05:551 (1) - just put a 1/1 here. the 1/4 just does not fit and you've had a 1/1 on the prev beats like this so maintain consistency the 1/4 was used to put emphasis on the Chimes
[*]00:07:094 (1) - NC
[*]00:32:294 (1,2,3,4) - having the odd and even sliders' distance would it neater.. the spacing of 00:32:294 (1,3) - should also be the spacing of 00:32:466 (2,4) -
[*]01:31:951 (2) - pull this up a liiiiiiitle upwards.. it should not touch 01:31:780 (1) -
[*]01:38:123 (1) - can you also move this slightly away from the streams... this entire section is a bit too cluttered tbh changed most of the positions... I hope it looks cleaner now
[*]01:49:094 (1) - NC'ing this will make the 2nd line of circles might make it more neat
[*]01:51:837 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you can think of smth cooler.. in the first verse with the music exactly like this you had 1/4s and 1/8s and now at the 2nd part where the intensity of the song can be heightened, it's downplayed to just 1/2 circles... idk man, im prolly just talking out of my ass so nvm this xd music was falling so nah xd

dunno if these are of any help but eh..

Thanks for the mod!

no reply = fixed

Last edited by Fraye 2016-05-03T09:02:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-05-03T03:41:35+00:00

[Abahne's insane]

00:02:292 the slider you put on X:380 and Y :224 ok

00:05:208 you put on the slider on X:320 and Y :308 no

00:05:551 The slider you put on X:456 and Y :304 no

00:06:580 The slider you put on X:228 and Y :112 no

00:07:094 The slider you put on X :148 and Y :240 no

00:19:780 Th hit circle put on X :24 and Y :168 no
Thanks 4 checking

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-05-03T04:01:08+00:00

domSaur wrote:
ayy there

[abanes]
[*]00:10:694 (6) - there's no reason for this to be outside(or for it to be the only one). Put it back in the stack ok
[*]01:12:066 (7) - maybe nc. the combo is unnecessarily long ok
[*]01:28:180 (2,3) - blanket with each other mayb[/list] ok

check AImod as well.
dunno if these are of any help but eh..

labyu thanks for modding

updeto onegai

osu file format v14

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AlienGo

23 posts

Joined March 2013

AlienGo 2016-05-03T17:17:00+00:00

Sry for being so bad >< part one of two

Insane

00:55 AlienGo: erm firstly > was thinking maybe change the slider ticks to 2?
00:55 flawful: why?
00:55 AlienGo: since you use a lot of longer sliders
00:56 flawful: not really "alot" lol
00:56 AlienGo: the ticks would sound better in half beats since the song is half beat heavy
00:56 AlienGo: just a small thing
00:56 flawful: I see
00:57 flawful: anything else?
00:57 AlienGo: 00:08:294 -
00:57 AlienGo: this jump patter
00:57 AlienGo: n
00:57 flawful: yes?
00:58 AlienGo: are you happy with thje spacing? some of it seems a bit random
00:58 AlienGo: 00:09:837 (2,3,4) -
00:58 AlienGo: like these look a bit off
00:58 flawful: I spaced according to the intensity
00:59 flawful: we'll see what others think before I make any changes lol
00:59 AlienGo: ok
00:59 flawful: since you're currently the only one to point that out
00:59 flawful: what else?
01:00 AlienGo: 00:15:151 (1,2) -
01:00 AlienGo: if youre mapping intensity
01:00 AlienGo: maybe widen this one a bit?
01:00 flawful: that's not really a part here the song goes up-beat tho xd
01:00 flawful: where*
01:01 flawful: I sense no intensification aaaaaa
01:01 AlienGo: was following the um
01:01 AlienGo: idek
01:01 AlienGo: what that sound is
01:01 AlienGo: XD
01:01 AlienGo: "whistle"
01:01 flawful: I hear no change even in the whistle :/
01:02 flawful: 00:15:837 (6) - this is where I hear variation in the song lol
01:02 flawful: from here 00:13:780 (1) - to 00:15:751 (5) - is basically the same xd
01:03 AlienGo: aight
01:03 flawful: what else?
01:03 AlienGo: 00:17:208 (3,4) - small thing, spacing to the slider before
01:04 flawful: anything you'd want me to do with that?
01:04 AlienGo: make it the same as those two notes
01:04 AlienGo: its like just a small adjustment left up
01:05 flawful: time stamp pleaaaaase <3
01:05 AlienGo: 00:16:866 (2,3) -
01:05 AlienGo: make that the same as
01:05 AlienGo: 00:17:208 (3,4) -
01:06 AlienGo: pretrty small thing sry haha
01:06 flawful: but they are the same
01:06 AlienGo: its SLIGHTLY off :3
01:06 flawful: oh wait
01:06 flawful: it's .10 OFF
01:06 flawful: HOLY HIT
01:06 AlienGo: LOL
01:07 AlienGo: 00:18:237 (2,3,4,5) -
01:07 flawful: fixed spacing danke
01:07 AlienGo: looks like 2,3,4 are spaced the same but why did you make 4,5 smaller
01:07 AlienGo: ?
01:07 AlienGo: theres no change in the map its a bit random
01:08 AlienGo: maybe mover 3 closer to the end of 2?
01:08 AlienGo: so its a pair jump?
01:08 AlienGo: if that makes sense
01:09 AlienGo: 00:17:208 (3,4,5,6) - so its kinda like this
01:09 AlienGo: OR
01:09 AlienGo: make the spacing gradually smaller over the 4 notes
01:10 flawful: I think it flows good as it is tbh
01:10 AlienGo: ok
01:11 flawful: anything else?
01:11 AlienGo: 00:20:294 (8,9) -
01:11 AlienGo: this jump i think is fine
01:12 AlienGo: but when i play it witht he next two notes
01:12 AlienGo: i always
01:12 flawful: so you want equal spacing
01:12 flawful: d o n e
01:12 AlienGo: misread it the next note as 1,3,2,4 instead of 1,2,3,4
01:14 AlienGo: i understand why you made it 1,2 at the same spot but i always misread it
01:14 AlienGo: maybe cos it overlapped with 9 so moving it may have fixed that
01:15 AlienGo: 00:25:437 (3,5) -
01:15 AlienGo: switch these around?
01:16 AlienGo: the slider seems to be pointing at 5 so i think itll flow better
01:18 flawful: seems like weird flow afterwards idk
01:18 AlienGo: 00:26:808 (2) - slider doesnt seem to be pointing anywhere, perhaps adjust the tail so the elbow and tail point to the next note or move the next note slightly left
01:19 flawful: nah
01:19 flawful: that's the point of the slider lol
01:19 AlienGo: that it doesnt flow?
01:19 AlienGo: point*
01:20 flawful: it flows
01:20 flawful: yea
01:20 AlienGo: 00:30:237 (1) -
01:20 flawful: oh gosh a pun
01:21 AlienGo: wait wrong note
01:21 AlienGo: 00:30:580 (3) -
01:21 AlienGo: i think it should be stacked with 2
01:22 flawful: that sounds like a nice idea lol
01:22 AlienGo: same with the next one XD
01:23 flawful: yea :3
01:23 AlienGo: finally something useful XD
01:23 AlienGo: 00:32:123 (3,1) -
01:23 AlienGo: this is kinda awkward to play
01:23 flawful: I spaced these farther
01:23 flawful: 00:30:751 (1,2,3) -
01:23 AlienGo: i agree
01:23 flawful: since I don't like things inappropriately touching :^)
01:23 AlienGo: since youre building some intensity

01:24 AlienGo: oh you
01:24 AlienGo: hmm just on that point
01:25 flawful: you got kds
01:25 flawful: LOL
01:25 AlienGo: consider also making 00:31:437 (2,3) - stacked? or change the spacing
01:25 flawful: anything else?
01:25 AlienGo: wait i did?
01:25 flawful: n o
01:25 AlienGo: 00:32:123 (3,1) -
01:25 flawful: it would play horrible
01:25 AlienGo: from before
01:25 flawful: n o
01:26 flawful: Im not stacking the next patterns
01:26 AlienGo: al g
01:26 AlienGo: BUT
01:26 flawful: a$$
01:26 flawful: :^)
01:26 AlienGo: did you comment on thejump to the kick slider?
01:26 AlienGo: "kinda awkward to play
01:26 AlienGo: '
01:26 AlienGo: "
01:27 flawful: ?
01:27 flawful: no one's complaining(?)
01:27 flawful: no one else*
01:28 AlienGo: pl
01:28 AlienGo: ok
01:29 flawful: continue lmao
01:30 flawful: if you're gonna say these are irrelevant 00:42:751 (1,1,1) -
01:30 flawful: lower the effect volume to 0%
01:30 AlienGo: no
01:30 AlienGo: i actually quite liked them :3
01:30 flawful: yay \o/
01:30 flawful: <3
01:31 AlienGo: but i dont think it would make sense to lower the vol to 0
01:31 AlienGo: defeats the purpose of making it like that
01:31 flawful: no
01:31 flawful: I just meant
01:31 flawful: to listen to it xd
01:31 flawful: and they're like, the only sound that stands out in that part so ye
01:32 AlienGo: eh i think its good

01:32 flawful: conitnue please xd
01:32 AlienGo: 00:44:808 (4,5,6) -
01:33 AlienGo: why the sudden spacing change from the previous notes?
01:33 flawful: maybe coz
01:33 flawful: I haven't remapped that part yet
01:33 flawful: LOL
01:33 AlienGo: oh LOL
01:33 AlienGo: so its gonna be changed?
01:34 flawful: idk
01:34 AlienGo: up to you as long as you can justufy it XD
01:34 AlienGo: 00:47:723 (5,6) -
01:35 AlienGo: how come these are stacked?
01:35 AlienGo: i mean it looks nice and plays okay
01:35 flawful: no reason
01:35 AlienGo: but a little random haaha
01:35 AlienGo: 00:49:780 (3,4,5) -
01:36 AlienGo: 3,4 not touching?
01:36 flawful: nope
01:36 flawful: that's common nowadays
01:36 AlienGo: yea
01:36 flawful: lmaoo
01:36 AlienGo: but you made them touch previously
01:36 AlienGo: idk just commenting on consistency
01:36 flawful: where
01:36 AlienGo: i guess make them all touch or all not touch
01:36 flawful: I wanna know too

01:37 flawful: l00d^
01:37 flawful: :^)
01:37 AlienGo: 00:36:066 (2,3) -
01:37 AlienGo: youu
01:37 flawful: oh I see
01:39 AlienGo: 00:52:180 (1) - from here to kiai map it more intensely?
01:39 AlienGo: with a more noticable buildup?
01:39 AlienGo: kinda feels safe and flat
01:42 flawful: crash
01:42 flawful: ;_;
01:43 flawful: craaaaaash
01:43 AlienGo:

01:43 AlienGo: 00:52:180 (1) - from here to kiai map it more intensely?
01:44 AlienGo: idk feels flat
01:45 flawful: okay
01:46 flawful: I'll remap that part now
01:46 AlienGo: 01:01:608 (1) - dunno if this needs to be a kickslider
01:46 AlienGo: and the two after silence the ends

01:46 flawful: why?
01:47 AlienGo: IMO
01:47 flawful: those sliders follow the vocals lol
01:47 AlienGo: the reason to map this as kicksliders is to match the vocals,
01:47 flawful: yes
01:47 flawful: that's what I said xd
01:48 AlienGo: however the vocals arent exactly saying syllables on the end parts of the sliders
01:49 AlienGo: so in the end the slider follows how it is sung but the hitsound isnt necessary
01:51 flawful: I'll lessen the volume then
01:51 AlienGo: that should be enough

01:51 flawful: but I honestly don't see the problem here lol
01:52 AlienGo: imo it sounds better silenced
01:52 AlienGo: less cluttered

-[ Prxzm ]-

74 posts

Joined June 2013

-[ Prxzm ]- 2016-05-04T10:40:02+00:00

kds please~ <3

Full-Spread Mod

INSANE
00:18:751 (4,5) - Try to stay consistent with spacing on jumps that don't emphasize a part of the song. Use the same spacing as here: 00:18:751 (4,5) -
00:30:580 (3,1) - This should be emphasized. Set an NC and "Finish" hitsound here 00:30:580 (3) - Then remove the NC here 00:30:751 (1) - and start it here 00:30:922 (2) -
00:31:094 (3,1) - Apply the same changes here. As well, add a "Finish" hitsound to 00:31:266 (1) -
00:31:780 (1,2,3) - Add a "Finish" hitsound to all three of these notes.
00:41:037 (5) - Don't stack this. Consider placing it slightly above of the slider.
00:41:551 (2) - Same here. Consider placing it slightly below the slider to flow with the above change.
00:56:980 (3,4) - The flow here is awkward. Consider changing in a way that improves the flow of the map.
01:37:437 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stream is drawn weird. Consider slightly remapping the stream to look aesthetically pleasing.
01:56:637 (1,2) - This is a very awkward jump. Consider remapping.
02:22:351 (7,8,1) - Flow is awkward. Consider flipping the slider around.

ABANES16'S INSANE
00:11:037 (1) - Please keep the slider point inside the slider.
00:15:837 (4,5) - and 00:16:351 (6,1) - 4,5 is too close, then 6,1 is too far. They're not emphasizing any part of the song, so they should keep the same spacing as before.
00:18:237 (2,3) - Why does this suddenly jump so far apart? Again, it's not emphasizing any part of the song so there shouldn't be a change in distance.
00:19:094 (6,1) - Random distance change again.
00:20:808 (6,1) - Random distance change.
00:20:980 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is an overmap. There's nothing that would fit a stream in the background. The background of the song is gentle and easygoing, and it's not transitioning.
00:21:666 (6,7,1) - If you want to keep the stream, you can move the stream here. It fits the song right here, but it's just an overmap where you have it currently.
00:22:008 (1,2,3,4) - Random distance changes.
00:24:580 (9,1,2,3,4) - Spree of random distance changes.
00:29:208 (2,3,4,5) - Random distance change, but it's consistent. It's nonetheless random, however, but if you want to change the distance snap you should start here 00:27:494 (1) -
00:30:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Right here would make a nice jump area. Consider changing this into a jump section rather than a gentle transition.
00:31:437 (5,6,7,8,9) - Like right here, maybe start the jump section earlier rather than only having it right here.
00:43:608 (5,6) - Right here is an example of a spacing change that does emphasize the song. It's emphasizing the transition into a new verse, therefore it's okay.
00:45:323 (1,2) - Random spacing change not emphasizing any part of the song.
01:27:837 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I like this section. It's fun, lively, and emphasizes the song.
01:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - However, right here that emphasis stops. You went from an aesthetic and flow that's fun and lively, then made a dull and boring stream. Consider making this a spiral or end the stream with slider jumps.
02:02:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Like this stream; it's fun and aesthetically pleasing.
02:08:980 (5,6,7) - Random spacing changes.
02:15:837 (5,6,7,8) - This stream is early. Her voice starts breaking here: 02:16:180 (1) -
02:16:180 (1) - Remap the above, move the stream from here to the start of the next slider.

HARD
00:14:466 (4) - New Combo
00:15:151 (7) - New Combo
00:25:437 (4) - New Combo
00:46:008 (4,5,6) - The flow here is awkward but not enough to impact playstyle. Consider changing for quality of life, but take this with a grain of salt.
00:58:351 (1,2,1,2) - This is hard difficulty. Stack the duplets, don't separate them.
01:03:151 (1,2,1,2) - Same here.
01:01:094 (2,3,4,5) - Also a consistency issue. Why did you separate those but stack these?
01:29:723 (5,6,7,1,2) - Random spacing change that doesn't emphasize the music. This is also only hard difficulty. Consider reducing the distance here: 01:29:723 (5,6,7) -
01:53:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Don't stack these. Consider moving the second set, and the notes that follow, over slightly to the right.
02:09:666 (1,2,1,2) - Stack the duplets.
02:11:723 (1,2,1,2) - Stack the duplets.
02:24:751 (1,2,3,4) - Move over slightly to the right.

NORMAL
00:14:808 (2) - Please keep the slider point inside the slider.
00:15:494 (3) - Same here.
00:44:294 (1) - Same here.
00:44:980 (2) - Same here.
00:45:666 (3) - Same here.
01:05:208 (5,6,1) - Don't make 1/4 notes in Normal difficulty. Remove the circle.
01:22:351 (1) - Why is there a lone spinner right here that's not followed by any notes?

AKITOSHI'S EASY
Perfect map. Spacing is consistent, notes follow the rhythm, no notes or patterns that don't belong in the difficulty, flows well, no points outside of sliders, and so on. Overall 10/10.

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-04T14:35:02+00:00

-[ Snowflake ]- wrote:
kds please~ <3
Full-Spread Mod
INSANE
00:18:751 (4,5) - Try to stay consistent with spacing on jumps that don't emphasize a part of the song. Use the same spacing as here: 00:18:751 (4,5) -
00:30:580 (3,1) - This should be emphasized. Set an NC and "Finish" hitsound here 00:30:580 (3) - Then remove the NC here 00:30:751 (1) - and start it here 00:30:922 (2) -
00:31:094 (3,1) - Apply the same changes here. As well, add a "Finish" hitsound to 00:31:266 (1) -
00:31:780 (1,2,3) - Add a "Finish" hitsound to all three of these notes.
00:41:037 (5) - Don't stack this. Consider placing it slightly above of the slider.
00:41:551 (2) - Same here. Consider placing it slightly below the slider to flow with the above change.
00:56:980 (3,4) - The flow here is awkward. Consider changing in a way that improves the flow of the map.
01:37:437 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stream is drawn weird. Consider slightly remapping the stream to look aesthetically pleasing.
01:56:637 (1,2) - This is a very awkward jump. Consider remapping.
02:22:351 (7,8,1) - Flow is awkward. Consider flipping the slider around.

ABANES16'S INSANE
00:11:037 (1) - Please keep the slider point inside the slider.
00:15:837 (4,5) - and 00:16:351 (6,1) - 4,5 is too close, then 6,1 is too far. They're not emphasizing any part of the song, so they should keep the same spacing as before.
00:18:237 (2,3) - Why does this suddenly jump so far apart? Again, it's not emphasizing any part of the song so there shouldn't be a change in distance.
00:19:094 (6,1) - Random distance change again.
00:20:808 (6,1) - Random distance change.
00:20:980 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is an overmap. There's nothing that would fit a stream in the background. The background of the song is gentle and easygoing, and it's not transitioning.
00:21:666 (6,7,1) - If you want to keep the stream, you can move the stream here. It fits the song right here, but it's just an overmap where you have it currently.
00:22:008 (1,2,3,4) - Random distance changes.
00:24:580 (9,1,2,3,4) - Spree of random distance changes.
00:29:208 (2,3,4,5) - Random distance change, but it's consistent. It's nonetheless random, however, but if you want to change the distance snap you should start here 00:27:494 (1) -
00:30:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Right here would make a nice jump area. Consider changing this into a jump section rather than a gentle transition.
00:31:437 (5,6,7,8,9) - Like right here, maybe start the jump section earlier rather than only having it right here.
00:43:608 (5,6) - Right here is an example of a spacing change that does emphasize the song. It's emphasizing the transition into a new verse, therefore it's okay.
00:45:323 (1,2) - Random spacing change not emphasizing any part of the song.
01:27:837 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I like this section. It's fun, lively, and emphasizes the song.
01:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - However, right here that emphasis stops. You went from an aesthetic and flow that's fun and lively, then made a dull and boring stream. Consider making this a spiral or end the stream with slider jumps.
02:02:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Like this stream; it's fun and aesthetically pleasing.
02:08:980 (5,6,7) - Random spacing changes.
02:15:837 (5,6,7,8) - This stream is early. Her voice starts breaking here: 02:16:180 (1) -
02:16:180 (1) - Remap the above, move the stream from here to the start of the next slider.

HARD
00:14:466 (4) - New Combo
00:15:151 (7) - New Combo
00:25:437 (4) - New Combo
00:46:008 (4,5,6) - The flow here is awkward but not enough to impact playstyle. Consider changing for quality of life, but take this with a grain of salt.
00:58:351 (1,2,1,2) - This is hard difficulty. Stack the duplets, don't separate them.
01:03:151 (1,2,1,2) - Same here.
01:01:094 (2,3,4,5) - Also a consistency issue. Why did you separate those but stack these?
01:29:723 (5,6,7,1,2) - Random spacing change that doesn't emphasize the music. This is also only hard difficulty. Consider reducing the distance here: 01:29:723 (5,6,7) -
01:53:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Don't stack these. Consider moving the second set, and the notes that follow, over slightly to the right.
02:09:666 (1,2,1,2) - Stack the duplets.
02:11:723 (1,2,1,2) - Stack the duplets.
02:24:751 (1,2,3,4) - Move over slightly to the right.

NORMAL
00:14:808 (2) - Please keep the slider point inside the slider.
00:15:494 (3) - Same here.
00:44:294 (1) - Same here.
00:44:980 (2) - Same here.
00:45:666 (3) - Same here.
01:05:208 (5,6,1) - Don't make 1/4 notes in Normal difficulty. Remove the circle.
01:22:351 (1) - Why is there a lone spinner right here that's not followed by any notes?

AKITOSHI'S EASY
Perfect map. Spacing is consistent, notes follow the rhythm, no notes or patterns that don't belong in the difficulty, flows well, no points outside of sliders, and so on. Overall 10/10.

Would give kds anyday :3

Will aply mods later after I get on osu!

Thanks for the mod~ <3

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-05-18T10:24:57+00:00

Hello !, from #modreqs. I like Electronic Instrumental, so I hope I can be helpful here !

General :
I found nothing bad here. It's just my opinion, I think it will be lovelier if the combo colors are 4 colors.
Owner Diffs and the GDs have different Kiai Timing. Maybe you'd consider to equalize it.

Akitoshi's Easy :
Excellent ! (Oh, maybe disabling the Widescreen Support ?, so it's the same like the other diffs)

Normal :
00:58:008 (1) - This slider nicer if it's stacked with 00:56:980 (4) - . But, yours to decide

Hard (Oh my ! I'd like to FL it XD ) :
Excellent !

abanes16's Insane :
Excellent !

Insane :
00:55:523 (3) - Here's a good to place triple. Yours to decide !

Nah, I guess that's all I can give. It's perfect !. I hope I'm correct and won't change the style XD . I hope you'll rank this too, good luck !

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Fraye 2016-05-18T13:12:13+00:00

O-Moei wrote:
Hello !, from #modreqs. I like Electronic Instrumental, so I hope I can be helpful here !

General :
I found nothing bad here. It's just my opinion, I think it will be lovelier if the combo colors are 4 colors.
Owner Diffs and the GDs have different Kiai Timing. Maybe you'd consider to equalize it.

Akitoshi's Easy :
Excellent ! (Oh, maybe disabling the Widescreen Support ?, so it's the same like the other diffs)

Normal :
00:58:008 (1) - This slider nicer if it's stacked with 00:56:980 (4) - . But, yours to decide

Hard (Oh my ! I'd like to FL it XD ) :
Excellent !

abanes16's Insane :
Excellent !

Insane :
00:55:523 (3) - Here's a good to place triple. Yours to decide ! no change

Nah, I guess that's all I can give. It's perfect !. I hope I'm correct and won't change the style XD . I hope you'll rank this too, good luck !

Thank you! <3

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