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Ayakura Mei - Romantic Fall
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Topic Starter
Very nice~
Here this ,
it looks seem more clearly~
And it will be more comfortable <3
+1 more kds star~
Here this ,
it looks seem more clearly~
And it will be more comfortable <3
+1 more kds star~
Topic Starter
> Snowy Dream
ahh, it looks better~
Thank you <3
ahh, it looks better~
Thank you <3
Topic Starter
> Bagels, ratstar,
thank you
thank you
Привет, обновил хитсаунды немного. Перезалей пожалуйста ^^
Download: Ayakura Mei - Romantic Fall (Reiji-RJ) [Collab].osu
Download: Ayakura Mei - Romantic Fall (Reiji-RJ) [Collab].osu
Topic Starter
> kogumano-putaro
Thank you~
Updated
Thank you~
Updated
cut the unnecessary transparency like Crack.png and Ch1ka.png
Collab:
the hitsounds are a bit simple but whatever :/
just a bit suggestion that take a try by using the hitclap @ Wild Eyes.
and how about use black fading at all 1/2 BPM part like the section from 01:50:985 (1) - to 02:09:499 (1) - ?
03:53:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - confused spacing.
Hard:
General suggestions are same as above.
Collab:
the hitsounds are a bit simple but whatever :/
just a bit suggestion that take a try by using the hitclap @ Wild Eyes.
and how about use black fading at all 1/2 BPM part like the section from 01:50:985 (1) - to 02:09:499 (1) - ?
03:53:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - confused spacing.
Hard:
General suggestions are same as above.
GREATTTT <3
Topic Starter
Thank you for stars <3
Remove z.png because it is not used. (or add it somewhere)
If you can, remove thumbs.db.
Make the kiai times consistent? (copied from AIBat)
01:41:557 (5,6) - add a new combo for the new line of lyrics because your previous few combos only did 1 short line
Collab:
03:18:414 - Don't like how long this break is, and I don't see much justification for making the break this long.
04:23:385 (3,1,2) - the 300 from 3 makes this area look a little crowded, I recommend flipping 04:23:899 (1) to 04:27:157 (2) horizontally to avoid this
04:32:471 (3) - placing notes under the middle of the slider does not look that great, so I advise you rearrage it
04:37:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you might want to lower the stack leniency to make this area look neater
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Decent mapset overall. Didn't notice too much, so call me back when you do the fixes, and I'll hopefully give you your first bubble.
If you can, remove thumbs.db.
Make the kiai times consistent? (copied from AIBat)
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:Hard:
- [Collab] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:22:528, ends on 00:22:614.
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:185, ends on 02:34:357.
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:22:521, ends on 00:22:614.
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:185, ends on 02:34:271.
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:18:071, ends on 03:18:156.
01:41:557 (5,6) - add a new combo for the new line of lyrics because your previous few combos only did 1 short line
Collab:
03:18:414 - Don't like how long this break is, and I don't see much justification for making the break this long.
04:23:385 (3,1,2) - the 300 from 3 makes this area look a little crowded, I recommend flipping 04:23:899 (1) to 04:27:157 (2) horizontally to avoid this
04:32:471 (3) - placing notes under the middle of the slider does not look that great, so I advise you rearrage it
04:37:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you might want to lower the stack leniency to make this area look neater
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Decent mapset overall. Didn't notice too much, so call me back when you do the fixes, and I'll hopefully give you your first bubble.
Topic Starter
Thank you, blissfulyoshiblissfulyoshi wrote:
Remove z.png because it is not used. (or add it somewhere)
If you can, remove thumbs.db.
Make the kiai times consistent? (copied from AIBat)Inconsistency in Kiai Times:Fixed kiai and sb issues
- [Collab] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:22:528, ends on 00:22:614.
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:185, ends on 02:34:357.
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:22:521, ends on 00:22:614.
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:185, ends on 02:34:271.
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:18:071, ends on 03:18:156.
Hard:
01:41:557 (5,6) - add a new combo for the new line of lyrics because your previous few combos only did 1 short line Done
Collab:
03:18:414 - Don't like how long this break is, and I don't see much justification for making the break this long. But it's collab and all parts are equal. So I want save this break :<
04:23:385 (3,1,2) - the 300 from 3 makes this area look a little crowded, I recommend flipping 04:23:899 (1) to 04:27:157 (2) horizontally to avoid this
04:32:471 (3) - placing notes under the middle of the slider does not look that great, so I advise you rearrage it
04:37:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you might want to lower the stack leniency to make this area look neater
Crack fixed his part :3
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Decent mapset overall. Didn't notice too much, so call me back when you do the fixes, and I'll hopefully give you your first bubble.
Sorry missed a few things. (No need for kds)
Hard:
04:45:842 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 04:34:871 (1)
Collab:
02:26:814 (4,5) - clean up this slight overlap?
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Just tell me when you finish, and I'll come back hopefully with a bubble.
Edit: Here is bubble #1
Hard:
04:45:842 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 04:34:871 (1)
Collab:
02:26:814 (4,5) - clean up this slight overlap?
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Just tell me when you finish, and I'll come back hopefully with a bubble.
Edit: Here is bubble #1
Topic Starter
T-thank you, bliss! >w<
Shouldn't the composer's name be mentioned in the tags?
>Masayoshi Minoshima
>Masayoshi Minoshima
not necessary IMO. if allowed, it could be added without mapper's update.ouranhshc wrote:
Shouldn't the composer's name be mentioned in the tags?
>Masayoshi Minoshima
and this is the secound one.
Topic Starter
Woaaaah!
Thanks a lot, abalee
Thanks a lot, abalee
Nice~ will be ranked!
I make a diff for myself , because this song is so beautiful :3
congrats advanced
I make a diff for myself , because this song is so beautiful :3
congrats advanced
what the fack thats my avaMedicine Melancholy wrote:
<3
I don't think ignoring the arranger is ever a good idea; give credit where credit is due, right? But that's something that can be handled at the mapper's discretion.
Hard:
My major complaint with this is that the 60% hitsound volume is a bit too soft. If you're playing without headphones, it can be pretty difficult to notice. I'd recommend 65% volume for the most part (or up to 70%, but that borders on too intrusive).
Collab:
For Louis Cyphre. Only a few things in particular stood out.
Hard:
My major complaint with this is that the 60% hitsound volume is a bit too soft. If you're playing without headphones, it can be pretty difficult to notice. I'd recommend 65% volume for the most part (or up to 70%, but that borders on too intrusive).
Collab:
For Louis Cyphre. Only a few things in particular stood out.
- 04:12:928 (3) - New Combo mark should be here. This being a 3,4 is kinda inconsistent with the way your passage has progressed, not to mention this 3 starts a new musical phrase.
- 04:16:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you wanted to be consistent here, you'd divide this into (1,2,1,2,1,2).
Topic Starter
So, a-all fixed :3Mogsworth wrote:
I don't think ignoring the arranger is ever a good idea; give credit where credit is due, right? But that's something that can be handled at the mapper's discretion. Yeah, added him into tags
Hard:
My major complaint with this is that the 60% hitsound volume is a bit too soft. If you're playing without headphones, it can be pretty difficult to notice. I'd recommend 65% volume for the most part (or up to 70%, but that borders on too intrusive). Fixed
Collab:
For Louis Cyphre. Only a few things in particular stood out.Updated Louis's part
- 04:12:928 (3) - New Combo mark should be here. This being a 3,4 is kinda inconsistent with the way your passage has progressed, not to mention this 3 starts a new musical phrase.
- 04:16:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you wanted to be consistent here, you'd divide this into (1,2,1,2,1,2).
All I have to really comment on. I would like to approve this, but I think a map should be as best as it can be beforehand. So, despite my nitpicks, please put them into consideration.
Following procedure and bubbling. Bubble number 1, nice job.
all right the second one.
and that's my thought: if the song is original instrumental and some ppl sang for it, I guess that's the case for adding into tag.
and that's my thought: if the song is original instrumental and some ppl sang for it, I guess that's the case for adding into tag.
Topic Starter
Thank you, abalee and Mogs!
Hope, this will be approved soon.
Hope, this will be approved soon.
yay *з*
[General]
The file "star2.png" is too big. Reduce it to a maximum of 52x50 pixels and do a full submission.
[Hard]
02:44:985 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:45:157 (2) - New combo.
Really nice song and good map, make sure to fix what I've pointed out and I'll approve this beauty! ;D
The file "star2.png" is too big. Reduce it to a maximum of 52x50 pixels and do a full submission.
[Hard]
02:44:985 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:45:157 (2) - New combo.
Really nice song and good map, make sure to fix what I've pointed out and I'll approve this beauty! ;D
Topic Starter
Aaaall fixed!! *^*osuplayer111 wrote:
[General]
The file "star2.png" is too big. Reduce it to a maximum of 52x50 pixels and do a full submission.
[Hard]
02:44:985 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:45:157 (2) - New combo.
Really nice song and good map, make sure to fix what I've pointed out and I'll approve this beauty! ;D
Here we go!
Approved~
Approved~
Topic Starter
Aaaaahhh, I'm so happy!
Thank you very much!! >www<
And gratz all mappers in collab, aww
Thank you very much!! >www<
And gratz all mappers in collab, aww
Congrats Reiji :3
Gratz ! 
Gratz Reiji !
But feel sleepy now ... will play tomorrow :p
But feel sleepy now ... will play tomorrow :p
Thank you, Andrea <3
Reiji,finally... YA RLY ! This map is approved!
Reiji,finally... YA RLY ! This map is approved!