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Ayakura Mei - Romantic Fall

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Kotya
awesome.
Louis Cyphre
03:43:785 (7,1) - switch combos please
Вот это :P

Ах, я же обещал промодить рррр.... чуть позже.
Aleks719

La Cataline wrote:

Aleks719:
The music doesnt change at all and you suddenly change the sampleset моя часть была сделана раньше предыдущей и раньше последующей, притензии несправедливы
05:20:128 (1,1,1) - dont like ncs here. just personal. Релакс часть для поднятия лайфа для концовочки.
05:31:099 (1,1) - ^ ^
Edit : без изменений.
La Cataline

Aleks719 wrote:

моя часть была сделана раньше предыдущей и раньше последующей, притензии несправедливы
претензии?
ох нет, мне нечего делать в этом треде.
m i z u k i
:O
fartownik
General:

- The lyrics in the SB have too much of free space that can be cropped. Please resize all the sprites so they're as small as possible.

[Collab]

02:24:928 (6) - Missing clap.
02:17:042 (1) - Delete new combo.
-> All the New Combos from this Ch1ka's (02:12:585-) part are pretty messed up. Please try to replace them to look nicer and more sensible.
02:34:185 - The volume here is suddenly lowered by 20%. It doesn't sounds that bad, but it's weird after a part when the volume was 70%. Decide for 1 value.
05:39:328 (2,3,4,5) - Just no, and you should know why.

Overdone of not needed new combos (again).


[Hard]

00:37:957 - Missing note.
00:40:699 - ^
00:43:442 - ^
Etc. it still happens, just fix all patterns like this because it doesn't sounds good and is confusing.
01:05:214 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Change the whole pattern... the spacing change is weird + there's still a missed note.
02:26:471 (2,3,4) - Spacing. Just space it with normal spacing value, it will be better.
02:34:185 (3) - New combo.
02:45:157 - You see the flash here? It's unneeded because there's no object to hit in this place. Delete it from the SB and look for all flashes like this, because this one might not be the last.
04:56:814 (5) - New combo.
05:27:157 - Map this part/insert a break time.
05:38:128 - ^


Pretty good map. SB is good as well, but the engrish lyrics makes any sense at all o.o
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Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ

fartownik wrote:

[Hard]

00:37:957 - Missing note. It follows music, not beats :<
00:40:699 - ^ ^
00:43:442 - ^ ^
Etc. it still happens, just fix all patterns like this because it doesn't sounds good and is confusing.
01:05:214 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Change the whole pattern... the spacing change is weird + there's still a missed note. Jumps :D but changed it a little
02:26:471 (2,3,4) - Spacing. Just space it with normal spacing value, it will be better. Okay... Fixed :<
02:34:185 (3) - New combo. ok
02:45:157 - You see the flash here? It's unneeded because there's no object to hit in this place. Delete it from the SB and look for all flashes like this, because this one might not be the last. Added a note :P
04:56:814 (5) - New combo. ok
05:27:157 - Map this part/insert a break time. Fixed :3
05:38:128 - ^

Pretty good map. SB is good as well, but the engrish lyrics makes any sense at all o.o
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Thank you very much!
Aleks719

fartownik wrote:

05:39:328 (2,3,4,5) - Just no, and you should know why. Okay, fixed
Thanks

Download: Ayakura Mei - Romantic Fall (Reiji-RJ) [Collab].osu
wiza
star~
wcx19911123
HI
Here is my mod4mod of http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27700
All suggestions

[Hard]
00:44:299 - add a circle?
00:51:156 (4,5) - make them parallel?
02:24:414 (5,6) - 1 gird right
04:31:957 (2) - 1 gird down and 1 gird left
05:19:957 - add a circle,put 05:20:128 (5) to 05:20:299
05:22:699 - ^,put 05:22:871 (4) to 05:23:042

[Collab]
00:59:899 (9) - move to where 01:00:071 (10) is?
02:28:014 (1) - ctrl+1 and 1 gird right
02:28:528 (2) - ctrl+1 and 1 gird left
02:36:585 (2) - BPM×0.5 too suddenly
02:39:671 (2) - ^

Sooooooooooo good the map is
Oh, but it's too diffcult for me
Star~
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
wcx19911123, some fixed, thanks :3
Snowy Dream
Very nice~
Here this ,
it looks seem more clearly~ ;)
And it will be more comfortable <3
+1 more kds star~

Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
> Snowy Dream
ahh, it looks better~
Thank you <3
Bagels
<3 this song

Thanks for the map
ratstar
good song & good map!! ^^)/~☆
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
> Bagels, ratstar,
thank you :)
KogumaX
star~☆
Aleks719
Привет, обновил хитсаунды немного. Перезалей пожалуйста ^^

Download: Ayakura Mei - Romantic Fall (Reiji-RJ) [Collab].osu
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
> kogumano-putaro
Thank you~
Updated
Lera
☆ ! Ранкнули бы побыстрее ><
abalee
cut the unnecessary transparency like Crack.png and Ch1ka.png

Collab:
the hitsounds are a bit simple but whatever :/
just a bit suggestion that take a try by using the hitclap @ Wild Eyes.
and how about use black fading at all 1/2 BPM part like the section from 01:50:985 (1) - to 02:09:499 (1) - ?

03:53:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - confused spacing.

Hard:
General suggestions are same as above.
Magicphoenix
GREATTTT <3
Melpomena
I still haven't starred this map? :O
Starrrr~
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
Thank you for stars <3
Medicine Melancholy
<3
blissfulyoshi
Remove z.png because it is not used. (or add it somewhere)
If you can, remove thumbs.db.
Make the kiai times consistent? (copied from AIBat)
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Collab] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:22:528, ends on 00:22:614.
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:185, ends on 02:34:357.

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:22:521, ends on 00:22:614.
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:185, ends on 02:34:271.
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:18:071, ends on 03:18:156.
Hard:
01:41:557 (5,6) - add a new combo for the new line of lyrics because your previous few combos only did 1 short line

Collab:
03:18:414 - Don't like how long this break is, and I don't see much justification for making the break this long.
04:23:385 (3,1,2) - the 300 from 3 makes this area look a little crowded, I recommend flipping 04:23:899 (1) to 04:27:157 (2) horizontally to avoid this
04:32:471 (3) - placing notes under the middle of the slider does not look that great, so I advise you rearrage it
04:37:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you might want to lower the stack leniency to make this area look neater

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Decent mapset overall. Didn't notice too much, so call me back when you do the fixes, and I'll hopefully give you your first bubble.
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Remove z.png because it is not used. (or add it somewhere)
If you can, remove thumbs.db.
Make the kiai times consistent? (copied from AIBat)
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Collab] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:22:528, ends on 00:22:614.
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:185, ends on 02:34:357.

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:22:521, ends on 00:22:614.
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:185, ends on 02:34:271.
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:18:071, ends on 03:18:156.
Fixed kiai and sb issues

Hard:
01:41:557 (5,6) - add a new combo for the new line of lyrics because your previous few combos only did 1 short line Done

Collab:
03:18:414 - Don't like how long this break is, and I don't see much justification for making the break this long. But it's collab and all parts are equal. So I want save this break :<
04:23:385 (3,1,2) - the 300 from 3 makes this area look a little crowded, I recommend flipping 04:23:899 (1) to 04:27:157 (2) horizontally to avoid this
04:32:471 (3) - placing notes under the middle of the slider does not look that great, so I advise you rearrage it
04:37:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you might want to lower the stack leniency to make this area look neater
Crack fixed his part :3

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Decent mapset overall. Didn't notice too much, so call me back when you do the fixes, and I'll hopefully give you your first bubble.
Thank you, blissfulyoshi :oops:
blissfulyoshi
Sorry missed a few things. (No need for kds)

Hard:
04:45:842 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 04:34:871 (1)

Collab:
02:26:814 (4,5) - clean up this slight overlap?

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Just tell me when you finish, and I'll come back hopefully with a bubble.

Edit: Here is bubble #1
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
T-thank you, bliss! >w<
ouranhshc
Shouldn't the composer's name be mentioned in the tags?

>Masayoshi Minoshima
abalee

ouranhshc wrote:

Shouldn't the composer's name be mentioned in the tags?

>Masayoshi Minoshima
not necessary IMO. if allowed, it could be added without mapper's update.


and this is the secound one.
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
Woaaaah!
Thanks a lot, abalee :oops:
Snowy Dream
Nice~ will be ranked!
I make a diff for myself , because this song is so beautiful :3
congrats advanced :)
Waryas
This is nice
Natteke

Medicine Melancholy wrote:

<3
what the fack thats my ava
Mogsy
I don't think ignoring the arranger is ever a good idea; give credit where credit is due, right? But that's something that can be handled at the mapper's discretion.

Hard:
My major complaint with this is that the 60% hitsound volume is a bit too soft. If you're playing without headphones, it can be pretty difficult to notice. I'd recommend 65% volume for the most part (or up to 70%, but that borders on too intrusive).

Collab:
For Louis Cyphre. Only a few things in particular stood out.
  1. 04:12:928 (3) - New Combo mark should be here. This being a 3,4 is kinda inconsistent with the way your passage has progressed, not to mention this 3 starts a new musical phrase.
  2. 04:16:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you wanted to be consistent here, you'd divide this into (1,2,1,2,1,2).
All I have to really comment on. I would like to approve this, but I think a map should be as best as it can be beforehand. So, despite my nitpicks, please put them into consideration.
Louis Cyphre
Agree with both suggestions.

Thanks~

Download: Ayakura Mei - Romantic Fall (Reiji-RJ) [Collab].osu
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ

Mogsworth wrote:

I don't think ignoring the arranger is ever a good idea; give credit where credit is due, right? But that's something that can be handled at the mapper's discretion. Yeah, added him into tags

Hard:
My major complaint with this is that the 60% hitsound volume is a bit too soft. If you're playing without headphones, it can be pretty difficult to notice. I'd recommend 65% volume for the most part (or up to 70%, but that borders on too intrusive). Fixed

Collab:
For Louis Cyphre. Only a few things in particular stood out.
  1. 04:12:928 (3) - New Combo mark should be here. This being a 3,4 is kinda inconsistent with the way your passage has progressed, not to mention this 3 starts a new musical phrase.
  2. 04:16:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you wanted to be consistent here, you'd divide this into (1,2,1,2,1,2).
Updated Louis's part

All I have to really comment on. I would like to approve this, but I think a map should be as best as it can be beforehand. So, despite my nitpicks, please put them into consideration.
So, a-all fixed :3
Mogsy
Following procedure and bubbling. Bubble number 1, nice job.
abalee
all right the second one.

and that's my thought: if the song is original instrumental and some ppl sang for it, I guess that's the case for adding into tag.
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