General :
- hitsound can improved a lot example 00:23:080 - for easy diff you can add whistle. basically we add whistle for vocal + piano when clap is for drum (mostly in 2nd whitetick and 4th whitetick)
Easy :
- AR 3 please. you cant have AR 0 :C
- 00:19:909 (4) - spacing error (0,9x) one
- 00:26:250 (2) - you can try improve your blanket here
- 00:28:202 (1,2) - this overlap is so confusing for newbies so please avoid it :C
- 00:34:055 (2) - 260,308 for better blanket
- 00:55:502 - strong beat should be mapped with circle :C
- 01:09:665 (4,5) - no please. too hard for newbie. combine them to a slider
- 01:20:397 (2,3) - ^
- 01:15:763 (3) - move to 01:16:494 - , dont use too much 1/2 just for vocal. its unfriendly for newbie
- 01:24:543 (3) - too hard for newbie, remove the circle
- hmm i should say that your begining rhythm is so repetitive. only 3/2 sliders until 01:26:738 (5) - . that was so boring. from here i think rhythm can improved. design is fine but you can improve more. hitsound is fine
Normal :
- dikit sih. ini spacingnya kebesaran. ga friendly buat normal diff (ini lebih ke advance diff sih). kalo menurut gw 1,2x atau 1,3x better
- 01:09:177 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - kasih jeda 1/1 please. kepanjangan sumpah. lu kalo coba lihat sama easy pasti kerasa bedanya jauh
i guess thats all good luck
- hitsound can improved a lot example 00:23:080 - for easy diff you can add whistle. basically we add whistle for vocal + piano when clap is for drum (mostly in 2nd whitetick and 4th whitetick)
Easy :
- AR 3 please. you cant have AR 0 :C
- 00:19:909 (4) - spacing error (0,9x) one
- 00:26:250 (2) - you can try improve your blanket here
- 00:28:202 (1,2) - this overlap is so confusing for newbies so please avoid it :C
- 00:34:055 (2) - 260,308 for better blanket
- 00:55:502 - strong beat should be mapped with circle :C
- 01:09:665 (4,5) - no please. too hard for newbie. combine them to a slider
- 01:20:397 (2,3) - ^
- 01:15:763 (3) - move to 01:16:494 - , dont use too much 1/2 just for vocal. its unfriendly for newbie
- 01:24:543 (3) - too hard for newbie, remove the circle
- hmm i should say that your begining rhythm is so repetitive. only 3/2 sliders until 01:26:738 (5) - . that was so boring. from here i think rhythm can improved. design is fine but you can improve more. hitsound is fine
Normal :
- dikit sih. ini spacingnya kebesaran. ga friendly buat normal diff (ini lebih ke advance diff sih). kalo menurut gw 1,2x atau 1,3x better
- 01:09:177 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - kasih jeda 1/1 please. kepanjangan sumpah. lu kalo coba lihat sama easy pasti kerasa bedanya jauh
i guess thats all good luck