Edit: (It's the same map as above) Oops, sorry for double, I opened the "reply" before Xexxar's post was here and noticed it appeared here after posting.
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/355573There are still things to address and already many things were mentioned. That is, not mapping to music properly (overmapping and undermapping), most likely insensible background choice, but that's not big reason here, very repetetive and insensible patterning when it comes to kiai part, hitsounds are just meme sounds, which aren't even related to the song.
The answers given by Fort are either "fun" or "it's not overmapped, look at hitsounds" - By adding hitsounds, you are not getting a rid off the fact that you are mapping nothing. He mostly doesn't give any constructive arguments and doesn't explain why those issues aren't issues.
