Wao i accepted all :OOO Ty
Volta wrote:It looks much better than the last time i check it. Here's some follow up mod.
00:08:666 - maybe change to d to highlight the distinct melody like at 00:03:845 - ?
00:11:077 - and change this to k, to alternate between k-k-k and k-d-k
00:23:131 - there is a totally important strong sound here, you can put K
00:25:541 - and remove this note instead for the break.
00:37:059 - move to 00:37:327 - fits with the melody better imo and consistent with your overall pattern
00:38:131 - you may add k here since the intensity is high in this part.
00:36:791 - and maybe change this to d for variation? fits with the drum too
00:50:452 - i think making this as D would give more impact after all those k before
00:59:827 - consider to add d for the noise? it helps the spread with futsuu as well
01:07:863 - same as ^
01:12:416 - move to 01:11:881 - ? fits melody better and consistent with 01:05:452 -
01:17:506 - move to 01:16:970 - ? i think the break is kinda unnatural (01:13:756 - the break here is enough) and this way follows the melody nicely
01:38:398 - , 01:38:934 - 1/1 triplet is too much for this calm section. remove please :c
01:40:809 - can be removed as well imo
00:16:970 - move to 00:17:773 - ? i think this way can fits the melody better and consistent with 01:34:916 -
00:56:747 - remove? i think too much 1/2 in this part is too hard for newer player
00:59:291 - maybe change to d, since the pitch is down here
01:25:541 - consider to add note for consistency with 01:19:113 -
01:40:006 - consider to remove, i think the dk doubles are too consecutive here, refer to 01:33:577 - as well
00:13:086 - change SV multiplier to x0.925 , smoother and easier to read for intermediate player
00:13:354 - remove note or add SV multiplier with x0.975 value.
00:35:720 - maybe remove finisher for consistency with 00:22:863 -
00:36:523 - i think adding k here is nice to highlight the melody
01:34:849 - consider to change to d? i think 1/4 kd at this bpm for a muzukashii is kinda hard.
01:42:148 - changing this to d would accentuate the drum at 01:41:881 (412,414) - better imo
01:48:443 - move to 01:48:979 -
01:49:113 - , 01:49:381 - , 01:49:648 - and remove finishers, for consistency with other diffs
00:12:952 - change SV multiplier to x0.88 for smoother speed-up
00:25:006 - adding d here would make a nice build-up before the kiai imo
00:36:122 - move to 00:36:523 - for consistent structure with 00:37:327 - and give some rest after the finisher
01:03:041 (324,325) - maybe you misplaced the finisher? i think you should remove the finisher at 01:03:041 - , and put one at 01:03:309 - instead like other pattern in this session.
01:13:488 - suggesting to remove finisher here as well so it flows to next sequence better.
01:16:702 - and 01:16:836 - consider to change to d, i think it's nice to be mirrored with 01:16:032 (520,521,522,523) - and can emphasis high pitched melody at 01:16:970 -
01:28:756 - maybe change this to d? it feels more dynamic rather than consecutive k imo
You may call me back after that :3
Surono wrote:great efforts, go go