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Alepat
Vengo a ayudar un poco sobre tu mapa, espero te sirva de algo, comencemos!

d= nota roja
D= nota roja grande
k= nota azul
K= nota azul grande
SV= Slider Velocity
Dato para el mapper: informa de cuantas estrellas subirá o bajará si se utiliza todo el mod de dicha dificultad
Comentario: breve opinión mía sobre la dificultad

[General]
deja todos los tags en minúscula
ES DE SUMA IMPORTANCIA AGREGAR UN SPINNER: desde el segundo 0 hasta el minuto 1:57 (Si es que entendiste el easter egg)

[Kantan]
00:14:291 (17) - Este k va colado, cambialo a d
00:22:863 (28) - Cambiar a d, por el sonido bajo y que... sea más fácil, a parte no se siente tan tan repetitivo
00:25:541 (32) - Cambiar a D
00:29:559 (37,38,39) - Se te adelantó un d (Para hacerlo igual al principio de 00:16:702 (20,21,22) - ). Arreglalo dejandolo en k k d respectivamente
00:32:506 (40) - Cambiar a d (mismo punto de la nota 28)
00:58:488 (79) - Cambiar a D
01:25:809 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129) - Por el sonido siento que va mejor al revés, flipealo todo


Dato para el mapper: Si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad subirá a 1,84* (+0,01)

Comentario: Muy buena diff, no se pierde la esencia de un Kantan, lo único que le vi medianamente mejorable es la dificultad en cuanto a las notas grandes (en unas partes va demasiado fácil y en otras sube mucho la dificultad para el mapa en cuestión)


[Futsuu]
00:24:470 (17) - Siento un poco incómoda esa nota, puedes cambiarla a k o eliminarla (o simplemente no hacer nada, puede ser algo mio)

00:48:577 (91,92) - y 00:50:184 (95,96) - Tienen el mismo sonido que el 00:48:577 (91,92) - , no hace falta hacer patterns flipeados, vuelvelos d k y d K respectivamente

01:25:541 - No sé que opinarías sobre añadir un d, ¿Se hará más difícil para un Futsuu por el stream de notas grandes?

01:25:809 (197,198,199,200,201,202,203) - Lo mismo que en Kantan, Flipealo todo

00:50:988 (97) - Cambiar a K

01:42:684 (245) - ^^

Dato para el mapper: Si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad seguirá siendo de 3,14* (+0,00)

Comentario: Está bien mapeado, pero se queda ahí como muy repetitivo (y personalmente se me hace un poco aburrido, pero que se le va a hacer), sin embargo siento que no hay que tocar mucho de aquí.

[Muzukashii]
00:14:291 (52) - Agregar el finish, para concordar con el resto de notas grandes

00:29:023 (121) - Cambiar a d, el stream siguiente se siente más rico en ritmo

00:58:220 (3) - cambiar a d, da un pequeño recuerdo al pattern ya conocido k d d k en el reloj

01:30:631 - hasta 01:42:416 - es una recomendación, no es necesario que lo hagas: Siento esta parte muy vacía respecto al pattern k d d k del reloj anterior que comienza en 00:39:202 -, quedaría muy bien un copy paste del mismo, aunque con unas pequeñas modificaciones al inicio. SI ACEPTAS ESTO, COPIA TODO EL PATTERN DE 00:39:202 - (Incluyendo el SV) Y MODIFICA LO SIGUIENTE

Borra todas las notas de 01:30:898 - hasta 01:42:416 - y pegalo en 01:30:898 - (Recuerda Re-snapear, he visto que por una milésima o dos va desincronizado)
Te dejo el stream copiado si gustas
00:39:470 (164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204) -

Agregar los siguientes Inherit Points, todo con el 60% de audio y:
01:30:898 - x0,95 SV
01:31:166 - x0,90 SV
01:31:434 - x0,85 SV
01:31:702 - x0,80 SV
01:31:970 - x0,75 SV
01:42:684 - x1,00 SV


Acto Seguido modifiquemos el pattern
01:30:898 (145) - k
01:31:434 (147) - d
01:40:407 (177,178,181,182) - eliminar
01:42:148 - Agregar d
01:42:416 (1) - cambiar a k
De ahí saca toda tu imaginación para mejorar ese pattern y que quede algo distinto

01:53:666 (42) - Mueve la nota a 01:53:532 - y añade un d en 01:54:202 - para hacer énfasis al siguiente stream

Dato para el mapper: Si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad seguirá siendo de 3,20* (+0,00)

Comentario: Le falta pulir un poco, pero me gusta, lo que si vi que le hace falta separarse mucho de la dificultad de Futsuu en estrellas (Futsuu 3,14* VS 3,20* Muzukashii), Puede ser que el Futsuu sea muy dificil para su categoría, ya que un Futsuu es un "Normal", y un Muzukashii viene siendo "Hard", imaginate un map de STD (un modo que no tiene nada que ver aquí pero me entiendes) en el que el Normal sea más dificil que un Hard en cuanto a estrellas (no cuentan los mapas antiguos), para el ranking los BN te dejarían todo el cuchicuchi muerto.

[Oni]
00:58:354 - Puedes permitirte algo de dificultad antes de pasar al siguiente stream, agrega un d
00:59:291 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333) - cambiar el pattern a ddddkkkkd
01:09:939 (388) - eliminalo y agrega las notas
01:10:006 (388) - cambia a k
01:10:072 - agrega un k
01:10:139 (390) - agrega un d
01:10:541 (393) - cambia a d
01:10:742 (394) - elimina

Agregar los siguientes Inherit Points, todo con el 60% de audio y:
01:30:898 - x0,95 SV
01:31:166 - x0,90 SV
01:31:434 - x0,85 SV
01:31:702 - x0,80 SV
01:31:970 - x0,75 SV
01:42:684 - x1,00 SV

01:41:881 (567) - cambia D
01:42:148 - agrega d
01:53:666 (637) - mueve la nota hasta 01:53:532 -

Dato para el mapper: Si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad subirá a 4,53* (+0,20)

Comentario: está bien mapeado, le encuentro una breve mezcla entre un muzukashii y un Inner Oni tirando a Oni, hay varios fragmentos que quedan vacíos que bajan la emoción, deberías revisar eso.

[Inner Oni]
00:04:883 (16) - recomiendo dejar la nota igual que en Oni (en 00:04:849 - ) sé que es un Inner Oni pero lo veo muy random que se quede ahí
01:00:095 (393,394) - cambiar a k (para formar mejor el long stream, sigue esto con el siguiente mod)
01:00:296 (396) - cambiar a d (para formar mejor el long stream)
01:00:831 (404,405) - Flip, queda muy mal el kddk ahí

Agregar los siguientes Inherit Points, todo con el 60% de audio y:
01:30:898 - x0,95 SV
01:31:166 - x0,90 SV
01:31:434 - x0,85 SV
01:31:702 - x0,80 SV
01:31:970 - x0,75 SV
01:42:684 - x1,00 SV

01:52:863 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163) - Quizá muy random para ser 1/6? Yo lo dejaría de un solo color (como ddddddk), pero ahí va en tu gusto

Datos para el mapper: si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad bajará a 6,18* (-0,01)

Comentario: muy bien trabajado, aunque le falta pulir el long stream, que en el final se vio muy random, y los 1/6 no los quise tocar mucho para mantener la esencia y que quede claro que TÚ eres el mapper.

Mucha suerte en tu map! :D

Alepat.
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

Alepat wrote:

Vengo a ayudar un poco sobre tu mapa, espero te sirva de algo, comencemos!

d= nota roja
D= nota roja grande
k= nota azul
K= nota azul grande
SV= Slider Velocity
Dato para el mapper: informa de cuantas estrellas subirá o bajará si se utiliza todo el mod de dicha dificultad
Comentario: breve opinión mía sobre la dificultad

[General]
deja todos los tags en minúscula
ES DE SUMA IMPORTANCIA AGREGAR UN SPINNER: desde el segundo 0 hasta el minuto 1:57 (Si es que entendiste el easter egg)

[Kantan]
00:14:291 (17) - Este k va colado, cambialo a d
00:22:863 (28) - Cambiar a d, por el sonido bajo y que... sea más fácil, a parte no se siente tan tan repetitivo
00:25:541 (32) - Cambiar a D
00:29:559 (37,38,39) - Se te adelantó un d (Para hacerlo igual al principio de 00:16:702 (20,21,22) - ). Arreglalo dejandolo en k k d respectivamente
00:32:506 (40) - Cambiar a d (mismo punto de la nota 28)
00:58:488 (79) - Cambiar a D
01:25:809 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129) - Por el sonido siento que va mejor al revés, flipealo todo


Dato para el mapper: Si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad subirá a 1,84* (+0,01)

Comentario: Muy buena diff, no se pierde la esencia de un Kantan, lo único que le vi medianamente mejorable es la dificultad en cuanto a las notas grandes (en unas partes va demasiado fácil y en otras sube mucho la dificultad para el mapa en cuestión)


[Futsuu]
00:24:470 (17) - Siento un poco incómoda esa nota, puedes cambiarla a k o eliminarla (o simplemente no hacer nada, puede ser algo mio)

00:48:577 (91,92) - y 00:50:184 (95,96) - Tienen el mismo sonido que el 00:48:577 (91,92) - , no hace falta hacer patterns flipeados, vuelvelos d k y d K respectivamente

01:25:541 - No sé que opinarías sobre añadir un d, ¿Se hará más difícil para un Futsuu por el stream de notas grandes?

01:25:809 (197,198,199,200,201,202,203) - Lo mismo que en Kantan, Flipealo todo

00:50:988 (97) - Cambiar a K

01:42:684 (245) - ^^

Dato para el mapper: Si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad seguirá siendo de 3,14* (+0,00)

Comentario: Está bien mapeado, pero se queda ahí como muy repetitivo (y personalmente se me hace un poco aburrido, pero que se le va a hacer), sin embargo siento que no hay que tocar mucho de aquí.

[Muzukashii]
00:14:291 (52) - Agregar el finish, para concordar con el resto de notas grandes

00:29:023 (121) - Cambiar a d, el stream siguiente se siente más rico en ritmo

00:58:220 (3) - cambiar a d, da un pequeño recuerdo al pattern ya conocido k d d k en el reloj

01:30:631 - hasta 01:42:416 - es una recomendación, no es necesario que lo hagas: Siento esta parte muy vacía respecto al pattern k d d k del reloj anterior que comienza en 00:39:202 -, quedaría muy bien un copy paste del mismo, aunque con unas pequeñas modificaciones al inicio. SI ACEPTAS ESTO, COPIA TODO EL PATTERN DE 00:39:202 - (Incluyendo el SV) Y MODIFICA LO SIGUIENTE

Borra todas las notas de 01:30:898 - hasta 01:42:416 - y pegalo en 01:30:898 - (Recuerda Re-snapear, he visto que por una milésima o dos va desincronizado)
Te dejo el stream copiado si gustas
00:39:470 (164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204) -

Agregar los siguientes Inherit Points, todo con el 60% de audio y:
01:30:898 - x0,95 SV
01:31:166 - x0,90 SV
01:31:434 - x0,85 SV
01:31:702 - x0,80 SV
01:31:970 - x0,75 SV
01:42:684 - x1,00 SV


Acto Seguido modifiquemos el pattern
01:30:898 (145) - k
01:31:434 (147) - d
01:40:407 (177,178,181,182) - eliminar
01:42:148 - Agregar d
01:42:416 (1) - cambiar a k
De ahí saca toda tu imaginación para mejorar ese pattern y que quede algo distinto

01:53:666 (42) - Mueve la nota a 01:53:532 - y añade un d en 01:54:202 - para hacer énfasis al siguiente stream

Dato para el mapper: Si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad seguirá siendo de 3,20* (+0,00)

Comentario: Le falta pulir un poco, pero me gusta, lo que si vi que le hace falta separarse mucho de la dificultad de Futsuu en estrellas (Futsuu 3,14* VS 3,20* Muzukashii), Puede ser que el Futsuu sea muy dificil para su categoría, ya que un Futsuu es un "Normal", y un Muzukashii viene siendo "Hard", imaginate un map de STD (un modo que no tiene nada que ver aquí pero me entiendes) en el que el Normal sea más dificil que un Hard en cuanto a estrellas (no cuentan los mapas antiguos), para el ranking los BN te dejarían todo el cuchicuchi muerto.

[Oni]
00:58:354 - Puedes permitirte algo de dificultad antes de pasar al siguiente stream, agrega un d
00:59:291 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333) - cambiar el pattern a ddddkkkkd
01:09:939 (388) - eliminalo y agrega las notas
01:10:006 (388) - cambia a k
01:10:072 - agrega un k
01:10:139 (390) - agrega un d
01:10:541 (393) - cambia a d
01:10:742 (394) - elimina

Agregar los siguientes Inherit Points, todo con el 60% de audio y:
01:30:898 - x0,95 SV
01:31:166 - x0,90 SV
01:31:434 - x0,85 SV
01:31:702 - x0,80 SV
01:31:970 - x0,75 SV
01:42:684 - x1,00 SV

01:41:881 (567) - cambia D
01:42:148 - agrega d
01:53:666 (637) - mueve la nota hasta 01:53:532 -

Dato para el mapper: Si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad subirá a 4,53* (+0,20)

Comentario: está bien mapeado, le encuentro una breve mezcla entre un muzukashii y un Inner Oni tirando a Oni, hay varios fragmentos que quedan vacíos que bajan la emoción, deberías revisar eso.

[Inner Oni]
00:04:883 (16) - recomiendo dejar la nota igual que en Oni (en 00:04:849 - ) sé que es un Inner Oni pero lo veo muy random que se quede ahí
01:00:095 (393,394) - cambiar a k (para formar mejor el long stream, sigue esto con el siguiente mod)
01:00:296 (396) - cambiar a d (para formar mejor el long stream)
01:00:831 (404,405) - Flip, queda muy mal el kddk ahí

Agregar los siguientes Inherit Points, todo con el 60% de audio y:
01:30:898 - x0,95 SV
01:31:166 - x0,90 SV
01:31:434 - x0,85 SV
01:31:702 - x0,80 SV
01:31:970 - x0,75 SV
01:42:684 - x1,00 SV

01:52:863 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163) - Quizá muy random para ser 1/6? Yo lo dejaría de un solo color (como ddddddk), pero ahí va en tu gusto

Datos para el mapper: si se usa todo el mod, la dificultad bajará a 6,18* (-0,01)

Comentario: muy bien trabajado, aunque le falta pulir el long stream, que en el final se vio muy random, y los 1/6 no los quise tocar mucho para mantener la esencia y que quede claro que TÚ eres el mapper.

Mucha suerte en tu map! :D Gracias uwu Hice la mayoria <3

Alepat.
Raiden
[Inner Oni]00:13:756 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - Esto quedaría mejor como un dkkdkkd siguiendo la melodía.
00:25:742 - Puedes añadir un 1/4 aquí
00:26:077 (143,144,145,146,147) - Suena bastante mejor como kkkkd
00:31:166 (197) - Siguiendo el ritmo de k_k_d que has usado hasta ahora en los beats normales, esto debería ser un don
00:32:238 (204,209) - Ctrl+G por la misma razón ^
00:38:064 - Un 1/4 aquí fluye bastante bien
00:39:470 - A partir de esta nota, mueve las líneas verdes 1/4 antes para evitar problemas
00:48:979 (294,295,298,299) - Qué hacen estas notas? Aquí no hay nada
00:59:827 - Epa! Aquí hay 1/6!
01:00:898 - Aquí hay otro!
01:01:434 - El beat entero es 1/6, no lo reduzcas a mitad. Mantén la consistencia.
01:07:863 - Es 1/6!
01:16:635 - y 01:16:769 - Siguen teniendo 1/4, por qué los dejas vacíos?
01:19:648 - 9 notas seguidas en 1/2 da una sensación de disminución de intensidad. Añade algún 1/4 para dar el efecto de que seguimos en la misma sección intensa
01:27:349 - Hay 1/4
01:29:090 - 01:29:492 - 01:29:492 - 01:29:626 - 01:29:760 - ^
01:40:407 (40,41,44,45) - Estos 1/2 qué pintan aquí?
01:43:488 - No le vendría mal un kiai hasta 01:53:131 -
01:50:050 (124) - Esto está mal. La melodía sigue yendo 1/3, además de que la transición es bastante incómoda de jugar.
El hecho de que sacrifiques 1/3 para poner bursts de 1/6 también afecta a la calidad del mapa, en mi opinión. Hablo de los huecos como 01:51:434 - y 01:52:506 -

Buen map. Puede que vuelva para el resto del set
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

Raiden wrote:

[Inner Oni]00:13:756 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - Esto quedaría mejor como un dkkdkkd siguiendo la melodía.
00:25:742 - Puedes añadir un 1/4 aquí
00:26:077 (143,144,145,146,147) - Suena bastante mejor como kkkkd
00:31:166 (197) - Siguiendo el ritmo de k_k_d que has usado hasta ahora en los beats normales, esto debería ser un don
00:32:238 (204,209) - Ctrl+G por la misma razón ^
00:38:064 - Un 1/4 aquí fluye bastante bien
00:39:470 - A partir de esta nota, mueve las líneas verdes 1/4 antes para evitar problemas
00:48:979 (294,295,298,299) - Qué hacen estas notas? Aquí no hay nada pues queria dar un poco de mi ritmo nadie se ha quejado aun asi que los dejare por ahora
00:59:827 - Epa! Aquí hay 1/6! 3:^) ok
01:00:898 - Aquí hay otro!
01:01:434 - El beat entero es 1/6, no lo reduzcas a mitad. Mantén la consistencia.
01:07:863 - Es 1/6!
01:16:635 - y 01:16:769 - Siguen teniendo 1/4, por qué los dejas vacíos? lo que pasa es que yo queria hacer de esta mas simple que las demas que estan mapeadas XD entonces... ahi por que esta tan simple en algunos sitios
01:19:648 - 9 notas seguidas en 1/2 da una sensación de disminución de intensidad. Añade algún 1/4 para dar el efecto de que seguimos en la misma sección intensa
01:27:349 - Hay 1/4 por ahora lo dejare ddk para que la nota anterior tenga el Finish
01:29:090 - 01:29:492 - 01:29:492 - 01:29:626 - 01:29:760 - ^ sera d d d ddd d d por ahora :3 ( de hecho esta observacion la quiero hacer en un futuro pero esperare un poco mas a ver si puedo bajar la SR de las demas para poder subir esta )
01:40:407 (40,41,44,45) - Estos 1/2 qué pintan aquí? como dije antes mi propio ritmo xD los elimino cuando me digan que los elimine de nuevo ( de igual forma no estaba MUY seguro de dejarlos ahi )
01:43:488 - No le vendría mal un kiai hasta 01:53:131 -
01:50:050 (124) - Esto está mal. La melodía sigue yendo 1/3, además de que la transición es bastante incómoda de jugar.
El hecho de que sacrifiques 1/3 para poner bursts de 1/6 también afecta a la calidad del mapa, en mi opinión. Hablo de los huecos como 01:51:434 - y 01:52:506 - yay XD esperaba algo como esto... Los 1/6 seguiran aun lo que hice fue agregar esos 1/3 para asi aumentar la dificultad en esa ultima parte

Buen map. Puede que vuelva para el resto del set heh Tu mod nunca me lo espere XD Muchisimas gracias Raidon-sama :3 espero volverlo a ver y/o sea usted el primero en dar bubble? a esta porqueria de map que tiene el SR roto :X
frukoyurdakul
Hello, here is my M4M part:

Kantan
Good enough.
Futsuu
00:39:202 - The bar line is coming weirdly at this section.
00:51:256 - Instead of making SV change here, 00:52:059 - make it here. Because there is a weird vision here.

The sounds are right imo, but at the last section only, maybe you can use 2 or 3 more finishers because of the hard drums.
Muzukashii
00:00:631 - Mentioned in Oni and Inner Oni.
00:09:336 (32) - d
01:03:041 (21) - I don't think so that you followed keyboard sounds here, so 01:02:238 (17) - this and 01:03:041 (21) - this notes have to be same.
01:33:510 (155) - There is no sound here. Well, no keyboard sound.

The rest is nice imo.
Oni
00:00:631 (1,2) - 00:01:032 (3,4) - These two streams has exact keyboard notes, i recommend you to change them bot d k. But like this they are good too.
00:09:202 (32) - k
00:48:845 (250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - Mentioned in Inner Oni mod.
01:09:671 (387) - There is no sound here.
01:13:889 (411) - Maybe, shift this one to 01:13:956 - here.
01:15:497 (423) - Shift this one to 01:15:564 - here and 01:15:497 (423,424) - ctrl + g
01:40:273 (562,563,564,565,566,567,568,569) - Same as 00:48:845.
Inner Oni
01:27:416 (219) - Wrong finisher, drop it or delete the previous note.

00:00:631 (1,2) - 00:01:032 (3,4) - These two streams has exact keyboard notes, i recommend you to change them bot d k. But like this they are good too.
00:01:032 (3,4) - Before this section you were following the sounds harmoniously but suddenly the patterns have changed here. Maybe deleting 00:48:979 (300,302,304,306) - these ones? It has the same situation in Oni diff.
01:06:925 - There is a kick sound here, but it's good as it is too.
01:09:068 (61) - There is no sound here. Maybe consider deleting it.
01:09:872 (68) - ^
01:10:675 (77) - ^
01:23:934 (192,193,194) - I listened a 1/6 stream here. Change them to 1/6 kkkkkkk maybe.
01:40:273 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - Same as 00:01:032

The rest is beautiful, please don't touch it :D I really enjoyed playing it ^^

Hope this helps, good luck~
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello, here is my M4M part:

Kantan
Good enough.
Futsuu
00:39:202 - The bar line is coming weirdly at this section.
00:51:256 - Instead of making SV change here, 00:52:059 - make it here. Because there is a weird vision here.

The sounds are right imo, but at the last section only, maybe you can use 2 or 3 more finishers because of the hard drums.
Muzukashii
00:00:631 - Mentioned in Oni and Inner Oni.
00:09:336 (32) - d
01:03:041 (21) - I don't think so that you followed keyboard sounds here, so 01:02:238 (17) - this and 01:03:041 (21) - this notes have to be same.
01:33:510 (155) - There is no sound here. Well, no keyboard sound.

The rest is nice imo.
Oni
00:00:631 (1,2) - 00:01:032 (3,4) - These two streams has exact keyboard notes, i recommend you to change them bot d k. But like this they are good too.
00:09:202 (32) - k
00:48:845 (250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - Mentioned in Inner Oni mod.
01:09:671 (387) - There is no sound here.
01:13:889 (411) - Maybe, shift this one to 01:13:956 - here.
01:15:497 (423) - Shift this one to 01:15:564 - here and 01:15:497 (423,424) - ctrl + g
01:40:273 (562,563,564,565,566,567,568,569) - Same as 00:48:845.
Inner Oni
01:27:416 (219) - Wrong finisher, drop it or delete the previous note.

00:00:631 (1,2) - 00:01:032 (3,4) - These two streams has exact keyboard notes, i recommend you to change them bot d k. But like this they are good too.
00:01:032 (3,4) - Before this section you were following the sounds harmoniously but suddenly the patterns have changed here. Maybe deleting 00:48:979 (300,302,304,306) - these ones? It has the same situation in Oni diff.
01:06:925 - There is a kick sound here, but it's good as it is too.
01:09:068 (61) - There is no sound here. Maybe consider deleting it.
01:09:872 (68) - ^
01:10:675 (77) - ^
01:23:934 (192,193,194) - I listened a 1/6 stream here. Change them to 1/6 kkkkkkk maybe.
01:40:273 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - Same as 00:01:032

The rest is beautiful, please don't touch it :D I really enjoyed playing it ^^

Hope this helps, good luck~
Like 15% acepted ^^ good mod :3 i'll mod you later ;_; SORRY FOR LONG TIME !! I DIDN'T WAS NOTICE!! FUCKING PHONE
Nishizumi
Hi there o/

[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:05:184 - change to d ? other diffs are don here.
  2. 00:15:564 - delete this ? for consistent to 00:14:559 - since they have one triplet after 2 notes.
  3. 00:15:697 - if you apply above, change to d for variation ?
  4. 00:16:166 - might change these to kdd instead of kkd ? for variation to 00:16:970
  5. 00:18:577 - make two triplets like you did at 00:17:773 - instead of single quintuplet. for consistent
  6. 00:19:381 - this would be better if you make quintuplet like you did at 00:18:577 - for climax of this part
  7. 00:51:256 - might this stream changed to kkkkkkkkkkkd instead of dddddddddk because 00:52:059 - is similar like 00:39:202
  8. 01:06:791 - remove finish ? this melody is not strong enough
  9. 01:27:148 - change to big kat ? for better structure from 01:25:809 - (D D D K K K)
  10. 01:46:256 - change to d ? for consistent to 01:44:648
[Oni]

increase OD to 6 ? because this oni is harder than usual oni. also for better structure to OD too i guess (Inner 7 ~> Oni 6 ~> Muzu 5 ~> Futsuu 4 ~> Kantan 3)

  1. 00:00:631 - starting from here to 00:11:881 - might delete some notes to differentiate to inner oni ? they're all obviously same
  2. 00:13:488 - these (00:14:291 - , 00:15:095 - , 00:15:898 - , 00:16:702 - , etc ) are big don. but why is this only big kat ? even they're same pitch
  3. 00:18:108 - out of consistency ? maybe move to 00:17:840
  4. 00:35:854 - delete this pls, like you did at 00:22:997
  5. 00:57:684 (305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313) - this stream is same like you did on inner oni. might to delete note on (308) and (312)
  6. 00:58:822 - same as above, delete this
  7. 01:02:305 - delete this ? even the next note doesnt have triplet
  8. 01:16:836 - delete this ? for give a lil break
  9. 01:18:711 - same as above
  10. 01:28:889 - ^
  11. 01:29:961 - same ^
seems that gap between muzu to oni is too huge.
sorry i cant mod muzu and below. i dont have many time to do that ;w;
hope my mod helps you, good luck :)
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi there o/

[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:05:184 - change to d ? other diffs are don here.
  2. 00:15:564 - delete this ? for consistent to 00:14:559 - since they have one triplet after 2 notes.
  3. 00:15:697 - if you apply above, change to d for variation ?
  4. 00:16:166 - might change these to kdd instead of kkd ? for variation to 00:16:970
  5. 00:18:577 - make two triplets like you did at 00:17:773 - instead of single quintuplet. for consistent
  6. 00:19:381 - this would be better if you make quintuplet like you did at 00:18:577 - for climax of this part
  7. 00:51:256 - might this stream changed to kkkkkkkkkkkd instead of dddddddddk because 00:52:059 - is similar like 00:39:202
  8. 01:06:791 - remove finish ? this melody is not strong enough
  9. 01:27:148 - change to big kat ? for better structure from 01:25:809 - (D D D K K K)
  10. 01:46:256 - change to d ? for consistent to 01:44:648
[Oni]

increase OD to 6 ? because this oni is harder than usual oni. also for better structure to OD too i guess (Inner 7 ~> Oni 6 ~> Muzu 5 ~> Futsuu 4 ~> Kantan 3)

  1. 00:00:631 - starting from here to 00:11:881 - might delete some notes to differentiate to inner oni ? they're all obviously same ye cuz i want to be very consistent in those part XD almost in the beginnig on the song
  2. 00:13:488 - these (00:14:291 - , 00:15:095 - , 00:15:898 - , 00:16:702 - , etc ) are big don. but why is this only big kat ? even they're same pitch DAMN sorry xD changing to K!
  3. 00:18:108 - out of consistency ? maybe move to 00:17:840
  4. 00:35:854 - delete this pls, like you did at 00:22:997
  5. 00:57:684 (305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313) - this stream is same like you did on inner oni. might to delete note on (308) and (312)
  6. 00:58:822 - same as above, delete this
  7. 01:02:305 - delete this ? even the next note doesnt have triplet
  8. 01:16:836 - delete this ? for give a lil break
  9. 01:18:711 - same as above
  10. 01:28:889 - ^
  11. 01:29:961 - same ^
seems that gap between muzu to oni is too huge. :^) PP map... ;_;nvm is just a trash map
sorry i cant mod muzu and below. i dont have many time to do that ;w; np ;_;
hope my mod helps you, good luck :)Ily <3
Yaminoma
hi

[Kantan]
  1. 00:53:398 - maybe add note here ?
  2. 01:52:863 - 01:49:648 - remove? this can get hard for ultra beginners huehue
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:03:309 - there is no sound here but you could optionally remove this note
  2. 00:04:916 - k
  3. 01:38:934 - maybe add k ?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:309 - same as in futsuu
  2. 01:19:113 - k
[Oni]
  1. 00:03:309 - same as futsuu muzukashi @_@
  2. 01:23:934 - maybe you could make a 1/4 ddd here too
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:03:309 - same as all above wehhh
  2. 01:49:916 - why didnt u make this just like in 01:43:488 - ? same sounds you could use the same patterns, playing only dkkdkkd feels kinda boring here, try to make it dkkdddkkkdkk like previous stream !
  3. OPTIONAL: 01:57:952 - why not high SV finisher XDDDDDDDDDDDD lol

this map looks really good and fun to play, hope this mod helps
good luck !
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

-TheHateD- wrote:

hi

[Kantan]
  1. 00:53:398 - maybe add note here ?
  2. 01:52:863 - 01:49:648 - remove? this can get hard for ultra beginners huehue
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:03:309 - there is no sound here but you could optionally remove this note
  2. 00:04:916 - k
  3. 01:38:934 - maybe add k ?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:309 - same as in futsuu
  2. 01:19:113 - k
[Oni]
  1. 00:03:309 - same as futsuu muzukashi @_@
  2. 01:23:934 - maybe you could make a 1/4 ddd here too
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:03:309 - same as all above wehhh
  2. 01:49:916 - why didnt u make this just like in 01:43:488 - ? same sounds you could use the same patterns, playing only dkkdkkd feels kinda boring here, try to make it dkkdddkkkdkk like previous stream !
  3. OPTIONAL: 01:57:952 - why not high SV finisher XDDDDDDDDDDDD lol
:o

this map looks really good and fun to play, hope this mod helps
good luck !
No changes in Oni diff :3 Ty for mod
Midnaait
Hola, un mod que te debia del año pasado (?)
// = Sugerencia


[General]


Le falto un pixel al BG lel


Pon "SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-" de Source y quitalo de los tags
Recuerda que las diffs faciles deben tener HP mas alta que las dificiles debido a que tienen menos notas

El primer kiai deberia terminar en 00:39:202 - (Lo noté en el futsuu, no sé si estará en las otras diffs)


[Kantan]


00:22:863 - Aunque sea un sonido bastante prominente, deberias considerar borrarla para enfatizar la siguiente nota
00:35:720 - ^
00:44:827 - No es necesario, pero borrar esto daria un lindo break y tambien pegaria con el violin que se mantiene de la nota anterior
01:36:256 - ^ pero con el piano lol
01:42:684 - Ponle finish? Es un cambio bastante brusco de volumen


[Futsuu]


OD=4 Deberia ser un poco mas dificil que el Kantan
Nerf incoming (?)

(1) Primero que nada, limitale un poco mas a los 1/2, debido al alto bpm, que use signature de 3/4 y que esta cancion le gusta usar dobles lel
(2) Segundo, si usas 1/2 (No es necesario, pero si recomendable, ayudara un poco a nerfear la SR) Intenta que sean monocolor


00:07:461 - Borra esto por consistencia con 00:01:032
00:09:470 - // Cambia a d? Haria buen contraste con el siguiente pattern kkk
00:10:943 - Borra esto para hacer el inicio un poco mas simple
00:13:488 a 00:19:113 - Podrias seguir un poco mas la melodia, esta un poco aburrida y repetitiva esta parte, ademas, quitar algunas dobles no vendria mal
00:35:720 - Consideraria mover esto a 00:35:988 Para mantener mejor el ritmo de la canción
- Si lo has hecho cambialo a D
00:38:666 (59,60) - Borra estos dos para enfatizar el fin del kiai
00:40:006 - Podrias mover esa linea verde un poco a la izquierda? La linea se ve mal por alguna razón cuando juegas
00:41:881 - Mueve esto a 00:41:077 - Sonaria mejor debido a que aqui suena el violin
00:44:559 - Vendria bien un break de 3/1 debido a ser una parte bastante tranquila, eso y que el violin deja de sonar aqui
00:45:631 (79,80) - Ctrl+G. (2)
01:37:059 - (2)
01:38:934 (232,233) - // Ctrl+G? Suena mucho mejor en mi opinion
01:44:827 (246,247) - No haria daño invertir estas, como hiciste en 01:51:256 (263,264)
01:46:434 - ^


[Muzukashii]


Las dobles de 1/4 no deberian ser usadas, debido al bpm, para eso esta el Oni lol (Ejemplos: 01:05:653 (35,36) - 01:08:867 (48,49) - 01:09:671 (52,53) - 01:10:474 (56,57) - etc...). Realmente consideraria borrar la primer nota o moverla 1/4 a la izquierda para que quede todo 1/2
Precaución: Puede que esto baje drasticamente el SR, si no nerfeaste el Futsuu habra un problema grande rip

00:15:497 - // Borraria esto para añadir mas variedad y que no sea tan monótono
00:16:300 - // ^
00:25:876 - Moveria esta nota a 00:25:742 o a 00:26:144
00:28:421 - Borra esto, no sigue a nada que esté en 1/4
00:34:381 (135,136,137) - K K D Quedaria mejor, seguiria a la melodía
00:37:997 - // Borra esto y cambia 00:38:131 (149,150,151) - a kkd?
00:45:095 - Borra esto, misma razon que el futsuu
00:51:925 - Mueve esto a 00:51:657 para enfatizar el finish
01:44:827 (200,201) - d K como en el futsuu
01:46:434 (204,205) - ^
01:54:671 - Borra esto, o cambia la ultima nota del triplet por d


[Oni]


00:26:747 - // ddkkk se juega mejor en mi opinion, es un pattern que no requiere cambiar las manos
00:41:881 - Vendria bien borrar esta nota, como en las otras diffs
00:48:309 - ^
00:51:724 - Que te parece mover esto a 00:51:456 - para hacer un 5plet?
01:10:072 - Mueve esto a 01:09:939 - y cambialo a d, no hace nada en su posicion actual lol
01:33:309 - Ya sabes, borra esto
01:36:523 - ^
01:39:738 - ^


[Inner Oni]


00:27:081 - Pon un kat aqui? Se escucha algo de la melodia
- Si lo haces pon Ctrl+G en 00:26:947 (156,157) -
00:59:961 - Si escuchas con cuidado, el 1/6 se escucha menos intenso, cambia esta nota por d
- Añadiendo, 01:00:028 no se escucha ninguna percusión, borrala
01:42:148 - // Cambia a d para enfatizar las notas de los lados?
01:48:443 - No sé que sigue esta nota, recomiendo borrarla
01:48:711 - ^

Por qué me haces trabajar :^)
Suerte con el map :D
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

Midnaait wrote:

Hola, un mod que te debia del año pasado (?)
// = Sugerencia


[General]


Le falto un pixel al BG lel


Pon "SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-" de Source y quitalo de los tags
Recuerda que las diffs faciles deben tener HP mas alta que las dificiles debido a que tienen menos notas

El primer kiai deberia terminar en 00:39:202 - (Lo noté en el futsuu, no sé si estará en las otras diffs)


[Kantan]


00:22:863 - Aunque sea un sonido bastante prominente, deberias considerar borrarla para enfatizar la siguiente nota
00:35:720 - ^
00:44:827 - No es necesario, pero borrar esto daria un lindo break y tambien pegaria con el violin que se mantiene de la nota anterior
01:36:256 - ^ pero con el piano lol
01:42:684 - Ponle finish? Es un cambio bastante brusco de volumen


[Futsuu]


OD=4 Deberia ser un poco mas dificil que el Kantan
Nerf incoming (?)

(1) Primero que nada, limitale un poco mas a los 1/2, debido al alto bpm, que use signature de 3/4 y que esta cancion le gusta usar dobles lel
(2) Segundo, si usas 1/2 (No es necesario, pero si recomendable, ayudara un poco a nerfear la SR) Intenta que sean monocolor


00:07:461 - Borra esto por consistencia con 00:01:032
00:09:470 - // Cambia a d? Haria buen contraste con el siguiente pattern kkk
00:10:943 - Borra esto para hacer el inicio un poco mas simple
00:13:488 a 00:19:113 - Podrias seguir un poco mas la melodia, esta un poco aburrida y repetitiva esta parte, ademas, quitar algunas dobles no vendria mal
00:35:720 - Consideraria mover esto a 00:35:988 Para mantener mejor el ritmo de la canción
- Si lo has hecho cambialo a D
00:38:666 (59,60) - Borra estos dos para enfatizar el fin del kiai
00:40:006 - Podrias mover esa linea verde un poco a la izquierda? La linea se ve mal por alguna razón cuando juegas
00:41:881 - Mueve esto a 00:41:077 - Sonaria mejor debido a que aqui suena el violin
00:44:559 - Vendria bien un break de 3/1 debido a ser una parte bastante tranquila, eso y que el violin deja de sonar aqui
00:45:631 (79,80) - Ctrl+G. (2)
01:37:059 - (2)
01:38:934 (232,233) - // Ctrl+G? Suena mucho mejor en mi opinion
01:44:827 (246,247) - No haria daño invertir estas, como hiciste en 01:51:256 (263,264)
01:46:434 - ^


[Muzukashii]


Las dobles de 1/4 no deberian ser usadas, debido al bpm, para eso esta el Oni lol (Ejemplos: 01:05:653 (35,36) - 01:08:867 (48,49) - 01:09:671 (52,53) - 01:10:474 (56,57) - etc...). Realmente consideraria borrar la primer nota o moverla 1/4 a la izquierda para que quede todo 1/2
Precaución: Puede que esto baje drasticamente el SR, si no nerfeaste el Futsuu habra un problema grande rip

00:15:497 - // Borraria esto para añadir mas variedad y que no sea tan monótono
00:16:300 - // ^
00:25:876 - Moveria esta nota a 00:25:742 o a 00:26:144
00:28:421 - Borra esto, no sigue a nada que esté en 1/4
00:34:381 (135,136,137) - K K D Quedaria mejor, seguiria a la melodía
00:37:997 - // Borra esto y cambia 00:38:131 (149,150,151) - a kkd?
00:45:095 - Borra esto, misma razon que el futsuu
00:51:925 - Mueve esto a 00:51:657 para enfatizar el finish
01:44:827 (200,201) - d K como en el futsuu
01:46:434 (204,205) - ^
01:54:671 - Borra esto, o cambia la ultima nota del triplet por d


[Oni]


00:26:747 - // ddkkk se juega mejor en mi opinion, es un pattern que no requiere cambiar las manos
00:41:881 - Vendria bien borrar esta nota, como en las otras diffs
00:48:309 - ^
00:51:724 - Que te parece mover esto a 00:51:456 - para hacer un 5plet?
01:10:072 - Mueve esto a 01:09:939 - y cambialo a d, no hace nada en su posicion actual lol
01:33:309 - Ya sabes, borra esto
01:36:523 - ^
01:39:738 - ^


[Inner Oni]


00:27:081 - Pon un kat aqui? Se escucha algo de la melodia
- Si lo haces pon Ctrl+G en 00:26:947 (156,157) -
00:59:961 - Si escuchas con cuidado, el 1/6 se escucha menos intenso, cambia esta nota por d
- Añadiendo, 01:00:028 no se escucha ninguna percusión, borrala
01:42:148 - // Cambia a d para enfatizar las notas de los lados?
01:48:443 - No sé que sigue esta nota, recomiendo borrarla
01:48:711 - ^

Por qué me haces trabajar :^)
Suerte con el map :D

GRACIAS MID :3 las que no acepte y razones son estas XD
hehehe no tenia net y tuve que hacer esto aparte
00:38:934 (59) - solo borrare esta nota, por que con la siguiente puedo abrir el kiai perfectamente
01:54:671 - Borra esto, o cambia la ultima nota del triplet por d No por que es un pequeño reto, asi obligando a las personas nuevas aprender un patron nuevo
00:41:881 - Vendria bien borrar esta nota, como en las otras diffs mmm no por lo momentos por que quiero mantener el sonido que se utiliza ahi
00:48:309 - ^ ^
01:33:309 - Ya sabes, borra esto Como dije antes, por los momentos no
01:36:523 - ^
01:39:738 - ^
xtrem3x
(?)


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K


Slider velocity en 1.40 minimo ...

Kantan

  • usa todos los interited points con velocidad de 0.70x (si, eso incluye crear otro con offset 631 para no tener variaciones)

    00:03:845 (5,6) - cambialas a d
    00:10:273 (13,15) - igual

    el slider extiendelo hasta 00:13:488- (posiblemente tambien debas cambiar el tick rate a 3 para que no sea tan dificil agarrar esos puntos y vaya en formato 1/3)

    00:26:345 - cambialo a K mas que nada por diferencia, por que ya empieza el kiai y se ve raro si la combinas con la parte que no tiene

    00:42:416 (54,56) - cambialos a d ... lo mismo que al inicio.

    01:25:809 - está muy cuestionada esta parte ... sería como una rompedera de reglas y sería algo muy denso comparando a toda la diff, así que no puedo dar un punto bueno para esta parte.

    01:29:023 - cambia a k .. aunque tiene menos sonido que la nota anterior sería mejor darle otro enfoque en esta parte

    01:33:845 (136,138) - cambia a d ... lo mismo que al inicio.

    01:44:291 (149,151) - cambialas a k ... muchas notas iguales se ve aburrido, ademas estas tienen un poco mas de sonido de fondo.

    01:55:541 (165,166,167) - borra estas notas y pones un spinner hasta 01:57:550-


Futsuu

  • todos los inherited a 0.75x y mismas indicaciones que kantan .-.

    00:05:720 - borra esta para un break

    00:09:336 - borra esta nota .. tiene mas sentido el triple siguiente

    00:13:488- hasta 00:26:345- veo algo forzada esta sección, (sabes, densidad) ... toda borrar algunas notas o solo seguir un ritmo especifico.

    00:51:256 - podría ir un slider acá hasta 00:51:791-

    00:54:202 (94,95) - d K

    01:10:273 (142,143,144,145,146) - k k d d k

    01:21:131 - cambiala a k ... tiene mas sonido (mas enfasis que la siguiente)

    01:37:327 - mejor agrega otra nota acá

Inner Oni

  • 14:32 xtrem3x: 00:22:863- hasta 00:25:006- <<< no hace falta meterle triples a esta sección ... queda muy extraño.
    14:33 [_Chichinya_]: :o lo haces IRC?
    14:33 xtrem3x: ps ya que
    14:33 xtrem3x: ando aburrido y nadie me hace caso
    14:33 [_Chichinya_]: estamos igual xD
    14:33 [_Chichinya_]: pero ando con un calor que W A O O O O
    14:34 xtrem3x: 00:29:693 - dkd ddk kdk kdk kkd kdd
    14:35 xtrem3x: 00:42:282- podría ir otra nota acá
    14:35 [_Chichinya_]: no me gusta el pattern kdd :c me suena raro
    14:35 xtrem3x: si lo se, pero tambien no entiendo que tratas de seguir XD
    14:35 [_Chichinya_]: seria mejor repetir el dkd
    14:36 xtrem3x: 00:48:845 - mejor cambia esto por repeticiones k ddd k ddd
    14:41 xtrem3x: 00:58:622 (378,386,394) - cambialas por k ... se verá mas dificil pero estas notas específicamente no siguen el sonido de golpe sino que cambia
    14:42 xtrem3x: 01:00:697 - otro cambio a k en esta
    14:43 xtrem3x: 01:01:434 - kkddkdk ....
    14:44 xtrem3x: 01:11:077- podría ser un compuesto kkkkD
    14:44 [_Chichinya_]: no seria muy complicado ese 1/6?
    14:44 xtrem3x: tal vez, pero es inner
    14:44 xtrem3x: desde acá ya no hay limites
    14:46 xtrem3x: 01:15:631 - cambia a d .. tiene el mismo tono que la nota anterior
    14:48 xtrem3x: 01:16:032 - http://puu.sh/tzZBG.jpg
    14:52 [_Chichinya_]: wait
    14:53 xtrem3x: el punto que puse es donde inicia toda esa shit que cambie
    14:54 xtrem3x: 01:19:648 (153,154,155,156) - invierte los colores
    14:56 xtrem3x: 01:29:827 - http://puu.sh/tA0aC.jpg
    15:10 [_Chichinya_]: aja...
    15:10 [_Chichinya_]: mejor hagalo por foro
    15:10 [_Chichinya_]: ...
    15:10 [_Chichinya_]: la puta internet se fue :)
    15:12 xtrem3x: en donde te quedaste?
    15:12 [_Chichinya_]: 01:19:916 (153,154,155,156) - invierte los colores
    15:12 xtrem3x: 01:29:827 - http://puu.sh/tA0aC.jpg
    15:15 [_Chichinya_]: pero como que los invierta? :o
    15:16 [_Chichinya_]: kdkdkdkd es el ritmo
    15:16 xtrem3x: cambiales de color
    15:16 [_Chichinya_]: dkdkdkdk?
    15:16 xtrem3x: solo las 4 mencionadas
    15:16 [_Chichinya_]: no me gusta como suena
    15:17 xtrem3x: mas que nada por que suena hueco pero igual sigo
    15:17 [_Chichinya_]: aja
    15:17 xtrem3x: 01:40:276 - lo mismo que en 00:48:845
    15:18 [_Chichinya_]: no se ese k ddd
    15:18 [_Chichinya_]: lo pongo asi tipo
    15:18 [_Chichinya_]: k ddd d d
    15:19 xtrem3x: posible
    15:19 xtrem3x: 01:49:648 ... acá hay un cambio
    15:19 xtrem3x: 01:49:737 (119,120,121) - d d k
    15:19 [_Chichinya_]: lol Xd te falto el -
    15:19 xtrem3x: y repites
    15:20 xtrem3x: 6 veces
    15:21 [_Chichinya_]: creo que asi esta bien .w.
    15:22 xtrem3x: nou
    15:22 xtrem3x: por que suena muy repetitivo y pues mejor metele algo adecuado
    15:23 xtrem3x: 01:52:863 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - dkkdkkd
    15:23 [_Chichinya_]: xD osea los que puse
    15:23 [_Chichinya_]: mmm
    15:23 [_Chichinya_]: oki
    15:25 xtrem3x: podrías hacer un jueguito acá de velocidades
    15:26 xtrem3x: 01:55:541 - toda esa parte dejala en 0.30
    15:27 xtrem3x: en 0.50 y la ultima aumentala a 2
    15:27 xtrem3x: 2.00x
    15:27 xtrem3x: y eso sería todo de mi parte .-.
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

xtrem3x wrote:

(?)


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K


Slider velocity en 1.40 minimo ...

Kantan

  • usa todos los interited points con velocidad de 0.70x (si, eso incluye crear otro con offset 631 para no tener variaciones) eh? D:!

    00:03:845 (5,6) - cambialas a d
    00:10:273 (13,15) - igual

    el slider extiendelo hasta 00:13:488- (posiblemente tambien debas cambiar el tick rate a 3 para que no sea tan dificil agarrar esos puntos y vaya en formato 1/3)

    00:26:345 - cambialo a K mas que nada por diferencia, por que ya empieza el kiai y se ve raro si la combinas con la parte que no tiene

    00:42:416 (54,56) - cambialos a d ... lo mismo que al inicio.

    01:25:809 - está muy cuestionada esta parte ... sería como una rompedera de reglas y sería algo muy denso comparando a toda la diff, así que no puedo dar un punto bueno para esta parte. cambiado a K K K K D

    01:29:023 - cambia a k .. aunque tiene menos sonido que la nota anterior sería mejor darle otro enfoque en esta parte

    01:33:845 (136,138) - cambia a d ... lo mismo que al inicio.

    01:44:291 (149,151) - cambialas a k ... muchas notas iguales se ve aburrido, ademas estas tienen un poco mas de sonido de fondo.

    01:55:541 (165,166,167) - borra estas notas y pones un spinner hasta 01:57:550- por los momentos no por que hay sonidos que puedo utilizar para dar un final mas limpio


Futsuu

  • todos los inherited a 0.75x y mismas indicaciones que kantan .-.

    00:05:720 - borra esta para un break

    00:09:336 - borra esta nota .. tiene mas sentido el triple siguiente

    00:13:488- hasta 00:26:345- veo algo forzada esta sección, (sabes, densidad) ... toda borrar algunas notas o solo seguir un ritmo especifico.

    00:51:256 - podría ir un slider acá hasta 00:51:791- dejare esa parte como un break XD

    00:54:202 (94,95) - d K estoy siguiendo el ritmo de fondo por ende necesita ir k D como todas las demas

    01:10:273 (142,143,144,145,146) - k k d d k

    01:21:131 - cambiala a k ... tiene mas sonido (mas enfasis que la siguiente)

    01:37:327 - mejor agrega otra nota acá

la inner es lo que mas trabajo me va a dar pero ya mañana posteo eso en este...

casi lo acepte todo uwu espero la otra parte
Dainesl
Did an IRC mod with Chich on the Inner Oni. I've linked it below. Date's still present because I'm lazy.

Mod
2017-02-04 00:17 Dainesl: ello there
2017-02-04 00:17 Dainesl: right, I wanna IRC mod this shit
2017-02-04 00:17 Dainesl: particularly the Inner Oni
2017-02-04 00:17 [_Chichinya_]: XD hahaha ok
2017-02-04 00:17 Dainesl: since it's way harder than the Oni
2017-02-04 00:18 [_Chichinya_]: :o ok
2017-02-04 00:18 [_Chichinya_]: so.. Inner Oni 1st?
2017-02-04 00:18 Dainesl: Yeh
2017-02-04 00:18 Dainesl: I'll probably only go for like 3 diffs, I trust the Kantan and Futsuu have been looked at moderately well
2017-02-04 00:19 [_Chichinya_]: okii dokii Dain sama
2017-02-04 00:19 Dainesl: 00:22:863 (118) - Minor suggestion here
2017-02-04 00:19 Dainesl: I suggest removing the finisher on this kat
2017-02-04 00:19 Dainesl: in order to make the next finisher kat have more emphasis placed on it
2017-02-04 00:20 [_Chichinya_]: ok!
2017-02-04 00:21 Dainesl: 00:25:675 - hm
2017-02-04 00:21 Dainesl: lemme explain this one right
2017-02-04 00:21 Dainesl: 00:26:613 - this is 1.1x but the note before it (which starts the kiai) is 1x
2017-02-04 00:21 [_Chichinya_]: wot... that is a ddk
2017-02-04 00:21 [_Chichinya_]: .-.
2017-02-04 00:21 [_Chichinya_]: ye
2017-02-04 00:22 Dainesl: I was thinking increase the SV from 1x to 1.1x within the initial pattern
2017-02-04 00:22 Dainesl: then it looks sort of like
2017-02-04 00:22 Dainesl: less awkward
2017-02-04 00:22 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking: ok!!
2017-02-04 00:22 [_Chichinya_]: :3 more comfortable
2017-02-04 00:22 Dainesl: 00:35:720 (224) - same as the 22s suggestion
2017-02-04 00:24 Dainesl: 00:38:666 (255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262) - perhaps make these kkkd instead?
2017-02-04 00:24 Dainesl: this links to something
2017-02-04 00:24 Dainesl: so I do want you to consider it for just a minute
2017-02-04 00:24 [_Chichinya_]: what? :o that suggest?
2017-02-04 00:24 Dainesl: ye, all of these are suggestions
2017-02-04 00:25 Dainesl: If you change those 8 notes to kkkd kkkd
2017-02-04 00:25 Dainesl: make 00:39:202 (263) - a K instead of a D
2017-02-04 00:25 Dainesl: that way it remains more consistent with the next section's structure
2017-02-04 00:25 Dainesl: and has better flow
2017-02-04 00:25 Dainesl: while still retaining difficulty
2017-02-04 00:25 [_Chichinya_]: oki kkkd
2017-02-04 00:25 Dainesl: Actually now that I think about it I really only have comments about the Inner Oni because like
2017-02-04 00:26 Dainesl: a) lazy b) havent played the other diffs c) i trust they're all fine tbh
2017-02-04 00:26 Dainesl: How many mods has this map got again?
2017-02-04 00:26 [_Chichinya_]: mmmm let me see
2017-02-04 00:26 [_Chichinya_]: i can't remember XD
2017-02-04 00:27 Dainesl: I'll check
2017-02-04 00:27 [_Chichinya_]: 18
2017-02-04 00:27 [_Chichinya_]: XD
2017-02-04 00:27 Dainesl: yeah
2017-02-04 00:27 Dainesl: that's plenty for the other diffs
2017-02-04 00:27 Dainesl: so I can focus on the Inner more
2017-02-04 00:28 Dainesl: 00:45:631 (288,289,290) - how about making this and the next 3 measures k k d instead of k d d?
2017-02-04 00:28 Dainesl: makes the section slightly less repetitive and fits more to the music imo
2017-02-04 00:28 Dainesl: unless you have a reason for k d d?
2017-02-04 00:28 [_Chichinya_]: clock sound
2017-02-04 00:28 [_Chichinya_]: tic tic tic
2017-02-04 00:28 Dainesl: Ok
2017-02-04 00:28 [_Chichinya_]: but ok :o
2017-02-04 00:28 Dainesl: I mean
2017-02-04 00:28 Dainesl: either's fine, just thinking
2017-02-04 00:28 [_Chichinya_]: changed
2017-02-04 00:29 [_Chichinya_]: oki XD
2017-02-04 00:29 Dainesl: 00:48:845 (300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314) - Here's my first major problem with this map tbh, aka the 1/4; why are they there in such a calm section?
2017-02-04 00:30 Dainesl: like
2017-02-04 00:30 Dainesl: 1/1s
2017-02-04 00:30 Dainesl: then suddenly Oni-level patterns
2017-02-04 00:30 [_Chichinya_]: :^) well Xtrem3x
2017-02-04 00:30 [_Chichinya_]: it was 1/1
2017-02-04 00:30 Dainesl: Actually no wait
2017-02-04 00:30 Dainesl: I have an idea
2017-02-04 00:30 [_Chichinya_]: changed to 1/1 again ♥
2017-02-04 00:30 [_Chichinya_]: :o
2017-02-04 00:30 [_Chichinya_]: ok
2017-02-04 00:31 Dainesl: No, just undo what you did quickly
2017-02-04 00:31 Dainesl: just get rid of the 1/4 notes and have just the 1/2s
2017-02-04 00:31 [_Chichinya_]: ok :o
2017-02-04 00:31 [_Chichinya_]: 1/4 again
2017-02-04 00:31 Dainesl: 00:49:046 (302,309) - just remove these possibly idk
2017-02-04 00:32 Dainesl: that's literally about it
2017-02-04 00:32 Dainesl: makes it sound much nicer
2017-02-04 00:32 [_Chichinya_]: oki
2017-02-04 00:32 [_Chichinya_]: :3 removed
2017-02-04 00:34 Dainesl: 00:58:488 (382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389) - any reason for this being dddkkkkk when you used relatively simple patterns thru the rest of the map? this changes the flow quite greatly
2017-02-04 00:34 [_Chichinya_]: is good? :o
2017-02-04 00:34 [_Chichinya_]: \o/
2017-02-04 00:34 Dainesl: not really, it's like
2017-02-04 00:34 Dainesl: awkward to play
2017-02-04 00:35 [_Chichinya_]: jasdlkdajsdklajsd
2017-02-04 00:35 Dainesl: I mean like
2017-02-04 00:35 Dainesl: I can do the pattern
2017-02-04 00:35 Dainesl: it's just awkward
2017-02-04 00:35 [_Chichinya_]: i put that cuz, the sound is... more longer (?)
2017-02-04 00:35 Dainesl: ye
2017-02-04 00:35 Dainesl: in that case
2017-02-04 00:35 Dainesl: let me think of something
2017-02-04 00:36 [_Chichinya_]: mmm...
2017-02-04 00:36 [_Chichinya_]: ddd kkk ddk kkd (?) some like that? only triplets
2017-02-04 00:36 Dainesl: no, what I was thinking was
2017-02-04 00:36 [_Chichinya_]: dore dore
2017-02-04 00:36 Dainesl: 00:58:488 (382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393) - these 12 notes
2017-02-04 00:37 Dainesl: instead of being d d d k k k k k d d d d
2017-02-04 00:37 Dainesl: go d d d k k k d d k d d d
2017-02-04 00:37 [_Chichinya_]: 1/2 ?
2017-02-04 00:37 Dainesl: no
2017-02-04 00:37 Dainesl: just spacing them so you can see it easier
2017-02-04 00:37 [_Chichinya_]: oooh ty
2017-02-04 00:37 Dainesl: I hope you can see it easier anyways
2017-02-04 00:37 Dainesl: last 4 can be either k d d d or k k d d
2017-02-04 00:38 Dainesl: i don't really mind
2017-02-04 00:38 Dainesl: this keeps the 3x don while having better flow
2017-02-04 00:38 [_Chichinya_]: deleting this one i guess 00:58:555 (381) -
2017-02-04 00:38 [_Chichinya_]: nvm
2017-02-04 00:38 Dainesl: wait hold on
2017-02-04 00:39 Dainesl: >removing the note
2017-02-04 00:39 Dainesl: >makes SR increase
2017-02-04 00:39 Dainesl: ??????
2017-02-04 00:39 Dainesl: this bloody system...anyways yeah if you wanna delete it that could work too, although I assume you want to keep the 3x don pattern
2017-02-04 00:39 [_Chichinya_]: W O T
2017-02-04 00:39 [_Chichinya_]: XD
2017-02-04 00:39 [_Chichinya_]: no no wait xD let me test some
2017-02-04 00:39 Dainesl: yeah sure
2017-02-04 00:39 Dainesl: take your time
2017-02-04 00:41 [_Chichinya_]: actually d d d k k k d d k d d sounds pretty good :o
2017-02-04 00:41 [_Chichinya_]: can i change these 00:59:425 (394,395) - to d?
2017-02-04 00:42 Dainesl: If you think it works
2017-02-04 00:42 Dainesl: then sure.
2017-02-04 00:43 [_Chichinya_]: sounds good? :o
2017-02-04 00:43 Dainesl: seems ok
2017-02-04 00:44 [_Chichinya_]: oki NEXT :D
2017-02-04 00:45 Dainesl: 01:15:831 (110) - I'd probably suggest removing the note here
2017-02-04 00:45 Dainesl: 1/4 becomes much less noticeable here than the previous 2 times
2017-02-04 00:45 [_Chichinya_]: oki
2017-02-04 00:46 Dainesl: 01:18:443 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147) - perhaps change this pattern a bit? instead of being kkdkk d kkd, maybe have...
2017-02-04 00:46 Dainesl: kkddd k ddk
2017-02-04 00:46 Dainesl: or ddkdd instead of kkddd
2017-02-04 00:47 [_Chichinya_]: mmm... kkddd sound better
2017-02-04 00:47 [_Chichinya_]: almost for me XD
2017-02-04 00:48 [_Chichinya_]: change this to d work too 01:20:385 (576) -
2017-02-04 00:48 Dainesl: can work
2017-02-04 00:48 Dainesl: do whatever with it
2017-02-04 00:48 [_Chichinya_]: and deleting all the finish
2017-02-04 00:49 Dainesl: oh, you sure about that...?
2017-02-04 00:49 Dainesl: I think the finishers are ok in the kiai
2017-02-04 00:49 [_Chichinya_]: oh well
2017-02-04 00:49 Dainesl: 01:19:648 (151,152,153,154) - apart from this maybe
2017-02-04 00:49 [_Chichinya_]: KEEP MY FINISHERS!!
2017-02-04 00:50 [_Chichinya_]: well XD that part only kasdjsakldj
2017-02-04 00:50 Dainesl: lol
2017-02-04 00:50 [_Chichinya_]: 01:19:648 (569,570,571,572,573,574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582) - like k d k d kkddk d k ddk
2017-02-04 00:50 [_Chichinya_]: not K d K d kkddk d K ddk
2017-02-04 00:50 Dainesl: 01:20:720 (161) - can be either imo
2017-02-04 00:50 Dainesl: the first two, definitely remove.
2017-02-04 00:51 [_Chichinya_]: 01:20:720 (579) - keep the finish on that one?
2017-02-04 00:51 Dainesl: Up to you
2017-02-04 00:51 Dainesl: I sort of want to say remove it but
2017-02-04 00:51 Dainesl: i'm not going to influence you on this
2017-02-04 00:51 [_Chichinya_]: nah delete that Finish... sound better xD
2017-02-04 00:51 Dainesl: kk
2017-02-04 00:52 [_Chichinya_]: if i put finish on that part i need to delete this note 01:20:921 (581) - to get d K d K
2017-02-04 00:52 [_Chichinya_]: in the finish and follow the clash
2017-02-04 00:53 Dainesl: 01:51:881 (152) - make this a k, 01:52:148 (155) - make this a d.
2017-02-04 00:53 Dainesl: the flow becomes a bit less awkward with the 1/6 then.
2017-02-04 00:53 [_Chichinya_]: ok
2017-02-04 00:53 [_Chichinya_]: changed
2017-02-04 00:53 Dainesl: because instead of going kkd kkkkd on different snaps
2017-02-04 00:53 Dainesl: which is weird
2017-02-04 00:53 Dainesl: you can better prepare for it in a way
2017-02-04 00:53 [_Chichinya_]: 1/3 to 1/6 XD
2017-02-04 00:54 [_Chichinya_]: well fixed!! :D!
2017-02-04 00:54 Dainesl: 01:52:907 (166) - also why I suggest making this a d
2017-02-04 00:54 Dainesl: but idk
2017-02-04 00:54 Dainesl: that would make it seem more like 1/4 but 1/6 instead
2017-02-04 00:54 [_Chichinya_]: d d k d k k d ? D:! woah
2017-02-04 00:54 [_Chichinya_]: ok
2017-02-04 00:55 [_Chichinya_]: changed XD
2017-02-04 00:55 Dainesl: ok thank god I was logging all this
2017-02-04 00:55 Dainesl: otherwise we'd be super screwed lmao
2017-02-04 00:55 Dainesl: Anyways yeah that's my mod
2017-02-04 00:55 [_Chichinya_]: lmao
2017-02-04 00:55 Dainesl: I'ma post this in the thread now, gimme two minutes
2017-02-04 00:55 [_Chichinya_]: thanks you uwu
2017-02-04 00:55 [_Chichinya_]: okii
2017-02-04 00:55 Dainesl: np~
Lumenite-
irc
16:44 Taikocracy: k so let's discuss Applique
16:44 Taikocracy: (:
16:45 [_Chichinya_]: lol
16:46 Taikocracy: see at 00:48:845 most of those dons are mapped to silence
16:46 Taikocracy: I think something like kd dd kd dd D sounds really good
16:46 [_Chichinya_]: :o
16:47 [_Chichinya_]: ik xD
16:48 [_Chichinya_]: i added to be more difficult
16:48 [_Chichinya_]: and more fun to play
16:48 Taikocracy: Yeah ik
16:48 Taikocracy: Don't add things just for the sake of difficulty though
16:48 Taikocracy: It's already hard enough without them :^)
16:48 Taikocracy: The same thing goes for 01:40:273 though
16:48 Taikocracy: The ddd triplets aren't really necessary
16:48 [_Chichinya_]: put te divisor :C
16:49 [_Chichinya_]: 01:40:273 -
16:49 [_Chichinya_]: already deleted that one
16:49 [_Chichinya_]: only that XD
16:50 Taikocracy: Ah oki
16:50 [_Chichinya_]: or maybe
16:50 [_Chichinya_]: let's try this XD
16:50 Taikocracy: Now I'm backtracking to see if I didn't catch anything
16:50 [_Chichinya_]: k d d d k d d d d k ddd d d
16:50 Taikocracy: 00:37:997 doesn't have to be that small stream you made out of it
16:51 [_Chichinya_]: k ddd d l
16:51 [_Chichinya_]: PUT THS DIVISOR XD
16:51 [_Chichinya_]: 00:37:997 -
16:51 Taikocracy: ?
16:51 [_Chichinya_]: the " - " -
16:52 Taikocracy: 00:37:997 - this could be ddk d kdddkkkd
16:52 Taikocracy: The kkkd being 1/6 like you have it
16:53 Taikocracy: 00:45:898 - Why is this a kat xD
16:53 [_Chichinya_]: mmm....
16:53 [_Chichinya_]: ok
16:53 [_Chichinya_]: clock sound XD
16:54 [_Chichinya_]: violin
16:54 [_Chichinya_]: xD
16:54 Taikocracy: The rest are dons though
16:54 Taikocracy: :thinking:
16:54 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking
16:55 [_Chichinya_]: changed
16:56 [_Chichinya_]: ok
16:56 [_Chichinya_]: i changed a big part and is better
16:57 [_Chichinya_]: NEXT!
16:57 Taikocracy: 00:58:488 - these streams can easily be simplified
16:57 [_Chichinya_]: nope
16:57 [_Chichinya_]: the sound
16:58 Taikocracy: I don't hear these sounds you speak of
16:58 Taikocracy: And i'm on 50%
16:58 [_Chichinya_]: and i crop the stream in many parts (?)
16:58 [_Chichinya_]: is a large sound
16:58 [_Chichinya_]: so i follow that with that
16:58 Taikocracy: But it's not constant 1/4
16:58 Taikocracy: :thinking:
16:58 [_Chichinya_]: is like a LN on mania
16:59 [_Chichinya_]: in mania that part can be considerated
16:59 [_Chichinya_]: 1l>2l>3l4l>4l1l
16:59 Taikocracy: Okay
17:00 Taikocracy: 01:16:501 - You could add a don here :thinking:
17:00 [_Chichinya_]: are you sure?
17:00 Taikocracy: Slow it down
17:00 Taikocracy: See if you like it
17:00 [_Chichinya_]: i don't like that sound... can be... a kat
17:01 [_Chichinya_]: changing this one
17:01 [_Chichinya_]: into a d 01:16:568 (534) -
17:01 Taikocracy: That's good too
17:02 Taikocracy: The rest of the map is golden
17:02 Taikocracy: I really like the 1/3 part
17:04 [_Chichinya_]: ♥ ty
17:04 Taikocracy: Np
17:04 Taikocracy: Will post in forum :3
Alepat
F I X A P P L I Q U É P L Z
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

Alepat wrote:

F I X A P P L I Q U É P L Z





N O ! ! ! !
World Fraction
HEYOOOOOOOOO! Just a random mod for your Oni.
Blue is a suggestion and Red is something that got my attention. Took Midnaait's little icon thing 8-)



[Oni]


00:04:916 (17) - can be moved back to a 1/8 space imo which would be here 00:04:883 -
00:09:336 (33) - should be changed to don bcuz of the dip in the volume
00:28:756 (150) - should be changed to a don cuz it just sounds more pleasing
00:39:470 (213,216) - can be changed to kat ^
00:41:881 (222,225) - can be deleted to give some breaks and to follow the weird violin like instrument otherwise its very repetitive
00:43:488 (226) - change to kat?
00:44:291 (229,230,231,232) - can be deleted like 00:41:881 (222,225) -
00:45:898 (232,235) - change to kat same suggestion as 00:39:470 (213,216) -
00:48:309 - delete possibly?
00:48:577 (241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249) - i have no idea what you are trying to do with this pattern should probably change it to match the weird violin thing :P
01:30:631 - this area should be pretty much the same as what i mentioned above
01:49:916 (597,598,599,600,601,602,603,604,605,606,607) - tbh you might want to consider changing all of these to the opposite color imo

ANYWAYS, that's all I've got to say man. GOOD LUCK ChiChi!! :D
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

World Fraction wrote:

HEYOOOOOOOOO! Just a random mod for your Oni.
Blue is a suggestion and Red is something that got my attention. Took Midnaait's little icon thing 8-)



[Oni]


00:04:916 (17) - can be moved back to a 1/8 space imo which would be here 00:04:883 -
00:09:336 (33) - should be changed to don bcuz of the dip in the volume
00:28:756 (150) - should be changed to a don cuz it just sounds more pleasing
00:39:470 (213,216) - can be changed to kat ^
00:41:881 (222,225) - can be deleted to give some breaks and to follow the weird violin like instrument otherwise its very repetitive
00:43:488 (226) - change to kat?
00:44:291 (229,230,231,232) - can be deleted like 00:41:881 (222,225) -
00:45:898 (232,235) - change to kat same suggestion as 00:39:470 (213,216) -
00:48:309 - delete possibly?
00:48:577 (241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249) - i have no idea what you are trying to do with this pattern should probably change it to match the weird violin thing :P
01:30:631 - this area should be pretty much the same as what i mentioned above
01:49:916 (597,598,599,600,601,602,603,604,605,606,607) - tbh you might want to consider changing all of these to the opposite color imo

ANYWAYS, that's all I've got to say man. GOOD LUCK ChiChi!! :D
Like... 97% accepted <3 ty uwu
Alepat
#TeamFIXAPPLIQUE Please
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-
R I P :D!
newyams99
Sorry I'm late.

General

Make sure your audio volumes are consistent across all difficulties, and make sure the volume of the first timing point is the same as the volume of the first inherited point.

FINISHERS ARE INCONSISTENT ACROSS ALL DIFFICULTIES. Please try to make finishers consistent wherever possible. You may keep it inconsistent in cases when you'd like to make it easier for players to hit (in Kantans and Futsuus) or where the finisher is at the end of a 1/4 rhythm (in Onis and Inner Onis).

Kantan

00:00:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - If you were matching to the pitch here, I think something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775493 might make a bit more sense. If you're matching to the clicks, you should either make all these 3/1 hits all k's or make a more obvious pattern with your colouring.

00:19:916 (23) - You can add a finisher here, like you did in the Futsuu.

00:23:934 (29,30,31) - Perhaps you could remove the finishers on here? They're inconsistent with the other diffs, and I felt like you could make a small difficulty spike by having a 1/1 rhythm at 00:25:541 (31,32).

00:30:363 - You can add a hit here, and the rhythm at 00:27:952 (33,34,35,36) is too easy overall in comparison to the pre-kiai areas.

00:34:381 (40) - Changing to k might be better to emphasize the high pitch here, like you did in the Muzu. Same in the Futsuu.

00:38:131 - You can add a hit here to follow the melody that you were following at 00:37:327 (45,46). You may want to change the colours to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775553 as well, to make it slightly easier to hit.

00:39:202 - This violin section is way too easy in comparison with the Futsuu. I'd recommend making the Futsuu a little bit easier, which I'll get to later.

01:03:845 (83,84,85) - Switching the colours on these might sound better to match to the pitch.

01:07:327 (89,90) - Delete for a 6/1 break?

01:08:666 (92,93) - Ctrl + G would match the pitch of the melody imo. However, 01:08:666 (92) - is kind of in an awkward spot; I'd move it to 01:10:273.

01:25:809 (119,120,121,122,123) - A rhythm like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775849 matches all the 1/1 patterns that you've had so far.

01:43:488 (144) - You could change this to K to emphasize the start of the kiai and emphasize the high pitch of the melody.

01:45:095 (146) - Changing this to k would have a similar effect as the above.

Futsuu

00:09:470 (25) - Change to k? This isn't following your k pattern that you've had on every big white tick.

00:10:006 (26,27,28) - 1/2 isn't necessary here; you could delete 27.

00:14:157 (40) - I'd delete this so you have a nice alternation pattern with your rhythms. However, 00:13:488 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - would become quite repetitive. If you'd like to make some more variety, how about
something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776131
I tried to make it so that there's 1/1 that's matched to the melody, while incorporating your original rhythm as well. I personally think this would work very well, because 00:23:131 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - could be changed the exact same way to match the melody by doing this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776140

00:26:211 - You could add a hit here to make a slight difficulty spike entering the kiai.

00:26:345 - Try making some 1/1 patterns longer in the first half of the 1st kiai. Also try to add some 1/2 in some places if you'd like, a possible spot could be 00:36:657 - but other places can still have 1/2 where there's no exact melody rhythm in the music. Another place where you could add 1/2 is at 00:26:881 (78,79).

00:39:470 (110) - Move to 00:38:934 - ? It would work better to create a pattern in the following quiet section.

00:45:497 (127) - Delete? 1/2 isn't necessary in a quiet part imo. Same at 01:36:925 (274).

00:51:256 (144,145) - You can add 1/1 hits between these two circles for a better difficulty curve.

00:58:488 - From here, you could make it more difficult, like you did in the Oni and Inner Oni. However, I'd perhaps You could also make this part more difficult in the Kantan if you'd like to.

01:01:434 (169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177) - I wouldn't use 1/2 here, considering the difficulty curve from the Futsuu and Oni. Please create a more proper difficulty curve here by comparing the difficulties from the Futsuu to the Oni.

01:17:238 - You could add a hit here and change the next hit to a d. Then make the Muzu harder so that there's be a better difficulty curve with the Oni.

01:22:059 - You could add a hit here to keep your 5 hit 1/1 patterns.

01:28:488 - ^

01:37:059 (275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284) - The 1/1 pattern doesn't need to be this long in a quiet section imo. You could add a hit at 01:42:148 - tho

01:43:488 - You could make this kiai more difficult as well. Add 1/1, and you may be able to add 1/2 at sections like 01:48:041 (304,305,306,307,308,309,310).

Muzukashii

Change the HP to 5 for a better HP curve.

00:00:764 (2,3) - You could delete this for a better difficulty curve with the Oni.

00:05:720 (18) - ^

00:07:461 (24) - ^

00:14:157 - You could add a k here if you'd like.

00:19:782 - You could add a d here too.

00:20:385 - ^ 00:21:256 - ^ Both for difficulty curve.

00:25:273 (94) - Change to k to make it consistent with the Oni.

00:27:416 (109) - ^

00:29:827 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776469 This might work to create a more challenging rhythm for Muzu players.

00:36:523 (141) - You could move this to 00:36:389 - and change to d, and then add a hit at 00:36:657 - and change 00:36:791 (142) - to K if you'd like to match to the melody. I feel like it would work better to flow into the somewhat difficult pattern at 00:37:059 (143,144,145,146,147) -

00:38:666 (152,153,154,155,156,157) - This is the exact same rhythm as the Oni; I'd suggest making a bigger difference in rhythm by making this rhythm easier, or make the colour pattern more difficult in the Oni.

00:39:202 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - You can keep the colours the same as the Oni if you'd like. Same at 01:30:899 (145,146,147,148,149,150,151).

00:43:488 (172) - ^ 00:47:773 (186) - ^

00:45:631 (180,181,182,183) - I'd make this a continuous 1/1 pattern since you had it at 00:39:202 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167).

00:48:845 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196) - I personally think that the difficulty increase isn't necessary in all three of the harder difficulties; you can just keep a similar rhythm as the rest of the quiet section.

00:52:059 (204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215) - You can just make this a long 1/1 pattern to create a better difficulty curve. Adding a hit at 00:58:354 - is good too.

00:56:613 (215,216,217,218,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - The difficulty is way too easy here, considering that the Oni becomes extremely difficult. You should make some additions here, but you should also make the Oni slightly less difficult here.

01:01:434 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - As mentioned before, the difficulty curve is messed up here; the Muzu is more difficult than the Oni. Please resolve this problem.

01:05:452 (34,35,36) - Make this 1/2 if you're not going to have 1/4 at 01:08:666 (47,48,49) which is a similar melody rhythm. However, if you do decide to have 1/4 at 01:08:666 (47,48,49) - I'd recommend changing most of these 1/4 rhythms into triplets so that you don't have so many 3/4 gaps. What you did at 01:15:095 (78,79,80,81) - works well to match the melody's rhythm atm, so you should use that rhythm throughout this section and the 2nd kiai.

01:08:934 (49) - I'd change this to k for some variety and to match to the pitch of the melody.

01:18:510 (96,97) - I wouldn't recommend using 1/4 that switches colour in a Muzu. Again, I'd suggest doing what I suggested earlier about changing into a triplet.

01:21:724 (108,109) - ^ 01:24:939 (120,121) - ^

01:19:916 (102) - A k would work better to match the high pitch of the melody imo.

01:25:541 (123) - I'd change this to a d and make 01:25:809 (124,125,126) - K K K, like you had it in the Futsuu. Same in Oni.

01:29:023 (136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144) - This could be more similar to the end of the first kiai for a larger difficulty spike.

01:33:309 (154) - You could delete this for a better difficulty curve. Same at 01:35:720 (164).

01:34:849 (160,161) - I wouldn't have 1/4 in the quiet part.

01:37:327 - Add a hit to be consistent with the Futsuu.

01:39:202 (177) - I'd change this to k, like you had it in the Futsuu and Oni.

01:40:006 (179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - Again, there's no need to raise the difficulty here in the harder difficulties. I'd just keep it similar to what you had before.

01:43:488 - This kiai can be much denser. At least make this section all 1/1 please. Add some 1/2 if you'd like to.

01:54:604 (235,236,237) - I don't think you need any 1/4 that changes colours, as stated before.

Oni

00:04:113 (13) - Move to 00:03:309 - to be consistent with the Inner Oni.

00:13:756 (52,53,54,55,56) - I'd make this slightly harder than the other 1/2 patterns because it's got the melody rhythm here.

00:15:363 (64,65,66,67,68) - I don't see why this doesn't have 1/4 :/ Same in the kiai, I don't see why some patterns don't use 1/4 and other ones do.

00:23:934 (114) - You could change this to K to emphasize the fact that it's higher than 00:24:738 (120).

00:31:434 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176) - You could possibly make this denser and connect the 1/2 so that there's some difficulty in this section.

00:35:184 (184) - Change to D to stay consistent with the other parts that sound like this.

00:38:532 - Adding a hit here wouldn't be bad to make a small difficulty spike. Same at 01:29:961.

00:58:488 (308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332) - This is suddenly quite difficult. How about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776701

01:07:595 (363) - You could add a hit here if you'd like to raise the difficulty a bit.

01:09:135 - ^

01:16:702 (420,421) - You could add hits between these two hits. In addition, you could make a bit more colour variety at 01:16:166 (416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428) - like you did in the Muzu.

01:17:773 - I'd try to minimize the amount of 1/1 that you use in this kiai, since it's an Oni and to create a better difficulty curve with the Muzu. Try making places such as 01:19:648 (441,442,443,444) - and 01:23:398 (465,466,467,468,469,470) - denser where there are many 1/1 gaps.

01:43:488 - Add 1/1 hits between the 1/3 rhythms to make this kiai slightly more difficult. You could also alternate between kkkd and dddk 1/3 rhythms to create more variety.

Inner Oni

00:14:291 - This section is quite similar to the Oni. You may want to modify the Oni and Inner Oni to establish a greater difference.

00:24:068 (129) - I don't see a reason for this to be a k; I think it would work better if you could change it to d to match the lower background instrumentals.

00:28:086 (168) - I'd personally change this to a d. This way, the k's at 00:28:220 (170,171,172,173,174,175) - match the positions of the k's at 00:29:023 (178,179,180,181,182).

00:28:889 (177,178,179,180,181,182) - Coupled with the suggestion above, you should try to make this part of the rhythm more similar to 00:28:086 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175).

00:29:693 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201) - Rather than having so many triplets in a row, it may be good to make some 1/2 patterns and longer 1/4 patterns instead.

00:39:202 (261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270) - I'd change the colours to be consistent to the Oni here.

00:48:845 (298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310) - As mentioned before, I don't think a difficulty increase is necessary here.

00:58:488 (378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386) - I'd change this to ddddkkdkd or something. I don't like dddkkk, and I felt like it'd match the background instrumentals better. Idk tho xD

00:59:827 (398,399,400,401) - I'd change this one to kddd and the one at 01:00:898 (414,415,416,417) - to kkkd since the pitch is higher on the second one.

01:01:434 (421,422,423,424,425,426,427) - Patterns like these are kinda difficult to read, and could be simplified to kkkdddk. I strongly recommend you make the 1/6 pattern a bit simpler here.

01:19:514 - You can add a d here for a continuous pattern, like you had at 01:21:256.

01:25:809 (629,630,631) - Again, I personally think that this would sound better as K K K.

01:30:631 (664,665,666,667,668,669,670,671,672,673) - I'd make the colours consistent to the Oni here.

01:40:541 (703,704,705,706,707,708,709,710,711,712,713,714,715,716) - Again, no need to make it difficult imo.

01:41:881 (711) - You had a D here in the Oni and Muzu, so maybe you should keep it consistent?

01:43:577 (730,731,732,733) - Creating some variety in this 1/3 section would be cool, so how about changing this to kdkk? Same at 01:45:184 (748,749,750,751).

01:53:666 (833) - Changing this to d would nicely match the low instrumentals here imo.

That's all.

Call me back~~ 8-)
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

newyams99 wrote:

Sorry I'm late.

General

Make sure your audio volumes are consistent across all difficulties, and make sure the volume of the first timing point is the same as the volume of the first inherited point.

FINISHERS ARE INCONSISTENT ACROSS ALL DIFFICULTIES. Please try to make finishers consistent wherever possible. You may keep it inconsistent in cases when you'd like to make it easier for players to hit (in Kantans and Futsuus) or where the finisher is at the end of a 1/4 rhythm (in Onis and Inner Onis).

Edit: I think all are ok :o or well, the volumen... All are ok cuz xD is the same diff at Iner i delete some Inherit points... Just that :ooo, About the BIGS you're right XD i was listening and... well :C sorry

Kantan

00:00:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - If you were matching to the pitch here, I think something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775493 might make a bit more sense. If you're matching to the clicks, you should either make all these 3/1 hits all k's or make a more obvious pattern with your colouring.

00:19:916 (23) - You can add a finisher here, like you did in the Futsuu.

00:23:934 (29,30,31) - Perhaps you could remove the finishers on here? They're inconsistent with the other diffs, and I felt like you could make a small difficulty spike by having a 1/1 rhythm at 00:25:541 (31,32).

00:30:363 - You can add a hit here, and the rhythm at 00:27:952 (33,34,35,36) is too easy overall in comparison to the pre-kiai areas.

00:34:381 (40) - Changing to k might be better to emphasize the high pitch here, like you did in the Muzu. Same in the Futsuu.

00:38:131 - You can add a hit here to follow the melody that you were following at 00:37:327 (45,46). You may want to change the colours to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775553 as well, to make it slightly easier to hit.

00:39:202 - This violin section is way too easy in comparison with the Futsuu. I'd recommend making the Futsuu a little bit easier, which I'll get to later.

01:03:845 (83,84,85) - Switching the colours on these might sound better to match to the pitch.

01:07:327 (89,90) - Delete for a 6/1 break?

01:08:666 (92,93) - Ctrl + G would match the pitch of the melody imo. However, 01:08:666 (92) - is kind of in an awkward spot; I'd move it to 01:10:273.

01:25:809 (119,120,121,122,123) - A rhythm like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7775849 matches all the 1/1 patterns that you've had so far.

01:43:488 (144) - You could change this to K to emphasize the start of the kiai and emphasize the high pitch of the melody.

01:45:095 (146) - Changing this to k would have a similar effect as the above.

Futsuu

00:09:470 (25) - Change to k? This isn't following your k pattern that you've had on every big white tick.

00:10:006 (26,27,28) - 1/2 isn't necessary here; you could delete 27.

00:14:157 (40) - I'd delete this so you have a nice alternation pattern with your rhythms. However, 00:13:488 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - would become quite repetitive. If you'd like to make some more variety, how about
something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776131
I tried to make it so that there's 1/1 that's matched to the melody, while incorporating your original rhythm as well. I personally think this would work very well, because 00:23:131 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - could be changed the exact same way to match the melody by doing this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776140

00:26:211 - You could add a hit here to make a slight difficulty spike entering the kiai.

00:26:345 - Try making some 1/1 patterns longer in the first half of the 1st kiai. Also try to add some 1/2 in some places if you'd like, a possible spot could be 00:36:657 - but other places can still have 1/2 where there's no exact melody rhythm in the music. Another place where you could add 1/2 is at 00:26:881 (78,79).

00:39:470 (110) - Move to 00:38:934 - ? It would work better to create a pattern in the following quiet section.

00:45:497 (127) - Delete? 1/2 isn't necessary in a quiet part imo. Same at 01:36:925 (274).

00:51:256 (144,145) - You can add 1/1 hits between these two circles for a better difficulty curve.

00:58:488 - From here, you could make it more difficult, like you did in the Oni and Inner Oni. However, I'd perhaps You could also make this part more difficult in the Kantan if you'd like to.

01:01:434 (169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177) - I wouldn't use 1/2 here, considering the difficulty curve from the Futsuu and Oni. Please create a more proper difficulty curve here by comparing the difficulties from the Futsuu to the Oni.

01:17:238 - You could add a hit here and change the next hit to a d. Then make the Muzu harder so that there's be a better difficulty curve with the Oni.

01:22:059 - You could add a hit here to keep your 5 hit 1/1 patterns.

01:28:488 - ^

01:37:059 (275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284) - The 1/1 pattern doesn't need to be this long in a quiet section imo. You could add a hit at 01:42:148 - tho

01:43:488 - You could make this kiai more difficult as well. Add 1/1, and you may be able to add 1/2 at sections like 01:48:041 (304,305,306,307,308,309,310).

Muzukashii

Change the HP to 5 for a better HP curve.

00:00:764 (2,3) - You could delete this for a better difficulty curve with the Oni.

00:05:720 (18) - ^

00:07:461 (24) - ^

00:14:157 - You could add a k here if you'd like.

00:19:782 - You could add a d here too.

00:20:385 - ^ 00:21:256 - ^ Both for difficulty curve.

00:25:273 (94) - Change to k to make it consistent with the Oni.

00:27:416 (109) - ^

00:29:827 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776469 This might work to create a more challenging rhythm for Muzu players.

00:36:523 (141) - You could move this to 00:36:389 - and change to d, and then add a hit at 00:36:657 - and change 00:36:791 (142) - to K if you'd like to match to the melody. I feel like it would work better to flow into the somewhat difficult pattern at 00:37:059 (143,144,145,146,147) -

00:38:666 (152,153,154,155,156,157) - This is the exact same rhythm as the Oni; I'd suggest making a bigger difference in rhythm by making this rhythm easier, or make the colour pattern more difficult in the Oni.

00:39:202 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - You can keep the colours the same as the Oni if you'd like. Same at 01:30:899 (145,146,147,148,149,150,151).

00:43:488 (172) - ^ 00:47:773 (186) - ^

00:45:631 (180,181,182,183) - I'd make this a continuous 1/1 pattern since you had it at 00:39:202 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167).

00:48:845 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196) - I personally think that the difficulty increase isn't necessary in all three of the harder difficulties; you can just keep a similar rhythm as the rest of the quiet section.

00:52:059 (204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215) - You can just make this a long 1/1 pattern to create a better difficulty curve. Adding a hit at 00:58:354 - is good too.

00:56:613 (215,216,217,218,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - The difficulty is way too easy here, considering that the Oni becomes extremely difficult. You should make some additions here, but you should also make the Oni slightly less difficult here.

01:01:434 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - As mentioned before, the difficulty curve is messed up here; the Muzu is more difficult than the Oni. Please resolve this problem.

01:05:452 (34,35,36) - Make this 1/2 if you're not going to have 1/4 at 01:08:666 (47,48,49) which is a similar melody rhythm. However, if you do decide to have 1/4 at 01:08:666 (47,48,49) - I'd recommend changing most of these 1/4 rhythms into triplets so that you don't have so many 3/4 gaps. What you did at 01:15:095 (78,79,80,81) - works well to match the melody's rhythm atm, so you should use that rhythm throughout this section and the 2nd kiai.

01:08:934 (49) - I'd change this to k for some variety and to match to the pitch of the melody.

01:18:510 (96,97) - I wouldn't recommend using 1/4 that switches colour in a Muzu. Again, I'd suggest doing what I suggested earlier about changing into a triplet.

01:21:724 (108,109) - ^ 01:24:939 (120,121) - ^

01:19:916 (102) - A k would work better to match the high pitch of the melody imo.

01:25:541 (123) - I'd change this to a d and make 01:25:809 (124,125,126) - K K K, like you had it in the Futsuu. Same in Oni.

01:29:023 (136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144) - This could be more similar to the end of the first kiai for a larger difficulty spike.

01:33:309 (154) - You could delete this for a better difficulty curve. Same at 01:35:720 (164).

01:34:849 (160,161) - I wouldn't have 1/4 in the quiet part.

01:37:327 - Add a hit to be consistent with the Futsuu.

01:39:202 (177) - I'd change this to k, like you had it in the Futsuu and Oni.

01:40:006 (179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - Again, there's no need to raise the difficulty here in the harder difficulties. I'd just keep it similar to what you had before.

01:43:488 - This kiai can be much denser. At least make this section all 1/1 please. Add some 1/2 if you'd like to.

01:54:604 (235,236,237) - I don't think you need any 1/4 that changes colours, as stated before.

Oni

00:04:113 (13) - Move to 00:03:309 - to be consistent with the Inner Oni.

00:13:756 (52,53,54,55,56) - I'd make this slightly harder than the other 1/2 patterns because it's got the melody rhythm here.

00:15:363 (64,65,66,67,68) - I don't see why this doesn't have 1/4 :/ Same in the kiai, I don't see why some patterns don't use 1/4 and other ones do.

00:23:934 (114) - You could change this to K to emphasize the fact that it's higher than 00:24:738 (120).

00:31:434 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176) - You could possibly make this denser and connect the 1/2 so that there's some difficulty in this section.

00:35:184 (184) - Change to D to stay consistent with the other parts that sound like this.

00:38:532 - Adding a hit here wouldn't be bad to make a small difficulty spike. Same at 01:29:961.

00:58:488 (308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332) - This is suddenly quite difficult. How about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776701

01:07:595 (363) - You could add a hit here if you'd like to raise the difficulty a bit.

01:09:135 - ^

01:16:702 (420,421) - You could add hits between these two hits. In addition, you could make a bit more colour variety at 01:16:166 (416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428) - like you did in the Muzu.

01:17:773 - I'd try to minimize the amount of 1/1 that you use in this kiai, since it's an Oni and to create a better difficulty curve with the Muzu. Try making places such as 01:19:648 (441,442,443,444) - and 01:23:398 (465,466,467,468,469,470) - denser where there are many 1/1 gaps.

01:43:488 - Add 1/1 hits between the 1/3 rhythms to make this kiai slightly more difficult. You could also alternate between kkkd and dddk 1/3 rhythms to create more variety.

Inner Oni

00:14:291 - This section is quite similar to the Oni. You may want to modify the Oni and Inner Oni to establish a greater difference.

00:24:068 (129) - I don't see a reason for this to be a k; I think it would work better if you could change it to d to match the lower background instrumentals.

00:28:086 (168) - I'd personally change this to a d. This way, the k's at 00:28:220 (170,171,172,173,174,175) - match the positions of the k's at 00:29:023 (178,179,180,181,182).

00:28:889 (177,178,179,180,181,182) - Coupled with the suggestion above, you should try to make this part of the rhythm more similar to 00:28:086 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175).

00:29:693 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201) - Rather than having so many triplets in a row, it may be good to make some 1/2 patterns and longer 1/4 patterns instead.

00:39:202 (261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270) - I'd change the colours to be consistent to the Oni here.

00:48:845 (298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310) - As mentioned before, I don't think a difficulty increase is necessary here.

00:58:488 (378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386) - I'd change this to ddddkkdkd or something. I don't like dddkkk, and I felt like it'd match the background instrumentals better. Idk tho xD

00:59:827 (398,399,400,401) - I'd change this one to kddd and the one at 01:00:898 (414,415,416,417) - to kkkd since the pitch is higher on the second one.

01:01:434 (421,422,423,424,425,426,427) - Patterns like these are kinda difficult to read, and could be simplified to kkkdddk. I strongly recommend you make the 1/6 pattern a bit simpler here.

01:19:514 - You can add a d here for a continuous pattern, like you had at 01:21:256.

01:25:809 (629,630,631) - Again, I personally think that this would sound better as K K K.

01:30:631 (664,665,666,667,668,669,670,671,672,673) - I'd make the colours consistent to the Oni here.

01:40:541 (703,704,705,706,707,708,709,710,711,712,713,714,715,716) - Again, no need to make it difficult imo.

01:41:881 (711) - You had a D here in the Oni and Muzu, so maybe you should keep it consistent?

01:43:577 (730,731,732,733) - Creating some variety in this 1/3 section would be cool, so how about changing this to kdkk? Same at 01:45:184 (748,749,750,751).

01:53:666 (833) - Changing this to d would nicely match the low instrumentals here imo.

That's all.

Call me back~~ 8-)
Kin
Hi~

here is a fast check.

[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:04:849 (16,17) - the way it is is currently fine. But if you really want the piano note, it's here : 00:04:883 - . Tho, 1/4 is fine. So, it's up to you.
  2. 00:13:756 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - I'd say, the current pattern is fine, but I still think, dkkdkkd flow quite weird with the K here. 00:14:291 (62) - . I'd say, ddkdkkd will make the pattern flow better.
  3. 00:17:171 (86) - this kat feel kinda a lil out of place. You did use kat on those notes 00:16:970 (83,84,87) - to emphasize the high pitched note. But this one 00:17:171 (86) - isn't on it. Tho, I can understand you want to make it different from this one 00:16:166 (76,77,78,79,80) - .
  4. 00:29:693 (188,189,190) - How about a dkk ? it goes very well with the high pitched piano note.
  5. 00:32:773 (215) - I'd say this one as D feels better than a K. The triple k make a D flow better. It'll also make difference with those 2 notes : 00:33:577 (218,221) - . Which, is I think, stronger.
  6. 01:34:827 - I'd say the piano note is actually here. (so don't forget on other diff)
  7. 01:37:595 (691) - 01:39:202 (697) - How about a kat here ? Since the pitch is starting to get high on this note.
[Oni]

  1. 00:24:604 (123) - I'd say this one as is fine. But I think changing this one as kat will make the next big D a better emphasis.
  2. 01:14:023 (405) - how about changing this one as kat ? the spam don is kinda strange in my opinion.
  3. 01:15:764 (418) - This one as kat is good. But changing this one as don will make this note 01:15:898 (419) - stronger.
  4. 01:41:881 (570) - according to your kat usage on this part, maybe it'll be better to change it into big kat ?
I'd say, the map in general have some interesting part & pattern. But I'd also say, it's currently not ready for the qualify right now.
good luck! \o
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

Kin wrote:

Hi~

here is a fast check.

[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:04:849 (16,17) - the way it is is currently fine. But if you really want the piano note, it's here : 00:04:883 - . Tho, 1/4 is fine. So, it's up to you.
  2. 00:13:756 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - I'd say, the current pattern is fine, but I still think, dkkdkkd flow quite weird with the K here. 00:14:291 (62) - . I'd say, ddkdkkd will make the pattern flow better.
  3. 00:17:171 (86) - this kat feel kinda a lil out of place. You did use kat on those notes 00:16:970 (83,84,87) - to emphasize the high pitched note. But this one 00:17:171 (86) - isn't on it. Tho, I can understand you want to make it different from this one 00:16:166 (76,77,78,79,80) - .
  4. 00:29:693 (188,189,190) - How about a dkk ? it goes very well with the high pitched piano note.
  5. 00:32:773 (215) - I'd say this one as D feels better than a K. The triple k make a D flow better. It'll also make difference with those 2 notes : 00:33:577 (218,221) - . Which, is I think, stronger.
  6. 01:34:827 - I'd say the piano note is actually here. (so don't forget on other diff)
  7. 01:37:595 (691) - 01:39:202 (697) - How about a kat here ? Since the pitch is starting to get high on this note.
[Oni]

  1. 00:24:604 (123) - I'd say this one as is fine. But I think changing this one as kat will make the next big D a better emphasis.
  2. 01:14:023 (405) - how about changing this one as kat ? the spam don is kinda strange in my opinion.
  3. 01:15:764 (418) - This one as kat is good. But changing this one as don will make this note 01:15:898 (419) - stronger.
  4. 01:41:881 (570) - according to your kat usage on this part, maybe it'll be better to change it into big kat ?
I'd say, the map in general have some interesting part & pattern. But I'd also say, it's currently not ready for the qualify right now.
good luck! \o
all Acepted >_> <_< o_o
Volta
hi :3
most critical issue in the map is the gap between kantan and futsuu is too high.
you can try to add more notes in kantan, and remove some in futsuu. here some suggestions.

Kantan
1.00x green lines are fine, no need to make them 0.7x :c

00:14:023 - add d
00:14:827 - add d
00:15:631 - add k
00:17:238 - add d
00:18:041 - add k

00:23:666 - add d
00:24:470 - add k
00:25:273 - add d

00:26:345 ~ this kiai part is very intense but too spacious >.<
00:25:809 - and 00:26:077 - add d to mark the start of kiai
00:26:881 - add d
00:27:148 - add k
00:27:684 - add d
00:28:488 - add k
00:30:095 - add k
00:30:898 - add d

00:38:666 - add d
00:38:934 - add d

00:44:827 - this can make a nice rest spot like at 01:36:256 - consider to remove it
00:49:381 - i think it's better to remove this to have consistent rhythm.

00:59:023 - add d
00:59:827 - add d
01:00:631 - add k
01:03:041 - add d

01:13:488 - remove
01:13:756 - remove
01:14:291 - add d
01:16:702 - add k
> so they would consistent with 01:07:863 - and give longer rest

the 2nd kiai can also be made a little harder
01:18:309 - add d
01:19:916 - add d
01:22:327 - add d
01:24:738 - add d
01:25:541 - add k
01:29:559 - add k

01:33:845 - change to d like you did at 00:42:416 - ?

01:44:023 - add k
01:44:827 - add d
01:45:631 - add k
01:50:988 - add d

Futsuu
try to remove some notes in futsuu, especially in calm parts.
00:03:577 - remove
00:06:791 - ^
00:07:595 - ^
00:10:006 - ^

00:10:675 - remove
00:10:943 - ^
00:10:809 - add note here instead for more simple rhythm

00:42:148 - remove
00:43:488 - can change to k for variation of 00:41:077 -
00:45:898 - remove
00:46:702 - ^
00:47:506 - add d

01:33:577 - remove
01:34:916 - change to k?
01:37:327 - remove

there could be some more to remove though.

good luck :>
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

Volta wrote:

hi :3
most critical issue in the map is the gap between kantan and futsuu is too high.
you can try to add more notes in kantan, and remove some in futsuu. here some suggestions.

Kantan
1.00x green lines are fine, no need to make them 0.7x :c o-ok

00:14:023 - add d
00:14:827 - add d
00:15:631 - add k
00:17:238 - add d
00:18:041 - add k

00:23:666 - add d
00:24:470 - add k
00:25:273 - add d

00:26:345 ~ this kiai part is very intense but too spacious >.<
00:25:809 - and 00:26:077 - add d to mark the start of kiai
00:26:881 - add d
00:27:148 - add k
00:27:684 - add d
00:28:488 - add k
00:30:095 - add k
00:30:898 - add d

00:38:666 - add d
00:38:934 - add d

00:44:827 - this can make a nice rest spot like at 01:36:256 - consider to remove it
00:49:381 - i think it's better to remove this to have consistent rhythm.

00:59:023 - add d
00:59:827 - add d
01:00:631 - add k
01:03:041 - add d

01:13:488 - remove
01:13:756 - remove
01:14:291 - add d
01:16:702 - add k
> so they would consistent with 01:07:863 - and give longer rest

the 2nd kiai can also be made a little harder
01:18:309 - add d
01:19:916 - add d
01:22:327 - add d
01:24:738 - add d
01:25:541 - add k
01:29:559 - add k

01:33:845 - change to d like you did at 00:42:416 - ?

01:44:023 - add k
01:44:827 - add d
01:45:631 - add k
01:50:988 - add d

Futsuu
try to remove some notes in futsuu, especially in calm parts.
00:03:577 - remove
00:06:791 - ^
00:07:595 - ^
00:10:006 - ^

00:10:675 - remove
00:10:943 - ^
00:10:809 - add note here instead for more simple rhythm

00:42:148 - remove
00:43:488 - can change to k for variation of 00:41:077 -
00:45:898 - remove
00:46:702 - ^
00:47:506 - add d

01:33:577 - remove
01:34:916 - change to k?
01:37:327 - remove

there could be some more to remove though.

good luck :>
all acepted uwu cuz i really need help with those diff :< ty for the gift ♥ to Applique Volta ♥ >W< ily~~
Surono

newyams99 wrote:

`_L`
naxyimyam69's mod yea just, yea wtf.

u w u
02:23 [_Chichinya_]: HB MA FRENDO
02:23 Surono: TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTttttttt
02:23 Surono: y
02:23 Surono: asdfasdgsafdgasfd
02:27 [_Chichinya_]: aklsdjalksdjlkasjdlkasdjlasd
04:46 Surono: a
04:46 Surono: dem afk
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: owowowow
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: i'm here
04:46 Surono: apliqwquwuwquwq
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: xD
04:46 Surono: yea
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: AwA appliku taim?
04:46 Surono: wuthc me play dis
04:47 Surono: AWAWAWA
04:47 [_Chichinya_]: AWA
04:47 Surono: tacossssss hard afsdfafdad., me rip heuhue
04:48 [_Chichinya_]: xD =W= do you want some tacos? =W=
04:48 Surono: yummy
04:48 *[_Chichinya_] giving some tacos to Surono
04:48 [_Chichinya_]: =W=
04:48 Surono: asdfsafdfsadhsadads image of tacos pls
04:50 [_Chichinya_]: wait i'm preparing the tacos :^)
04:50 [_Chichinya_]: [http://static.tvazteca.com/imagenes/2012/52/Tacopedia-enciclopedia-del-taco-1752224.jpg enjoy :^) <3 i made this for you ma frendo]
04:50 Surono: awhgkjwagijakwgjawg tacos
04:51 [_Chichinya_]: T A C O S <3
04:51 Surono: owo
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: AwA
04:52 Surono: 00:59:872 - yus
04:52 Surono: 01:01:523 - yus
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: yas
04:52 Surono: yus = invert of colors
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: lol XD ok
04:52 Surono: dem who say it overmappuh desu ~~~~~
04:53 Surono: yeah it is song, dam hard :"D
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: 01:01:434 (419,420,421,422,423,424,425) - that... old form is back <3
04:53 Surono: <3
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking: old form was kkddkkd
04:53 Surono: kkddddk
04:53 Surono: its hurt </3
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: map this song was like @_@what i need to map
04:53 Surono: kkddkkd is easier too owo
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: Mid tell me that :C
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: after that was ... kkddkdk
04:54 Surono: AGASgjsgahagdjgf
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: one pattern "hard" to play
04:54 Surono: kdk, rip midfingers.
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: Charlo suggest me that
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: AGREE XD
04:54 Surono: agree for whhich?
04:54 Surono: kkddkkd?
04:54 Surono: fair with alternating.. but others opinion is madness X"D
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: >Rip Midfingers
04:55 Surono: yeah, kkddkdk.. at kdk is rip
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: is hard to... kddk players actually
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: so... kkkdddk is better
04:55 Surono: brruuuuuuuuuuu
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: in my oppinion
04:55 Surono: rrrr
04:55 Surono: rrrrrrrrr
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: D:! WU
04:55 Surono: !!!!!!!!!1111
04:55 Surono: owo !
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: rrrrr
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: oneoneoneone
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: owo one
04:55 Surono: oneoeneoeneoeno
04:56 [_Chichinya_]: twotwotwotwotwotwotwotwo D:!!!!!!!!!!!!!
04:57 Surono: 01:14:425 - u,wu i cri.......
04:57 Surono: just don it.. for tacos yummy.. dont worry sr not decrease..
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: idk why this song attracme so hard
04:57 Surono: also dont map for pepes u,wu
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: kkkkd
04:57 Surono: aeguyahgiugwkwg
04:57 Surono: wut
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: XD
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: kkkd*
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: askldjaslkdjasld
04:57 Surono: madnuts
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: sorry i wrote one k lajdklasjd
04:58 [_Chichinya_]: 01:17:238 (542,543,544,545) - maybe this...
04:58 [_Chichinya_]: dddk ?
05:00 Surono: 01:24:872 - from here~~~~~~~~~~
05:00 Surono: ddk d kdkkd
05:00 Surono: 01:21:858 - at least don this gib different emphasize with next dkkkd.
05:01 Surono: cuz flow are differe uwuwuwuw
05:01 Surono: 01:17:238 (542,543,544,545) - u can keep that since left pattern are many kats
05:01 Surono: 01:17:372 - if u kat this, will rip when continue 01:17:506 - here .. 4 kats ;w;
05:01 [_Chichinya_]: okidoki
05:02 Surono: madnuts
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: x'D jalksdjaslkdjaslkdj ye
05:02 Surono: 01:29:827 - kat
05:02 Surono: many don in left
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: mini don break :thinking:
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: donbriku
05:03 [_Chichinya_]: buriku*
05:03 Surono: owo ?
05:03 Surono: OWO !!!!
05:03 [_Chichinya_]: AwA !!!!!!!!!
05:04 Surono: 01:43:488 - mindblow to play... the kat mostly should emphasized at white tick cuz there is the good alteration
05:04 Surono: 01:43:488 - example until 01:44:559 - here... kddkddkkkkddk
05:05 [_Chichinya_]: hmmm
05:05 Surono: 01:44:023 - yus makes sense if here kkkk
05:05 Surono: and selfmod.. make it readable.. or playable.. ;w;
05:05 [_Chichinya_]: 01:43:488 (722,723,724) - change to? kddk?
05:06 Surono: at least.. with tick shuld emphasized with kat for playablelity
05:06 Surono: yush.. but at leastttttttt.
05:06 [_Chichinya_]: @w@
05:06 Surono: 01:43:153 - don until here
05:06 [_Chichinya_]: i was trying to follow the drum and the melody :thinking: was bad?
05:07 Surono: thats why people afraid to rank ur map uwu
05:07 Surono: but.. the consistency is at white tick u,wu
05:07 Surono: 01:42:684 - drurururururuurur
05:07 Surono: 01:43:220 - tataktkatkaktak
05:07 [_Chichinya_]: ;_; but they don't help me to fix it aa ;_; only you
05:07 Surono: X"D
05:08 Surono: just make it easier... so people will luv to rank it <3
05:08 Surono: I am lookin for this, dont worry waifu gokuhh uwu
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking:
05:08 Surono: HHHMMMMMMMMMMM OWO
05:08 Surono: KHINTING?!??!?!
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: http://puu.sh/vUjdR/cccb6ed0e2.jpg
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: ? :o
05:09 Surono: 01:44:827 - yesh from here kkkk for colors then 01:45:095 - repeat again like 01:43:488 - from here.
05:09 Surono: uwu ........ where is that.....
05:09 [_Chichinya_]: the stream
05:09 [_Chichinya_]: 01:42:684 (710,711,712,713,714,715,716,717,718,719,720,721,722) -
05:09 Surono: 01:43:488 - but here u want don?
05:10 Surono: ;~;
05:10 [_Chichinya_]: yes cuz the durm
05:10 [_Chichinya_]: and follow the d d d
05:10 Surono: then 1/3?
05:10 Surono: are you have idea?
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: 01:43:488 (722,731,740,749) -
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: see?
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: don is a lower sound... and in these part the sound is like KAT
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: that's why i'm using don
05:11 Surono: 01:43:488 - if from music.. is actually emphasized as kddkddkkkkddkddkkkk and repat boring but that can be easier to play
05:12 Surono: if you feel that boring.. just make variety every kkkk like change it to kkdk or kdkk
05:12 Surono: dem........
05:12 Surono: but the current, I cant read it.... bcus I nub `_L`
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: kddkddkkkk :thinking
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: let me try
05:12 Surono: shinsekai is nightmares, u know that
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: no worry i'm nub to
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: =W= that's why i want to change my name into
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: Shinsekai-
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: you imagine that?
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: one diff called
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: Shinsekai Destruction
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: :^)
05:13 Surono: ................................. :^)
05:13 Surono: 01:49:916 - sadsadgsadgsagd
05:13 Surono: 01:51:256 (86,87,88,89,90) - IUKFWJuFHKJFWUHJKFWUIFWkjfwFWJKFWJKLFWFWLKmfwwff
05:14 [_Chichinya_]: x'D ajdklasjdklajsdkl wait i'm fixing the 1/3 part
05:14 Surono: 01:52:863 - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
05:14 Surono: M A D N E S S
05:14 Surono: my fingerz already ded.. even I dont try that... ohhhhh, I just hit'd that before.. when u wathcin meh ahsuhuhe
05:14 Surono: rip me
05:14 Surono: okey savelog.,
05:14 [_Chichinya_]: KLASJDLKAJSDKLAJSLDKASJKLDJSKLDJD dddddk
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: SUFFER !!
05:15 Surono: ohhhh 1 thing ,.
05:15 Surono: 01:54:604 - just ddd
05:15 Surono: dudud, cuz 01:53:800 - is mainsounds
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: 01:52:863 (817,818,819,820,821,822,823) - the only hard hard hard 1/6 pattern on this set XD
05:15 Surono: theres no mainsounds uwu
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: oki
05:15 Surono: readable buttttttttttt. madnuts
modder higher diff and helped at 1/3 patterns

lookin for this mapset, GL.
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

Surono wrote:

newyams99 wrote:

`_L`
naxyimyam69's mod yea just, yea wtf.

u w u
02:23 [_Chichinya_]: HB MA FRENDO
02:23 Surono: TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTttttttt
02:23 Surono: y
02:23 Surono: asdfasdgsafdgasfd
02:27 [_Chichinya_]: aklsdjalksdjlkasjdlkasdjlasd
04:46 Surono: a
04:46 Surono: dem afk
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: owowowow
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: i'm here
04:46 Surono: apliqwquwuwquwq
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: xD
04:46 Surono: yea
04:46 [_Chichinya_]: AwA appliku taim?
04:46 Surono: wuthc me play dis
04:47 Surono: AWAWAWA
04:47 [_Chichinya_]: AWA
04:47 Surono: tacossssss hard afsdfafdad., me rip heuhue
04:48 [_Chichinya_]: xD =W= do you want some tacos? =W=
04:48 Surono: yummy
04:48 *[_Chichinya_] giving some tacos to Surono
04:48 [_Chichinya_]: =W=
04:48 Surono: asdfsafdfsadhsadads image of tacos pls
04:50 [_Chichinya_]: wait i'm preparing the tacos :^)
04:50 [_Chichinya_]: [http://static.tvazteca.com/imagenes/2012/52/Tacopedia-enciclopedia-del-taco-1752224.jpg enjoy :^) <3 i made this for you ma frendo]
04:50 Surono: awhgkjwagijakwgjawg tacos
04:51 [_Chichinya_]: T A C O S <3
04:51 Surono: owo
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: AwA
04:52 Surono: 00:59:872 - yus
04:52 Surono: 01:01:523 - yus
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: yas
04:52 Surono: yus = invert of colors
04:52 [_Chichinya_]: lol XD ok
04:52 Surono: dem who say it overmappuh desu ~~~~~
04:53 Surono: yeah it is song, dam hard :"D
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: 01:01:434 (419,420,421,422,423,424,425) - that... old form is back <3
04:53 Surono: <3
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking: old form was kkddkkd
04:53 Surono: kkddddk
04:53 Surono: its hurt </3
04:53 [_Chichinya_]: map this song was like @_@what i need to map
04:53 Surono: kkddkkd is easier too owo
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: Mid tell me that :C
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: after that was ... kkddkdk
04:54 Surono: AGASgjsgahagdjgf
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: one pattern "hard" to play
04:54 Surono: kdk, rip midfingers.
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: Charlo suggest me that
04:54 [_Chichinya_]: AGREE XD
04:54 Surono: agree for whhich?
04:54 Surono: kkddkkd?
04:54 Surono: fair with alternating.. but others opinion is madness X"D
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: >Rip Midfingers
04:55 Surono: yeah, kkddkdk.. at kdk is rip
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: is hard to... kddk players actually
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: so... kkkdddk is better
04:55 Surono: brruuuuuuuuuuu
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: in my oppinion
04:55 Surono: rrrr
04:55 Surono: rrrrrrrrr
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: D:! WU
04:55 Surono: !!!!!!!!!1111
04:55 Surono: owo !
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: rrrrr
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: oneoneoneone
04:55 [_Chichinya_]: owo one
04:55 Surono: oneoeneoeneoeno
04:56 [_Chichinya_]: twotwotwotwotwotwotwotwo D:!!!!!!!!!!!!!
04:57 Surono: 01:14:425 - u,wu i cri.......
04:57 Surono: just don it.. for tacos yummy.. dont worry sr not decrease..
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: idk why this song attracme so hard
04:57 Surono: also dont map for pepes u,wu
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: kkkkd
04:57 Surono: aeguyahgiugwkwg
04:57 Surono: wut
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: XD
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: kkkd*
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: askldjaslkdjasld
04:57 Surono: madnuts
04:57 [_Chichinya_]: sorry i wrote one k lajdklasjd
04:58 [_Chichinya_]: 01:17:238 (542,543,544,545) - maybe this...
04:58 [_Chichinya_]: dddk ?
05:00 Surono: 01:24:872 - from here~~~~~~~~~~
05:00 Surono: ddk d kdkkd
05:00 Surono: 01:21:858 - at least don this gib different emphasize with next dkkkd.
05:01 Surono: cuz flow are differe uwuwuwuw
05:01 Surono: 01:17:238 (542,543,544,545) - u can keep that since left pattern are many kats
05:01 Surono: 01:17:372 - if u kat this, will rip when continue 01:17:506 - here .. 4 kats ;w;
05:01 [_Chichinya_]: okidoki
05:02 Surono: madnuts
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: x'D jalksdjaslkdjaslkdj ye
05:02 Surono: 01:29:827 - kat
05:02 Surono: many don in left
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: mini don break :thinking:
05:02 [_Chichinya_]: donbriku
05:03 [_Chichinya_]: buriku*
05:03 Surono: owo ?
05:03 Surono: OWO !!!!
05:03 [_Chichinya_]: AwA !!!!!!!!!
05:04 Surono: 01:43:488 - mindblow to play... the kat mostly should emphasized at white tick cuz there is the good alteration
05:04 Surono: 01:43:488 - example until 01:44:559 - here... kddkddkkkkddk
05:05 [_Chichinya_]: hmmm
05:05 Surono: 01:44:023 - yus makes sense if here kkkk
05:05 Surono: and selfmod.. make it readable.. or playable.. ;w;
05:05 [_Chichinya_]: 01:43:488 (722,723,724) - change to? kddk?
05:06 Surono: at least.. with tick shuld emphasized with kat for playablelity
05:06 Surono: yush.. but at leastttttttt.
05:06 [_Chichinya_]: @w@
05:06 Surono: 01:43:153 - don until here
05:06 [_Chichinya_]: i was trying to follow the drum and the melody :thinking: was bad?
05:07 Surono: thats why people afraid to rank ur map uwu
05:07 Surono: but.. the consistency is at white tick u,wu
05:07 Surono: 01:42:684 - drurururururuurur
05:07 Surono: 01:43:220 - tataktkatkaktak
05:07 [_Chichinya_]: ;_; but they don't help me to fix it aa ;_; only you
05:07 Surono: X"D
05:08 Surono: just make it easier... so people will luv to rank it <3
05:08 Surono: I am lookin for this, dont worry waifu gokuhh uwu
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: :thinking:
05:08 Surono: HHHMMMMMMMMMMM OWO
05:08 Surono: KHINTING?!??!?!
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: http://puu.sh/vUjdR/cccb6ed0e2.jpg
05:08 [_Chichinya_]: ? :o
05:09 Surono: 01:44:827 - yesh from here kkkk for colors then 01:45:095 - repeat again like 01:43:488 - from here.
05:09 Surono: uwu ........ where is that.....
05:09 [_Chichinya_]: the stream
05:09 [_Chichinya_]: 01:42:684 (710,711,712,713,714,715,716,717,718,719,720,721,722) -
05:09 Surono: 01:43:488 - but here u want don?
05:10 Surono: ;~;
05:10 [_Chichinya_]: yes cuz the durm
05:10 [_Chichinya_]: and follow the d d d
05:10 Surono: then 1/3?
05:10 Surono: are you have idea?
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: 01:43:488 (722,731,740,749) -
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: see?
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: don is a lower sound... and in these part the sound is like KAT
05:11 [_Chichinya_]: that's why i'm using don
05:11 Surono: 01:43:488 - if from music.. is actually emphasized as kddkddkkkkddkddkkkk and repat boring but that can be easier to play
05:12 Surono: if you feel that boring.. just make variety every kkkk like change it to kkdk or kdkk
05:12 Surono: dem........
05:12 Surono: but the current, I cant read it.... bcus I nub `_L`
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: kddkddkkkk :thinking
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: let me try
05:12 Surono: shinsekai is nightmares, u know that
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: no worry i'm nub to
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: =W= that's why i want to change my name into
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: Shinsekai-
05:12 [_Chichinya_]: you imagine that?
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: one diff called
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: Shinsekai Destruction
05:13 [_Chichinya_]: :^)
05:13 Surono: ................................. :^)
05:13 Surono: 01:49:916 - sadsadgsadgsagd
05:13 Surono: 01:51:256 (86,87,88,89,90) - IUKFWJuFHKJFWUHJKFWUIFWkjfwFWJKFWJKLFWFWLKmfwwff
05:14 [_Chichinya_]: x'D ajdklasjdklajsdkl wait i'm fixing the 1/3 part
05:14 Surono: 01:52:863 - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
05:14 Surono: M A D N E S S
05:14 Surono: my fingerz already ded.. even I dont try that... ohhhhh, I just hit'd that before.. when u wathcin meh ahsuhuhe
05:14 Surono: rip me
05:14 Surono: okey savelog.,
05:14 [_Chichinya_]: KLASJDLKAJSDKLAJSLDKASJKLDJSKLDJD dddddk
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: SUFFER !!
05:15 Surono: ohhhh 1 thing ,.
05:15 Surono: 01:54:604 - just ddd
05:15 Surono: dudud, cuz 01:53:800 - is mainsounds
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: 01:52:863 (817,818,819,820,821,822,823) - the only hard hard hard 1/6 pattern on this set XD
05:15 Surono: theres no mainsounds uwu
05:15 [_Chichinya_]: oki
05:15 Surono: readable buttttttttttt. madnuts
modder higher diff and helped at 1/3 patterns

lookin for this mapset, GL.


TY =W=
DeletedUser_6637817
Mod per constant asking for 3ish months lol
Hope im not late with all the BN's appearing...
Recheck zzz.

Kantan
00:58:488 (94) - why is this a finisher and not the other notes (00:59:291 (96,98,100)) - ; They lie on the same sound.
Additionally, 01:01:702 (101,103) - are Finishers, while 01:03:309 (105,107) - are not.
Thus, it cant be an intuitive finisher (One used to make different sections more clear) and you should do something about it in any case.

00:21:523 (3,4,5) - are kkk, 00:34:381 (30,31,32) - are kkd, again on same sounds, please do something about it.

00:32:773 (55,56) - D D, but 00:19:916 (28) - D d, lying on same sections in the music, Do something about it; btw repetition is wanted in kantans

00:31:970 - add a note here, its the kiai and the beat is much more steady here, would make sense to make kiai a bit more differently in structure from the part before, and also tone up the difficulty a tad bit.

00:56:613 - add a k to make the structure more uniform and less erratic?

01:16:702 (126,127,128) - theres the violin and crunch sounds you already mapped as kdddk or ddddk, whatever; The kk k is not really satisfactory for consistency reasons. Id much rather see a kkddk more fitting to the crunchy 1/6 sounds, aswell as the consistency.

01:29:559 (155,156,157,158) - Similar goes to this, kkddk for reasons already explained above.

01:37:863 (166,167) - crtl+g? has the same pitch variation as 00:39:202 - onward, so this change will make them uniform.

01:46:434 - add a note here? Theres still the 1/3 sounds going on and should be another note.

01:50:452 (185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - these structure is weird, the crunch sounds kind of dictate a xx xx xx xx xx kind of rhythm, and i think its better than a sudden 5let i guess.

Before i continue, I want you to reconsider a lot of finishers especially in the lower difficulties, aswell as across the difficulties since they really are extremely inconsistent.
In Futsuu for example, i feel like 30% of the map is Finishers. That number can really be toned down, as emphasis by note placement/coloring will be enough to do the job in my opinion. Please REALLY think about those, as newyams even said
Brief example: 00:23:934 (65,68) - are not finishers; why are 00:17:506 (47,50,53,56) - finishers then?!
Also; 00:52:863 (147,149,151,153,155,157) - too many finishers.

This map is gonna go nowhere if the finishers dont make sense if im honest.


Futsuu
HP6, to allow for a smooth transition in HP.

00:23:532 (63,64,65,66,67,68) - why are these not structured like 00:17:104 (45,46,47,48,49,50) - , even tho they should represent the same musical pattern?

00:39:470 - Unused Green Line, Please remove.

00:48:577 (135,136) - dk for the violin pitch you very clearly mapped to this section.

00:50:184 (139) - again d for the violin pitch, but if you wanted some contrast between this note and upcoming finishers thats fine too.

01:43:488 - This part is too hard if you look at the kantan ver of this. This section in particular should be nerfed a bit in 1/2 density i guess, since Kantan only posesses brief 1/1 here.

In general i feel like this Futsuu could use a bit more 1/1 and also a bit more 1/2 aswell just to make the gap between Futsuu and Kantan Just right!
Buff as you like i guess!
That Spread my main Issue, with this besides the Finishers, which you should also fix up/reconsider

Muzukashii
00:09:336 (29) - d to match the pitch a little bit better and also contrast 00:09:470 (30) - which lies on a sharp tone.

00:12:416 - unused green line, please remove

00:35:988 (144,145,146,147,148) - this is not uniform in note placement with 00:23:131 (85,86,87,88,89) -; Please fix to make them more consistent.

00:26:613 - unused green line, please remove

00:29:291 (120) - color to k to capture the slightly rising pitch? It fits a little better in my opinion

00:32:238 (134,135,136,137,138) - change to kdkkd to be a bit more similar to 00:31:434 (130,131,132) - with a d kdk d kdk oriented rhythm?

00:37:997 - add a d here to capture the strong 1/2 beat much better. The k's will still be good to emphasize the melody with this too.
Additionally, 00:37:059 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - and 00:24:202 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - are not very similar in structure, so i suggest you change that unless you have good reason to do so.

00:45:363 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195) - the silent part looks like it has a k on each downbeat, why is this combo set breaking it.
This one follows the Violin pitch, while others are oriented on clock ticks. Please make them more uniform in mapping focus to avoid the sudden change in focus.

01:01:434 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - why is this easier than its futsuu counterpart, cmon...

01:08:666 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - this part is not too clear with what its mapped on to me. it kind of contradicts the flute thing, but also contradicts the background snares. I suggest you make that intention clearer?

01:12:081 (67,68) - this is mapped in 1/4, but 01:05:452 (35,36,37) - is not mapped this way. Please fix somehow! And 01:15:095 (79,80,81,82) - is mapped yet differently!

01:42:148 (191) - remove to make the change in melody (the muffled thump) more appearant and leave a bigger impact?

01:43:488 - this part is also easier than futsuu counterpart?!?! Please fix that ASAP.

From here on out, i wont check the top diffs, because the most critical errors are lying on the lower diffs, which you SERIOUSLY should fix, seeing as multiple BN mods havent been sufficient!
I hope you take this a bit seriously and get these lower diffs done properly.
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

Nepuri wrote:

Mod per constant asking for 3ish months lol
Hope im not late with all the BN's appearing...
Recheck zzz.

Kantan
00:58:488 (94) - why is this a finisher and not the other notes (00:59:291 (96,98,100)) - ; They lie on the same sound.
Additionally, 01:01:702 (101,103) - are Finishers, while 01:03:309 (105,107) - are not.
Thus, it cant be an intuitive finisher (One used to make different sections more clear) and you should do something about it in any case.

00:21:523 (3,4,5) - are kkk, 00:34:381 (30,31,32) - are kkd, again on same sounds, please do something about it.

00:32:773 (55,56) - D D, but 00:19:916 (28) - D d, lying on same sections in the music, Do something about it; btw repetition is wanted in kantans

00:31:970 - add a note here, its the kiai and the beat is much more steady here, would make sense to make kiai a bit more differently in structure from the part before, and also tone up the difficulty a tad bit.

00:56:613 - add a k to make the structure more uniform and less erratic?

01:16:702 (126,127,128) - theres the violin and crunch sounds you already mapped as kdddk or ddddk, whatever; The kk k is not really satisfactory for consistency reasons. Id much rather see a kkddk more fitting to the crunchy 1/6 sounds, aswell as the consistency.

01:29:559 (155,156,157,158) - Similar goes to this, kkddk for reasons already explained above.

01:37:863 (166,167) - crtl+g? has the same pitch variation as 00:39:202 - onward, so this change will make them uniform.

01:46:434 - add a note here? Theres still the 1/3 sounds going on and should be another note.

01:50:452 (185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - these structure is weird, the crunch sounds kind of dictate a xx xx xx xx xx kind of rhythm, and i think its better than a sudden 5let i guess.

Before i continue, I want you to reconsider a lot of finishers especially in the lower difficulties, aswell as across the difficulties since they really are extremely inconsistent.
In Futsuu for example, i feel like 30% of the map is Finishers. That number can really be toned down, as emphasis by note placement/coloring will be enough to do the job in my opinion. Please REALLY think about those, as newyams even said
Brief example: 00:23:934 (65,68) - are not finishers; why are 00:17:506 (47,50,53,56) - finishers then?!
Also; 00:52:863 (147,149,151,153,155,157) - too many finishers.

This map is gonna go nowhere if the finishers dont make sense if im honest.


Futsuu
HP6, to allow for a smooth transition in HP.

00:23:532 (63,64,65,66,67,68) - why are these not structured like 00:17:104 (45,46,47,48,49,50) - , even tho they should represent the same musical pattern? is not the same listen the music more... xd and maybe you can find what i'm following

00:39:470 - Unused Green Line, Please remove.

00:48:577 (135,136) - dk for the violin pitch you very clearly mapped to this section.

00:50:184 (139) - again d for the violin pitch, but if you wanted some contrast between this note and upcoming finishers thats fine too.

01:43:488 - This part is too hard if you look at the kantan ver of this. This section in particular should be nerfed a bit in 1/2 density i guess, since Kantan only posesses brief 1/1 here.

In general i feel like this Futsuu could use a bit more 1/1 and also a bit more 1/2 aswell just to make the gap between Futsuu and Kantan Just right!
Buff as you like i guess!
That Spread my main Issue, with this besides the Finishers, which you should also fix up/reconsider

Muzukashii
00:09:336 (29) - d to match the pitch a little bit better and also contrast 00:09:470 (30) - which lies on a sharp tone.

00:12:416 - unused green line, please remove

00:35:988 (144,145,146,147,148) - this is not uniform in note placement with 00:23:131 (85,86,87,88,89) -; Please fix to make them more consistent.

00:26:613 - unused green line, please remove

00:29:291 (120) - color to k to capture the slightly rising pitch? It fits a little better in my opinion

00:32:238 (134,135,136,137,138) - change to kdkkd to be a bit more similar to 00:31:434 (130,131,132) - with a d kdk d kdk oriented rhythm?

00:37:997 - add a d here to capture the strong 1/2 beat much better. The k's will still be good to emphasize the melody with this too.
Additionally, 00:37:059 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - and 00:24:202 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - are not very similar in structure, so i suggest you change that unless you have good reason to do so.

00:45:363 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195) - the silent part looks like it has a k on each downbeat, why is this combo set breaking it.
This one follows the Violin pitch, while others are oriented on clock ticks. Please make them more uniform in mapping focus to avoid the sudden change in focus.

01:01:434 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - why is this easier than its futsuu counterpart, cmon...

01:08:666 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - this part is not too clear with what its mapped on to me. it kind of contradicts the flute thing, but also contradicts the background snares. I suggest you make that intention clearer?

01:12:081 (67,68) - this is mapped in 1/4, but 01:05:452 (35,36,37) - is not mapped this way. Please fix somehow! And 01:15:095 (79,80,81,82) - is mapped yet differently!

01:42:148 (191) - remove to make the change in melody (the muffled thump) more appearant and leave a bigger impact?

01:43:488 - this part is also easier than futsuu counterpart?!?! Please fix that ASAP.

From here on out, i wont check the top diffs, because the most critical errors are lying on the lower diffs, which you SERIOUSLY should fix, seeing as multiple BN mods havent been sufficient!
I hope you take this a bit seriously and get these lower diffs done properly.
Vulkin
ReCheck por IRC
2017-05-20 16:40 Vulkin: o
2017-05-20 16:40 Vulkin: ok aca las del kantan
2017-05-20 16:41 [_Chichinya_]: voy
2017-05-20 16:42 Vulkin: 00:52:863 (85) - Este no creo que debe tener finish
2017-05-20 16:43 Vulkin: porque los siguientes del mismo sonido no lo tienen (y no deberian tenerlo imo)
2017-05-20 16:43 Vulkin: nota que el 84 debe tenerlo porque es como el principio w
2017-05-20 16:43 [_Chichinya_]: pongo en duda estas
2017-05-20 16:43 [_Chichinya_]: 01:01:702 (103,105,107,109) -
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: tienes razon o.o
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: las demas no lo son
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: y practicamente son el mismo sonido xd
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: UF esa escapada papaaa 01:16:970 (129) -
2017-05-20 16:44 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: coño dejame actualizarte el map
2017-05-20 16:44 Vulkin: adelante
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: por que los cambios de nepuri xd me desconfiguraron la mierda esta
2017-05-20 16:45 [_Chichinya_]: ya listo
2017-05-20 16:45 Vulkin: bajando de nuevo
2017-05-20 16:46 Vulkin: (el net se me puso lento, pta la wea)
2017-05-20 16:46 [_Chichinya_]: me pasa
2017-05-20 16:48 Vulkin: 01:01:702 (103,105,107) - para los finishers aca, yo borraria 01:02:238 (104,106) - para darle al jugador de kantan mas tiempo de reaccion
2017-05-20 16:49 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 16:50 Vulkin: 01:26:345 (149,151) - Estas tambien borralas, mucho finisher ahi
2017-05-20 16:50 Vulkin: 01:27:416 (150) - y este no creo que le sea necesario ponerle finisher
2017-05-20 16:50 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 16:53 Vulkin: Ahora con los futsuu
2017-05-20 16:53 [_Chichinya_]: siento que los dK no son buenos para una fut xd
2017-05-20 16:53 Vulkin: iba a decir eso XD
2017-05-20 16:54 Vulkin: para un muzu creo que estarian bien
2017-05-20 16:54 Vulkin: pero para futsuu... ñee
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: agrege uno aqui
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: 00:26:345 (74) -
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: elimine el de aqui
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: 00:22:863 (61) -
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: consistencia xd
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: 00:23:131 (62) - lo puse ahi
2017-05-20 16:56 Vulkin: eso esta bien
2017-05-20 16:56 Vulkin: 00:38:131 - ddK d ddk ehh
2017-05-20 16:56 [_Chichinya_]: agrege uno aqui 00:39:202 (111) -
2017-05-20 16:57 [_Chichinya_]: ahora quedo asi
2017-05-20 16:57 [_Chichinya_]: ddk d d K
2017-05-20 16:57 [_Chichinya_]: para seguir siguiendo los 1/6 que no estan :^)
2017-05-20 16:57 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 16:57 Vulkin: mucho mejor asi
2017-05-20 16:58 Vulkin: 00:50:988 (141) - quitelo?
2017-05-20 16:58 Vulkin: ( el finish)
2017-05-20 16:58 [_Chichinya_]: deleted? 01:04:113 (178,181) -
2017-05-20 16:58 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 16:59 [_Chichinya_]: mejor quito este 01:04:916 (181) -
2017-05-20 16:59 Vulkin: si eso iba a decir
2017-05-20 16:59 Vulkin: 01:04:113 (178) - el de aca igual ya sigue el cambio de ritmo
2017-05-20 16:59 [_Chichinya_]: pero la consistencia estara bien? con la kantan :thinking:
2017-05-20 17:00 [_Chichinya_]: aja ya quite los dos
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: sep tienes razon
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: mejor los dos
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: 01:11:345 (201) - ?
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: remove
2017-05-20 17:01 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:01 Vulkin: 01:25:809 - ?
2017-05-20 17:01 [_Chichinya_]: 01:20:988 (229) -
2017-05-20 17:02 [_Chichinya_]: puedo eliminar todos esos
2017-05-20 17:02 Vulkin: 01:20:988 (229,239) - estos dos borrarle el finish
2017-05-20 17:03 Vulkin: y para 01:25:809 - no estoy seguro
2017-05-20 17:03 [_Chichinya_]: ya los borre
2017-05-20 17:03 [_Chichinya_]: si dicen algo
2017-05-20 17:03 [_Chichinya_]: los pongo .w.
2017-05-20 17:04 Vulkin: ok
2017-05-20 17:04 Vulkin: 01:49:113 (305,306,307) - estos 3 saquelos
2017-05-20 17:05 Vulkin: el de 01:49:916 (308) - creo que esta bien
2017-05-20 17:05 [_Chichinya_]: quetal un tremendo ctrl+g
2017-05-20 17:05 [_Chichinya_]: 01:42:416 (288,289) -
2017-05-20 17:05 [_Chichinya_]: kD
2017-05-20 17:06 Vulkin: sep
2017-05-20 17:06 Vulkin: mejor tambien
2017-05-20 17:06 [_Chichinya_]: lesto
2017-05-20 17:06 [_Chichinya_]: xD hice unas cosas tho
2017-05-20 17:07 [_Chichinya_]: ahora la muzu
2017-05-20 17:07 Vulkin: sep
2017-05-20 17:07 Vulkin: CTM
2017-05-20 17:07 Vulkin: 00:13:488 - tanto finish xD
2017-05-20 17:07 [_Chichinya_]: hice lo mismo
2017-05-20 17:07 [_Chichinya_]: 00:23:131 (110) -
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: aqui y elimine el dkd
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: lo cambie por un simple k d
2017-05-20 17:08 Vulkin: cual dkd?
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: que recomiendas :c
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: ya va primero ahi donde me marcaste
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: XD
2017-05-20 17:08 Vulkin: 00:23:131 (86) - aca creo que finish no
2017-05-20 17:08 Vulkin: 00:13:488 (46) - este estaba bien con finish
2017-05-20 17:09 Vulkin: me referia a 00:14:291 (51) - 00:15:095 (54) - 00:15:898 (58) - 00:16:702 (61) -
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: aja listo con esas
2017-05-20 17:09 Vulkin: que son mejor sin el finish
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: si XD
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: oke
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:09 Vulkin: 00:26:077 - ddd K es mejor creo yo
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: lo dejare en el ultimo
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: osea este 00:19:916 (100) -
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: sep
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: yap
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: btw cambie esto 00:26:881 (138) - por d
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: xd
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: 00:36:791 (149) - borre
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: mejor tambien xD
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: yao
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: 00:39:202 (165) - hagalo D
2017-05-20 17:11 [_Chichinya_]: no wn esa D no por que es violin
2017-05-20 17:11 [_Chichinya_]: ademas del clock sound
2017-05-20 17:11 [_Chichinya_]: diria que esa es la unica parte en la que estoy seguro que es consistente af
2017-05-20 17:12 Vulkin: entonces 00:38:934 (163,164) - d ?
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: desde aqui elimine 00:52:059 (265) -
2017-05-20 17:13 Vulkin: 01:17:639 (98) - d?
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: son s
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: estas en la oni?
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: LOL
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: http://puu.sh/vWk6F/dff014f58d.jpg
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: aun en la muzu
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: voy
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: ctm
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: XD
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: JDALSDJALKSDJSA
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: pa la oni me voy entonces
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: ya cmabie esas
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/961416 Morimori Atsushi - Applique [Muzukashii]]
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: AwA
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/961417 Morimori Atsushi - Applique [Oni]]
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: pa muzu voy
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: deletee esta tambien
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: 00:36:791 (149) -
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: lol
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: por la ctm en cual diff estamos XD
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: ldkjakjsakjaklsdjs
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: muzu
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: xD
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: lo que pasa es que pense que te fuiste con la otra
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: a
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: 00:36:791 - de aqui?
2017-05-20 17:16 Vulkin: 00:36:791 (149) - si mejor sin finisher
2017-05-20 17:16 Vulkin: ya ahora vamos para la oni
2017-05-20 17:16 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: ya se lo quite
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: jaslkjas
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: oke
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:17 [_Chichinya_]: con eso vi que ahora si tengo consistencia xD
2017-05-20 17:18 Vulkin: 00:13:488 - puro finisher cada 3/1
2017-05-20 17:18 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:18 [_Chichinya_]: si
2017-05-20 17:18 [_Chichinya_]: esos ya los quite
2017-05-20 17:19 [_Chichinya_]: como te dije
2017-05-20 17:19 [_Chichinya_]: deje este 00:19:916 (100) -
2017-05-20 17:19 Vulkin: a ok
2017-05-20 17:21 Vulkin: ahora por ultimo al ura
2017-05-20 17:21 Vulkin: ctm me dio frio
2017-05-20 17:21 [_Chichinya_]: wut
2017-05-20 17:21 [_Chichinya_]: yo ando... tomando tang de guanabana
2017-05-20 17:22 Vulkin: xd
2017-05-20 17:22 [_Chichinya_]: =W=
2017-05-20 17:23 Vulkin: ahora comiendo lechuga con maiz
2017-05-20 17:23 [_Chichinya_]: :0
2017-05-20 17:23 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:23 [_Chichinya_]: dale vamo con la ura
2017-05-20 17:24 Vulkin: al principio los finishers creo que estan bien
2017-05-20 17:24 Vulkin: total es una diff mas alta
2017-05-20 17:24 Vulkin: 00:26:278 (153) - de hecho borre esta nota y haga 00:26:345 (154) - finish
2017-05-20 17:25 [_Chichinya_]: yap
2017-05-20 17:25 Vulkin: al ura no creo que se le sea necesario cambiarle tanto
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: si ando quitando unas cositas ahi
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: xD creo que de finish estaria bien
2017-05-20 17:26 Vulkin: 01:49:113 - aca creo que seria mejor un dkkdkkdkk en 1/3
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: 01:30:631 (673) - finish!!!!!!!
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: ve XD
2017-05-20 17:26 Vulkin: dkkdkkddd
2017-05-20 17:26 Vulkin: sep finish!
2017-05-20 17:27 Vulkin: 01:34:872 (689) - este creo que suena mejor en 01:34:849 -
2017-05-20 17:27 [_Chichinya_]: listo
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

Vulkin wrote:

ReCheck por IRC
2017-05-20 16:40 Vulkin: o
2017-05-20 16:40 Vulkin: ok aca las del kantan
2017-05-20 16:41 [_Chichinya_]: voy
2017-05-20 16:42 Vulkin: 00:52:863 (85) - Este no creo que debe tener finish
2017-05-20 16:43 Vulkin: porque los siguientes del mismo sonido no lo tienen (y no deberian tenerlo imo)
2017-05-20 16:43 Vulkin: nota que el 84 debe tenerlo porque es como el principio w
2017-05-20 16:43 [_Chichinya_]: pongo en duda estas
2017-05-20 16:43 [_Chichinya_]: 01:01:702 (103,105,107,109) -
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: tienes razon o.o
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: las demas no lo son
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: y practicamente son el mismo sonido xd
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: UF esa escapada papaaa 01:16:970 (129) -
2017-05-20 16:44 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: coño dejame actualizarte el map
2017-05-20 16:44 Vulkin: adelante
2017-05-20 16:44 [_Chichinya_]: por que los cambios de nepuri xd me desconfiguraron la mierda esta
2017-05-20 16:45 [_Chichinya_]: ya listo
2017-05-20 16:45 Vulkin: bajando de nuevo
2017-05-20 16:46 Vulkin: (el net se me puso lento, pta la wea)
2017-05-20 16:46 [_Chichinya_]: me pasa
2017-05-20 16:48 Vulkin: 01:01:702 (103,105,107) - para los finishers aca, yo borraria 01:02:238 (104,106) - para darle al jugador de kantan mas tiempo de reaccion
2017-05-20 16:49 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 16:50 Vulkin: 01:26:345 (149,151) - Estas tambien borralas, mucho finisher ahi
2017-05-20 16:50 Vulkin: 01:27:416 (150) - y este no creo que le sea necesario ponerle finisher
2017-05-20 16:50 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 16:53 Vulkin: Ahora con los futsuu
2017-05-20 16:53 [_Chichinya_]: siento que los dK no son buenos para una fut xd
2017-05-20 16:53 Vulkin: iba a decir eso XD
2017-05-20 16:54 Vulkin: para un muzu creo que estarian bien
2017-05-20 16:54 Vulkin: pero para futsuu... ñee
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: agrege uno aqui
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: 00:26:345 (74) -
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: elimine el de aqui
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: 00:22:863 (61) -
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: consistencia xd
2017-05-20 16:55 [_Chichinya_]: 00:23:131 (62) - lo puse ahi
2017-05-20 16:56 Vulkin: eso esta bien
2017-05-20 16:56 Vulkin: 00:38:131 - ddK d ddk ehh
2017-05-20 16:56 [_Chichinya_]: agrege uno aqui 00:39:202 (111) -
2017-05-20 16:57 [_Chichinya_]: ahora quedo asi
2017-05-20 16:57 [_Chichinya_]: ddk d d K
2017-05-20 16:57 [_Chichinya_]: para seguir siguiendo los 1/6 que no estan :^)
2017-05-20 16:57 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 16:57 Vulkin: mucho mejor asi
2017-05-20 16:58 Vulkin: 00:50:988 (141) - quitelo?
2017-05-20 16:58 Vulkin: ( el finish)
2017-05-20 16:58 [_Chichinya_]: deleted? 01:04:113 (178,181) -
2017-05-20 16:58 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 16:59 [_Chichinya_]: mejor quito este 01:04:916 (181) -
2017-05-20 16:59 Vulkin: si eso iba a decir
2017-05-20 16:59 Vulkin: 01:04:113 (178) - el de aca igual ya sigue el cambio de ritmo
2017-05-20 16:59 [_Chichinya_]: pero la consistencia estara bien? con la kantan :thinking:
2017-05-20 17:00 [_Chichinya_]: aja ya quite los dos
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: sep tienes razon
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: mejor los dos
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: 01:11:345 (201) - ?
2017-05-20 17:00 Vulkin: remove
2017-05-20 17:01 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:01 Vulkin: 01:25:809 - ?
2017-05-20 17:01 [_Chichinya_]: 01:20:988 (229) -
2017-05-20 17:02 [_Chichinya_]: puedo eliminar todos esos
2017-05-20 17:02 Vulkin: 01:20:988 (229,239) - estos dos borrarle el finish
2017-05-20 17:03 Vulkin: y para 01:25:809 - no estoy seguro
2017-05-20 17:03 [_Chichinya_]: ya los borre
2017-05-20 17:03 [_Chichinya_]: si dicen algo
2017-05-20 17:03 [_Chichinya_]: los pongo .w.
2017-05-20 17:04 Vulkin: ok
2017-05-20 17:04 Vulkin: 01:49:113 (305,306,307) - estos 3 saquelos
2017-05-20 17:05 Vulkin: el de 01:49:916 (308) - creo que esta bien
2017-05-20 17:05 [_Chichinya_]: quetal un tremendo ctrl+g
2017-05-20 17:05 [_Chichinya_]: 01:42:416 (288,289) -
2017-05-20 17:05 [_Chichinya_]: kD
2017-05-20 17:06 Vulkin: sep
2017-05-20 17:06 Vulkin: mejor tambien
2017-05-20 17:06 [_Chichinya_]: lesto
2017-05-20 17:06 [_Chichinya_]: xD hice unas cosas tho
2017-05-20 17:07 [_Chichinya_]: ahora la muzu
2017-05-20 17:07 Vulkin: sep
2017-05-20 17:07 Vulkin: CTM
2017-05-20 17:07 Vulkin: 00:13:488 - tanto finish xD
2017-05-20 17:07 [_Chichinya_]: hice lo mismo
2017-05-20 17:07 [_Chichinya_]: 00:23:131 (110) -
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: aqui y elimine el dkd
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: lo cambie por un simple k d
2017-05-20 17:08 Vulkin: cual dkd?
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: que recomiendas :c
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: ya va primero ahi donde me marcaste
2017-05-20 17:08 [_Chichinya_]: XD
2017-05-20 17:08 Vulkin: 00:23:131 (86) - aca creo que finish no
2017-05-20 17:08 Vulkin: 00:13:488 (46) - este estaba bien con finish
2017-05-20 17:09 Vulkin: me referia a 00:14:291 (51) - 00:15:095 (54) - 00:15:898 (58) - 00:16:702 (61) -
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: aja listo con esas
2017-05-20 17:09 Vulkin: que son mejor sin el finish
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: si XD
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: oke
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:09 Vulkin: 00:26:077 - ddd K es mejor creo yo
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: lo dejare en el ultimo
2017-05-20 17:09 [_Chichinya_]: osea este 00:19:916 (100) -
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: sep
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: yap
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: btw cambie esto 00:26:881 (138) - por d
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: xd
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: 00:36:791 (149) - borre
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: mejor tambien xD
2017-05-20 17:10 [_Chichinya_]: yao
2017-05-20 17:10 Vulkin: 00:39:202 (165) - hagalo D
2017-05-20 17:11 [_Chichinya_]: no wn esa D no por que es violin
2017-05-20 17:11 [_Chichinya_]: ademas del clock sound
2017-05-20 17:11 [_Chichinya_]: diria que esa es la unica parte en la que estoy seguro que es consistente af
2017-05-20 17:12 Vulkin: entonces 00:38:934 (163,164) - d ?
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: desde aqui elimine 00:52:059 (265) -
2017-05-20 17:13 Vulkin: 01:17:639 (98) - d?
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: son s
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: estas en la oni?
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: LOL
2017-05-20 17:13 [_Chichinya_]: http://puu.sh/vWk6F/dff014f58d.jpg
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: aun en la muzu
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: voy
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: ctm
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: XD
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: JDALSDJALKSDJSA
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: pa la oni me voy entonces
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: ya cmabie esas
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/961416 Morimori Atsushi - Applique [Muzukashii]]
2017-05-20 17:14 [_Chichinya_]: AwA
2017-05-20 17:14 Vulkin: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/961417 Morimori Atsushi - Applique [Oni]]
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: pa muzu voy
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: deletee esta tambien
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: 00:36:791 (149) -
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: lol
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: por la ctm en cual diff estamos XD
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: ldkjakjsakjaklsdjs
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: muzu
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: xD
2017-05-20 17:15 [_Chichinya_]: lo que pasa es que pense que te fuiste con la otra
2017-05-20 17:15 Vulkin: a
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: 00:36:791 - de aqui?
2017-05-20 17:16 Vulkin: 00:36:791 (149) - si mejor sin finisher
2017-05-20 17:16 Vulkin: ya ahora vamos para la oni
2017-05-20 17:16 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: ya se lo quite
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: jaslkjas
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: oke
2017-05-20 17:16 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:17 [_Chichinya_]: con eso vi que ahora si tengo consistencia xD
2017-05-20 17:18 Vulkin: 00:13:488 - puro finisher cada 3/1
2017-05-20 17:18 Vulkin: xD
2017-05-20 17:18 [_Chichinya_]: si
2017-05-20 17:18 [_Chichinya_]: esos ya los quite
2017-05-20 17:19 [_Chichinya_]: como te dije
2017-05-20 17:19 [_Chichinya_]: deje este 00:19:916 (100) -
2017-05-20 17:19 Vulkin: a ok
2017-05-20 17:21 Vulkin: ahora por ultimo al ura
2017-05-20 17:21 Vulkin: ctm me dio frio
2017-05-20 17:21 [_Chichinya_]: wut
2017-05-20 17:21 [_Chichinya_]: yo ando... tomando tang de guanabana
2017-05-20 17:22 Vulkin: xd
2017-05-20 17:22 [_Chichinya_]: =W=
2017-05-20 17:23 Vulkin: ahora comiendo lechuga con maiz
2017-05-20 17:23 [_Chichinya_]: :0
2017-05-20 17:23 [_Chichinya_]: listo
2017-05-20 17:23 [_Chichinya_]: dale vamo con la ura
2017-05-20 17:24 Vulkin: al principio los finishers creo que estan bien
2017-05-20 17:24 Vulkin: total es una diff mas alta
2017-05-20 17:24 Vulkin: 00:26:278 (153) - de hecho borre esta nota y haga 00:26:345 (154) - finish
2017-05-20 17:25 [_Chichinya_]: yap
2017-05-20 17:25 Vulkin: al ura no creo que se le sea necesario cambiarle tanto
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: si ando quitando unas cositas ahi
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: xD creo que de finish estaria bien
2017-05-20 17:26 Vulkin: 01:49:113 - aca creo que seria mejor un dkkdkkdkk en 1/3
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: 01:30:631 (673) - finish!!!!!!!
2017-05-20 17:26 [_Chichinya_]: ve XD
2017-05-20 17:26 Vulkin: dkkdkkddd
2017-05-20 17:26 Vulkin: sep finish!
2017-05-20 17:27 Vulkin: 01:34:872 (689) - este creo que suena mejor en 01:34:849 -
2017-05-20 17:27 [_Chichinya_]: listo

ugu ty <3
Surono
orz low diffs... btw you can nerf a bit for Oni bcus some base pattern or stream are harsh I guess, somehow it close with Inner. will be back soon with dem mod ( and how thats low diffs has high sr.. ) find modders again pls for Oni ~ Kantan, take care more to oni and low diffs. dem spread density gap blabla
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

Surono wrote:

orz low diffs... btw you can nerf a bit for Oni bcus some base pattern or stream are harsh I guess, somehow it close with Inner. will be back soon with dem mod ( and how thats low diffs has high sr.. ) find modders again pls for Oni ~ Kantan, take care more to oni and low diffs. dem spread density gap blabla
SIR YES SIR!! o7weee this gonna take a while xD
Vulkin
3er mod (o 4to?) que hago en este set xD

NO ME DES KUDOSU POR ESTE POST ;_;

(Note to Ayyri: I won't check your diff by request of Chichinya (Only Mod Kantan to Oni), sorry)

-Kantan-
00:28:756 - una k aca no seria malo, por ser kiai yo creo que estaria bien (00:31:970 - te excusas de saltar esta diciendo que sigues el violin xd)
00:38:666 (49) - esta creo que seria mejor borrarla, ir de 3/1 a 1/1 de una no creo que es buena idea, por lo menos al principio de la cancion no imo
00:38:934 (49) - ^ para nerfear un poco mas
01:04:113 (82) - Cambiala a K, Asi hace consistencia con la nota anterior (01:03:309 (81) - )
01:08:934 - una k aca seria lo ideal creo yo, porque asi sigues el sonido del instrumento
01:38:666 (136,137) - Ctrl+G con estas dos notas y yo creo que seguira el tono un poco mejor, ademas que la k hara consistencia de sonido con las notas a venir

-Futsuu-
00:20:720 (50) - Suena un poco mejor sin el finisher, puesto que 00:19:916 (49) - no lo tiene tampoco, asi da mas prioridad a 00:21:523 (51,52,53) -
00:55:006 (141,142) - Ctrl+G, Da mas variacion
00:55:809 (143,144) - ^
01:01:434 (160,161) - Ctrl+G, Sigue mejor el tono
01:03:041 (164,165) - ^
01:08:934 (182) - hagala k por el tono, sigue lo mismo que 01:08:131 (180) - , el cual es una k
01:15:095 (200,201) - Ctrl+G

-Muzukashii-
00:24:604 (92) - k? sigue el mismo tono que 00:24:470 (91) -
01:12:081 (67,68) - hagalas dd para que tenga consistencia con el par anterior
01:14:827 (78) - 01:15:631 (82) - estas dos hagalas d para que no hayan tantas k ahi
01:18:443 - porque no seguir los doublets (o triplets que hiciste en el kiai) aca?, tienen el mismo sonido, ademas asi podrias tener consistencia con 01:24:872 -
01:28:086 - porque no un kkk aca?, el sonido lo mappeaste como triplet en el kiai, y ya que esta en kiai no le veo el porque no

-Oni-
00:51:456 (258) - Este sonaria un poco mejor en 00:51:322 -
01:11:345 - K d k kd k d K seguiria mejor
01:39:738 (550,553,556) - Borrelas para dar mas descanso
01:43:153 (563) - ^
01:52:327 - dkkd para que tenga consistencia con el cambio de colores que hiciste antes

Suerte con el set!!
Topic Starter
Shinsekai-

Vulkin wrote:

3er mod (o 4to?) que hago en este set xD

NO ME DES KUDOSU POR ESTE POST ;_;

(Note to Ayyri: I won't check your diff by request of Chichinya (Only Mod Kantan to Oni), sorry)

-Kantan-
00:28:756 - una k aca no seria malo, por ser kiai yo creo que estaria bien (00:31:970 - te excusas de saltar esta diciendo que sigues el violin xd)
00:38:666 (49) - esta creo que seria mejor borrarla, ir de 3/1 a 1/1 de una no creo que es buena idea, por lo menos al principio de la cancion no imo no por ahora por que sigue el 1/6
00:38:934 (49) - ^ para nerfear un poco mas ño :C
01:04:113 (82) - Cambiala a K, Asi hace consistencia con la nota anterior (01:03:309 (81) - )
01:08:934 - una k aca seria lo ideal creo yo, porque asi sigues el sonido del instrumento
01:38:666 (136,137) - Ctrl+G con estas dos notas y yo creo que seguira el tono un poco mejor, ademas que la k hara consistencia de sonido con las notas a venir

-Futsuu-
00:20:720 (50) - Suena un poco mejor sin el finisher, puesto que 00:19:916 (49) - no lo tiene tampoco, asi da mas prioridad a 00:21:523 (51,52,53) -
00:55:006 (141,142) - Ctrl+G, Da mas variacion
00:55:809 (143,144) - ^
01:01:434 (160,161) - Ctrl+G, Sigue mejor el tono
01:03:041 (164,165) - ^
01:08:934 (182) - hagala k por el tono, sigue lo mismo que 01:08:131 (180) - , el cual es una k
01:15:095 (200,201) - Ctrl+G

-Muzukashii-
00:24:604 (92) - k? sigue el mismo tono que 00:24:470 (91) -
01:12:081 (67,68) - hagalas dd para que tenga consistencia con el par anterior
01:14:827 (78) - 01:15:631 (82) - estas dos hagalas d para que no hayan tantas k ahi
01:18:443 - porque no seguir los doublets (o triplets que hiciste en el kiai) aca?, tienen el mismo sonido, ademas asi podrias tener consistencia con 01:24:872 -
01:28:086 - porque no un kkk aca?, el sonido lo mappeaste como triplet en el kiai, y ya que esta en kiai no le veo el porque no

-Oni-
00:51:456 (258) - Este sonaria un poco mejor en 00:51:322 -
01:11:345 - K d k kd k d K seguiria mejor
01:39:738 (550,553,556) - Borrelas para dar mas descanso
01:43:153 (563) - ^
01:52:327 - dkkd para que tenga consistencia con el cambio de colores que hiciste antes

Suerte con el set!!
muchimas ghracias XD aunque aumento el SR que es lo que no queria pero igual el SR en osu! no funciona so \o/
Stefan
Giving it a quick check because Ari was asking for.

[Ura Oni]
00:58:354 (385,386) - Switching them would be better since 00:58:220 (384) - goes with d on the same sound like 00:58:354 (385) - , while I find the ligher sound on 00:58:488 (386) - should be emphasized with k, not with don.
01:08:398 - 01:11:211 - Personally I really have no idea what exactly were you following here, without intending to sound harsh or anything. Quick explaination or anything like that would be nice.
01:16:434 (540,541,542,543,544,545,546,547,548) - try kkddkddkk instead. This sounds rather what the song gives
01:43:220 (728) - Except of the very imperceptible "beam" sound here, there is no reason to switch on d. Sound is pretty constant.

[Inner Oni]
00:37:997 (198,199) - I've said to switch them so 00:38:131 (199,200) - with similar sounds share the same hitsound.

The difficulty itself is actually okay but feels weird with the significantely calmer parts sometimes, like 01:17:773 - 01:30:631 - but I guess it will be okay anyway.

[Oni]
SV usage in this difficulty is pretty whacky and needs some improvement.

00:12:416 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - The SV build looks bad... instead of 0.05x jumps, try 0.03 instead, check the screenshot: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/s4LS2Qx9.png
00:39:202 (214,215,216,217,218,219,220) - SV on 00:39:202 - shouldn't drop to 1.00x since it's connected to the previous pattern of 00:37:863 (201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213) - , it looks detached. 00:39:202 - should have 1.05x but with disabled Kiai, 00:39:470 - with 1.00x and so on.
00:51:256 - move the line to 00:51:189 - since it cause the barline to spaz out right now.
01:31:702 - Why would you drop from 0.85x to 0.75x? either use 0.80x before and then on 01:31:970 - to have 0.75x just stick with 0.80x as the general SV for this section.

Difficulty itself looks okay, objectively said.

[Muzukashii]
personally I have doubts in using doublets for that sort of Muzukashii, Oni barely uses them so I don't really know if you need them at all. five-lets instead could be done to fit better with what Oni gives.

Feel free to give it KD or not, good luck! :P
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Shinsekai-

Stefan wrote:

Giving it a quick check because Ari was asking for.

[Ura Oni]
00:58:354 (385,386) - Switching them would be better since 00:58:220 (384) - goes with d on the same sound like 00:58:354 (385) - , while I find the ligher sound on 00:58:488 (386) - should be emphasized with k, not with don.
01:08:398 - 01:11:211 - Personally I really have no idea what exactly were you following here, without intending to sound harsh or anything. Quick explaination or anything like that would be nice. a llittle of overmapping by me :o adding my own rhythm cuz if i leave that part would be too boring... almost for me
01:16:434 (540,541,542,543,544,545,546,547,548) - try kkddkddkk instead. This sounds rather what the song gives
01:43:220 (728) - Except of the very imperceptible "beam" sound here, there is no reason to switch on d. Sound is pretty constant. >_> ik xD i changed that cuz... stamina (?)

[Inner Oni]
00:37:997 (198,199) - I've said to switch them so 00:38:131 (199,200) - with similar sounds share the same hitsound.

The difficulty itself is actually okay but feels weird with the significantely calmer parts sometimes, like 01:17:773 - 01:30:631 - but I guess it will be okay anyway.

[Oni]
SV usage in this difficulty is pretty whacky and needs some improvement.

00:12:416 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - The SV build looks bad... instead of 0.05x jumps, try 0.03 instead, check the screenshot: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/s4LS2Qx9.png
00:39:202 (214,215,216,217,218,219,220) - SV on 00:39:202 - shouldn't drop to 1.00x since it's connected to the previous pattern of 00:37:863 (201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213) - , it looks detached. 00:39:202 - should have 1.05x but with disabled Kiai, 00:39:470 - with 1.00x and so on.
00:51:256 - move the line to 00:51:189 - since it cause the barline to spaz out right now.
01:31:702 - Why would you drop from 0.85x to 0.75x? either use 0.80x before and then on 01:31:970 - to have 0.75x just stick with 0.80x as the genera oh fuck i forgot that D:!l SV for this section.

Difficulty itself looks okay, objectively said.

[Muzukashii]
personally I have doubts in using doublets for that sort of Muzukashii, Oni barely uses them so I don't really know if you need them at all. five-lets instead could be done to fit better with what Oni gives.

Feel free to give it KD or not, good luck! :P
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