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Axey
:oops:
Blackiris
☆~~~
KanaRin
Mod by request.

[AES]
Fine.

[Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]
Fine.

[Taiko]
Seem like no problem.

[Collab]
Resnap全部唔岩位的Timing Line.
Ps. 開始果d Green Line其實有什麼用? 可以Del不必要的Green line嗎?
Play mode mapset 大致無問題.
Hitsoind modding by request~
00:18:314 (2) - Clap
00:18:496 (3) - Slider頭 whistle
00:19:223 (4) - whistle
00:19:768 (6) - clap
00:19:950 (7) - Slider頭whistle
00:21:223 (2) - clap
00:21:950 (4) - clap
00:22:677 (6) - Slider尾whistle
00:24:314 (6) - whistle
00:25:041 (1) - ^
00:25:586 (5) - clap
00:25:768 (6) - whistle
00:26:496 (1) - slider頭whistle
00:27:041 (2) - clap
00:27:768 (4) - ^
00:27:950 (5) - whistle
00:28:496 (8) - clap
00:28:677 (9) - whistle
00:29:768 (2) - slider尾clap
00:30:132 (3) - slider頭whistle
00:30:859 (1) - whistle
00:31:223 (3) - slider尾clap
00:31:586 (4) - slider頭whistle
00:32:314 (1) - whistle
00:32:859 (3) - clap
00:33:586 (5) - clap
00:34:314 (7) - slider頭clap
00:34:314 (7) - slider尾whistle
00:34:677 (8,9,10,11) - 這4個音不建議消音, 建議音量回正常之後
00:35:041 (10) - clap
00:35:223 (11) - whistle

etc...............
一直做你就明白
用最長的白線(叫1白線)做指引
2,4白線上Clap
2,4紅線上Whistle
之後我就不給指示了 自己做做看
因為我一直指引你會學不懂的
加油吧0.0
之前Star了~
Topic Starter
Madoka

KanaRin wrote:

一直做你就明白
用最長的白線(叫1白線)做指引
2,4白線上Clap
2,4紅線上Whistle
之後我就不給指示了 自己做做看
因為我一直指引你會學不懂的
加油吧0.0
之前Star了~
Thanks Kana ~ :D
KanaRin
*Rechecking*

[Collab]
00:24:132 (5) - Clap (放少了)
00:25:586 (5) - 是clap不是whiste
00:40:677 (7) - 未放好係slider尾 (關左grid snap 對好佢)
00:43:586 (x) - add a note here.
00:46:859 (2) - 未對好slider尾 (一樣關左grid snap對好佢)
00:54:859 (7) - orz ^ 一樣
00:54:859 (7) - whiste轉做Finish
01:13:768 (7) - ^
01:15:950 (4) - 未對好01:15:768 (3) - (呢個要開grid snap)
01:16:314 (6) - 未對好01:16:132 (5) - (呢個要開grid snap)
01:23:405 (2) - finish
01:23:768 (4) - slider尾轉做finish
01:24:859 (2) - slider頭finish
01:25:223 (3) - slider尾轉做finish
01:27:586 (1) - slider尾finish
01:31:223 (6) - finish + whiste
02:05:586 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 唔好消音
02:12:859 (1) - finish
02:28:677 (6) - ^
02:29:405 (8) - ^
03:07:405 (3) - 雖然係3紅線但係加whiste都好聽,so加whiste
03:18:859 (5) - 加finish
03:18:859 (5) - 加finish
03:28:677 (5) - spacing , 建議疊係03:28:314 (4) -
即係咁>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/55864 <<
03:31:223 (4) - 加finish
03:31:950 (7) - ^
03:34:859 (5) - ^
03:42:132 (5) - ^
03:43:586 (5) - ^
03:45:768 (1) - slider尾finish
04:09:041 (1) - 去番好中間..

Ok.改哂就冇問題了~
miss_dior
:)
CHAS
Jeya_old
very good song ^^ star~~
wmfchris
[general]
1) Collab - who collab this?
2) Tags - tag all guest diff maker (as well as who collab)
3) Preview time not yet set
4) Some of your diff are unsnapped, take AImod as reference to improve your spacing.

[Taiko]
00:34:314 - dk
00:47:223 - k
01:13:223 - kkkkk d
01:16:132 - k K
01:23:867 - kdd
01:24:859 - ddddkkk
02:17:768 - k kkd k d/D
02:35:586 - kkk
simple pattern but quite good effect

star~
aabc271
Taiko diff irc modded~
Pink star :)
Topic Starter
Madoka

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
1) Collab - who collab this? 只有我 D: 等我改個diff名做aaa
2) Tags - tag all guest diff maker (as well as who collab) ok fixed
3) Preview time not yet set ok fixed
4) Some of your diff are unsnapped, take AImod as reference to improve your spacing. hmm....i think no need

[Taiko]
00:34:314 - dk
00:47:223 - k
01:13:223 - kkkkk d
01:16:132 - k K
01:23:867 - kdd
01:24:859 - ddddkkk
02:17:768 - k kkd k d/D
02:35:586 - kkk
simple pattern but quite good effect
all fixed
star~
ok thanks ~

aabc271 wrote:

Taiko diff irc modded~
Pink star :)
fixed

thanks kd star ~~~ >.<
Miu Matsuoka
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Deif
Star~ :3
Alvin Chan
star
Krzysiek
Lovely relaxing map. Enjoyed playing CtB a lot :_>.
Mitsuki-_old
wonderful song and wonderful map!
star~
CodeABC
good map,star~ :)
Cirno
/me stars~

EDIT: Storyboard finished http://www.mediafire.com/?u9c7ix63r9nttb6
Satori chan_old
AAA觸挾持我QAQ
MoeCirno
好圖 聽呆掉了忘記接了結果miss =。=
le0u0
star~ :)
koko6162006
NanaYukari
:)
bakabaka
star 0.0
happy30
[General]

Resnap the green sections where kiai starts

[AEasy]

02:11:409 (3) - make it a bit closer to (2)

[aaa]

How about naming this [Hard] and name lkp's diff like [lkp's Hard] ?
It's your mapset after all :o

The spacing on this diff looks kind of random, and the sliders also don't look good.
This diff needs a lot of work before it can be ranked.

00:19:223 (4,5) - the overlap doesn't look good
00:20:677 (1) - ^
00:24:677 (7) - Too close to (6) this anti-jump doesn't work well here.
00:30:859 (1) - Too close to (3)

00:48:314 (6,7) - Too close to (5) and the overlap doesn't look good
00:49:768 (9) - Move this 1/2 back? it would sound much better.
01:01:586 (4) - weird spacing
01:15:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This spacing doesn't follow your map at all. can you remap this part?

01:19:768 (8) - Too close to (7)
01:44:314 (3) - Overlap doesn't look good here
01:49:586 (1) - Too close to (8)
01:50:132 (3) - weird spacing

01:57:768 (7) - Too close to (6)
01:58:495 (1) - Weird spacing.
02:02:677 (2) - Overlap doesn't look good
02:03:950 (4) - Too close to (3)

02:06:859 (1) - Move this 1/2 further? it would sound much better
02:14:314 (1,2) - Too close to (3)
02:14:859 (3) - The slidertrack itself is too close to (2)
02:18:314 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Weird spacing

03:00:859 (1) - Consider using slower sliders for this part ><


[Hard]

where is kiai?

00:21:586 (3) - looks weird with the overlappings
00:26:677 (1) - Shouldn't hit the slidertrack, make the shape the same as (1) but inverted?
00:35:223 (4) - Overlap doesn't look good
01:19:041 (4) - ^

01:28:495 (1) - This jump is too big and completely destroys the flow D:
01:38:132 (2) - Overlap doesn't look good
02:04:677 (2) - Too close to (4)

Try to clean it up a bit :)

and don't ask people to star your map, it will give the opposite effect
Topic Starter
Madoka

happy30 wrote:

[General]

Resnap the green sections where kiai starts

[AEasy]

02:11:409 (3) - make it a bit closer to (2)

[aaa]

How about naming this [Hard] and name lkp's diff like [lkp's Hard] ?
It's your mapset after all :o

The spacing on this diff looks kind of random, and the sliders also don't look good.
This diff needs a lot of work before it can be ranked.

00:19:223 (4,5) - the overlap doesn't look good
00:20:677 (1) - ^
00:24:677 (7) - Too close to (6) this anti-jump doesn't work well here.
00:30:859 (1) - Too close to (3)

00:48:314 (6,7) - Too close to (5) and the overlap doesn't look good
00:49:768 (9) - Move this 1/2 back? it would sound much better.
01:01:586 (4) - weird spacing
01:15:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This spacing doesn't follow your map at all. can you remap this part?

01:19:768 (8) - Too close to (7)
01:44:314 (3) - Overlap doesn't look good here
01:49:586 (1) - Too close to (8)
01:50:132 (3) - weird spacing

01:57:768 (7) - Too close to (6)
01:58:495 (1) - Weird spacing.
02:02:677 (2) - Overlap doesn't look good
02:03:950 (4) - Too close to (3)

02:06:859 (1) - Move this 1/2 further? it would sound much better
02:14:314 (1,2) - Too close to (3)
02:14:859 (3) - The slidertrack itself is too close to (2)
02:18:314 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Weird spacing

03:00:859 (1) - Consider using slower sliders for this part ><


[Hard]

where is kiai?

00:21:586 (3) - looks weird with the overlappings
00:26:677 (1) - Shouldn't hit the slidertrack, make the shape the same as (1) but inverted?
00:35:223 (4) - Overlap doesn't look good
01:19:041 (4) - ^

01:28:495 (1) - This jump is too big and completely destroys the flow D:
01:38:132 (2) - Overlap doesn't look good
02:04:677 (2) - Too close to (4)

Try to clean it up a bit :)

and don't ask people to star your map, it will give the opposite effect
thanks fot mod >w<

all fix ~
TristanShi
[General]
The lyrics on the SB does not fit the song accurately, I will mod via IRC.
and probably add some more effects.
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[Hard]
02:59:768 - slider should prolong to the next white.

P.S. 讓我心寒沒好下場. :twisted:
koko6162006
madaoB
star~ :D
yut_old
給星!
sky60699
0.0
MOLA_22
GJ~
John8985
star~ :lol:
TuTu1023
:)
tamiaode123
~~~~~~~~~~0V0
koko6162006
LuPiiTa
Sweet_old
star :)
Charles445
All
Make sure the tags and source are the same for ALL difficulties!
Source is : Kami nomi zo Shiru Sekai
Tags : lkp cheukhin1985 koko6162006 aesopl19193
Turn off letter box during breaks for all difficulties!

AEasy
AR +1 or +2
02:44:132 (4,5) - Bad spacing

Normal
The combos get pretty big, maybe add some new combos on some of the big white ticks?
It's a good difficulty.

Hard
Rename this Insane
01:01:586 - This reverse is hidden by the burst of the 3! Make it not hidden!
01:47:405 (4,5) - Too close together
02:02:677 (2,3) - ^^
02:03:223 (3,4) - ^^
02:59:405 to 03:08:132 - The spacing in this portion is very bad, go through and make sure the spacing is correct.
03:25:405 (4,5) - Too close together
03:37:041 (5,6) - ^^
This map has numerous spacing problems, I may not have listed them all.
Before you say they're readable and fine, most of them are really stupid to have.

lkp's Hard
01:32:132 to the end - Add hitsounds!
Nice difficulty, but it needs those sounds.

Taiko
Storyboard an epilepsy warning. It's a good taiko.
koko6162006
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