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N0thingSpecial
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10:55 WooWooWoo: Hi
10:55 N0thingSpecial: o/
10:56 WooWooWoo: Could you mod the map please?
10:56 WooWooWoo: MN or M4M doesn't matter
10:56 N0thingSpecial: mind np?
10:56 *WooWooWoo is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/964197 Shaman King - Shaman King Theme (Rus)]
10:57 WooWooWoo: mm?
10:57 N0thingSpecial: hmmm
10:57 N0thingSpecial: the thing is I'm not too good at modding lower diffs
10:57 N0thingSpecial: I'm still learning myself
10:58 WooWooWoo: Feel free to speak your mind
10:58 N0thingSpecial: I think I can NM the hard diff
10:59 N0thingSpecial: I'm gonna nazi a bit
10:59 WooWooWoo: That would be great
10:59 N0thingSpecial: 00:00:400 (1,2,3) - prefect triangle or something else
11:00 N0thingSpecial: 00:02:000 (1,2,3) - not an expert on flow but I think this is bad flow
11:03 N0thingSpecial: ok 00:02:600 (3,6,1) - you need to work on your patterning cause right now the patterning is fairly weak
11:03 N0thingSpecial: pointing towards the next slider head isn't exactly patterning
11:03 N0thingSpecial: common one is symmetry
11:03 WooWooWoo: Yeah I thought about it
11:04 N0thingSpecial: I can kinda see 00:02:600 (3,1) - might be flipped
11:04 N0thingSpecial: but
11:04 N0thingSpecial: 00:03:200 (6) - this is the middle just breaks the relationship
11:05 N0thingSpecial: like I just lazily did [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5355251 this] but do you see what I mean?
11:06 WooWooWoo: All right, I hear you
11:06 N0thingSpecial: also I think it is best to start copy and pasting some common sliders if you're going to use lots of them
11:07 N0thingSpecial: like 00:06:800 (1,4) -
11:07 N0thingSpecial: it would look a lot cleaner
11:07 N0thingSpecial: if they have the same curve
11:07 WooWooWoo: Yeah it's right
11:09 N0thingSpecial: also one more thing is that you have to use less "slider to point directly at the next note" pattern
11:10 N0thingSpecial: it would be considered to be 2008 mapping and it would be considered low quality
11:10 WooWooWoo: For example?
11:10 N0thingSpecial: 00:04:200 (3,4) -
11:10 N0thingSpecial: 00:03:600 (1,2) -
11:10 N0thingSpecial: like these are fine but as you use too much
11:11 N0thingSpecial: it becomes boring
11:11 N0thingSpecial: and then you are forced to use these sharp angle flow
11:12 N0thingSpecial: that is uncomfortable to play
11:12 N0thingSpecial: like
11:12 N0thingSpecial: 00:04:200 (3,4,5,6) -
11:12 N0thingSpecial: here you use pretty linear flow
11:12 N0thingSpecial: 00:05:000 (6,7) - then you have this sharp anti flow
11:13 N0thingSpecial: which is uncomfortable
11:13 WooWooWoo: Ok
11:14 N0thingSpecial: you need to know how to transition between linear flow and anti flow smoothly
11:14 WooWooWoo: I'll think about it
11:14 N0thingSpecial: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5355284 I did this but I don't think it's the best
11:15 N0thingSpecial: also work on your blanketing
11:16 N0thingSpecial: other wise all your mods is going to be blanket mods
11:16 N0thingSpecial: rather than actual useful mods
11:16 N0thingSpecial: 00:04:000 (2,3) -
11:16 N0thingSpecial: 00:08:000 (5,6) -
11:16 N0thingSpecial: 00:10:000 (1,2) -
11:16 N0thingSpecial: im just pointing out a few
11:16 N0thingSpecial: but yea there are guides on forum that will show you how to make perfect blankets
11:18 WooWooWoo: Fine
11:19 N0thingSpecial: also what thing you can start to do in hard difficulty is break DS
11:20 N0thingSpecial: where if you think an increase in DS can help emphasize a note in the music you can actually do it
11:20 N0thingSpecial: but only in like very important moments in kiai
11:21 WooWooWoo: I couldn't find the right moment
11:21 N0thingSpecial: constant DS is fine but in hard it starts to get boring
11:21 WooWooWoo: for jumps
11:21 N0thingSpecial: if you dont know here you can do it according to hitsounds
11:22 N0thingSpecial: 00:35:200 (3,4) - I feel like this would be a cool place to up the DS
11:22 N0thingSpecial: since you're using linear flow which doesn't help with emphasizing
11:22 N0thingSpecial: DS could help you emphasize it better
11:23 WooWooWoo: OK, I'll try
11:23 N0thingSpecial: at this point I don't think nazi modding would help you cause your map is good but basic.
11:24 WooWooWoo: One moment
11:24 WooWooWoo: What does "nazi" mean?
11:24 N0thingSpecial: like only look at details
11:24 WooWooWoo: Oh, ok
11:24 N0thingSpecial: like 00:11:600 (1,2,3) - this is not even
11:24 N0thingSpecial: ^this is a nazi mod
11:25 N0thingSpecial: or
11:25 N0thingSpecial: 00:16:400 (1,2,3) - these 3 sliders are not the same
11:26 WooWooWoo: Good, I got it, thanks.
11:26 N0thingSpecial: you have a good foundation
11:26 N0thingSpecial: it's just you need to learn how to transition flow and improve on your aesthetics
11:27 WooWooWoo: All right
11:27 N0thingSpecial: I've said this to many other mappers but try copying other maps, but do them with your own style
11:28 N0thingSpecial: like if you want to learn flow
11:28 N0thingSpecial: copy their flow
11:28 N0thingSpecial: but use your own aesthetics
11:28 WooWooWoo: Thanks for the advice
11:29 N0thingSpecial: np
11:29 N0thingSpecial: good luck
-Nya-
Heya~ M4M!

General:
  1. The BG has to be 1366X768. It’s an easy fix.

Hard:
  1. 00:02:600 (3,1) –Try to avoid this overlap by blanketing 00:03:200 (6,1) –
  2. 00:05:200 (7) –I think you can break this up into more notes, just to make it more challenging. Maybe try this:
  3. 00:09:200 (8) –I suggest turning this circle into a slider to catch that long vocal. Like this:
  4. 00:10:700 –I think I can hear a beat here so I suggest you add a circle here to catch it.
  5. 00:11:100 –Also, the vocal actually ends here so I suggest ending this slider: 00:10:800 (4) – there.
  6. 00:22:800 (1,4,5) –Please try to avoid this overlap by placing (4) and (5) somewhere else where they aren’t touching any other objects.
  7. 00:34:000 –Add a circle here. It feels a bit empty without one.
  8. 00:32:200 (1,2,3,4) –I think it would be better to add a long slider somewhere here and change this slider: 00:34:200 (1) – into circles to catch the vocals.
  9. 00:39:400 (7) –Rather place this slider like this for better flow:
  10. 00:40:700 (6) –Make this slider longer to this tick: 00:40:900 –
  11. 00:41:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –This stream is too difficult for a Hard. Rather replace it with short repeat sliders. Something like this:
    It will also be a good idea to change that stream into multiple short sliders.
  12. 00:44:400 (9) –I don’t think a circle is enough here. Maybe try this:
  13. 00:46:400 (8) –This repeat slider shouldn’t be here but rather here: 00:46:200 -, so something like this:
  14. 00:47:600 (10) –The same as 00:44:400 (9) –
  15. 00:49:600 (5) –You can make this slider longer so that it ends here: 00:50:000 –
  16. 00:50:800 (3) –Shorten this slider so it’s here: 00:51:200 – and then place a circle here: 00:51:400 –
  17. 00:55:700 (6,7) –Rather stack these two to prevent confusion.

Normal:
  1. 00:05:200 –This is quite an important beat so I really think that this has to be mapped out. So you can just place a circle there.
  2. 00:04:200 (3) –Since this vocal is a bit long, I suggest changing this circle into a slider. Like this:
  3. 00:07:000 –This vocal is quite important so change this circle: 00:06:800 (1) – into a short slider as well:
  4. 00:07:200 (2) –This is not following the vocals and it sounds a bit off. I suggest doing this:
  5. 00:08:000 (3) –Same thing here. Place a circle here: 00:08:000 – and start the slider here: 00:08:200 –
  6. 00:42:000 –The vocal actually starts here so the slider is starting too early. Try this:
  7. 00:43:200 (3) –Bad flow. Try something like this instead:

Easy:
  1. 00:01:999 (3,1) –Perfect this stack.
  2. 00:13:200 (4) –Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:14:800 (1) – then add new combo here: 00:16:400 (3) – and remove new combo here: 00:17:200 (1) –
  3. 00:22:800 (5) –Add new combo here.
  4. 00:29:199 (1) –Place this circle somewhere else so it doesn’t overlap. Maybe something like this:
  5. 00:35:600 (5) –Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:37:199 (1) –
  6. 00:48:400 (5) –Add new combo here.

Good Luck~! :D
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo_old

-Nya- wrote:

Heya~ M4M! Hi^^

General:
  1. The BG has to be 1366X768. It’s an easy fix. Fixed

Hard:
  1. 00:02:600 (3,1) –Try to avoid this overlap by blanketing 00:03:200 (6,1) – Fixed
  2. 00:05:200 (7) –I think you can break this up into more notes, just to make it more challenging. Maybe try this: Good idea. Fixed
  3. 00:09:200 (8) –I suggest turning this circle into a slider to catch that long vocal. Like this: Fixed
  4. 00:10:700 –I think I can hear a beat here so I suggest you add a circle here to catch it. Indeed. I fixed it
  5. 00:11:100 –Also, the vocal actually ends here so I suggest ending this slider: 00:10:800 (4) – there. On the contrary vocal starts at 00:11:100 - . But is sounds better. I fixed it
  6. 00:22:800 (1,4,5) –Please try to avoid this overlap by placing (4) and (5) somewhere else where they aren’t touching any other objects. Ye, I changed the pattern
  7. 00:34:000 –Add a circle here. It feels a bit empty without one. There's nothing here. I'll think about it
  8. 00:32:200 (1,2,3,4) –I think it would be better to add a long slider somewhere here and change this slider: 00:34:200 (1) – into circles to catch the vocals. I follow russian lyrics here. So I think it's my best option.
  9. 00:39:400 (7) –Rather place this slider like this for better flow: Fixed
  10. 00:40:700 (6) –Make this slider longer to this tick: 00:40:900 – Nah, I have every confidence in this part. It has taken me a long time to find right rhythm.
  11. 00:41:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –This stream is too difficult for a Hard. Rather replace it with short repeat sliders. Something like this: I'll think about it
    It will also be a good idea to change that stream into multiple short sliders.
  12. 00:44:400 (9) –I don’t think a circle is enough here. Maybe try this: I don't want to map too much. I follow lyrics here, so i think it's fine
  13. 00:46:400 (8) –This repeat slider shouldn’t be here but rather here: 00:46:200 -, so something like this: I changed the whole pattern.
  14. 00:47:600 (10) –The same as 00:44:400 (9) –
  15. 00:49:600 (5) –You can make this slider longer so that it ends here: 00:50:000 –
  16. 00:50:800 (3) –Shorten this slider so it’s here: 00:51:200 – and then place a circle here: 00:51:400 – I really like my choice. Anyway I'll think about it
  17. 00:55:700 (6,7) –Rather stack these two to prevent confusion. Good idea. Fixed


Normal:
  1. 00:05:200 –This is quite an important beat so I really think that this has to be mapped out. So you can just place a circle there. Indeed. I missed it. Fixed
  2. 00:04:200 (3) –Since this vocal is a bit long, I suggest changing this circle into a slider. Like this: I think so too. Fixed
  3. 00:07:000 –This vocal is quite important so change this circle: 00:06:800 (1) – into a short slider as well: Great idea. Fixed
  4. 00:07:200 (2) –This is not following the vocals and it sounds a bit off. I suggest doing this: I like it. Fixed
  5. 00:08:000 (3) –Same thing here. Place a circle here: 00:08:000 – and start the slider here: 00:08:200 – Fixed
  6. 00:42:000 –The vocal actually starts here so the slider is starting too early. Try this: Fixed
  7. 00:43:200 (3) –Bad flow. Try something like this instead: Reworked

Easy:
  1. 00:01:999 (3,1) –Perfect this stack. Fixed
  2. 00:13:200 (4) –Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:14:800 (1) – then add new combo here: 00:16:400 (3) – and remove new combo here: 00:17:200 (1) – Yeah, It's for the best. Fixed
  3. 00:22:800 (5) –Add new combo here. Fixed
  4. 00:29:199 (1) –Place this circle somewhere else so it doesn’t overlap. Maybe something like this: I can't find overlap here or I don't understand you
  5. 00:35:600 (5) –Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:37:199 (1) – Fixed
  6. 00:48:400 (5) –Add new combo here. Fixed

Good Luck~! :D
It was wonderful, really wonderful. I hope that one day, I'll learn how, just like you :D I'll never forget what you've done for me. Good luck with everything!
lolia
Here's small suggestions :3

  • General
  1. Preview Time is unsnapped. Resnap to 24700.

  • Easy
  1. 00:11:599 (3) - 00:39:199 (2) - 00:41:199 (5) - Unsnapped.
  2. 00:26:000 (1,2,3) - Swap the rhythm like this. It's better with music.
  3. 00:29:199 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:35:600 (1) - End at 00:36:200 - here for following strong beat. Also optional thing, try to add reverse for rhyrthm reading.
  5. 00:54:799 (1,2,3) - Just 3/2 reverse slider is best imo.

  • Normal
  1. 00:15:600 (5,6,1) - Ugly stack in-playing. Stack them perfectly or unstack (1). (Personally I recommend unsnap.)
  2. 00:19:600 (1,2) - Try to change to 1/1 slider and circle. It would be cool imo.
  3. 00:21:000 (4) - Following vocal is better by using 1/1 slider cuz vocal is stronger than drum sound :p
  4. 00:22:800 (1,2,3,4) - A bit weird cuz finish beat is on 00:23:400 - this reverse. How about this?
  5. 00:54:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personally sudden usage of 1/4 is not good. Change to two 1/1 sliders and circle or something that you want to use :3

  • Hard
  1. 00:06:300 - 00:06:400 - Add circles for triplet?
  2. 00:15:600 (3) - Move to (268, 192) for consistency DS.
  3. 00:25:500 (5) - Delete and consider 00:25:600 (6) - change this to triplet.
  4. 00:33:600 (8) - 1/1 slider is best imo
  5. 00:55:400 (5,6,7) - A bit hard to read in this diff.Change (5) to 1/2 slider.

That's all, gl :3
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo_old

Karia wrote:

Here's small suggestions :3 Not so small :D

  • General
  1. Preview Time is unsnapped. Resnap to 24700. Thanks. Fixed

  • Easy
  1. 00:11:599 (3) - 00:39:199 (2) - 00:41:199 (5) - Unsnapped. Awkward. Fixed
  2. 00:26:000 (1,2,3) - Swap the rhythm like this. It's better with music. Yes, indeed. That is a great idea. Fixed
  3. 00:29:199 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:35:600 (1) - End at 00:36:200 - here for following strong beat. Also optional thing, try to add reverse for rhyrthm reading. Reverse is fine. Fixed
  5. 00:54:799 (1,2,3) - Just 3/2 reverse slider is best imo. I totally agree with you. Fixed

  • Normal
  1. 00:15:600 (5,6,1) - Ugly stack in-playing. Stack them perfectly or unstack (1). (Personally I recommend unsnap.) Yes, It wasn't pretty. Fixed
  2. 00:19:600 (1,2) - Try to change to 1/1 slider and circle. It would be cool imo.
  3. 00:21:000 (4) - Following vocal is better by using 1/1 slider cuz vocal is stronger than drum sound :p Yes, indeed. Fixed
  4. 00:22:800 (1,2,3,4) - A bit weird cuz finish beat is on 00:23:400 - this reverse. How about this? Yeah, 00:23:400 - is good spot for slider. But, I'll do 1/2 slider + 2 circles in accordance with vocal. Anyway, this has been fixed
  5. 00:54:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personally sudden usage of 1/4 is not good. Change to two 1/1 sliders and circle or something that you want to use :3 Probably. Fixed

  • Hard
  1. 00:06:300 - 00:06:400 - Add circles for triplet? I don't understand you. But I think all is good here
  2. 00:15:600 (3) - Move to (268, 192) for consistency DS. Thanks. Fixed
  3. 00:25:500 (5) - Delete and consider 00:25:600 (6) - change this to triplet. I love my version, but anyway thanks for idea. I'll think about it
  4. 00:33:600 (8) - 1/1 slider is best imo Ok. Fixed
  5. 00:55:400 (5,6,7) - A bit hard to read in this diff.Change (5) to 1/2 slider. it's a great idea. Fixed

That's all, gl :3
Thank you so much for helping me. I greatly appreciate you. The best of luck! ^^
Vanillas
Hi~ M4M~

Internet crash down... So I have to edit in my PC and post it on my mobile phone.
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:200 (5,1,2) - This may confuse easy players, I suggest do not put (2) between (5) and (1)
  2. 00:30:800 (3) - move X:31 Y:189 to make it flow? (And don't forget to adjust (4))
  3. 00:37:600 (3) - move to X:39 Y:182 to make it flow?
  4. 00:35:200 (4,1) - blanket
  5. 00:40:800 (4,5) - blanket them will look better.
  6. 00:42:400 (2,3) - blanket
  7. 00:45:200 (1,2) - you can use Ctrl + C/V to make them same and use Ctrl+ H/J to set (2) in right position.
  8. 00:45:200 (1,3) - overlap here not looking good
  9. 00:51:600 (1,1) - in easy diff, notes after spinner should at least have a bar long break, that's to say, if you wanna put notes after this spinner, you should put it after 00:55:400
[Normal]
  1. bpm 150 with SV 1.4 is to high for normal players
  2. 00:03:600 (1,2,3,4) - as vocal here not exactly follow rhythm, I suggest you do not follow vocal here, rhythm here may confuse normal players
  3. 00:13:200 (1) - blanket
  4. 00:16:400 (1,2) - blanket
  5. 00:35:600 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:38:000 start a slider here?
  7. 00:45:000 (1) - start with a circle when there is a red line may be hard for normal players
[Hard]
  1. It's hard diff so you don't need to keep DS same.
  2. 00:11:300 missing note
  3. 00:21:200 (5) - start it at 00:21:100 and end at 00:21:500 ?
  4. 00:24:000 (5) - replace it with a slider?
  5. 00:28:400 (3,4) - both replace with a 1/2 slider?
  6. 00:37:200 (6) - NC (new combo)
  7. 00:46:400 (7) - ^
  8. 00:56:000 (8) - ^
As It's your first beatmap, you really did a good job~ keep on mapping so you'll get ranked maps one day~

good luck to you~~ :)
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo_old

Vanillas wrote:

Hi~ M4M~ Hi^^

Internet crash down... So I have to edit in my PC and post it on my mobile phone. lovely story :)
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:200 (5,1,2) - This may confuse easy players, I suggest do not put (2) between (5) and (1) I do not think about it. Thanks. Fixed
  2. 00:30:800 (3) - move X:31 Y:189 to make it flow? (And don't forget to adjust (4)) Yes, Indeed. Fixed
  3. 00:37:600 (3) - move to X:39 Y:182 to make it flow? Yes, I know nothing about flow. So thanks a lot. Fixed
  4. 00:35:200 (4,1) - blanket Thank you for your attention. Fixed
  5. 00:40:800 (4,5) - blanket them will look better. I agree. Fixed
  6. 00:42:400 (2,3) - blanket Fixed
  7. 00:45:200 (1,2) - you can use Ctrl + C/V to make them same and use Ctrl+ H/J to set (2) in right position. Thanks for advise!
  8. 00:45:200 (1,3) - overlap here not looking good Fixed
  9. 00:51:600 (1,1) - in easy diff, notes after spinner should at least have a bar long break, that's to say, if you wanna put notes after this spinner, you should put it after 00:55:400 I'll think about it. I really want some objects after the spinner


[Normal]
  1. bpm 150 with SV 1.4 is to high for normal players I'll think about it
  2. 00:03:600 (1,2,3,4) - as vocal here not exactly follow rhythm, I suggest you do not follow vocal here, rhythm here may confuse normal players I didn't know any better. =/
  3. 00:13:200 (1) - blanket Fixed
  4. 00:16:400 (1,2) - blanket Fixed
  5. 00:35:600 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
  6. 00:38:000 start a slider here? there is nothing here
  7. 00:45:000 (1) - start with a circle when there is a red line may be hard for normal players I think vocal is strong enough here. And there is no beat and white thick.
[Hard]
  1. It's hard diff so you don't need to keep DS same. I don't want to force things: break DS because it's Hard. Anyway, I'll think about it.
  2. 00:11:300 missing note I don't hear. So play single circle on blue tick is too hard and not necessary. It's following vocals as well
  3. 00:21:200 (5) - start it at 00:21:100 and end at 00:21:500 ? it's too complicated for me
  4. 00:24:000 (5) - replace it with a slider? Fixed
  5. 00:28:400 (3,4) - both replace with a 1/2 slider? Yeah. Great idea. Fixed
  6. 00:37:200 (6) - NC (new combo) Fixed
  7. 00:46:400 (7) - ^Fixed
  8. 00:56:000 (8) - ^ I don't like it
As It's your first beatmap, you really did a good job~ keep on mapping so you'll get ranked maps one day~ Thank you for the kind words. It's very important for me ;)

good luck to you~~ :)
Thanks for helping me out with this map. I owe you big time.
Good luck with everything in Osu ;)
Garden
[Easy]
  1. 00:51:600 (1) - ending this spinner at the red tick where no clear instrument sound or vocal exists makes no sense to me, i'd suggest simply ending it here 00:53:200 - or where the word Shaman starts
[Normal]
  1. 00:10:400 (2,5) - easier diffs should avoid objects getting messy, so u can try rearranging the flow here by changing the direction of 5,thus need some adjustment on the latter objects as well
  2. 00:13:200 (1,2) - vocal here should be snapped this way if u listen carefully http://puu.sh/ppJM7/6882622fed.jpg
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:400 - vocal here should be mapped imo, either add a note here or make this slider 00:10:800 (4) - reverse
  2. 00:28:400 (3,1) - try avoid objects getting too crowded
  3. 00:50:200 - the vocal starts here, so this rhythm pattern http://puu.sh/ppK7C/0488f0b8aa.jpg may work
The reason I only give out some general suggestions instead of more concrete ones is that i believe u can fix lots of stuffs in this mapset urself with more mapping experience and improvements in mapping skills (e.g. blanket). There's no need to stick to only one mapset, map more and you will get improved urself for sure. Have fun mapping and good luck! :)
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo_old

Garden wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:51:600 (1) - ending this spinner at the red tick where no clear instrument sound or vocal exists makes no sense to me, i'd suggest simply ending it here 00:53:200 - or where the word Shaman starts Okay, sure, I thought about it. Fixed
[Normal]
  1. 00:10:400 (2,5) - easier diffs should avoid objects getting messy, so u can try rearranging the flow here by changing the direction of 5,thus need some adjustment on the latter objects as well I didn't notice it. Thanks a lot, fixed
  2. 00:13:200 (1,2) - vocal here should be snapped this way if u listen carefully http://puu.sh/ppJM7/6882622fed.jpg Yes, indeed. Fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:400 - vocal here should be mapped imo, either add a note here or make this slider 00:10:800 (4) - reverse I've been told things like that a lot before. So, yes. Fixed
  2. 00:28:400 (3,1) - try avoid objects getting too crowded I love flow here. Anyway, I'll think about it
  3. 00:50:200 - the vocal starts here, so this rhythm pattern http://puu.sh/ppK7C/0488f0b8aa.jpg may work Great idea. Fixed
The reason I only give out some general suggestions instead of more concrete ones is that i believe u can fix lots of stuffs in this mapset urself with more mapping experience and improvements in mapping skills (e.g. blanket). There's no need to stick to only one mapset, map more and you will get improved urself for sure. Have fun mapping and good luck! :) Thanks a lot for advise! ;)
Thank you so much for helping me. I greatly appreciate you.

Good luck with everything!~ ;)
Frey
request from in-game

  • Easy
  1. 00:22:000 (4) - make it curved then make a blanket of 00:22:000 (4,1) - ?
  2. no hitsound in kiai part? huh...

    Normal
  3. 00:22:800 (1,1) - blanket can be clearly improved
  4. no hitsound in kiai part again

    Hard
  5. 00:23:400 - 00:24:000 - add finish
  6. 00:36:600 (2,3,4) - 00:38:200 (1,2,3) - 00:39:800 (1,2,3) - add clap?
  7. 00:49:000 - add finish

ummm try to improve your hitsound, and try a higher level to make your mapset better. anyway gl
Mei
hi

before talking about the map quality, I think you need a better mp3. The current one is so bad that almost notes in the map sounds off beat for me.

[Easy]
  1. 00:51:600 (1) - the spinner should end at 00:53:200

[Normal]
  1. 00:04:000 (2,3,4) - try this?[/img]http://puu.sh/prPM7/c912b5934c.jpg[/img]
  2. 00:23:400 (1) - remove this NC and give a better blanket
  3. 00:49:000 (2,3) - better blanket

[Hard]
  1. 00:10:800 (4) - extend it to 00:11:200
  2. 00:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - this part sounds weird, i prefer using 4 sliders here
  3. 00:24:000 (5) - add a finish on the slider's head?
  4. 00:26:600 (2) - missed an obivious drum in the middle of slider
  5. 00:35:600 (4,1) - switch NC
good luck
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo_old
Thank you so much guys for your mods!

Mei's mod

Mei wrote:

hi

before talking about the map quality, I think you need a better mp3. The current one is so bad that almost notes in the map sounds off beat for me. If there had been better mp3 quality I would have used it

[Easy]
  1. 00:51:600 (1) - the spinner should end at 00:53:200 Yes, fixed

[Normal]
  1. 00:04:000 (2,3,4) - try this?[/img]http://puu.sh/prPM7/c912b5934c.jpg[/img] I just don't see the value, to be honest
  2. 00:23:400 (1) - remove this NC and give a better blanket Yeah, fixed
  3. 00:49:000 (2,3) - better blanket Yes.

[Hard]
  1. 00:10:800 (4) - extend it to 00:11:200 Thanks, fixed
  2. 00:14:800 (1,2,3,4) - this part sounds weird, i prefer using 4 sliders here it's good, too. Also there are a lot of sliders after this part(00:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) )
  3. 00:24:000 (5) - add a finish on the slider's head? Fixed
  4. 00:26:600 (2) - missed an obivious drum in the middle of slider I follow the vocals here. There is no need for drum sound
  5. 00:35:600 (4,1) - switch NC I don't think so
good luck

Frey's mod

Frey wrote:

request from in-game

  • Easy
  1. 00:22:000 (4) - make it curved then make a blanket of 00:22:000 (4,1) - ? I prefer straight slider here
  2. no hitsound in kiai part? huh...

    Normal
  3. 00:22:800 (1,1) - blanket can be clearly improved Fixed
  4. no hitsound in kiai part again

    Hard
  5. 00:23:400 - 00:24:000 - add finish Fixed
  6. 00:36:600 (2,3,4) - 00:38:200 (1,2,3) - 00:39:800 (1,2,3) - add clap? Fixed
  7. 00:49:000 - add finish Fixed

ummm try to improve your hitsound, and try a higher level to make your mapset better. anyway gl Thank you for advise
Naxess
NM From Queue

omg still got like 5 NMs left on the queue and it's been 3 days xD
rip me lol

[ Easy]
SPOILER
00:02:000 (3,4) - Switching places with these two will emphasize 00:02:000 - better, since you have to hold the repeat rather than just click it.


00:51:600 (1) - Not really sure this spinner fits here because of multiple impacts.
Spinners are often best at longer sounds like from 00:52:800 - , but it won't really fit there either, due to the impacts at 00:54:800 - .
I'd suggest you just remove the spinner and replace it with some notes instead.

Now for hitsounds,

Try finding some custom hitsounds, so you can hitsound more things like these sounds 00:27:200 - .

00:14:800 - Don't think a finish fits here. I think you should remove it.

00:26:800 - Try placing claps on sounds like these
^ 00:28:400 -
^ 00:30:000 -
^ 00:31:600 -
^ 00:34:800 -

00:46:000 - Yeah custom hitsounds for these would probably work really great.

There's also some blankets that could be fixed. If you don't know how to blanket stuff or simply want to learn more about sliders and aesthetics, take a look at this thread.

[ Normal]
SPOILER
00:22:800 (1,2) - I mentioned blankets right at the end of the last difficulty. This is not correctly blanketed, for example.
Before:

After: (this is a correct blanket)

Just remember to check DS (Distance Spacing) after changing the sliders as well.
^ 00:49:000 (2,3) -
^ 00:01:400 (2,3) -
^ 00:03:600 (1,3) -
^ 00:06:800 (1,3,5) -
^ 00:35:600 (1,2) -
^ 00:36:200 (2,3) -
... I think you get the idea.
Use the approach circle to line it up properly is a good tip.
00:10:800 (3,4) - this is done correctly, for example.
Don't forget to check easy and hard as well, since I've skipped pointing them out there.


00:17:800 - Feel like this part could be done like this for better rhythm:


00:27:200 - Could make this a slider ending on the downbeat (large white tick) to cover the last sound that this pattern is following.
Like 00:30:400 (4) - is doing, for example.

Rhythm can get confusing at times, but otherwise I think it's fine.

[ Hard]
SPOILER
00:05:200 (7,8) - Switch places to cover vocal better.

00:07:100 - There's some sounds on blue ticks that you're missing...
This one could be mapped like this, for example:

^ 00:10:300 -

00:17:800 - Could be done like this to cover vocal better:

Or even better like this:


00:20:700 - Again, to cover vocal better I'd have done it like this, using stacks:


00:22:000 (8) - The control points in this slider could use some cleaning xD


00:25:500 - There's no sound here, so remove 00:25:500 (5) - .
Could place something at 00:25:700 - instead, since there's a sound, for example make it a 1/4 slider repeating twice.


00:26:000 (1,2,3) - Not going to point out any other blankets, but I mean you should probably take a look at this difficulty as well

00:41:900 - Add another circle, I still hear a sound here.

00:50:200 - Don't really hear anything where this slider starts, vocal begins somewhere at 00:50:263 - .

00:51:600 (1) - I guess the spinner works in this case because it covers the whole set of vocals going on here, but I still don't think it works in the easy difficulty...

Btw, you're covering drums almost perfectly, though vocals have some missed emphasization, but it should be fixed with my suggestions probably.

[ General]
SPOILER
I think it's a bit strange that both the artist and the source are "Shaman King", but I mean, if it's correct then it's fine xD

Think the rest looks fine.
But consider getting some custom hitsounds.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo_old

Naxess wrote:

NM From Queue

omg still got like 5 NMs left on the queue and it's been 3 days xD
rip me lol

[ Easy]
SPOILER
00:02:000 (3,4) - Switching places with these two will emphasize 00:02:000 - better, since you have to hold the repeat rather than just click it. I agree. Fixed


00:51:600 (1) - Not really sure this spinner fits here because of multiple impacts.
Spinners are often best at longer sounds like from 00:52:800 - , but it won't really fit there either, due to the impacts at 00:54:800 - .
I'd suggest you just remove the spinner and replace it with some notes instead. I don't know what to do with this spinner. I'll ask around

Now for hitsounds,

Try finding some custom hitsounds, so you can hitsound more things like these sounds 00:27:200 - .

00:14:800 - Don't think a finish fits here. I think you should remove it.

00:26:800 - Try placing claps on sounds like these
^ 00:28:400 -
^ 00:30:000 -
^ 00:31:600 -
^ 00:34:800 -

00:46:000 - Yeah custom hitsounds for these would probably work really great. Yes, I tried to perfect all hitsounds

There's also some blankets that could be fixed. If you don't know how to blanket stuff or simply want to learn more about sliders and aesthetics, take a look at this thread.

[ Normal]
SPOILER
00:22:800 (1,2) - I mentioned blankets right at the end of the last difficulty. This is not correctly blanketed, for example.
Before:

After: (this is a correct blanket)

Just remember to check DS (Distance Spacing) after changing the sliders as well.
^ 00:49:000 (2,3) -
^ 00:01:400 (2,3) -
^ 00:03:600 (1,3) -
^ 00:06:800 (1,3,5) - Fixed(I hope)
^ 00:35:600 (1,2) -
^ 00:36:200 (2,3) -
... I think you get the idea.
Use the approach circle to line it up properly is a good tip.
00:10:800 (3,4) - this is done correctly, for example.
Don't forget to check easy and hard as well, since I've skipped pointing them out there.


00:17:800 - Feel like this part could be done like this for better rhythm: I think my way is better due to the Russian vocals


00:27:200 - Could make this a slider ending on the downbeat (large white tick) to cover the last sound that this pattern is following.
Like 00:30:400 (4) - is doing, for example. Yes, reworked

Rhythm can get confusing at times, but otherwise I think it's fine.

[ Hard]
SPOILER
00:05:200 (7,8) - Switch places to cover vocal better.

00:07:100 - There's some sounds on blue ticks that you're missing... Yes, indeed. Fixed
This one could be mapped like this, for example:

^ 00:10:300 -

00:17:800 - Could be done like this to cover vocal better: I can't tell the difference, but I like my way

Or even better like this:


00:20:700 - Again, to cover vocal better I'd have done it like this, using stacks:


00:22:000 (8) - The control points in this slider could use some cleaning xD =D


00:25:500 - There's no sound here, so remove 00:25:500 (5) - .
Could place something at 00:25:700 - instead, since there's a sound, for example make it a 1/4 slider repeating twice. Thanks. Fixed


00:26:000 (1,2,3) - Not going to point out any other blankets, but I mean you should probably take a look at this difficulty as well

00:41:900 - Add another circle, I still hear a sound here. Ok, I added

00:50:200 - Don't really hear anything where this slider starts, vocal begins somewhere at 00:50:263 - .Remapped

00:51:600 (1) - I guess the spinner works in this case because it covers the whole set of vocals going on here, but I still don't think it works in the easy difficulty...

Btw, you're covering drums almost perfectly, though vocals have some missed emphasization, but it should be fixed with my suggestions probably.

[ General]
SPOILER
I think it's a bit strange that both the artist and the source are "Shaman King", but I mean, if it's correct then it's fine xD I don't care. It has taken me a long time to find the source, but to no avail. I think it's fine
Think the rest looks fine.
But consider getting some custom hitsounds.

Good luck!
Thanks a lot for your mod. it was cool ;)
Rixilia
For the M4M

Easy Diff
I think it's already good! :D
Good Job :)

Normal Diff
00:05:200 (5,6) - How about like this? :?:
Move the 00:05:800 (7) - to the left side abit


00:24:000 (4) - How about a spinner from there until 00:25:600 (1) -

Hard Diff
00:01:000 (3) - The note is a bit long so how about a slider until 00:01:200 (4) - :?:
00:49:600 (5) - Make the slider longer until 00:50:000 (6) -

Good Luck :)
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo_old

- AzuNya - wrote:

For the M4M

Easy Diff
I think it's already good! :D
Good Job :)

Normal Diff
00:05:200 (5,6) - How about like this? :?:
Move the 00:05:800 (7) - to the left side abit Such variant is possible but I prefer own option. I think it sounds better


00:24:000 (4) - How about a spinner from there until 00:25:600 (1) - There is nothing here, and i don't want to abuse spinner

Hard Diff
00:01:000 (3) - The note is a bit long so how about a slider until 00:01:200 (4) - :?: I do not think it is necessary. I like circle in this case
00:49:600 (5) - Make the slider longer until 00:50:000 (6) - In accordance with vocals i think my way is better

Good Luck :)
Thanks a lot for mod ;)
Lully
Froм мy мoddιɴɢ qυeυe.

easy
00:03:600 (1) - make the last anchor point a red one too. for better looks
00:10:000 (1) - blanket error
00:35:200 (4) - ^
00:40:800 (4) - ^
00:54:800 (1) - maybe just 3 circles?

normal
00:07:400 (3) - eww. that looks.. ew. not so much overlap pls..
00:36:200 (2) - blanket error
00:39:800 (4) - nc
00:43:200 (3) - blanket error
00:45:800 (3) - ^
-NanoRIPE-
Hi ~ NM from my q

[General]
looks fine ~

[Easy]
00:03:600 (1) - try to make the slider shape blanket with 00:03:200 (4) ~

[Normal]
00:12:000 (6) - move to x:192 y:72 for better placement
00:16:600 (1) - remove finish
00:28:400 (2) - move to :x188 y:176 for better flow and then make curve slider at 00:28:800 (3)
00:35:600 (1,4,5) - bad overlap
00:55:400 (2) - move to x:240 y:216 for better flow

[Hard]
00:12:200 (2,3) - imperfect blanket
00:20:500 (3,5) - bad overlap
00:25:000 (3,5) - too close ~
00:28:400 (3,1) - bad overlap
00:45:200 (3,5) - ^

GL ~ sorry for short mod ~
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo_old
Thank you so much guys for your mods!

CookieKivi wrote:

Froм мy мoddιɴɢ qυeυe.

easy
00:03:600 (1) - make the last anchor point a red one too. for better looks I don't see any point in changing
00:10:000 (1) - blanket error fixed
00:35:200 (4) - ^ fixed
00:40:800 (4) - ^ fixed
00:54:800 (1) - maybe just 3 circles?

normal
00:07:400 (3) - eww. that looks.. ew. not so much overlap pls..
00:36:200 (2) - blanket error fixed
00:39:800 (4) - nc
00:43:200 (3) - blanket error fixed
00:45:800 (3) - ^
-NanoRIPE-

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~ NM from my q

[General]
looks fine ~

[Easy]
00:03:600 (1) - try to make the slider shape blanket with 00:03:200 (4) ~ I don't see any point in changing

[Normal]
00:12:000 (6) - move to x:192 y:72 for better placement
00:16:600 (1) - remove finish fixed
00:28:400 (2) - move to :x188 y:176 for better flow and then make curve slider at 00:28:800 (3)
00:35:600 (1,4,5) - bad overlap fixed
00:55:400 (2) - move to x:240 y:216 for better flow fixed

[Hard]
00:12:200 (2,3) - imperfect blanket
00:20:500 (3,5) - bad overlap
00:25:000 (3,5) - too close ~
00:28:400 (3,1) - bad overlap
00:45:200 (3,5) - ^
Fixed
GL ~ sorry for short mod ~
riffy
Российская метадата ужасна, don't do Russian metadata, kids.

[General]
  1. Тут можно только довериться аплоадерам видео на ютуб, но как-то так
    1. Artist: Александр Комлев, Елена Чебатуркина - исполнители.
    2. Romanised artist Alexandr Komlev, Elena Chebaturkina
    3. Title: Shaman King Theme adding (Rissian Version) is totally up to you, since Russian producers did not care to provide any obtainable metadata whatsoever.
    4. По желанию в теги Jetix, имена пары основных персонажей, если хочешь упростить процесс поиска карты людям.
[Easy]
  1. C такими 00:24:400 - пробелами в ритме HP Drain нужно ставить на двойку.
  2. 00:00:400 (1,2,3) - совсем ударные выпали, давай ставить слайдеры и серклы туда, где действительно слыщны биты. Как-то так?
  3. 00:03:600 (1) - а давай заменим слайдером и поставим все на вокалы? Так как-то
  4. 00:06:800 (1) - и еще немного снаппинга по вокалам. как-то так вот
  5. 00:38:000 (4) - ударные посреди слайдера считают, что ты выбираешь не самый удачный ритм. пример
  6. 00:38:800 (1,2) - и опять слайдеры немного мимо ударных, как-то вот так попробуй.
  7. 00:42:000 (1,2) - как-то очень много всего я советую по вокалам ставить, example

    После всех мучений с вокалами все оформить аккуратненько и будет очень неплохо.
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:800 (1,3) - а давай ммы тут обводку приведем в порядок? Мелочь, но отвлекает неприятно.
  2. 00:13:800 (2) - продли до белого тика, там лучше оставлять 1/1 промежутки между битами, чтобы ритм было проще ловить и воспринимать.
  3. 00:43:200 (3) - вокалы отчетливо дробят слова, лучше поставить два серла, т.к. два отдельных клика лучше прозвучат в этом контексте.
  4. 00:46:000 (4) - не попадает на вокалы. Совсем не попадает. Давай что-то придумаем с ним, например передвинем середину слайдера на позже или раньше.
  5. 00:48:400 (1,2,3) - а давай все отзеркалим в другую сторону, чтобы левую половину поля не перегружать визуально. Еще можно обводку до ума довести. А так все круто.

    Неплохо.
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:200 (7) - не идет в синхрон с вокалами, попробуй послушать в замедленном темпе и росмотреть, как можно лучше синхронизтровать слайдеры и вокалы.
    Подсказка: лучше начинать на сильных битах, а заканчивать на слабых. Если сделать наоборот, то игрок не сможет кликнуть на сильном бите и останется дискомфорт.
  2. 00:10:300 (2,3) - как-то вокалы в кашу сливаются и слайдер там звучит слабо.Может попробуем что-то такое?
  3. 00:25:400 (5,6) - слайдер н езвучит из-за того, что на хвосте у него оказывается сильный бит, который хотелось бы кликнуть. Давай все серклами заменим?
  4. 00:31:200 - а вот тут отдельная строчка песни, сюда новый кружлк нужно, а не хвост старого слайдера.
  5. 00:41:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - как-то перебор для харда. Давай что-то такое попробуем.

    Немного неаккуратно, в остальном все окей.
Looks fairly decent for a beginner mapper, could use a few mods but it is definitely impressive.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo_old

Bakari wrote:

Российская метадата ужасна, don't do Russian metadata, kids.

[General]
  1. Тут можно только довериться аплоадерам видео на ютуб, но как-то так
    1. Artist: Александр Комлев, Елена Чебатуркина - исполнители.
    2. Romanised artist Alexandr Komlev, Elena Chebaturkina
    3. Title: Shaman King Theme adding (Rissian Version) is totally up to you, since Russian producers did not care to provide any obtainable metadata whatsoever.
    4. По желанию в теги Jetix, имена пары основных персонажей, если хочешь упростить процесс поиска карты людям.
      Спасибо!
[Easy]
  1. C такими 00:24:400 - пробелами в ритме HP Drain нужно ставить на двойку. Да, логично
  2. 00:00:400 (1,2,3) - совсем ударные выпали, давай ставить слайдеры и серклы туда, где действительно слыщны биты. Как-то так? Да, мне нравится
  3. 00:03:600 (1) - а давай заменим слайдером и поставим все на вокалы? Так как-то Да, можно длинный слайдер на 2 разделить
  4. 00:06:800 (1) - и еще немного снаппинга по вокалам. как-то так вот А смысл в этом обратном слайдере? Там сейчас и так хорошо за вокалом следует.
  5. 00:38:000 (4) - ударные посреди слайдера считают, что ты выбираешь не самый удачный ритм. пример Исправлено
  6. 00:38:800 (1,2) - и опять слайдеры немного мимо ударных, как-то вот так попробуй. Да, хорошо
  7. 00:42:000 (1,2) - как-то очень много всего я советую по вокалам ставить, example Ладно, так действительно лучше

    После всех мучений с вокалами все оформить аккуратненько и будет очень неплохо.
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:800 (1,3) - а давай ммы тут обводку приведем в порядок? Мелочь, но отвлекает неприятно. Окей, вроде сейчас лучше стало
  2. 00:13:800 (2) - продли до белого тика, там лучше оставлять 1/1 промежутки между битами, чтобы ритм было проще ловить и воспринимать. Да, действительно
  3. 00:43:200 (3) - вокалы отчетливо дробят слова, лучше поставить два серла, т.к. два отдельных клика лучше прозвучат в этом контексте. Идея понятна, но немного по-другому было исправлено
  4. 00:46:000 (4) - не попадает на вокалы. Совсем не попадает. Давай что-то придумаем с ним, например передвинем середину слайдера на позже или раньше. Весь смысл в этом реверсе был в том, что он на звонкую ноту попадал, но, видимо, не очень удачная затея была. Похожим методом, что и в предыдущем пункте исправлено
  5. 00:48:400 (1,2,3) - а давай все отзеркалим в другую сторону, чтобы левую половину поля не перегружать визуально. Еще можно обводку до ума довести. А так все круто. Начиная с 00:43:200 - много чего пришлось поправлять, поэтому композицию этих трёх слайдеров было проще заново придумать с учетом пожеланий

    Неплохо.
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:200 (7) - не идет в синхрон с вокалами, попробуй послушать в замедленном темпе и росмотреть, как можно лучше синхронизтровать слайдеры и вокалы.
    Подсказка: лучше начинать на сильных битах, а заканчивать на слабых. Если сделать наоборот, то игрок не сможет кликнуть на сильном бите и останется дискомфорт. Ну вроде задача решена =)
  2. 00:10:300 (2,3) - как-то вокалы в кашу сливаются и слайдер там звучит слабо.Может попробуем что-то такое? Да, как на картинке получше будет
  3. 00:25:400 (5,6) - слайдер н езвучит из-за того, что на хвосте у него оказывается сильный бит, который хотелось бы кликнуть. Давай все серклами заменим? Заменено, конечно, но посложней играть стало
  4. 00:31:200 - а вот тут отдельная строчка песни, сюда новый кружлк нужно, а не хвост старого слайдера. Хорошо, начну новую строчку с кружка
  5. 00:41:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - как-то перебор для харда. Давай что-то такое попробуем. Но ведь два этих повторяющихся слайдера тоже как-то слишком. Для такой напряженной инструментальной части такой бесславный конец угнетает. Вместо второй части стрима поставлен 1 такой слайдер. Думаю, должно понравиться: и не шокирует, и вроде даже играть интересно
    Немного неаккуратно, в остальном все окей.
Looks fairly decent for a beginner mapper, could use a few mods but it is definitely impressive. Thank you for the kind words, Bakari

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Best of luck!
Thanks for helping me out with this map. I am very grateful to you ^^
teko8
Finally got some time to mod so let's do this (as per your PM request). Sorry for the delay. ='(

Pretty short mod overall (only 3 diffs and multiple mods already done to it).


General Modding

Easy:

00:51:600 (1) - This spinner is really short for an easy difficulty (auto gets 4k). While the guidelines for easy do say to allot space between the spinner and the notes before and after, I still feel this needs to be slightly longer.

Normal:

Careful on SV. Seems a little fast at parts though you might be able to get away with it.
00:13:200 (1) - Remove hitsound from the end of this slider.
00:13:800 (2) - Add finish hitsound to the start of this slider (and maybe the end as well).
00:49:600 (3) - Make the end of this silent.
00:54:800 (1) - Add clap hitsound to the end of this slider.
00:55:400 (2) - Add clap hitsound to the end of this slider.

Hard:

00:12:400 (3) - Add Finish hitsound to the start of this slider.
00:24:000 (5) - Extend to next white tick and make the end silent. Sounds like the note should continue a little longer in the song. Keep the blanket with 00:23:800 (4) - of course.
00:25:400 (5,6,7) - Add different hitsounding to these since they are emphasized in the song.
00:31:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Wasn't entirely sure what part of the song this combo was mapped to.
00:37:400 - Add note here(?)
00:41:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hitsounding to match spots like 00:39:800 (1,2,3) - .
00:50:300 (1) - Move to 00:50:200 - . Fix spacing with next note.
00:55:400 (5) - Make the end silent.
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Object placement looks good to me for the most part. Hitsounding is entirely dependent on how the mapper perceives the map so most of these are just suggestions due to what I felt like fit.

Good luck on the rest~
Mafumafu
M4M from my queue!
Since your map is quite short, you do not have to mod all the diffs in my map!

[Easy]
00:00:400 (1,2) - Two 3/2 reverse sliders give more consistency in rhythm here: https://puu.sh/rSM72/bdc1fda3ed.png
00:11:600 (3) - This shape looks quite meh. If you want to create a wave slider, make it like this: https://puu.sh/rSMbf/484aed907d.png
00:18:400 (4,5) - Blanket needs to be improved.
00:20:800 (2,3) - ^
00:35:600 (1,3) - Avoid this overlap: https://puu.sh/rSMeZ/b8431b6d23.png
00:51:600 (1) - This spinner plays quite weird and it gives unnecessary breaks before and after it. Just replace it with normal notes.

[Normal]
00:11:600 (5,6) - Why not make them symmetric in position?
00:48:400 (1,3) - Blanket issue here as well.

[Hard]
00:06:800 (1,2,3) - 00:03:600 (1,2,3) - they sounds similar in rhythm, so how you place your notes should be consistent as well.
00:11:600 (1,2,3) - symmetry works better here. https://puu.sh/rSMx9/adabbf6c49.png
00:16:400 (1,2,3) - If you want to make such patterns, use rotate function (Ctrl+Shift+R) and rotate them 120 degree clockwise or anticlockwise.
00:32:400 (4,5,6) - There is a long vocal, using singletaps like this is not a nice idea. Try to use sliders.
00:45:000 (1,2) - 1/4 is really too vague here. It could be considered unsnap potentially. So just do not use the triplet.
00:50:300 (1) - Should be 1/4 earlier I guess?

Could have some improvements in rhythm and pattern!
Good luck!
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo_old

Regraz wrote:

M4M from my queue!
Since your map is quite short, you do not have to mod all the diffs in my map!

[Easy]
00:00:400 (1,2) - Two 3/2 reverse sliders give more consistency in rhythm here: https://puu.sh/rSM72/bdc1fda3ed.png Yeah, Indeed
00:11:600 (3) - This shape looks quite meh. If you want to create a wave slider, make it like this: https://puu.sh/rSMbf/484aed907d.png // I got it
00:18:400 (4,5) - Blanket needs to be improved.
00:20:800 (2,3) - ^ // fixed
00:35:600 (1,3) - Avoid this overlap: https://puu.sh/rSMeZ/b8431b6d23.png // done
00:51:600 (1) - This spinner plays quite weird and it gives unnecessary breaks before and after it. Just replace it with normal notes. // replaced

[Normal]
00:11:600 (5,6) - Why not make them symmetric in position? // Come on, It looks interesting ( I hope )
00:48:400 (1,3) - Blanket issue here as well. // fixed
[Hard]
00:06:800 (1,2,3) - 00:03:600 (1,2,3) - they sounds similar in rhythm, so how you place your notes should be consistent as well. // corrected
00:11:600 (1,2,3) - symmetry works better here. https://puu.sh/rSMx9/adabbf6c49.png // fixed
00:16:400 (1,2,3) - If you want to make such patterns, use rotate function (Ctrl+Shift+R) and rotate them 120 degree clockwise or anticlockwise. // Thank you
00:32:400 (4,5,6) - There is a long vocal, using singletaps like this is not a nice idea. Try to use sliders. // I used long slider instead
00:45:000 (1,2) - 1/4 is really too vague here. It could be considered unsnap potentially. So just do not use the triplet. //Ok, I deleted 1/4
00:50:300 (1) - Should be 1/4 earlier I guess? // Sorry, I don't quite follow you.

Could have some improvements in rhythm and pattern! // I revised several patterns after a long interruption. Therefore, I think mapset became a little better
Good luck!
thank you! 💗
Lally
#Queue

[Hard]
  1. 00:11:600 (1,2,3) - try to create a circular pattern with the sliders and the circle in the middle - and ctrl+g 00:12:400 (3) - will be better
  2. 00:24:000 (5) - try something like that :
  3. 00:25:800 - add a circle here is totally missing
  4. 00:32:400 (4,7) - try to not overlap them
  5. 00:33:000 (5) - use a curved slider to improve the flow
[Normal]
  1. 00:02:000 (3) - with ctrl+g would be soooooo much better ♥
  2. 00:42:800 (2) - clap missing on head
[Easy]
  1. 00:24:700 - useless timeline
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo_old

Lally wrote:

#Queue

[Hard]
  1. 00:11:600 (1,2,3) - try to create a circular pattern with the sliders and the circle in the middle - and ctrl+g 00:12:400 (3) - will be better // I like the symmetry of this pattern.
  2. 00:24:000 (5) - try something like that : Yes, it's better
  3. 00:25:800 - add a circle here is totally missing // Because there's nothing here. I'm sure
  4. 00:32:400 (4,7) - try to not overlap them // it's acceptable, furthermore unnoticed during gameplay
  5. 00:33:000 (5) - use a curved slider to improve the flow // curved slider probably won't make any difference in this case, but I think it will look bad without blanket, so I prefer straight
[Normal]
  1. 00:02:000 (3) - with ctrl+g would be soooooo much better ♥ // it's for sure. Changed
  2. 00:42:800 (2) - clap missing on head // Yes
[Easy]
  1. 00:24:700 - useless timeline// this is preview timeline xd
Thank you! ✓
Lami
General

i think you need to try more use hitsound.

Easy

00:21:600 (3,4) - DS
00:45:200 (1,3) - avoid overlapped

Normal

easy - normal gap is too big as high sv.
1.4 pretty fast, compare with 0.9
almost 0.9 (x1.6) = 1.4

overall, i think this design is similar with advanced(Normal+) diff.


00:22:000 (6,1) - can be more fluid flow
00:28:000 (1) - NC x

Hard


00:04:200 (3,4,5) - plz consistent ds
00:07:100 (2) - not fit on music, if you intend on vocal
00:10:400 (2,3,4) - ^
00:35:200 (3,4) - weird flow. (4) place more downside
00:28:000 (1,2,3) - overall no jump in this diff.
from here, i doubt whether this unique jump is worth thing for making jump here.
00:25:900 - add note

hmm... recommend to read this when you have time. t/465718
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo_old

Lami wrote:

General

i think you need to try more use hitsound. // I added a bit more hitsounds.

Easy // fixed

00:21:600 (3,4) - DS
00:45:200 (1,3) - avoid overlapped

Normal

easy - normal gap is too big as high sv.
1.4 pretty fast, compare with 0.9
almost 0.9 (x1.6) = 1.4

overall, i think this design is similar with advanced(Normal+) diff. // Thanks, I'll think and ask around about it


00:22:000 (6,1) - can be more fluid flow // fixed
00:28:000 (1) - NC x // In accordance with the strong vocals I am inclined to add NC

Hard


00:04:200 (3,4,5) - plz consistent ds // fixed
00:07:100 (2) - not fit on music, if you intend on vocal // I've been thinking about it. The problem is, the drums sound too loud here and it is impossible to ignore, therefore, I believe that this is the best option
00:10:400 (2,3,4) - ^
00:35:200 (3,4) - weird flow. (4) place more downside // fixed
00:28:000 (1,2,3) - overall no jump in this diff.
from here, i doubt whether this unique jump is worth thing for making jump here. // It's worth it to add jump here. However, now it is not unique - I added a few more
00:25:900 - add note // I'll look into it

hmm... recommend to read this when you have time. t/465718 // Thanks for the useful link
Thank you
Shmiklak
From my queue
Выбрал тебя только ибо это русский трек

[General]
  1. Найди мп3 без этой хуйни в конце 00:53:200 - Да, да, я имею ввиду "Шаман кинг"


[Easy]
  1. 00:16:400 - А зачем тут клап то? Тут его нет 00:19:600 - Да и вообще где либо. Давай избавимся от него


[Normal]
  1. Лишний нк тут 00:28:000 (1) - Везде делал НК на 3 даунбит, а тут на второй, ну ты понял
  2. честно хз на счет этого 00:51:600 (1,1) - Расстояние между объектами сомнительное немного. Спроси у КАТов или БНов пожалуйста.


[Hard]
  1. блять что за упоротые НК. То ты юзаешь их каждый даунбит, то через даунбит. Если смотреть на прошлые 4 такта, то тут не должно быть НК 00:11:600 (1) - либо же смотря на то что дальше то тут 00:05:200 (7) и тут 00:08:200 (5) - должны быть НК. Вот запутаться можно же. Если ты убрал первый НК то убери его и тут 00:14:800 -
    Дальше идет такая же хуетень. Разберись с ними пожалуйста, они портят все общее впечатление о мапсете. По первым двум диффам я даже хотел дать кудосу стар, но теперь уже после харда не хочется совсем.
  2. 00:37:500 (7) - укороти до апбита, что бы музыке следить, да и дальше у тебя в таком месте как раз таки 1/4 слайдер.

В целом, тут модить нечего, но есть не критичные моменты в постановке объектов которые стоит исправить. Указать их я не могу, ибо не люблю так модить. Единственное что могу сказать это моменты типо таких в Easy:
00:16:400 (1,3) - Ты явно пытался сделать их одинаковыми, однако если мы их наложим друг на друга увидим, что они абсолютно разные. Для того что бы сделать их одинаковыми можно же просто копировать объекты. Кстати тоже самое тут 00:07:200 (2,3) -

Удачи!
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo_old
Привет! ^^

M a r v o l l o wrote:

[General]
  1. Найди мп3 без этой хуйни в конце 00:53:200 - Да, да, я имею ввиду "Шаман кинг"
Все записи этой песни, так или иначе, всего лишь вырезаны напрямую из серий для телетрансляций десятилетней давности, поэтому качество, к сожалению, оставляет желать лучшего.

Всё остальное исправлено.

Спасибо!
Shmiklak
Дал звезду за старания, а также что бы была мотивация работать над картой дальше :3
Lumael
BOLD means: highly questionable/unrankeable
not BOLD means: it's only a suggestion/comment, whether you may or may not apply

[General]

  1. Is the background related to "Shaman King"? I would recommend you to find a wallpaper related to.
  2. I recommend you to find a better mp3, the current has too low quality, sounds pretty bad to be honest.
[Easy]

  1. 00:05:400 (3,1) - This kind of gap is not recommended on easy difficulties, they can mislead into a 1/1 gap and make the player break their combo.
  2. Watch out for the rhythm you're following, I noticed that you went for the vocals sometimes, using polarity. Example: 00:06:800 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - But due to the more complex rhythm there, we have something a bit unsync, sounds weird.
  3. I'd recommend using a spinner like the Normal difficulty for consistency.

    Not a bad difficulty, the rhythm is an issue sometimes, but it's okay, rankeable.
[Normal]

  1. Let me tell you the difference between following the vocals here 00:11:000 (4) - and here 00:13:800 (2) - . In the second one, you have the drums following sync with the vocals, making it a good pattern to use polarity, but in the first one, we don't have any drums supporting, so it feels just empty, it's like clicking nothing, since the drums are in evidence there.
  2. Watch out for dense parts. 00:41:400 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This has too many 1/2 rhythms, which is not recommended for a normal, since the previous difficulty didn't have any 1/2 rhythm (only reverse arrows), So you should remove some of the 1/2 stuff to even the spread.

    Rhythm has some problems (mentioned) but it's definetly better here, good flow as well. Nice.
[Hard]

  1. 00:03:600 (1,2,3) - Silence the tails, in every pattern of this kind. Or use this rhythm instead. Which in my opinion work much better.

    There are a lot of problems with rhythm here, I recommend you follow the drums through the entire song, it's not recommended to get the vocals when the drums are not to present, and when they're you're just undermapping them, which I think is not a good idea.
That's it!

Good Luck.
Seijiro
5 mod project

Hard:
- 00:03:000 (4,5,6) - how about moving these to around x265 y361 to make 00:02:600 (3,4,5,6,1) - a better triangle?
- 00:10:800 - why is this strong beat not clickable, while 00:10:600 - is? Imo you should really change the rhythm for 00:10:400 (2,3,4,5) - , because emphasis is a bit screwed up. Try something similar
- 00:13:200 (1,2,3,4) - I wonder what's the structure behind this pattern... I mean... it's fine but it tells me nothing .-. Why is it like that? Why are those sliders placed that way and curved like that?
- 00:17:600 (4,5) - I'd rather not ignore vocals here, really... try something similar
- 00:20:000 (2,3,4,5) - you're ignoring vocals again... I'm not gonna suggest anything here, but please mind that vocals land on red ticks and you should be placing slider on those red ticks
- 00:22:800 (1,2,3,4) - structure was cool for these, but once we consider 00:22:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - I notice how 5 is completely out of place. What is its purpose to be like that there?
- 00:24:800 (2,3) - considering what importance vocals have in this song, you should map these with a slider instead
- 00:28:000 (4,5,6,7) - structure again. The overlap between 00:28:200 (5,7) - is a bit ugly and I can't relate the overlap to anything else in the map, moreover 00:28:400 (6,7) - are not even the same slider, which kinda looks ugly
- 00:31:000 - rhythm is a bit poor here. How about 00:31:000 - circle and 00:31:200 - 1/2 slider? It's the Hard after all...

Actually... this mapset is not ready at all for a BN check yet, why did you ask me? D:
The map looks too unpolished yet for me to even set an icon.

Look for more mods and improve this map then feel free to call me for a real check.
Sorry if I can't finish the mod, but my project is for BN checks, not mods :/ (check my userpage's glossary if you don't understand what I mean)
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