1. Найди название сонга, т.к. текущее явно неверное.
2. В изике нет видео, пофикси.
3. Отключи вайдскрин саппорт, он находится там же, где и отсчет, а нужео только для сторибордов.
4. 00:48:800 (3) - / 00:49:600 (5) - сюда финиш, потому что сильный звук, такой же как и тут 00:48:200 (1) - , поэтому стоит выделить финишом.

1. Выдели все объекты на карте (ctrl+A) и посмотри, они все находятся по центру, а углы пустые, такое тоже не очень хорошо, старайся в следующих мапах углы мапать тоже.
2. 00:02:400 (4,2) - когда в изике один объект наезжает на другой — это не очень хорошо выглять из-за низкого АР и CS, следует избегать таких оверлапов. У тебя вся диффа в них, поправь.
   Кстати, даже такие оверлапы смотрятся ужасно 00:05:200 (3,2) - , поверь.
3. 00:10:399 (2) - ну тут реверс просится.
4. 00:14:400 - вообще, очень странно, что ты пропустил половину вокальной части тут, поставь серкл, что ли, туда или немного вот этот слайдер продли 00:13:200 (4) - , буквально до красного тика, чтобы заканчивался на белом.
5. 00:13:200 (4,1,3) - снова некрасиво.
6. 00:16:400 (3,1,2) - вот например тут, ты мог слайдер(2) расположить не справа, а слева
   
   пример

   
   А еще, если так сделаешь, то переход 00:18:800 (4,1) - будет намного лучше.
7. 00:22:800 (1) - ну его лучше горизонтально, да. Кстати, тут на красном тике очень сильный звук, вот тут 00:23:400 - , а ты его игноришь, в силу вокала, что ли? Сделай тогда слайдер таким, даже по вокалу подходит.
   
   таким

   
8. 00:37:599 (2,3) - бланкет можно поровнее поставить.
9. 00:48:399 (1,2) - то же самое с красным тиком, он тут сильный.

1. 00:05:800 (6) - / 00:09:200 (5) - / 00:12:400 (6) - / 00:13:600 (2) - странно, что ты пропускаешь вокалы тут, можно продлить и будет выглядеть ну намного лучше.
2. 00:17:600 (4,5) - такое можно и раздвинуть, получше будет.
3. 00:36:400 (1) - я не слышу звука на белом тике.
4. 00:39:600 (1) - ненужное НК.
5. 00:50:300 (6) - ну такое делать в нормале нельзя, 1/4 кикслайдеры на 150 бпм даже в хардах не всегда делают.
6. Опять же не очень аккуратно, можно избавиться от оверлапов.

1. 00:10:400 (2,3,4) - один единственный спейсед трипл на всю карту, давай-ка удали его. Смысл таких триплов в том, что нужно делать не один на всю диффу, а последовательно, чтобы игрок не был удивлен спейсед триплом.
2. 00:32:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - мне не нравится такой паттерн, добавь-ка слайдеров, а то тяжеловато выходит.
3. 00:41:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - тяжело очень по сравнению с нормалом, сделай стрим и вместо последних трех нот 1/4 реверс. И спейсинг у стрима меньше делай, и не таким загнутым его, чтобы полегче было.
4. 00:50:200 (1) - а тут звука-то нет.

Lily Bread wrote:

light mod as request

[Easy]
00:07:999 (3) - unsnapped Thanks. Fixed

[Normal]
check DS issues. all objects should DS in Normal diff. Fixed
http://puu.sh/pmk20/df62bf5010.png

00:01:400 (2) - 1/4 reverse slider is not good in Normal diff. try this.
http://puu.sh/pmk6G/25b5ea4944.jpg
(the cursor is at - 00:01:400 -)
we can't map all the sound in music in Easy and Normal diff. so we should ignore some music and try to use long slider to express them sometimes.

Yeah, I thought about it. I replaced this part

[Hard]
00:03:400 - you missed a drum here. use a circle or make - 00:03:200 (6) - into a 1/2 slider. It's right. Fixed

good luck

-Nya- wrote:

Heya~ M4M! Hi^^

General:

1. The BG has to be 1366X768. It’s an easy fix. Fixed

Hard:

1. 00:02:600 (3,1) –Try to avoid this overlap by blanketing 00:03:200 (6,1) – Fixed
   
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2. 00:05:200 (7) –I think you can break this up into more notes, just to make it more challenging. Maybe try this: Good idea. Fixed
   
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3. 00:09:200 (8) –I suggest turning this circle into a slider to catch that long vocal. Like this: Fixed
   
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4. 00:10:700 –I think I can hear a beat here so I suggest you add a circle here to catch it. Indeed. I fixed it
5. 00:11:100 –Also, the vocal actually ends here so I suggest ending this slider: 00:10:800 (4) – there. On the contrary vocal starts at 00:11:100 - . But is sounds better. I fixed it
6. 00:22:800 (1,4,5) –Please try to avoid this overlap by placing (4) and (5) somewhere else where they aren’t touching any other objects. Ye, I changed the pattern
7. 00:34:000 –Add a circle here. It feels a bit empty without one. There's nothing here. I'll think about it
8. 00:32:200 (1,2,3,4) –I think it would be better to add a long slider somewhere here and change this slider: 00:34:200 (1) – into circles to catch the vocals. I follow russian lyrics here. So I think it's my best option.
9. 00:39:400 (7) –Rather place this slider like this for better flow: Fixed
   
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10. 00:40:700 (6) –Make this slider longer to this tick: 00:40:900 – Nah, I have every confidence in this part. It has taken me a long time to find right rhythm.
11. 00:41:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –This stream is too difficult for a Hard. Rather replace it with short repeat sliders. Something like this: I'll think about it
    
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    It will also be a good idea to change that stream into multiple short sliders.
12. 00:44:400 (9) –I don’t think a circle is enough here. Maybe try this: I don't want to map too much. I follow lyrics here, so i think it's fine
    
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13. 00:46:400 (8) –This repeat slider shouldn’t be here but rather here: 00:46:200 -, so something like this: I changed the whole pattern.
    
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14. 00:47:600 (10) –The same as 00:44:400 (9) –
15. 00:49:600 (5) –You can make this slider longer so that it ends here: 00:50:000 –
16. 00:50:800 (3) –Shorten this slider so it’s here: 00:51:200 – and then place a circle here: 00:51:400 – I really like my choice. Anyway I'll think about it
    
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17. 00:55:700 (6,7) –Rather stack these two to prevent confusion. Good idea. Fixed

Normal:

1. 00:05:200 –This is quite an important beat so I really think that this has to be mapped out. So you can just place a circle there. Indeed. I missed it. Fixed
2. 00:04:200 (3) –Since this vocal is a bit long, I suggest changing this circle into a slider. Like this: I think so too. Fixed
   
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3. 00:07:000 –This vocal is quite important so change this circle: 00:06:800 (1) – into a short slider as well: Great idea. Fixed
   
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4. 00:07:200 (2) –This is not following the vocals and it sounds a bit off. I suggest doing this: I like it. Fixed
   
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5. 00:08:000 (3) –Same thing here. Place a circle here: 00:08:000 – and start the slider here: 00:08:200 – Fixed
6. 00:42:000 –The vocal actually starts here so the slider is starting too early. Try this: Fixed
   
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7. 00:43:200 (3) –Bad flow. Try something like this instead: Reworked
   
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Easy:

1. 00:01:999 (3,1) –Perfect this stack. Fixed
2. 00:13:200 (4) –Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:14:800 (1) – then add new combo here: 00:16:400 (3) – and remove new combo here: 00:17:200 (1) – Yeah, It's for the best. Fixed
3. 00:22:800 (5) –Add new combo here. Fixed
4. 00:29:199 (1) –Place this circle somewhere else so it doesn’t overlap. Maybe something like this: I can't find overlap here or I don't understand you
   
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5. 00:35:600 (5) –Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:37:199 (1) – Fixed
6. 00:48:400 (5) –Add new combo here. Fixed

Good Luck~!

Karia wrote:

Here's small suggestions :3 Not so small

• General

1. Preview Time is unsnapped. Resnap to 24700. Thanks. Fixed

• Easy

1. 00:11:599 (3) - 00:39:199 (2) - 00:41:199 (5) - Unsnapped. Awkward. Fixed
2. 00:26:000 (1,2,3) - Swap the rhythm like this. It's better with music. Yes, indeed. That is a great idea. Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:29:199 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 00:35:600 (1) - End at 00:36:200 - here for following strong beat. Also optional thing, try to add reverse for rhyrthm reading. Reverse is fine. Fixed
5. 00:54:799 (1,2,3) - Just 3/2 reverse slider is best imo. I totally agree with you. Fixed

• Normal

1. 00:15:600 (5,6,1) - Ugly stack in-playing. Stack them perfectly or unstack (1). (Personally I recommend unsnap.) Yes, It wasn't pretty. Fixed
2. 00:19:600 (1,2) - Try to change to 1/1 slider and circle. It would be cool imo.
3. 00:21:000 (4) - Following vocal is better by using 1/1 slider cuz vocal is stronger than drum sound :p Yes, indeed. Fixed
4. 00:22:800 (1,2,3,4) - A bit weird cuz finish beat is on 00:23:400 - this reverse. How about this? Yeah, 00:23:400 - is good spot for slider. But, I'll do 1/2 slider + 2 circles in accordance with vocal. Anyway, this has been fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:54:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personally sudden usage of 1/4 is not good. Change to two 1/1 sliders and circle or something that you want to use :3 Probably. Fixed

• Hard

1. 00:06:300 - 00:06:400 - Add circles for triplet? I don't understand you. But I think all is good here
2. 00:15:600 (3) - Move to (268, 192) for consistency DS. Thanks. Fixed
3. 00:25:500 (5) - Delete and consider 00:25:600 (6) - change this to triplet. I love my version, but anyway thanks for idea. I'll think about it
4. 00:33:600 (8) - 1/1 slider is best imo Ok. Fixed
5. 00:55:400 (5,6,7) - A bit hard to read in this diff.Change (5) to 1/2 slider. it's a great idea. Fixed

That's all, gl :3

1. 00:09:200 (5,1,2) - This may confuse easy players, I suggest do not put (2) between (5) and (1)
2. 00:30:800 (3) - move X:31 Y:189 to make it flow? (And don't forget to adjust (4))
3. 00:37:600 (3) - move to X:39 Y:182 to make it flow?
4. 00:35:200 (4,1) - blanket
5. 00:40:800 (4,5) - blanket them will look better.
6. 00:42:400 (2,3) - blanket
7. 00:45:200 (1,2) - you can use Ctrl + C/V to make them same and use Ctrl+ H/J to set (2) in right position.
8. 00:45:200 (1,3) - overlap here not looking good
9. 00:51:600 (1,1) - in easy diff, notes after spinner should at least have a bar long break, that's to say, if you wanna put notes after this spinner, you should put it after 00:55:400

1. bpm 150 with SV 1.4 is to high for normal players
2. 00:03:600 (1,2,3,4) - as vocal here not exactly follow rhythm, I suggest you do not follow vocal here, rhythm here may confuse normal players
3. 00:13:200 (1) - blanket
4. 00:16:400 (1,2) - blanket
5. 00:35:600 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:38:000 start a slider here?
7. 00:45:000 (1) - start with a circle when there is a red line may be hard for normal players

1. It's hard diff so you don't need to keep DS same.
2. 00:11:300 missing note
3. 00:21:200 (5) - start it at 00:21:100 and end at 00:21:500 ?
4. 00:24:000 (5) - replace it with a slider?
5. 00:28:400 (3,4) - both replace with a 1/2 slider?
6. 00:37:200 (6) - NC (new combo)
7. 00:46:400 (7) - ^
8. 00:56:000 (8) - ^

Vanillas wrote:

Hi~ M4M~ Hi^^

Internet crash down... So I have to edit in my PC and post it on my mobile phone. lovely story
[Easy]

1. 00:09:200 (5,1,2) - This may confuse easy players, I suggest do not put (2) between (5) and (1) I do not think about it. Thanks. Fixed
2. 00:30:800 (3) - move X:31 Y:189 to make it flow? (And don't forget to adjust (4)) Yes, Indeed. Fixed
3. 00:37:600 (3) - move to X:39 Y:182 to make it flow? Yes, I know nothing about flow. So thanks a lot. Fixed
4. 00:35:200 (4,1) - blanket Thank you for your attention. Fixed
5. 00:40:800 (4,5) - blanket them will look better. I agree. Fixed
6. 00:42:400 (2,3) - blanket Fixed
7. 00:45:200 (1,2) - you can use Ctrl + C/V to make them same and use Ctrl+ H/J to set (2) in right position. Thanks for advise!
8. 00:45:200 (1,3) - overlap here not looking good Fixed
9. 00:51:600 (1,1) - in easy diff, notes after spinner should at least have a bar long break, that's to say, if you wanna put notes after this spinner, you should put it after 00:55:400 I'll think about it. I really want some objects after the spinner

[Normal]

1. bpm 150 with SV 1.4 is to high for normal players I'll think about it
2. 00:03:600 (1,2,3,4) - as vocal here not exactly follow rhythm, I suggest you do not follow vocal here, rhythm here may confuse normal players I didn't know any better. =/
3. 00:13:200 (1) - blanket Fixed
4. 00:16:400 (1,2) - blanket Fixed
5. 00:35:600 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:38:000 start a slider here? there is nothing here
7. 00:45:000 (1) - start with a circle when there is a red line may be hard for normal players I think vocal is strong enough here. And there is no beat and white thick.

[Hard]

1. It's hard diff so you don't need to keep DS same. I don't want to force things: break DS because it's Hard. Anyway, I'll think about it.
2. 00:11:300 missing note I don't hear. So play single circle on blue tick is too hard and not necessary. It's following vocals as well
3. 00:21:200 (5) - start it at 00:21:100 and end at 00:21:500 ? it's too complicated for me
4. 00:24:000 (5) - replace it with a slider? Fixed
5. 00:28:400 (3,4) - both replace with a 1/2 slider? Yeah. Great idea. Fixed
6. 00:37:200 (6) - NC (new combo) Fixed
7. 00:46:400 (7) - ^Fixed
8. 00:56:000 (8) - ^ I don't like it

As It's your first beatmap, you really did a good job~ keep on mapping so you'll get ranked maps one day~ Thank you for the kind words. It's very important for me

good luck to you~~

1. 00:51:600 (1) - ending this spinner at the red tick where no clear instrument sound or vocal exists makes no sense to me, i'd suggest simply ending it here 00:53:200 - or where the word Shaman starts

1. 00:10:400 (2,5) - easier diffs should avoid objects getting messy, so u can try rearranging the flow here by changing the direction of 5,thus need some adjustment on the latter objects as well
2. 00:13:200 (1,2) - vocal here should be snapped this way if u listen carefully http://puu.sh/ppJM7/6882622fed.jpg

1. 00:11:400 - vocal here should be mapped imo, either add a note here or make this slider 00:10:800 (4) - reverse
2. 00:28:400 (3,1) - try avoid objects getting too crowded
3. 00:50:200 - the vocal starts here, so this rhythm pattern http://puu.sh/ppK7C/0488f0b8aa.jpg may work

Garden wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:51:600 (1) - ending this spinner at the red tick where no clear instrument sound or vocal exists makes no sense to me, i'd suggest simply ending it here 00:53:200 - or where the word Shaman starts Okay, sure, I thought about it. Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:10:400 (2,5) - easier diffs should avoid objects getting messy, so u can try rearranging the flow here by changing the direction of 5,thus need some adjustment on the latter objects as well I didn't notice it. Thanks a lot, fixed
2. 00:13:200 (1,2) - vocal here should be snapped this way if u listen carefully http://puu.sh/ppJM7/6882622fed.jpg Yes, indeed. Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:11:400 - vocal here should be mapped imo, either add a note here or make this slider 00:10:800 (4) - reverse I've been told things like that a lot before. So, yes. Fixed
2. 00:28:400 (3,1) - try avoid objects getting too crowded I love flow here. Anyway, I'll think about it
3. 00:50:200 - the vocal starts here, so this rhythm pattern http://puu.sh/ppK7C/0488f0b8aa.jpg may work Great idea. Fixed

The reason I only give out some general suggestions instead of more concrete ones is that i believe u can fix lots of stuffs in this mapset urself with more mapping experience and improvements in mapping skills (e.g. blanket). There's no need to stick to only one mapset, map more and you will get improved urself for sure. Have fun mapping and good luck! Thanks a lot for advise!

Naxess wrote:

NM From Queue

omg still got like 5 NMs left on the queue and it's been 3 days xD
rip me lol

[ Easy]

SPOILER

00:02:000 (3,4) - Switching places with these two will emphasize 00:02:000 - better, since you have to hold the repeat rather than just click it. I agree. Fixed


00:51:600 (1) - Not really sure this spinner fits here because of multiple impacts.
Spinners are often best at longer sounds like from 00:52:800 - , but it won't really fit there either, due to the impacts at 00:54:800 - .
I'd suggest you just remove the spinner and replace it with some notes instead. I don't know what to do with this spinner. I'll ask around

Now for hitsounds,

Try finding some custom hitsounds, so you can hitsound more things like these sounds 00:27:200 - .

00:14:800 - Don't think a finish fits here. I think you should remove it.

00:26:800 - Try placing claps on sounds like these
^ 00:28:400 -
^ 00:30:000 -
^ 00:31:600 -
^ 00:34:800 -

00:46:000 - Yeah custom hitsounds for these would probably work really great. Yes, I tried to perfect all hitsounds

There's also some blankets that could be fixed. If you don't know how to blanket stuff or simply want to learn more about sliders and aesthetics, take a look at this thread.

[ Normal]

SPOILER

00:22:800 (1,2) - I mentioned blankets right at the end of the last difficulty. This is not correctly blanketed, for example.
Before:

After: (this is a correct blanket)

Just remember to check DS (Distance Spacing) after changing the sliders as well.
^ 00:49:000 (2,3) -
^ 00:01:400 (2,3) -
^ 00:03:600 (1,3) -
^ 00:06:800 (1,3,5) - Fixed(I hope)
^ 00:35:600 (1,2) -
^ 00:36:200 (2,3) -
... I think you get the idea.
Use the approach circle to line it up properly is a good tip.
00:10:800 (3,4) - this is done correctly, for example.
Don't forget to check easy and hard as well, since I've skipped pointing them out there.


00:17:800 - Feel like this part could be done like this for better rhythm: I think my way is better due to the Russian vocals


00:27:200 - Could make this a slider ending on the downbeat (large white tick) to cover the last sound that this pattern is following.
Like 00:30:400 (4) - is doing, for example. Yes, reworked

Rhythm can get confusing at times, but otherwise I think it's fine.

[ Hard]

SPOILER

00:05:200 (7,8) - Switch places to cover vocal better.

00:07:100 - There's some sounds on blue ticks that you're missing... Yes, indeed. Fixed
This one could be mapped like this, for example:

^ 00:10:300 -

00:17:800 - Could be done like this to cover vocal better: I can't tell the difference, but I like my way

Or even better like this:


00:20:700 - Again, to cover vocal better I'd have done it like this, using stacks:


00:22:000 (8) - The control points in this slider could use some cleaning xD =D


00:25:500 - There's no sound here, so remove 00:25:500 (5) - .
Could place something at 00:25:700 - instead, since there's a sound, for example make it a 1/4 slider repeating twice. Thanks. Fixed


00:26:000 (1,2,3) - Not going to point out any other blankets, but I mean you should probably take a look at this difficulty as well

00:41:900 - Add another circle, I still hear a sound here. Ok, I added

00:50:200 - Don't really hear anything where this slider starts, vocal begins somewhere at 00:50:263 - .Remapped

00:51:600 (1) - I guess the spinner works in this case because it covers the whole set of vocals going on here, but I still don't think it works in the easy difficulty...

Btw, you're covering drums almost perfectly, though vocals have some missed emphasization, but it should be fixed with my suggestions probably.

[ General]

SPOILER

I think it's a bit strange that both the artist and the source are "Shaman King", but I mean, if it's correct then it's fine xD I don't care. It has taken me a long time to find the source, but to no avail. I think it's fine
Think the rest looks fine.
But consider getting some custom hitsounds.

Good luck!

- AzuNya - wrote:

For the M4M

Easy Diff

I think it's already good!
Good Job

Normal Diff

00:05:200 (5,6) - How about like this?
Move the 00:05:800 (7) - to the left side abit Such variant is possible but I prefer own option. I think it sounds better


00:24:000 (4) - How about a spinner from there until 00:25:600 (1) - There is nothing here, and i don't want to abuse spinner

Hard Diff

00:01:000 (3) - The note is a bit long so how about a slider until 00:01:200 (4) - I do not think it is necessary. I like circle in this case
00:49:600 (5) - Make the slider longer until 00:50:000 (6) - In accordance with vocals i think my way is better

Good Luck

CookieKivi wrote:

Froм мy мoddιɴɢ qυeυe.

easy

00:03:600 (1) - make the last anchor point a red one too. for better looks I don't see any point in changing
00:10:000 (1) - blanket error fixed
00:35:200 (4) - ^ fixed
00:40:800 (4) - ^ fixed
00:54:800 (1) - maybe just 3 circles?

normal

00:07:400 (3) - eww. that looks.. ew. not so much overlap pls..
00:36:200 (2) - blanket error fixed
00:39:800 (4) - nc
00:43:200 (3) - blanket error fixed
00:45:800 (3) - ^

1. Тут можно только довериться аплоадерам видео на ютуб, но как-то так
   
   1. Artist: Александр Комлев, Елена Чебатуркина - исполнители.
   2. Romanised artist Alexandr Komlev, Elena Chebaturkina
   3. Title: Shaman King Theme adding (Rissian Version) is totally up to you, since Russian producers did not care to provide any obtainable metadata whatsoever.
   4. По желанию в теги Jetix, имена пары основных персонажей, если хочешь упростить процесс поиска карты людям.

1. C такими 00:24:400 - пробелами в ритме HP Drain нужно ставить на двойку.
2. 00:00:400 (1,2,3) - совсем ударные выпали, давай ставить слайдеры и серклы туда, где действительно слыщны биты. Как-то так?
3. 00:03:600 (1) - а давай заменим слайдером и поставим все на вокалы? Так как-то
4. 00:06:800 (1) - и еще немного снаппинга по вокалам. как-то так вот
5. 00:38:000 (4) - ударные посреди слайдера считают, что ты выбираешь не самый удачный ритм. пример
6. 00:38:800 (1,2) - и опять слайдеры немного мимо ударных, как-то вот так попробуй.
7. 00:42:000 (1,2) - как-то очень много всего я советую по вокалам ставить, example
   
   После всех мучений с вокалами все оформить аккуратненько и будет очень неплохо.

1. 00:06:800 (1,3) - а давай ммы тут обводку приведем в порядок? Мелочь, но отвлекает неприятно.
2. 00:13:800 (2) - продли до белого тика, там лучше оставлять 1/1 промежутки между битами, чтобы ритм было проще ловить и воспринимать.
3. 00:43:200 (3) - вокалы отчетливо дробят слова, лучше поставить два серла, т.к. два отдельных клика лучше прозвучат в этом контексте.
4. 00:46:000 (4) - не попадает на вокалы. Совсем не попадает. Давай что-то придумаем с ним, например передвинем середину слайдера на позже или раньше.
5. 00:48:400 (1,2,3) - а давай все отзеркалим в другую сторону, чтобы левую половину поля не перегружать визуально. Еще можно обводку до ума довести. А так все круто.
   
   Неплохо.

1. 00:05:200 (7) - не идет в синхрон с вокалами, попробуй послушать в замедленном темпе и росмотреть, как можно лучше синхронизтровать слайдеры и вокалы.
   Подсказка: лучше начинать на сильных битах, а заканчивать на слабых. Если сделать наоборот, то игрок не сможет кликнуть на сильном бите и останется дискомфорт.
2. 00:10:300 (2,3) - как-то вокалы в кашу сливаются и слайдер там звучит слабо.Может попробуем что-то такое?
3. 00:25:400 (5,6) - слайдер н езвучит из-за того, что на хвосте у него оказывается сильный бит, который хотелось бы кликнуть. Давай все серклами заменим?
4. 00:31:200 - а вот тут отдельная строчка песни, сюда новый кружлк нужно, а не хвост старого слайдера.
5. 00:41:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - как-то перебор для харда. Давай что-то такое попробуем.
   
   Немного неаккуратно, в остальном все окей.

Bakari wrote:

Российская метадата ужасна, don't do Russian metadata, kids.

[General]

1. Тут можно только довериться аплоадерам видео на ютуб, но как-то так
   
   1. Artist: Александр Комлев, Елена Чебатуркина - исполнители.
   2. Romanised artist Alexandr Komlev, Elena Chebaturkina
   3. Title: Shaman King Theme adding (Rissian Version) is totally up to you, since Russian producers did not care to provide any obtainable metadata whatsoever.
   4. По желанию в теги Jetix, имена пары основных персонажей, если хочешь упростить процесс поиска карты людям.
      Спасибо!

[Easy]

1. C такими 00:24:400 - пробелами в ритме HP Drain нужно ставить на двойку. Да, логично
2. 00:00:400 (1,2,3) - совсем ударные выпали, давай ставить слайдеры и серклы туда, где действительно слыщны биты. Как-то так? Да, мне нравится
3. 00:03:600 (1) - а давай заменим слайдером и поставим все на вокалы? Так как-то Да, можно длинный слайдер на 2 разделить
4. 00:06:800 (1) - и еще немного снаппинга по вокалам. как-то так вот А смысл в этом обратном слайдере? Там сейчас и так хорошо за вокалом следует.
5. 00:38:000 (4) - ударные посреди слайдера считают, что ты выбираешь не самый удачный ритм. пример Исправлено
6. 00:38:800 (1,2) - и опять слайдеры немного мимо ударных, как-то вот так попробуй. Да, хорошо
7. 00:42:000 (1,2) - как-то очень много всего я советую по вокалам ставить, example Ладно, так действительно лучше
   
   После всех мучений с вокалами все оформить аккуратненько и будет очень неплохо.

[Normal]

1. 00:06:800 (1,3) - а давай ммы тут обводку приведем в порядок? Мелочь, но отвлекает неприятно. Окей, вроде сейчас лучше стало
2. 00:13:800 (2) - продли до белого тика, там лучше оставлять 1/1 промежутки между битами, чтобы ритм было проще ловить и воспринимать. Да, действительно
3. 00:43:200 (3) - вокалы отчетливо дробят слова, лучше поставить два серла, т.к. два отдельных клика лучше прозвучат в этом контексте. Идея понятна, но немного по-другому было исправлено
4. 00:46:000 (4) - не попадает на вокалы. Совсем не попадает. Давай что-то придумаем с ним, например передвинем середину слайдера на позже или раньше. Весь смысл в этом реверсе был в том, что он на звонкую ноту попадал, но, видимо, не очень удачная затея была. Похожим методом, что и в предыдущем пункте исправлено
5. 00:48:400 (1,2,3) - а давай все отзеркалим в другую сторону, чтобы левую половину поля не перегружать визуально. Еще можно обводку до ума довести. А так все круто. Начиная с 00:43:200 - много чего пришлось поправлять, поэтому композицию этих трёх слайдеров было проще заново придумать с учетом пожеланий
   
   Неплохо.

[Hard]

1. 00:05:200 (7) - не идет в синхрон с вокалами, попробуй послушать в замедленном темпе и росмотреть, как можно лучше синхронизтровать слайдеры и вокалы.
   Подсказка: лучше начинать на сильных битах, а заканчивать на слабых. Если сделать наоборот, то игрок не сможет кликнуть на сильном бите и останется дискомфорт. Ну вроде задача решена =)
2. 00:10:300 (2,3) - как-то вокалы в кашу сливаются и слайдер там звучит слабо.Может попробуем что-то такое? Да, как на картинке получше будет
3. 00:25:400 (5,6) - слайдер н езвучит из-за того, что на хвосте у него оказывается сильный бит, который хотелось бы кликнуть. Давай все серклами заменим? Заменено, конечно, но посложней играть стало
4. 00:31:200 - а вот тут отдельная строчка песни, сюда новый кружлк нужно, а не хвост старого слайдера. Хорошо, начну новую строчку с кружка
5. 00:41:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - как-то перебор для харда. Давай что-то такое попробуем. Но ведь два этих повторяющихся слайдера тоже как-то слишком. Для такой напряженной инструментальной части такой бесславный конец угнетает. Вместо второй части стрима поставлен 1 такой слайдер. Думаю, должно понравиться: и не шокирует, и вроде даже играть интересно
   Немного неаккуратно, в остальном все окей.

Looks fairly decent for a beginner mapper, could use a few mods but it is definitely impressive. Thank you for the kind words, Bakari

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Regraz wrote:

M4M from my queue!
Since your map is quite short, you do not have to mod all the diffs in my map!

[Easy]
00:00:400 (1,2) - Two 3/2 reverse sliders give more consistency in rhythm here: https://puu.sh/rSM72/bdc1fda3ed.png Yeah, Indeed
00:11:600 (3) - This shape looks quite meh. If you want to create a wave slider, make it like this: https://puu.sh/rSMbf/484aed907d.png // I got it
00:18:400 (4,5) - Blanket needs to be improved.
00:20:800 (2,3) - ^ // fixed
00:35:600 (1,3) - Avoid this overlap: https://puu.sh/rSMeZ/b8431b6d23.png // done
00:51:600 (1) - This spinner plays quite weird and it gives unnecessary breaks before and after it. Just replace it with normal notes. // replaced

[Normal]
00:11:600 (5,6) - Why not make them symmetric in position? // Come on, It looks interesting ( I hope )
00:48:400 (1,3) - Blanket issue here as well. // fixed
[Hard]
00:06:800 (1,2,3) - 00:03:600 (1,2,3) - they sounds similar in rhythm, so how you place your notes should be consistent as well. // corrected
00:11:600 (1,2,3) - symmetry works better here. https://puu.sh/rSMx9/adabbf6c49.png // fixed
00:16:400 (1,2,3) - If you want to make such patterns, use rotate function (Ctrl+Shift+R) and rotate them 120 degree clockwise or anticlockwise. // Thank you
00:32:400 (4,5,6) - There is a long vocal, using singletaps like this is not a nice idea. Try to use sliders. // I used long slider instead
00:45:000 (1,2) - 1/4 is really too vague here. It could be considered unsnap potentially. So just do not use the triplet. //Ok, I deleted 1/4
00:50:300 (1) - Should be 1/4 earlier I guess? // Sorry, I don't quite follow you.

Could have some improvements in rhythm and pattern! // I revised several patterns after a long interruption. Therefore, I think mapset became a little better
Good luck!

1. 00:11:600 (1,2,3) - try to create a circular pattern with the sliders and the circle in the middle - and ctrl+g 00:12:400 (3) - will be better
2. 00:24:000 (5) - try something like that :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:25:800 - add a circle here is totally missing
4. 00:32:400 (4,7) - try to not overlap them
5. 00:33:000 (5) - use a curved slider to improve the flow

1. 00:02:000 (3) - with ctrl+g would be soooooo much better ♥
2. 00:42:800 (2) - clap missing on head

1. 00:24:700 - useless timeline

Lally wrote:

#Queue

[Hard]

1. 00:11:600 (1,2,3) - try to create a circular pattern with the sliders and the circle in the middle - and ctrl+g 00:12:400 (3) - will be better // I like the symmetry of this pattern.
2. 00:24:000 (5) - try something like that : Yes, it's better
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:25:800 - add a circle here is totally missing // Because there's nothing here. I'm sure
4. 00:32:400 (4,7) - try to not overlap them // it's acceptable, furthermore unnoticed during gameplay
5. 00:33:000 (5) - use a curved slider to improve the flow // curved slider probably won't make any difference in this case, but I think it will look bad without blanket, so I prefer straight

[Normal]

1. 00:02:000 (3) - with ctrl+g would be soooooo much better ♥ // it's for sure. Changed
2. 00:42:800 (2) - clap missing on head // Yes

[Easy]

1. 00:24:700 - useless timeline// this is preview timeline xd

Lami wrote:

General

i think you need to try more use hitsound. // I added a bit more hitsounds.

Easy // fixed

00:21:600 (3,4) - DS
00:45:200 (1,3) - avoid overlapped

Normal

easy - normal gap is too big as high sv.
1.4 pretty fast, compare with 0.9
almost 0.9 (x1.6) = 1.4

overall, i think this design is similar with advanced(Normal+) diff. // Thanks, I'll think and ask around about it


00:22:000 (6,1) - can be more fluid flow // fixed
00:28:000 (1) - NC x // In accordance with the strong vocals I am inclined to add NC

Hard


00:04:200 (3,4,5) - plz consistent ds // fixed
00:07:100 (2) - not fit on music, if you intend on vocal // I've been thinking about it. The problem is, the drums sound too loud here and it is impossible to ignore, therefore, I believe that this is the best option
00:10:400 (2,3,4) - ^
00:35:200 (3,4) - weird flow. (4) place more downside // fixed
00:28:000 (1,2,3) - overall no jump in this diff.
from here, i doubt whether this unique jump is worth thing for making jump here. // It's worth it to add jump here. However, now it is not unique - I added a few more
00:25:900 - add note // I'll look into it

hmm... recommend to read this when you have time. t/465718 // Thanks for the useful link