1. Easy (1,49 stars, 59 notes)
2. Hard (3,17 stars, 154 notes)
3. Normal (2,12 stars, 97 notes)

1. I'm not a timing expert, but since it sound like an actual person is singing the song, some of the vocals need individual timing points (red lines) if you plan to follow vocals. Sorry, you'll need to find someone better than me to help you with that. Regardless, you should move offset to 411 since that's where you start mapping

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  It looks like you're a new mapper, so let me just keep my mod general

1. Spacing - Proper spacing is very important in maps. For lower diffs, consistent spacing helps newer players develop a relationship between time and distance between notes. See this for a longer explanation. For normal and easy diffs, it is highly recommended (almost an ironclad rule nowadays) that you keep distance snapping (DS) on for the entire map for the reason stated above. Just pick one DS and stick with it for the entire map
   
   
2. Rhythm - pay close attention to the song and try to match your rhythms with the song as closely as possible. Examples:
   
   1. Both the synth and drums have a loud sound at 00:01:411 - yet this is completely skipped over by the slider.
   2. Same thing with 00:02:311 - this can be followed by using a 3/4 repeat slider starting at 00:02:011 -
   3. Downbeats (big white ticks) are typically important beats in the song and should have a clickable object to represent them, especially if a strong sound from the music falls on this beat. So places like 00:06:811 - and 00:10:011 - 00:14:811 - 00:22:811 - etc... where the vocals or instruments land need something clickable. Along those lines, if you have no idea when to add new combos (NCs), a simple way is to add a NC every downbeat or every 2 downbeats.
   4. 00:14:011 (3) - should start at 00:14:211 - to align with vocals and drums
   5. 00:14:811 (4,5,6) - rhythm can be simplifed and vocal at 00:15:411 - needs something clickable: http://puu.sh/otAC9/cbd9b55288.jpg
   6. 00:17:611 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g rhythm so strong vocal sounds at 00:17:811 - and 00:18:211 - are clickable
   7. etc...
3. Aesthetics - People like pretty maps, so make your maps pretty!
   
   1. Blankets: A blanket is a type of visual pattern that can help make your sliders look neat. Please refer to this guide for help on how to make good blankets. Try to incorporate some these into your mapset
   2. Overlaps: they aren't pretty, so try to keep them to a minimum. For a normal diff, you shouldn't use too many 1/2 rhythms in a row, otherwise everything looks messy. Try to map the important beats and skip the ones that aren't as strong to minimize overlaps. For example, you could use notes instead of sliders at 00:03:811 (2,3) -
   3. Patterns and symmetry: pretty self-explanatory. Try using more ctrl+g -> reverse selection and ctrl+h/j -> flip horizontally/vertically for your sliders to improve the structure of your map

1. Everything I said in normal applies here as well. In addition, don't use any 1/2 rhythms in easy diff, it's too hard for new players.

1. the second red line should be deleted. Because of the wrong timing, the rhythm in ur map is in confusion
   
2. u didn't follow the music in many place. for example, from 00:00:411 - to 00:03:611 - , the sounds in music are:
   
   SPOILER

   
   but u creat rhythm by uself in every diff, i have to say "remap plz"
   
3. check AImod with "check distance snap" in E/N diff
   
4. avoid overlap like this
   
   SPOILER

   
5. hard - 00:39:911 (1,3) - this is unrankable

Hard

1. 00:05:000 (6) - Move this slider over to the white tick and add a note, since you cant hear a distinct beat on the read tick.
2. 00:08:200 (6) - Extend this slider to the red tick perhaps.
3. 00:16:400 (1) - NC
4. 00:24:600 add a note here
5. 00:31:600 (2,3) - Delete the note and move the slider where the note was, and extend the slider to the read tick to match the vocals.

Normal

1. 00:28:200 (6) - Reduce this slider to the red tick and add a note on the white tick that follows.
2. 00:35:000 (3) - Move this note over to the white tick.

1. Найди название сонга, т.к. текущее явно неверное.
2. В изике нет видео, пофикси.
3. Отключи вайдскрин саппорт, он находится там же, где и отсчет, а нужео только для сторибордов.
4. 00:48:800 (3) - / 00:49:600 (5) - сюда финиш, потому что сильный звук, такой же как и тут 00:48:200 (1) - , поэтому стоит выделить финишом.

1. Выдели все объекты на карте (ctrl+A) и посмотри, они все находятся по центру, а углы пустые, такое тоже не очень хорошо, старайся в следующих мапах углы мапать тоже.
2. 00:02:400 (4,2) - когда в изике один объект наезжает на другой — это не очень хорошо выглять из-за низкого АР и CS, следует избегать таких оверлапов. У тебя вся диффа в них, поправь.
   Кстати, даже такие оверлапы смотрятся ужасно 00:05:200 (3,2) - , поверь.
3. 00:10:399 (2) - ну тут реверс просится.
4. 00:14:400 - вообще, очень странно, что ты пропустил половину вокальной части тут, поставь серкл, что ли, туда или немного вот этот слайдер продли 00:13:200 (4) - , буквально до красного тика, чтобы заканчивался на белом.
5. 00:13:200 (4,1,3) - снова некрасиво.
6. 00:16:400 (3,1,2) - вот например тут, ты мог слайдер(2) расположить не справа, а слева
   
   пример

   
   А еще, если так сделаешь, то переход 00:18:800 (4,1) - будет намного лучше.
7. 00:22:800 (1) - ну его лучше горизонтально, да. Кстати, тут на красном тике очень сильный звук, вот тут 00:23:400 - , а ты его игноришь, в силу вокала, что ли? Сделай тогда слайдер таким, даже по вокалу подходит.
   
   таким

   
8. 00:37:599 (2,3) - бланкет можно поровнее поставить.
9. 00:48:399 (1,2) - то же самое с красным тиком, он тут сильный.

1. 00:05:800 (6) - / 00:09:200 (5) - / 00:12:400 (6) - / 00:13:600 (2) - странно, что ты пропускаешь вокалы тут, можно продлить и будет выглядеть ну намного лучше.
2. 00:17:600 (4,5) - такое можно и раздвинуть, получше будет.
3. 00:36:400 (1) - я не слышу звука на белом тике.
4. 00:39:600 (1) - ненужное НК.
5. 00:50:300 (6) - ну такое делать в нормале нельзя, 1/4 кикслайдеры на 150 бпм даже в хардах не всегда делают.
6. Опять же не очень аккуратно, можно избавиться от оверлапов.

1. 00:10:400 (2,3,4) - один единственный спейсед трипл на всю карту, давай-ка удали его. Смысл таких триплов в том, что нужно делать не один на всю диффу, а последовательно, чтобы игрок не был удивлен спейсед триплом.
2. 00:32:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - мне не нравится такой паттерн, добавь-ка слайдеров, а то тяжеловато выходит.
3. 00:41:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - тяжело очень по сравнению с нормалом, сделай стрим и вместо последних трех нот 1/4 реверс. И спейсинг у стрима меньше делай, и не таким загнутым его, чтобы полегче было.
4. 00:50:200 (1) - а тут звука-то нет.

Lily Bread wrote:

light mod as request

[Easy]
00:07:999 (3) - unsnapped Thanks. Fixed

[Normal]
check DS issues. all objects should DS in Normal diff. Fixed
http://puu.sh/pmk20/df62bf5010.png

00:01:400 (2) - 1/4 reverse slider is not good in Normal diff. try this.
http://puu.sh/pmk6G/25b5ea4944.jpg
(the cursor is at - 00:01:400 -)
we can't map all the sound in music in Easy and Normal diff. so we should ignore some music and try to use long slider to express them sometimes.

Yeah, I thought about it. I replaced this part

[Hard]
00:03:400 - you missed a drum here. use a circle or make - 00:03:200 (6) - into a 1/2 slider. It's right. Fixed

good luck

-Nya- wrote:

Heya~ M4M! Hi^^

General:

1. The BG has to be 1366X768. It’s an easy fix. Fixed

Hard:

1. 00:02:600 (3,1) –Try to avoid this overlap by blanketing 00:03:200 (6,1) – Fixed
   
   Picture

   
2. 00:05:200 (7) –I think you can break this up into more notes, just to make it more challenging. Maybe try this: Good idea. Fixed
   
   Picture

   
3. 00:09:200 (8) –I suggest turning this circle into a slider to catch that long vocal. Like this: Fixed
   
   Picture

   
4. 00:10:700 –I think I can hear a beat here so I suggest you add a circle here to catch it. Indeed. I fixed it
5. 00:11:100 –Also, the vocal actually ends here so I suggest ending this slider: 00:10:800 (4) – there. On the contrary vocal starts at 00:11:100 - . But is sounds better. I fixed it
6. 00:22:800 (1,4,5) –Please try to avoid this overlap by placing (4) and (5) somewhere else where they aren’t touching any other objects. Ye, I changed the pattern
7. 00:34:000 –Add a circle here. It feels a bit empty without one. There's nothing here. I'll think about it
8. 00:32:200 (1,2,3,4) –I think it would be better to add a long slider somewhere here and change this slider: 00:34:200 (1) – into circles to catch the vocals. I follow russian lyrics here. So I think it's my best option.
9. 00:39:400 (7) –Rather place this slider like this for better flow: Fixed
   
   Picture

   
10. 00:40:700 (6) –Make this slider longer to this tick: 00:40:900 – Nah, I have every confidence in this part. It has taken me a long time to find right rhythm.
11. 00:41:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –This stream is too difficult for a Hard. Rather replace it with short repeat sliders. Something like this: I'll think about it
    
    Picture

    
    It will also be a good idea to change that stream into multiple short sliders.
12. 00:44:400 (9) –I don’t think a circle is enough here. Maybe try this: I don't want to map too much. I follow lyrics here, so i think it's fine
    
    Picture

    
13. 00:46:400 (8) –This repeat slider shouldn’t be here but rather here: 00:46:200 -, so something like this: I changed the whole pattern.
    
    Picture

    
14. 00:47:600 (10) –The same as 00:44:400 (9) –
15. 00:49:600 (5) –You can make this slider longer so that it ends here: 00:50:000 –
16. 00:50:800 (3) –Shorten this slider so it’s here: 00:51:200 – and then place a circle here: 00:51:400 – I really like my choice. Anyway I'll think about it
    
    Picture

    
17. 00:55:700 (6,7) –Rather stack these two to prevent confusion. Good idea. Fixed

Normal:

1. 00:05:200 –This is quite an important beat so I really think that this has to be mapped out. So you can just place a circle there. Indeed. I missed it. Fixed
2. 00:04:200 (3) –Since this vocal is a bit long, I suggest changing this circle into a slider. Like this: I think so too. Fixed
   
   Picture

   
3. 00:07:000 –This vocal is quite important so change this circle: 00:06:800 (1) – into a short slider as well: Great idea. Fixed
   
   Picture

   
4. 00:07:200 (2) –This is not following the vocals and it sounds a bit off. I suggest doing this: I like it. Fixed
   
   Picture

   
5. 00:08:000 (3) –Same thing here. Place a circle here: 00:08:000 – and start the slider here: 00:08:200 – Fixed
6. 00:42:000 –The vocal actually starts here so the slider is starting too early. Try this: Fixed
   
   Picture

   
7. 00:43:200 (3) –Bad flow. Try something like this instead: Reworked
   
   Picture

   

Easy:

1. 00:01:999 (3,1) –Perfect this stack. Fixed
2. 00:13:200 (4) –Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:14:800 (1) – then add new combo here: 00:16:400 (3) – and remove new combo here: 00:17:200 (1) – Yeah, It's for the best. Fixed
3. 00:22:800 (5) –Add new combo here. Fixed
4. 00:29:199 (1) –Place this circle somewhere else so it doesn’t overlap. Maybe something like this: I can't find overlap here or I don't understand you
   
   Picture

   
5. 00:35:600 (5) –Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:37:199 (1) – Fixed
6. 00:48:400 (5) –Add new combo here. Fixed

Good Luck~!

Karia wrote:

Here's small suggestions :3 Not so small

• General

1. Preview Time is unsnapped. Resnap to 24700. Thanks. Fixed

• Easy

1. 00:11:599 (3) - 00:39:199 (2) - 00:41:199 (5) - Unsnapped. Awkward. Fixed
2. 00:26:000 (1,2,3) - Swap the rhythm like this. It's better with music. Yes, indeed. That is a great idea. Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:29:199 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 00:35:600 (1) - End at 00:36:200 - here for following strong beat. Also optional thing, try to add reverse for rhyrthm reading. Reverse is fine. Fixed
5. 00:54:799 (1,2,3) - Just 3/2 reverse slider is best imo. I totally agree with you. Fixed

• Normal

1. 00:15:600 (5,6,1) - Ugly stack in-playing. Stack them perfectly or unstack (1). (Personally I recommend unsnap.) Yes, It wasn't pretty. Fixed
2. 00:19:600 (1,2) - Try to change to 1/1 slider and circle. It would be cool imo.
3. 00:21:000 (4) - Following vocal is better by using 1/1 slider cuz vocal is stronger than drum sound :p Yes, indeed. Fixed
4. 00:22:800 (1,2,3,4) - A bit weird cuz finish beat is on 00:23:400 - this reverse. How about this? Yeah, 00:23:400 - is good spot for slider. But, I'll do 1/2 slider + 2 circles in accordance with vocal. Anyway, this has been fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:54:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personally sudden usage of 1/4 is not good. Change to two 1/1 sliders and circle or something that you want to use :3 Probably. Fixed

• Hard

1. 00:06:300 - 00:06:400 - Add circles for triplet? I don't understand you. But I think all is good here
2. 00:15:600 (3) - Move to (268, 192) for consistency DS. Thanks. Fixed
3. 00:25:500 (5) - Delete and consider 00:25:600 (6) - change this to triplet. I love my version, but anyway thanks for idea. I'll think about it
4. 00:33:600 (8) - 1/1 slider is best imo Ok. Fixed
5. 00:55:400 (5,6,7) - A bit hard to read in this diff.Change (5) to 1/2 slider. it's a great idea. Fixed

That's all, gl :3

1. 00:09:200 (5,1,2) - This may confuse easy players, I suggest do not put (2) between (5) and (1)
2. 00:30:800 (3) - move X:31 Y:189 to make it flow? (And don't forget to adjust (4))
3. 00:37:600 (3) - move to X:39 Y:182 to make it flow?
4. 00:35:200 (4,1) - blanket
5. 00:40:800 (4,5) - blanket them will look better.
6. 00:42:400 (2,3) - blanket
7. 00:45:200 (1,2) - you can use Ctrl + C/V to make them same and use Ctrl+ H/J to set (2) in right position.
8. 00:45:200 (1,3) - overlap here not looking good
9. 00:51:600 (1,1) - in easy diff, notes after spinner should at least have a bar long break, that's to say, if you wanna put notes after this spinner, you should put it after 00:55:400

1. bpm 150 with SV 1.4 is to high for normal players
2. 00:03:600 (1,2,3,4) - as vocal here not exactly follow rhythm, I suggest you do not follow vocal here, rhythm here may confuse normal players
3. 00:13:200 (1) - blanket
4. 00:16:400 (1,2) - blanket
5. 00:35:600 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:38:000 start a slider here?
7. 00:45:000 (1) - start with a circle when there is a red line may be hard for normal players

1. It's hard diff so you don't need to keep DS same.
2. 00:11:300 missing note
3. 00:21:200 (5) - start it at 00:21:100 and end at 00:21:500 ?
4. 00:24:000 (5) - replace it with a slider?
5. 00:28:400 (3,4) - both replace with a 1/2 slider?
6. 00:37:200 (6) - NC (new combo)
7. 00:46:400 (7) - ^
8. 00:56:000 (8) - ^

Vanillas wrote:

Hi~ M4M~ Hi^^

Internet crash down... So I have to edit in my PC and post it on my mobile phone. lovely story
[Easy]

1. 00:09:200 (5,1,2) - This may confuse easy players, I suggest do not put (2) between (5) and (1) I do not think about it. Thanks. Fixed
2. 00:30:800 (3) - move X:31 Y:189 to make it flow? (And don't forget to adjust (4)) Yes, Indeed. Fixed
3. 00:37:600 (3) - move to X:39 Y:182 to make it flow? Yes, I know nothing about flow. So thanks a lot. Fixed
4. 00:35:200 (4,1) - blanket Thank you for your attention. Fixed
5. 00:40:800 (4,5) - blanket them will look better. I agree. Fixed
6. 00:42:400 (2,3) - blanket Fixed
7. 00:45:200 (1,2) - you can use Ctrl + C/V to make them same and use Ctrl+ H/J to set (2) in right position. Thanks for advise!
8. 00:45:200 (1,3) - overlap here not looking good Fixed
9. 00:51:600 (1,1) - in easy diff, notes after spinner should at least have a bar long break, that's to say, if you wanna put notes after this spinner, you should put it after 00:55:400 I'll think about it. I really want some objects after the spinner

[Normal]

1. bpm 150 with SV 1.4 is to high for normal players I'll think about it
2. 00:03:600 (1,2,3,4) - as vocal here not exactly follow rhythm, I suggest you do not follow vocal here, rhythm here may confuse normal players I didn't know any better. =/
3. 00:13:200 (1) - blanket Fixed
4. 00:16:400 (1,2) - blanket Fixed
5. 00:35:600 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:38:000 start a slider here? there is nothing here
7. 00:45:000 (1) - start with a circle when there is a red line may be hard for normal players I think vocal is strong enough here. And there is no beat and white thick.

[Hard]

1. It's hard diff so you don't need to keep DS same. I don't want to force things: break DS because it's Hard. Anyway, I'll think about it.
2. 00:11:300 missing note I don't hear. So play single circle on blue tick is too hard and not necessary. It's following vocals as well
3. 00:21:200 (5) - start it at 00:21:100 and end at 00:21:500 ? it's too complicated for me
4. 00:24:000 (5) - replace it with a slider? Fixed
5. 00:28:400 (3,4) - both replace with a 1/2 slider? Yeah. Great idea. Fixed
6. 00:37:200 (6) - NC (new combo) Fixed
7. 00:46:400 (7) - ^Fixed
8. 00:56:000 (8) - ^ I don't like it

As It's your first beatmap, you really did a good job~ keep on mapping so you'll get ranked maps one day~ Thank you for the kind words. It's very important for me

good luck to you~~

1. 00:51:600 (1) - ending this spinner at the red tick where no clear instrument sound or vocal exists makes no sense to me, i'd suggest simply ending it here 00:53:200 - or where the word Shaman starts

1. 00:10:400 (2,5) - easier diffs should avoid objects getting messy, so u can try rearranging the flow here by changing the direction of 5,thus need some adjustment on the latter objects as well
2. 00:13:200 (1,2) - vocal here should be snapped this way if u listen carefully http://puu.sh/ppJM7/6882622fed.jpg

1. 00:11:400 - vocal here should be mapped imo, either add a note here or make this slider 00:10:800 (4) - reverse
2. 00:28:400 (3,1) - try avoid objects getting too crowded
3. 00:50:200 - the vocal starts here, so this rhythm pattern http://puu.sh/ppK7C/0488f0b8aa.jpg may work