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Luce Twinkle Wink - 1st Love Story <TV size>

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ts8zs
Karen
00:14:014 (3,4,5) - 这里手动摆比堆叠好
00:27:541 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5217487
00:54:596 (4) - 360 220 00:54:814 (5) - 472 76 00:55:032 (6) - 472 168
01:16:196 (1) - 修一下
01:29:069 - spinner ends here

To other diffs
01:29:069 - spinner ends here
00:51:323 - soft的clap违和感少一些
01:05:287 - soft的clap违和感少一些

Easy
00:25:578 (1) - 加个点控制弧度
00:39:541 (1) - 尾巴往外偏一点
00:50:014 (3) - 第二个点往下
01:13:141 (2) - 第四个点往右
Topic Starter
Maboyu

ts8zs wrote:

To other diffs
01:29:069 - spinner ends here 不~~
00:51:323 - soft的clap违和感少一些 蠻喜歡這個音效說>.<
01:05:287 - soft的clap违和感少一些 ^

Easy
00:25:578 (1) - 加个点控制弧度 這個這樣吧~~
00:39:541 (1) - 尾巴往外偏一点 好!
00:50:014 (3) - 第二个点往下 fixed~~
01:13:141 (2) - 第四个点往右 這個也是....
謝謝包子啊QAQ
smallboat
[General]
  1. None
[Easy]
  1. Easy 01:26:560 - Spinner start
  2. 01:26:560 (1) - 轉盤開頭應該是在大白線,你這好像手滑才放到藍線去了吧 (ZZH的才是正確)
[ZZH's Normal]
  1. Nothing
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:632 (6) - 可以用個ctrl+g試試,感覺00:28:197 (4,5,6) - 會比較順。
[Karen's Story]
  1. Possibly off-screen objects : 00:44:778 (1)
  2. 01:02:887 (2) - 是故意放的? 看起來這空拍note pattern擺的好粗糙
  3. 01:16:851 (2) - 同上
Topic Starter
Maboyu

smallboat wrote:

[General]
  1. None
[Easy]
  1. Easy 01:26:560 - Spinner start 修了
  2. 01:26:560 (1) - 轉盤開頭應該是在大白線,你這好像手滑才放到藍線去了吧 (ZZH的才是正確) 啊!手滑了....

[Hard]
  1. 00:28:632 (6) - 可以用個ctrl+g試試,感覺00:28:197 (4,5,6) - 會比較順。 這樣的確順 改了~~
謝船業~~~:3
Karen

ts8zs wrote:

Karen
00:14:014 (3,4,5) - 这里手动摆比堆叠好
00:27:541 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5217487 感觉逆flow比较有意思
00:54:596 (4) - 360 220 00:54:814 (5) - 472 76 00:55:032 (6) - 472 168 为啥
01:16:196 (1) - 修一下
01:29:069 - spinner ends here 不好吧

smallboat wrote:

[Karen's Story]
  1. Possibly off-screen objects : 00:44:778 (1)
  2. 01:02:887 (2) - 是故意放的? 看起來這空拍note pattern擺的好粗糙 是故意的,01:02:232 - 配合这个重音感觉很舒服
  3. 01:16:851 (2) - 同上 ^
谢mod~

另外好像上次漏传了个音效,这次加上了 o.o http://puu.sh/p2lr8/19023dc3fa.zip
smallboat
Fine Bubbled
Sonnyc
00:58:305 - 01:02:887 - 01:12:269 - 01:14:669 - 01:15:105 - Consider adding finish here according to the music.
SPOILER
22:48 Sonnyc: 00:21:651 (1) - This sv change was too sudden imo. Perhaps something like 1.3x would fit, but 1.5x was too much for me.
22:49 Sonnyc: 01:22:960 (5,1) - This jump was too big compared to the overall diff. 01:24:487 (4,1) - having no jump lacked some consistency, but the massive jump one could be smalller imo.
Sonnyc
Nominated.
smallboat
Already checked by previous request. Look fine to me. Let it Qualified
Topic Starter
Maboyu

smallboat wrote:

Already checked by previous request. Look fine to me. Let it Qualified
謝船爺:3
tridragon1
Woah, gave my kudos the same day it got qualified. Good stuff :) Grats Aliom  \[ッ]/ 
Underforest
Metadata is bad


from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html

the <> thing is only used on Instrumental song so this should be fixed



Also artist is Luce Twinkle Wink☆ (Romanised: Luce Twinkle Wink*)
IamKwaN
Not sure why people tend not to copy and paste what I have written in the metadata checks requested by them.

IamKwaN wrote:

Subject: Luce Twinkle Wink - 1st Love Story

1
Unicode Title: 1st Love Story<TV size>
Romanised Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?
2
Unicode Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Romanised Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?
3
Title: 1st Love Story TV size
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?

References:
http://puu.sh/oZyHa/6cf9b2337a.png from https://luce-twinkle-wink.com/discography]
http://puu.sh/oZyIg/7806528b68.png from http://db2.nbcuni.co.jp/contents/hp0004 ... oCon=33184
http://puu.sh/oZyIY/6eabd2859c.png from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html
http://puu.sh/oZyJX/d4c87809b5.png from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Maboyu
駿馬

IamKwaN wrote:

Not sure why people tend not to copy and paste what I have written in the metadata checks requested by them.

IamKwaN wrote:

Subject: Luce Twinkle Wink - 1st Love Story

[box=1]Unicode Title: 1st Love Story<TV size>
Romanised Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?
2
Unicode Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Romanised Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?
3
Title: 1st Love Story TV size
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?

References:
http://puu.sh/oZyHa/6cf9b2337a.png from https://luce-twinkle-wink.com/discography]
http://puu.sh/oZyIg/7806528b68.png from http://db2.nbcuni.co.jp/contents/hp0004 ... oCon=33184
http://puu.sh/oZyIY/6eabd2859c.png from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html
http://puu.sh/oZyJX/d4c87809b5.png from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html

Good luck!
我的錯啊QAQ.....駿馬大老爺給的東西我竟然沒看清楚....
謝謝駿馬>.<
smallboat
Rebubbled
Sonnyc
I already qualified something today.
Yuii-
Should I help you?
Topic Starter
Maboyu

Sonnyc wrote:

I already qualified something today.

sorry Sonnyc and smallboat
Sorry,it is my wrong to hurt you!QAQ
Topic Starter
Maboyu

Yuii- wrote:

Should I help you?
yes QAQ
Yuii-
I was asking Sonnyc cause he qualified it and I was kinda waiting for his reply haha.

Anyway, just a really really short mod:

00:32:123 (1) - (on Easy) What is this following? Haha. What do you think about something like http://puu.sh/pioJn/5dfaf93e2c.jpg ?
01:05:069 (4,5) - (on Hard) Can you avoid this stack? It's literally the only stack you use on the Kiais and it's kinda sad to only use one, I'd definitely split them.

(I would also like to tell Karen something but he isn't here, sooo nevermind).
Topic Starter
Maboyu

Yuii- wrote:

I was asking Sonnyc cause he qualified it and I was kinda waiting for his reply haha.

Anyway, just a really really short mod:

00:32:123 (1) - (on Easy) What is this following? Haha. What do you think about something like http://puu.sh/pioJn/5dfaf93e2c.jpg ?good idea~~ fixed this:3
01:05:069 (4,5) - (on Hard) Can you avoid this stack? It's literally the only stack you use on the Kiais and it's kinda sad to only use one, I'd definitely split them. sorry,this i am not fixed...

(I would also like to tell Karen something but he isn't here, sooo nevermind).
thank you mod:3
Fycho
Before it goes again, something about metadata needs to be fixed after a discsuusion with IamKwaN.

On romanised artist, there doesn't need to add " * ", just use Luce Twinkle Wink, but unicode artist keeps the ☆ in it.

Topic Starter
Maboyu

Fycho wrote:

Before it goes again, something about metadata needs to be fixed after a discsuusion with IamKwaN.

On romanised artist, there doesn't need to add " * ", just use Luce Twinkle Wink, but unicode artist keeps the ☆ in it.


ok fixed~
Sonnyc
Nominated.
smallboat
Re-qualified again.
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