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Luce Twinkle Wink - 1st Love Story <TV size>

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AgeSheRi
55 posts
Joined May 2013
AgeSheRi
story

00:19:251 (3,4,1) - 这里不太好看 试试这样呗？-> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5167391

00:26:014 (2) - 可以包在1里面。。啊小夏恋这样也可以就是了。。

00:27:978 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这一组跳不咋好看 00:29:069 (3) 叠到00:29:505 (1) - 更符合节奏大概

00:29:941 (2,3,4,1,2) - 这里节奏有一点微妙 00:30:596 (4) - 删了 然后 00:30:814 (1) - 挪过来变成折返怎么样啊

00:32:778 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一段很多跳+五连有点难了 00:33:432 (5) - 换成辣条？

00:50:014 (1) - 和00:50:451 (2,3,4,5) - 叠成等距吧？

01:23:832 (1) - 反一下好玩

就是要 萌萌二次元 萌萌女主 萌萌的歌
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu
Hiicantpk

Hiicantpk wrote:

Heyo. From my queue

Dang I need to catch up on the episodes for this. I'm a few behind.

Easy
  1. 00:09:651 (2) - Imo sounds better with the repeat at 00:10:087 and a note added at 00:11:178 ok fix~
  2. 00:32:123 (1) - Shorten this slider so the repeat is on the down beat, add a note at 00:33:432 I think the original is better
Hard
  1. 00:20:996 (3,4,5) - I'm not hearing anything on the 1/4 here. No need for the triplet. this is need for the triplet
  2. 00:50:669 (2) - The vocals that this is trying to follow are on the red tic, not the blue tic this slider ends on, shorten it a bit. no change
  3. 00:58:523 (5,1) - This jump is a bit sudden. Any way you could reduce the jump distance here? indeed,i need to some time to revise here
  4. 01:17:396 (2,3,4) - Again, theres no 1/4 here. no.....
  5. 01:22:960 (5,1) - Jumps a little too large. I think it is not hard...
  6. 01:23:832 (2,3,4) - Theres no 1/4 here same
thank you:3

愛撫

yf_bmp wrote:

[Hard]
00:42:814 (1) - 尴尬的形状 真的~~~~XD

好像别的没什么问题
謝謝愛撫啊~~:3

Vanillas

Vanillas wrote:

From my queue
先膜拜一群神麻婆

[Easy]
  1. 00:31:251 (4,1) - 不是太懂这里的采音，感觉就像前边一样跟vocal来就好，虽然后边也放了这种节奏，但是后边的还好，这里违和感太强了 覺得還好..
  2. 00:35:178 (4) - 我觉得可以换个折返，中间漏的音不采好难受 真的...改了:3
  3. 00:36:051 (5) - NC 阿勒~~我竟然漏了... fixed
  4. 00:39:541 (3) - 不太好看，直接一个弧就行 感覺還好..
  5. 00:43:032 (2) - 在前一个白线结束就行啊，拉到这里不太懂 強迫跟vocal吧XD
  6. 01:13:141 (2,3) - Blanket fixed
  7. 01:16:632 (1) - 还是，这种节奏EZ虽然挺好，但是有些地方违和感真挺强 這個先保留~
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:905 add a note ? 不
  2. 00:58:523 (5,1) - 太远了啊 的確...
  3. 01:08:560 (4,1) - blanket fixed
  4. 01:16:851 (2,3,4) - 三连多余了感觉 會嗎....
  5. 01:23:832 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
没啥说的。。。帮不上就不用给KD了
謝謝mod :3

-NanoRIPE-

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~

[Easy]
00:15:323 - spinner? no...
00:57:869 (3) - add finish ok
00:58:305 (4) - ^ this is not finish...

[ZZH's Normal]
00:19:251 (1) - add finish no
00:20:123 (4) - ^ ok add
00:42:814 (1) - add clap no
00:48:269 (5) - add finish add
00:49:141 (6) - ^ ^
00:50:014 (1) - ^ ^
ZZH's Normal Sound i revise...

[Hard]
00:42:814 (1) - add finish ok
00:48:269 (1) - ^ add:3
00:49:141 (2) - ^ and remove clap add and remove clap
00:50:014 (3) - add finish adddddddddd

Good Luck ~ :D
Thank you mod :D
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen

NextNaix wrote:

story

00:19:251 (3,4,1) - 这里不太好看 试试这样呗？-> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5167391 就是要跟00:18:596 (1,3) - 平行

00:26:014 (2) - 可以包在1里面。。啊小夏恋这样也可以就是了。。 都包不好看，多样化一点

00:27:978 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这一组跳不咋好看 00:29:069 (3) 叠到00:29:505 (1) - 更符合节奏大概 移远了

00:29:941 (2,3,4,1,2) - 这里节奏有一点微妙 00:30:596 (4) - 删了 然后 00:30:814 (1) - 挪过来变成折返怎么样啊

00:32:778 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一段很多跳+五连有点难了 00:33:432 (5) - 换成辣条？ 挺合曲的啊不改了

00:50:014 (1) - 和00:50:451 (2,3,4,5) - 叠成等距吧？

01:23:832 (1) - 反一下好玩 感觉不够跳

就是要 萌萌二次元 萌萌女主 萌萌的歌
other mods all fixed

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434,357,52632,2,0,L|325:345,1,85,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,277,53069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
265,362,53287,6,0,L|372:343,1,85,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
466,194,53723,2,0,P|472:235|459:294,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,119,54160,2,0,P|375:77|388:18,1,85,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
466,194,54596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
277,109,54814,1,8,0:0:0:0:
477,82,55032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
277,109,55251,6,0,B|217:84|198:127|198:127|218:155|215:177|210:215,1,170,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,305,55905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
97,300,56014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,295,56123,1,4,0:3:0:0:
202,366,56341,1,2,0:0:0:0:
211,201,56560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,295,56778,6,0,L|185:283,1,85,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
342,326,57214,1,2,0:0:0:0:
211,201,57432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,381,57651,1,2,0:0:0:0:
307,231,57869,2,0,B|321:197|315:168|293:131|293:131|320:102|353:132,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,187,58523,1,2,0:0:0:0:
391,45,58741,6,0,P|306:20|226:65,1,170,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,126,59396,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,100,59505,1,2,0:0:0:0:
93,74,59614,1,4,0:3:0:0:
186,168,59832,1,2,0:0:0:0:
15,231,60051,1,8,0:0:0:0:
186,168,60269,6,0,L|276:161,1,85,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
99,126,60705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
142,271,60923,2,0,L|232:264,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,203,61360,2,0,P|390:160|377:106,1,85,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,291,61796,1,8,0:0:0:0:
323,291,62014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
270,161,62232,6,0,L|98:157,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,303,62887,1,4,0:0:0:0:
81,329,63323,1,4,0:3:0:0:
105,334,63432,1,4,0:3:0:0:
130,338,63541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
170,218,63760,6,0,P|100:249|13:197,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,218,64414,1,8,0:0:0:0:
130,338,64632,1,4,0:3:0:0:
99,136,64851,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,111,64960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,86,65069,6,0,L|56:90,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,54,65287,2,0,L|128:58,1,42.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,21,65505,2,0,L|203:25,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,18,65723,6,0,P|273:38|281:116,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,135,66378,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,152,66487,1,2,0:0:0:0:
483,168,66596,2,0,L|489:61,1,85,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,197,67032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
446,264,67251,6,0,P|491:272|537:258,1,85,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
375,331,67687,2,0,P|330:323|284:337,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,242,68123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
215,242,68341,1,4,0:3:0:0:
306,168,68560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,196,68778,2,0,P|111:238|118:283,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,97,69214,6,0,P|67:111|38:149,1,85,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,145,69651,2,0,L|332:135,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,165,70087,1,4,0:3:0:0:
393,22,70305,2,0,P|380:63|391:114,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
495,273,70741,6,0,P|501:314|488:354,1,85,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
329,290,71178,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,194,71396,1,8,0:0:0:0:
391,365,71614,1,2,0:0:0:0:
226,286,71832,2,0,B|190:252|148:266|148:266|113:309|54:302,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,200,72487,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,382,72705,6,0,L|304:363,1,85,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,217,73141,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,265,73360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
235,262,73469,1,2,0:0:0:0:
209,258,73578,1,4,0:3:0:0:
79,165,73796,2,0,P|85:109|76:77,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,262,74232,2,0,L|121:352,1,85,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
186,188,74669,5,2,0:0:0:0:
217,60,74887,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,281,75105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,101,75323,2,0,P|325:56|313:8,1,85,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,176,75760,1,8,0:0:0:0:
477,58,75978,1,2,0:0:0:0:
393,176,76196,6,0,B|375:220|371:273|422:293|422:293|451:249,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,321,76851,1,4,0:0:0:0:
302,347,77287,1,4,0:3:0:0:
326,354,77396,1,4,0:3:0:0:
350,362,77505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
242,249,77723,6,0,B|197:225|197:225|216:265|216:308|188:354,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,347,78378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
103,280,78596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
242,249,78814,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,224,78923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,198,79032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,173,79141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,148,79251,1,8,0:0:0:0:
269,123,79360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,98,79469,2,0,L|244:79,2,28.3333333333333,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,123,79687,6,0,L|86:115,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,249,80341,1,2,0:0:0:0:
53,240,80451,1,2,0:0:0:0:
77,231,80560,1,4,0:3:0:0:
6,154,80778,2,0,P|-2:99|15:53,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,202,81214,6,0,P|232:244|158:273,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,231,81869,1,8,0:0:0:0:
145,384,82087,2,0,L|327:345,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,264,82741,1,8,0:0:0:0:
411,366,82960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,177,83178,6,0,P|337:124|317:197,1,170,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
399,161,83832,6,0,P|329:107|291:188,1,203.999993774414,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
366,257,84487,1,8,0:0:0:0:
499,167,84705,6,0,B|501:38|501:38|466:84,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,257,85360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
499,167,85578,1,8,0:0:0:0:
339,127,85796,1,2,0:0:0:0:
303,103,85905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,97,86014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
223,118,86123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,158,86232,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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108,46,86669,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86778,12,0,89287,0:0:0:0:
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
Karen
00:14:014 (3,4,5) - 这里手动摆比堆叠好
00:27:541 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5217487
00:54:596 (4) - 360 220 00:54:814 (5) - 472 76 00:55:032 (6) - 472 168
01:16:196 (1) - 修一下
01:29:069 - spinner ends here

To other diffs
01:29:069 - spinner ends here
00:51:323 - soft的clap违和感少一些
01:05:287 - soft的clap违和感少一些

Easy
00:25:578 (1) - 加个点控制弧度
00:39:541 (1) - 尾巴往外偏一点
00:50:014 (3) - 第二个点往下
01:13:141 (2) - 第四个点往右
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

ts8zs wrote:

To other diffs
01:29:069 - spinner ends here 不~~
00:51:323 - soft的clap违和感少一些 蠻喜歡這個音效說>.<
01:05:287 - soft的clap违和感少一些 ^

Easy
00:25:578 (1) - 加个点控制弧度 這個這樣吧~~
00:39:541 (1) - 尾巴往外偏一点 好!
00:50:014 (3) - 第二个点往下 fixed~~
01:13:141 (2) - 第四个点往右 這個也是....
謝謝包子啊QAQ
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
[General]
  1. None
[Easy]
  1. Easy 01:26:560 - Spinner start
  2. 01:26:560 (1) - 轉盤開頭應該是在大白線，你這好像手滑才放到藍線去了吧 (ZZH的才是正確)
[ZZH's Normal]
  1. Nothing
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:632 (6) - 可以用個ctrl+g試試，感覺00:28:197 (4,5,6) - 會比較順。
[Karen's Story]
  1. Possibly off-screen objects : 00:44:778 (1)
  2. 01:02:887 (2) - 是故意放的? 看起來這空拍note pattern擺的好粗糙
  3. 01:16:851 (2) - 同上
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

smallboat wrote:

[General]
  1. None
[Easy]
  1. Easy 01:26:560 - Spinner start 修了
  2. 01:26:560 (1) - 轉盤開頭應該是在大白線，你這好像手滑才放到藍線去了吧 (ZZH的才是正確) 啊!手滑了....

[Hard]
  1. 00:28:632 (6) - 可以用個ctrl+g試試，感覺00:28:197 (4,5,6) - 會比較順。 這樣的確順 改了~~
謝船業~~~:3
Karen
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Joined August 2013
Karen

ts8zs wrote:

Karen
00:14:014 (3,4,5) - 这里手动摆比堆叠好
00:27:541 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5217487 感觉逆flow比较有意思
00:54:596 (4) - 360 220 00:54:814 (5) - 472 76 00:55:032 (6) - 472 168 为啥
01:16:196 (1) - 修一下
01:29:069 - spinner ends here 不好吧

smallboat wrote:

[Karen's Story]
  1. Possibly off-screen objects : 00:44:778 (1)
  2. 01:02:887 (2) - 是故意放的? 看起來這空拍note pattern擺的好粗糙 是故意的，01:02:232 - 配合这个重音感觉很舒服
  3. 01:16:851 (2) - 同上 ^
谢mod~

另外好像上次漏传了个音效，这次加上了 o.o http://puu.sh/p2lr8/19023dc3fa.zip
smallboat
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smallboat
Fine Bubbled
Sonnyc
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Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
00:58:305 - 01:02:887 - 01:12:269 - 01:14:669 - 01:15:105 - Consider adding finish here according to the music.
SPOILER
22:48 Sonnyc: 00:21:651 (1) - This sv change was too sudden imo. Perhaps something like 1.3x would fit, but 1.5x was too much for me.
22:49 Sonnyc: 01:22:960 (5,1) - This jump was too big compared to the overall diff. 01:24:487 (4,1) - having no jump lacked some consistency, but the massive jump one could be smalller imo.
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
Nominated.
smallboat
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Joined January 2010
smallboat
Already checked by previous request. Look fine to me. Let it Qualified
Maboyu
373 posts
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Topic Starter
Maboyu

smallboat wrote:

Already checked by previous request. Look fine to me. Let it Qualified
謝船爺:3
tridragon1
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tridragon1
Woah, gave my kudos the same day it got qualified. Good stuff :) Grats Aliom 　\[ッ]/　
Underforest
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Joined July 2015
Underforest
Metadata is bad


from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html

the ＜＞ thing is only used on Instrumental song so this should be fixed



Also artist is Luce Twinkle Wink☆ (Romanised: Luce Twinkle Wink*)
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
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IamKwaN
Not sure why people tend not to copy and paste what I have written in the metadata checks requested by them.

IamKwaN wrote:

Subject: Luce Twinkle Wink - 1st Love Story

1
Unicode Title: 1st Love Story＜TV size＞
Romanised Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った？
2
Unicode Title: 1st Love Story ＜TV size＞
Romanised Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った？
3
Title: 1st Love Story TV size
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った？

References:
http://puu.sh/oZyHa/6cf9b2337a.png from https://luce-twinkle-wink.com/discography]
http://puu.sh/oZyIg/7806528b68.png from http://db2.nbcuni.co.jp/contents/hp0004 ... oCon=33184
http://puu.sh/oZyIY/6eabd2859c.png from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html
http://puu.sh/oZyJX/d4c87809b5.png from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html

Good luck!
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu
駿馬

IamKwaN wrote:

Not sure why people tend not to copy and paste what I have written in the metadata checks requested by them.

IamKwaN wrote:

Subject: Luce Twinkle Wink - 1st Love Story

[box=1]Unicode Title: 1st Love Story＜TV size＞
Romanised Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った？
2
Unicode Title: 1st Love Story ＜TV size＞
Romanised Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った？
3
Title: 1st Love Story TV size
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った？

References:
http://puu.sh/oZyHa/6cf9b2337a.png from https://luce-twinkle-wink.com/discography]
http://puu.sh/oZyIg/7806528b68.png from http://db2.nbcuni.co.jp/contents/hp0004 ... oCon=33184
http://puu.sh/oZyIY/6eabd2859c.png from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html
http://puu.sh/oZyJX/d4c87809b5.png from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html

Good luck!
我的錯啊QAQ.....駿馬大老爺給的東西我竟然沒看清楚....
謝謝駿馬>.<
smallboat
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smallboat
Rebubbled
Sonnyc
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Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
I already qualified something today.
Yuii-
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Yuii-
Should I help you?
Maboyu
373 posts
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Topic Starter
Maboyu

Sonnyc wrote:

I already qualified something today.

sorry Sonnyc and smallboat
Sorry,it is my wrong to hurt you!QAQ
Maboyu
373 posts
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Topic Starter
Maboyu

Yuii- wrote:

Should I help you?
yes QAQ
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Yuii-
2,503 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-
I was asking Sonnyc cause he qualified it and I was kinda waiting for his reply haha.

Anyway, just a really really short mod:

00:32:123 (1) - (on Easy) What is this following? Haha. What do you think about something like http://puu.sh/pioJn/5dfaf93e2c.jpg ?
01:05:069 (4,5) - (on Hard) Can you avoid this stack? It's literally the only stack you use on the Kiais and it's kinda sad to only use one, I'd definitely split them.

(I would also like to tell Karen something but he isn't here, sooo nevermind).
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

Yuii- wrote:

I was asking Sonnyc cause he qualified it and I was kinda waiting for his reply haha.

Anyway, just a really really short mod:

00:32:123 (1) - (on Easy) What is this following? Haha. What do you think about something like http://puu.sh/pioJn/5dfaf93e2c.jpg ?good idea~~ fixed this:3
01:05:069 (4,5) - (on Hard) Can you avoid this stack? It's literally the only stack you use on the Kiais and it's kinda sad to only use one, I'd definitely split them. sorry,this i am not fixed...

(I would also like to tell Karen something but he isn't here, sooo nevermind).
thank you mod:3
Fycho
Global Moderator
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Fycho
Before it goes again, something about metadata needs to be fixed after a discsuusion with IamKwaN.

On romanised artist, there doesn't need to add " * ", just use Luce Twinkle Wink, but unicode artist keeps the ☆ in it.

reference
http://puu.sh/piusP/c88bb68b07.png
http://puu.sh/piutO/5a5862880d.jpg

https://luce-twinkle-wink.com/
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

Fycho wrote:

Before it goes again, something about metadata needs to be fixed after a discsuusion with IamKwaN.

On romanised artist, there doesn't need to add " * ", just use Luce Twinkle Wink, but unicode artist keeps the ☆ in it.

reference
http://puu.sh/piusP/c88bb68b07.png
http://puu.sh/piutO/5a5862880d.jpg

https://luce-twinkle-wink.com/

ok fixed~
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
Nominated.
smallboat
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Re-qualified again.
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