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NextNaix wrote:

story

00:19:251 (3,4,1) - 这里不太好看 试试这样呗?-> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5167391 就是要跟00:18:596 (1,3) - 平行

00:26:014 (2) - 可以包在1里面。。啊小夏恋这样也可以就是了。。 都包不好看,多样化一点

00:27:978 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这一组跳不咋好看 00:29:069 (3) 叠到00:29:505 (1) - 更符合节奏大概 移远了

00:29:941 (2,3,4,1,2) - 这里节奏有一点微妙 00:30:596 (4) - 删了 然后 00:30:814 (1) - 挪过来变成折返怎么样啊

00:32:778 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一段很多跳+五连有点难了 00:33:432 (5) - 换成辣条? 挺合曲的啊不改了

00:50:014 (1) - 和00:50:451 (2,3,4,5) - 叠成等距吧?

01:23:832 (1) - 反一下好玩 感觉不够跳

就是要 萌萌二次元 萌萌女主 萌萌的歌
other mods all fixed

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50669
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:1st Love Story
TitleUnicode:1st Love Story
Artist:Luce Twinkle Wink
ArtistUnicode:Luce Twinkle Wink
Creator:AliomLoung
Version:Karen's Story
Source:ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?
Tags:opening Karen ZZHBOY
BeatmapID:960304
BeatmapSetID:447245

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OverallDifficulty:7
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211,145,69651,2,0,L|332:135,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,165,70087,1,4,0:3:0:0:
393,22,70305,2,0,P|380:63|391:114,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
495,273,70741,6,0,P|501:314|488:354,1,85,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
329,290,71178,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,194,71396,1,8,0:0:0:0:
391,365,71614,1,2,0:0:0:0:
226,286,71832,2,0,B|190:252|148:266|148:266|113:309|54:302,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,200,72487,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,382,72705,6,0,L|304:363,1,85,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,217,73141,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,265,73360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
235,262,73469,1,2,0:0:0:0:
209,258,73578,1,4,0:3:0:0:
79,165,73796,2,0,P|85:109|76:77,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,262,74232,2,0,L|121:352,1,85,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
186,188,74669,5,2,0:0:0:0:
217,60,74887,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,281,75105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,101,75323,2,0,P|325:56|313:8,1,85,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,176,75760,1,8,0:0:0:0:
477,58,75978,1,2,0:0:0:0:
393,176,76196,6,0,B|375:220|371:273|422:293|422:293|451:249,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,321,76851,1,4,0:0:0:0:
302,347,77287,1,4,0:3:0:0:
326,354,77396,1,4,0:3:0:0:
350,362,77505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
242,249,77723,6,0,B|197:225|197:225|216:265|216:308|188:354,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,347,78378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
103,280,78596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
242,249,78814,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,224,78923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,198,79032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,173,79141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,148,79251,1,8,0:0:0:0:
269,123,79360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,98,79469,2,0,L|244:79,2,28.3333333333333,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,123,79687,6,0,L|86:115,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,249,80341,1,2,0:0:0:0:
53,240,80451,1,2,0:0:0:0:
77,231,80560,1,4,0:3:0:0:
6,154,80778,2,0,P|-2:99|15:53,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,202,81214,6,0,P|232:244|158:273,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,231,81869,1,8,0:0:0:0:
145,384,82087,2,0,L|327:345,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,264,82741,1,8,0:0:0:0:
411,366,82960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,177,83178,6,0,P|337:124|317:197,1,170,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
399,161,83832,6,0,P|329:107|291:188,1,203.999993774414,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
366,257,84487,1,8,0:0:0:0:
499,167,84705,6,0,B|501:38|501:38|466:84,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,257,85360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
499,167,85578,1,8,0:0:0:0:
339,127,85796,1,2,0:0:0:0:
303,103,85905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,97,86014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
223,118,86123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,158,86232,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,112,86378,2,0,L|97:69,3,28.3333333333333,0|2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,46,86669,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86778,12,0,89287,0:0:0:0:
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Karen
00:14:014 (3,4,5) - 这里手动摆比堆叠好
00:27:541 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5217487
00:54:596 (4) - 360 220 00:54:814 (5) - 472 76 00:55:032 (6) - 472 168
01:16:196 (1) - 修一下
01:29:069 - spinner ends here

To other diffs
01:29:069 - spinner ends here
00:51:323 - soft的clap违和感少一些
01:05:287 - soft的clap违和感少一些

Easy
00:25:578 (1) - 加个点控制弧度
00:39:541 (1) - 尾巴往外偏一点
00:50:014 (3) - 第二个点往下
01:13:141 (2) - 第四个点往右
posted

ts8zs wrote:

To other diffs
01:29:069 - spinner ends here 不~~
00:51:323 - soft的clap违和感少一些 蠻喜歡這個音效說>.<
01:05:287 - soft的clap违和感少一些 ^

Easy
00:25:578 (1) - 加个点控制弧度 這個這樣吧~~
00:39:541 (1) - 尾巴往外偏一点 好!
00:50:014 (3) - 第二个点往下 fixed~~
01:13:141 (2) - 第四个点往右 這個也是....
謝謝包子啊QAQ
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[General]
  1. None
[Easy]
  1. Easy 01:26:560 - Spinner start
  2. 01:26:560 (1) - 轉盤開頭應該是在大白線,你這好像手滑才放到藍線去了吧 (ZZH的才是正確)
[ZZH's Normal]
  1. Nothing
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:632 (6) - 可以用個ctrl+g試試,感覺00:28:197 (4,5,6) - 會比較順。
[Karen's Story]
  1. Possibly off-screen objects : 00:44:778 (1)
  2. 01:02:887 (2) - 是故意放的? 看起來這空拍note pattern擺的好粗糙
  3. 01:16:851 (2) - 同上
posted

smallboat wrote:

[General]
  1. None
[Easy]
  1. Easy 01:26:560 - Spinner start 修了
  2. 01:26:560 (1) - 轉盤開頭應該是在大白線,你這好像手滑才放到藍線去了吧 (ZZH的才是正確) 啊!手滑了....

[Hard]
  1. 00:28:632 (6) - 可以用個ctrl+g試試,感覺00:28:197 (4,5,6) - 會比較順。 這樣的確順 改了~~
謝船業~~~:3
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ts8zs wrote:

Karen
00:14:014 (3,4,5) - 这里手动摆比堆叠好
00:27:541 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5217487 感觉逆flow比较有意思
00:54:596 (4) - 360 220 00:54:814 (5) - 472 76 00:55:032 (6) - 472 168 为啥
01:16:196 (1) - 修一下
01:29:069 - spinner ends here 不好吧

smallboat wrote:

[Karen's Story]
  1. Possibly off-screen objects : 00:44:778 (1)
  2. 01:02:887 (2) - 是故意放的? 看起來這空拍note pattern擺的好粗糙 是故意的,01:02:232 - 配合这个重音感觉很舒服
  3. 01:16:851 (2) - 同上 ^
谢mod~

另外好像上次漏传了个音效,这次加上了 o.o http://puu.sh/p2lr8/19023dc3fa.zip
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Fine Bubbled
posted
00:58:305 - 01:02:887 - 01:12:269 - 01:14:669 - 01:15:105 - Consider adding finish here according to the music.
22:48 Sonnyc: 00:21:651 (1) - This sv change was too sudden imo. Perhaps something like 1.3x would fit, but 1.5x was too much for me.
22:49 Sonnyc: 01:22:960 (5,1) - This jump was too big compared to the overall diff. 01:24:487 (4,1) - having no jump lacked some consistency, but the massive jump one could be smalller imo.
posted
Nominated.
posted
Already checked by previous request. Look fine to me. Let it Qualified
posted

smallboat wrote:

Already checked by previous request. Look fine to me. Let it Qualified
謝船爺:3
posted
Woah, gave my kudos the same day it got qualified. Good stuff :) Grats Aliom  \[ッ]/ 
posted
Metadata is bad


from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html

the <> thing is only used on Instrumental song so this should be fixed



Also artist is Luce Twinkle Wink☆ (Romanised: Luce Twinkle Wink*)
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Not sure why people tend not to copy and paste what I have written in the metadata checks requested by them.

IamKwaN wrote:

Subject: Luce Twinkle Wink - 1st Love Story

Unicode Title: 1st Love Story<TV size>
Romanised Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?
Unicode Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Romanised Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?
Title: 1st Love Story TV size
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?


References:
http://puu.sh/oZyHa/6cf9b2337a.png from https://luce-twinkle-wink.com/discography]
http://puu.sh/oZyIg/7806528b68.png from http://db2.nbcuni.co.jp/contents/hp0004 ... oCon=33184
http://puu.sh/oZyIY/6eabd2859c.png from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html
http://puu.sh/oZyJX/d4c87809b5.png from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html

Good luck!
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IamKwaN wrote:

Not sure why people tend not to copy and paste what I have written in the metadata checks requested by them.

IamKwaN wrote:

Subject: Luce Twinkle Wink - 1st Love Story

Unicode Title: 1st Love Story<TV size>
Romanised Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?
Unicode Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Romanised Title: 1st Love Story <TV size>
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?
Title: 1st Love Story TV size
Unicode Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink☆
Romanised Artist: Luce Twinkle Wink*
Source: ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?


References:
http://puu.sh/oZyHa/6cf9b2337a.png from https://luce-twinkle-wink.com/discography]
http://puu.sh/oZyIg/7806528b68.png from http://db2.nbcuni.co.jp/contents/hp0004 ... oCon=33184
http://puu.sh/oZyIY/6eabd2859c.png from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html
http://puu.sh/oZyJX/d4c87809b5.png from http://netogenoyome.com/goods/cd/openingtheme.html

Good luck!
我的錯啊QAQ.....駿馬大老爺給的東西我竟然沒看清楚....
謝謝駿馬>.<
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Rebubbled
posted
I already qualified something today.
posted
Should I help you?
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Sonnyc wrote:

I already qualified something today.
sorry Sonnyc and smallboat
Sorry,it is my wrong to hurt you!QAQ
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Yuii- wrote:

Should I help you?
yes QAQ
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