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嗨嗨,拖了這麼久我終於來了(逃

Easy
00:01:142 (1,2) - 感覺這兩個可以微調,讓00:02:451 (2) - 覆蓋在00:04:632 (1) - 的開頭比較順的感覺
00:08:123 (1) - 也許紅點以後的地方可以彎一下?
00:38:669 (2) - 再彎一點好像比較好看
ZZH's Normal
00:28:196 (7,8) - 換成ㄧ個迴轉的滑條打起來會不會比較容易?
01:04:632 (7,8) - 這裡的節奏我覺得這樣下可能更好 :3
Hard
00:52:414 (2,3) - ctrl+g?

感覺沒啥問題~
Karen's Story
00:08:778 (2,3) - ctrl+g? 這裡有個長音不跟好像有點可惜...
00:15:105 (1) - 覺得不太好看不過這只是我個人偏見 :? 也許能讓他有點對稱?
00:51:323 (1) - 我覺得這裡應該加速 :?
01:19:360 (9) - 這個圓圈好像歪掉了?
沒啥問題大概就這些
GL~ :)
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DreaM117er wrote:

1st. m4m~

[General]
  1. "soft-hitwhistle2.wav", "soft-sliderslide2.wav"沒用到以刪掉~
[Easy]

  • 00:01:142 (1) - 一開始就逆flow不太好吧,順順的走比較不容易被抓 摁....這個先保留~~
    00:11:614 (1,2) - 不太好,既然都跟著重音了。那就把重音用三個note分開來比較好,大概這樣↓ 這個改了~

    00:46:087 (5) - 不要疊前面的滑條尾,順著放下面

    00:50:014 (3,4) - 感覺頭尾這兩個位置拉一個長滑條比較好 好~
  1. 我看後面感覺還...應該還好。01:23:178 - 這裡盡量跟那個比較明顯的重音才比較容易把歌曲的感覺做出來,你可以自己研究看看。畢竟我這是1st mod,給太多後面就不用摸了 這個也改了:3

[Hard]

  • 00:01:142 (1,2) - 折返1/1開頭,你應該會喜歡 不太喜歡...
    00:10:305 (2,3) - circle在前 好~
    00:18:596 (1,2) - 有沒有想過用折返?? 沒有.....QAQ
    00:32:342 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+G,這節奏你應該會喜歡 改了~
    00:46:960 (2,3) - ^改了~
    00:50:996 (3) - 改成紅線位置一個circle吧,現在這樣放反而不太清楚你在跟什麼 (雖然我知道www) 以修改
    01:26:669 - 結尾在這裡,放個note再接轉盤 好~
  1. 中間節奏怪怪的我沒點出來,你可以自己研究下
害怕。
感謝117QAQ

Lily Bread wrote:

as request

[Easy]
感觉怪怪的,不过又说不出什么具体的东西来... 我也覺得怪怪的......


[Hard]
嗯...我想问问你的这些三连是什么时候加,什么时候不加的...
别的没找到什么特别的,只想问问这个 這個喔.........我也不知道QAQ


找不到什么呢...
good luck
Thank you :3

09kami wrote:

09kami wrote:

来着人给给的神秘力量

没啥可以摸的 帮不上就不用给KD了


[Hard]

00:28:414 (5) - 这个叠在00:27:541 (2) - 的尾巴上会更加流畅和顺手 這個先保留~

00:41:287 (1,3) - 这两个重音的音量几乎是一样的 如果后面的3要跳的话 我建议最好前面的1也放远点 ^

謝謝MOD>.<

bigfrog wrote:

嗨嗨,拖了這麼久我終於來了(逃 >.<

Easy
00:01:142 (1,2) - 感覺這兩個可以微調,讓00:02:451 (2) - 覆蓋在00:04:632 (1) - 的開頭比較順的感覺 好喔~~~修改了:3
00:08:123 (1) - 也許紅點以後的地方可以彎一下? 這個暫時先這樣唄....
00:38:669 (2) - 再彎一點好像比較好看 好~
Hard
00:52:414 (2,3) - ctrl+g? 好~~改了:3

感覺沒啥問題~

沒啥問題大概就這些

GL~ :)
謝謝大蛙:3
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Heyo. From my queue

Dang I need to catch up on the episodes for this. I'm a few behind.

Easy
  1. 00:09:651 (2) - Imo sounds better with the repeat at 00:10:087 and a note added at 00:11:178
  2. 00:32:123 (1) - Shorten this slider so the repeat is on the down beat, add a note at 00:33:432


Normal
  1. You want higher distance spacing throughout the map, right now it feels really cramped at 0.8. Try 1.2 or 1.3
  2. 00:11:396 - You could probably add a note here for the vocals, threw me off that you skipped this half beat after mapping them for the past few notes.
  3. 00:31:251 - You can add a note here, the drum kick is fairly noticeable even if you are mapping to the lyrics here.
  4. 01:06:596 (3,4) - Make this into a repeat slider, sounds a little better.
  5. 01:07:905 - Add note here, sounds good.


Hard
  1. 00:20:996 (3,4,5) - I'm not hearing anything on the 1/4 here. No need for the triplet.
  2. 00:50:669 (2) - The vocals that this is trying to follow are on the red tic, not the blue tic this slider ends on, shorten it a bit.
  3. 00:58:523 (5,1) - This jump is a bit sudden. Any way you could reduce the jump distance here?
  4. 01:17:396 (2,3,4) - Again, theres no 1/4 here.
  5. 01:22:960 (5,1) - Jumps a little too large.
  6. 01:23:832 (2,3,4) - Theres no 1/4 here


Story
  1. 00:06:160 (1) , 00:08:123 (1) , 00:15:105 (1) ,etc. Ugly sliders. I'd say redo the ones that are a curve with a straight bit on one end, most of those end up looking kinda bad.
  2. 00:14:014 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I'm not really a fan of how this is mapped here. Maybe try something like this?
  3. 00:20:996 (3,4,5) - The noise on the 1/4 is barely noticable, but my actual problem with this is positioning. Please just stack these notes on eachother.
  4. 00:29:941 (2,4,2) - I see what you're doing here but I feel it would be better if these were simply stacked.
  5. 00:36:051 (1) - Slider is kinda ugly tbh
  6. 00:49:796 (5) - Stack under (3)?
  7. 01:04:851 (4,5,1,2,3) - Pls no. I find this trend of 1/4 sliders as streams to be really annoying.
  8. 01:19:360 (9,10,1) - (1) would probably look better if it was stacked under the repeat of (10) instead of (9)
posted
01:23:832 (1) - 可以跳,為什麼疊起來?? 我觉得这样也有强调的效果,并不是只用跳才能强调重音
01:25:578 (3,4) - 总感觉这中间少了个圈,不知道有没有听错 没有吧
00:50:451 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这个8连的串在3.75的难度会不会太难了 虽然BPM只有138 但这里的间距比较大 感觉之后会被挑 才8连,不难不难
都改了
Story
  1. 00:06:160 (1) , 00:08:123 (1) , 00:15:105 (1) ,etc. Ugly sliders. I'd say redo the ones that are a curve with a straight bit on one end, most of those end up looking kinda bad. its subjective stuff, i like my sliders
  2. 00:14:014 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I'm not really a fan of how this is mapped here. Maybe try something like this? it is hard to read ;w;
  3. 00:29:941 (2,4,2) - I see what you're doing here but I feel it would be better if these were simply stacked. not really different
  4. 00:49:796 (5) - Stack under (3)? it's fun
  5. 01:04:851 (4,5,1,2,3) - Pls no. I find this trend of 1/4 sliders as streams to be really annoying. i like making annoying stuffs :)
  6. 01:19:360 (9,10,1) - (1) would probably look better if it was stacked under the repeat of (10) instead of (9) it would be kinda hard to read



thanks for mods!

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Source:ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?
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posted
[Karen's Story]
00:21:651 (6,7,8,9,1) - 摆好
00:29:069 (3,1) - 间距有些尴尬
00:48:923 - 这里开始可以放3连
01:26:232 (1,2) - 讲道理 这里也是1/6

[Hard]
00:42:814 (1) - 尴尬的形状

好像别的没什么问题
posted

Hiicantpk wrote:

Heyo. From my queue

Dang I need to catch up on the episodes for this. I'm a few behind.

Easy
  1. 00:09:651 (2) - Imo sounds better with the repeat at 00:10:087 and a note added at 00:11:178
  2. 00:32:123 (1) - Shorten this slider so the repeat is on the down beat, add a note at 00:33:432


Normal
  1. You want higher distance spacing throughout the map, right now it feels really cramped at 0.8. Try 1.2 or 1.3 lazy to remap, also 0.8 is fine for me lol
  2. 00:11:396 - You could probably add a note here for the vocals, threw me off that you skipped this half beat after mapping them for the past few notes. i'd like to follow the drum there
  3. 00:31:251 - You can add a note here, the drum kick is fairly noticeable even if you are mapping to the lyrics here. emm i started to followed vocal there so i want to make there be empty
  4. 01:06:596 (3,4) - Make this into a repeat slider, sounds a little better. changed some rhythm and there seems fine now
  5. 01:07:905 - Add note here, sounds good. nope, just followed vocal


Hard
  1. 00:20:996 (3,4,5) - I'm not hearing anything on the 1/4 here. No need for the triplet.
  2. 00:50:669 (2) - The vocals that this is trying to follow are on the red tic, not the blue tic this slider ends on, shorten it a bit.
  3. 00:58:523 (5,1) - This jump is a bit sudden. Any way you could reduce the jump distance here?
  4. 01:17:396 (2,3,4) - Again, theres no 1/4 here.
  5. 01:22:960 (5,1) - Jumps a little too large.
  6. 01:23:832 (2,3,4) - Theres no 1/4 here


Story
  1. 00:06:160 (1) , 00:08:123 (1) , 00:15:105 (1) ,etc. Ugly sliders. I'd say redo the ones that are a curve with a straight bit on one end, most of those end up looking kinda bad.
  2. 00:14:014 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I'm not really a fan of how this is mapped here. Maybe try something like this?
  3. 00:20:996 (3,4,5) - The noise on the 1/4 is barely noticable, but my actual problem with this is positioning. Please just stack these notes on eachother.
  4. 00:29:941 (2,4,2) - I see what you're doing here but I feel it would be better if these were simply stacked.
  5. 00:36:051 (1) - Slider is kinda ugly tbh
  6. 00:49:796 (5) - Stack under (3)?
  7. 01:04:851 (4,5,1,2,3) - Pls no. I find this trend of 1/4 sliders as streams to be really annoying.
  8. 01:19:360 (9,10,1) - (1) would probably look better if it was stacked under the repeat of (10) instead of (9)
其他人的都改了
thanks for mod~
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Title:1st Love Story
TitleUnicode:1st Love Story
Artist:Luce Twinkle Wink
ArtistUnicode:Luce Twinkle Wink
Creator:AliomLoung
Version:ZZH's Normal
Source:ネトゲの嫁は女の子じゃないと思った?
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posted
From my queue
先膜拜一群神麻婆

[Easy]
  1. 00:31:251 (4,1) - 不是太懂这里的采音,感觉就像前边一样跟vocal来就好,虽然后边也放了这种节奏,但是后边的还好,这里违和感太强了
  2. 00:35:178 (4) - 我觉得可以换个折返,中间漏的音不采好难受
  3. 00:36:051 (5) - NC
  4. 00:39:541 (3) - 不太好看,直接一个弧就行
  5. 00:43:032 (2) - 在前一个白线结束就行啊,拉到这里不太懂
  6. 01:13:141 (2,3) - Blanket
  7. 01:16:632 (1) - 还是,这种节奏EZ虽然挺好,但是有些地方违和感真挺强


[ZZH‘s Normal]
  1. 00:20:778 (5,6) - blanket
  2. 混采实在不知道说些啥。。。有时候一组Note前边vocal后边BGM有点懵逼。。。感觉怪怪的节奏(跑


[Hard]
  1. 00:07:905 add a note ?
  2. 00:58:523 (5,1) - 太远了啊
  3. 01:08:560 (4,1) - blanket
  4. 01:16:851 (2,3,4) - 三连多余了感觉
  5. 01:23:832 (2,3,4) - ^


[Karen's Story]
KarenKarenKa~~
  1. 00:10:305 (2,3) - move to X: 175 Y: 194 ?就是向上稍微移动一点


没啥说的。。。帮不上就不用给KD了
posted
Hi ~

[Easy]
00:15:323 - spinner?
00:57:869 (3) - add finish
00:58:305 (4) - ^

[ZZH's Normal]
00:19:251 (1) - add finish
00:20:123 (4) - ^
00:42:814 (1) - add clap
00:48:269 (5) - add finish
00:49:141 (6) - ^
00:50:014 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:42:814 (1) - add finish
00:48:269 (1) - ^
00:49:141 (2) - ^ and remove clap
00:50:014 (3) - add finish

[Karen's Story]
None

Good Luck ~ :D
posted
story

00:19:251 (3,4,1) - 这里不太好看 试试这样呗?-> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5167391

00:26:014 (2) - 可以包在1里面。。啊小夏恋这样也可以就是了。。

00:27:978 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这一组跳不咋好看 00:29:069 (3) 叠到00:29:505 (1) - 更符合节奏大概

00:29:941 (2,3,4,1,2) - 这里节奏有一点微妙 00:30:596 (4) - 删了 然后 00:30:814 (1) - 挪过来变成折返怎么样啊

00:32:778 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一段很多跳+五连有点难了 00:33:432 (5) - 换成辣条?

00:50:014 (1) - 和00:50:451 (2,3,4,5) - 叠成等距吧?

01:23:832 (1) - 反一下好玩

就是要 萌萌二次元 萌萌女主 萌萌的歌
posted

Hiicantpk wrote:

Heyo. From my queue

Dang I need to catch up on the episodes for this. I'm a few behind.

Easy
  1. 00:09:651 (2) - Imo sounds better with the repeat at 00:10:087 and a note added at 00:11:178 ok fix~
  2. 00:32:123 (1) - Shorten this slider so the repeat is on the down beat, add a note at 00:33:432 I think the original is better


Hard
  1. 00:20:996 (3,4,5) - I'm not hearing anything on the 1/4 here. No need for the triplet. this is need for the triplet
  2. 00:50:669 (2) - The vocals that this is trying to follow are on the red tic, not the blue tic this slider ends on, shorten it a bit. no change
  3. 00:58:523 (5,1) - This jump is a bit sudden. Any way you could reduce the jump distance here? indeed,i need to some time to revise here
  4. 01:17:396 (2,3,4) - Again, theres no 1/4 here. no.....
  5. 01:22:960 (5,1) - Jumps a little too large. I think it is not hard...
  6. 01:23:832 (2,3,4) - Theres no 1/4 here same

thank you:3

yf_bmp wrote:

[Hard]
00:42:814 (1) - 尴尬的形状 真的~~~~XD

好像别的没什么问题
謝謝愛撫啊~~:3

Vanillas wrote:

From my queue
先膜拜一群神麻婆

[Easy]
  1. 00:31:251 (4,1) - 不是太懂这里的采音,感觉就像前边一样跟vocal来就好,虽然后边也放了这种节奏,但是后边的还好,这里违和感太强了 覺得還好..
  2. 00:35:178 (4) - 我觉得可以换个折返,中间漏的音不采好难受 真的...改了:3
  3. 00:36:051 (5) - NC 阿勒~~我竟然漏了... fixed
  4. 00:39:541 (3) - 不太好看,直接一个弧就行 感覺還好..
  5. 00:43:032 (2) - 在前一个白线结束就行啊,拉到这里不太懂 強迫跟vocal吧XD
  6. 01:13:141 (2,3) - Blanket fixed
  7. 01:16:632 (1) - 还是,这种节奏EZ虽然挺好,但是有些地方违和感真挺强 這個先保留~


[Hard]
  1. 00:07:905 add a note ?
  2. 00:58:523 (5,1) - 太远了啊 的確...
  3. 01:08:560 (4,1) - blanket fixed
  4. 01:16:851 (2,3,4) - 三连多余了感觉 會嗎....
  5. 01:23:832 (2,3,4) - ^ ^


没啥说的。。。帮不上就不用给KD了
謝謝mod :3

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~

[Easy]
00:15:323 - spinner? no...
00:57:869 (3) - add finish ok
00:58:305 (4) - ^ this is not finish...

[ZZH's Normal]
00:19:251 (1) - add finish no
00:20:123 (4) - ^ ok add
00:42:814 (1) - add clap no
00:48:269 (5) - add finish add
00:49:141 (6) - ^ ^
00:50:014 (1) - ^ ^
ZZH's Normal Sound i revise...

[Hard]
00:42:814 (1) - add finish ok
00:48:269 (1) - ^ add:3
00:49:141 (2) - ^ and remove clap add and remove clap
00:50:014 (3) - add finish adddddddddd

Good Luck ~ :D
Thank you mod :D
posted

NextNaix wrote:

story

00:19:251 (3,4,1) - 这里不太好看 试试这样呗?-> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5167391 就是要跟00:18:596 (1,3) - 平行

00:26:014 (2) - 可以包在1里面。。啊小夏恋这样也可以就是了。。 都包不好看,多样化一点

00:27:978 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这一组跳不咋好看 00:29:069 (3) 叠到00:29:505 (1) - 更符合节奏大概 移远了

00:29:941 (2,3,4,1,2) - 这里节奏有一点微妙 00:30:596 (4) - 删了 然后 00:30:814 (1) - 挪过来变成折返怎么样啊

00:32:778 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一段很多跳+五连有点难了 00:33:432 (5) - 换成辣条? 挺合曲的啊不改了

00:50:014 (1) - 和00:50:451 (2,3,4,5) - 叠成等距吧?

01:23:832 (1) - 反一下好玩 感觉不够跳

就是要 萌萌二次元 萌萌女主 萌萌的歌
other mods all fixed

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Karen
00:14:014 (3,4,5) - 这里手动摆比堆叠好
00:27:541 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5217487
00:54:596 (4) - 360 220 00:54:814 (5) - 472 76 00:55:032 (6) - 472 168
01:16:196 (1) - 修一下
01:29:069 - spinner ends here

To other diffs
01:29:069 - spinner ends here
00:51:323 - soft的clap违和感少一些
01:05:287 - soft的clap违和感少一些

Easy
00:25:578 (1) - 加个点控制弧度
00:39:541 (1) - 尾巴往外偏一点
00:50:014 (3) - 第二个点往下
01:13:141 (2) - 第四个点往右
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ts8zs wrote:

To other diffs
01:29:069 - spinner ends here 不~~
00:51:323 - soft的clap违和感少一些 蠻喜歡這個音效說>.<
01:05:287 - soft的clap违和感少一些 ^

Easy
00:25:578 (1) - 加个点控制弧度 這個這樣吧~~
00:39:541 (1) - 尾巴往外偏一点 好!
00:50:014 (3) - 第二个点往下 fixed~~
01:13:141 (2) - 第四个点往右 這個也是....
謝謝包子啊QAQ
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[General]
  1. None
[Easy]
  1. Easy 01:26:560 - Spinner start
  2. 01:26:560 (1) - 轉盤開頭應該是在大白線,你這好像手滑才放到藍線去了吧 (ZZH的才是正確)
[ZZH's Normal]
  1. Nothing
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:632 (6) - 可以用個ctrl+g試試,感覺00:28:197 (4,5,6) - 會比較順。
[Karen's Story]
  1. Possibly off-screen objects : 00:44:778 (1)
  2. 01:02:887 (2) - 是故意放的? 看起來這空拍note pattern擺的好粗糙
  3. 01:16:851 (2) - 同上
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smallboat wrote:

[General]
  1. None
[Easy]
  1. Easy 01:26:560 - Spinner start 修了
  2. 01:26:560 (1) - 轉盤開頭應該是在大白線,你這好像手滑才放到藍線去了吧 (ZZH的才是正確) 啊!手滑了....

[Hard]
  1. 00:28:632 (6) - 可以用個ctrl+g試試,感覺00:28:197 (4,5,6) - 會比較順。 這樣的確順 改了~~
謝船業~~~:3
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ts8zs wrote:

Karen
00:14:014 (3,4,5) - 这里手动摆比堆叠好
00:27:541 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5217487 感觉逆flow比较有意思
00:54:596 (4) - 360 220 00:54:814 (5) - 472 76 00:55:032 (6) - 472 168 为啥
01:16:196 (1) - 修一下
01:29:069 - spinner ends here 不好吧

smallboat wrote:

[Karen's Story]
  1. Possibly off-screen objects : 00:44:778 (1)
  2. 01:02:887 (2) - 是故意放的? 看起來這空拍note pattern擺的好粗糙 是故意的,01:02:232 - 配合这个重音感觉很舒服
  3. 01:16:851 (2) - 同上 ^
谢mod~

另外好像上次漏传了个音效,这次加上了 o.o http://puu.sh/p2lr8/19023dc3fa.zip
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Fine Bubbled
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00:58:305 - 01:02:887 - 01:12:269 - 01:14:669 - 01:15:105 - Consider adding finish here according to the music.
22:48 Sonnyc: 00:21:651 (1) - This sv change was too sudden imo. Perhaps something like 1.3x would fit, but 1.5x was too much for me.
22:49 Sonnyc: 01:22:960 (5,1) - This jump was too big compared to the overall diff. 01:24:487 (4,1) - having no jump lacked some consistency, but the massive jump one could be smalller imo.
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