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Gomo Psivarh

KuraiPettan wrote:

wEiren
00:11:021 (2) - Don't really suit the music. Make something like http://puu.sh/12BM would be better
01:12:571 (1) - Flip this slider horizontally ?

That's really all o/

Star~
ty for mod :) waiting weiren's response
Ibuki Suika

Neko_Ray wrote:

i dont find any problem in yoru map... sorry for my bad mod T_T
only... the BG is.. is... scary!!


change it :oops:
I think this is batter :P
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh

Ibuki Suika wrote:

Neko_Ray wrote:

i dont find any problem in yoru map... sorry for my bad mod T_T
only... the BG is.. is... scary!!


change it :oops:
I think this is batter :P
SPOILER
[attachment=0:fc1b3]BG.jpg[/attachment:fc1b3]
恐怖到dick explode了...
Most Scary!?
Sandpig
感觉没啥可MOD了,说几个感觉不爽的地方

AR9难度不建议stack太多东西,尤其是那两个5连的stack

NORMAL AR+1

EASY 00:53:230 开始感觉节奏没跟上歌

没了
Neko_Ray

Gomo Psivarh wrote:

Ibuki Suika wrote:

I think this is batter :P
SPOILER
[attachment=0:a5c78]BG.jpg[/attachment:a5c78]
恐怖到dick explode了...
Most Scary!?
lol, that really really scary me
narakucrimson
Meh I don't really like the beggining of [wEiren].

Seems too... Unreadable for a new player. 3/2, then 3/4... Nah, it's definitely strange.

My only advice is to try to keep things as simple as possible on an easy difficulty.


But apart from that, it's all functional.
Astom
Nice 8-) !

Star~
eveless
神SB快RANK
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh
Thx Astom's star :D

Sandpig wrote:

感觉没啥可MOD了,说几个感觉不爽的地方

AR9难度不建议stack太多东西,尤其是那两个5连的stack

NORMAL AR+1

EASY 00:53:230 开始感觉节奏没跟上歌

没了
谢谢猪总
两个5连也想不出什么好的梗...就先放在那吧...我感觉音效还需要改进

narakucrimson wrote:

Meh I don't really like the beggining of [wEiren].

Seems too... Unreadable for a new player. 3/2, then 3/4... Nah, it's definitely strange.

My only advice is to try to keep things as simple as possible on an easy difficulty.

But apart from that, it's all functional.
Thx :D waiting weiren's response
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh
Gomo Psivarh cast Summon Weiren

No Effect! :o
Snowy Dream
神SB膜拜

[wEiren]
00:18:612 (1,2,3,4,5) - 嗯嗯?稍微有点偏高了

[Nivalis]
01:59:864 (5) - 偏低了,拉上来点。

[Harvisp]
00:48:013 (3,4,5) - 这样排吧>.>

[Ipvarsh]
00:19:154 (1,2,3,4,5);00:19:696 (1,2,3,4,5) - 分开
01:01:314 (1,2,3,4,5);01:01:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
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神图 必须star☆
- Rche -
[weiren]
00:46:752 (3,1) - 聽起來有點怪哦.
00:57:541 (1,2) - ^

[Harvisp]
00:13:371 (4) - 3/4 slider也有點怪...
也許是我沒東西抓了.

P.S.:

GRaYstreetN wrote:

ps3:Where is Ballance's GD?
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Harvisp]
00:48:013 (3,4,5) - 这样排吧>.>我觉得不太需要改 :D
[Ipvarsh]
00:19:154 (1,2,3,4,5);00:19:696 (1,2,3,4,5) - 分开
01:01:314 (1,2,3,4,5);01:01:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
正在研究怎么对付这几坨5连打 :(
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神图 必须star☆

justnobody wrote:

[Harvisp]
00:13:371 (4) - 3/4 slider也有點怪...
也許是我沒東西抓了. 感觉没问题啊0.0

P.S.:

GRaYstreetN wrote:

ps3:Where is Ballance's GD? 他整天玩妹子没时间作图 :o
谢谢mod :)

猥人快回来啊... :(
Roddie
Hi

General:
  1. The wEiren difficulty has a different combo color scheme. :| Have the combo colors all the same for all for difficulties.
    Apply this combo color code for the wEiren difficulty.
    SPOILER
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 231,231,92
    Combo2 : 200,225,221
    Combo3 : 215,23,242
    Combo4 : 75,209,129
  2. Speaking of the wEiren difficulty, Shouldn't it be "Weiren"? Its weird seeing the second letter being capitalize rather then the first letter. :P
wEiren:
  1. 00:25:439 (1)-Add a whistle on the end?
  2. 00:26:867 (3)-^?
  3. 01:36:946 (3)-Add a finish on the end.
  4. 01:42:046 (4)-Add a whistle.
  5. 01:46:955 (2)-Add a whistle on the end?
  6. 01:55:638 (2)-^?
Nivalis:

Nothing I can point out.

Harvisp:
  1. 00:21:153 (2)-Add a whistle on the end.
  2. 00:22:581 (2)-^
  3. 00:24:010 (2)-^
  4. 00:25:439 (2)-^
  5. 00:27:224 (4)-Add a whistle.
  6. 00:28:653 (4)-^
  7. 00:30:081 (6)-^
  8. 00:31:510 (6)-^
  9. 01:03:642 (6)-^
  10. 01:05:071 (7)-^
  11. 01:06:499 (6)-^
  12. 01:07:928 (6)-^
  13. 01:09:356 (4)-Add a whistle on the beginning.
  14. 01:10:785 (6)-^
  15. 01:12:213 (4)-^
  16. 01:13:682 (4)-^
Ipvarsh:
  1. Some parts of this difficulty that has speed ups doesn't fit entirely to this song. :(
  2. The approach rate. :( Lower the AP by one.
  3. 00:18:973 to 00:20:238-This kind of stacking is confusing and weird to play on. :( remap something different here.
  4. 01:01:134 to 01:02:392-^
  5. Ugh... I strongly suggest you remap this difficulty, man. The reason is because this difficulty isn't fun to play on.
ignorethis
这BG >.>

Nivalis AR+1, Harvisp AR-1? (不改也可以)

<Ipvarsh>
01:45:682 (1,2,3,4) - 这个都new combo?

不用给kd了,改好了叫我recheck
CRT_old
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Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh

Roddie wrote:

Hi

[*]Speaking of the wEiren difficulty, Shouldn't it be "Weiren"? Its weird seeing the second letter being capitalize rather then the first letter. :P[/list]wEiren = weiren's Easy

Harvisp: all done
  1. 00:21:153 (2)-Add a whistle on the end.
  2. 00:22:581 (2)-^
  3. 00:24:010 (2)-^
  4. 00:25:439 (2)-^
  5. 00:27:224 (4)-Add a whistle.
  6. 00:28:653 (4)-^
  7. 00:30:081 (6)-^
  8. 00:31:510 (6)-^
  9. 01:03:642 (6)-^
  10. 01:05:071 (7)-^
  11. 01:06:499 (6)-^
  12. 01:07:928 (6)-^
  13. 01:09:356 (4)-Add a whistle on the beginning.
  14. 01:10:785 (6)-^
  15. 01:12:213 (4)-^
  16. 01:13:682 (4)-^
Ipvarsh:
  1. Some parts of this difficulty that has speed ups doesn't fit entirely to this song. :(
  2. The approach rate. :( Lower the AP by one. AR9 is ok
  3. 00:18:973 to 00:20:238-This kind of stacking is confusing and weird to play on. :( remap something different here.
  4. 01:01:134 to 01:02:392-^ i added new combo so i think they're ok
  5. Ugh... I strongly suggest you remap this difficulty, man. The reason is because this difficulty isn't fun to play on.
i only play hard maps so i don't know how to make a fun insane map :(

ignorethis wrote:

这BG >.> 0.0

Nivalis AR+1, Harvisp AR-1? (不改也可以) Hard不变...N我觉得可以+1

<Ipvarsh>
01:45:682 (1,2,3,4) - 这个都new combo?done

不用给kd了,改好了叫我recheck手滑给了kd :(
谢谢mod和脚主的star :)

waiting Weiren and Nivalis' response
Dotsu
我的建议:

[General]


  • 猥人难度的Combo Colour 和其他难度不一样
    另外建议在Break Time的时候弄个变暗变黑什么的
[wEiren]
Hitsound有点乱 别的没什么大问题了 (7/4拍音效就是难加啊

  • 00:18:250 : 这里不加个Circle的话感觉有点别扭
    00:47:112 (3): 这里的Clap建议去掉
    00:50:716 (1): 开头+Finish
    00:56:104 (1): 去掉New combo
    01:05:428 (4): New combo 后面的①去掉New combo
    01:08:285 (4): ^
    01:12:571 (1): 开头+Finish
    01:37:683 (3): 这里+Finish
    01:39:137 (2): 把这里的Finish移到后面的①上
    01:49:319 (1): 开头+Finish
    01:53:683 (1): 去掉New combo


[Nivalis]
这个难度的Kiai Time里就加了俩Clap 建议整个Kiai Time都加上 或者删掉那两个Clap
(01:38:410 (1) , 01:50:046 (1)

  • 00:00:186 (1): 建议和后面一样把Whistle加在结尾
    00:15:901 (5): New combo 后面的①去掉New combo
    00:20:238 - 00:31:510 : 这段的Combo有点乱 建议像这段一样:01:02:212 - 01:13:682
    00:31:883 (1): 建议转盘在00:33:207 或 00:34:532 结束
    00:42:428 (1): 开头+Finish
    00:44:950 (5): New combo 后面的①去掉New combo
    00:53:769 (3): 开头+Whistle
    01:28:848 (4): New combo 后面的①去掉New combo
    01:40:592 (4): ^
    01:43:864 (5): ^
    01:47:864 (5): 建议删掉这个Slider 让转盘提前从这里开始
    01:58:046 (7): New combo 后面的①去掉New combo
    02:00:228 : 这里那根改Slider速度的绿线有什么意义么…
    02:00:592 : 建议加个Circle
[Harvisp]
最喜欢这个难度了~

  • 01:49:137 (6): New combo 后面的①去掉New combo
    01:49:319 (1): 开头+Finish
[Ipvarsh]
这难度忒难了 >_<
[list:18891]神SB神Timing

☆ STAR ☆
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh

impossiblexu wrote:

我的建议:
[Harvisp]
最喜欢这个难度了~

  • 01:49:137 (6): New combo 后面的①去掉New combo 我觉得这么改这个连打容易打晚...
    01:49:319 (1): 开头+Finishdone
[Ipvarsh]
这难度忒难了 >_< 0_0
[list:007a5]神SB神Timing

☆ STAR ☆
谢谢许哥 :)
waiting Weiren and Nivalis' response
-kevincela-
Ok,here's my mod~

[wEiren]
00:29:724(3):I think it's better to put it here:

[Nivalis]
01:47:864(5):Replace with a note?

[Harvisp]
Awesome!

[Ipvarsh]
Awesome!

Star~
Rucker
NICE :D
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh
thanks kevincela's mod... :)
however you forgot to star :(

谢谢小路的star :D
-kevincela-
LOL,edited with the star
EnakoRin
躺了几天回来一看这么多MOD了- -
如果太密了的话要不要我给推了重来?

Download: ZUN - Hartmann's Youkai Girl (Gomo Psivarh) [weireN].osu
ignorethis
ok bubbled
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh
谢谢脑叔 :D
winber1
fuuuu--

too lazy these days, and didn't get to this in time. Any ways... have a star. Looks quite nice. Some things seem a little unclear and hard to read tho.. but still readable.
loli_milk
;)
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh
TY for star :D

winber1 wrote:

fuuuu--

too lazy these days, and didn't get to this in time. Any ways... have a star. Looks quite nice. Some things seem a little unclear and hard to read tho.. but still readable.
I think I stacked too much :(
Beren
Bessy
0.0
Snowy Dream
一个脑君bubble了
路过支持下 :P
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh
谢谢star :D
intermu
恋~
xinhe
:D STAR
CCHV-16
教授这INSANE太可怕了
soulfear
要是大家知道這AR是我讓你+1的會不會殺了我 8-)
Ohrami
HOLY COW THIS BEATMAP IS AMAZING
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh
Thx everyone's star :D

soulfear wrote:

要是大家知道這AR是我讓你+1的會不會殺了我 8-)
我决定以后I都用AR9了 我原先以为AR9是unrankable的
deepsea
god sb god map god 1/8 I don't konw why.
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