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Not sure about the spinner in the middle, might be worth charting considering TV size. Also wondering why the 4 piano notes are charted in hard but not the next difficulty up where it's charted as only 2 notes.

Otherwise, great map. Happy to have this song in the game.
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Sen0u wrote:

Not sure about the spinner in the middle, might be worth charting considering TV size. Also wondering why the 4 piano notes are charted in hard but not the next difficulty up where it's charted as only 2 notes.

Otherwise, great map. Happy to have this song in the game.
thanks :) hope you enjoy it
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Halo Bois ~ izin ngemod ya ~

[General]

[Easy]
00:38:734 (1) - itu spinnernya kurang bagus,kupikir akhir spinnernya itu di 00:43:587
00:44:028 - seharusnya disini tambahkan circle biar enak kayak gini http://prnt.sc/b2dd60
01:26:381 (1) - hmm kupikir spinnernya kepanjangan deh,mundurin akhir spinnernya dari 01:29:470 ke 01:28:367 ngikutin suara vocalnya ~

[Normal]
Distance spacingnya di ganti ke 1,0 kalau pakai 0,8 gk sesuai
01:20:646 (1,2,3) - circlenya ganti dengan slider pendek aja
01:22:852 (4,5) - New combo
01:26:381 (1) - sama dgn yang di easy,mundurin akhir spinnernya ke 01:28:367

[Hard]
ARnya di naikin ke 7
00:38:293 (1) - slidernya geserin dikit ke kiri kayak gini http://prnt.sc/b2dknl
00:39:837 (1) - hapus new combo
01:26:381 (1) - spinnernya seperti yang di normal dan easy

[Eka no uta]
mengapa nama diffnya eka no uta? kan lebih baik insane namanya
01:26:381 (1) - spinnernya seperti yang di diff sebelumnya

[Panorama]
ARnya dinaikin ke 8,5
ODnya dinaikin ke 7


mungkin itu saja
semoga ranked ya beatmapnya ;)
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-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Halo Bois ~ izin ngemod ya ~
[Panorama]
ARnya dinaikin ke 8,5 AR 8.5 terlalu cepat untuk map seperti ini
ODnya dinaikin ke 7 OK
Thx :)
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FIX.. makasih bang :D
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[Hard]

00:02:117 (7) - mb slider here?

00:21:308 (6) - note here

00:31:786 (2) - note here

01:17:558 (5) - this slider look better? (http://puu.sh/p16Ft/eeb60091d9.jpg)

[Panorama]

00:02:999 (7,1) - detele, Put slider (http://puu.sh/p15mf/b0cfc7da76.jpg)

00:06:970 (8) - new combo

00:09:837 (1,2) - delete, 00:10:058 (1) - put slider

00:40:058 (5) - start spinner here ?

00:44:470 (1) - delete. made tripl (http://puu.sh/p15Te/8c50a10649.jpg) 00:44:470 (2,3,4)

01:00:683 (2) - missing blue beat
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fix.

~Thanks :D
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Hellom random mod from #modreq
Just telling you my thoughts, if my suggestions doesnt make sense to you the dont change. I'm still newbie to dis (:

00:00:352 (1,2,3) - pl
00:06:970 (1,2) - blanket them
00:08:955 (7,8) - ^ (maybe make the slider more curved for better look)
00:16:013 (5,6) - ^
00:21:308 (1,2) - ^
00:30:352 (4,5) - ^
00:34:543 (1,2) - ^
00:35:205 (3,6) - ^ well i just see you may not have payed any attention to blankets yet, i think you get my idea of fixing them. there are a lot more
00:10:058 (9) - i would replace this into circle + smaller slider, i think u know in which way i mean that
00:19:323 (3,4) - random almost full area jumps dont make sense
00:32:558 (1,2) - basically same
00:20:426 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - i dont think u snapped them, did you? if not DS them (basically make streams having more structure like u did it here 00:50:426 (1,2,3,4,5) - i find some streams ugly in your map tbh :( )
00:23:073 (5,2) - avoid random overlaps
00:54:617 (1,1) - ^
00:29:249 (1,2) - make sliders which should look in common with each other in the same shape
00:51:308 (2,3,4) - i see a lot of these combinations, try to create flow there like this here 01:01:455 (1,2,3) - you did it perfectly!!! (: (but the stream before 01:00:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is really untidy)

In general: your map has a lot of flow issues in my view. Best example is 00:53:624 (4,5) - or 01:02:889 (2,3) - which feel very very awkward to play. try to make sliderends flow into the next slider/circle, thats the simplest way to do flow things.
Also try to give your map more structure, create more patterns, stack some objectives, make things look in common.
this for example is an exception imo 01:22:852 (1,2) - cuz thatspattern related (just make sure to make it tidy, give your map a little more attention in shaping sliders)

to lazy and too bad to mod lower diffs properly, just apply useful suggestions by me to your other diffs too

Well my mod sounds kinda random but i hope it was a bit useful in any way. Good luck with your map and happy mapping! (:
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fix

~Thanks :D
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Phyloukz wrote:

Hellom random mod from #modreq
Just telling you my thoughts, if my suggestions doesnt make sense to you the dont change. I'm still newbie to dis (: i also too newbie to reply this mod

00:00:352 (1,2,3) - pl what is pl mean ?
00:06:970 (1,2) - blanket them i try to get better curve
00:08:955 (7,8) - ^ (maybe make the slider more curved for better look) ^
00:16:013 (5,6) - ^ ^
00:21:308 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:30:352 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:34:543 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:35:205 (3,6) - ^ well i just see you may not have payed any attention to blankets yet, i think you get my idea of fixing them. there are a lot more
00:10:058 (9) - i would replace this into circle + smaller slider, i think u know in which way i mean that i try to get better pattern
00:19:323 (3,4) - random almost full area jumps dont make sense i think itsn't far enough (i will think it later)
00:32:558 (1,2) - basically same its not far
00:20:426 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - i dont think u snapped them, did you?yea i forgot it (fix) if not DS them (basically make streams having more structure like u did it here 00:50:426 (1,2,3,4,5) - i find some streams ugly in your map tbh :( ) its not ugly but i try to polish my stream(fix)
00:23:073 (5,2) - avoid random overlaps i dont find any overlaps
00:54:617 (1,1) - ^^
00:29:249 (1,2) - make sliders which should look in common with each other in the same shape fix
00:51:308 (2,3,4) - i see a lot of these combinations, try to create flow there like this here 01:01:455 (1,2,3) - you did it perfectly!!! (: (but the stream before 01:00:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is really untidy)

In general: your map has a lot of flow issues in my view. Best example is 00:53:624 (4,5) - or 01:02:889 (2,3) - which feel very very awkward to play. try to make sliderends flow into the next slider/circle, thats the simplest way to do flow things. i guess its not awkard since following the music
Also try to give your map more structure, create more patterns, stack some objectives, make things look in common.
this for example is an exception imo 01:22:852 (1,2) - cuz thatspattern related (just make sure to make it tidy, give your map a little more attention in shaping sliders)

to lazy and too bad to mod lower diffs properly, just apply useful suggestions by me to your other diffs too

Well my mod sounds kinda random but i hope it was a bit useful in any way. Good luck with your map and happy mapping! (: thx for modding :D
i doubt to determine the difference beetwen awkward flow and good flow since i play all old map really often
Thx anyways :)
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Hello !, from "your basement" :VV . Sudahlah ! :V , I hope I can be helpful here !

General :
Sempurna !

Hard :
00:02:558 (1) - ^
00:02:117 (1) - New Combo disini, dan lepas New Combo disini 00:02:558 (2) - (Baca Rekomendasi)
00:17:999 (3) - Ga ngerti Reverse Slider nya X'D . Lurus aja lebih baik
00:21:087 (5) - New Combo disini, dan lepas New Combo disini 00:19:323 (1) - (Baca Rekomendasi)
00:21:970 (1) - Lepas New Combo (Baca Rekomendasi)
00:28:146 (3) - New Combo disini, dan lepas New Combo disini 00:27:705 (1) - (Baca Rekomendasi)
00:29:470 (1) - Lepas New Combo (Baca Rekomendasi)
00:44:028 (2) - Pasang mulai Kiai Time tepat dari sini
00:58:146 (1) - Pasang mulai Kiai Time kedua tepat dari sini
01:14:470 (4) - Mulai dari sini, banyak jeda notes nya. Insert Break Time lebih baik

Rekomendasi :
Pertahankan kombo sekitar 8-11 kombo saja,trus sesuaikan dengan ritme, soalnya masih banyak yg bimbang kombo nya, ada yg cuma 4 ada yg 2, wkwkw. Cocok dengan lagunya kyk gitu kok

Yak !, sekian dan terimakasih ! :VV
*O-Moei runs !
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[Easy]
00:00:352 (1,2) - blanketnya rapihin om
00:06:970 - menurut ane sih ini mending jangan di kosongin
00:11:823 - ^
00:20:205 - ^

[Normal]
00:01:234 (2,3) - ctrl G biar enakan
00:05:867 (5) - ini mending di pindah aja biar konsisten
00:08:734 (4,5) - clrl G
00:21:087 (1) - kash hitsound
00:25:940 (1) - NC

udh enak sih mapnya cuman flownya masih bisa di improve lagi :)
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fix

~Thanks :D
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Wow nice hitsounds tho
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Kiian5 wrote:

Wow nice hitsounds tho
Thanks :D
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Halo lagi ~
izin ngemod lagi ya kwkwkw

[Easy]
00:25:499 - tambah circle disini
00:32:558 - ^
00:47:999 (1) - slidernya kejauhan,sesuai distance snap aja biar enak
00:54:176 (6) - New combo

[Normal]
00:18:881 (8) - NC
00:33:881 (6,7) - di blanket?
01:09:176 (4) - NC
01:12:705 (6) - NC
01:15:793 (1,2) - Blanketnya di rapihin

[Hard]
00:17:999 (3) - slidernya di geser kebawah sedikit tepatnya di x:412 y:256
00:19:980 (8) - digeser kebawah dikit jangan terkena slider sebelumnya
00:36:528 (5,1) - di stack aja biar enak dilihat
00:40:278 (1) - akhir spinnernya di majukan sedikit ke 00:43:367 biar sesuai dgn vocal
00:55:278 - kasih circle disini
01:20:756 (2) - hapus circlenya,nggk masuk ritme musik

[Eka's Insane]
00:39:837 (1) - spinnernya di majukan ke 00:40:278 karena lebih cocok
01:20:756 (2) - hapus aja circlenya

[Panorama]
Nggk ada masalah
Nice diff ~

Good Luck ~ :D
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njer dia balik lagi wkowkwok makasih lagi bang :V sering sering mampir :P
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Hi
from #modreq~

[Easy]
  1. 00:04:323 (6,7) - in Easy diff, you should avoid stack. especially short interval. it is not absolutely unranked but it is better to avoid. this thing is from Difficulty appropriate gameplay elements
  2. 00:06:970 (1,2) - blanket
  3. 00:10:940 (6,7) - avoid stack
  4. 00:17:117 (6,7) - ^
  5. 00:18:881 (2,3) - ^
  6. 00:29:028 (6,1) - ^
  7. 00:35:646 (4,5) - ^
  8. 00:36:970 (6,7) - ^
  9. 00:44:028 (1,2) - ^
  10. 00:50:205 (4,1) - ^

Exept stack, i think good easy :3

[Normal]
  1. 00:12:705 (3) - maybe delete bodywhistle and add whistle.


[Hard]
  1. 00:13:367 (5) - maybe delete body whistle
  2. 00:17:999 (2) - stack
  3. 00:44:690 (5) - i think it may be good to add whistle like here downbeat(redline).if you add whistle here, you should add on other timing. for example 00:48:220 (5) - here


[Eka's Insane]
  1. 00:48:220 (5) - delete body whistle?
  2. 00:19:102 (1,2,3,4) - you should make better square. to use ctrl shift D or copy (12)
  3. 00:43:587 (1) - add soft finish on sliderend
  4. 00:44:470 (2) - add clap
  5. 00:47:999 (2) - ^
  6. 00:58:587 (1) - ^
  7. 01:02:117 (3) - ^
  8. 01:08:514 (8,9) - keep DS


[Panorama]
  1. 00:02:889 (6,1) - not same DS? or it is your attention, keep
  2. 00:11:823 (2,3) - mayve keep DS.
  3. 00:20:756 (2,3,4,5) - you should keep same DS on stream
  4. 00:44:470 (2) - add clap. 00:58:587 (1) - here is added
  5. 01:00:573 (1,2,3,4) - keep DS

it is important things to keep same DS or same form on stream. if only one stream is bad form, the map looks bad entirely. maybe you should recheck all triples or stream. it makes your map better surely :3

good song and i hope it ranked soon :)
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All fix thanks :D
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