1. Insane (4.52 stars, 724 notes)
2. PoKa's Hard (3.64 stars, 534 notes)
3. Saten ruiko's Normal (1.85 stars, 200 notes)

Lybydose wrote:

Offset: 1,997
Offset: 82,014
Offset: 91,996
Offset: 92,662

All 180 BPM

I don't THINK it goes off anywhere else, I certainly didn't notice any other problems while playing through the map after I fixed that one section.

02:57:989 (1,2,3) - the timing on the guitar is kind of odd here, but it sounds better with 1/3 snap

eveless wrote:

[Insane]

...NC是个大问题 以前现在都是...一些shin式下法最好还是NC一下 遮的那些

比如

00:33:663 (3) - new combo
00:53:497 (4,6,8,10,12) - ^
01:04:663 (3,5,7) - ^
01:29:680 (3) - ^
01:32:329 (3) - ^
01:34:995 (3) - ^
同类型以下省略OTL
02:30:328 (7,9) - new combo
03:40:162 (4,6,8) - ^
03:41:162 (10) - ^
04:02:328 (4,6) - ^

01:42:995 (8) - 拉到左下角吧 这里不太好看o.o
02:35:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 强烈要求连打间间距缩小这可是180的1/4啊OTL

这难度我打不来。。只能提提这些了。。

[PoKa]
有些和Insane一样的NC问题。。我真不想提NC 可是这种下法。。NC很有必要
00:20:496 (3,5) - NC
00:57:330 (3) - 这个随意 最好NC一下
01:05:163 (3,5) - NC

03:23:162 (7) - +clap?
03:29:995 (6) - 尾巴clap?
03:46:662 (3,4) - clap?

[C触] 作为最低难度SV有点高
00:21:663 (4) - NAZI一下 345之间间距差了0.4
01:11:330 (3) - 我不懂这么下的原因 不管是声音也好鼓也好在这里并没有完。。前两个难度都是在后一根白线上结束 因为那里有个鼓点，而且声音也是在那完的 所以>结束延长到跟其他难度一样+clap
02:16:662 (1) - slider上的clap去掉 尾巴+clap
03:09:995 (5) - 依然不懂为什么
03:25:995 (3) - ^
以下省略各种类似..

我头晕了@_@

banvi wrote:

<3

[General]
Lead-in is too long imo. 2s is ok I think.
01:22:01 , 01:31:99 , 01:32:66 What is this red timing point? o.o?

[Saten ruiko]
01:04:996 (5) add clap at the beginning?
03:09:828 (1) finishing 03:12:328?
04:11:328 (1) add finish?

[PoKa]
00:56:663 (1) & 00:57:330 (1) move 1 grid up
01:09:997 (1) move 1 grid up
02:04:328 (5) move 1 grid left

[Insane]
00:06:996 (13) new combo?
nice jump really hard though XD

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:18:830 (8,9) - spacing or whatever : o
00:54:496 (7,8) - up 1 grid?
01:21:330 (1,2,3,4) - arrange like this?

SPOILER

360,152,81330,5,0
304,224,81496,1,0
216,200,81663,1,0
272,128,81830,1,0

01:23:014 (9) - right 1 grid
01:36:995 (5) - up 1 grid
02:57:161 (6) - left 1 grid
03:09:161 (7,8) - up 1 grid?

[PoKa]
00:36:330 (2) - left 1 grid
02:01:328 (3,4,5) - uneven spacing
03:11:628 (6,7,8) - left 1 grid

star~~~ >w<

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
01:32:662 - 这里没有timing变化，不应该是红线，另觉得整体的offset应该要-8左右，中间红线作用如何没具体看。
文件夹里有隐藏的AlbumArtSmall.jpg和Folder.jpg，建议删除。
难度分布不太合理，第一倒是够简单，第二和第一的分差有8倍，未免太高了。
02:38:661 - 03:04:661 - 前两难度中这个长度的break让人有蛋碎感

[Saten Ruiko]
AR+1
01:34:328 - 加音？
01:40:662 (1) - 折返点感觉奇怪，建议2拍折返后加个音。
02:33:995 (1,2) - spacing?

[PoKa]
HP-2，没理由比最高难还高
00:19:996 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 不适合这种排列的感觉，音之间空隙很大，不该是这种靠读的玩法
00:55:663 - 加音？
00:57:330 (1) - 往前1/2更好的感觉
01:04:663 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 同第一项
01:59:661 - 加音？
02:25:661 (1) - 头该有个clap？
03:29:995 (6) - 改o oo oo这样的节奏？

[Insane]
HP-1
00:05:996 (1--) - 。。。有没有比较清晰的表达方式？
00:32:163 (1,2,3) - 不太适应这样的变spacing，个人感觉是circle接slider反而可以大一点
01:04:663 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 感觉不适应，理由同PoKa，间距可以拉大，比如左中右什么的。
01:09:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 3个3个一组，没有理由134组相同2组反过来吧？
01:25:014 (4) - new combo或者建议换种spacing
01:36:161 (1,2,3) - 同第二项
02:08:661 (5,6) - 返回时路径变一点点会好看些。
03:19:328 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 觉得该拉远的

Astom wrote:

Hi hi ~
Some suggestions

[Saten ruiko]
-00:07:330 (1) - finish at start
-00:15:330 (1) - -^ with reduction of volume
-00:50:663 (1) - maybe finish it 00:51:330 and add two repetition
-01:01:330 (1) - -^ same has before.
-03:05:328 (1) - -^
-03:15:995 (1) - -^
-01:21:330 (1) - finish at end with reduction of volume
-from 03:09:829 to 04:13:995 there are too much spinners, 10 to be exact, so try to delete 3 to 5 of them and map that parts.

[PoKa]
-04:10:328 (1,2,3) - they are really necessary?

[Insane]
-01:09:997 (1,2,3) - down, 01:10:330 (4,5,6) - up, 01:10:663 (7,8,9) - down and 01:10:996 (10,11,12,13) - down?, maybe change this 01:10:996 (10,11,12,13) - to go up and not down, also that little jump isn't very justified.
-some jumps are a little evil and also some changes of spacing makes you lost track of circles, but nothing so bad to be more specific so~

Star~