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star~ 
good~
star
bakabaka's map : o
so baka(hard);_;
but it's nice and fun(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆
so baka(hard);_;
but it's nice and fun(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆
I think it is Normal 0.0
Maybe?
Maybe?
Topic Starter
Thx :3karenying wrote:
I think it is Normal 0.0
Maybe?
General
ying's
00:45:557 (T) - Custom override1
00:56:125 (T) - ^
01:04:988 (3,4) - whistle都換到開頭
01:11:125 (2,3,4,1,2) - 這部份音量降10左右
01:16:750 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:22:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ (後面有同樣部份就不提了QAQ
01:27:574 - spinner從這裡開始
01:32:261 (1) - 後移1/2拍
01:36:011 (4) - 結尾刪clap
01:50:841 (4) - new combo
02:18:625 (1) - whistle
02:23:398 (T) - 音量下降至40左右
02:24:761 (3) - 這裡的clap有點違和, 換到結尾?
02:34:988 (3) - ^
02:37:716 (2) - 後移1/2拍
02:50:159 (2) - 刪?
02:56:466 (4) - 結尾clap?
03:01:579 (1) - ^
03:16:238 (3) - clap?
Insane
[list:d1066]00:08:227 (3) - 結尾whistle
00:08:568 (4) - 刪whistle
00:10:443 (2) - ^
00:10:528 - spinner從這裡開始
00:17:773 (3) - 移到螢幕右側
00:20:329 (3) - clap
00:21:011 (2) - ^
00:29:193 (6) - ^
00:31:579 (1,3) - ^
00:32:943 (1,2,1,2,3) - 沒clap Q.Q? 像Hard那樣的擺放
00:56:125 (4) - new combo
01:02:943 (3,4) - whistle?
01:04:988 (1,2) - 同Hard
01:15:045 (3,4) - 跳太開了...D:
01:17:261 (1) - clap?
01:18:625 (3) - clap換到結尾
01:19:648 (6) - 開頭clap?
01:38:909 (2) - clap?
01:39:079 (T) - 刪
01:43:511 (3) - clap
01:49:477 - 加個circle? 這裡突然空拍不好
02:07:034 (3) - 開頭whistle?
02:08:738 (4) - whistle
02:09:079 (1) - 換結尾whistle
02:21:863 (4) - 開頭whistle
02:23:398 (T) - 同Hard
02:33:795 (2,3,1,2,3) - clap Q.Q?
02:36:693 (2) - clap
02:38:738 (4) - 右+下移1 grid, 這個算是完全擋住的slider..修一下比較好
02:39:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 怎麼24clap了Q_Q!
02:40:443 (1) - 折返clap
02:43:511 (2) - clap
02:43:852 (3) - 結尾clap
02:47:602 (3) - clap
02:52:375 (2) - ^
02:52:716 (1) - 刪clap
02:53:398 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 個人感覺這種排列跟音樂不合, 建議換掉
02:55:102 (2) - clap
02:55:784 (1) - 開頭clap
02:56:125 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Q.Q
02:59:193 (3) - clap
03:02:602 (2) - ^
03:11:295 (2,3) - 結尾clap
03:11:977 (1,2) - ^
03:14:023 (1) - ^
03:14:875 (3) - 開頭clap
這難度是音效下懶了嗎...?
Hard的clap還沒缺那麼多啊 ;_;
- - Title: Spring Lane ~ fleur Rouge Mix
- tags Q_Q?
- bg尺寸不對...需要640*480/800*600/1024*768的
- normal-sliderslide靜音? 在ying's normal那些SN切換中, sliderslide顯的礙耳
- 把非C1的soft線全換成C1..所有難度
ying's
- 00:44:534 (T) - 刪除, 沒有靜音的必要
01:15:045 (2) - 刪開頭whistle
01:17:943 (1) - 開頭finish?
01:28:170, 01:28:511 (T) - 這兩個地方音量太低了..轉起來不怎麼好聽, 建議調高一點
01:32:091 (2) - 刪開頭whistle, sliderwhistle
01:40:102 (1) - 刪?
01:41:807 (4) - whistle
01:48:113 (2) - whistle
01:49:307 (4) - ^
02:02:176 (T) - soft?
02:08:398, 02:11:125, 02:12:488, 02:12:829 - 要加不如加全了..
02:17:261 (4) - 開頭whistle
02:54:249 (2), 02:55:443 (4) - 同01:48:113, 01:49:307
03:11:125 (T) - 曾經有MAT挑過kiai需要放綠線結束...看你加不加吧:o
不錯~
Hard
[list:d1066]
00:45:557 (T) - Custom override1
00:56:125 (T) - ^
01:04:988 (3,4) - whistle都換到開頭
01:11:125 (2,3,4,1,2) - 這部份音量降10左右
01:16:750 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:22:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ (後面有同樣部份就不提了QAQ
01:27:574 - spinner從這裡開始
01:32:261 (1) - 後移1/2拍
01:36:011 (4) - 結尾刪clap
01:50:841 (4) - new combo
02:18:625 (1) - whistle
02:23:398 (T) - 音量下降至40左右
02:24:761 (3) - 這裡的clap有點違和, 換到結尾?
02:34:988 (3) - ^
02:37:716 (2) - 後移1/2拍
02:50:159 (2) - 刪?
02:56:466 (4) - 結尾clap?
03:01:579 (1) - ^
03:16:238 (3) - clap?
Insane
[list:d1066]00:08:227 (3) - 結尾whistle
00:08:568 (4) - 刪whistle
00:10:443 (2) - ^
00:10:528 - spinner從這裡開始
00:17:773 (3) - 移到螢幕右側
00:20:329 (3) - clap
00:21:011 (2) - ^
00:29:193 (6) - ^
00:31:579 (1,3) - ^
00:32:943 (1,2,1,2,3) - 沒clap Q.Q? 像Hard那樣的擺放
00:56:125 (4) - new combo
01:02:943 (3,4) - whistle?
01:04:988 (1,2) - 同Hard
01:15:045 (3,4) - 跳太開了...D:
01:17:261 (1) - clap?
01:18:625 (3) - clap換到結尾
01:19:648 (6) - 開頭clap?
01:38:909 (2) - clap?
01:39:079 (T) - 刪
01:43:511 (3) - clap
01:49:477 - 加個circle? 這裡突然空拍不好
02:07:034 (3) - 開頭whistle?
02:08:738 (4) - whistle
02:09:079 (1) - 換結尾whistle
02:21:863 (4) - 開頭whistle
02:23:398 (T) - 同Hard
02:33:795 (2,3,1,2,3) - clap Q.Q?
02:36:693 (2) - clap
02:38:738 (4) - 右+下移1 grid, 這個算是完全擋住的slider..修一下比較好
02:39:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 怎麼24clap了Q_Q!
02:40:443 (1) - 折返clap
02:43:511 (2) - clap
02:43:852 (3) - 結尾clap
02:47:602 (3) - clap
02:52:375 (2) - ^
02:52:716 (1) - 刪clap
02:53:398 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 個人感覺這種排列跟音樂不合, 建議換掉
02:55:102 (2) - clap
02:55:784 (1) - 開頭clap
02:56:125 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Q.Q
02:59:193 (3) - clap
03:02:602 (2) - ^
03:11:295 (2,3) - 結尾clap
03:11:977 (1,2) - ^
03:14:023 (1) - ^
03:14:875 (3) - 開頭clap
這難度是音效下懶了嗎...?
Hard的clap還沒缺那麼多啊 ;_;
然後diff
基本上all fix
基本上all fix
Topic Starter
fix :3Pokie wrote:
General
- - Title: Spring Lane ~ fleur Rouge Mix
- tags Q_Q?
- bg尺寸不對...需要640*480/800*600/1024*768的
- normal-sliderslide靜音? 在ying's normal那些SN切換中, sliderslide顯的礙耳
- 把非C1的soft線全換成C1..所有難度
ying's00:31:750 (1) - 後移1/2拍
- 00:44:534 (T) - 刪除, 沒有靜音的必要
01:15:045 (2) - 刪開頭whistle
01:17:943 (1) - 開頭finish?
01:28:170, 01:28:511 (T) - 這兩個地方音量太低了..轉起來不怎麼好聽, 建議調高一點
01:32:091 (2) - 刪開頭whistle, sliderwhistle
01:40:102 (1) - 刪?
01:41:807 (4) - whistle
01:48:113 (2) - whistle
01:49:307 (4) - ^
02:02:176 (T) - soft?
02:08:398, 02:11:125, 02:12:488, 02:12:829 - 要加不如加全了..
02:17:261 (4) - 開頭whistle
02:54:249 (2), 02:55:443 (4) - 同01:48:113, 01:49:307
03:11:125 (T) - 曾經有MAT挑過kiai需要放綠線結束...看你加不加吧:o
不錯~
Hard
[list:ccfb5]
00:45:557 (T) - Custom override1
00:56:125 (T) - ^
01:04:988 (3,4) - whistle都換到開頭
01:11:125 (2,3,4,1,2) - 這部份音量降10左右
01:16:750 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:22:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ (後面有同樣部份就不提了QAQ
01:27:574 - spinner從這裡開始
01:32:261 (1) - 後移1/2拍
01:36:011 (4) - 結尾刪clap
01:50:841 (4) - new combo
02:18:625 (1) - whistle
02:23:398 (T) - 音量下降至40左右
02:24:761 (3) - 這裡的clap有點違和, 換到結尾?
02:34:988 (3) - ^
02:37:716 (2) - 後移1/2拍
02:50:159 (2) - 刪?
02:56:466 (4) - 結尾clap?
03:01:579 (1) - ^
03:16:238 (3) - clap?
Insane
[list:ccfb5]00:08:227 (3) - 結尾whistle
00:08:568 (4) - 刪whistle
00:10:443 (2) - ^
00:10:528 - spinner從這裡開始
00:17:773 (3) - 移到螢幕右側
00:20:329 (3) - clap
00:21:011 (2) - ^
00:29:193 (6) - ^
00:31:579 (1,3) - ^
00:32:943 (1,2,1,2,3) - 沒clap Q.Q? 像Hard那樣的擺放
00:56:125 (4) - new combo
01:02:943 (3,4) - whistle?
01:04:988 (1,2) - 同Hard
01:15:045 (3,4) - 跳太開了...D:
01:17:261 (1) - clap?
01:18:625 (3) - clap換到結尾
01:19:648 (6) - 開頭clap?
01:38:909 (2) - clap?
01:39:079 (T) - 刪
01:43:511 (3) - clap
01:49:477 - 加個circle? 這裡突然空拍不好
02:07:034 (3) - 開頭whistle?
02:08:738 (4) - whistle
02:09:079 (1) - 換結尾whistle
02:21:863 (4) - 開頭whistle
02:23:398 (T) - 同Hard
02:33:795 (2,3,1,2,3) - clap Q.Q?
02:36:693 (2) - clap
02:38:738 (4) - 右+下移1 grid, 這個算是完全擋住的slider..修一下比較好
02:39:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 怎麼24clap了Q_Q!
02:40:443 (1) - 折返clap
02:43:511 (2) - clap
02:43:852 (3) - 結尾clap
02:47:602 (3) - clap
02:52:375 (2) - ^
02:52:716 (1) - 刪clap
02:53:398 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 個人感覺這種排列跟音樂不合, 建議換掉
02:55:102 (2) - clap
02:55:784 (1) - 開頭clap
02:56:125 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Q.Q
02:59:193 (3) - clap
03:02:602 (2) - ^
03:11:295 (2,3) - 結尾clap
03:11:977 (1,2) - ^
03:14:023 (1) - ^
03:14:875 (3) - 開頭clap
這難度是音效下懶了嗎...?
Hard的clap還沒缺那麼多啊 ;_;
hi
(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)
Insane
00:34:136 (4,1) - 感觉这两个音之间用个slider好些？
00:51:863 - 感觉这里加个音好些，可以把前边一个note做成slider拉到这里
00:56:125 (1) - 延长1/2到下一个白线
01:15:045 (3) - 尽量保持01:14:534 (1,2,3)的distance spacing相同
01:51:352 - 为啥不来个spinner（到01:54:079）
02:27:488 (1,2,3) - 尾巴上的三连不好听。在这里显得重了
02:38:057 (2,4) - 位置再错开一点
Hard
还可以
Ying's Normal
感觉这是个easy，估计是为了压星，我觉得NORMAL还是稍微难一点好._. EASY可以再做
还有一个问题是感觉太vocal了，缺乏节奏感。像这种01:20:159 (1,2) 单独拿两根红线押vocal的感觉太2了 x.x
总体来说应该可以了。I和H的有些节奏感觉没有押上音乐，整体节奏疏密变化有点缺乏规律，不过先不用改了，以后再说吧……
(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)
Insane
00:34:136 (4,1) - 感觉这两个音之间用个slider好些？
00:51:863 - 感觉这里加个音好些，可以把前边一个note做成slider拉到这里
00:56:125 (1) - 延长1/2到下一个白线
01:15:045 (3) - 尽量保持01:14:534 (1,2,3)的distance spacing相同
01:51:352 - 为啥不来个spinner（到01:54:079）
02:27:488 (1,2,3) - 尾巴上的三连不好听。在这里显得重了
02:38:057 (2,4) - 位置再错开一点
Hard
还可以
Ying's Normal
感觉这是个easy，估计是为了压星，我觉得NORMAL还是稍微难一点好._. EASY可以再做
还有一个问题是感觉太vocal了，缺乏节奏感。像这种01:20:159 (1,2) 单独拿两根红线押vocal的感觉太2了 x.x
总体来说应该可以了。I和H的有些节奏感觉没有押上音乐，整体节奏疏密变化有点缺乏规律，不过先不用改了，以后再说吧……
Topic Starter
fixSandpig wrote:
hi
(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)
Insane
00:34:136 (4,1) - 感觉这两个音之间用个slider好些？
00:51:863 - 感觉这里加个音好些，可以把前边一个note做成slider拉到这里
00:56:125 (1) - 延长1/2到下一个白线
01:15:045 (3) - 尽量保持01:14:534 (1,2,3)的distance spacing相同
01:51:352 - 为啥不来个spinner（到01:54:079）
02:27:488 (1,2,3) - 尾巴上的三连不好听。在这里显得重了
02:38:057 (2,4) - 位置再错开一点
Hard
还可以
Ying's Normal
感觉这是个easy，估计是为了压星，我觉得NORMAL还是稍微难一点好._. EASY可以再做
还有一个问题是感觉太vocal了，缺乏节奏感。像这种01:20:159 (1,2) 单独拿两根红线押vocal的感觉太2了 x.x
总体来说应该可以了。I和H的有些节奏感觉没有押上音乐，整体节奏疏密变化有点缺乏规律，不过先不用改了，以后再说吧……
大丈夫,萌大奶Sandpig wrote:
Ying's Normal
感觉这是个easy，估计是为了压星，我觉得NORMAL还是稍微难一点好._. EASY可以再做
还有一个问题是感觉太vocal了，缺乏节奏感。像这种01:20:159 (1,2) 单独拿两根红线押vocal的感觉太2了 x.x
ying's Normal
fine ~
Hard
fine
Insane
00:10:443 (2) - better to start here spinner
I do not know what the problem here? need ranked, perfect map
S T A R ~
fine ~
Hard
fine
Insane
00:10:443 (2) - better to start here spinner
I do not know what the problem here? need ranked, perfect map
S T A R ~
star~☆
Topic Starter
fix :3ZLOdeuka wrote:
ying's Normal
fine ~
Hard
fine
Insane
00:10:443 (2) - better to start here spinner
I do not know what the problem here? need ranked, perfect map
S T A R ~
ying's Normal
00:17:773 (1) - This note is not properly under previous note
Hard
HP Drain and Overall Diff +1
01:40:273 (1) - Add finish
02:13:170 (6) - ^
02:24:079 (1) - ^
02:45:968 (X) - Why is kiai time here? It should be at 02:46:409
You should map the whole thing in this diff
Insane
This diff is really hard to differencate between the jumps and the 1/1 notes
00:56:125 (1) - Add finish
01:30:216 (2,3,4,5) - Make this a symmetrical diamond pattern
____________________________
Star~
00:17:773 (1) - This note is not properly under previous note
Hard
HP Drain and Overall Diff +1
01:40:273 (1) - Add finish
02:13:170 (6) - ^
02:24:079 (1) - ^
02:45:968 (X) - Why is kiai time here? It should be at 02:46:409
You should map the whole thing in this diff
Insane
This diff is really hard to differencate between the jumps and the 1/1 notes
00:56:125 (1) - Add finish
01:30:216 (2,3,4,5) - Make this a symmetrical diamond pattern
____________________________
Star~
Topic Starter
fixDragonSparta wrote:
ying's Normal
00:17:773 (1) - This note is not properly under previous note
Hard
HP Drain and Overall Diff +1
01:40:273 (1) - Add finish
02:13:170 (6) - ^
02:24:079 (1) - ^
02:45:968 (X) - Why is kiai time here? It should be at 02:46:409
You should map the whole thing in this diff
Insane
This diff is really hard to differencate between the jumps and the 1/1 notes
00:56:125 (1) - Add finish
01:30:216 (2,3,4,5) - Make this a symmetrical diamond pattern
____________________________
Star~
o hi~
I can't find anything wrong here, and I'm not in a mood to Nazi this.
So here's a star.
I can't find anything wrong here, and I'm not in a mood to Nazi this.
So here's a star.
[General]
I think offset is little bit off, but not much. ignore this if your sure about your offset.
(using 25% helps you)]
and there are some circles could be nazi-moded (which means it's not so important but it could be better)
but I won't do that here.
And good!
[ying's Normal]
00:17:773 (1) stack this properly. disable grid snap and use x0.0 distance snap
00:38:398(3) This overlapping with next (2) doesnt look good for me. well, it's not strongly suggested tho,
02:55:443 (4) this overlapped with next (1) ^
[Hard]
Nice mapping! but I think sliders overlapping each other or circle overlapping slider confuses the player.
it's good as is, but you might consider about it.
[Insane]
I liked this map!
[Overall]
good map, star of course!
I think offset is little bit off, but not much. ignore this if your sure about your offset.
(using 25% helps you)]
and there are some circles could be nazi-moded (which means it's not so important but it could be better)
but I won't do that here.
And good!
[ying's Normal]
00:17:773 (1) stack this properly. disable grid snap and use x0.0 distance snap
00:38:398(3) This overlapping with next (2) doesnt look good for me. well, it's not strongly suggested tho,
02:55:443 (4) this overlapped with next (1) ^
[Hard]
Nice mapping! but I think sliders overlapping each other or circle overlapping slider confuses the player.
it's good as is, but you might consider about it.
[Insane]
I liked this map!
[Overall]
good map, star of course!
fix some,thanks
Hard
02:56:807 (1) - 建議砍掉SLIDER的第4拍 放NOTE
Insane
01:14:534 (1) - 去掉NEW COMBO
01:15:045 (3) - NEW COMBO
很不錯的圖
順便吐槽這歌改編得原曲都聽不出了(其實高潮還是勉強聽得出)
繼續吐槽...BG那紅白是偽娘吧...
02:56:807 (1) - 建議砍掉SLIDER的第4拍 放NOTE
Insane
01:14:534 (1) - 去掉NEW COMBO
01:15:045 (3) - NEW COMBO
很不錯的圖
順便吐槽這歌改編得原曲都聽不出了(其實高潮還是勉強聽得出)
繼續吐槽...BG那紅白是偽娘吧...
Topic Starter
fix:3soulfear wrote:
Hard
02:56:807 (1) - 建議砍掉SLIDER的第4拍 放NOTE
Insane
01:14:534 (1) - 去掉NEW COMBO
01:15:045 (3) - NEW COMBO
很不錯的圖
順便吐槽這歌改編得原曲都聽不出了(其實高潮還是勉強聽得出)
繼續吐槽...BG那紅白是偽娘吧... 是貧乳ww
nice map
I love this song =D
baka makes it better
star !!
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my poor English lol
baka makes it better
star !!
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my poor English lol
General:
It would be nice if you add 2 more KIAI mods First KIAI mod from 00:12:318 till 00:34:136. And the second KIAI mod from 02:24:079 till 02:33:625
Important thing! - you KIAI mod doesn't start at the same moment on all difficulties. So make it the same on all difficulties!
ying's normal:
00:46:920 - delete a circle here
can't say anything bad about this difficulty just a little advice - I don't like the shape of some of your sliders,for examle this - 02:09:079. And you have a lot of such sliders. Maybe it is better to change them a little? And to add more symmetry
02:47:943 - this slider doesn't look good too :/
Hard:
can't say anything bad about this difficulty too. I will just say again - I don't like the shape of your sliders on this difficulty too. This,for example - 02:21:863
02:22:375 - 02:23:909 - these sliders are non-rhytmical. Better to put them away and put there some circles instead of these sliders.
Insane:
01:29:363 - delete this circle. And move your slider left,and make it longer. Your slider has to start in : 01:29:363 and it has to end in : 01:30:216
03:07:034 - I think this spinner has to end in : 03:08:057. If you will change it,then put a circle in: 03:08:227
Anyway,nice song Star!
It would be nice if you add 2 more KIAI mods
First KIAI mod from 00:12:318 till 00:34:136. And the second KIAI mod from 02:24:079 till 02:33:625Important thing! - you KIAI mod doesn't start at the same moment on all difficulties. So make it the same on all difficulties!
ying's normal:
00:46:920 - delete a circle here
can't say anything bad about this difficulty just a little advice - I don't like the shape of some of your sliders,for examle this - 02:09:079. And you have a lot of such sliders. Maybe it is better to change them a little? And to add more symmetry
02:47:943 - this slider doesn't look good too :/
Hard:
can't say anything bad about this difficulty too. I will just say again - I don't like the shape of your sliders on this difficulty too. This,for example - 02:21:863
02:22:375 - 02:23:909 - these sliders are non-rhytmical. Better to put them away and put there some circles instead of these sliders.
Insane:
01:29:363 - delete this circle. And move your slider left,and make it longer. Your slider has to start in : 01:29:363 and it has to end in : 01:30:216
03:07:034 - I think this spinner has to end in : 03:08:057. If you will change it,then put a circle in: 03:08:227
Anyway,nice song
Star!Hi )
My suggestions
Ying's Normal:
Nothing found.
Hard:
Nothing found^^
Insane:
02:19:091 (4,1) maybe 1 grid down?
Great job, good luck on getting this beatmap ranked:)) Don't feed me kudosu
Star:)
)My suggestions
Ying's Normal:
Nothing found.
Hard:
Nothing found^^
Insane:
02:19:091 (4,1) maybe 1 grid down?
Great job, good luck on getting this beatmap ranked:)) Don't feed me kudosu
Star:)
mod by request
[ying's Normal]
01:45:216,02:51:352 - 玩起来叠得太突出，Stack Leniency减1~2格?
[Hard]
AR+1?
[Insane]
00:55:613(3) - 既然这部分whistle都压拍打音也把这两个音压掉吧
01:54:079(1) - 换成静音 or soft音?
可以考虑放多点finish音
很不错了，收集多点梗吧
[ying's Normal]
01:45:216,02:51:352 - 玩起来叠得太突出，Stack Leniency减1~2格?
[Hard]
AR+1?
[Insane]
00:55:613(3) - 既然这部分whistle都压拍打音也把这两个音压掉吧
01:54:079(1) - 换成静音 or soft音?
可以考虑放多点finish音
很不错了，收集多点梗吧
everything seem good to me, so that I can't mod
I can only give you star and pink one wishing you good luck
I can only give you star and pink one wishing you good luck