Earth Star Dream - Yumeiro Toridori Parade · forum

Lily Bread

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-04-21T00:53:49+00:00

M4M from queue

[Easy]
nothing found.

[Karia's Normal]
00:43:173 - i feel there should be a circle here.

[Hard]
nothing found.

[Mahou Shoujo]
00:02:159 (1) - unnecessary circle, because there is no music here.
00:03:898 (1) - ^
00:37:738 (1) - this stream is a bit weird, because it should start at - 00:37:086 -, but you mapped vocal at - 00:37:086 (8) - ... a better way is change - 00:37:086 (8) - into a stream, because stream can express vocal too.

solid set, so i can't find much... good luck

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-04-21T02:33:25+00:00

M4M from your queue

General

Why Hard has a lot of custom combo colors while other diffs have only 5? and also Combo color 2 and 4 looks like the same or it's just my skin? xD

Easy

00:17:956 (1,2) - I think it's better if you blanket these two
00:21:434 (1) - Rhythm seems weird, vocals stops at 00:21:869, maybe make it 1/2 and add a 3/4 slider on 00:22:304 then add a circle on 00:23:608, it will have a gap but rhythm is more fitting than yours
00:26:651 (3) - Maybe make this vertical? Looks muce cleaner than horizontal
00:30:130 (3) - Raise the slider on the direction of the tail of 00:29:260 (2) I think it's much easier to play
00:38:825 (1) - slider looks groggy, put 2 white anchors in the middle like a staight line vertical and it will look nice
Put spinner? so that people in the scoreboard will have different scores :v

Karia's Normal

00:02:738 (2,1) - Overlap is pretty noticeable
00:18:391 (2) - Put clap?\
00:20:130 (2) - ^
00:32:086 (2) - ^
00:42:521 (1,2,3) - Rhythm suggestion, make 00:42:521 (1) - 1/2 then add a circle on the redtick, next put the 00:43:391 (2) - in the white tick or you could make (2) 1/2 reverse so it follows the vocal

Hard

00:02:304 (4) - NC?
00:03:173 (6) - Slider looks unpolished
00:04:043 (7) - NC
00:04:912 (1) - Remove Nc, looks the following have are NC'd in a wrong way, try to be consistent on NCing on big white ticks
00:30:999 (3,5) - Blanket this two?
00:33:173 (4) - Ctrl+G?

Mahou Shoujo

00:02:159 (1) - Seems no beat here and in hard this is also empty
00:03:173 (4) - Sounds odd unlike the previous rhythms, make it 2 slider ends at the blue tick
00:03:898 (1) - Remove same reason above
00:12:304 (5) - Ctrl+G?

Remembering the days that I always play your old maps feels nostalgic :O Goodluck!!! here's my map, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/443589 you don't have to mod all diffs, just mod what you feel you like

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-04-21T06:18:35+00:00

M4M from queue
Such a short song:) May not have a lot to say i guess

[General]

maybe widescreen support?

[Easy]

00:17:956 (1,2) - blanket
00:24:043 (3,1) - ^ move 1 to 411|282 maybe
00:31:869 (1) - flow here is kinda weird,what about move it to 375|262 and stack with 00:29:260 (2) - ?

[Normal]

00:36:217 (2) - straight line is ok and 00:38:825 (3,4) - i dont understand why u use 3 dots
00:41:434 - miss a note.same as 00:40:564 (1) -
00:43:173 - miss a note

[Hard]

00:02:304 (4,5) - blanket
00:29:260 (4,5) - ^

[Mahou]

ar-0.5
00:10:130 (2,3) - make 3 a slider as 2
00:42:738 (2,4) - blanket

GL

My map is here. Only mod Easy,Normal and Hard please,

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2016-04-21T06:39:18+00:00

w

23:17 Gaia: can i rank aria
23:17 Gaia: or should i slap u to death so u'll do it yourself
23:17 Gaia: :>
23:18 Sekaii: D:
23:18 Sekaii: baka ;w;
23:18 Gaia: =.=
23:18 Sekaii: that's so mean orz
23:18 Gaia: no u
23:18 Sekaii: well :c
23:18 Gaia: are too lazy
23:18 Gaia: D:
23:18 Sekaii: orz
23:18 Sekaii: well
23:18 Sekaii: i'll try to revive it
23:19 Sekaii: and ask for bn =3=
23:19 Gaia: ok
23:19 Gaia: good
23:19 Gaia: now
23:19 Gaia: can i rank pleasure treasure
23:19 Gaia: or should i slap you to death before you'll do it
23:19 Gaia: :>
23:19 Sekaii: . . .
23:19 Sekaii: slap me?
23:19 Gaia: haha
23:19 Sekaii: ;w;
23:19 Sekaii: honestly
23:20 Gaia: ok ♥
23:20 *Gaia SLAPS SLAPS SLAPS SLAPS SLAPS SLAPS SLAPS SLAPS SLAPS SLAPS SLAPS SLAPS YOU
23:20 Sekaii: ;w;
23:20 Sekaii: t-that'
23:20 Sekaii: s
23:20 Sekaii: hurts orz
23:20 Gaia: good
23:20 Sekaii: btw
23:20 Gaia: ^-^
23:20 Gaia: it's supposed to hurt
23:20 Gaia:

23:20 Sekaii: testplay my map
23:20 Sekaii: =3=
23:20 Gaia: okie
23:21 Gaia: np
23:21 Gaia: me
23:21 Sekaii: and
23:21 Sekaii: maybe irc
23:21 Sekaii: lol
23:21 Gaia: sure
23:21 Gaia: np me
23:21 *Sekaii is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/957826 Earth Star Dream - Yumeiro Toridori Parade]
23:21 Sekaii: it's short anyways ww
23:25 Gaia: remap
23:25 Gaia: kds pls
23:25 Sekaii: orz
23:25 Sekaii: =3=
23:25 Sekaii: be serious pls ;w;
23:26 Gaia: 00:02:159 (1) - why does this note even exist theres nothing here
23:26 Sekaii: oh wait
23:26 Sekaii: lol
23:26 Sekaii: i thought i removed them
23:26 Gaia: 00:03:898 (1) - same
23:26 Sekaii: orz
23:27 Gaia: 00:07:412 - maybe?
23:27 Sekaii: triples?
23:27 Sekaii: hmm
23:28 Sekaii: okay
23:28 Gaia: 00:41:651 (4,1) - this pause felt a little awkward
23:28 Gaia: 00:19:478 (1) - idk maybe just me but this felt further than it looks lol
23:28 Sekaii: hmm
23:29 Sekaii: lol
23:29 Gaia: 00:22:195 (5) - i think remove this
23:29 Gaia: just try this http://puu.sh/oqeu1/40e4d04c8c.jpg
23:30 Gaia: 00:27:630 (5) - = =
23:30 Gaia: triples are here 00:27:847 -
23:30 Sekaii: orz
23:30 Sekaii: i thought i added it right now
23:31 Sekaii: orz
23:31 Sekaii: okay i'll fix it
23:31 Gaia: actually i think a bunch of ur triples are overmapped lol
23:32 Sekaii: :c
23:32 Gaia: actually
23:32 Gaia: nvm its not too bad
23:32 Sekaii: i had to make them
23:32 Sekaii: since this is insane
23:32 Sekaii: and this song is slow orz
23:33 Gaia: doesnt mean u should overmap = =
23:33 Gaia: hentai
23:33 Gaia: tentacle
23:33 Sekaii: :<
23:33 Sekaii: gomen
23:33 Sekaii: so anything else?

23:33 Sekaii: and post this if you're done tho =3=
23:34 Gaia: nah
23:34 Gaia: its good
23:35 Gaia: u might wanna consider changing 00:00:565 (1) - 00:04:043 (2) - into 1/3 repeats tho
23:36 Gaia: 00:03:173 (4) - and i know theres a tiny little sound on the red tick but u might as well make this into a 1/1
23:36 Gaia: consistent following the same instrument
23:36 Gaia: and watch out for spacing btwn 00:03:173 (4,1) -
23:37 Sekaii: orz
23:37 Sekaii: so it'll be huge spacing
23:37 Gaia: wat
23:37 Sekaii: i guess i should fix that too
23:37 Gaia: no just make it not so close lol
23:37 Gaia: make it reasonable
23:37 Sekaii: you mean this 00:03:173 (6,1) - ?
23:37 Sekaii: o.o
23:37 Gaia: wat
23:37 Gaia: 00:03:173 (4,1) -
23:38 Sekaii: oh lol
23:38 Sekaii: i fixed it hue
23:38 Gaia: alright now go mod my tv sizu insane too
23:38 Sekaii: :<

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2016-04-21T06:53:23+00:00

Thanks guys, fixed almost everything <3

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2016-04-21T10:40:17+00:00

MkGuh wrote:
On Karia's Normal I just have one point!

00:30:130 (1,2,3) - Don't you think the flow is pretty bad there? you are forcing players to go up then go down suddenly, that is not good for a Normal as beginners won't feel comfortable palying it. fixed

Bubblun wrote:
Karia's Normal
00:42:521 (1,2,3) - The offbeat between 2 and 3 is odd considering how there were no other ones before that. 2 solutions to this.
Either put a note between 1 and 2 like this:http://puu.sh/opJr5/2a1a96881a.jpg
Or you could spread the notes out more to show the offbeat. Like this: http://puu.sh/opJvU/ce88eda4c5.jpg fixed

Lily Bread wrote:
[Karia's Normal]
00:43:173 - i feel there should be a circle here. Feels a bit weird to me cuz I didn't follow vocals on here

Janpai wrote:
Karia's Normal
00:02:738 (2,1) - Overlap is pretty noticeable It's fine in-game
00:18:391 (2) - Put clap?\ Keep current HS patterns for emphasizing 00:19:260 - this beat.
00:20:130 (2) - ^ Same as above
00:32:086 (2) - ^ Keep for now. Seems no problem with current hs
00:42:521 (1,2,3) - Rhythm suggestion, make 00:42:521 (1) - 1/2 then add a circle on the redtick, next put the 00:43:391 (2) - in the white tick or you could make (2) 1/2 reverse so it follows the vocal You're right, but I didn't follow that vocal on here

sahuang wrote:
[Normal]
00:36:217 (2) - straight line is ok and 00:38:825 (3,4) - i dont understand why u use 3 dots Just my taste
00:41:434 - miss a note.same as 00:40:564 (1) - Current rhythm is right for vocal
00:43:173 - miss a note The last rhythms are not following the vocal

Thanks for moddings!

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Source:魔法少女なんてもういいですから。
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Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2016-04-21T12:09:56+00:00

Gaia wrote:
rank aria

Hollow Delta

793 posts

Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2016-04-21T15:35:45+00:00

Are you accepting Guest Difficulties? If so I'd like to make an Insane / Extra for this song.

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2016-04-21T16:32:20+00:00

Bubblun wrote:
Are you accepting Guest Difficulties? If so I'd like to make an Insane / Extra for this song.

Sorry but i'm not taking more gds for this!

Hollow Delta

793 posts

Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2016-04-21T20:54:31+00:00

Sekaii wrote:
Bubblun wrote:
Are you accepting Guest Difficulties? If so I'd like to make an Insane / Extra for this song.
Sorry but i'm not taking more gds for this!

Well good luck anyways.

Hollow Delta

793 posts

Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2016-04-21T20:54:54+00:00

Sekaii wrote:
Bubblun wrote:
Are you accepting Guest Difficulties? If so I'd like to make an Insane / Extra for this song.
Sorry but i'm not taking more gds for this!

Well, good luck anyways!

Naxess

Nomination Assessment Team

390 posts

Joined March 2016

Naxess 2016-04-21T21:14:17+00:00

From Queue

[

Easy]

SPOILER

00:21:434 (1) - Ctrl + Shift + R -10 degrees, move to (175; 102) for minor improvement in flow between 00:20:999 (4,1)

00:30:130 (3) - In terms of flow, this object is placed badly. Look at the flow between 00:29:260 (2,3,1)
Consider following these steps:

00:26:651 (3) - Ctrl + Shift + R 15 degrees on selection center.
00:28:391 (1) - Same here, but -15 degrees instead (symmetry).
00:29:260 (2) - Move this to (475; 211) and use it to blanket 00:28:391 (1)
00:30:130 (3) - Move to (317; 302) and use it to blanket 00:31:869 (1)

00:41:434 (4) - How about moving the tail of this slider further from 00:42:738 (1) so the transition is smoother?

00:44:043 (3) - I noticed this wasn't linear to the path of the previous slider, it's slightly off. Consider moving it to (87; 113), for example.

That's about all I would change in this one.

[

Karia's Normal]

SPOILER

00:42:521 (1,2,3) - This rhythm seems a bit off considering that you've been following vocal throughout the rest of the song.
Consider using this one, for example:

There seem to be a lot of sliders with excess control points.
00:38:825 (3,4) and 00:42:521 (1,2) - Here's some straight sliders with excess white points in their path, for example.
Even though they don't really matter, I'd still suggest removing them for the sake of professionalism.

00:11:869 (3) and 00:25:782 (3) or 00:35:347 (1) - Just a suggestion, but you could make these notes tight elbow sliders for variation.
Seems like tight elbows and sliderkinks work really well on sliders that have a loud sound on their tail...

00:12:738 (1) and 00:26:651 (1) or 00:15:347 (2) and 00:29:260 (2) - Something similar could be done here, either using a tight elbow here as well (which gets repetitive imo if you've included the two others) or using a sliderkink.

Well, basically just suggestions.

[

Hard]

SPOILER

00:05:564 (2) - I'd move this circle to (185; 27) to continue the flow of 00:04:912 (3)

00:14:478 (1) - I'd make this slider straight to follow vocal better.
00:17:956 (3) - This one, however, you could have a red point in.
Will also make it's slider shape consistent over it's combo which is good for aesthetics.

00:07:086 (2) - Change this slider to a flipped copy of 00:06:651 (1) for better flow.
Then to fix the flow with the circles and also make it more intuitive to play and watch:
00:07:521 (3) - Move to (191; 288)
00:08:391 (4) - Move to (190; 310)
This sort of an effect will make it seem like the circle is moving downwards slowly, which looks better than simply clicking on seemingly stacked circles at the same position over and over again.

00:21:325 (2,5) - I can't hear any sounds on these notes, but they still play well... successful overmapping?

00:38:391 (7) - NC
00:38:608 (1) - ~~Remove NC~~
00:39:695 (6) - NC
00:37:086 (1,2) and 00:38:391 (1,2) and 00:39:695 (1,2) - ~~has inconsistent DS~~
Either way, I think you should change this part's rhythm:
00:37:086 - Here is a downbeat and the start of the measure. One pattern will be used from here to 00:38:717
00:38:825 - Here is another downbeat and the start of a parallel measure of the other one, which suggests that they use the same rhythm.
Basically 00:37:086 - 00:38:717 should use the same rhythm as 00:38:825 - 00:40:456 for the sake of consistency.
Plus it'll allow you to NC and mirror it better by having a pattern that fills a whole measure.
(If you don't decide to make them parallel, see the striked notes instead)

00:26:217 - This sound is clickable, but the same sound at 00:27:086 is not. It's a bit too much to sacrifice an emphasization like this, even considering that you're using a pattern of 1/1 sliders at the start of downbeats during this section. Try this, for example:

To keep this sort of pattern consistent I'll point out some other places as well during this section that should be made like this:
00:30:130 (1) - Make two 1/2 sliders or some circles, as long as 00:30:130 and 00:30:564 are clickable.
00:33:608 (1) - Same, current head and tail should be clickable instead.

00:30:782 (2,3) - Make these a 1/2 slider instead. Placement is perfect though, so it'd look something like this:

[

General]

SPOILER

Sound files are fine.
Audio is of reasonable quality.
Background is right resolution.
There are no song setup inconsistencies.
Nice!

Good luck!

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2016-04-22T07:22:27+00:00

Naxess wrote:
From Queue

[ Easy]
SPOILER
00:21:434 (1) - Ctrl + Shift + R -10 degrees, move to (175; 102) for minor improvement in flow between 00:20:999 (4,1) I don't think it fits

00:30:130 (3) - In terms of flow, this object is placed badly. Look at the flow between 00:29:260 (2,3,1) I don't think there is anything wrong with it, it follows the song nicely, so i might just keep it
Consider following these steps:
00:26:651 (3) - Ctrl + Shift + R 15 degrees on selection center.
00:28:391 (1) - Same here, but -15 degrees instead (symmetry).
00:29:260 (2) - Move this to (475; 211) and use it to blanket 00:28:391 (1)
00:30:130 (3) - Move to (317; 302) and use it to blanket 00:31:869 (1)
00:41:434 (4) - How about moving the tail of this slider further from 00:42:738 (1) so the transition is smoother? nah, i think it's still nice tho. So maybe not

00:44:043 (3) - I noticed this wasn't linear to the path of the previous slider, it's slightly off. Consider moving it to (87; 113), for example. Fixed it

That's about all I would change in this one.

[ Hard]
SPOILER
00:05:564 (2) - I'd move this circle to (185; 27) to continue the flow of 00:04:912 (3) I don't think i like how you did it, and i think i'll just keep it as it is for now. Sorry ></

00:14:478 (1) - I'd make this slider straight to follow vocal better. ^ same
00:17:956 (3) - This one, however, you could have a red point in. I don't think it needed any changing, it still fits the song tbh, so maybe not
Will also make it's slider shape consistent over it's combo which is good for aesthetics.

00:07:086 (2) - Change this slider to a flipped copy of 00:06:651 (1) for better flow. well, maybe it would be nice, but with the flow on my hard diff, i think it'll be better if i just keep it for now, sorry~
Then to fix the flow with the circles and also make it more intuitive to play and watch:
00:07:521 (3) - Move to (191; 288) no changes, I kinda like it like this
00:08:391 (4) - Move to (190; 310) ^
This sort of an effect will make it seem like the circle is moving downwards slowly, which looks better than simply clicking on seemingly stacked circles at the same position over and over again.

00:21:325 (2,5) - I can't hear any sounds on these notes, but they still play well... successful overmapping?

00:38:391 (7) - NC no, it'll ruin my nc patterns
00:38:608 (1) - ~~Remove NC~~ ^
00:39:695 (6) - NC ^
00:37:086 (1,2) and 00:38:391 (1,2) and 00:39:695 (1,2) - ~~has inconsistent DS~~ okay, fixed them~
Either way, I think you should change this part's rhythm:
00:37:086 - Here is a downbeat and the start of the measure. One pattern will be used from here to 00:38:717 I really think this will ruin my rhythm so maybe not
00:38:825 - Here is another downbeat and the start of a parallel measure of the other one, which suggests that they use the same rhythm. ^ same
Basically 00:37:086 - 00:38:717 should use the same rhythm as 00:38:825 - 00:40:456 for the sake of consistency. ^
Plus it'll allow you to NC and mirror it better by having a pattern that fills a whole measure.
(If you don't decide to make them parallel, see the striked notes instead)

00:26:217 - This sound is clickable, but the same sound at 00:27:086 is not. It's a bit too much to sacrifice an emphasization like this, even considering that you're using a pattern of 1/1 sliders at the start of downbeats during this section. Try this, for example: I don't think this fits my diff, so no

To keep this sort of pattern consistent I'll point out some other places as well during this section that should be made like this: ^ same
00:30:130 (1) - Make two 1/2 sliders or some circles, as long as 00:30:130 and 00:30:564 are clickable. ^
00:33:608 (1) - Same, current head and tail should be clickable instead. ^

00:30:782 (2,3) - Make these a 1/2 slider instead. Placement is perfect though, so it'd look something like this:

Good luck!

Thanks for the mod and updated Karia's diff!

Mekki

1,793 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-04-22T12:47:07+00:00

how to get many mods in so short time teach me baka senpai XD

Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,912 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2016-04-22T15:25:30+00:00

Maybe this looks better

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2016-04-22T15:42:51+00:00

wow! it's much better, thanks so much Oko owo/

I'll update the map now =w=/

AmigoDoChroome

228 posts

Joined September 2014

AmigoDoChroome 2016-04-22T18:29:19+00:00

hi, simple mod

easy
perfect easy! congts

normal
00:04:043 (1) - x512 y248
00:32:521 (3) - x276 y168
00:34:695 (4) - x268 y276
00:37:956 (2) - x116 y144

hard
00:12:304 (4) - curved
00:17:086 (3) - x108 y140
00:17:086 (3,5,6) - curved
00:27:521 (3) - x80 y228
00:42:304 (5) - note here

mahou~
ar 8 please
00:21:217 (1) - wrong nc
00:22:956 (1) - ^^
00:31:651 (1) - ^^
00:33:391 (1) - ^^
00:35:130 (1) - ^^

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2016-04-22T22:00:11+00:00

Sekaii so moe <3
Here's my random mod o3o

[Easy]

00:30:130 (3) - My only suggestion here is to replace this slider with two 1/2 sliders, since the vocals doesn't really match with the current slider.

[Karia's Normal]

00:09:260 (3) - To emphasize the key sound, I would suggest adding a soft-whistle here.
00:43:391 (2) - Why not add claps at this slider as well? The clap sounds goes well with the song at 00:42:521 (1) imo.
00:44:043 (3) - Maybe add a finish here just like the other difficulties.

[Hard]

00:15:564 (4,5) - Maybe make a square pattern by stacking 4 with the end of 00:14:478 (1) and moving 00:15:782 (5) around 380|246. You could do this either blanketed or no blanket.

with blanket

252,332,14478,6,0,B|320:312|320:312|400:340,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,244,15130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,332,15347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
385,334,15564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,246,15782,2,0,P|384:208|404:184,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

w/o blanket

252,332,14478,6,0,B|320:312|320:312|400:340,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,244,15130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,332,15347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
385,334,15564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,246,15782,2,0,L|376:176,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Mahou Shoujo]

00:00:565 - Red/Green timing sections have different hitsound volumes here:
Image
00:39:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Optional suggestion, but I would make this stream a bit smoother/cleaner.

Good luck Sekai and Karia. You are free to call me back after a few more mods and once all the mods has been cleared. Have a star icon for now ^-^~

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2016-04-23T03:18:08+00:00

hi hi, you messaged me via forum pm the other day- aaaaa cute song
i was going to mod this later during the weekend, but since ike starred it and it’s short, i figured i might as well mod it now
[Easy]

similarly to what ike pointed out at 00:30:130 (3) - , i think 00:14:478 (1,2) – would be better off if you focused on the main beats (white ticks) instead of the offbeats (red ticks). for example, the vocals on 00:15:347 – are stronger than the vocals at 00:15:130, so maybe use a 2/1 slider followed by a circle instead of the reverse 3/2 slider you used at 00:14:478 (1) -. for 00:16:217 (2) -, the vocals at 00:16:651 and 00:17:086 are stronger than the vocals at 00:16:869, so i think using two 1/1 sliders here instead of the reverse 3/2 slider you used at 00:16:217 (2) – would be more effective. but honestly what you have is fine so feel free to ignore me
00:33:608 (3) – sort of a similar thing here with 00:14:478 (1) – where i think a 2/1 slider + circle would be more effective since the main beats have a bigger emphasis than the offbeat here

[Karia]

00:09:260 (3,1) – mmmm shouldn’t the NC here be reversed? It breaks the NC consistency with the rest of the map
00:43:173 (2) – mm it feels kind of empty here; maybe add a circle?

[Hard]

00:02:304 (1,2) – maybe you can blanket these for nicer aesthetics?

[Magical Girl]

00:44:043 (1) – this is the only diff where the final note is NCed, which makes it feel just a little inconsistent with the other diffs in my opinion. not sure if that was intentional so i’m just going to point that out just in case-

yeah not really much, sorry if this mod was a bit lacklustre. map looks ready to go in my eyes~
hope this helps! take a star c:

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2016-04-23T05:48:50+00:00

Naxess wrote:
[ Karia's Normal]
00:42:521 (1,2,3) - This rhythm seems a bit off considering that you've been following vocal throughout the rest of the song.
Consider using this one, for example:
SPOILER
// I didn't follow only vocals in this song. Followed vocal when it's strong, and followed background sound when it's strong.

There seem to be a lot of sliders with excess control points.
00:38:825 (3,4) and 00:42:521 (1,2) - Here's some straight sliders with excess white points in their path, for example.
Even though they don't really matter, I'd still suggest removing them for the sake of professionalism.
// Just my taste, want to keep them.

00:11:869 (3) and 00:25:782 (3) or 00:35:347 (1) - Just a suggestion, but you could make these notes tight elbow sliders for variation.
Seems like tight elbows and sliderkinks work really well on sliders that have a loud sound on their tail...
SPOILER
// Generally I make a shape for aesthetic things except for some special vocal/sounds. Imo, they are no problem for now.

00:12:738 (1) and 00:26:651 (1) or 00:15:347 (2) and 00:29:260 (2) - Something similar could be done here, either using a tight elbow here as well (which gets repetitive imo if you've included the two others) or using a sliderkink.
SPOILER
// Same reason as above

Well, basically just suggestions.

AmigoDoChroome wrote:
normal
00:04:043 (1) - x512 y248
00:32:521 (3) - x276 y168
00:34:695 (4) - x268 y276
00:37:956 (2) - x116 y144
// I catched what those positions mean, but current positions are also good.

BeatofIke wrote:
[Karia's Normal]
00:09:260 (3) - To emphasize the key sound, I would suggest adding a soft-whistle here. Added
00:43:391 (2) - Why not add claps at this slider as well? The clap sounds goes well with the song at 00:42:521 (1) imo. Added
00:44:043 (3) - Maybe add a finish here just like the other difficulties. Want to keep this. Whistle is best on here because this is not too strong to me.

Doormat wrote:
[Karia]
00:09:260 (3,1) – mmmm shouldn’t the NC here be reversed? It breaks the NC consistency with the rest of the map For 00:09:695 - this vocal
00:43:173 (2) – mm it feels kind of empty here; maybe add a circle? Feels weird because vocal isn't strong at here.

Thanks for moddings!

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 9586
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7521,10999,14478,17956,21434,22956,24912,28391,31869,35347,37086,40564,42521
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Yumeiro Toridori Parade
TitleUnicode:夢色トリドリパレード♫
Artist:Earth Star Dream
ArtistUnicode:Earth Star Dream
Creator:Sekaii
Version:Karia's Normal
Source:魔法少女なんてもういいですから。
Tags:Mahou Shoujo Nante Mou Iidesukara opening tvsize tv size Sekai-nyan Sekai Karia
BeatmapID:957933
BeatmapSetID:445895

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"45555.jpg",0,0
Video,158,"video.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
565,434.782608695652,4,2,1,60,1,0
4043,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
10999,-100,4,2,1,75,0,1
11108,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,0
Combo2 : 255,170,255
Combo3 : 176,87,249
Combo4 : 64,64,255
Combo5 : 255,145,145
Combo6 : 157,255,157
Combo7 : 100,177,255
Combo8 : 255,255,136

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Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2016-04-23T07:16:09+00:00

Thanks guys for your mods, also thank you Ike-senpai for your star icon www

Fixed everything on them ></

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2016-04-24T16:39:05+00:00

Support

Star~

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2016-04-24T18:25:38+00:00

Thanks for the star and support Dream :3

Hollow Delta

793 posts

Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2016-04-25T19:22:13+00:00

Not much I have to say about this Beatmap, so I'll just give you a star!

Chyo-Kun

308 posts

Joined May 2012

Chyo-Kun 2016-04-26T20:33:09+00:00

Requested in my modding queue !
[This mod has been done with both hitsounds and music volume set to 100%]

General

The song is really upbeat and happy, it's a shame there are no kiai times. The one in the GD is really good though, it starts right after the calm introduction. I suggest adding it to every difficulty!

00:10:999 - Add green point with kiai time ON
00:11:108 - Add green point with kiai time OFF

Easy
The difficulty is good as it is and doesn't NEED any change, but 00:37:086 (3,4,1,2) I don't really like this part, in my opinion a spinner fits better and adds a little variety to the diff, the slow sliders get boring after a while (you also get the added bonus of having a spinner in your easy, the top50 won't be a list of HDDTHRFL with the same exact score)

00:37:086 (3,4,1,2) - Remove those objects
Add a spinner that starts on 00:37:086 and ends on 00:39:695
00:41:434 (2) 00:43:173 (2) - Are these finishes really needed? They don't sound fitting to me

Karia's Normal
00:04:043 (1) - Replace this whisle with a clap? Sounds better to me
00:43:391 (2) - Add a clap

Hard
00:27:521 (3) - I really don't like this slider-triplet, it feels so unnecessary. My suggestion would be removing it and adding two beats 00:27:521 here and 00:27:738 here

Insane
I can't find anything to change, nice diff!

Best of luck in ranking this, nice little song that will be stuck in my head for the next 12 hours
I hope my mod was of help.

Janpai

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Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-04-27T02:46:14+00:00

don't forget me plis ;w;

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2016-04-27T15:25:47+00:00

Janpai wrote:
don't forget me plis ;w;

don't worry, i didn't really forget you =3=/

Arusamour

424 posts

Joined April 2014

Arusamour 2016-04-27T15:44:04+00:00

i have no idea how to mod this.. lemeow. sorry

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2016-04-30T03:07:04+00:00

00:33:608 (3) - I would say, replace this slider with two 1/2 sliders on Easy difficulty. The rest are fine.
Call me back so I can eat you <3

Suimya

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2016-04-30T08:19:43+00:00

I think i fixed it now, hopefully it's good enough =w=/

Thanks for the recheck Ike-senpai ><//

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2016-04-30T15:29:13+00:00

I guess on Insane diff, you meant to put OD 6.5 instead of OD 6.6
Plz don't kill me -runs-

Suimya

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2016-04-30T15:32:24+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
I guess on Insane diff, you meant to put OD 6.5 instead of OD 6.6
Plz don't kill me -runs-

moe Ike-senpai =w=/

Done <3

BeatofIke

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Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2016-04-30T15:36:47+00:00

Looks good now. Good luck Sekaii ^-^~

Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,912 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2016-05-16T19:28:57+00:00

hello, just as you didn't request here's a mod

[Mahou Shoujo]
AR 8.5 seems to be pushing it imo, it rarely shows more than 3 objects on the screen which isn't necessary at this density or bpm. tldr i think it's too high and 8 would work better.
00:00:565 (1) - 00:04:043 (1) - i think 1/3 reverse sliders do these sounds more justice
00:03:173 (6) - i think an 1/2 rhythm would fit better for an insane

[karia]
i think starting your map with an 1/1 slider is more player-friendly as they don't have any referencemusic before 00:00:565 - so 00:00:565 (1) - is harder to hit since they only have an approachcircle (im suggesting to start the map with an 1/1 slider instead)
00:15:130 - 00:29:043 - i think this kind of rhythm fits the vocals better http://puu.sh/oUgv7/abc1b57414.jpg
00:42:521 (1,2) - i think this rhythm would be more intuitive and overall more interesting: http://puu.sh/oUgAW/926a49cdf6.jpg

call me back, most of this should be done in about 10 mins lol

lolia

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Joined May 2012

lolia 2016-05-17T13:08:07+00:00

Chyo-Kun wrote:
Karia's Normal
00:04:043 (1) - Replace this whisle with a clap? Sounds better to me Imo, whistle is the best

Okorin wrote:
[karia]
00:15:130 - 00:29:043 - i think this kind of rhythm fits the vocals better http://puu.sh/oUgv7/abc1b57414.jpg I cut this rhythm intentionally cuz that rhythm feels too dense orz

Deleted = Fixed
Thanks for moddings!

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 9586
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7521,10999,14478,17956,21434,22956,24912,28391,31869,35347,37086,40564,42521
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Yumeiro Toridori Parade
TitleUnicode:夢色トリドリパレード♫
Artist:Earth Star Dream
ArtistUnicode:Earth Star Dream
Creator:Sekaii
Version:Karia's Normal
Source:魔法少女なんてもういいですから。
Tags:Mahou Shoujo Nante Mou Iidesukara opening tvsize tv size Sekai-nyan Sekai Karia
BeatmapID:957933
BeatmapSetID:445895

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"45555.jpg",0,0
Video,158,"video.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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