UNISON SQUARE GARDEN - Dareka ga Wasurete Iru kamo Shirenai · forum

No issue found.

01:21:032 (6,7) - do this http://imgur.com/2HLx74R

00:16:542 (8,1) - Kayaknya kejauhan deh buat hard. Apalagi di pojokan gitu
00:45:930 (7,8,1) - masalah kecil sih.. cuma arah stack nya keatasin deh :v
00:55:930 (6,1) - Daripada kosong gitu mending isi ginian http://imgur.com/DOlDWdy
01:32:664 (1,2,3) - stacknya sesuain arah slider
01:38:379 (2,3,4) - ^

No issue found.

01:22:665 (2) - Off-screen
01:38:176 (5) - ^

That's all. Sorry if I missed many things. Also thanks for choosing me~

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

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Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-21T02:38:34+00:00

MeinGauche wrote:
Hi, I came from queue~

Easy
No issue found.
Normal
01:21:032 (6,7) - do this http://imgur.com/2HLx74R - menrutuku nggk masuk ritme :/
Hard
00:16:542 (8,1) - Kayaknya kejauhan deh buat hard. Apalagi di pojokan gitu - saya ngejump disini dan juga slidernya nggk buruk2 amat ~
00:45:930 (7,8,1) - masalah kecil sih.. cuma arah stack nya keatasin deh :v - nggk ngerti :3 ~
00:55:930 (6,1) - Daripada kosong gitu mending isi ginian http://imgur.com/DOlDWdy - untuk saat ini saya tetap kosongkan ~
01:32:664 (1,2,3) - stacknya sesuain arah slider - sumpah aku nggk ngerti apa yang kau maksud ini :'3
01:38:379 (2,3,4) - ^ - ^ masa di stack ~ kan circle (4) itu untuk jump ~
Light Insane
No issue found.

That's all. Sorry if I missed many things. Also thanks for choosing me~

Makasih modnya ~ Tapi nggk ada perubahan hehe :3

Akitoshi

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Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-06-21T06:19:26+00:00

@MeinGauche they aren't offscreen even for playing

and @-NanoRIPE- yep don't forget to update my diff xd

-NanoRIPE-

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Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-21T07:40:15+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
@MeinGauche they aren't offscreen even for playing

and @-NanoRIPE- yep don't forget to update my diff xd

oops i'm almost forget to update it okay,Update ~

ncuh

185 posts

Joined July 2013

ncuh 2016-06-21T10:08:08+00:00

NM request from my queue

00:02:052 (1,1) - fix blanket
00:21:440 - there is should be tap I guess(there is not music beat or smth but playing rly better with it)
00:40:419 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:46:950 (3) - there is beat on blue tic, so better do like this http://i.imgur.com/DpwOiFh.png
00:48:583 (3) - same^
00:50:215 (4,5) - same situation http://i.imgur.com/LZyKXlq.png I know, it's only hard, but I am sure u shouldn't ignore that
00:52:154 - there's should be a note
00:53:379 - same^
00:53:787 - same
00:54:195 - same
01:07:971 (2,3) - fix blanket

00:14:093 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:14:909 (4,5) - same
00:17:358 (2,3) - same
00:21:440 - there is should be tap I guess(there is not music beat or smth but playing rly better with it)
00:23:277 (3,4,5) - bad flow
00:46:950 (4) - well. Same as 00:46:950 at hard diff
00:48:583 same
00:50:215 ^
same
same
same))))
01:30:011 (4,1) - fix blanket

I want to say. These 2 diffs looks very...symmilar. When I opened light insane, I thought that I accidentally opened again hard diff

-NanoRIPE-

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Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-22T01:52:29+00:00

M1k0 wrote:
NM request from my queue
Hard
00:02:052 (1,1) - fix blanket
00:21:440 - there is should be tap I guess(there is not music or smth but playing rly better with it)
00:40:419 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:46:950 (3) - there is on blue tic, so better do like this http://i.imgur.com/DpwOiFh.png
00:48:583 (3) - same^
00:50:215 (4,5) - same situation http://i.imgur.com/LZyKXlq.png I know, it's only hard, but I am sure u shouldn't ignore that
00:52:154 - there's should be a note
00:53:379 - same^
00:53:787 - same
00:54:195 - same
01:07:971 (2,3) - fix blanket

Light Insane
00:14:093 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:14:909 (4,5) - same
00:17:358 (2,3) - same
00:21:440 - there is should be tap I guess(there is not music or smth but playing rly better with it)
00:23:277 (3,4,5) - bad flow
00:46:950 (4) - well. Same as 00:46:950 at hard diff
00:48:583 same
00:50:215 ^
same
same
same))))
01:30:011 (4,1) - fix blanket

I want to say. These 2 diffs looks very...symmilar. When I opened light insane, I thought that I accidentally opened again hard diff

All fixed! ~ Thanks for your mod!!

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-06-22T08:03:27+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue~

[Easy]

00:46:134 (1,2) - Ctrl+G rhythm? Just my preference but I think a slider would support a cymbal + guitar sound on 00:46:134 better.
00:52:664 (1) - The rhythm is going on constantly, so 00:53:073 shouldn't be skipped, how about a 1/1 repeat slider here?
01:25:726 - Should be clickable, it's just the same sound as 01:25:317 after all.
01:28:583 (3,4) - Use a circle + 1/1 repeat slider instead of these? Having a chain of 1/1 sliders this long 01:26:950 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) is quite repetitive.

[Normal]

Wish to see a soft-sliderslide here, it's awkward to hear creaky sound on 00:10:828 (1) - 00:32:664 (4) .
00:22:868 - Clap here instead of whistle? Also a missing whistle on 00:23:277 .
00:54:705 (4,5) - Ctrl+G rhythm would match perfectly with vocal, also it's a bit uncomfortable to have a weaker sound on 00:55:317 clickable.

[Hard]

00:12:664 (3,4,1) - The spacing difference between these is so high and it's kinda uncomfortable, can you use a similar spacing as 00:15:930 (7,8,1) ?
00:32:868 - This beat is strong enough to call for a whistle or other minor hitsounds imo.
00:57:562 (1,2) - a slightly off blanket I guess

Hope this helps and good luck~

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2016-06-22T08:32:29+00:00

[akitoshi]

AR8 pls :V /runs
00:15:931 (3,1,3) - small blanket error here
00:40:420 (3,1) - blanket error

[kok ringan kali insane ny? dah kurus?]

00:05:113 (1) - coba remove NC ni, baru 00:05:522 (2) - NC ini. biar lebih enak rhythm ny sih
00:58:583 (8,1,2,3,4,5,1) - aneh amat NC set lu buat dari stream ini :/. coba 00:58:583 (8) - NC, baru 00:58:685 (1) - remove NC

[keras kali ni]

00:05:113 (1,2) - sama kek diff di atas
00:59:807 (3,4) - perbaiki blanket ny
01:07:971 (2,3) - ^

tu aja

GL!

-NanoRIPE-

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Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-22T11:52:08+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue~

[Easy]

00:46:134 (1,2) - Ctrl+G rhythm? Just my preference but I think a slider would support a cymbal + guitar sound on 00:46:134 better. - nope ~ i think its fine ~
00:52:664 (1) - The rhythm is going on constantly, so 00:53:073 shouldn't be skipped, how about a 1/1 repeat slider here?
01:25:726 - Should be clickable, it's just the same sound as 01:25:317 after all.
01:28:583 (3,4) - Use a circle + 1/1 repeat slider instead of these? Having a chain of 1/1 sliders this long 01:26:950 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) is quite repetitive. - hmm i will consider it ~ *waiting other opinion about this ~
[Normal]

Wish to see a soft-sliderslide here, it's awkward to hear creaky sound on 00:10:828 (1) - 00:32:664 (4) . - hmm i will try to search another hitsound ~ but now i will keep it ~
00:22:868 - Clap here instead of whistle? Also a missing whistle on 00:23:277 .
00:54:705 (4,5) - Ctrl+G rhythm would match perfectly with vocal, also it's a bit uncomfortable to have a weaker sound on 00:55:317 clickable.
[Hard]

00:12:664 (3,4,1) - The spacing difference between these is so high and it's kinda uncomfortable, can you use a similar spacing as 00:15:930 (7,8,1) ?
00:32:868 - This is strong enough to call for a whistle or other minor hitsounds imo.
00:57:562 (1,2) - a slightly off blanket I guess
Hope this helps and good luck~

lit120 wrote:
[kok ringan kali insane ny? dah kurus?]
00:05:113 (1) - coba remove NC ni, baru 00:05:522 (2) - NC ini. biar lebih enak rhythm ny sih
00:58:583 (8,1,2,3,4,5,1) - aneh amat NC set lu buat dari stream ini :/. coba 00:58:583 (8) - NC, baru 00:58:685 (1) - remove NC
[keras kali ni]
00:05:113 (1,2) - sama kek diff di atas
00:59:807 (3,4) - perbaiki blanket ny
01:07:971 (2,3) - ^
*Diff namenya jangan kasih nama kayak gitulah kak ;w;

tu aja

GL!

No reply = Fixed ~

Thanks for the mod!! ~

Akitoshi

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Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-06-22T14:11:30+00:00

@lit120 Light insane has AR8 so why not 8.2 :^))))))))

I think fixed that blankets now

asd

osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:ユニゾン・スクエア・ガーデン
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Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Foxy Grandpa 2016-06-23T06:22:43+00:00

Hi, from my queue~

Really, in all honesty the 2 insane difficulties look ready for rank to me, i couldn't find a single thing i didn't like about it

For hard:

00:35:930 (1,2,3) - what looks better is if you were to move 1 and 2 up to the middle of the two sliders
00:37:766 (6,1) - Move 1 back a little more
00:58:583 (5,6,7) - you should make 7 a repeating slider, fits the drums better

Maps look great, good luck!

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-23T07:41:13+00:00

FoxyGrandpa wrote:
Hi, from my queue~

Really, in all honesty the 2 insane difficulties look ready for rank to me, i couldn't find a single thing i didn't like about it - really? hmm maybe i will call BN soon ~

For hard:

00:35:930 (1,2,3) - what looks better is if you were to move 1 and 2 up to the middle of the two sliders - hmm i think its fine imo ~
00:37:766 (6,1) - Move 1 back a little more - nope ~
00:58:583 (5,6,7) - you should make 7 a repeating slider, fits the drums better - okay ~

Maps look great, good luck!

Thanks for your mod!! ~

AmigoDoChroome

228 posts

Joined September 2014

AmigoDoChroome 2016-06-23T20:01:33+00:00

Hi
m4m you request

Easy

00:03:685 (1) - nc here and remove 00:05:113 (2) -
00:29:603 - strong hit here, guy
00:38:787 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - the same flow... it's weird
01:04:093 (4) - blanket
01:39:399 (1) - extend 01:43:277 -

Normal
i like it

Hard
01:08:991 (1) - forced jump
01:12:868 (1) - forced jump in red tick
01:12:868 (1) - remove nc
01:14:501 (1) - ^^^^^
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - forced ds

Ligth Insane
00:02:052 (1,1) - remove nc's
00:05:317 - strong hit
00:06:032 (4) - stack with 00:06:134 (5) -
00:41:236 (1,2) - bad flow here
00:43:481 (4) -
01:24:297 (4) - ctrl + <
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - forced ds

Aki's Insane
00:02:052 (1,1) - remove the nc
00:05:522 (1) - ^^
00:15:727 (2) - stack with 00:15:931 (3) -
00:32:868 (5) - stack 00:33:074 (1) -
01:20:420 (1) - again this?
01:35:931 (3) - wtf

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-23T23:24:03+00:00

AmigoDoChroome wrote:
Hi
m4m you request

Easy

00:03:685 (1) - nc here and remove 00:05:113 (2) -
00:29:603 - strong hit here, guy - i think easy's diff dont need 1/2 beat :/
00:38:787 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - the same flow... it's weird
01:04:093 (4) - blanket - ?
01:39:399 (1) - extend 01:43:277 - i'm follow Aki's Insane spinner ~

Normal
i like it - Thanks

Hard
01:08:991 (1) - forced jump - i think its fine ~
01:12:868 (1) - forced jump in red tick -
01:12:868 (1) - remove nc
01:14:501 (1) - ^^^^^
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - forced ds - i think its fine ~ (same as light insane)

Ligth Insane
00:02:052 (1,1) - remove nc's - why ;w;?
00:05:317 - strong hit - i didnt hear anything at that :/
00:06:032 (4) - stack with 00:06:134 (5) - hmm its too hard to read it if i stacked ~
00:41:236 (1,2) - bad flow here - hmmm its okay imo ~
00:43:481 (4) - ?
01:24:297 (4) - ctrl + < - waaat?
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - forced ds - i think its fine (same as hard :< )

No Reply = fixed ~

Thanks for your mod!! ~

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2016-06-24T03:12:55+00:00

Add "DUGOUT ACCIDENT"to source?
[Aki's Insane]
Well Done
[Light Insane]
00:07:562 - break start here?for bass not vocal
00:23:277 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5459504 how about this? make a sence of shifting.
00:26:542 (1,2) - use rotation?looks not same
00:54:705 (2) - fix blanket
01:15:930 (2,3) - use rotation?looks not same
[Hard]
00:07:562 - break start here
blankets could be fixed better.
00:48:379 (3,4,5,6) - I think this partten is unread able for Hard
00:50:011 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:53:277 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:25:113 (4,1) - 232,108 better blanket
[Normal]
00:39:399 (5) - del
[Easy]
00:02:052 - spinner from 00:00:522 - instead
00:03:685 - ^ better for hidden
00:07:562 - break start here

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-24T04:17:34+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
Add "DUGOUT ACCIDENT"to source? - this song from Album "DUGOUT ACCIDENT" by UNISON SQUARE GARDEN ;w;

[Light Insane]
00:07:562 - break start here?for bass not vocal
00:23:277 (3) - https://.ppy.sh/ss/5459504 how about this? make a sence of shifting. - fixed in another way ~
00:26:542 (1,2) - use rotation?looks not same
00:54:705 (2) - fix blanket
01:15:930 (2,3) - use rotation?looks not same
[Hard]
00:07:562 - break start here
blankets could be fixed better.
00:48:379 (3,4,5,6) - I think this partten is unread able for Hard
00:50:011 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:53:277 (3,4,5,6) - ^ - hmm i will waiting other opinion about this ~
01:25:113 (4,1) - 232,108 better blanket - waaaat??? its really weird imo
[Normal]
00:39:399 (5) - del - if i delete it,its looks incosistent with 00:36:134 (5)
[Easy]
00:02:052 - spinner from 00:00:522 - instead - nope ~ there has strong at 00:02:052 and 00:03:685
00:03:685 - ^ better for hidden - ^
00:07:562 - break start here

No reply = fixed

Thanks for your mod!! ~

Last edited by -NanoRIPE- 2016-06-24T05:05:27+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-06-24T04:40:51+00:00

AmigoDoChroome wrote:
Aki's Insane
00:02:052 (1,1) - remove the nc no this is how I intro for 3 long sliders
00:05:522 (1) - ^^ for less conflict with 1/1 gap
00:15:727 (2) - stack with 00:15:931 (3) - meh looks bad xd
00:32:868 (5) - stack 00:33:074 (1) - same
01:20:420 (1) - again this? why?
01:35:931 (3) - wtf do you even playing or seeing how evilelvis doing his wave slider? :3

no change~
thanks for the check!

Spiraler

152 posts

Joined November 2014

Spiraler 2016-06-24T07:36:33+00:00

From my queue

00:22:053 (3,4) - this is a bit of a weird flow, it's just barely angled away
00:28:176 (1) - I think this slider's top curve is a little too sharp to blanket 00:27:359 (3) properly
00:29:808 (1,2) - this is kind of a minor point but these are irritatingly similar and yet not the same
00:40:420 (3) - honestly I don't think either curve is quite suited for the blankets attempted here
01:28:584 (1) - this curve looks a little weird...

00:05:113 (2) - I think this blanket looks better if you move the circle like 3 units down (x:344 y:91)
00:23:277 (3,5) - are both of these missing hitclap on the end?
00:28:583 (2) - and this missing hitclap on the start?
01:26:746 (6,1) - little bit of an awkward flow here

00:02:052 (1,1) - this is a very questionable blanket
00:10:828 (1,2,3,4,1) - this all just seems like a strange spacing to put these circles at in a Hard
00:15:930 (7) - is the end missing a hitclap?
00:25:317 (2) - missing hitclap
01:34:909 (4,5) - questionable blanket
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - this triple has inconsistent spacing

00:42:256 (5) - shouldn't the reverse arrow have hitclap instead of hitwhistle?
01:09:399 (2) - shouldn't the start have hitclap?
01:19:195 (2) - ^

No comments for easy.

Very nice and fun set, good luck with rank!

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-24T08:22:47+00:00

Spiral527 wrote:
From my queue

Light Insane
00:05:113 (2) - I think this blanket looks better if you move the circle like 3 units down (x:344 y:91) - sure
00:23:277 (3,5) - are both of these missing hitclap on the end? - oops fixed ~
00:28:583 (2) - and this missing hitclap on the start? - i'm such an idiot ;w; fixed ~
01:26:746 (6,1) - little bit of an awkward flow here - hmm fixed a little bit ~

Hard
00:02:052 (1,1) - this is a very questionable blanket - i think its fine imo ~
00:10:828 (1,2,3,4,1) - this all just seems like a strange spacing to put these circles at in a Hard - fixed ~ *except (4,1) for consistent jump with 00:13:277 (4,1)
00:15:930 (7) - is the end missing a hitclap? - oops fixed ~
00:25:317 (2) - missing hitclap - ahhh i forget it ;w;
01:34:909 (4,5) - questionable blanket - hmm if i change the slider,it will ruin the pattern ;w;
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - this triple has inconsistent spacing - fixed

Normal
00:42:256 (5) - shouldn't the reverse arrow have hitclap instead of hitwhistle? - hmm sure
01:09:399 (2) - shouldn't the start have hitclap? - ok
01:19:195 (2) - ^ - i forget to add it ;w;

No comments for easy.

Very nice and fun set, good luck with rank!

Thanks!! for your mod!! ~

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-06-25T12:00:24+00:00

hi

[-AKiTOSHi-]
00:30:216 (2) - split to circles for vocals ?
00:43:482 (3,4) - try ctrl+g rhythm!
nice

[Light Insane]
00:18:379 (5) - move the head to the left for better flow!
00:38:175 (7,1) - why this has less spacing than 6 -> 7 :c
00:46:848 - 00:48:481 - 00:49:705 - lol missing note its light insane itshould be fine if you map them
00:55:930 - this rhythm would make most sense here http://puu.sh/pFrkE/32eda4b66c.jpg
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - make it curve down like this would b more comfortable to play! http://puu.sh/pFrqY/41814f6edc.jpg

[Hard]
00:02:052 (1,1) - lol blanket
00:36:950 (4,5) - 00:57:562 (1,2) - 01:07:971 (2,3) -
01:13:889 (6,7,1,2) - try make symmetry shape for aesthetics pls ( move 7 and 1 http://puu.sh/pFrCW/a54aaf3e4f.jpg )

[Normal]
00:11:848 (3,4) - blanket xd ( i wont mention other ones)
00:33:481 (1,2) - change to 1/1 reverse + circle fits better with vocals!
01:29:807 (1,2,3) - stack 12 on 3's head pls so it'll be easier, cuz this is hard for beginners to hit

thats it good luck

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-25T12:30:12+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
hi

[Light Insane]
00:18:379 (5) - move the head to the left for better flow! - nah ~ i think its fine ~
00:38:175 (7,1) - why this has less spacing than 6 -> 7 :c - fixed xd
00:46:848 - 00:48:481 - 00:49:705 - lol missing note its light insane itshould be fine if you map them - okay ~
00:55:930 - this rhythm would make most sense here http://puu.sh/pFrkE/32eda4b66c.jpg - will consider it ~
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - make it curve down like this would b more comfortable to play! http://puu.sh/pFrqY/41814f6edc.jpg - hmm agreed ~

[Hard]
00:02:052 (1,1) - lol blanket - hmm maybe i will change the shape (for better blanket)
00:36:950 (4,5) - 00:57:562 (1,2) - 01:07:971 (2,3) - i think its fine at all ~
01:13:889 (6,7,1,2) - try make symmetry shape for aesthetics pls ( move 7 and 1 http://puu.sh/pFrCW/a54aaf3e4f.jpg ) - ok fixed xd

[Normal]
00:11:848 (3,4) - blanket xd ( i wont mention other ones) - i'm tried xd
00:33:481 (1,2) - change to 1/1 reverse + circle fits better with vocals! - ok ok fixed
01:29:807 (1,2,3) - stack 12 on 3's head pls so it'll be easier, cuz this is hard for beginners to hit - hmm agreed ~

thats it good luck

Thanks for your mod!! ~

GENDER BENDER

196 posts

Joined June 2013

GENDER BENDER 2016-06-25T13:39:43+00:00

from here t/470617
Note: I did Ez and normal last night and the rest this morning, you updated the map during that time so some might not apply haha
Half of it is on blanket lol~

00:22:052 (4) - move the middle point to x: 56 y: 248 so the blanket looks clean
00:24:501 (3) - change this slider's shape so the blanket looks clean
00:35:522 (4) - cleaner blanket xD
00:38:787 (5,2) - stack?
00:38:787 (5,2) - cleaner blanket
01:01:440 (4) - cleaner blanket
01:23:685 (3) - drum whistle
01:30:215 (2) - not sure if this was done on purpose, but was expecting a finish here
there's a distance snap issue with AImod at 01:28:583 (3,4) - but I don't think it matters xD up to you if you wanna fix it

00:17:154 (2) - blanket fix
00:24:909 (3) - ^
00:30:215 (1) - ^
00:34:297 (2) - ^
00:39:603 (1) - ^
00:40:419 (2) - ^
00:43:685 (2) - ^
00:55:113 (5) - clap on slider end?
01:14:705 (4,5) - why not put clap on slider end as well
01:16:338 (3) - blanket fix

00:02:052 (1) - move middle point x:292 y: 272
00:03:685 (1) - blanket fix
00:07:358 - break should be a little later so it's same as other diff
00:37:154 (5) - blanket fix
00:57:766 (2) - ^
01:08:175 (3) - ^
01:11:644 (5) - ^

00:28:175 (1) - whistle
00:29:807 (5) - ^
00:30:419 (2) - ^ slider end
00:46:134 - just a suggestion but this part sounds different right? i think it would sound better if the claps in this section are drum
00:56:338 (1) - clap?
01:30:828 (2) - whistle
01:37:562 (3) - ^

00:07:562 - delay the break a little? haha
00:46:543 (3) - drum clap to keep consistency?
00:53:482 (3) - ^
01:13:890 (1) - whistle sounds better on slider beginning, not end
01:23:686 (1) - drum clap?
01:24:501 (4) - no clap
01:24:910 (6) - yes clap

Fun stuff Good luck~

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-06-25T16:33:53+00:00

Spiral527 wrote:
Aki's Insane
00:22:053 (3,4) - this is a bit of a weird flow, it's just barely angled away not rly weird imo
00:28:176 (1) - I think this slider's top curve is a little too sharp to blanket 00:27:359 (3) properly s t y l e
00:29:808 (1,2) - this is kind of a minor point but these are irritatingly similar and yet not the same
00:40:420 (3) - honestly I don't think either curve is quite suited for the blankets attempted here it iss
01:28:584 (1) - this curve looks a little weird...why everyone hating my various sliders orz

Deppyforce wrote:
hi

[-AKiTOSHi-] Firetruck my old name
00:30:216 (2) - split to circles for vocals ?
00:43:482 (3,4) - try ctrl+g rhythm!
nice neci

warpgenius wrote:
Aki's Insane
00:07:562 - delay the break a little? haha
00:46:543 (3) - drum clap to keep consistency?
00:53:482 (3) - ^
01:13:890 (1) - whistle sounds better on slider beginning, not end
01:23:686 (1) - drum clap?
01:24:501 (4) - no clap
01:24:910 (6) - yes clap

no reply = fixed, thank you guys~

upd8

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-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-25T23:09:40+00:00

warpgenius wrote:
from here https://.ppy.sh/forum/t/470617
Note: I did Ez and normal last night and the rest this morning, you updated the map during that time so some might not apply haha
Half of it is on blanket lol~
Easy
00:22:052 (4) - move the middle point to x: 56 y: 248 so the blanket looks clean
00:24:501 (3) - change this slider's shape so the blanket looks clean
00:35:522 (4) - cleaner blanket xD
00:38:787 (5,2) - stack?
00:38:787 (5,2) - cleaner blanket
01:01:440 (4) - cleaner blanket
01:23:685 (3) - drum whistle
01:30:215 (2) - not sure if this was done on purpose, but was expecting a finish here
there's a distance snap issue with AImod at 01:28:583 (3,4) - but I don't think it matters xD up to you if you wanna fix it
Normal
00:17:154 (2) - blanket fix
00:24:909 (3) - ^
00:30:215 (1) - ^
00:34:297 (2) - ^
00:39:603 (1) - ^
00:40:419 (2) - ^
00:43:685 (2) - ^
00:55:113 (5) - clap on slider end?
01:14:705 (4,5) - why not put clap on slider end as well
01:16:338 (3) - blanket fix
Hard
00:02:052 (1) - move middle point x:292 y: 272
00:03:685 (1) - blanket fix
00:07:358 - break should be a little later so it's same as other diff
00:37:154 (5) - blanket fix
00:57:766 (2) - ^
01:08:175 (3) - ^
01:11:644 (5) - ^
Light Insane
00:28:175 (1) - whistle
00:29:807 (5) - ^
00:30:419 (2) - ^ slider end
00:46:134 - just a suggestion but this part sounds different right? i think it would sound better if the claps in this section are drum
00:56:338 (1) - clap?
01:30:828 (2) - whistle
01:37:562 (3) - ^
Fun stuff Good luck~

Fixed all (I guess) ~
Thanks for your mod!!

beaw

632 posts

Joined July 2015

beaw 2016-06-26T04:04:53+00:00

Hello >///< There's already a ton of mods so don't listen to me if my mod sucks

I didn't find anything here... it's pretty set, in my opinion.

I didn't anything here either...

Uhhh... Nothing here either...

...

...

I'm just... gonna go... It would've been nice to see an Extra difficulty on this song though. The only things I found in any of the maps were things like Nc placements and slider angles. I'm not sure if that's important to you or not...

Thank you, and good luck!~

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-26T04:56:01+00:00

Stingy wrote:
Hello >///< There's already a ton of mods so don't listen to me if my mod sucks

Easy
I didn't find anything here... it's pretty set, in my opinion.

Normal
I didn't anything here either...

Hard
Uhhh... Nothing here either...

Light Insane
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Aki's Insane
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I'm just... gonna go... It would've been nice to see an Extra difficulty on this song though. - nah ~ its enough xd since the BPM of this song is 147
The only things I found in any of the maps were things like Nc placements and slider angles. I'm not sure if that's important to you or not... - okay....

Thank you, and good luck!~

hmm since you're tried to find any problem on my map xd its enough for meh ~

Rieri

905 posts

Joined December 2014

Rieri 2016-06-26T05:38:37+00:00

Hello~ M4M from my queue

General

Your ncs aren't all consistent, making them consistent would be much better and reduce confusion.
Check all sliders for imperfect blankets.

whats the point of having x0.5 velocity if youre only mapping circles xD there shouldnt be any velocity changes on easy anyways
00:00:420 (1,2,1,2) - not sure about stacking these, is it okay to do this?
00:19:603 (5) - usually, you dont put a slider where theres a big cymbal like that, i recommend this rhythm so you can emphasize the finish a bit better.
00:21:644 (3,4) - blanket, not mentioning any more, check every slider for imperfect blankets
01:22:052 (1,2) - this is not the first time you made the flow change to another direction, 01:22:460 (2) - ctrl-g on this would make a much better flow imo

00:43:685 (2,3,4) - putting this more in a straight line would make it flow better, you can tell it's not straight if you see the follow points
00:55:930 (1,2) - how about a short slider instead to make it a bit easier
01:09:399 (2,3) - put circle directly above the slider for flow

00:00:420 (1,1,1) - you should have mapped it like this on easy and normal too
00:46:950 (3,4,5) - hmm, looks sorta cramped. make the two circles stick out of the slider so it can be read easily
00:48:583 (4,5,6) - ^ same thing for other similar patterns
01:05:317 (4,1) - unusual spacing compared to other spacing
01:08:175 (3,2) - touching
01:10:215 (4,1) - doesn't seem suitable for a hard

00:59:399 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you could make a fancier pattern than this
01:17:766 (3) - ctrl-g would have a better flow
01:26:134 (3,4,5,6) - make into a perfect square

Good luck with the mapset

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-06-26T06:39:32+00:00

M4M

00:32:868 This Green line come to 00:33:073 here and 00:33:277 This Green line come to 00:33:481

[Easy]

00:00:420 (1,2,1,2) - spread note?
00:18:379 (3) - Remove Whistle (drum sound is little weird.)

[Nromal]

01:25:726 (2,3,1) - Check Distance
01:29:195 (4,1) - ^

[Hard]

01:39:297 (1) - Make Spiner start 01:39:399 (Easy / Normal is same But hard is not. also match Green line)

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-26T09:31:00+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
Hello~ M4M from my queue

General
Your ncs aren't all consistent, making them consistent would be much better and reduce confusion. - i will fix some ~
Check all sliders for imperfect blankets. - ok

Easy
whats the point of having x0.5 velocity if youre only mapping circles xD there shouldnt be any velocity changes on easy anyways - xd woaah i'm such a idiot
00:00:420 (1,2,1,2) - not sure about stacking these, is it okay to do this? - yeah ~ it will make easier
00:19:603 (5) - usually, you dont put a slider where theres a big cymbal like that, i recommend this rhythm so you can emphasize the finish a bit better. - xd fixed
00:21:644 (3,4) - blanket, not mentioning any more, check every slider for imperfect blankets - k
01:22:052 (1,2) - this is not the first time you made the flow change to another direction, 01:22:460 (2) - ctrl-g on this would make a much better flow imo - nice catch

Normal
00:43:685 (2,3,4) - putting this more in a straight line would make it flow better, you can tell it's not straight if you see the follow points - xd sorry i'm not understand ~
00:55:930 (1,2) - how about a short slider instead to make it a bit easier - fixed
01:09:399 (2,3) - put circle directly above the slider for flow - nope xd

Hard
00:00:420 (1,1,1) - you should have mapped it like this on easy and normal too - if i mapped like this it will make weird xd imo ~ (very long sliders)
00:46:950 (3,4,5) - hmm, looks sorta cramped. make the two circles stick out of the slider so it can be read easily - ok i will do it for pattern like this
00:48:583 (4,5,6) - ^ same thing for other similar patterns - ^
01:05:317 (4,1) - unusual spacing compared to other spacing - nah ~ for consistency with 01:08:787 (4,1)
01:08:175 (3,2) - touching - fixed
01:10:215 (4,1) - doesn't seem suitable for a hard - nah i think its fine

Light Insane
00:59:399 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you could make a fancier pattern than this - but i dont have any idea for this pattern ;w;
01:17:766 (3) - ctrl-g would have a better flow - it will make a jump
01:26:134 (3,4,5,6) - make into a perfect square - nah i think its fine ~

Good luck with the mapset

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:
M4M

00:32:868 This Green line come to 00:33:073 here and 00:33:277 This Green line come to 00:33:481
- nice catch xd
[Easy]
00:00:420 (1,2,1,2) - spread note? - nope ~ it will make harder
00:18:379 (3) - Remove Whistle (drum sound is little weird.) - fixed xd
[Nromal]
01:25:726 (2,3,1) - Check Distance - ok
01:29:195 (4,1) - ^ - its looks fine :/
[Hard]
01:39:297 (1) - Make Spiner start 01:39:399 (Easy / Normal is same But hard is not. also match Green line) - because it is hard diff right xd? so its fine at all ~

Thanks for the mod!! Both of you~

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Del05 2016-06-26T15:13:52+00:00

Halo
Modnya pake indo aja ya biar aku ngomongnya enak juga xD

[Easy]

00:21:644 (3,4) - blanketnya kurang
00:24:093 (2,3) - ^^
00:28:175 (3) - stack tail slider ini dengan 00:26:542 (1) - tail, trs ds nya diatur lagi ya biar gk kacau
00:34:705 (3,4) - blanket lagi xD
00:40:828 (2) - ini kenapa ditaru disitu ?? malah jd overlap ama 00:38:787 (5) - kalo buat new player ini rada sulit, seharusnya bs taruh di x:288;y:280 flownya bisa lbh enak ama gk overlap, tempatnya jg msh banyak xD
00:40:828 (2,3) - better use blanket
00:48:583 (5,1) - lbh bagus pake blanket deh
01:04:093 (4,5) - kalo ngikutin vocal sih, coba ini --> http://puu.sh/pGBnd/a154c981c8.jpg
01:05:726 (1,2) - ^^ (dua mod ini cuma opini doang)
01:22:052 (5,1) - blanketnya kurang rapi
01:22:052 (5,2) - ^^
01:29:807 (1,2) - swap nc
01:33:481 (1,2) - bagusan pake blanket lo
01:39:399 (1) - kalo spinnernya dipanjangin sampai 01:44:909 gimana ? suaranya kan habis di waktu itu
00:00:420 (1,2,1,2) - hm... aku gk pernah ngemap easy pake stacking gini dan aku juga gk yakin ini boleh ato nggak, tanya BN ?
Bikin singkat aja, cek blanket ya. Banyak yg gak sempurna XD

[Normal]

00:03:685 (3,1) - swap NC. Kamu NC setiap 2 stanza (big white tick) kan ?
00:06:950 (4) - lbh bagus kasih NC biar keren jk, kebanyakan object sebelum break lbh baik dikasih NC plus ini udah stanza baru yg seharusnya km NC
00:16:746 (1,2) - blanketnya lagi xD
00:17:154 (2,3) - ^^
Um... oke blanket mod aku skip, tp coba periksa lagi blankenya
01:30:215 (1,2) - ini simetri kah ?? kalo nggak, lbh baik dibuat simetri
01:32:664 (4,5) - bentuknya dibuat sama biar lebh rapi, ato kalo mau bentuk sama tp keliatan beda, copy trs ctrl+H
01:14:705 (4,5) - karena ini ngikutin suara stream, lebih baik semua dikasih suara clap slider endnya
00:44:909 (4) - kalo bentuknya ini dibuat sama ama 00:43:685 (2) - gimana ?? tp di ctrl+H ama ctrl+J, supaya keliatan simetris gitu bagus
01:04:909 (6) - gimana kalo copy 01:04:093 (4) - trs di ctrl+h ama ctrl+j
00:52:664 (1,2) - kayaknya ini mau buat simetris, tp sayang gk sama xD kurang dikit lagi, mending copy 00:52:664 (1) - lalu ctrl+h lalu ctrl+j

[Hard]

00:06:746 (4) - NC. penjelasan sama kayk yg di normal
00:12:664 (3,4) - blanket xD. OKE periksa semua blanket xD
00:17:562 (3,5) - dibuat bentuk yang sama aja karena posisinya sama dan keduanya juga blanket 00:18:175 (4) - jd lebih baik dibuat simetris
00:15:113 (5) - NC. NC sebaiknya itu dipakenya konsisten, tiap 1 stanza ato 2 stanza ato sekian stanza
00:18:379 (5) - ^^
00:21:644 (5) - ^^
00:22:868 (1,3) - swap NC
00:31:440 (4) - NC.. Yah.. coba cek NC nya aja deh xD
01:00:215 (4) - buat jd 1/2 slider + circle deh. beat yg disini 01:00:419 sebaiknya jgn dilewati apalagi buat hard, ini bisa buat tand kalo mau masuk ke kiai time, beatnya makin intense
01:10:215 (4) - ctrl+h ? tp atur lagi DSnya kalo diubah xD
01:23:481 (5,1,2,3) - nah kalo kayak gini bagus kalo diletakan pas ditengah koordinat 01:23:481 (5) - x:256;y:260 . yg lainnya ngikuti circle 5
01:05:317 (4,1) - ini jump besar banget gan kalo dibandingin yg lain, jd rada aneh liatnya xD, untuk hard diff juga bikin pemain kaget kalo lagi main tiba2 jumpnya besa 2.48x DS xD

That's all from me
Sorry if i use rude word or too harsh
Thank you

and good luck
~Del's Modding Queue~

Jonarwhal

1,216 posts

Joined November 2013

Jonarwhal 2016-06-26T22:49:56+00:00

NM from my queue~

Lower the AR. I don't know if beginners can play AR3.
00:24:093 (2,3) - Fix blanket
00:24:909 - Consider making this downbeat clickable.
00:26:542 (1,3) - Fix the overlap.
00:33:481 (2,3) - Fix blanket.
00:34:705 (3,4) - ^
00:40:828 (2,3) - ^
00:54:297 - Consider making this downbeat clickable.
01:15:522 (1,2,3) - Make this straighter, (1) should be 392|148, and (2) should be 316|100.
01:20:419 (3,1) - For flow, http://puu.sh/pH59w/2f2448b428.jpg
01:38:379 (4,5) - Fix blanket, or change 01:39:195 (5,1) - this to http://puu.sh/pH5iq/18aa7b1cc1.jpg.

00:16:746 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
00:17:154 (2,3) - ^
00:33:481 (1,2) - ^
01:15:930 (2,3) - ^
01:17:154 (4,5) - ^

00:20:011 (1,2,3) - It looks like you were going for symmetry here, if so, move (3) to 100|48 and then adjust the next part.
00:59:807 (3,4) - Fix blanket.
01:19:399 (3) - Slider is unattractive, change it to this or this or something.
01:26:746 (6,1) - Improve the flow by rotating all of 01:26:134 (3,4,5,6) - this anti-clockwise.