1. Tokyo Oni (4,86 stars, 1868 notes)

Nepuri wrote:

Mod from PM ingame! So fast! LOL

Tokyo Oni

I can barely hear your hitsounds of the drums, i suggest raising volume overall Fixed.

Ive identified your mapping style to instrumental with a little bit of deviaton in note placement! Ive also noticed you left out some notes, which is understandable

00:15:029 (14,15,16) - These 3 notes should be kkd since the instruments you used in 00:23:196 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - were the same
Yes, it sounds much better as ddd, but i just wanted to say that 00:15:029 (14,15,16) - is better ddd because do not listen a similar sound of a k.
00:25:029 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - same here, this pattern should be kkd d d kkd ... because of the instruments, but you can keep it as all d aswell Is better all d.
00:34:363 (98) - should be d since instruments Fixed
01:01:029 (265) - this should be k because of the sound you mapped onto before blah blah blah Fixed
01:01:196 (266) - and if you do above, consider making this note d Nice, fixed
01:07:696 (302,303,304) - ddk instruments blaah, i understand you maybe want variety but i think this kind of songs does not really give so much room for it Nop, is better dkk
01:31:529 (454,455) - again instruments (454) should be k and 455 d Fixed
This kiai was pretty confusing to mod because you changed your structure and added more k's than there is instruments, so i take a guess you improvised
01:57:196 (600) - this finish seems kind of unreasonable because there is no instrument or markant sound to support it I remove the finish
01:59:863 (621) - same here ok
02:26:529 (786) - K finish? Cymbal crash audible! ok
02:29:196 (802) - ^ ok
02:31:863 (817) - ^ ok
02:39:863 (868,869,870,871,872,873,874,875,876,877,878,879,880,881,882,883,884,885,886,887,888,889,890,891,892,893,894,895,896,897,898,899,900,901,902,903,904,905,906,907,908,909,910,911,912,913,914,915,916,917,918,919,920,921,922,923,924,925,926,927,928,929,930,931,932) - ehm. this is choky for me, since its so sudden and i FC 4.73 with relative ease, this was a problem i faced when testplaying it, make this stream less dense and maybe split it a bit, thanks
03:00:363 (1018) - i think this fits more with the stream as a d a k starting streams sounds so sudden to me with such patterns ok, changed to d
03:03:863 (1047) - finisher no ty ok
03:01:196 (1025) - same ^ ok
04:19:863 (1,9,11) - K finisher because cymbals ok
04:25:863 (22,23) - same K because K fits more to the high sound of cymbals ok
04:29:196 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - this stream is kkkdddddk, not very optimal to play, but if you didnt take my points because of the instruments because you chose variety, you might think about kkdddddddk, which is more playable. Fixed to kkdddddddk
04:54:529 (219) - cymbal K finisher ok fixed
04:59:863 (251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283) - this plays pretty badly for most players and the instruments dont fit, listen again and you will hear kkkkddkkkkddkkddkkddddddddddkkkkk Great! fixed

GLHF ranking!

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

qlq bisho aqui habla el chikungunya en la pitaaa tratanto e modial este beta!! okya xD JAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAXDDDDDDDD


[General]
- En lo personal me gustaria que siguieras la voz para expresar el sonido tambien como te dije en mods anteriores es super cool seguir la voz aveces, el por que digo esto?, Bueno por que el no seguir la voz aveces crea un gran hueco en el flow de la misma haciendo que los players quieran emitirlo con sus propias manos xD para seguir el dichoso ritmo... OJO con esto que te estoy diciendo no quiero decir que todos los players intentes seguir el ritmo dandole a las d creando el sonido y tapando el hueco de la voz La verdad lo pensaré porque mi estilo de mappeo es seguir el ritmo no la voz, pero gracias por la sugerencia baka uwu.

De hecho, modifiqué un poco el map, le agregue notas y un poco más de streams, así que si veo una sugerencia que ya está hecha doy el aviso.

[Taiko soda tremendo nombre.. eh êwê se que te gutoo te gutoo] XDDDDDDDDDDD

- WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPS te comiste una nota 00:11:863 (12) - Hay una nota allí porque se escucha un sonido muy lejano pero se escucha.
- 00:13:196 (14) - Coloca Finish D suena mejor ya que lo requiere esa parte, es decir que una un DON grande no una kat Oka
- sigue lo que estas haciendo con las BIGS 01:01:196 (267) - D Hecho
- igual aqui 01:03:863 (282) - Hecho
- cambia eso a una k 02:12:613 (702) - Oka
- cambia estos dos a k 02:23:696 (770,771) - suena mejor Ya hay dos allí o.o
- añade una d aqui 02:24:029 (773) - Ya la había añadido hace rato jajaja.
- añade una d 03:11:446 (1091) - Igual ya lo había añadido xD
- ctrl + g 03:17:029 (1121,1122) - ( cambia el BIG ) Eso lo cambié, en esa parte le coloqué un stream.
- 03:46:529 (1304) - cambia a D sigue el ritmo que tenias con las d No, porque ese finish es como alto, osea, que luego de ese finish la canción es relajante, y quisiera manifestar eso con un finish K como entrada a una parte break.

[Comments]

esta muy bien mapeado pero no tengas miedo de colocar mas notas en algunas partes total es un marathon xD y no creo que te digan algo malo por colocar mas notas donde deberian ir mas notas, que quiero decir con esto... Hay partes donde los descansos son muy repititivos seria mejor una parte completa luego un descanso y asi XD para no tener perdida de ritmos, Espero que tengas muchisima suerte rankeando Taiko Soda XD

Surono wrote:

Hai Gem Ruk, Quick check as request!

00:00:030 - why not put a spinner at here? its taiko, so I think is good starting to play this map
00:02:529 - for smooth flow, change this to don finisher? just it heard overemphasize with kat
00:20:446 - why this empty? you should consistent to put don, since this has a sound, dd(kkkdddK) isnt hurt imo. just same started on first kat 1/3
00:23:363 - give this kat for snare drum. should emphasize bcus its monotone with next ddd
00:25:029 (76,77,78) - change to ddk, just weird to be kkd and seems random mapped
00:26:029 - give this kat for this sound? lol please monotone 00:25:363 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85) -
00:29:029 - overlapping? no sound, so delete this
00:29:196 - ~ 00:30:863 - maybe you can make similar from 00:26:529 - here too, bcus its same music part. I think sould consistent it
00:27:696 - ups back, this. why this has notes? for no sound? I think is better to follow a instrument and the drum.. bass guitar just dem.. 00:30:363 - okey...
00:33:029 - this has sound. so its fine
00:34:529 (141,142,143,144,145) - why just kat finisher? XD I think theres have drum can to be don. for just single notes bcus this mostly finisher lol
00:35:863 - oh dem.. kkddkdddkkddk
00:41:696 - dont ignore this
00:47:029 -
and next like this... ;w; please dont ignore that "dubb~" thats kick drum ;w;
00:57:863 (285,288) - okey.. looks boring to be ddd, why not kdd for both this?
01:00:196 - emphasize this... kat on these part is few added, still monotone
01:02:863 - ^
01:05:529 - yeah, this differ sound drum. so why not to be kat for interesting color of 1/2 patterns ?
01:06:196 - wanna this kat? this fine to emphasize for double high drum
01:08:863 - don? I hear at here is differ drum and put 01:09:113 - kat here, not hurt. still easir color pattern~
01:13:696 -
01:29:863 - kdd kkd? for varies and not boring to meet kdd again, kkd bcus that cymbal sound heard good to me
01:40:529 - this kick drum, so change this don
01:44:363 - I know why u make this, for consistent kat for snare drum? but if me forced to make this to be varies, I would make this to be kkd k, just akward with overemphasize 3plet kat
01:59:113 - this kat just overemphasize imo, 01:59:279 - just need kat for this for strong flow
01:59:696 - don? same reason with above
02:12:863 (794,796,797) - kat please, kdkkd :3
02:25:863 - dkkkd 1/2heard that flow for these? maybe kat looks interesting
02:31:363 (908,909,910) - yes kat ^
02:34:196 - I know this high drum, but I think more enjoy to be don and for emphasize the contrast of drum
02:39:863 (967,968,969,970,971,972,973,974,975,976,977,978,979,980) -
should like this? lol this nice emphasize crowded drum
02:44:196 (1020,1024,1028,1032) - please don these.. longcatkillme.jpg ;w;
04:29:613 - contrast the pattern with kat this?
05:01:446 (286,289,291,292) - kat this

okey.. my mod looks.. nazi or bad, idk.. this well nice but had some weird ignored sound like vocal or the drum : 01:47:529 - 01:50:196 - andd many more, this vocal. 00:52:363 - the drum.

00:26:529 - and from here I saw some notes is unnecessary. I think just mapped the tone and drum is enough. 00:27:696 - eg this.. rip

and moreover.. you need more emphasize some color patterns for varies, or avoid boring.. but becareful if you had overlapping notes, you should check that. like 00:27:696 - this, but I saw your make extend patterns for vocal or flow of music.. this fine, but if you find that overlapping you should fix this and thats good for mini rest, btw this map really rarely to find mini rest, maybe bcus the overlapping ;w; Ok, thanks

and just this, sorry so sorry for my mess/bad modded this map XD I was long time not modding a map with engrish.. so yeah it seems rip my grammarrhh ;w; Your mod was excellent!

oke need moar Yuyoyuppe, is nice drum arrange ;w; gluck! Osu! need more Yuyoyuppe!!! *---*

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is Finish don note
4. K is Finish kat note
   
   
5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
6. Green is I would strongly recommend
7. black is Pointed out that

1. add tags Kiss me EP? - From official website.
   
2. kiai time end 05:02:613? - Tune up here would have raised.

1. 01:25:196 - missing d?
   
   
2. 01:32:529 (527,528) - ctrl+G? - 01:32:529 (527,528) - sound is turned up.and 01:31:029 (516,517,518,519) - I think I better hear sound.
   
   
3. 01:34:863 - change k? - 01:33:863 (536) - I think that's the same sound.
   
   
4. 01:35:696 - change d? - Compared to other,low sound?
   
   
5. 01:54:529 - change k? - I think it fit to sound
   
   
6. 01:58:529 (703) - ^
   
   
7. 02:46:529 - change k? - high vocal sound.
   
   
8. 02:49:196 (1074) - ^
   
   
9. 02:58:529 - same as 01:54:529.
   
   
10. 03:04:529 - change k? - 03:04:196 - In the same way
    
    
11. 04:37:363 (97) - change d? - 04:36:363 (90,91,92) - Reversal of this, I think the more the better

chaica wrote:

hi,from game chat.sorry late..

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is Finish don note
4. K is Finish kat note
   
   
5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
6. Green is I would strongly recommend
7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]

1. add tags Kiss me EP? - From official website. Thanks! Fixed!
   
2. kiai time end 05:02:613? - Tune up here would have raised.

Fixed

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[Tokyo Oni]

1. 01:25:196 - missing d? Omg, added
   
   
2. 01:32:529 (527,528) - ctrl+G? - 01:32:529 (527,528) - sound is turned up.and 01:31:029 (516,517,518,519) - I think I better hear sound. Ok
   
   
3. 01:34:863 - change k? - 01:33:863 (536) - I think that's the same sound. No, because These parts not have the same sound.
   
   
4. 01:35:696 - change d? - Compared to other,low sound? Nice, fixed
   
   
5. 01:54:529 - change k? - I think it fit to sound Nop
   
   
6. 01:58:529 (703) - ^ ^
   
   
7. 02:46:529 - change k? - high vocal sound. Nop
   
   
8. 02:49:196 (1074) - ^ ^
   
   
9. 02:58:529 - same as 01:54:529. Nop
   
   
10. 03:04:529 - change k? - 03:04:196 - In the same way Nop
    
    
11. 04:37:363 (97) - change d? - 04:36:363 (90,91,92) - Reversal of this, I think the more the better

Very nice! I llike it!! fixed
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good luck:3

Hitsu wrote:

Hi! M4M From your queue

Tokyo Oni

So yup, let's get started.
Don't take any of written below as an offense, it's just my opinion and I don't want hurt you at all.
After testing couple of times I got really bored and confused at a time (after such things I miss a lot because of confusion so even that I played your map twice didn't make me to fc it; that's frustrating because it's really easy). Some moments were wtf to me like doublet with a finish on the end. Though you have ranked maps, that one was the most confusing to me. Some patterns look boring and they are repeating through short periods of time in your map.

So here are my suggestions to you:

00:07:196 (6) - maybe switch this to k; just take a note about that, even if the pitch is lower than the two notes before and after, it still sounds better for me.
00:20:529 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - this part of song you mapped really strange; song has 1/3 rhythm there so it's better to make that part as 1/3; 00:21:196 (52) - also finish at the end here is not allowed.
00:24:196 (71) - for me this sounds better as a d even if that has higher pitch.
00:29:029 (105,106) - this better be if you reverse (ctrl+g) them; why you ask? that probably sounds better and matches pitch.
00:31:279 (123) - maybe change this to k, partly because of pitch match (not only because of that because the next one should be k too then) and because it plays better there.
01:09:029 (380) - i don't here a drum sound here so i'd probably switch this to d.
01:30:529 (520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530,531,532,533,534,535,536,537,538,539,540,541,542,543,544,545,546,547,548,549,550,551,552,553,554,555,556,557,558,559,560,561,562,563,564,565,566,567,568,569,570,571,572,573,574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582) - i'd put a one note break somewhere in there, just because this part is a bit annoying because of iteration; or you can rather add some triplets in there - both suggestions would be good for this part.
01:59:113 (717) - maybe change this to d, just because for me it sounds better.
01:59:696 (724) - ^.
02:00:446 - music says that here should be another note to make both on the sides into a triplet.
02:02:529 (741,742,743,744,745,746,747,748,749,750,751,752,753,754,755,756,757,758,759,760,761,762,763,764,765,766,767,768,769,770,771,772,773,774,775,776,777,778,779,780,781,782,783,784,785,786,787,788,789,790,791,792,793,794,795,796,797,798,799,800,801,802,803) - very boring iterating part; at least add more kats into triplets and so on.
02:24:029 (896,897,898,899,900,901,902,903,904,905,906,907,908,909,910,911,912,913,914,915,916,917,918,919,920,921,922,923,924,925,926,927,928,929,930,931,932,933,934,935,936,937,938,939,940,941,942,943,944,945,946,947,948,949,950,951,952,953,954,955) - i'd probably add some one note breaks there /adding triplets (same thing about annoyance).
02:45:196 (1065) - this one sounds better with d.
03:06:279 (1211,1214) - ctrl+g them, sounds much better.
04:48:529 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197) - add some kats here because it's similar with 04:43:196 (147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155) - and that makes this part a bit boring.
05:02:613 (1) - better make spinner in a lower volume, i guess 20% would be ok.

That's all for this, your map is pretty good.
Good luck to you and thanks for your mod~

game rock wrote:

All fixed :3

This map is old so my mapping style was a bit weird a old for the low experiencen about the mapping XD


Updated

1. 00:15:196 - change to k
2. 01:33:029 - change to k
3. 01:33:196 (540) - add finish
4. 01:43:529 (614,615) - change to kkkkd or ddkkd ? (only d k feels too empty ;w;)
5. 02:39:863 (1022,1023,1024,1025,1026,1027,1028,1029,1030,1031,1032,1033,1034,1035,1036,1037) - sounds not good ;w; cut the stream or change to kkkkddddkkkkdddd
6. 02:47:696 - add ddd
7. 03:19:696 - change to k
8. 03:46:529 - add 0.6~0.8 SV ?
9. 04:35:696 (87,88,89) - change to ddk or kkk, 04:35:863 is really loud ;w;
10. 05:02:529 (317,1) - it looks good but it's really confusing. removing 05:02:529 is looks better.

Hitsu wrote:

game rock wrote:

All fixed :3

This map is old so my mapping style was a bit weird a old for the low experiencen about the mapping XD


Updated

wow now it's so much more enjoyable!
thanks for applying my suggestions :D

Dw >w< :3 and thank you for said that

Quizmaegi wrote:

Hi, M4M ' w'

[Tokyo Oni]

1. 00:15:196 - change to k Fixed
2. 01:33:029 - change to k Fixed
3. 01:33:196 (540) - add finish
4. 01:43:529 (614,615) - change to kkkkd or ddkkd ? (only d k feels too empty ;w;) I change to ddddk
5. 02:39:863 (1022,1023,1024,1025,1026,1027,1028,1029,1030,1031,1032,1033,1034,1035,1036,1037) - sounds not good ;w; cut the stream or change to kkkkddddkkkkdddd No, I love this stream. Also it looks great because it relates with the voice and the drums. /color]
6. 02:47:696 - add ddd
7. 03:19:696 - change to k Fixed
8. 03:46:529 - add 0.6~0.8 SV ? I change to 0.75
9. 04:35:696 (87,88,89) - change to ddk or kkk, 04:35:863 is really loud ;w; Change to ddk
10. 05:02:529 (317,1) - it looks good but it's really confusing. removing 05:02:529 is looks better. I move the spinner to 05:02:696 -

Sorry for short mod ;w;

Don't worry :3 thank you so much for you mod

1. Parece estar bien.

1. 00:05:196 (3) - cambiaría a don el sonido no es tan claro es similar que la siguiente nota y la del al principio 00:02:529 -
2. 00:09:529 - tal vez agregar nota por el sonido vocal
3. 00:11:529 (10,11) - pondría un slider para el vocal "maaa" me parece mejor imo xD
4. 00:16:863 (23,24) - control + g? estaba considerando el rasgueo de guitarra como lo hiciste acá 00:16:196 (19,20) - como kd osea sube y baja imo.
5. 00:39:029 (178) - eliminar? no escucho sonido allí solo en 00:41:696 (195) - asi para no hacer un poco similar imo
6. 01:47:863 - parece que sigue el ritmo pero siento que falta una nota allí, encaja mejor para la voz.
7. 02:02:863 (756) - cambiaría a kat para una comodidad de secuencia del patron, como lo hiciste acá 02:05:196 (773,774,775,776,777) -
8. 02:16:029 (847,848) - seria mas cool si cambiarías a kat para ddkkd, ya que el sonido sube poco alto que 02:15:863 (845,846) -
9. 02:18:696 (867,868) - acá lo mismo, digo para diferenciar esta parte ya que seria cambiar 02:18:863 (869) - a kat como lo hiciste en 00:56:196 (293) - pero como esta nota 02:19:196 (870) - tiene kat cerca seria confuso (solo es mi opinion xD).
10. 02:32:363 (967) - cambiar a kat? combina para cubrir ese sonido de guitarra imo
11. 02:34:363 (984) - cambiar a don? siento que encaja bien.
12. 02:36:696 (1003) - cambiaría don por la misma razón de las 2 anteriores xD
13. 03:27:863 (1400) - cambia a don termina mejor y diferencia que 03:28:196 (1401) - consistencia que 03:29:196 (1407) - así para balancearse imo
14. 04:23:529 - aquí seria otra nota para seguir el vocal y me parece que map voces esa sección y la anterior
15. 04:29:529 (36,37) - aquí seria kat, se escucha como varia el sonido tambor allí xD

Etsu wrote:

hola gemu aqui mi mod ^^

[General]

1. Parece estar bien.

[Tokyo Oni]

1. 00:05:196 (3) - cambiaría a don el sonido no es tan claro es similar que la siguiente nota y la del al principio 00:02:529 -
2. 00:09:529 - tal vez agregar nota por el sonido vocal
3. 00:11:529 (10,11) - pondría un slider para el vocal "maaa" me parece mejor imo xD
4. 00:16:863 (23,24) - control + g? estaba considerando el rasgueo de guitarra como lo hiciste acá 00:16:196 (19,20) - como kd osea sube y baja imo.
5. 00:39:029 (178) - eliminar? no escucho sonido allí solo en 00:41:696 (195) - asi para no hacer un poco similar imo
6. 01:47:863 - parece que sigue el ritmo pero siento que falta una nota allí, encaja mejor para la voz.
7. 02:02:863 (756) - cambiaría a kat para una comodidad de secuencia del patron, como lo hiciste acá 02:05:196 (773,774,775,776,777) -
8. 02:16:029 (847,848) - seria mas cool si cambiarías a kat para ddkkd, ya que el sonido sube poco alto que 02:15:863 (845,846) -
9. 02:18:696 (867,868) - acá lo mismo, digo para diferenciar esta parte ya que seria cambiar 02:18:863 (869) - a kat como lo hiciste en 00:56:196 (293) - pero como esta nota 02:19:196 (870) - tiene kat cerca seria confuso (solo es mi opinion xD).
10. 02:32:363 (967) - cambiar a kat? combina para cubrir ese sonido de guitarra imo
11. 02:34:363 (984) - cambiar a don? siento que encaja bien.
12. 02:36:696 (1003) - cambiaría don por la misma razón de las 2 anteriores xD
13. 03:27:863 (1400) - cambia a don termina mejor y diferencia que 03:28:196 (1401) - consistencia que 03:29:196 (1407) - así para balancearse imo
14. 04:23:529 - aquí seria otra nota para seguir el vocal y me parece que map voces esa sección y la anterior
15. 04:29:529 (36,37) - aquí seria kat, se escucha como varia el sonido tambor allí xD

Buen mapa no hay mucho que decir es interesante me gusta :3 buena suerte!