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lkp
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, 13 June, 2011 at 12:33:08

Artist: Ayane
Title: Endless Tears...
Source: 11eyes CrossOver
Tags: Beuchi-chan Louis Cyphre aesopl19193 ignorethis koko6162006 lass 5pb.games
BPM: 192
Filesize: 21836kb
Play Time: 02:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Condemned (4.99 stars, 420 notes)
  2. Imprecation (4.97 stars, 464 notes)
  3. Normal (2.91 stars, 198 notes)
  4. Plus (5 stars, 1007 notes)
  5. Taiko Oni (4.78 stars, 1854 notes)
Download: Ayane - Endless Tears...
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3rd map
ah ha@_@

Thanks for Lucifer's Normal,aesopl's Hard,Koko's Taiko and ignore's Insane diff!
SB by Beuchi-chan,thank you very much >w<!!!!
Skin was permission by DJPop xDD
Plus made by me,for approval
all done.
kanpakyin

lkp wrote:

[size=85]
3rd mapset <<改成3th map
How about guest a Hard?
KanaRin
yeah i hate you
Topic Starter
lkp

KanaRin wrote:

yeah i hate you
NO :(
kodomonoyume
cool map :)
Lybydose
Timing stuff:



The piano notes at 03:37:917 to 03:40:695 are off in timing. Don't map those unless you want to put a spinner there.
aesopl19193
Madoka
star lkp ~
;)
ignorethis
swish
streaaaam :o
good song & map star~ :P
Miu Matsuoka
Mod:
Red: This must be changed, please don't ignore this.
Black: Highly recommended, change it if you want

[OVERALL]
geez, although that duplicates the style of 2012 a lot, but it's polished in a good way, so far so good. :)
this deserves a star! ;)

[Plus]
0:46:178 (2) Ctrl+R
0:57:272 (1) Hmm, a little strange to place a note here, worth thinking for a new position :o
1:19:928 (9) Remove finish?
1:38:209 (1,2) Change (1) to a curve, or change (2) to a straight slider
2:40:709 (1) Remove New Combo
2:49:928 (5) Change to note instead of a slider, the slider end hitsound makes the beat strange
3:30:397 (1,2,3,.......) Wow, great stream, but are you sure you are making it like this? :?
4:50:146 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) ^
5:10:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) ^

[Condemned]
0:24:772 (7) better?
Looks good enough for me :D

[Imprecation]
Looks good :D

yay, finished 8-)
Topic Starter
lkp

cheukhin1985 wrote:

Mod:
Red: This must be changed, please don't ignore this.
Black: Highly recommended, change it if you want


[Plus]
0:46:178 (2) Ctrl+R
0:57:272 (1) Hmm, a little strange to place a note here, worth thinking for a new position :o
1:19:928 (9) Remove finish?fix
1:38:209 (1,2) Change (1) to a curve, or change (2) to a straight slideri can't._.
2:40:709 (1) Remove New Combo
2:49:928 (5) Change to note instead of a slider, the slider end hitsound makes the beat strange
3:30:397 (1,2,3,.......) Wow, great stream, but are you sure you are making it like this? :?let me think xD
4:50:146 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) ^
5:10:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) ^

yay, finished 8-)
i think those part is no problem,so i don't want to fix,sorry.
Thanks mod~
KanaRin
Ok i start to mod this ;_;

[General]

Delete the Ayane - Endless Tears. osb in the map file
Source:11eyes it's Wrong.
The source should be 11eyes CrossOver
You need to add the tags.
Tags: lass 5pb.games
Well, you have to add the mappers name too. Maybe you will add it when the mapset is all finished.

[Plus]
Suggestion: OA +1 , I think it will be nice because this song BPM was 192.
00:57:584 - I mean timing line, you should change Kiai to 00:57:897 as well. PS. Preview point is not need to change.
01:14:772 (1,2,3,4) - Can you follow the voice here? ( i mean singer), Delete 2 & 4 notes.I think it should be more nice.
Well , feel free to change it. Just suggestion.
01:20:397 & 01:20:709 - Timing line. The hitsound. I think you should tick the custom override1.
(PS, you should change another timing line which you have not tick the custom override1.)
02:09:928 (3,4) - it's really crazy jump also hard to read. It's because 02:08:990 (1,2) - spacing isn't too far.
I know it's for app. But you should change it as well.

Well. I love your spacing. That's a good diff.

[Taiko]
01:56:803 (x) - add a note(Red) here
04:38:678 (85) - Big don here? I saw that some place should big don too *w*
05:01:178 (65) - 25% listen. It should be blue line.

It's really a good Taiko diff>w< <3<3
Anyway~ My mod isn't enough.
Also the last part isn't very good, or you should recheck & think about how to change it =w=


Other diff is fine for me~ So..
/me shoot KD star
Rusty
go!! :)
Topic Starter
lkp
講中文吧>_>

KanaRin wrote:

Ok i start to mod this ;_;

[General]

Delete the Ayane - Endless Tears. osb in the map file
Source:11eyes it's Wrong.
The source should be 11eyes CrossOver
You need to add the tags.
Tags: lass 5pb.games
Well, you have to add the mappers name too. Maybe you will add it when the mapset is all finished.

[Plus]
Suggestion: OA +1 , I think it will be nice because this song BPM was 192.let me think.
00:57:584 - I mean timing line, you should change Kiai to 00:57:897 as well. PS. Preview point is not need to change.i"ll fix
01:14:772 (1,2,3,4) - Can you follow the voice here? ( i mean singer), Delete 2 & 4 notes.I think it should be more nice.
Well , feel free to change it. Just suggestion.其實我明你諗咩,但係個人覺得改左較單調.
01:20:397 & 01:20:709 - Timing line. The hitsound. I think you should tick the custom override1.
(PS, you should change another timing line which you have not tick the custom override1.)改唔改都冇影響~
02:09:928 (3,4) - it's really crazy jump also hard to read. It's because 02:08:990 (1,2) - spacing isn't too far.
I know it's for app. But you should change it as well.i"ll fix

Well. I love your spacing. That's a good diff.

[Taiko]
01:56:803 (x) - add a note(Red) here
04:38:678 (85) - Big don here? I saw that some place should big don too *w*
05:01:178 (65) - 25% listen. It should be blue line.

It's really a good Taiko diff>w< <3<3
Anyway~ My mod isn't enough.
Also the last part isn't very good, or you should recheck & think about how to change it =w=


Other diff is fine for me~ So..
/me shoot KD star
thz mod~
koko6162006
S
T
A
R
8-)
Kotone
;) love the song
marimarimari_old
nice map! ;)
mekadon_old
I can make a Taiko Hard for ya if you want~<3
Topic Starter
lkp

mekadon wrote:

I can make a Taiko Hard for ya if you want~<3
er..@_@
Louis Cyphre
Copy normal-hitclap, and rename it as normal-slidertick2
I used some claps on ticks
Download: Ayane - Endless Tears... (lkp) [Lucifer's Normal].osu

StarDownload: Ayane - Endless Tears... (lkp) [Lucifer's Normal].osu
Mystica
[General]
又是3I么XD 3Irank不可 尤其还是两个五星 一个4.99 除非你想送app 我没看见imformation嗯
[Lucifer's Normal]
00:27:506 What's these two greed lines means? I think it's useless.
00:30:006 ^
00:55:006 ^
00:57:428 ^
00:58:756 ^
01:00:006 ^
01:04:615 ^
01:05:553 ^
01:16:647 ^
01:23:443 ^
01:24:381 ^
01:25:553 ^
01:30:943 ^
01:31:568 ^
01:32:193 ^
02:00:240 ^
02:10:240 ^
02:34:693 ^
02:35:943 ^
02:47:740 Kiai end at 02:50:397?
Other parts fine
[imprecation]
00:57:584 Kiai start at 00:57:897?
[蛋疼脑]
00:57:584 删掉吧KIAI用后面那根绿线 而且这个1.0也速度也没有用到嘛XD
02:27:584 ^
[plus+]
打了三遍我都挂了 我承认我弱。
05:26:161 spinner拖到05:28:271有啥不好。XD

hitsound我就不听了 同理可以参考婆婆的那首XD 因为这歌我已经听了无数次了 我承认我懒XD
其实我总觉得plus+有点overmap了。嘛 每个人作图都不一样 所以没问题啦大概XD
总体来说质量还是很高的XD 加油吧
wmfchris
- koko's taiko is not that hard, no need to app
- 5pb., not 5pb.games in tag

check later
Topic Starter
lkp
wmf冇叫你都黎睇咁好人xDDDDDD
climbb65588
OK, there are some problem at [Taiko]
( Yep, these are the style problem. )

* If the colour of the word is blue, you can ignore it. It's just my feeling.

- Why is there many Finish note? Although it may be a mapping style, I think Finish note should be put at right location.
- Please, add the red timming line, the offest is wrong at the last part.

00:27:897 (51,52,53,54,55) - disagreeable to hear.
00:39:146 (136,137,138,139,140) - why is there xxxox?

01:00:397 (17,18,19,20,21) - I hate this.
01:05:397 (52,53,54) - disagreeable to hear.

01:09:459 (22,23,24) - It's a little bit queer.
01:12:272 - Add note at here and 01:12:350.

01:24:147 (35,36,37) - queer.

Plaese fix the whole part in the box if you'll fix one of them
01:37:740 (125) - Change it to finish.
01:37:897 (126) - Change it to Red note and move to 01:38:053.
01:38:522 (128,130) - Red note.

01:45:397 (177,178,179,180,181) - queer.

01:57:818 (26) - Delete it.
02:00:865 (48,49,50,51,52) - queer.

02:27:350 (24) - Delete it.

02:36:022 (86,87,88,89,90) - disagreeable to hear.
02:36:803 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102) - queer.


02:39:303 (112,113,114,115,116) - queer.

03:09:147 - 03:32:897 - Where's my guitar solo! ミ ゚Д゚彡

HEY
04:08:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,
41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,
86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,
7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,
48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,
93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,
127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,
160,161,162,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42
43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,
89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,1,
1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,
49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,
16,17,18,19,20,21,1,1) - WTF.


unprofessional modding, end. Star.
Louis Cyphre
00:27:506 What's these two greed lines means? I think it's useless.
00:30:006 ^
00:55:006 ^
00:57:428 ^
00:58:756 ^
01:00:006 ^
01:04:615 ^
01:05:553 ^
01:16:647 ^
01:23:443 ^
01:24:381 ^
01:25:553 ^
01:30:943 ^
01:31:568 ^
01:32:193 ^
02:00:240 ^
02:10:240 ^
02:34:693 ^
02:35:943 ^
What about to open Timing Setup panel and read something. Useless mod, thanks for taking attention
Also Kiai start and end on my diff is setted right. So Lkp fix it. And did you add custom normal-slidertick2? -_-
Topic Starter
lkp

Louis Cyphre wrote:

00:27:506 What's these two greed lines means? I think it's useless.
00:30:006 ^
00:55:006 ^
00:57:428 ^
00:58:756 ^
01:00:006 ^
01:04:615 ^
01:05:553 ^
01:16:647 ^
01:23:443 ^
01:24:381 ^
01:25:553 ^
01:30:943 ^
01:31:568 ^
01:32:193 ^
02:00:240 ^
02:10:240 ^
02:34:693 ^
02:35:943 ^
What about to open Timing Setup panel and read something. Useless mod, thanks for taking attention
Also Kiai start and end on my diff is setted right. So Lkp fix it. And did you add custom normal-slidertick2? -_-
i'll fix but where-_-
Sakura
[Skin]
You're missing an approachcircle.png in your skin, which forms part of the hitcircle skin set, and will cause trouble for people using a custom skin, either add it to your skin or force the default skin.

[Plus]
00:57:584 (1) - It's hard to tell this slider is slower since it's small enough to not have slider ticks, which would usually be the hint to it being slow.
01:30:240 (1) - On this one i totally disagree on it being slow, it's really hard to tell, and there's not even something in the music that makes me think of any reason why it would be slow.
05:28:271 (1) - This note being so close to the spinner is real mean move to the player, I recommend you remove this note or think of something else.

[Taiko]
This diff has a different preview point than the others, make sure you set the preview point to the same spot on all difficulties.

[Lucifer's Normal]
02:50:553 (1) - I recommend you fade out this spinner.

Other diffs are fine, but i cant promise a bubble, since this mapset has a map going for approval, i wish you good luck with your map, it's really fun~
Topic Starter
lkp
i don't know why i can't give kds--
Sakura

lkp wrote:

i don't know why i can't give kds--
Dont fret too much over it, it's not like im hungry for kudosu, at least i know you didnt ignore my mod post ^^
Edit: ok BAT gave me kds XD
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. make the first KIAI of all diffs' start at 00:57:897 and 02:27:897 for second part 04:08:896 for third part
  2. and I should complain about the reverse arrow on white combo color x_x a bit difficult to notice
  3. you need an approachcircle
[Plus]:
  1. 01:29:147 (1,2,3) - spacing?
  2. 02:49:928 (5) - how about ctrl+h ctrl+r
  3. 02:50:553 (1) - then move this under 02:49:772. (don't apply this if the above one is denied)
  4. 03:22:897 (1,2,3) - on purpose?
  5. Offset: 248,896 should be 248,895 (to snap the slider's end and for music sence non-inherited ya) remember to move all inherited sections -1ms when you do that. and of course resnap
[Taiko]:
  1. Offset: 248,896 --> 248,895
  2. a BG for Taiko? or we'll have to hit this girl's head again and again
[Condemned]:
  1. 03:40:285, 03:40:695 (T) - remove these sections
  2. HPdrainrate -1
  3. 00:45:397 (1,2) - spacing
[Imprecation]:
  1. 03:40:285, 03:40:695 (T) - remove these sections
  2. 00:38:990 (4) - new combo
  3. 01:12:115 (8) - 3 grids right
[Lucifer's Normal]:
  1. 00:31:490 (1) - wow... too hard for a Normal
  2. 00:41:490 (1) - ^
  3. 01:03:053 (1) - ^
  4. 02:50:553 (1) - remove
star~
lepidopodus
Taiko
- I suggest to lower HP drain a bit when you mapping a long map. (HP drain isn't proportional to the number of the notes, so that's why I suggets this.)
- I think hitsound is kinda loud. Lower a bit, for example, the first part of the song.
- Some patterns are ok, some patterns are still random to me.
00:23:209 (114) - Big note?
00:25:397 (124) - d?
00:27:897 (141) - ^
00:29:147 (150,151,152) - Delete 150&151 and change 152 to big note?
00:45:553 (14,15,16,17) - Delete 14 & 17, 15 to k?
00:49:303 (32) - Remove finish.
01:07:662 (10,11,12,13) - Remove 12&13 and add finish in 11, remove 10?
01:15:397 (74,1) - How about 3-beat-long drum roll?
01:20:397 (T) - I suggest end kiai at here, uh... maybe not.
01:36:959 (127) - k?
01:49:147 (1) - Move this spinner to 01:50:397. Of course you need to fill 01:49:147~01:50:397. End this spinner at 01:53:990, or 01:53:678 and add D in 01:53:990.
02:27:272 (105,106,107,108) - Delete 106&108?
02:50:397 (T) - Same with 01:20:397 (T).
03:32:897 (5,1) - Just remove 5 and move 1 to 03:32:897. Make sure end this at 03:36:647 or somewhere like that.
03:40:695~04:02:602 - Uh, try following vocal here? That would be more interesting...
04:02:602 (31,1) - Similar with 03:32:897 (5,1).
04:08:523 (1) - volume of hitsound of this note is too low.
04:31:396 (T) - End kiai here.
05:08:896 (446) - Remove this?
05:12:489 (9) - remove finish?
05:26:083 (102,1) - Similar with 03:32:897 (5,1). End 1 at 05:28:144.

Is this koko's one? I think this is better than previous one. Adjusting density of the notes is lot more better than before. But still patterns are quite random. Different parts of the song has different taste or character or somthing like that, but patterns lack it's characters.
Consider some 'rest time' when you are making patterns. If the patterns continue without pause, that would be quite hard to deal with.
The most important issue of this map is about composition of the patterns. Unfortunatly, that's one of the hardest to fix :/
Anyway, good luck.
Garven
I haven't actually modded this, but just glancing at the difficulty name "Imprecation"... is this supposed to be "Implication"? Or is this a reference to something about the source that I have no idea about? :P

Gah nevermind me. Dictionary fail.
Beuchi
I'm heeeeerrre~ With awesome news! The storyboard is done!! :)

I had a big problem making this: I started making something about the anime and I wasn't really convinced of it, when someday talking to Starrodkirby86 he told me the song is from the game, and not the anime, so he gave me the CG collection of it and now I'm very very happy of the result, so give a big thanks to him <3

Anyways! Replace all the content of the following .rar into your song folder, it has all the diffs updated with storyboard and with an epilepsy warning of them, and all your backgrounds resized to 640x480 because they would look ugly when they fade on the storyboard. I'm a bit afraid of the size, since there are around 60 images and the size of the map will increase to 21MB, but I've talked with some people and they told me it's okay so... let's hope it is!!

I hope you like it~ I'm open to changes so don't hesitate to ask or tell me if someone said anything about it.

Download: Storyboard + Files.rar

Note: If koko fixes their taiko diff, please make sure it has the part of the storyboard on its .osu!
koko6162006

lepidopodus wrote:

Taiko
- I suggest to lower HP drain a bit when you mapping a long map. (HP drain isn't proportional to the number of the notes, so that's why I suggets this.)
- I think hitsound is kinda loud. Lower a bit, for example, the first part of the song.
- Some patterns are ok, some patterns are still random to me.
00:23:209 (114) - Big note?
00:25:397 (124) - d?
00:27:897 (141) - ^
00:29:147 (150,151,152) - Delete 150&151 and change 152 to big note?
00:45:553 (14,15,16,17) - Delete 14 & 17, 15 to k?
00:49:303 (32) - Remove finish.
01:07:662 (10,11,12,13) - Remove 12&13 and add finish in 11, remove 10?
01:15:397 (74,1) - How about 3-beat-long drum roll?
01:20:397 (T) - I suggest end kiai at here, uh... maybe not.
01:36:959 (127) - k?
01:49:147 (1) - Move this spinner to 01:50:397. Of course you need to fill 01:49:147~01:50:397. End this spinner at 01:53:990, or 01:53:678 and add D in 01:53:990.
02:27:272 (105,106,107,108) - Delete 106&108?
02:50:397 (T) - Same with 01:20:397 (T).
03:32:897 (5,1) - Just remove 5 and move 1 to 03:32:897. Make sure end this at 03:36:647 or somewhere like that.
03:40:695~04:02:602 - Uh, try following vocal here? That would be more interesting...
04:02:602 (31,1) - Similar with 03:32:897 (5,1).
04:08:523 (1) - volume of hitsound of this note is too low.
04:31:396 (T) - End kiai here.
05:08:896 (446) - Remove this?
05:12:489 (9) - remove finish?
05:26:083 (102,1) - Similar with 03:32:897 (5,1). End 1 at 05:28:144.All fixed
wa, thank you for your mod ;)
Everytime,you are carefully to deal with everymaps. :)

Download: Ayane - Endless Tears... (lkp) [Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
lkp

Beuchi-chan wrote:

I'm heeeeerrre~ With awesome news! The storyboard is done!! :)

I had a big problem making this: I started making something about the anime and I wasn't really convinced of it, when someday talking to Starrodkirby86 he told me the song is from the game, and not the anime, so he gave me the CG collection of it and now I'm very very happy of the result, so give a big thanks to him <3

Anyways! Replace all the content of the following .rar into your song folder, it has all the diffs updated with storyboard and with an epilepsy warning of them, and all your backgrounds resized to 640x480 because they would look ugly when they fade on the storyboard. I'm a bit afraid of the size, since there are around 60 images and the size of the map will increase to 21MB, but I've talked with some people and they told me it's okay so... let's hope it is!!

I hope you like it~ I'm open to changes so don't hesitate to ask or tell me if someone said anything about it.

[attachment=0:67c65]Storyboard + Files.rar[/attachment:67c65]

Note: If koko fixes their taiko diff, please make sure it has the part of the storyboard on its .osu!
>w<!!
koko6162006
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