Sharlo - Ifuudoudou

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Topic Starter
Chaoslitz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年6月22日 at 3:56:50

Artist: Sharlo
Title: Ifuudoudou
Tags: 夏萝 梅とら idol umetora moans vocaloid
BPM: 130
Filesize: 5730kb
Play Time: 03:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab Hard (2.82 stars, 487 notes)
  2. Easy (1.38 stars, 205 notes)
  3. Ifuuidol (4 stars, 736 notes)
  4. Normal (1.72 stars, 290 notes)


Download: Sharlo - Ifuudoudou
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Birthday Present to Sharlo~



LEWD(? LYRICS WARNING

Easy by me
Normal by me
Hard Collab by Sharlo and me
Ifuuidol 威風偶像 by me
Background drawn by Sharlo
me: odds
Sharlo: evens



StarrStyx


1st
Sharlo
???
我的沙发
Momoka
is this the part where i say hentai

runs
Zero__wind
色情偶像一桶浆糊
StarrStyx

Zero__wind wrote:

色情偶像一桶浆糊
KaedekaShizuru
[衣服兜兜]
00:38:100 (6) - 感觉没有理由在没有也不需要NC的情况下突然把这个slider起那么远 跟前面的stream保持一样的DS就好了 顺便确定拉直slider的话把锚点删掉
01:12:715 (3,5) - 向右挪一点点让01:12:599 (2,3) 走直线
01:58:407 (1) - 02:00:254 (1) - 02:02:100 (1) - 02:03:946 (4) - 间奏这段这种的我觉得换单点比较好
03:16:638 (3,4,5) - 推荐都换成二连打 毕竟insane

[Hard]
00:51:946 (1) - 建议不要跟00:51:023 (3) 挨上
01:07:177 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - 这段没听明白在跟什么 感觉很混乱
02:09:023 (4,1) - 会不会太远了点
02:49:177 (3) - 最好不要放下面形成遮挡 我宁可把这个拉出来 像这样 http://puu.sh/otJYQ/9c3680af63.jpg

[Normal]
02:04:350 - 有什么理由把break结束警示拉到这里么?我觉得默认就好啊
我倒是比较希望02:05:792 (1,2,3) 和02:09:484 (1,2,3) 的节奏可以统一一下


[Easy]
01:24:254 (4) - X122 Y240这个红锚点我觉得用白的就可以了 因为你在01:23:331 (3) 是白锚点 (嘛其实没啥区别

被色情偶像的娇喘洗脑了 啊~
yf_bmp
啊~啊~啊~啊~ 啊~啊~啊~啊~
BeatofIke
Kawaii o.o
09kami

09kami wrote:

色情偶像
[Ifuuidol]

00:11:677 (2) - 这个还是叠在00:11:792 (1) - 头上比较好读

01:07:638 (2) - 这个白线不是应该是没音的吗 只有前面红蓝线的轻微回音 移到前面蓝线?

01:07:984 (4) - 漏音?

01:43:638 (1,2,3,4) - 这个角度不是很友善

02:42:715 (1) - 感觉这开始的重音部分滑条可以考虑放一个加速段 和前面区别出来 取SV1.4也许不错?

[Hard]

00:57:369 (5) - 这个蓝线部分我感觉补一个圈会更好

00:59:215 (5) - 同上

01:09:023 (3) - 白线是没音的把 这里的音是在蓝线部分开始的啊

01:44:907 (9) - 这个音也是补上比较好

02:48:715 (2,4) - 圈住这两个 然后把4的头拉到x:244 y:248这个位置 这样的话 这02:49:177 (3,4,1) - 三个头的位置间距就看起来相等了
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[衣服兜兜]
00:38:100 (6) - 感觉没有理由在没有也不需要NC的情况下突然把这个slider起那么远 跟前面的stream保持一样的DS就好了 顺便确定拉直slider的话把锚点删掉 ok
01:12:715 (3,5) - 向右挪一点点让01:12:599 (2,3) 走直线 就是不想放直線啦
01:58:407 (1) - 02:00:254 (1) - 02:02:100 (1) - 02:03:946 (4) - 间奏这段这种的我觉得换单点比较好 這樣就好啦, 不然節奏比後面更突出了
03:16:638 (3,4,5) - 推荐都换成二连打 毕竟insane 好像不太良心((

[Hard]
00:51:946 (1) - 建议不要跟00:51:023 (3) 挨上
01:07:177 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - 这段没听明白在跟什么 感觉很混乱 加了個note
02:09:023 (4,1) - 会不会太远了点 fixed
02:49:177 (3) - 最好不要放下面形成遮挡 我宁可把这个拉出来 像这样 http://puu.sh/otJYQ/9c3680af63.jpg 搬出了點

[Normal]
02:04:350 - 有什么理由把break结束警示拉到这里么?我觉得默认就好啊 fixed
我倒是比较希望02:05:792 (1,2,3) 和02:09:484 (1,2,3) 的节奏可以统一一下


[Easy]
01:24:254 (4) - X122 Y240这个红锚点我觉得用白的就可以了 因为你在01:23:331 (3) 是白锚点 (嘛其实没啥区别 fixed

被色情偶像的娇喘洗脑了 fixed!!啊~

09kami wrote:

09kami wrote:

色情偶像
[Ifuuidol]

00:11:677 (2) - 这个还是叠在00:11:792 (1) - 头上比较好读 突顯人聲((

01:07:638 (2) - 这个白线不是应该是没音的吗 只有前面红蓝线的轻微回音 移到前面蓝线?節奏原本已經複雜了, 這也是跟前面做個統一

01:07:984 (4) - 漏音?我不是放了滑條嗎-.-

01:43:638 (1,2,3,4) - 这个角度不是很友善 ok

02:42:715 (1) - 感觉这开始的重音部分滑条可以考虑放一个加速段 和前面区别出来 取SV1.4也许不错?我覺得沒必要

[Hard]

00:57:369 (5) - 这个蓝线部分我感觉补一个圈会更好 我覺得還好

00:59:215 (5) - 同上

01:09:023 (3) - 白线是没音的把 这里的音是在蓝线部分开始的啊 請不要忽略最重要的歌聲!!

01:44:907 (9) - 这个音也是补上比较好 也是不用啦

02:48:715 (2,4) - 圈住这两个 然后把4的头拉到x:244 y:248这个位置 这样的话 这02:49:177 (3,4,1) - 三个头的位置间距就看起来相等了 用其他方改了
Thanks for mod
MkGuh
You could use this mp3 that I converted it for you, as it seems that your it is more than 192 kbps

http://puu.sh/ovt5c/acf0678e82.mp3 o3o
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

MkGuh wrote:

You could use this mp3 that I converted it for you, as it seems that your it is more than 192 kbps

http://puu.sh/ovt5c/acf0678e82.mp3 o3o
Thanks.
Mint
lol this song perhaps add warning in description?
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

appleeaterx wrote:

lol this song perhaps add warning in description?
ahh I think it is needed actually
added.
MkGuh
Hello o3o I'm here trying to help at least a bit cause I'm really greatful for what you did on my map o/

[General]
  1. I don't know if it was because of my new mp3, but timing would be better if it were +12. Try it and see the results :o
  2. I think having countdown enabled seems weird, disabling it would make map feel better, as it's doesn't fit song.


[Easy]
  1. 00:27:946 (3) - Maybe replacing this slider for two notes would be a better idea as the vocals start on the end of it, and this feels quite weird imo.
  2. 00:46:407 (1) - Break your comboing pattern here to add a NC on this slider doesn't seems so good on a Easy diff, remove it to simplify combo.
  3. 01:00:254 (3) - There is a hitsound missing on the slider tail, idk if it's a whislte or finish but better checking it.
  4. 01:06:254 (5) - ugh XD Ignoring the beat making it finish on slider tail seems bad for this part, maybe replace the slider for 1 note then 1 slider aswell as you did in here 03:08:100 (4,1) - 00:18:254 (4,1).
  5. 01:49:177 (1) - Why did you stop to putting claps in this part? Idk... I cant understand why it's like that since clap song it's the same XD
  6. 01:58:407 (1) - Extend this break to where I linked, just to make it feels better o3o (Same for Normal)
  7. 02:39:023 (6,1) - Swap NCs here, as it seems that it broke your 2 stanzas comboing.


Seems already fine!

[Normal]
remap pls
kds pls

jk XD It seems fine for me o3o/

[Collab Hard]
  1. 00:47:677 (1) - You'd prob want to add a NC here on this note to make a better readability. NOTE: 01:33:715 (6) - could be applied here tho 02:34:638 (3) - same here kek.
  2. 00:59:331 (1,2) - Why did you stop to follow vocals here? Doesn't amke much sense, try to do the same as previous patterns.
  3. 01:04:869 (1,2,4,5) - Flow is bit bad here, (5) goes down to suddenly. It should be at least same of (1,2), as it'd seems better.
  4. 01:27:946 (3) - Put a reverse on this slider instead of having a big jump like that. It'll help for consistency though.
  5. 01:43:638 (1) - Missing NC? :U
  6. 02:22:407 (5,1) - Swap combos here then add it here 02:24:254 (5).


Cutie!


[Ifuuidol]
  1. 02:03:946 (4) - There is a missing NC here o3o NOTE: 01:17:792 (1) - same here.
  2. 03:01:177 (1) - Why you don't extend this slider to 3/4 instead of having a note where it almost has no sound. NOTE: 01:03:023 (1) - same here.
  3. 03:11:677 (7) - Try to add a note at this empty spot as it'd helps for keeping a consistent and nice rhythm at this part o3o NOTE: 00:21:831 (7) - same here.


Where are the BNs for this map?! XD

Since my post got denied on kudous you can give me on this one o/ GL~~
- Cappuccino -
打着像在玩宵暗花火23333用滑条尾把三连拆成2连简直套路

不过舒服多了就是了ww

主难度free mod

00:12:254 (2,3,1) - 感觉这个也可以下成前面的节奏

00:29:331 (6) - 可以反选反flow会很带感 (好像上一句就反了?

01:09:715 (4) - 可以考虑换成五连最后一个搁多折返滑条

有些地方的三连疑似overmap不过 嘛 反正蓝翼老爷那图都能rank2333

01:40:638 (4,5) - 5这里不在连打的人声节奏上呀... 换成两组短滑条如何

01:56:561 (1,1,1,1) - 这四根草真的有必要么= =感觉微妙的影响读图而且也不是很有感觉

02:29:792 (1,2) - 缩短滑条接2个note如何

02:34:638 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - pwp纯属个人意见 123从上往下大间距三联 45-滑条从下往上大ds 配合之前的大跳会很有高潮的代入感

02:48:715 (3) - 近点会让ds下降的更平滑点

03:11:100 (4) - 这里开始可以和结尾一样下点小连打?

就这样pwp
FlyingTurbina
AYY irc

15:57 WORSTPOLACKEU: 00:51:369 (6,7,8,9,10,1) -
15:58 WORSTPOLACKEU: this feels dull
15:58 WORSTPOLACKEU: like
15:59 WORSTPOLACKEU: oh nvm
15:59 WORSTPOLACKEU: I put on headset
15:59 WORSTPOLACKEU: I heard something else there
15:59 Chaoslitz: 0.0
15:59 WORSTPOLACKEU: 01:05:331 (1) -
15:59 WORSTPOLACKEU: this angle could be
15:59 WORSTPOLACKEU: less sharp?
16:00 Chaoslitz: to next note?
16:00 WORSTPOLACKEU: the slider feels
16:00 WORSTPOLACKEU: too diagonal
16:00 WORSTPOLACKEU: if you understand what I mean
16:00 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5024847 how about this
16:00 Chaoslitz: rotated
16:00 WORSTPOLACKEU: looks better
16:00 WORSTPOLACKEU: it was like
16:00 WORSTPOLACKEU: super tilted
16:01 Chaoslitz: i see
16:01 Chaoslitz: i guess it is fine now xd
16:02 WORSTPOLACKEU: 01:40:407 (3,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
16:02 WORSTPOLACKEU: I would organize it differently
16:02 WORSTPOLACKEU: it seems bit random
16:02 WORSTPOLACKEU: either do 2 curves that look like they belong
16:02 WORSTPOLACKEU: or like 2 straight lines
16:02 WORSTPOLACKEU: 4 note each
16:02 WORSTPOLACKEU: going down
16:02 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5024871 ?
16:03 WORSTPOLACKEU: what if you made it the other way at the end
16:03 WORSTPOLACKEU: so the stream goes down
16:03 WORSTPOLACKEU: and then new section starts you go back uyp with the slider
16:03 WORSTPOLACKEU: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5024879
16:03 WORSTPOLACKEU: smth like that
16:03 WORSTPOLACKEU: I like the movement there
16:04 WORSTPOLACKEU: when you go down and back up with that slider
16:04 Chaoslitz: :v because i wnat the last note overlap with the slider
16:04 WORSTPOLACKEU: in that case
16:05 Chaoslitz: ayy http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5024901 this should be better
16:05 WORSTPOLACKEU: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5024907
16:05 WORSTPOLACKEU: I made that
16:05 WORSTPOLACKEU: haha
16:06 WORSTPOLACKEU: but yours works swell
16:06 WORSTPOLACKEU: I just like the descending movement just to go back up to that hard base part
16:07 Chaoslitz: want something different from 00:51:369 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - xd
16:08 WORSTPOLACKEU: yeah I would
16:08 WORSTPOLACKEU: change smth there
16:08 WORSTPOLACKEU: straight isn't cool there :D
16:08 WORSTPOLACKEU: so break it up in 2 parts
16:09 Chaoslitz: something like curved so the flow will be better to the next slider i guess
16:09 WORSTPOLACKEU: I https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5024944
16:09 WORSTPOLACKEU: I dont think u want it like that
16:09 WORSTPOLACKEU: but this could work
16:10 WORSTPOLACKEU: but u want it to be a stream I assume
16:10 Chaoslitz: yea want streams
16:11 WORSTPOLACKEU: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5024960 ?
16:11 WORSTPOLACKEU: smth like hat?
16:11 Chaoslitz: wanna follow vocal D:
16:11 WORSTPOLACKEU: o
16:12 WORSTPOLACKEU: it does follow
16:12 WORSTPOLACKEU: vocal
16:12 WORSTPOLACKEU: doesn't it ? :D
16:12 Chaoslitz: i wanna vocal it as much as i can ;w;
16:12 WORSTPOLACKEU: well
16:13 WORSTPOLACKEU: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5024969
16:13 WORSTPOLACKEU: ?
16:13 WORSTPOLACKEU: :D
16:14 Chaoslitz: but i said i want streams D:
16:14 WORSTPOLACKEU: LOL
16:14 Chaoslitz: i think the current one is fine
16:14 WORSTPOLACKEU: hm
16:15 WORSTPOLACKEU: well then
16:15 WORSTPOLACKEU: then it's fine :D
16:15 WORSTPOLACKEU: this diff is really goodf
16:15 WORSTPOLACKEU: I cancheck the other ones
16:15 WORSTPOLACKEU: cause this is not much to change in this at all
16:15 Chaoslitz: well i said i dont want some straight streams in 01:40:984 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - because it will be same as 00:51:369 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - xd
16:15 Chaoslitz: ah okay
16:15 WORSTPOLACKEU: ahhh
16:15 WORSTPOLACKEU: thats what u mean okay
16:16 WORSTPOLACKEU: 00:35:561 (2,4) -
16:16 WORSTPOLACKEU: I guess
16:16 WORSTPOLACKEU: this blanket could be better?
16:17 WORSTPOLACKEU: but I don't know if that is important
16:17 Chaoslitz: ok
16:20 WORSTPOLACKEU: dude
16:20 WORSTPOLACKEU: those diffs
16:20 WORSTPOLACKEU: are solid af
16:21 WORSTPOLACKEU: 00:14:331 (6,7) -
16:21 *WORSTPOLACKEU is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/959587 Sharlo - Ifuudoudou [Normal]]
16:21 WORSTPOLACKEU: apparently too far away
16:21 WORSTPOLACKEU: DS
16:21 Chaoslitz: fixed
16:21 WORSTPOLACKEU: easy
16:21 WORSTPOLACKEU: 01:46:407 (2,3) -
16:21 *WORSTPOLACKEU is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/959147 Sharlo - Ifuudoudou [Easy]]
16:22 WORSTPOLACKEU: jesus christ
16:22 WORSTPOLACKEU: how do u map this flawless
16:22 Chaoslitz: 0.0
16:22 WORSTPOLACKEU: this is like srsly
16:22 WORSTPOLACKEU: hard to find anything wrong
16:22 WORSTPOLACKEU: or anything that I would even wanna change
16:23 Chaoslitz: :oo
16:23 *WORSTPOLACKEU is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/956456 Sharlo - Ifuudoudou [Ifuuidol]]
16:23 WORSTPOLACKEU: 01:12:946 (4,5,6) -
16:23 WORSTPOLACKEU: this flow is a bit troubling
16:24 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5025046
16:24 Chaoslitz: this should be better?
16:24 WORSTPOLACKEU: oh I meant in
16:24 WORSTPOLACKEU: ifuuidol
16:24 WORSTPOLACKEU: :D
16:24 Chaoslitz: oh
16:24 Chaoslitz: x.x
16:24 WORSTPOLACKEU: haha
16:25 WORSTPOLACKEU: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5025053
16:25 WORSTPOLACKEU: !
16:25 WORSTPOLACKEU: this plays nice
16:26 Chaoslitz: i guess it is too far from 4 to 5 x.x
16:27 WORSTPOLACKEU: then change it somehow
16:27 WORSTPOLACKEU: but that flow is good
16:27 WORSTPOLACKEU: with the vocals
16:27 WORSTPOLACKEU: you can always tone down the spacing :)
16:28 Chaoslitz: ok
16:28 WORSTPOLACKEU: I can't find more ;_;
16:28 WORSTPOLACKEU: this is really solid
16:28 WORSTPOLACKEU: like REALLY
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

MkGuh wrote:

Hello o3o I'm here trying to help at least a bit cause I'm really greatful for what you did on my map o/

[General]
  1. I don't know if it was because of my new mp3, but timing would be better if it were +12. Try it and see the results :ook
  2. I think having countdown enabled seems weird, disabling it would make map feel better, as it's doesn't fit song. ok


[Easy]
  1. 00:27:946 (3) - Maybe replacing this slider for two notes would be a better idea as the vocals start on the end of it, and this feels quite weird imo. want to keep fewer objects for easy so I used a slider
  2. 00:46:407 (1) - Break your comboing pattern here to add a NC on this slider doesn't seems so good on a Easy diff, remove it to simplify combo. k
  3. 01:00:254 (3) - There is a hitsound missing on the slider tail, idk if it's a whislte or finish but better checking it. ok
  4. 01:06:254 (5) - ugh XD Ignoring the beat making it finish on slider tail seems bad for this part, maybe replace the slider for 1 note then 1 slider aswell as you did in here 03:08:100 (4,1) - 00:18:254 (4,1). ahh the slider is following vocal so i guess it should be fine
  5. 01:49:177 (1) - Why did you stop to putting claps in this part? Idk... I cant understand why it's like that since clap song it's the same XD I think this section is less powerful so i didnt use it
  6. 01:58:407 (1) - Extend this break to where I linked, just to make it feels better o3o (Same for Normal) ok
  7. 02:39:023 (6,1) - Swap NCs here, as it seems that it broke your 2 stanzas comboing. yea


Seems already fine!

[Normal]
remap pls
kds pls xddd

jk XD It seems fine for me o3o/

[Collab Hard]
  1. 00:47:677 (1) - You'd prob want to add a NC here on this note to make a better readability. NOTE: 01:33:715 (6) - could be applied here tho 02:34:638 (3) - same here kek. I guess it is not needed when I NC in every downbeats
  2. 00:59:331 (1,2) - Why did you stop to follow vocals here? Doesn't amke much sense, try to do the same as previous patterns. same as 00:55:650 (1,1) -
  3. 01:04:869 (1,2,4,5) - Flow is bit bad here, (5) goes down to suddenly. It should be at least same of (1,2), as it'd seems better. I guess it fine with the triangular pattern
  4. 01:27:946 (3) - Put a reverse on this slider instead of having a big jump like that. It'll help for consistency though. I will just ctrl+g then xd
  5. 01:43:638 (1) - Missing NC? :U yup
  6. 02:22:407 (5,1) - Swap combos here then add it here 02:24:254 (5). ok


Cutie!


[Ifuuidol]
  1. 02:03:946 (4) - There is a missing NC here o3o NOTE: 01:17:792 (1) - same here. oh ook
  2. 03:01:177 (1) - Why you don't extend this slider to 3/4 instead of having a note where it almost has no sound. NOTE: 01:03:023 (1) - same here. this is same as what i did in previous part
  3. 03:11:677 (7) - Try to add a note at this empty spot as it'd helps for keeping a consistent and nice rhythm at this part o3o NOTE: 00:21:831 (7) - same here.
same as reason above

Where are the BNs for this map?! XD

Since my post got denied on kudous you can give me on this one o/ GL~~

- Cappuccino - wrote:

打着像在玩宵暗花火23333用滑条尾把三连拆成2连简直套路

不过舒服多了就是了ww

主难度free mod

00:12:254 (2,3,1) - 感觉这个也可以下成前面的节奏 應該不用, 主要跟vocal

00:29:331 (6) - 可以反选反flow会很带感 (好像上一句就反了?這樣的話00:29:343 (6,7,1) - 的flow會變得怪qwq

01:09:715 (4) - 可以考虑换成五连最后一个搁多折返滑条 1/8 5連!?

有些地方的三连疑似overmap不过 嘛 反正蓝翼老爷那图都能rank2333

01:40:638 (4,5) - 5这里不在连打的人声节奏上呀... 换成两组短滑条如何 這個沒辦法, 因為vocal在01:41:112 (6) - 開始, 之間只有1/4

01:56:561 (1,1,1,1) - 这四根草真的有必要么= =感觉微妙的影响读图而且也不是很有感觉 我覺得這種漸快的挺好啊

02:29:792 (1,2) - 缩短滑条接2个note如何 主要跟vocal啦

02:34:638 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - pwp纯属个人意见 123从上往下大间距三联 45-滑条从下往上大ds 配合之前的大跳会很有高潮的代入感 qwq不是很明白

02:48:715 (3) - 近点会让ds下降的更平滑点 ok

03:11:100 (4) - 这里开始可以和结尾一样下点小连打?03:14:689 - 一樣空了啊

就这样pwp
Thanks for mod!
kunka
Hi.
Random short mod.
Ifuuidol

  1. 01:17:804 (3) - NC?
  2. 01:28:535 - I recommend that I pick up this sound. Would you change the 01:28:419 (5) - to the 1/4 slider, or add a circle?
  3. 02:14:804 (6) - I think that whistle is necessary. 02:18:266 (5,6) - same
  4. 02:33:496 (1) - Would you add whistle?
  5. 03:15:958 (1,2) - I didn't feel the need that 03:15:958 (1) - is a slider. Rather I recommend that I pick it up in the same way as 03:16:650 (3,4,5) - . http://puu.sh/oGw8E.jpg
Collab Hard

  1. 00:21:727 (4,5) - I recommend ctrl+G. I think that it is better to set a slider in the up beat (white-line). 00:24:266 (6,1) - same (down beat)
  2. 02:26:343 (2,3) - ^
  3. 03:01:419 (8) - I don't understand the reason of the jump of this circle...
Nice BG! gl ;)
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