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RedBall
Hello~ I'm from PM~!

Here's NM you requested!

+I'm a beginner in modding. So, it may not be helpful to you. Then, feel free to reject and don't give me kudosu!

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

General
All diffs have same OD rate and HP drain. Also, there's no kiai time. is it okay? :>

NM
00:15:657 (15657|1) - How about adding one note on column 4? (to emphasize big sound there)
00:16:432 (16432|2) - move to column 1 And 00:17:206 (17206|0) - move to column 3 (apply this if you accepted the previous suggestion for hand balance)

That's all, kek. Nice diff! O_o

HD
00:12:173 - add one note (you put 00:05:980 (5980|1) this, and it's quite similar as that part)
00:21:754 - add one note (making it similar as 00:18:367 (18367|3,18464|2,18561|1,18657|0) this part)
If you accepted the previous suggestion, How about 00:22:141 (22141|2) - move to 00:21:851 (I think it's easier to follow)
If you accepted the previous suggestion, try adding one note on 00:20:206 and 00:24:851 (less confusing)
00:27:561 (27561|0) - How about changing this to LN which ends on 00:27:851 ? (following the wind sound)
00:47:786 - add one note on column 1 (making it similar as 00:47:399 (47399|1,47399|0) this)
00:48:077 - add one note on column 1? (following the drum sound)
00:49:432 - add one note And maybe add one note on 00:49:625 (following the mood)
00:50:496 - add one note (in order to emphasize the big sound there)
00:50:980 - add one note And 00:51:077 (51077|0) - How about changing it to LN which ends on 00:51:270 (following the drum and wind sound)
01:08:690 (68690|1) - add one note on column 3 (in order to emphasize the big sound there)
01:33:464 - add one note (^)
01:35:012 - add one note (^)
From 01:35:399 to 01:35:980 - How about changing that part something like this? http://puu.sh/orDxD/21c9878ec2.jpg
01:37:238 (97238|3) - move to 01:37:141 And 01:37:238 - add one note on column 2 (following the song)
01:38:303 (98303|2) - change this to LN which ends on 01:38:496 (following the elec sound as you did in this diff)
01:38:883 (98883|2) - How about changing this to LN which ends on 01:39:077 (following the sound)
01:40:819 (100819|3) - delete (I think emphasis point is not there but 01:40:625 here)

MX
00:14:593 - add one note (following the quiet elec sound as like 00:14:303 (14303|1,14399|3,14496|2) these)
00:20:786 (20786|2) - How about deleting it? (making it similar as 00:24:270 )
00:23:109 - add one note? (missing note?)
00:27:561 (27561|0) - How about changing this to LN which ends on 00:27:851 ? (following the wind sound)
00:14:786 - add one note? (^)
00:45:173 - How about adding one note? (following the sound)
If you followed the previous suggestion, how about 00:47:496 - adding one note on column 3 And 00:47:593 (47593|2) - moving to column 1? (following the big drums)
00:49:432 - add one note And 00:49:625 - add one note And maybe 00:49:238 - add one note (There's drum sound differently from 00:49:044 )
01:32:883 (92883|2) - move to column 4 And 01:32:980 - add one note on column 3 (following the sound + hand balance)
01:40:819 (100819|2) - delete (same reason as HD)

Most of them are just suggestions! Feel Free to reject those~
Your mapset still makes sense without my suggestions!

Nice mapset and song! Good Luck on your map~ :D
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

rinaldi28 wrote:

hiii im newbie in modding :D

1|2|3|4

NM
00:09:464 (9464|0) - change LN ? nope
00:40:625 - add note ? kept for rhythm
00:42:173 - ^
00:43:722 - ^
00:46:819 - ^
00:49:915 - ^
00:50:496 (50496|3,50690|2,50883|1,51077|0) - change LN in column 1 ? :o end 00:51:077 - ok
01:05:883 - add ?
01:05:980 (65980|2) - delete ?
01:07:044 - add ?
01:07:141 (67141|2) - delete ?
01:07:335 - add ?
01:08:883 - ^
01:10:141 - ^
01:10:238 (70238|3) - delete ?
01:10:432 - add

HD
00:59:206 - add note same at 01:02:303 -
01:00:754 - ^
01:05:399 - ^ ?
01:32:109 - add LN ?
01:37:141 - ^
01:38:303 - ^
01:40:238 - ^
all fixed

MX
00:29:690 (29690|0) - delete ?
00:31:238 (31238|3) - ^
00:32:786 (32786|0) - ^
00:34:335 (34335|1) - ^
00:35:883 (35883|0) - ^
00:37:432 (37432|0) - ^
00:38:980 (38980|0) - ^
01:30:948 - add LN ?
01:32:109 - ^
01:38:303 - ^
all fixed

iim sorry for the result is not good :(

RedBall wrote:

Hello~ I'm from PM~!

Here's NM you requested!

+I'm a beginner in modding. So, it may not be helpful to you. Then, feel free to reject and don't give me kudosu!

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

General
All diffs have same OD rate and HP drain. Also, there's no kiai time. is it okay? :> decreased NM and HD's od and hp

NM
00:15:657 (15657|1) - How about adding one note on column 4? (to emphasize big sound there) k
00:16:432 (16432|2) - move to column 1 And 00:17:206 (17206|0) - move to column 3 (apply this if you accepted the previous suggestion for hand balance) ok

That's all, kek. Nice diff! O_o

HD
00:12:173 - add one note (you put 00:05:980 (5980|1) this, and it's quite similar as that part) can't hear clear sound here
00:21:754 - add one note (making it similar as 00:18:367 (18367|3,18464|2,18561|1,18657|0) this part) added
If you accepted the previous suggestion, How about 00:22:141 (22141|2) - move to 00:21:851 (I think it's easier to follow)
If you accepted the previous suggestion, try adding one note on 00:20:206 and 00:24:851 (less confusing) done
00:27:561 (27561|0) - How about changing this to LN which ends on 00:27:851 ? (following the wind sound) ok
00:47:786 - add one note on column 1 (making it similar as 00:47:399 (47399|1,47399|0) this) k
00:48:077 - add one note on column 1? (following the drum sound) k
00:49:432 - add one note And maybe add one note on 00:49:625 (following the mood) k
00:50:496 - add one note (in order to emphasize the big sound there) k
00:50:980 - add one note And 00:51:077 (51077|0) - How about changing it to LN which ends on 00:51:270 (following the drum and wind sound) k
01:08:690 (68690|1) - add one note on column 3 (in order to emphasize the big sound there) k
01:33:464 - add one note (^) k
01:35:012 - add one note (^)k
From 01:35:399 to 01:35:980 - How about changing that part something like this? http://puu.sh/orDxD/21c9878ec2.jpg changed in another way
01:37:238 (97238|3) - move to 01:37:141 And 01:37:238 - add one note on column 2 (following the song) k
01:38:303 (98303|2) - change this to LN which ends on 01:38:496 (following the elec sound as you did in this diff) k
01:38:883 (98883|2) - How about changing this to LN which ends on 01:39:077 (following the sound) k
01:40:819 (100819|3) - delete (I think emphasis point is not there but 01:40:625 here) k

MX
00:14:593 - add one note (following the quiet elec sound as like 00:14:303 (14303|1,14399|3,14496|2) these) kept, can't hear clear sound
00:20:786 (20786|2) - How about deleting it? (making it similar as 00:24:270 )k
00:23:109 - add one note? (missing note?)k
00:27:561 (27561|0) - How about changing this to LN which ends on 00:27:851 ? (following the wind sound)k
00:14:786 - add one note? (^) can't here clear sound lol
00:45:173 - How about adding one note? (following the sound)k
If you followed the previous suggestion, how about 00:47:496 - adding one note on column 3 And 00:47:593 (47593|2) - moving to column 1? (following the big drums)k
00:49:432 - add one note And 00:49:625 - add k one note And maybe 00:49:238 - add one note (There's drum sound differently from 00:49:044 )
01:32:883 (92883|2) - move to column 4 And 01:32:980 - add one note on column 3 (following the sound + hand balance)k
01:40:819 (100819|2) - delete (same reason as HD)k

Most of them are just suggestions! Feel Free to reject those~
Your mapset still makes sense without my suggestions!

Nice mapset and song! Good Luck on your map~ :D
thanks for mod~
biemote
水摸

马叉

00:03:851 (3851|2,3899|1,3948|0) - 这种note其实我建议还是只用1note带过就行,毕竟削除原BMS也是这么做的,(主要怕因为这个被dq,当然如果你很确定是这样的话不改也可以

00:15:754 - 00:16:915 - 00:17:109 - 00:17:303 - 00:18:851 - 漏音

00:39:657 (39657|1,39706|2,39754|3) - 00:47:206 (47206|0,47254|1,47303|2) - 这里是1/12哦(不改也行吧大概

01:17:786 - 漏音

01:29:012 (89012|2) - 建议去掉

01:35:593 - 这里应该有条子

好多

漏音情况的和马叉差不多.

01:30:948 - 这个你确定不是条子?

尼妙

00:28:238 - 00:31:335 - 00:34:432 - 00:37:528 - 漏音
cosran
建议re
占位
09kami
最好能水一帖 就是前排围观那种水贴 不是摸
sahuang
Fantastic map.
[Crz]Makii
ehh不会被打包么((
Misure
前排围观
??怎么翻页了
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

biemote wrote:

水摸

马叉

00:03:851 (3851|2,3899|1,3948|0) - 这种note其实我建议还是只用1note带过就行,毕竟削除原BMS也是这么做的,(主要怕因为这个被dq,当然如果你很确定是这样的话不改也可以 感觉听好玩 先放着吧

00:15:754 - 00:16:915 - 00:17:109 - 00:17:303 - 00:18:851 - 漏音 加了几个 有几个实在听不清就美甲了

00:39:657 (39657|1,39706|2,39754|3) - 00:47:206 (47206|0,47254|1,47303|2) - 这里是1/12哦(不改也行吧大概 那样会不会太急把了

01:17:786 - 漏音

01:29:012 (89012|2) - 建议去掉 这里有音啊..

01:35:593 - 这里应该有条子 加了

好多

漏音情况的和马叉差不多.

01:30:948 - 这个你确定不是条子? 不确定

尼妙

00:28:238 - 00:31:335 - 00:34:432 - 00:37:528 - 漏音 有的感觉听不清就美甲了
感谢摸得
[ A v a l o n ]
NM 1,51 star with E icon? osu web is so SB
|1|2|3|4|

mod inside
- you need to add custom hitsound for more interesting
- add "BOF of fighter 2011" in your tags

  • [NM]
  1. 00:21:077 (21077|0,21851|0) - why this have same column? you didn't do like this since from beginning
    then, i suggest to 00:21:851 (21851|0) - move to 4, and 00:24:173 (24173|3,24948|0) - Ctrl G
  2. 00:24:948 (24948|3) - add a note please, this part is have piano sound too . . . just same in other part like 00:28:819 (28819|3,29012|2,29399|0,29593|1) -
  3. 00:30:948 (30948|1) - move (snap) to 00:31:335 - same reason as above (and still many more like this case for next part)
  4. 01:34:625 (94625|0,96173|0) - this should not in same column and same pattern form, it's truly a different sound
  5. 01:37:722 (97722|3) - the long sound is actually start on here 01:37:528 -
  6. overall for this diff, sometimes i feel you making your "own rhythm" for few parts, i don't really understand what is the exact sound that you following in this diff . . . example 01:33:464 (93464|0,94238|3) - i think you better follow synth sound on this 01:33:367 - 01:33:657 -

    [HD]
  7. 00:14:109 - add note, you have missed a sound in this time (you can take a look into your previous part)
  8. 00:34:828 - http://puu.sh/oEJSS/8ef11ef070.jpg do this for a consistentcy like on you previous part
  9. 00:39:948 - add note, because this part is have a kick sound too, just like 00:40:044 (40044|1,40141|3,40238|0) -
  10. 00:41:593 (41593|2,41786|2) - arrange this to different column, there is no same sound here, and i feel it just make no sense for me
  11. 00:42:851 (42851|3) - delete this, you didn't use this in other part, or you can choose my second choice . . . add a note like that for your other parts like 00:41:303 - 00:44:399 - 00:45:948 -
  12. 01:30:367 (90367|3,90561|2,90948|2,91141|3) - this kind of LN's (many morelike that) is hard to understand for player in "HD diff range area" (even by me, because it's mostly following minor synth sound (in this case, for MX diff is okay) i suggest you to map "clear" long sound only . . . like on 01:29:980 - until 01:31:528 - then until 01:32:883 - and so on (it's more easier to understand and more respect to that lead sound)

    [MX]
  13. 00:05:593 - not going to add 1/8 snap like 00:11:786 - for guitar sound? please make it consistent
  14. 00:18:754 (18754|2,18948|0) - it feels better if you put them in same column like on this part 00:19:528 (19528|0,19722|0) -
  15. 00:19:915 (19915|0) - 3 times in same column was not really nice i think, so i suggest 00:19:915 (19915|0,20012|1,20109|2,20206|1) - arrange to 4 3 2 1 for more better pattern flows
  16. 00:25:528 (25528|3,25625|2) - Ctrl G
  17. 00:48:754 - add one more note, this part is have an extra sound like other parts
  18. 01:18:367 - 01:19:141 - 01:22:238 - add note for clock sound, make it 2 note like on 01:19:915 (79915|2,79915|3,80690|3,80690|2) - it just feels weird if this part is having an issue on consistency pattern

good luck :)
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

NM 1,51 star with E icon? osu web is so SB i added some note and increase to NM icon now lol
|1|2|3|4|

mod inside
- you need to add custom hitsound for more interesting added
- add "BOF of fighter 2011" in your tags done

  • [NM]
  1. 00:21:077 (21077|0,21851|0) - why this have same column? you didn't do like this since from beginning k
    then, i suggest to 00:21:851 (21851|0) - move to 4, and 00:24:173 (24173|3,24948|0) - Ctrl G k
  2. 00:24:948 (24948|3) - add a note please, this part is have piano sound too . . . just same in other part like 00:28:819 (28819|3,29012|2,29399|0,29593|1) - added
  3. 00:30:948 (30948|1) - move (snap) to 00:31:335 - same reason as above (and still many more like this case for next part) kept because i want to follow that sound
  4. 01:34:625 (94625|0,96173|0) - this should not in same column and same pattern form, it's truly a different sound k
  5. 01:37:722 (97722|3) - the long sound is actually start on here 01:37:528 - ok
  6. overall for this diff, sometimes i feel you making your "own rhythm" for few parts, i don't really understand what is the exact sound that you following in this diff . . . example 01:33:464 (93464|0,94238|3) - i think you better follow synth sound on this 01:33:367 - 01:33:657 - emm i don't want to this diff be too hard so i selected to follow less sound x.x

    [HD]
  7. 00:14:109 - add note, you have missed a sound in this time (you can take a look into your previous part) k
  8. 00:34:828 - http://puu.sh/oEJSS/8ef11ef070.jpg do this for a consistentcy like on you previous part used another placing
  9. 00:39:948 - add note, because this part is have a kick sound too, just like 00:40:044 (40044|1,40141|3,40238|0) - k
  10. 00:41:593 (41593|2,41786|2) - arrange this to different column, there is no same sound here, and i feel it just make no sense for me k
  11. 00:42:851 (42851|3) - delete this, you didn't use this in other part, or you can choose my second choice . . . add a note like that for your other parts like 00:41:303 - 00:44:399 - 00:45:948 - k
  12. 01:30:367 (90367|3,90561|2,90948|2,91141|3) - this kind of LN's (many morelike that) is hard to understand for player in "HD diff range area" (even by me, because it's mostly following minor synth sound (in this case, for MX diff is okay) i suggest you to map "clear" long sound only . . . like on 01:29:980 - until 01:31:528 - then until 01:32:883 - and so on (it's more easier to understand and more respect to that lead sound) emm i think that sound is clear enough so just kept

    [MX]
  13. 00:05:593 - not going to add 1/8 snap like 00:11:786 - for guitar sound? please make it consistent k
  14. 00:18:754 (18754|2,18948|0) - it feels better if you put them in same column like on this part 00:19:528 (19528|0,19722|0) - chenged a little
  15. 00:19:915 (19915|0) - 3 times in same column was not really nice i think, so i suggest 00:19:915 moved away(19915|0,20012|1,20109|2,20206|1) - arrange to 4 3 2 1 for more better pattern flows
  16. 00:25:528 (25528|3,25625|2) - Ctrl G k
  17. 00:48:754 - add one more note, this part is have an extra sound like other parts k
  18. 01:18:367 - 01:19:141 - 01:22:238 - add note for clock sound, make it 2 note like on 01:19:915 (79915|2,79915|3,80690|3,80690|2) - it just feels weird if this part is having an issue on consistency pattern k, they all have double note now

good luck :)
thanks for mod!
[Emiria]
NM make it as Normal icon
00:04:044 (4044|3) - i think u should catch piano here because it will bring the player the clear feeling of this map
00:27:270 - add note here here is the part link with last part.will make new players to feel the base beat of this song
00:28:819 (28819|3,29012|2) - these is not clear i think u should forcus on the durm part to make the map much clear and easy to play
00:40:432 - this part i think u do the piano and drum is the best choose,it have much change before the part before
00:51:270 (51270|2) - delete this change to piano is better . this instrument doesnt give best feedback.
00:59:012 - u should catch drum to follow the base beat ,it will be nice to play and give best feeling
01:17:786 - add a note for piano .since u catch piano here
01:25:335 (85335|2,85722|1) - it is meaningless here ,didnt express the song i suggest u to cath drum



Hard
00:03:851 - wrong snap
00:04:819 (4819|1) - delete is better ,for this part catching piano is the best choose
00:21:948 - miss note .since u catch it before
00:22:915 (22915|1) - delete u should keep instrument same then it will give the player the coherent music
00:25:915 - add notes same reason ^
00:27:367 - add notes for heavy beat .this part is stress and need more notes to express
00:27:561 -delete LN same reason ^
00:28:625 (28625|0,28722|1,28819|2) - u should make the instrument same and clear to keep ur map much easy for player to understand
00:40:432 - add a note for piano here music itself changes from this part,and as the map it need some change
00:58:625 - dont miss drum , it is the base of the song
01:04:432 - heavy drum need to be mapped
01:04:819 - ^ same
01:26:109 (86109|1) - should be here 01:25:722 - no other instrment there
01:26:883 - dont stop the drum it is the whole part
01:40:238 - ^


thats all good luck ;)
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

victorica_db wrote:

NM make it as Normal icon
00:04:044 (4044|3) - i think u should catch piano here because it will bring the player the clear feeling of this map
00:27:270 - add note here here is the part link with last part.will make new players to feel the base beat of this song
00:28:819 (28819|3,29012|2) - these is not clear i think u should forcus on the durm part to make the map much clear and easy to play 感觉跟鼓就是无脑放1/2了 不如跟下那个音
00:40:432 - this part i think u do the piano and drum is the best choose,it have much change before the part before
00:51:270 (51270|2) - delete this change to piano is better . this instrument doesnt give best feedback.
00:59:012 - u should catch drum to follow the base beat ,it will be nice to play and give best feeling
01:17:786 - add a note for piano .since u catch piano here 听不清 还是先空着
01:25:335 (85335|2,85722|1) - it is meaningless here ,didnt express the song i suggest u to cath drum



Hard
00:03:851 - wrong snap ...?
00:04:819 (4819|1) - delete is better ,for this part catching piano is the best choose
00:21:948 - miss note .since u catch it before
00:22:915 (22915|1) - delete u should keep instrument same then it will give the player the coherent music
00:25:915 - add notes same reason ^
00:27:367 - add notes for heavy beat .this part is stress and need more notes to express
00:27:561 -delete LN same reason ^
00:28:625 (28625|0,28722|1,28819|2) - u should make the instrument same and clear to keep ur map much easy for player to understand 这段都改了点
00:40:432 - add a note for piano here music itself changes from this part,and as the map it need some change
00:58:625 - dont miss drum , it is the base of the song
01:04:432 - heavy drum need to be mapped
01:04:819 - ^ same
01:26:109 (86109|1) - should be here 01:25:722 - no other instrment there
01:26:883 - dont stop the drum it is the whole part 这几个面条都删了
01:40:238 - ^


thats all good luck ;)
没回的基本都改了 感谢摸得
Lirai
Hello zzbzzbzbbbzbzbzzb

here's mod as requested aaaaaa

|1|2|3|4|

[MX]
00:12:173 - should add note for the piano sound here

00:25:819 - i really suggest u to add note here at 3 to represent the water drop sound here, also to keep the double u should move this to col 2

00:36:561 (36561|1,36561|0) - i think this shouldn't be double according to the consistency of the pattern here these shows the 1st beat 00:35:206 (35206|3,35206|2,35399|0,35399|3) and these the 3rd 00:38:303 (38303|1,38303|0,38496|0,38496|3) , so what i pointed is the 2nd and it should be identic with the 1st and the 3rd

00:48:754 - its ok to add note on col 1 for kick

01:02:690 (62690|3,62786|1,62786|2,62883|0,62980|3,63077|1,63077|2,63173|0) - i think u can do another patterning here, not just make it same as 01:01:141

01:07:528 - sometimes i feel off here, maybe the kick that u didnt represent as double i guess http://puu.sh/oJlaA/e77d73416d.jpg

01:13:141 (73141|1,73141|0,73238|3,73335|1,73335|2) - i was thinking that this note 01:13:238 (73238|3) - can be double for the snare sound i hope it is since that what u map 01:12:754 (72754|2,72754|0,72851|3,72851|1,72948|2,72948|0)

01:14:786 - add note to 2 for kick

01:17:786 - add note to 3
01:17:980 - add note to 2, these are for represent the piano. the pitch was right if put it like what i pointed out

01:20:303 (80303|1) - pitch aaaa move to 1 pls
[HD]
01:06:173 - Add to 4 for kick la

01:17:786 - add note to 3
01:17:980 - add note to 2, same reason for piano

i guess need some further modding first.
Sandalphon
就MX
1l2l3l4
[MX]
00:05:593 - 后面重复的pattern太多所以换下
00:32:690 - 没有必要特意把这些鼓写成12或者34的样子,这里14,同理后面一些也一样
00:36:561 (36561|1,36561|0) - 啥,鼓的话是在00:36:464 - ,而且前面你这个蓝线的鼓也没抓
00:39:657 - 很突兀的double
01:15:754 (75754|2,75754|3) - 删个,突出后面01:15:851 (75851|0,75851|1,75948|3,75948|2,76044|1,76044|0) - 这三个带琴的double
01:34:335 (94335|1) - 01:37:432 (97432|1) - 你确定些是你想抓的音
01:35:593 - 漏个LN,加在4吧
01:41:593 - 推荐个黑科技

祝好运
Zan-
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
  • [NM]
  1. 00:27:270 - i think this doublet is not really match in this section, try this: http://puu.sh/oIVnI/432934f9b2.png
  2. 00:34:625 (34625|0) - i prefer to move this to [3]
  3. 01:29:980 - i think all of LN above this till end is not really good emphasised because i don't really get what those LNs follow to. i suggest to follow the actual hold-piano for the LNs! (contact me if you need further info)
    [HD]
  4. 00:17:206 - start from here the doublet usage looks in mess. example: 00:17:206 - here is doublet but at 00:16:432 - you only put single while i'm sure they have exact same sound. and many of them above. try to consider to fix
  5. 00:27:270 - http://puu.sh/oKn57/037aed4f10.jpg | i prefer like this because it has good impact to give them doublets
  6. 00:49:141 - you can hear there is snare sound that should be doublet according to yout previous patterning
  7. 00:49:625 - ^
  8. 00:50:496 - ^ (but for cymbal)
  9. 00:51:077 - ^
  10. 00:58:625 - ^
  11. 00:59:980 - ^
  12. 01:01:528 - ^
  13. 01:03:077 - ^
  14. 01:06:173 - ^
    -----------------waaa so manyyy, i'm sure you can find by your self
  15. 01:30:948 (90948|2) - i think this one should be LN
    [MX]
  16. 00:27:270 - i prefer like this http://puu.sh/oKnB4/bca507495c.png
  17. 00:30:270 - double | refer to 00:33:367 -
  18. 00:41:109 - this should be double instead 00:41:206 - so 00:41:206 (41206|2) - move it to 00:41:109 -
  19. 01:05:883 - doublet
  20. 01:10:528 - http://puu.sh/oKnGu/14d97449ad.png | more balance
  21. 01:14:109 - http://puu.sh/oKnHq/78a03ebaec.png | try to avoid this one. so spread the notes make it more balance
  22. 01:31:141 (91141|1) - remove this, as i see to next above there is no triplet for the same sound
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

DE-CADE wrote:

Hello zzbzzbzbbbzbzbzzb

here's mod as requested aaaaaa

|1|2|3|4|

[MX]
00:12:173 - should add note for the piano sound here

00:25:819 - i really suggest u to add note here at 3 to represent the water drop sound here, also to keep the double u should move this to col 2

00:36:561 (36561|1,36561|0) - i think this shouldn't be double according to the consistency of the pattern here these shows the 1st beat 00:35:206 (35206|3,35206|2,35399|0,35399|3) and these the 3rd 00:38:303 (38303|1,38303|0,38496|0,38496|3) , so what i pointed is the 2nd and it should be identic with the 1st and the 3rd

00:48:754 - its ok to add note on col 1 for kick

01:02:690 (62690|3,62786|1,62786|2,62883|0,62980|3,63077|1,63077|2,63173|0) - i think u can do another patterning here, not just make it same as 01:01:141

01:07:528 - sometimes i feel off here, maybe the kick that u didnt represent as double i guess http://puu.sh/oJlaA/e77d73416d.jpg

01:13:141 (73141|1,73141|0,73238|3,73335|1,73335|2) - i was thinking that this note 01:13:238 (73238|3) - can be double for the snare sound i hope it is since that what u map 01:12:754 (72754|2,72754|0,72851|3,72851|1,72948|2,72948|0)

01:14:786 - add note to 2 for kick

01:17:786 - add note to 3
01:17:980 - add note to 2, these are for represent the piano. the pitch was right if put it like what i pointed out

01:20:303 (80303|1) - pitch aaaa move to 1 pls
[HD]
01:06:173 - Add to 4 for kick la

01:17:786 - add note to 3
01:17:980 - add note to 2, same reason for piano

i guess need some further modding first.

SanadaYukimura wrote:

就MX
1l2l3l4
[MX]
00:05:593 - 后面重复的pattern太多所以换下
00:32:690 - 没有必要特意把这些鼓写成12或者34的样子,这里14,同理后面一些也一样
00:36:561 (36561|1,36561|0) - 啥,鼓的话是在00:36:464 - ,而且前面你这个蓝线的鼓也没抓
00:39:657 - 很突兀的double
01:15:754 (75754|2,75754|3) - 删个,突出后面01:15:851 (75851|0,75851|1,75948|3,75948|2,76044|1,76044|0) - 这三个带琴的double
01:34:335 (94335|1) - 01:37:432 (97432|1) - 你确定些是你想抓的音
01:35:593 - 漏个LN,加在4吧
01:41:593 - 推荐个黑科技

祝好运

Rizqy wrote:

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
  • [NM]
  1. 00:27:270 - i think this doublet is not really match in this section, try this: http://puu.sh/oIVnI/432934f9b2.png
  2. 00:34:625 (34625|0) - i prefer to move this to [3]
  3. 01:29:980 - i think all of LN above this till end is not really good emphasised because i don't really get what those LNs follow to. i suggest to follow the actual hold-piano for the LNs! (contact me if you need further info)
    [HD]
  4. 00:17:206 - start from here the doublet usage looks in mess. example: 00:17:206 - here is doublet but at 00:16:432 - you only put single while i'm sure they have exact same sound. and many of them above. try to consider to fix
  5. 00:27:270 - http://puu.sh/oKn57/037aed4f10.jpg | i prefer like this because it has good impact to give them doublets
  6. 00:49:141 - you can hear there is snare sound that should be doublet according to yout previous patterning
  7. 00:49:625 - ^
  8. 00:50:496 - ^ (but for cymbal)
  9. 00:51:077 - ^
  10. 00:58:625 - ^
  11. 00:59:980 - ^
  12. 01:01:528 - ^
  13. 01:03:077 - ^
  14. 01:06:173 - ^
    -----------------waaa so manyyy, i'm sure you can find by your self
  15. 01:30:948 (90948|2) - i think this one should be LN
    [MX]
  16. 00:27:270 - i prefer like this http://puu.sh/oKnB4/bca507495c.png
  17. 00:30:270 - double | refer to 00:33:367 -
  18. 00:41:109 - this should be double instead 00:41:206 - so 00:41:206 (41206|2) - move it to 00:41:109 -
  19. 01:05:883 - doublet
  20. 01:10:528 - http://puu.sh/oKnGu/14d97449ad.png | more balance
  21. 01:14:109 - http://puu.sh/oKnHq/78a03ebaec.png | try to avoid this one. so spread the notes make it more balance
  22. 01:31:141 (91141|1) - remove this, as i see to next above there is no triplet for the same sound
all fixed, thanks for mods~
liaoxingyao
这都能被你塞到3.82,不得不服
hokin1995
低端水
懶癌發作所以只有mx
Column: 1|2|3|4
[MX]
●00:19:819 - 漏了還是刻意?

●00:27:561 - 我覺得這裡可以再加一個再1或2上

●00:27:851 (27851|0,27851|1) - 我覺得這裡可以去掉一個

●00:27:948 (27948|1) - 這裡漏了

●00:39:706 (39706|2,39754|3) - 其實我覺得突然跑兩個1/8 有點怪怪der 我覺得這裡可以用一個ln 輕輕帶過好像會好一點

●00:46:819 (46819|1,46819|0,47012|3,47012|2,47206|0,47254|1,47303|2,47399|1,47399|0,47496|3,47593|2,47593|1) - 個人覺得這裡打起來有點不太順暢 我嘗試重新排了一下你看看怎樣? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5227533

●01:01:141 (61141|3,61238|1,61238|2,61335|0,61432|3,61528|1,61528|2,61625|0) - 我建議把這裡其中一組鍵形換成別的 畢竟音不同 用相同的排列打起來怪怪的

●01:06:657 - 漏了 補一個吧

●01:07:528 (67528|2,67528|3) - 我比較糾結這個音是不是雙鍵 比起類似的音 這個相對沒那麼響跟重
這個01:07:722 (67722|0) - 我覺得很響跟重 反而是單鍵w

●01:09:173 (69173|2,69222|3) - 這個ctrl+g吧 我覺得這樣打起來會舒服一點
01:09:367 (69367|2) - 如果上面你改了把這個移到4

●01:10:722 (70722|3,70770|2,70819|1) - 怪怪的

●01:11:883 (71883|1,71883|2) - 我認為這個音一個鍵足矣

●01:27:077 - 01:27:464 - 前面的連續1/2挺好 但一到了有面條的時候就突然變了1/1 感覺上很空洞所以 我覺得這裡都可以各補一個

●01:30:173 (90173|3) - 移到2 如何?

●01:30:851 (90851|3) - 老實說這個note在這個位置出現 打起來很別扭 我會換成這樣 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5227920 之後有些地方我也覺得很別扭 但我就不一一列出來了
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

hokin1995 wrote:

低端水
懶癌發作所以只有mx
Column: 1|2|3|4
[MX]
●00:19:819 - 漏了還是刻意?

●00:27:561 - 我覺得這裡可以再加一個再1或2上 感觉这里够了...

●00:27:851 (27851|0,27851|1) - 我覺得這裡可以去掉一個

●00:27:948 (27948|1) - 這裡漏了

●00:39:706 (39706|2,39754|3) - 其實我覺得突然跑兩個1/8 有點怪怪der 我覺得這裡可以用一個ln 輕輕帶過好像會好一點额 其实其它地方也用了1/8感觉还好 但还是听你的把删了

●00:46:819 (46819|1,46819|0,47012|3,47012|2,47206|0,47254|1,47303|2,47399|1,47399|0,47496|3,47593|2,47593|1) - 個人覺得這裡打起來有點不太順暢 我嘗試重新排了一下你看看怎樣? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5227533

●01:01:141 (61141|3,61238|1,61238|2,61335|0,61432|3,61528|1,61528|2,61625|0) - 我建議把這裡其中一組鍵形換成別的 畢竟音不同 用相同的排列打起來怪怪的

●01:06:657 - 漏了 補一個吧

●01:07:528 (67528|2,67528|3) - 我比較糾結這個音是不是雙鍵 比起類似的音 這個相對沒那麼響跟重
這個01:07:722 (67722|0) - 我覺得很響跟重 反而是單鍵w

●01:09:173 (69173|2,69222|3) - 這個ctrl+g吧 我覺得這樣打起來會舒服一點
01:09:367 (69367|2) - 如果上面你改了把這個移到4

●01:10:722 (70722|3,70770|2,70819|1) - 怪怪的

●01:11:883 (71883|1,71883|2) - 我認為這個音一個鍵足矣

●01:27:077 - 01:27:464 - 前面的連續1/2挺好 但一到了有面條的時候就突然變了1/1 感覺上很空洞所以 我覺得這裡都可以各補一個

●01:30:173 (90173|3) - 移到2 如何?

●01:30:851 (90851|3) - 老實說這個note在這個位置出現 打起來很別扭 我會換成這樣 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5227920 之後有些地方我也覺得很別扭 但我就不一一列出來了
没回的都改了 感谢摸得 :)
richardfeder
我真是超级懒逼..
我也不是很会4K只能随便看看orz
1|2|3|4
NM
00:09:464 (9464|0,9657|1) - 我觉得用一个条子好一点

00:43:915 (43915|2,44303|3,44496|2,44690|1) - 有点诡异

00:56:303 - 这里是不是少了一个note

HD
我觉得前面就不要抓那个ticktcik的声音好点 跟着琴就好了

00:49:141 (49141|1,49141|2) - 咦?

00:51:077 (51077|0) - 这个说实话感觉不是很连贯

00:52:625 (52625|2,52722|1) - 这也是

00:56:303 - 同NM

01:15:851 (75851|3,76044|0,76044|3,76819|3) - ctrl+H

01:17:980 (77980|1,79915|3) - delete

01:22:238 (82238|1) - 加一个
然后

01:23:786 (83786|0,84367|2,84561|3,84561|0) - 这种double只在有琴的地方用 比如01:23:786 (83786|2,83980|3,84367|2,84948|1) -
不要再tick的地方用

最后一段不是太懂一些note怎么放出来的 比如01:38:206 (98206|3,98980|0) - 不是很清楚跟的是什么音 条子倒是很清晰
01:35:593 (95593|1,95593|2,95786|2,95786|3) - ?咦这里不是可以跟前面后面一样放条子吗

01:39:270 - 这还是写鼓点吧 最后高潮了还写条子感觉有点浪费了 当然也只是我个人感觉 可能有的人觉得继续写条子好一些
加油~
Akasha-
kek, modding

[Generals]
nothing to do with it
Offset: 178 (Change after fix mod)

[NM]
00:11:786 (11786|0,12561|1,13335|2,14109|3,14883|2) - you can continue following 4-3-2-1 patterns like you did for the part earlier
00:09:657 (9657|1) - no need to follow this sound since it's still normal, just focus on tick-tock sound
00:13:915 (13915|0,13915|1) - for me, this one should be remove (still a normal diff, just focus on one sound) (this looks like a easy diff to me) / or just keep one note only, it may loud but only have bass sound
00:15:657 (15657|1,16432|0,17206|2,17980|1,18754|3,19528|2,20303|1,21077|0,21851|3,22625|1,23399|2,24173|0,24948|3,25722|1) - you can go 1-2-3-4 (somehow like the beat are moving on, pitching and also for tick tock sound
00:26:496 (26496|3,26496|2) - if you argee it, remove one note on here because it's only bass sound and move one note to 3rd (however, i would like to add a hold on here, recym sound start from 00:24:948 - to 00:26:496 -
00:27:270 - don't care snare sound, it's just a little hardy for your normal diff, just focus on bass sound, main bass are on 00:27:270 - 00:27:657 - 00:27:851 -
(TL;DR: 00:03:270 - to 00:24:948 - http://puu.sh/phz1u/ec58c30b78.png ; 00:24:948 - to 00:28:044 - http://puu.sh/phz3G/58ddd6e714.jpg)
00:28:432 (28432|3,28819|3) - move them to somewhere else; my suggestion to let 00:28:432 (28432|3) - to 3rd and 00:28:819 (28819|3) - to 2nd
Hmm, 00:28:044 - to 00:40:432 - better to remap this part; in my opinion, follow 1/1 bass is better than you follow the rhythm on this part
00:40:432 - to 00:49:722 - i don't quite understand what are you following on this part, if you're following main melody, this place is missing a note: 00:49:625 - / However, i would like to follow 1/1 bass and some 1/2 for a basic normal diff
My suggestion is for: 00:40:432 - to 00:43:528 - http://puu.sh/phzy8/fe764bbffb.jpg / 00:43:528 - to 00:46:625 - http://puu.sh/phzzo/f0509c5466.jpg / 00:46:625 - to 00:49:722 - http://puu.sh/phzAC/bde0e63474.jpg / 00:49:722 - to 00:52:819 - http://puu.sh/phzBA/d1c04a103a.jpg (and why i put jack on 00:51:077 - ? that's right; it's for pitch) you can testplay it
00:56:690 (56690|2,57464|1) - ctrl + h this, it works better for pitch
00:58:819 (58819|2,58915|1) - i think it would be better if you follow 1/2 only, which is move 00:58:819 (58819|2) - to 00:58:625 - and move 00:58:915 (58915|1) - to 00:58:819 -
01:00:464 (60464|0) - you can move it to 01:00:561 - and make a minijack here, that would be great for rhythm than add 1/4
01:01:238 (61238|2,62012|2) - no need them / http://puu.sh/pjCYN/3de917fc92.jpg
01:11:399 - i think if you move them like this would be better for pitch
01:14:496 - don't focus on main melody now, just follow 1/1 would be better for rhythm and for beginners to play with: http://puu.sh/pjD4O/18f92a95c8.jpg
01:18:367 - this patterns works for the tick tock sound well; http://puu.sh/pjDsd/7524b75b3f.jpg
01:23:786 - http://puu.sh/pjDur/1ecccbd72d.jpg for this flow, for me this one is most enjoyable and fun to play with, however, i still keep the tick tock patterns like the one earlier: http://puu.sh/pjDxv/77bb208bb3.png
01:28:432 - http://puu.sh/pjDy8/419d64a9c1.jpg
01:29:980 - to 01:42:367 - i think you need to remove holds and add 1/2 for main melody here; this one is quite too easy for a normal diff but also it looks bad to me / suggestion: 01:29:980 - to 01:33:077 - http://puu.sh/pjDHR/c9dca5d192.jpg ; 01:33:077 - to 01:36:173 - http://puu.sh/pjDIR/61c79ab816.jpg ; 01:36:173 - to 01:39:270 - http://puu.sh/pjDJJ/ddf6eb9ab8.jpg ; 01:39:270 - to 01:42:367 - http://puu.sh/pjDKG/c4cb48d06c.jpg

[HD]
00:11:980 (11980|1) - move this one to 4th and add a note on 00:12:173 - is better like you did earlier
00:15:851 (15851|2,16044|3,16238|3,16335|2) - this wasn't a good idea, however; make this pattern like this will be better for flow: http://puu.sh/pjEzs/6ddf1e087b.jpg
00:17:206 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/pjEDJ/b9bbe8ac1f.jpg
00:22:432 (22432|3,22528|0,22625|1,22819|0,23012|2) - this may cause confuse: http://puu.sh/pjEKs/abf11a2697.png
00:26:496 (26496|3,27367|3) - this jack hammer may cause a little hard here, but on here is 00:27:270 - only bass so better remove a note here http://puu.sh/pjEPP/0b4968d553.jpg
00:33:754 - add one more note here for the rhythm flows, that would be better
00:34:432 (34432|0,34625|1,34819|0,34915|1) - this one is a little awkward, how about move them like this: http://puu.sh/pjEVu/aad627f173.png
00:37:335 - move some http://puu.sh/pjEZX/a5311d08f8.jpg so the bass jacky on here 00:37:528 - can be more easy to recorgnize it
00:41:109 (41109|0,41206|2) - switch them, for patterns move balance and comforatable
for the pitch from 00:46:238 - (mean bacgkround sound 9for 1/4 you're using) so move 00:46:625 (46625|2) - to 1st column
00:48:367 - http://puu.sh/pjG7n/feb19ec6d3.jpg for pitch flow
01:04:915 (64915|1) - move it to 3rd is better for pitch and balance
01:16:044 (76044|0) - you can let it have same end with 01:16:819 (76819|3) - and move 01:17:593 (77593|1) - to 4th so that would be more better for rhythm and fun to play
01:17:980 (77980|1) - i don't know why you added note here
01:30:173 - i don't get it why you added two notes here, according to other hihat, you just added 1 note here
01:27:657 - this patterns will be better for both flow and melody http://puu.sh/pjGhT/d99b8ad8e9.jpg
01:35:399 (95399|1,95593|2,95593|1,95786|2,95980|1) - better add some melody flow by 1/4, not with these 1/2; it sound thing like loud bass snare so you can add 2 notes for them; however, you can add 1/1 notes for piano sound http://puu.sh/pjGmL/6506f79acc.png that would be great for me
01:38:690 (98690|1) - i heard nothing here, no sound almost same like 01:37:722 (97722|3,97915|1,98303|2,98496|0) -
01:38:883 - i would like to add only 1/2 note here http://puu.sh/pjGsc/ee233b33e4.jpg; main piano sound

[MX]
00:03:270 - i think 2 notes was already enough for beginning bass
00:05:401 - for this here, you can rearrange like this http://puu.sh/pnq8A/adb2ce6a79.png ; it's more confortable to play but also great pattern to me
00:11:786 (11786|1,11980|1,12173|1) - this is kinda weird; suggestion: http://puu.sh/pnqch/3770516bfe.jpg
00:14:109 - this works for pitch http://puu.sh/pnqeY/ff1b87e4c3.png
00:24:754 - this flow will be more balance and enjoyable if you move 00:24:754 (24754|0) - to 4th and 00:24:851 (24851|3) - to 3rd
00:26:496 - follow main background melody here, i would suggest to remove that long hold for a better streamy; and suggestion for the end flow: http://puu.sh/pnqpx/620c9debcc.jpg (begin from here 00:25:044 - ) ( jack on 00:27:367 - is for bassdrum sound, it would fit with jack)
00:28:722 - 00:31:819 - 00:34:915 - 00:38:012 - around here have bass, just like you added 2 notes for bass, so be here too
00:42:657 - 00:44:206 - 00:45:754 - 00:48:077 - have bass here too
The rest are actually fine, well done

call me when you done applied then
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

richardfeder wrote:

我真是超级懒逼..
我也不是很会4K只能随便看看orz
1|2|3|4
NM
00:09:464 (9464|0,9657|1) - 我觉得用一个条子好一点

00:43:915 (43915|2,44303|3,44496|2,44690|1) - 有点诡异

00:56:303 - 这里是不是少了一个note

HD
我觉得前面就不要抓那个ticktcik的声音好点 跟着琴就好了

00:49:141 (49141|1,49141|2) - 咦?

00:51:077 (51077|0) - 这个说实话感觉不是很连贯

00:52:625 (52625|2,52722|1) - 这也是

00:56:303 - 同NM

01:15:851 (75851|3,76044|0,76044|3,76819|3) - ctrl+H

01:17:980 (77980|1,79915|3) - delete

01:22:238 (82238|1) - 加一个
然后

01:23:786 (83786|0,84367|2,84561|3,84561|0) - 这种double只在有琴的地方用 比如01:23:786 (83786|2,83980|3,84367|2,84948|1) -
不要再tick的地方用

最后一段不是太懂一些note怎么放出来的 比如01:38:206 (98206|3,98980|0) - 不是很清楚跟的是什么音 条子倒是很清晰
01:35:593 (95593|1,95593|2,95786|2,95786|3) - ?咦这里不是可以跟前面后面一样放条子吗

01:39:270 - 这还是写鼓点吧 最后高潮了还写条子感觉有点浪费了 当然也只是我个人感觉 可能有的人觉得继续写条子好一些
加油~
pc哥说的都对 基本都改啦


Kuo

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

kek, modding

[Generals]
nothing to do with it
Offset: 178 (Change after fix mod) ok

[NM]
00:11:786 (11786|0,12561|1,13335|2,14109|3,14883|2) - you can continue following 4-3-2-1 patterns like you did for the part earlier
00:09:657 (9657|1) - no need to follow this sound since it's still normal, just focus on tick-tock sound
00:13:915 (13915|0,13915|1) - for me, this one should be remove (still a normal diff, just focus on one sound) (this looks like a easy diff to me) / or just keep one note only, it may loud but only have bass sound
00:15:657 (15657|1,16432|0,17206|2,17980|1,18754|3,19528|2,20303|1,21077|0,21851|3,22625|1,23399|2,24173|0,24948|3,25722|1) - you can go 1-2-3-4 (somehow like the beat are moving on, pitching and also for tick tock sound
00:26:496 (26496|3,26496|2) - if you argee it, remove one note on here because it's only bass sound and move one note to 3rd (however, i would like to add a hold on here, recym sound start from 00:24:948 - to 00:26:496 -
00:27:270 - don't care snare sound, it's just a little hardy for your normal diff, just focus on bass sound, main bass are on 00:27:270 - 00:27:657 - 00:27:851 -
(TL;DR: 00:03:270 - to 00:24:948 - http://puu.sh/phz1u/ec58c30b78.png ; 00:24:948 - to 00:28:044 - http://puu.sh/phz3G/58ddd6e714.jpg)
00:28:432 (28432|3,28819|3) - move them to somewhere else; my suggestion to let 00:28:432 (28432|3) - to 3rd and 00:28:819 (28819|3) - to 2nd
Hmm, 00:28:044 - to 00:40:432 - better to remap this part; in my opinion, follow 1/1 bass is better than you follow the rhythm on this part
00:40:432 - to 00:49:722 - i don't quite understand what are you following on this part, if you're following main melody, this place is missing a note: 00:49:625 - / However, i would like to follow 1/1 bass and some 1/2 for a basic normal diff
My suggestion is for: 00:40:432 - to 00:43:528 - http://puu.sh/phzy8/fe764bbffb.jpg / 00:43:528 - to 00:46:625 - http://puu.sh/phzzo/f0509c5466.jpg / 00:46:625 - to 00:49:722 - http://puu.sh/phzAC/bde0e63474.jpg / 00:49:722 - to 00:52:819 - http://puu.sh/phzBA/d1c04a103a.jpg (and why i put jack on 00:51:077 - ? that's right; it's for pitch) you can testplay it
00:56:690 (56690|2,57464|1) - ctrl + h this, it works better for pitch
00:58:819 (58819|2,58915|1) - i think it would be better if you follow 1/2 only, which is move 00:58:819 (58819|2) - to 00:58:625 - and move 00:58:915 (58915|1) - to 00:58:819 -
01:00:464 (60464|0) - you can move it to 01:00:561 - and make a minijack here, that would be great for rhythm than add 1/4
01:01:238 (61238|2,62012|2) - no need them / http://puu.sh/pjCYN/3de917fc92.jpg
01:11:399 - i think if you move them like this would be better for pitch
01:14:496 - don't focus on main melody now, just follow 1/1 would be better for rhythm and for beginners to play with: http://puu.sh/pjD4O/18f92a95c8.jpg
01:18:367 - this patterns works for the tick tock sound well; http://puu.sh/pjDsd/7524b75b3f.jpg
01:23:786 - http://puu.sh/pjDur/1ecccbd72d.jpg for this flow, for me this one is most enjoyable and fun to play with, however, i still keep the tick tock patterns like the one earlier: http://puu.sh/pjDxv/77bb208bb3.png
01:28:432 - http://puu.sh/pjDy8/419d64a9c1.jpg
01:29:980 - to 01:42:367 - i think you need to remove holds and add 1/2 for main melody here; this one is quite too easy for a normal diff but also it looks bad to me / suggestion: 01:29:980 - to 01:33:077 - http://puu.sh/pjDHR/c9dca5d192.jpg ; 01:33:077 - to 01:36:173 - http://puu.sh/pjDIR/61c79ab816.jpg ; 01:36:173 - to 01:39:270 - http://puu.sh/pjDJJ/ddf6eb9ab8.jpg ; 01:39:270 - to 01:42:367 - http://puu.sh/pjDKG/c4cb48d06c.jpg

added some 1/2 rhythm and seems fine now

[HD]
00:11:980 (11980|1) - move this one to 4th and add a note on 00:12:173 - is better like you did earlier
00:15:851 (15851|2,16044|3,16238|3,16335|2) - this wasn't a good idea, however; make this pattern like this will be better for flow: http://puu.sh/pjEzs/6ddf1e087b.jpg
00:17:206 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/pjEDJ/b9bbe8ac1f.jpg
00:22:432 (22432|3,22528|0,22625|1,22819|0,23012|2) - this may cause confuse: http://puu.sh/pjEKs/abf11a2697.png
00:26:496 (26496|3,27367|3) - this jack hammer may cause a little hard here, but on here is 00:27:270 - only bass so better remove a note here http://puu.sh/pjEPP/0b4968d553.jpg
00:33:754 - add one more note here for the rhythm flows, that would be better
00:34:432 (34432|0,34625|1,34819|0,34915|1) - this one is a little awkward, how about move them like this: http://puu.sh/pjEVu/aad627f173.png
00:37:335 - move some http://puu.sh/pjEZX/a5311d08f8.jpg so the bass jacky on here 00:37:528 - can be more easy to recorgnize it
00:41:109 (41109|0,41206|2) - switch them, for patterns move balance and comforatable
for the pitch from 00:46:238 - (mean bacgkround sound 9for 1/4 you're using) so move 00:46:625 (46625|2) - to 1st column
00:48:367 - http://puu.sh/pjG7n/feb19ec6d3.jpg for pitch flow
01:04:915 (64915|1) - move it to 3rd is better for pitch and balance
01:16:044 (76044|0) - you can let it have same end with 01:16:819 (76819|3) - and move 01:17:593 (77593|1) - to 4th so that would be more better for rhythm and fun to play
01:17:980 (77980|1) - i don't know why you added note here maybe there has sounds
01:30:173 - i don't get it why you added two notes here, according to other hihat, you just added 1 note here
01:27:657 - this patterns will be better for both flow and melody http://puu.sh/pjGhT/d99b8ad8e9.jpg
01:35:399 (95399|1,95593|2,95593|1,95786|2,95980|1) - better add some melody flow by 1/4, not with these 1/2; it sound thing like loud bass snare so you can add 2 notes for them; however, you can add 1/1 notes for piano sound http://puu.sh/pjGmL/6506f79acc.png that would be great for me
01:38:690 (98690|1) - i heard nothing here, no sound almost same like 01:37:722 (97722|3,97915|1,98303|2,98496|0) -
01:38:883 - i would like to add only 1/2 note here http://puu.sh/pjGsc/ee233b33e4.jpg; main piano sound

[MX]
00:03:270 - i think 2 notes was already enough for beginning bass
00:05:401 - for this here, you can rearrange like this http://puu.sh/pnq8A/adb2ce6a79.png ; it's more confortable to play but also great pattern to me
00:11:786 (11786|1,11980|1,12173|1) - this is kinda weird; suggestion: http://puu.sh/pnqch/3770516bfe.jpg
00:14:109 - this works for pitch http://puu.sh/pnqeY/ff1b87e4c3.png
00:24:754 - this flow will be more balance and enjoyable if you move 00:24:754 (24754|0) - to 4th and 00:24:851 (24851|3) - to 3rd
00:26:496 - follow main background melody here, i would suggest to remove that long hold for a better streamy; and suggestion for the end flow: http://puu.sh/pnqpx/620c9debcc.jpg (begin from here 00:25:044 - ) ( jack on 00:27:367 - is for bassdrum sound, it would fit with jack)
00:28:722 - 00:31:819 - 00:34:915 - 00:38:012 - around here have bass, just like you added 2 notes for bass, so be here too
00:42:657 - 00:44:206 - 00:45:754 - 00:48:077 - have bass here too kept one note, they are unnecessary to set double imo
The rest are actually fine, well done

call me when you done applied then
thank you kk
Akasha-
okay back

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[NM]
00:15:661 (15661|1) - move to 1st for balance
00:24:952 - missed a note right here
00:43:823 (43823|2) - wrong placed, should be on 00:43:726 -
00:47:016 (47016|3) - move to 3rd for more balance
01:09:855 (69855|0) - remove this whistle, there is two of them here

[HD]
00:18:468 (18468|2,18565|2) - move them to another place, they're not have same pitch so move 00:18:468 (18468|2) - to 1st in my opinion
00:23:500 (23500|0,23597|1) - switch them somehow better in my opinion
00:35:016 (35016|3) - missed whistle
00:39:274 (39274|3,39274|0) - 00:40:823 (40823|3,40823|0) - 00:41:597 (41597|0,41597|3) - 00:43:919 (43919|0,43919|1) - 00:46:242 (46242|0,46242|3) - 00:50:113 (50113|0,50113|1) - two claps here, remove one of them
00:56:694 (56694|3) - move this to 3rd, it work well for pitch and pattern
01:17:790 (77790|0) - move to 2nd will help this note more balance
01:26:694 - if you follow piano here so 01:26:887 (86887|3,86887|0) - one of them should be moved to 01:26:694 -
01:34:242 (94242|0) - remove hitsound
01:35:597 (95597|2) - add whistle

[MX]
00:11:790 (11790|1) - hmm this patterns will help your current one more balance i hope http://puu.sh/pJ4v5/6e04dd9962.jpg
The rest are fine to me
Call me back soon
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

okay back

Preview time is unsnapped, move it to here: 00:26:500 -

[NM]
00:15:661 (15661|1) - move to 1st for balance
00:24:952 - missed a note right here
00:43:823 (43823|2) - wrong placed, should be on 00:43:726 -
00:47:016 (47016|3) - move to 3rd for more balance
01:09:855 (69855|0) - remove this whistle, there is two of them here

[HD]
00:18:468 (18468|2,18565|2) - move them to another place, they're not have same pitch so move 00:18:468 (18468|2) - to 1st in my opinion
00:23:500 (23500|0,23597|1) - switch them somehow better in my opinion
00:35:016 (35016|3) - missed whistle
00:39:274 (39274|3,39274|0) - 00:40:823 (40823|3,40823|0) - 00:41:597 (41597|0,41597|3) - 00:43:919 (43919|0,43919|1) - 00:46:242 (46242|0,46242|3) - 00:50:113 (50113|0,50113|1) - two claps here, remove one of them
00:56:694 (56694|3) - move this to 3rd, it work well for pitch and pattern
01:17:790 (77790|0) - move to 2nd will help this note more balance
01:26:694 - if you follow piano here so 01:26:887 (86887|3,86887|0) - one of them should be moved to 01:26:694 - kept, two notes there seems fine
01:34:242 (94242|0) - remove hitsound
01:35:597 (95597|2) - add whistle

[MX]
00:11:790 (11790|1) - hmm this patterns will help your current one more balance i hope http://puu.sh/pJ4v5/6e04dd9962.jpg
The rest are fine to me
Call me back soon
no reply = fixed, thanks for mod!
Eedow
1/2/3/4
[NM]
00:09:468 - 4加个note
00:26:500 - 2↑
00:27:274 - 3↑
[MX]
00:17:113 - 4加个note
00:27:790 - 1/3,长条尾到这里
01:17:790 - 3加个note
[Timing]
01:05:210~01:17:597 - kiai
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

EedowChyan0w0 wrote:

1/2/3/4
[NM]
00:09:468 - 4加个note
00:26:500 - 2↑
00:27:274 - 3↑

NM感觉基本1note就够了 所以没加orz
[MX]
00:17:113 - 4加个note 好 前面也加了个
00:27:790 - 1/3,长条尾到这里 那里音感觉不是很明显 就没去管了
01:17:790 - 3加个note 加了

[Timing]
01:05:210~01:17:597 - kiai
本来有想在一分三十那里加 后来感觉不加也可以
感谢摸得
Akasha-
sakuzyo - Laplace [OsuMania modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: None
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Bubbled
(I feel you.)

Congratulations!
Kawawa
Hello! ZZ!

[NM]
00:14:113 - ~ 00:26:500 - in this part. I think you can add some for this.
because NM and MX diff has been increased than under part. And there is big gap with HD.
so you can add note at here 00:14:500 - 00:15:274 - 00:16:048 - like this, can be buff. And It will be better for mapset.

[HD]
01:12:661 (72661|1,72758|0,72855|1,73048|1,73145|0,73242|1) - It's awkward a bit when play.
01:12:661 (72661|1,72758|0,72855|1) - And 01:13:048 (73048|1,73145|0,73242|1) - there's different feeling on each section.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/pM8BP/bc16b482a4.jpg
If you can make the space at here 01:13:048 -
then It will be better feeling than before.

01:26:887 - ~ 01:28:242 - when compare with "MX" difficulty, note density is high. It needs to be nerf. or buff on MX.
or exchange the pattern with MX. what do you think about?

01:29:597 - Remove a note. did not use 2notes on "MX diffs" should be consitency. or add a note on MX.

[MX]
00:28:145 (28145|2) - Remove this one, And 00:28:242 - Add a note.
You can compare with like 00:29:790 - 00:31:339 - 00:32:887 - 00:34:436 -
If you can change, It will be consitency for structure.

01:06:177 - Add a note. had 2 notes on "HD diffs" for bass drum. You can consider it.

01:06:952 - Remove a note, And 01:07:048 - Add a note.
If you want to use 2 notes, need to be here 01:07:048 - than 01:06:952 - has been emphasized.
You can compare with your HD diffs http://puu.sh/pM7oM/dae7400d0a.jpg
01:07:048 - And should be hitsound "W" like this 01:10:145 -

01:11:500 - Add a note. It will be better for rhythm, since It followed 4snap stream pattern.
And I could not feel the space as intention.

01:15:758 - Remove a note. It will help the highlight on above drum.
becuase ther used 2chord as drum. 01:15:855 (75855|0,75855|1,75952|2,75952|3,76048|1,76048|0) -

01:30:952 (90952|2,91048|1,91339|1,91436|2) - what do you think about? http://puu.sh/pM7Sm/524d630416.jpg

01:31:532 (91532|3,91726|0,91919|3,91919|1,92113|3) - what do you think about? http://puu.sh/pM81u/320208c3a4.jpg
because this two "W" note focused on bass drum, If you placed it as same column, will be better for feeling.

01:34:919 (94919|2,95016|0,95016|3) - what do you think about? http://puu.sh/pM89s/a7e4656724.jpg
LNs followed background inst something, but I think It's really these feel than stair.

01:40:048 - 01:40:145 - You can add a note for drum. since there is no LN. but If you have a intention at here, can keep.
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Kawawa wrote:

Hello! ZZ!

[NM]
00:14:113 - ~ 00:26:500 - in this part. I think you can add some for this.
because NM and MX diff has been increased than under part. And there is big gap with HD.
so you can add note at here 00:14:500 - 00:15:274 - 00:16:048 - like this, can be buff. And It will be better for mapset.

[HD]
01:12:661 (72661|1,72758|0,72855|1,73048|1,73145|0,73242|1) - It's awkward a bit when play.
01:12:661 (72661|1,72758|0,72855|1) - And 01:13:048 (73048|1,73145|0,73242|1) - there's different feeling on each section.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/pM8BP/bc16b482a4.jpg
If you can make the space at here 01:13:048 -
then It will be better feeling than before.

01:26:887 - ~ 01:28:242 - when compare with "MX" difficulty, note density is high. It needs to be nerf. or buff on MX.
or exchange the pattern with MX. what do you think about?

01:29:597 - Remove a note. did not use 2notes on "MX diffs" should be consitency. or add a note on MX.

[MX]
00:28:145 (28145|2) - Remove this one, And 00:28:242 - Add a note.
You can compare with like 00:29:790 - 00:31:339 - 00:32:887 - 00:34:436 -
If you can change, It will be consitency for structure.

01:06:177 - Add a note. had 2 notes on "HD diffs" for bass drum. You can consider it.

01:06:952 - Remove a note, And 01:07:048 - Add a note.
If you want to use 2 notes, need to be here 01:07:048 - than 01:06:952 - has been emphasized.
You can compare with your HD diffs http://puu.sh/pM7oM/dae7400d0a.jpg
01:07:048 - And should be hitsound "W" like this 01:10:145 -

01:11:500 - Add a note. It will be better for rhythm, since It followed 4snap stream pattern.
And I could not feel the space as intention.

01:15:758 - Remove a note. It will help the highlight on above drum.
becuase ther used 2chord as drum. 01:15:855 (75855|0,75855|1,75952|2,75952|3,76048|1,76048|0) -

01:30:952 (90952|2,91048|1,91339|1,91436|2) - what do you think about? http://puu.sh/pM7Sm/524d630416.jpg

01:31:532 (91532|3,91726|0,91919|3,91919|1,92113|3) - what do you think about? http://puu.sh/pM81u/320208c3a4.jpg
because this two "W" note focused on bass drum, If you placed it as same column, will be better for feeling.changed in another way

01:34:919 (94919|2,95016|0,95016|3) - what do you think about? http://puu.sh/pM89s/a7e4656724.jpg
LNs followed background inst something, but I think It's really these feel than stair.

01:40:048 - 01:40:145 - You can add a note for drum. since there is no LN. but If you have a intention at here, can keep.kept because one note is enough imo lol
no reply = fixed, thanks for mod! :)
Kawawa
Some changed
18:48 ZZHBOY: gogogo~~~
18:48 Kawawa: gogogo
18:48 Kawawa: uhhh
18:48 Kawawa: can you give me link again?
18:48 ZZHBOY: o.o
18:48 *ZZHBOY is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/956128 sakuzyo - Laplace]
18:49 Kawawa: thanks~
18:49 ZZHBOY: lol
18:49 Kawawa: I thought that title name "replace"
18:49 Kawawa: but could not find
18:49 ZZHBOY: laplace la
18:49 Kawawa: first of all, what do you think about OD and HP
18:49 ZZHBOY: emm
18:49 Kawawa: I think HP 6 is too low.
18:50 ZZHBOY: so set them in 7 7.5 8?
18:50 Kawawa: yeah
18:50 Kawawa: I recommend that
18:51 ZZHBOY: okey
18:51 ZZHBOY: done
18:51 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/956194 sakuzyo - Laplace [NM]]
18:51 Kawawa: let me see first
18:52 ZZHBOY: ok
18:52 Kawawa: 00:27:274 - ~ 00:28:048 - you wanna keep this part?
18:52 Kawawa: I mean this pattern now.
18:53 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/pS7k4/c2ba9f0ab4.jpg
18:53 ZZHBOY: do you have any nice suggestion?
18:53 Kawawa: yes
18:53 Kawawa: like normal.
18:53 Kawawa: there is emphasize for drum surely.
18:53 Kawawa: and it will be better for rhythm
18:54 ZZHBOY: ee
18:54 ZZHBOY: you sent wrong link?
18:55 Kawawa: no no
18:55 Kawawa: there can see
18:55 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/pS7k4/c2ba9f0ab4.jpg
18:55 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/pS7pp/4fb216f955.jpg
18:57 ZZHBOY: you means add some 1/4 rhythm?
18:57 Kawawa: yeah.
18:57 Kawawa: like your HD.
18:57 Kawawa: because there is a drum rhythm surely.
18:57 Kawawa: And I think It will be better for playable rhythm.
18:57 Kawawa: but It's a suggestion only.
18:57 ZZHBOY: i followed them in previous part, kk said it was too hard then advise me remove them
18:57 Kawawa: oh.
18:57 Kawawa: that's your choice.
18:59 ZZHBOY: confused about that x.x
18:59 Kawawa: keep then,
19:00 Kawawa: 00:59:694 (59694|3) - remove this one.
19:00 ZZHBOY: ok
19:00 Kawawa: because you did not use at here 01:01:242 -
19:00 Kawawa: there same rhythm for hihat sounds.
19:00 ZZHBOY: yea
19:00 ZZHBOY: also kk said it's better to use 1/2 rhytm only
19:01 Kawawa: 01:28:242 (88242|2) - Hitsounds W/F
19:01 Kawawa: It's intention? there is no add hs
19:02 ZZHBOY: emm
19:02 ZZHBOY: added w now
19:02 Kawawa: 00:43:436 (43436|2) -
19:02 Kawawa: what do you think about this?
19:02 ZZHBOY: orz
19:02 Kawawa: because you did not use at here 00:49:629 -
19:02 Kawawa: can be comapred
19:03 ZZHBOY: emm
19:03 ZZHBOY: just removed that
19:03 Kawawa: yeah
19:03 ZZHBOY: because i think the most thing for NM is safety
19:03 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/956193 sakuzyo - Laplace [HD]]
19:03 Kawawa: HD comeee
19:04 ZZHBOY: ok
19:07 Kawawa: 01:15:661 (75661|0) - remove this one
19:07 Kawawa: when I compared with MX diffs
19:07 Kawawa: there was 1notes only.
19:07 Kawawa: and I could not feel any emphaszie than around drums.
19:08 ZZHBOY: sure
19:08 ZZHBOY: done
19:09 Kawawa: 01:26:887 - ~ 01:28:436 - you wanted to keep this part, right?
19:09 Kawawa: HD and MX
19:09 Kawawa: but there is a gap for note density
19:09 ZZHBOY: i removed 1/4 rhythm in hd
19:10 ZZHBOY: but i'm not sure if it's better to add 1/4 from 01:28:048 - in mx
19:10 Kawawa: the problem is
19:10 Kawawa: different density I think.
19:10 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/pS7Yl/4ffc32180a.jpg HD
19:11 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/pS7YL/9cf38d6d29.jpg MX
19:11 ZZHBOY: emmm
19:11 ZZHBOY: that's serious?
19:11 Kawawa: yeah, I'm not sure.
19:12 Kawawa: It can be issue.
19:12 ZZHBOY: ee
19:12 ZZHBOY: how to fix that ?
19:12 Kawawa: change HD and MX patterns
19:12 Kawawa: in this part.
19:12 Kawawa: I mean exchange
19:13 ZZHBOY: reduce notes in hd?
19:13 ZZHBOY: emm
19:13 Kawawa: I mean exchange the patterns with MX
19:13 Kawawa: MX <-> HD
19:13 ZZHBOY: i see
19:13 ZZHBOY: ...
19:14 Kawawa: what do you think about it?
19:14 Kawawa: I think it should be fixed that note density for mapset.
19:14 ZZHBOY: let me have a try
19:14 Kawawa: yeah.
19:18 ZZHBOY: done
19:18 Kawawa: can you show me that image?
19:18 Kawawa: both
19:18 Kawawa: hd to mx
19:20 ZZHBOY: send from qq
19:21 Kawawa: good.
19:21 Kawawa: better.
19:21 ZZHBOY: XD
19:21 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/956128 sakuzyo - Laplace [MX]]
19:22 Kawawa: 00:25:919 (25919|1) - move to 3?
19:22 ZZHBOY: yea
19:23 Kawawa: 00:34:919 - add a note at here
19:23 Kawawa: 00:33:371 - for like these drum
19:24 Kawawa: oh, nah
19:24 ZZHBOY: ok
19:24 Kawawa: maybe It's your intention?
19:24 Kawawa: 00:38:016 - like
19:24 Kawawa: you did not use.
19:25 ZZHBOY: 00:36:468 -
19:25 Kawawa: 00:30:274 -
19:25 Kawawa: 00:33:371 -
19:25 Kawawa: 00:36:468 -
19:26 Kawawa: seems regular on each 3sec section
19:26 Kawawa: keep that.
19:26 Kawawa: don't add.
19:27 ZZHBOY: x.x
19:27 ZZHBOY: i think add would be better orz
19:27 Kawawa: then add.
19:27 ZZHBOY: i also added a t 38
19:27 Kawawa: anything fine.
19:27 Kawawa: yeah.
19:27 ZZHBOY: yea
19:27 ZZHBOY: to keep them consistent
19:27 Kawawa: that can't be DQ issue, anything
19:28 Kawawa: okay
19:28 Kawawa: that's all
19:28 Kawawa: update
19:28 ZZHBOY: ok
19:31 ZZHBOY: done
19:31 Kawawa: okay

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