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sakuzyo - Laplace [OsuMania]

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ZZHBOY
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Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年7月6日 at 18:43:01

Artist: sakuzyo
Title: Laplace
Source: BMS
Tags: BOF of fighter 2011 Cytus Rayark Chapter 8
BPM: 155
Filesize: 3404kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. HD - 4Key (2.81 stars, 755 notes)
  2. MX - 4Key (3.8 stars, 1053 notes)
  3. NM - 4Key (1.55 stars, 352 notes)
Download: sakuzyo - Laplace
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hakurei Yoru's std set: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/431924
Last edited by ZZHBOY , edited 30 times in total.
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
liaoxingyao
222
[NM]
00:28:238，00:31:335，00:34:432，00:37:528 漏加
00:34:238 (34238|2) - 怎么突然就双键了
00:40:432 ~ 00:51:270 我建议只抓鼓点就ok
01:30:367 (90367|1) - 删，01:29:980 (89980|2) - 换成面条 别的地方也差不多
[ZZHGIRL]
00:05:593 (5593|0) - 双键
00:25:722 (25722|0) - 不是很懂面条
00:28:238 (28238|2) - 双键
00:44:303 (44303|1,44303|0,44303|3) - 双键已经ok了我觉得
还有些地方没双键的，你可以再听下
00:50:980 听说你要左右拍，add
01:09:561 (69561|2,69754|2,69948|2) - 单键即可
01:17:786 漏琴，add
01:26:883 ~ 01:27:851 怎么突然萎了
01:30:948 (90948|1) - 01:32:109 (92109|0) - 01:37:141 (97141|2) - 01:38:303 (98303|2) - 建议换成面条什么的
水完跑路
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Ichigaki
hi
15.28 ZZHBOY: hi ichi, can i request for a mod?
15.28 Ichigaki: hi hi
15.28 Ichigaki: mania mod?
15.28 ZZHBOY: yea
15.29 Ichigaki: hmm,i only can do irc
15.29 ZZHBOY: that's fine
15.29 *ZZHBOY is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/956194 Sakuzyo - Laplace]
15.29 ZZHBOY: this
15.30 Ichigaki: first
15.30 Ichigaki: it's sakuzyo, not Sakuzyo
15.30 ZZHBOY: 0.0
15.30 ZZHBOY: i see lol
15.30 *Ichigaki is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/146918 sakuzyo - Laplace]
15.30 Ichigaki: like this :p
15.31 ZZHBOY: :p
15.31 *Ichigaki is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/956128 Sakuzyo - Laplace [MX]]
15.31 Ichigaki: here comes
15.32 Ichigaki: you haven't set the preview point? :o
15.33 ZZHBOY: forgot x.x
15.33 Ichigaki: i'm gonna testplay it first 
15.33 ZZHBOY: ok
15.35 ZZHBOY: how about that?
15.35 Ichigaki: i haven't play mania on these days, so my acc so bad x.x
15.35 ZZHBOY: o.o
15.36 Ichigaki: pretty nice, but some pattern are not really fit there 
15.36 Ichigaki: i guess
15.36 ZZHBOY: where>?
15.37 Ichigaki: oh nope nope, it just me that can't play that
15.37 Ichigaki: nevermind it :p
15.39 Ichigaki: 00:09:464 - remove sv here
15.39 Ichigaki: it's not good at all
15.39 ZZHBOY: can it be improved?
15.39 ZZHBOY: i think here would be suitable to set a sv lol
15.40 Ichigaki: yeah, i know what you mean, but i think it's not that suitable
15.40 Ichigaki: because it only 1/2 beat
15.40 ZZHBOY: i see
15.40 ZZHBOY: yea
15.40 Ichigaki: for me, it's not good for sv there
15.40 ZZHBOY: just removed
15.40 ZZHBOY: xd
15.40 Ichigaki: 00:27:657 - add note here?
15.41 Ichigaki: i saw you add the note in HD there
15.41 ZZHBOY: but there has no clear sound x.x
15.42 Ichigaki: so remove the note in HD :p
15.42 ZZHBOY: ok
15.42 Ichigaki: 00:56:690 - and 00:58:238 -  add a note there, just like the other. It's obvious
15.43 Ichigaki: 00:59:786 - the kick sound isn't there, but in 00:59:690 - 
15.43 Ichigaki: 01:01:238 - this too
15.43 Ichigaki: 01:02:786 - and this
15.44 ZZHBOY: yea
15.44 ZZHBOY: fixed
15.46 Ichigaki: 01:11:593 (71593|3) - move this to 2, because you used so much notes in 4 there lol
15.46 ZZHBOY: yea
15.46 ZZHBOY: moved
15.47 Ichigaki: 01:32:690 (92690|0) - change this to normal note, because there's no synth like the other
15.48 Ichigaki: 01:37:141 - there's a synth here
15.48 Ichigaki: you may add it, but you can just leave it lol
15.49 ZZHBOY: i missed that x.x
15.49 ZZHBOY: added
15.49 Ichigaki: done :)
15.49 ZZHBOY: :)
15.50 ZZHBOY: post those contents to thread?
15.50 Ichigaki: okay~
15.50 ZZHBOY: thanks~
15.52 Ichigaki: don't forget about the artist name and the preview point :p
15.52 ZZHBOY: ok~

Good luck~
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

liaoxingyao wrote:

222
[NM]
00:28:238，00:31:335，00:34:432，00:37:528 漏加?
00:34:238 (34238|2) - 怎么突然就双键了单键了
00:40:432 ~ 00:51:270 我建议只抓鼓点就ok额 不会抓 先这样吧
01:30:367 (90367|1) - 删，01:29:980 (89980|2) - 换成面条 别的地方也差不多好 都改了
[ZZHGIRL]
00:05:593 (5593|0) - 双键好
00:25:722 (25722|0) - 不是很懂面条删了
00:28:238 (28238|2) - 双键?
00:44:303 (44303|1,44303|0,44303|3) - 双键已经ok了我觉得好
还有些地方没双键的，你可以再听下
00:50:980 听说你要左右拍，add好
01:09:561 (69561|2,69754|2,69948|2) - 单键即可不可
01:17:786 漏琴，add感觉不是很清楚 先空了
01:26:883 ~ 01:27:851 怎么突然萎了就是要萎
01:30:948 (90948|1) - 01:32:109 (92109|0) - 01:37:141 (97141|2) - 01:38:303 (98303|2) - 建议换成面条什么的
水完跑路
刁
Critical_Star
Beatmap Nominator
1,210 posts
Joined December 2013
Critical_Star
'w')
17:06 ZZHBOY: cs 可以帮我试试另一个图吗?
17:08 Critical_Star: ok~
17:08 *ZZHBOY is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/956128 sakuzyo - Laplace]
17:08 ZZHBOY: this
17:09 Critical_Star: sakuzyo :3
17:09 ZZHBOY: yea :3
17:12 ZZHBOY: your playing skill is awesome
17:13 Critical_Star: 你做mania图越来越好～
17:13 Critical_Star: eh no no D:
17:13 ZZHBOY: 谢谢你 :3
17:14 ZZHBOY: test的时候有发现什么严重的问题吗?
17:15 Critical_Star: 00:12:173 - 加？
17:16 ZZHBOY: 那里听不到清楚的声音...
17:16 ZZHBOY: 所以想空出来
17:16 ZZHBOY: o.o
17:18 Critical_Star: 感觉好像有音，echo吧，放空也行
17:19 ZZHBOY: 嗯嗯
17:20 Critical_Star: 00:20:206 - 加？ 1/4 sound
17:21 ZZHBOY: 好的
17:21 ZZHBOY: 加了
17:21 Critical_Star: 00:20:786 - 00:21:173 - ^
17:22 Critical_Star: 感觉比较舒服
17:22 ZZHBOY: added
17:22 ZZHBOY: 嘻嘻
17:22 Critical_Star: and also some above blue tick too :3
17:23 Critical_Star: haha idk if i should use chinese or english lol
17:23 ZZHBOY: i see
17:23 ZZHBOY: lol
17:23 ZZHBOY: both are fine XD
17:24 Critical_Star: 00:27:851 (27851|3,27851|2,28044|1,28044|0) - maybe u can variate some pattern here
17:25 Critical_Star: like 00:27:851 (27851|2,27851|3) - move to 23
17:25 Critical_Star: 00:28:044 (28044|0,28044|1) - to 14
17:25 Critical_Star: 00:27:270 (27270|3,27270|2,27367|1,27367|0,27561|1,27561|0) - just a bit difference from this
17:25 ZZHBOY: sounds great
17:25 Critical_Star: 00:28:141 (28141|3,28238|2,28335|1,28432|2,28432|3) - then maybe u can rearrange this if u apply above ^
17:25 ZZHBOY: done
17:26 ZZHBOY: yea
17:27 Critical_Star: 00:36:561 (36561|0,36561|1) - make into single note? there is no kick here
17:27 Critical_Star: oh wait
17:27 Critical_Star: double is fine here
17:27 ZZHBOY: lol
17:27 Critical_Star: sorry xd
17:28 ZZHBOY: np
17:28 Critical_Star: 00:40:432 - start here, i just think if u can follow those long sound here could be nice
17:28 Critical_Star: with kick too
17:29 Critical_Star: i just feel like those main instrumental are missing here
17:29 ZZHBOY: i'm not experienced to follow those long sounds with the using of lns
17:29 ZZHBOY: so i ignored those sounds x.x
17:30 Critical_Star: oh i see
17:30 Critical_Star: maybe just the loud kick + long sound here? current pattern is fine, just a suggestion from me cx
17:31 Critical_Star: yea in 4K there is a limited space to map
17:31 ZZHBOY: yea...so i try to play 7k recently
17:31 Critical_Star: 00:57:077 (57077|3) - move 3?
17:31 Critical_Star: ZZH pro ;;w;
17:32 ZZHBOY: nooo ;w;
17:32 Critical_Star: i play 7K but i can't map 7K ;w;
17:32 ZZHBOY: can't play 7k x.x
17:32 ZZHBOY: too hard to me
17:32 Critical_Star: u can std and mania, that was really good!
17:33 Critical_Star: teach me std loo xd
17:33 ZZHBOY: XD
17:33 ZZHBOY: ohh okey~
17:34 ZZHBOY: i found your yellow splash is going to qualify, congraz in advance
17:34 Critical_Star: ah xd, i can't even place the circle and some other stuff qwq
17:34 Critical_Star: still early i guess xD
17:34 ZZHBOY: o.o
17:35 Critical_Star: 01:10:915 - double for loud kick?
17:35 Critical_Star: really lol'
17:35 Critical_Star: i tried and is just seem too complicated for me ;d
17:36 ZZHBOY: x.x
17:36 Critical_Star: 01:34:044 (94044|2,94238|3,94238|0,94335|1,94432|2,94528|0,94625|2,94625|1,94819|0,94819|1,95012|3,95012|0,95206|3,95206|1,95303|2,95399|0,95399|3) - ya something like this!
17:36 ZZHBOY: 0.0
17:37 Critical_Star: something like this want i mention before
17:37 ZZHBOY: it's cool
17:37 ZZHBOY: how about that in your thought?
17:37 Critical_Star: 00:40:432 - like in here u can do it too start here
17:37 Critical_Star: it play fine for me
17:38 ZZHBOY: emmm...
17:38 ZZHBOY: let me consider more ._.
17:38 Critical_Star: np, is just my suggestion only .w.
17:38 Critical_Star: the rest look fine to me
17:39 ZZHBOY: ahh thanks a lot
17:39 ZZHBOY: would you like to post those contents to thread?
17:40 Critical_Star: if u like owo
17:41 ZZHBOY: just do it owo
17:41 Critical_Star: just a simple mod owo\
17:41 Critical_Star: okie owo
DeletedUser_6472510
DeletedUser_6472510
hiii im newbie in modding :D

1|2|3|4

NM
00:09:464 (9464|0) - change LN ?
00:40:625 - add note ?
00:42:173 - ^
00:43:722 - ^
00:46:819 - ^
00:49:915 - ^
00:50:496 (50496|3,50690|2,50883|1,51077|0) - change LN in column 1 ? :o end 00:51:077 -
01:05:883 - add ?
01:05:980 (65980|2) - delete ?
01:07:044 - add ?
01:07:141 (67141|2) - delete ?
01:07:335 - add ?
01:08:883 - ^
01:10:141 - ^
01:10:238 (70238|3) - delete ?
01:10:432 - add

HD
00:59:206 - add note same at 01:02:303 -
01:00:754 - ^
01:05:399 - ^ ?
01:32:109 - add LN ?
01:37:141 - ^
01:38:303 - ^
01:40:238 - ^

MX
00:29:690 (29690|0) - delete ?
00:31:238 (31238|3) - ^
00:32:786 (32786|0) - ^
00:34:335 (34335|1) - ^
00:35:883 (35883|0) - ^
00:37:432 (37432|0) - ^
00:38:980 (38980|0) - ^
01:30:948 - add LN ?
01:32:109 - ^
01:38:303 - ^

iim sorry for the result is not good :(
pocket-Gao
275 posts
Joined August 2013
pocket-Gao
hi

NM
00:56:690 - Ichi说了,但你还是漏了=. =
01:12:173 (72173|1) - 这里填一个LN 那相应别的地方
如 01:09:077 - 01:13:722 - 也加LN呀，打的时候这音抓了又不抓感觉缺了什么
01:37:528 - |3|加1note

HD
00:03:948 - 和 00:07:044 - 不懂HD和MX这里都不抓(况且MX 00:08:883 - 这里又抓了
00:11:883 - ^ 而且这音很明显的
00:27:561 (27561|2) - 这应该和 00:27:367 (27367|0) - 同轨道，和MX一样，毕竟和 00:27:851 (27851|2) - 不同音
00:56:786 - 漏了...
01:04:044 (64044|0,64141|1,64238|2,64335|3) - 推荐摆乱点 而不是楼梯

MX
如果都抓轻鼓点的话,那就没啥问题啦

00:03:948 - 和 00:07:044 - 别忘了看一下

Img[你说没狂塞note多么好]Img
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

pocket-Gao wrote:

hi

NM
00:56:690 - Ichi说了,但你还是漏了=. =
01:12:173 (72173|1) - 这里填一个LN 那相应别的地方
如 01:09:077 - 01:13:722 - 也加LN呀，打的时候这音抓了又不抓感觉缺了什么
01:37:528 - |3|加1note

HD
00:03:948 - 和 00:07:044 - 不懂HD和MX这里都不抓(况且MX 00:08:883 - 这里又抓了 EX加了 hd先空着弄点差别
00:11:883 - ^ 而且这音很明显的 ^
00:27:561 (27561|2) - 这应该和 00:27:367 (27367|0) - 同轨道，和MX一样，毕竟和 00:27:851 (27851|2) - 不同音
00:56:786 - 漏了...
01:04:044 (64044|0,64141|1,64238|2,64335|3) - 推荐摆乱点 而不是楼梯

MX
如果都抓轻鼓点的话,那就没啥问题啦

00:03:948 - 和 00:07:044 - 别忘了看一下

Img[你说没狂塞note多么好]Img
其他都改了
RedBall
132 posts
Joined September 2015
RedBall
Hello~ I'm from PM~!

Here's NM you requested!

+I'm a beginner in modding. So, it may not be helpful to you. Then, feel free to reject and don't give me kudosu!

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

General
All diffs have same OD rate and HP drain. Also, there's no kiai time. is it okay? :>

NM
00:15:657 (15657|1) - How about adding one note on column 4? (to emphasize big sound there)
00:16:432 (16432|2) - move to column 1 And 00:17:206 (17206|0) - move to column 3 (apply this if you accepted the previous suggestion for hand balance)

That's all, kek. Nice diff! O_o

HD
00:12:173 - add one note (you put 00:05:980 (5980|1) this, and it's quite similar as that part)
00:21:754 - add one note (making it similar as 00:18:367 (18367|3,18464|2,18561|1,18657|0) this part)
If you accepted the previous suggestion, How about 00:22:141 (22141|2) - move to 00:21:851 (I think it's easier to follow)
If you accepted the previous suggestion, try adding one note on 00:20:206 and 00:24:851 (less confusing)
00:27:561 (27561|0) - How about changing this to LN which ends on 00:27:851 ? (following the wind sound)
00:47:786 - add one note on column 1 (making it similar as 00:47:399 (47399|1,47399|0) this)
00:48:077 - add one note on column 1? (following the drum sound)
00:49:432 - add one note And maybe add one note on 00:49:625 (following the mood)
00:50:496 - add one note (in order to emphasize the big sound there)
00:50:980 - add one note And 00:51:077 (51077|0) - How about changing it to LN which ends on 00:51:270 (following the drum and wind sound)
01:08:690 (68690|1) - add one note on column 3 (in order to emphasize the big sound there)
01:33:464 - add one note (^)
01:35:012 - add one note (^)
From 01:35:399 to 01:35:980 - How about changing that part something like this? http://puu.sh/orDxD/21c9878ec2.jpg
01:37:238 (97238|3) - move to 01:37:141 And 01:37:238 - add one note on column 2 (following the song)
01:38:303 (98303|2) - change this to LN which ends on 01:38:496 (following the elec sound as you did in this diff)
01:38:883 (98883|2) - How about changing this to LN which ends on 01:39:077 (following the sound)
01:40:819 (100819|3) - delete (I think emphasis point is not there but 01:40:625 here)

MX
00:14:593 - add one note (following the quiet elec sound as like 00:14:303 (14303|1,14399|3,14496|2) these)
00:20:786 (20786|2) - How about deleting it? (making it similar as 00:24:270 )
00:23:109 - add one note? (missing note?)
00:27:561 (27561|0) - How about changing this to LN which ends on 00:27:851 ? (following the wind sound)
00:14:786 - add one note? (^)
00:45:173 - How about adding one note? (following the sound)
If you followed the previous suggestion, how about 00:47:496 - adding one note on column 3 And 00:47:593 (47593|2) - moving to column 1? (following the big drums)
00:49:432 - add one note And 00:49:625 - add one note And maybe 00:49:238 - add one note (There's drum sound differently from 00:49:044 )
01:32:883 (92883|2) - move to column 4 And 01:32:980 - add one note on column 3 (following the sound + hand balance)
01:40:819 (100819|2) - delete (same reason as HD)

Most of them are just suggestions! Feel Free to reject those~
Your mapset still makes sense without my suggestions!

Nice mapset and song! Good Luck on your map~ :D
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

rinaldi28 wrote:

hiii im newbie in modding :D

1|2|3|4

NM
00:09:464 (9464|0) - change LN ? nope
00:40:625 - add note ? kept for rhythm
00:42:173 - ^
00:43:722 - ^
00:46:819 - ^
00:49:915 - ^
00:50:496 (50496|3,50690|2,50883|1,51077|0) - change LN in column 1 ? :o end 00:51:077 - ok
01:05:883 - add ?
01:05:980 (65980|2) - delete ?
01:07:044 - add ?
01:07:141 (67141|2) - delete ?
01:07:335 - add ?
01:08:883 - ^
01:10:141 - ^
01:10:238 (70238|3) - delete ?
01:10:432 - add

HD
00:59:206 - add note same at 01:02:303 -
01:00:754 - ^
01:05:399 - ^ ?
01:32:109 - add LN ?
01:37:141 - ^
01:38:303 - ^
01:40:238 - ^
all fixed

MX
00:29:690 (29690|0) - delete ?
00:31:238 (31238|3) - ^
00:32:786 (32786|0) - ^
00:34:335 (34335|1) - ^
00:35:883 (35883|0) - ^
00:37:432 (37432|0) - ^
00:38:980 (38980|0) - ^
01:30:948 - add LN ?
01:32:109 - ^
01:38:303 - ^
all fixed

iim sorry for the result is not good :(

RedBall wrote:

Hello~ I'm from PM~!

Here's NM you requested!

+I'm a beginner in modding. So, it may not be helpful to you. Then, feel free to reject and don't give me kudosu!

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

General
All diffs have same OD rate and HP drain. Also, there's no kiai time. is it okay? :> decreased NM and HD's od and hp

NM
00:15:657 (15657|1) - How about adding one note on column 4? (to emphasize big sound there) k
00:16:432 (16432|2) - move to column 1 And 00:17:206 (17206|0) - move to column 3 (apply this if you accepted the previous suggestion for hand balance) ok

That's all, kek. Nice diff! O_o

HD
00:12:173 - add one note (you put 00:05:980 (5980|1) this, and it's quite similar as that part) can't hear clear sound here
00:21:754 - add one note (making it similar as 00:18:367 (18367|3,18464|2,18561|1,18657|0) this part) added
If you accepted the previous suggestion, How about 00:22:141 (22141|2) - move to 00:21:851 (I think it's easier to follow)
If you accepted the previous suggestion, try adding one note on 00:20:206 and 00:24:851 (less confusing) done
00:27:561 (27561|0) - How about changing this to LN which ends on 00:27:851 ? (following the wind sound) ok
00:47:786 - add one note on column 1 (making it similar as 00:47:399 (47399|1,47399|0) this) k
00:48:077 - add one note on column 1? (following the drum sound) k
00:49:432 - add one note And maybe add one note on 00:49:625 (following the mood) k
00:50:496 - add one note (in order to emphasize the big sound there) k
00:50:980 - add one note And 00:51:077 (51077|0) - How about changing it to LN which ends on 00:51:270 (following the drum and wind sound) k
01:08:690 (68690|1) - add one note on column 3 (in order to emphasize the big sound there) k
01:33:464 - add one note (^) k
01:35:012 - add one note (^)k
From 01:35:399 to 01:35:980 - How about changing that part something like this? http://puu.sh/orDxD/21c9878ec2.jpg changed in another way
01:37:238 (97238|3) - move to 01:37:141 And 01:37:238 - add one note on column 2 (following the song) k
01:38:303 (98303|2) - change this to LN which ends on 01:38:496 (following the elec sound as you did in this diff) k
01:38:883 (98883|2) - How about changing this to LN which ends on 01:39:077 (following the sound) k
01:40:819 (100819|3) - delete (I think emphasis point is not there but 01:40:625 here) k

MX
00:14:593 - add one note (following the quiet elec sound as like 00:14:303 (14303|1,14399|3,14496|2) these) kept, can't hear clear sound
00:20:786 (20786|2) - How about deleting it? (making it similar as 00:24:270 )k
00:23:109 - add one note? (missing note?)k
00:27:561 (27561|0) - How about changing this to LN which ends on 00:27:851 ? (following the wind sound)k
00:14:786 - add one note? (^) can't here clear sound lol
00:45:173 - How about adding one note? (following the sound)k
If you followed the previous suggestion, how about 00:47:496 - adding one note on column 3 And 00:47:593 (47593|2) - moving to column 1? (following the big drums)k
00:49:432 - add one note And 00:49:625 - add k one note And maybe 00:49:238 - add one note (There's drum sound differently from 00:49:044 )
01:32:883 (92883|2) - move to column 4 And 01:32:980 - add one note on column 3 (following the sound + hand balance)k
01:40:819 (100819|2) - delete (same reason as HD)k

Most of them are just suggestions! Feel Free to reject those~
Your mapset still makes sense without my suggestions!

Nice mapset and song! Good Luck on your map~ :D
thanks for mod~
biemote
292 posts
Joined April 2011
biemote
水摸

马叉

00:03:851 (3851|2,3899|1,3948|0) - 这种note其实我建议还是只用1note带过就行,毕竟削除原BMS也是这么做的,(主要怕因为这个被dq,当然如果你很确定是这样的话不改也可以

00:15:754 - 00:16:915 - 00:17:109 - 00:17:303 - 00:18:851 - 漏音

00:39:657 (39657|1,39706|2,39754|3) - 00:47:206 (47206|0,47254|1,47303|2) - 这里是1/12哦(不改也行吧大概

01:17:786 - 漏音

01:29:012 (89012|2) - 建议去掉

01:35:593 - 这里应该有条子

好多

漏音情况的和马叉差不多.

01:30:948 - 这个你确定不是条子?

尼妙

00:28:238 - 00:31:335 - 00:34:432 - 00:37:528 - 漏音
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cosran
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cosran
建议re
占位
09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
09kami
最好能水一帖 就是前排围观那种水贴 不是摸
sahuang
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Joined December 2014
sahuang
Fantastic map.
[Crz]Makii
450 posts
Joined November 2014
[Crz]Makii
ehh不会被打包么((
Misure
951 posts
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Misure
前排围观
??怎么翻页了
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

biemote wrote:

水摸

马叉

00:03:851 (3851|2,3899|1,3948|0) - 这种note其实我建议还是只用1note带过就行,毕竟削除原BMS也是这么做的,(主要怕因为这个被dq,当然如果你很确定是这样的话不改也可以 感觉听好玩 先放着吧

00:15:754 - 00:16:915 - 00:17:109 - 00:17:303 - 00:18:851 - 漏音 加了几个 有几个实在听不清就美甲了

00:39:657 (39657|1,39706|2,39754|3) - 00:47:206 (47206|0,47254|1,47303|2) - 这里是1/12哦(不改也行吧大概 那样会不会太急把了

01:17:786 - 漏音

01:29:012 (89012|2) - 建议去掉 这里有音啊..

01:35:593 - 这里应该有条子 加了

好多

漏音情况的和马叉差不多.

01:30:948 - 这个你确定不是条子? 不确定

尼妙

00:28:238 - 00:31:335 - 00:34:432 - 00:37:528 - 漏音 有的感觉听不清就美甲了
感谢摸得
[ A v a l o n ]
1,978 posts
Joined July 2014
[ A v a l o n ]
NM 1,51 star with E icon? osu web is so SB
|1|2|3|4|

mod inside
- you need to add custom hitsound for more interesting
- add "BOF of fighter 2011" in your tags

  • [NM]
  1. 00:21:077 (21077|0,21851|0) - why this have same column? you didn't do like this since from beginning
    then, i suggest to 00:21:851 (21851|0) - move to 4, and 00:24:173 (24173|3,24948|0) - Ctrl G
  2. 00:24:948 (24948|3) - add a note please, this part is have piano sound too . . . just same in other part like 00:28:819 (28819|3,29012|2,29399|0,29593|1) -
  3. 00:30:948 (30948|1) - move (snap) to 00:31:335 - same reason as above (and still many more like this case for next part)
  4. 01:34:625 (94625|0,96173|0) - this should not in same column and same pattern form, it's truly a different sound
  5. 01:37:722 (97722|3) - the long sound is actually start on here 01:37:528 -
  6. overall for this diff, sometimes i feel you making your "own rhythm" for few parts, i don't really understand what is the exact sound that you following in this diff . . . example 01:33:464 (93464|0,94238|3) - i think you better follow synth sound on this 01:33:367 - 01:33:657 -

    [HD]
  7. 00:14:109 - add note, you have missed a sound in this time (you can take a look into your previous part)
  8. 00:34:828 - http://puu.sh/oEJSS/8ef11ef070.jpg do this for a consistentcy like on you previous part
  9. 00:39:948 - add note, because this part is have a kick sound too, just like 00:40:044 (40044|1,40141|3,40238|0) -
  10. 00:41:593 (41593|2,41786|2) - arrange this to different column, there is no same sound here, and i feel it just make no sense for me
  11. 00:42:851 (42851|3) - delete this, you didn't use this in other part, or you can choose my second choice . . . add a note like that for your other parts like 00:41:303 - 00:44:399 - 00:45:948 -
  12. 01:30:367 (90367|3,90561|2,90948|2,91141|3) - this kind of LN's (many morelike that) is hard to understand for player in "HD diff range area" (even by me, because it's mostly following minor synth sound (in this case, for MX diff is okay) i suggest you to map "clear" long sound only . . . like on 01:29:980 - until 01:31:528 - then until 01:32:883 - and so on (it's more easier to understand and more respect to that lead sound)

    [MX]
  13. 00:05:593 - not going to add 1/8 snap like 00:11:786 - for guitar sound? please make it consistent
  14. 00:18:754 (18754|2,18948|0) - it feels better if you put them in same column like on this part 00:19:528 (19528|0,19722|0) -
  15. 00:19:915 (19915|0) - 3 times in same column was not really nice i think, so i suggest 00:19:915 (19915|0,20012|1,20109|2,20206|1) - arrange to 4 3 2 1 for more better pattern flows
  16. 00:25:528 (25528|3,25625|2) - Ctrl G
  17. 00:48:754 - add one more note, this part is have an extra sound like other parts
  18. 01:18:367 - 01:19:141 - 01:22:238 - add note for clock sound, make it 2 note like on 01:19:915 (79915|2,79915|3,80690|3,80690|2) - it just feels weird if this part is having an issue on consistency pattern

good luck :)
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

NM 1,51 star with E icon? osu web is so SB i added some note and increase to NM icon now lol
|1|2|3|4|

mod inside
- you need to add custom hitsound for more interesting added
- add "BOF of fighter 2011" in your tags done

  • [NM]
  1. 00:21:077 (21077|0,21851|0) - why this have same column? you didn't do like this since from beginning k
    then, i suggest to 00:21:851 (21851|0) - move to 4, and 00:24:173 (24173|3,24948|0) - Ctrl G k
  2. 00:24:948 (24948|3) - add a note please, this part is have piano sound too . . . just same in other part like 00:28:819 (28819|3,29012|2,29399|0,29593|1) - added
  3. 00:30:948 (30948|1) - move (snap) to 00:31:335 - same reason as above (and still many more like this case for next part) kept because i want to follow that sound
  4. 01:34:625 (94625|0,96173|0) - this should not in same column and same pattern form, it's truly a different sound k
  5. 01:37:722 (97722|3) - the long sound is actually start on here 01:37:528 - ok
  6. overall for this diff, sometimes i feel you making your "own rhythm" for few parts, i don't really understand what is the exact sound that you following in this diff . . . example 01:33:464 (93464|0,94238|3) - i think you better follow synth sound on this 01:33:367 - 01:33:657 - emm i don't want to this diff be too hard so i selected to follow less sound x.x

    [HD]
  7. 00:14:109 - add note, you have missed a sound in this time (you can take a look into your previous part) k
  8. 00:34:828 - http://puu.sh/oEJSS/8ef11ef070.jpg do this for a consistentcy like on you previous part used another placing
  9. 00:39:948 - add note, because this part is have a kick sound too, just like 00:40:044 (40044|1,40141|3,40238|0) - k
  10. 00:41:593 (41593|2,41786|2) - arrange this to different column, there is no same sound here, and i feel it just make no sense for me k
  11. 00:42:851 (42851|3) - delete this, you didn't use this in other part, or you can choose my second choice . . . add a note like that for your other parts like 00:41:303 - 00:44:399 - 00:45:948 - k
  12. 01:30:367 (90367|3,90561|2,90948|2,91141|3) - this kind of LN's (many morelike that) is hard to understand for player in "HD diff range area" (even by me, because it's mostly following minor synth sound (in this case, for MX diff is okay) i suggest you to map "clear" long sound only . . . like on 01:29:980 - until 01:31:528 - then until 01:32:883 - and so on (it's more easier to understand and more respect to that lead sound) emm i think that sound is clear enough so just kept

    [MX]
  13. 00:05:593 - not going to add 1/8 snap like 00:11:786 - for guitar sound? please make it consistent k
  14. 00:18:754 (18754|2,18948|0) - it feels better if you put them in same column like on this part 00:19:528 (19528|0,19722|0) - chenged a little
  15. 00:19:915 (19915|0) - 3 times in same column was not really nice i think, so i suggest 00:19:915 moved away(19915|0,20012|1,20109|2,20206|1) - arrange to 4 3 2 1 for more better pattern flows
  16. 00:25:528 (25528|3,25625|2) - Ctrl G k
  17. 00:48:754 - add one more note, this part is have an extra sound like other parts k
  18. 01:18:367 - 01:19:141 - 01:22:238 - add note for clock sound, make it 2 note like on 01:19:915 (79915|2,79915|3,80690|3,80690|2) - it just feels weird if this part is having an issue on consistency pattern k, they all have double note now

good luck :)
thanks for mod!
[Emiria]
1,010 posts
Joined November 2012
[Emiria]
NM make it as Normal icon
00:04:044 (4044|3) - i think u should catch piano here because it will bring the player the clear feeling of this map
00:27:270 - add note here here is the part link with last part.will make new players to feel the base beat of this song
00:28:819 (28819|3,29012|2) - these is not clear i think u should forcus on the durm part to make the map much clear and easy to play
00:40:432 - this part i think u do the piano and drum is the best choose,it have much change before the part before
00:51:270 (51270|2) - delete this change to piano is better . this instrument doesnt give best feedback.
00:59:012 - u should catch drum to follow the base beat ,it will be nice to play and give best feeling
01:17:786 - add a note for piano .since u catch piano here
01:25:335 (85335|2,85722|1) - it is meaningless here ,didnt express the song i suggest u to cath drum



Hard
00:03:851 - wrong snap
00:04:819 (4819|1) - delete is better ,for this part catching piano is the best choose
00:21:948 - miss note .since u catch it before
00:22:915 (22915|1) - delete u should keep instrument same then it will give the player the coherent music
00:25:915 - add notes same reason ^
00:27:367 - add notes for heavy beat .this part is stress and need more notes to express
00:27:561 -delete LN same reason ^
00:28:625 (28625|0,28722|1,28819|2) - u should make the instrument same and clear to keep ur map much easy for player to understand
00:40:432 - add a note for piano here music itself changes from this part,and as the map it need some change
00:58:625 - dont miss drum , it is the base of the song
01:04:432 - heavy drum need to be mapped
01:04:819 - ^ same
01:26:109 (86109|1) - should be here 01:25:722 - no other instrment there
01:26:883 - dont stop the drum it is the whole part
01:40:238 - ^


thats all good luck ;)
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

victorica_db wrote:

NM make it as Normal icon
00:04:044 (4044|3) - i think u should catch piano here because it will bring the player the clear feeling of this map
00:27:270 - add note here here is the part link with last part.will make new players to feel the base beat of this song
00:28:819 (28819|3,29012|2) - these is not clear i think u should forcus on the durm part to make the map much clear and easy to play 感觉跟鼓就是无脑放1/2了 不如跟下那个音
00:40:432 - this part i think u do the piano and drum is the best choose,it have much change before the part before
00:51:270 (51270|2) - delete this change to piano is better . this instrument doesnt give best feedback.
00:59:012 - u should catch drum to follow the base beat ,it will be nice to play and give best feeling
01:17:786 - add a note for piano .since u catch piano here 听不清 还是先空着
01:25:335 (85335|2,85722|1) - it is meaningless here ,didnt express the song i suggest u to cath drum



Hard
00:03:851 - wrong snap ...?
00:04:819 (4819|1) - delete is better ,for this part catching piano is the best choose
00:21:948 - miss note .since u catch it before
00:22:915 (22915|1) - delete u should keep instrument same then it will give the player the coherent music
00:25:915 - add notes same reason ^
00:27:367 - add notes for heavy beat .this part is stress and need more notes to express
00:27:561 -delete LN same reason ^
00:28:625 (28625|0,28722|1,28819|2) - u should make the instrument same and clear to keep ur map much easy for player to understand 这段都改了点
00:40:432 - add a note for piano here music itself changes from this part,and as the map it need some change
00:58:625 - dont miss drum , it is the base of the song
01:04:432 - heavy drum need to be mapped
01:04:819 - ^ same
01:26:109 (86109|1) - should be here 01:25:722 - no other instrment there
01:26:883 - dont stop the drum it is the whole part 这几个面条都删了
01:40:238 - ^


thats all good luck ;)
没回的基本都改了 感谢摸得
Lirai
1,514 posts
Joined December 2013
Lirai
Hello zzbzzbzbbbzbzbzzb

here's mod as requested aaaaaa

|1|2|3|4|

[MX]
00:12:173 - should add note for the piano sound here

00:25:819 - i really suggest u to add note here at 3 to represent the water drop sound here, also to keep the double u should move this to col 2

00:36:561 (36561|1,36561|0) - i think this shouldn't be double according to the consistency of the pattern here these shows the 1st beat 00:35:206 (35206|3,35206|2,35399|0,35399|3) and these the 3rd 00:38:303 (38303|1,38303|0,38496|0,38496|3) , so what i pointed is the 2nd and it should be identic with the 1st and the 3rd

00:48:754 - its ok to add note on col 1 for kick

01:02:690 (62690|3,62786|1,62786|2,62883|0,62980|3,63077|1,63077|2,63173|0) - i think u can do another patterning here, not just make it same as 01:01:141

01:07:528 - sometimes i feel off here, maybe the kick that u didnt represent as double i guess http://puu.sh/oJlaA/e77d73416d.jpg

01:13:141 (73141|1,73141|0,73238|3,73335|1,73335|2) - i was thinking that this note 01:13:238 (73238|3) - can be double for the snare sound i hope it is since that what u map 01:12:754 (72754|2,72754|0,72851|3,72851|1,72948|2,72948|0)

01:14:786 - add note to 2 for kick

01:17:786 - add note to 3
01:17:980 - add note to 2, these are for represent the piano. the pitch was right if put it like what i pointed out

01:20:303 (80303|1) - pitch aaaa move to 1 pls
[HD]
01:06:173 - Add to 4 for kick la

01:17:786 - add note to 3
01:17:980 - add note to 2, same reason for piano

i guess need some further modding first.
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Sandalphon
就MX
1l2l3l4
[MX]
00:05:593 - 后面重复的pattern太多所以换下
img
00:32:690 - 没有必要特意把这些鼓写成12或者34的样子，这里14，同理后面一些也一样
00:36:561 (36561|1,36561|0) - 啥，鼓的话是在00:36:464 - ，而且前面你这个蓝线的鼓也没抓
00:39:657 - 很突兀的double
img
01:15:754 (75754|2,75754|3) - 删个，突出后面01:15:851 (75851|0,75851|1,75948|3,75948|2,76044|1,76044|0) - 这三个带琴的double
01:34:335 (94335|1) - 01:37:432 (97432|1) - 你确定些是你想抓的音
01:35:593 - 漏个LN，加在4吧
01:41:593 - 推荐个黑科技
img

祝好运
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