1. Cherry Blossom (4,95 stars, 1128 notes)

O-Moei wrote:

Hello ! From #modreqs !. Really enjoyed this kind of map. So, I hope I'm being helpful here.

02:56:403 (2,3) - Strongly recommend to make this a slider, so the combo end up to 8. But if you wanna keep it, no problem I think its ok since i did the same in the 3 kiais
05:16:291 (1) - The end of this spinner hitsound makes no rhythm. Consider to lower the audio, maybe Fixed
05:54:718 (4) - I bet it'll be more lovely if there's a little spinner after this circle to the end of the vocal Fixed
AR 9,2 is the best for this map. Here ! I will consider it !

O-Moei : 9,2 is the best, I guess :V
praguzz : Around that :v
O-Moei : oki oki
O-Moei : Nah, gotta mod this beauty ! good luck with pp farming ! :VV o/
praguzz : pls rank this !! what a lovely map

I guess that's all I can give. I hope I'm correct and very helpful, and WE (5 persons) hope this map be ranked. Good luck ! Thank you very much !

1. the mp3 is fairly soft, consider making it a bit louder, so it fits the same volume as other maps
2. if you press ctrl-a you can see where you've mapped. try mapping in the corners more, as it generally makes the map more interesting and you can do cooler patterns if you do. this is just a general mapping suggestion of something to keep in mind, so i wouldn't remap this to map in the corners

nicksum107 wrote:

hi, m4m here

really really nice and calming song :3 sasuga kano

[General]

1. the mp3 is fairly soft, consider making it a bit louder, so it fits the same volume as other maps
2. if you press ctrl-a you can see where you've mapped. try mapping in the corners more, as it generally makes the map more interesting and you can do cooler patterns if you do. this is just a general mapping suggestion of something to keep in mind, so i wouldn't remap this to map in the corners

[Cherry Blossom]

SPOILER

1. a lot of this stuff is just cleaning; it looks pretty good
2. 00:10:898 (5) - 00:16:291 (5) - point towards the note right before it; cleaner
3. 00:12:246 (2) - not sure why you put a red slider point here why not ? i dont see any problem and makes a nice flow
4. 00:16:965 (1) - consider blanketing around the previous note's reverse arrow
5. 00:33:735 (1,2) - this is awkward to execute because you change polarity from red/white to blue ticks im just following the song, but yeah, im gonna think about this
6. 00:36:853 (5,1) - since this has a loud notes in the music, consider making this a bigger jump its ok for me
7. 00:43:257 (3) - fix the blanket it looks good now
8. 00:50:673 (1,3) - i feel like these should be more parallel (it might be already and i'm just blind) they are parallel lol
9. 00:53:370 (1) - point a bit more up, because it flows better and looks cleaner (cursor moves curved line from circle to slider
10. 01:04:830 (4) - point towards previous note
11. 01:09:212 (3) - 01:15:617 (3) - 02:15:954 (2) - point towards next note kinda fixed"
12. 01:17:302 (3,4,5,6,1) - point stream to previous note
13. 01:24:718 (3) - 01:29:774 (1) - point to previous note
14. 01:26:403 (9) - NC
15. 01:28:089 (5) - consider making this into a pattern more similar to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5181269 because it simulates a hold note, just like the singer does i like it now
16. 01:57:583 (1,2,3) - there is a note one white tick before these three notes that goes along with these notes; please map it im following the drums there, in that white tick theres no sound
17. 02:45:785 (4) - move such that the previous slider points towards this note, somewhere around x=52, y=148 i like it now
18. 03:08:033 (8,1,2) - this is an awkward motion to make aiming wise, because you have an almost straight line with changing spacing, maybe put 8 above the previous notes, at somewhere close to x=204, y=0
19. 03:51:853 (2,3) - move 3 down to x=139 y=296 so that it the beginning points to the previous note and the end points to the next note; the blanket is unnecessary here i dont really understand why should i change this, but i think it looks and plays good now
20. 04:06:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - there's a lot going on in the instrumentals that these 8 notes are making it out to be; i would map a more interesting rhythm here. i did this because here starts the most slow part of the map (and most cute) and nobody missread this so it looks ok for me
21. 04:22:696 (2) - move up so that the previous slider points to this its ok for me
22. 04:40:392 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - since it's an intense moment in the song, maybe make this more spaced i think its unnecesary
23. 04:45:280 (1,2,3,4) - soften slider ends ???
24. i probably missed a lot of stuff but you can take my ideas and apply them other places!

thanks for the m4m!
good luck with rank! Thanks a lot for Modding (not response, fixed)

Hobbes2 wrote:

sorry i dont have fresh copypasta

my end of m4m

general - you plan on doing hitsounds? sounds kinda empty without em Working on them

01:26:403 (9) - NC?

01:48:482 (1,3,4,5) - I think the blanket could be better here (if there's supposed to be one) it looks ok for me

01:51:516 (2,3,4,5) - ew. personally not a fan of this, but if you like it its fine i guess (putting a circle partly over a stack) I never do those things but here its a 1/2 jump, not a 1/4 and its in the same place, so yeah, its ok for me now

02:32:808 (10,1) - adjust blanket a bit

03:47:302 (1) and 03:48:651 (1) - should start at the same spot IMO (so move 03:48:651 (1) up a bit) this is super nitpicky, up to you tbh. that being said i'd keep the ending point of 03:48:651 (1) the same, just the starting spot could be changed gonna think about this !

04:23:370 (5,1) - blanket? i dont want to make them blanket tbh

04:25:729 (3,1) - these sliders could benefit from being parallel its ok for me

04:38:454 (6,7) - spacing between 6 and 7 seems awkwardly large feels like a weird spacing increase

05:45:111 - should put a hit circle here if you had one at 05:41:741 -

great map had a lot of fun playtesting it Thank you ! (No response, fixed!)

EDIT - o dear it seems ive posted right after another modder...so sorry i know how annoying it is to do two mods at once

Rialkuu wrote:

hello!

Cherry Blossom

01:33:651 (1) - maybe change the shape to 01:34:999 (1) - I like it now cuz its blanket with 2!
00:42:583 (1) - ^ same here
02:57:415 (1) - maybe you could make this more curved
05:05:505 (1,2,3) - maybe this would be better, idk i like it now

aaaaa!! i'm so sorry i couldn't find anymore things!!
your map is so gooooood!!
and i suck at modding!!!!

no problem ! thanks anyway (no reply, fixed)

1. lovely colours …… but look like same how about add green and yellow like BG ?
   
2. maybe should add yuii in tag if he add Hitsound …… why not add Hitsound by yourself
   
3. delete the last one bookmark thx keke

1. 00:43:763 (4) - 04:52:021 (11) - NC when downbeat ? i have to say colours too same again lol http://puu.sh/oXp4m/c6600ae254.jpg
   
2. 01:14:184 - 02:07:106 - add note follow drum ?
   
3. 02:02:134 (1,2) - as above, 1/2*4 ?
   
4. 02:24:381 (3) - i suggest separate it, for 02:24:549 (4,5,6) - clap*3 but 02:24:381 (3) - not clap
   
5. 03:05:842 (3,4) - music same as 01:47:302 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why use slider replace note jump xd
   
6. 04:18:314 - last kiai too easy …… for my feeling…… kiai 2 is most hard …… kiai2 > kiai1 > kiai3
   
7. 04:06:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 note a bit long …… i prefer change to 4 note * 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5188586
   

Narcissu wrote:

i see Sendan Life * 14 diff mapper here Heyy

[General]

1. lovely colours …… but look like same how about add green and yellow like BG ?
   
2. maybe should add yuii in tag if he add Hitsound …… why not add Hitsound by yourself
   
3. delete the last one bookmark thx keke

[Cherry Blossom]

1. 00:43:763 (4) - 04:52:021 (11) - NC when downbeat ? i have to say colours too same again lol http://puu.sh/oXp4m/c6600ae254.jpg 00:43:932 (5,1) - This one looks fine for me, fixed the other !
   
2. 01:14:184 - 02:07:106 - add note follow drum ?
   
3. 02:02:134 (1,2) - as above, 1/2*4 ? feels good for me
   
4. 02:24:381 (3) - i suggest separate it, for 02:24:549 (4,5,6) - clap*3 but 02:24:381 (3) - not clap
   
5. 03:05:842 (3,4) - music same as 01:47:302 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why use slider replace note jump xd
   
6. 04:18:314 - last kiai too easy …… for my feeling…… kiai 2 is most hard …… kiai2 > kiai1 > kiai3
   
7. 04:06:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 note a bit long …… i prefer change to 4 note * 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5188586

♡♡❤♡♡ Thank you very much ! (No reply, fixed !)

Karia wrote:

Hi, the map is quite cool. So, most of moddings are just my subjective suggestions. Feel to free reject them lol

Cherry Blossom

1. 00:32:471 (4) - NC
2. 00:33:735 (1,2) - Looks almost 1/4 jump. Replace (1) or change (1) to 1/8 slider.
3. 00:37:021 - Are you sure that ignore this beat? It's quite weird cuz here is silent part. (Same as 00:42:078 - here.)
4. 00:43:763 (4,5) - Hmm, Not fit stack imo. These two notes have different beat but the next stack notes have same beat... I tried putting NC here, maybe gonna change
5. 00:45:785 (2) - Consider to delete this. It's quite good cuz that is harmonious with 00:46:628 (1) - this rhythm.It feels good imo
6. 00:47:471 (2,3,4) - A bit weird stack timing. Try to stack (2) on (1)'s tail and (4) on (3). I tried Ctrl + G on (3) and (4)
7. 00:57:078 (3,4) - How about triplet?
8. 01:03:819 (5,6) - Same as above. Imo, it would be quite cool cuz a strong vocal is on (5).
9. 01:09:044 (2) - (163, 274)? Current placement looks close to (3).
10. 01:19:999 (3) - Try to change two stack notes with jump for vocal.
11. 01:22:527 (6) - Imo, unexpected huge jump. Stack on 01:23:033 (1) - this tail at least.
12. 01:27:415 (2,4) - Hmm, try to stack (2) on (1)'s tail and (4) on (3)'s tail. uhh, i think the pattern is ok tbh Orz
13. 01:28:089 (5) - Mute slider's end.
14. 01:51:853 (3) - NC for prev NC patterns.
15. 02:07:443 (4) - ;w; Move to 02:07:106 - here
16. 02:18:988 (3,4,1) - Same DS is better in linear flow imo.
17. 02:39:212 (3) - Consider about Ctrl g for hitsound. I think is ok
18. 03:10:055 (3) - NC for prev NC patterns.
19. 04:06:179 (1,2,3,4) - Decrease DS and 04:06:853 (5,6,7,8) - increase DS following the music? Current DS looks confused cuz of 04:04:830 (1,2) - 04:05:336 (3,4) - these 1/4 DS.
20. 04:27:078 (3) - Ctrl g flow is better cuz the vocal is strong.
21. 04:48:988 (3,1) - Isn't them too close?
22. 04:55:392 (3) - Why not jump notes like 04:56:741 (3,4) - ?
23. 05:16:291 (1) - Start from 05:16:207 - ?

That's all, gl :3 wow ! Thank you ! (No reply, Fixed !)(yeah... i fixed a lot ;w;)

Dailycare wrote:

[Cherry Blossom]
*02:15:364 - It's little sad for me you didn't put a note here unlike 00:57:078 (3,4,5) -
*02:24:549 (4,5,6) - Those stacked notes might make some players confused. Because you used jumps at the previous similar part 01:06:347 (4,5,6) - .So i think jumps would be better rather than stacking
*02:27:752 (5) - 02:31:797 (4) - What about NC for better NC setting?
*02:44:606 (9) - I highly recommend adding NC here
*02:50:673 (1) - Could you make it two circles? I hope you to make 02:50:842 clickable
*02:42:162 (5) - I couldn't feel any need for putting a circle but it was pretty fine when i was playing. so it's up to you
*03:10:055 (3) - Oh you didn't apply the previous mod
*03:43:763 (3,4) - What about changing them to 3/4 and a circle like 03:43:257 (1,2) - ?
*04:56:909 (4) - would be better to stack it on (3) Fixed everything lol Orz

sry for short delay x.xNo problem, thank you !

Frey wrote:

From In-game request

• Cherry blossom

1. 02:24:549 (4,5,6,1) - Contrasted with 01:06:347 (4,5,6,1) - , this anti-jump feels really weird, and unfit. Jump is more suitable than no jump here.
2. 02:27:752 (5) - 02:31:797 (4) - NC to make it more consistent
3. 02:44:606 (9) - NC to make them more clear to see?
4. 03:51:347 (1) - Wrongly snapped end!
5. 03:56:066 (3,4) - I strongly suggest you divide them into three 1/3 sliders, if you listen to the music carefully, they are just divided like that. uhh, i feel like they are ok, but will consider if other mods say the same
6. 04:19:156 (1,2,3) - anti-jump is more suitable here imo I really like that kinda of space changing Orz
7. 04:35:673 (4) - NC?
8. 05:06:516 (3) - Ctrl+G to make it more difficult for the last part?
9. 05:22:696 - why don't end here?

GL Thank you! (No reply = Fixed!)

1. idk offset is kinda late imo. Move all things to -80ms? (I will mod with original offset so pls change when some of my suggestions applied if u agreed with the offset (or not lol) since it will be complicated)
2. 00:19:325 - 00:19:493 - add note cuz vocals and avoid some repetitive issue?
3. 00:22:864 - 00:24:887 - add too
4. 00:43:763 (4,1,2,3) - I preferred back-forth than two stacks, (it will be pair stack of 00:43:932 (1,3) - and 00:43:763 (4,2) - )
5. 01:20:842 (3) - maybe unstack this from 01:20:673 (2) - because vocal's pitch is going higher, like how you did on 01:19:830 (2,3) -
6. 01:40:224 (4) - idk it looks a bit weird how this touched with 01:39:550 (2) -
7. 01:44:437 (6,1,2) - I know it will be boring but yeee please consider to convert it to 1/1 slider because of ze guitarrrr
8. 01:52:696 (1) - ok u don't rly need to follow this but hey this hears pretty sexy. move this to 01:52:780 - and make 01:52:190 (4) - to 1/1 sliders + circle on 01:52:696 - liek this
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:27:752 (1) - idk i think it's not good imo to hold back the spacing with 02:27:583 (7) - compared to your previous jumps on 02:27:246 (5,6) -
10. starting this 03:13:594 - this section makes me sad that you just put long breaks on instru part that can be mappable :< but okkk since it's ur mep
11. 03:36:347 - add note there's a instru that can be emphasize by circle
12. 04:27:415 (4,1) - you can actually put triples here since there's a drum on 04:27:668 - like how you did on 04:38:201 (5,1,2) - but idk how to do with the flow xd
13. 04:45:617 (2,3,4) - I preferred to put some little SV multiplier boost on each slider for the vocals itself, it's looks bland atm since you just used same sv and maybe unnecessary touching for each sliders ;w; you can separate them, but not that far away.
14. 04:53:707 (2,3) - this doesn't need boost but ye the touching isn't looks good imo even tho u turned DS thingy
15. 04:54:381 (4) - convert something streams thingy? i can hear 1/4 drums here.
16. 05:15:111 (3,6) - how about 1/4 sliders with them? looks more funnier xd
17. 05:16:291 (1) - move to 05:16:207 - ?

SakiZ wrote:

small NM

>>> Please add hitsounds <<<

00:33:735 (1,2,3,4) - Make a square
01:31:460 (2,3) - Ctrl + G
01:45:785 (1,2) - Improve blanket
02:26:066 (3,4) - Improve blanket
02:28:426 (3) - I think straight slider is better
02:57:752 (2,3) - Ctrl + G
04:38:875 (3) - Try to make better star
05:34:999 - Add a note?
05:36:347 - ^
05:37:021 - ^
05:37:696 - ^
05:39:718 - ^
05:40:392 - ^
05:45:785 - ^
05:47:134 - ^
05:49:830 - ^
05:51:179 - ^

Pretty nice map and song, good luck Thank you ! Fixed everything cuz i change mp3 and the offset was off, so everything should be fixed now, thanks !

Akitoshi wrote:

hi im the guy from ur in-game pm
not a good modder pls 4give. it will be all from my opinions so i will apologize if some of those was intended by ur style

Cherry Blossom

1. idk offset is kinda late imo. Move all things to -80ms? (I will mod with original offset so pls change when some of my suggestions applied if u agreed with the offset (or not lol) since it will be complicated) Sorry, i changed mp3 last night and didnt check for the new offset, im sorry
2. 00:19:325 - 00:19:493 - add note cuz vocals and avoid some repetitive issue? gonna think about this, cuz i was following only the instruments, not the voice
3. 00:22:864 - 00:24:887 - add too
4. 00:43:763 (4,1,2,3) - I preferred back-forth than two stacks, (it will be pair stack of 00:43:932 (1,3) - and 00:43:763 (4,2) - ) uhh, idk about this, im gonna think and maybe change
5. 01:20:842 (3) - maybe unstack this from 01:20:673 (2) - because vocal's pitch is going higher, like how you did on 01:19:830 (2,3) -
6. 01:40:224 (4) - idk it looks a bit weird how this touched with 01:39:550 (2) -
7. 01:44:437 (6,1,2) - I know it will be boring but yeee please consider to convert it to 1/1 slider because of ze guitarrrr
8. 01:52:696 (1) - ok u don't rly need to follow this but hey this hears pretty sexy. move this to 01:52:780 - and make 01:52:190 (4) - to 1/1 sliders + circle on 01:52:696 - liek this
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:27:752 (1) - idk i think it's not good imo to hold back the spacing with 02:27:583 (7) - compared to your previous jumps on 02:27:246 (5,6) -
10. starting this 03:13:594 - this section makes me sad that you just put long breaks on instru part that can be mappable :< but okkk since it's ur mep
11. 03:36:347 - add note there's a instru that can be emphasize by circle
12. 04:27:415 (4,1) - you can actually put triples here since there's a drum on 04:27:668 - like how you did on 04:38:201 (5,1,2) - but idk how to do with the flow xd
13. 04:45:617 (2,3,4) - I preferred to put some little SV multiplier boost on each slider for the vocals itself, it's looks bland atm since you just used same sv and maybe unnecessary touching for each sliders ;w; you can separate them, but not that far away. uhh, un gonna think about this
14. 04:53:707 (2,3) - this doesn't need boost but ye the touching isn't looks good imo even tho u turned DS thingy
15. 04:54:381 (4) - convert something streams thingy? i can hear 1/4 drums here. i think is ok since im following only vocals
16. 05:15:111 (3,6) - how about 1/4 sliders with them? looks more funnier xd
17. 05:16:291 (1) - move to 05:16:207 - ?

daz all Goodluck~ Thank you ! I fixed a lot but sorry cuz the Offset

• 
  00:33:651 (1) - follow what ? its hard for reading
  00:33:904 (2,3,4) - i dont now this offset is wrong or not but drum sound start at here 00:33:820 -
  00:34:746 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i dont now what your follow
  
  please fix offset try 807
  
  Good luck

-N a n a k o- wrote:

your irc request

[General]
your offset is wrong, maybe 785 or 786 idk
do this song is come from vocaloid? If yes, put it into tag fixed offset, i changed mp3 thats why ;-;

[CB]
00:33:651 (1,2,3,4) - imo this part overlap with apart of 00:32:387 (1) - look weird, also the movement is not convenient (I mean after clicking 00:32:387 (1) - this) uhh, i will think about this, but it will stay atm
01:01:713 (3) - for me I would place two notes here, because the vocal is similar to 01:01:376 (1,2) - i think its okay
02:07:949 (2) - place it lower
02:07:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think make like this the flow will be better
02:30:701 (1) - maybe make this note more far? because 02:30:196 (8,1) - these two notes at the same location but they are 1/2 and 1/1 respectively, it may make the player feel bad I have not seen any of the testplayers miss or missread this part and i like it so, im gonna think about this but not change for now
04:50:252 (1,2) - this jump actually feel weird, you can make better here
05:04:493 (3,4) - maybe improve the flow here to make player play better? its ok to me
05:14:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make the jump like 05:14:522 (1,2) - ? im following the drums here

Good Luck~ This map can improve moreThanks for the mod (no reply = fixed)

ekafjr wrote:

hi ~~
just little mod :V
[Cherry Blossom]

• 
  00:33:651 (1) - follow what ? its hard for reading
  00:33:904 (2,3,4) - i dont now this offset is wrong or not but drum sound start at here 00:33:820 -
  00:34:746 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i dont now what your follow im sorry, i checked the all 3 things and they are okay for me, maybe you mod it just when the offset was off so im sorry !
  
  please fix offset try 807
  
  Good luck Thanks for the mod!

vick wrote:

i give up for now, sorry