[General]
Remove audio from video file please.
[Normal]
00:09:657 (2,3) - This rhythm necessary?
00:32:824 (2,1,2) - This overlap is kind of eh
00:37:157 (2) - New combo here, not 00:36:824 -
00:44:491 (1) - Hrm... instead of just a giant spinner, maybe map through it? maybe a rhythm like this?
01:53:824 (1) - Same thing as earlier
03:02:158 (1) - This spinner just plays awkwardly. I recommend you try something else here.
In general the patterns were a little bland and the hit sounding felt at times random. I'd take a good look at this map and see what you've learned and see if you can apply some changes to your map.
[Hard]
In this difficulty I am finding that you've used a lot of strong patterns, but the general flow from pattern to pattern is shaky at best. Try to have the patterns have a smooth transition to each other so that the map plays better.
The grey combo color gets a little difficult to see at parts with the video on.
01:43:824 (2) - This section doesn't make sense to have at .5x It makes for an awkward transition to 01:53:157 (3) -
02:21:157 - Start kiai here
02:30:157 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Seems fairly difficult for a Hard
02:58:158 (4,1) - Spacing
Some of the same weird rhythms in this difficulty that were in the Normal when you consider the spinner use.
[Insane]
01:33:157 - Extend break to here. Though it is weird that you mapped through this part in the Normal/Hard.
01:49:657 (1,2,3,4,5) - This spacing is D:
01:50:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:15:990 (1) - Eh, just delete this
02:21:157 - Start kiai here
02:53:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This spacing is so strange.
02:55:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Get some more mods on this! And take a good look at your Normal.