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Hatsune Miku - Nisoku Hokou (Full Ver.)

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Kitsuneko
[Easy]
nice~

[hard]
02:09:043 (3) - Umm, add Newcombo, please remove if you don't need.

[Insane]
01:21:877 (1) - move to 01:21:710 and add circle 01:22:043 (2) to the same place

good map star!
banvi
:oops: :oops: :oops:
Topic Starter
wring
Thx star :) <swish banvi


Kitsuneko wrote:

[Easy]
nice~

[hard]
02:09:043 (3) - Umm, add Newcombo, please remove if you don't need. no change

[Insane]
01:21:877 (1) - move to 01:21:710 and add circle 01:22:043 (2) to the same place fixed

good map star!
Thx star and mod :D <Kitsuneko
Cuuuuri
God :oops:
valuable_old
small things.

Source : DECO*27

god 8-)
val0108
>w<"hehe

starr~ 8-)
Luvdic
FREAKING TAKE OUT AUDIO LEAD IN. THERES NO NEED FOR IT.
Waiting 6 seconds for the game to start, its not fun, and much less when you can barely skip it.
Gonzvlo
General
  1. A suggestion: Before ranking, ask the BAT (who will rank this) to place the title here: 00:16:043 - It will look pretty neat.
  2. The Lead in is not necessary at all, Please remove it , The Mp3 already has some seconds before the music starts.
  3. The "Normal" diff seemed easy enough for me, So I won't suggest to map an easier diff, However if somebody thinks Normal is too hard, you should map an easier diff.
  4. Why is "Comboburst" an empty file?
Normal
  1. 00:08:877 (1,2,3,4) - Move (4) some grids away so (1) won't cover it.
  2. 00:32:877 (2,3,1,2) - Just sayin', ^
  3. 00:37:877 (1) - Random New Combo, Remove it~
  4. 01:37:210 (1) - This is not following the correct rhythm, It should be splitted like this.
  5. 01:43:877 (1) - Give this some more spacing, While playing I had the impression that I had to hit that earlier.
  6. 02:33:210 (2,1) - You should correctly stack the end of these 2 sliders, Otherwise it looks odd.
  7. 02:42:544 (1) - Remove one repeat. (Yup, that repeat is unnecessary).
Hard
  1. 00:45:210 (2) - I didn't expect this 0.5x at all, Try 0.75 instead. If you want to make that beautiful slider bigger after using 0.75, use the scale function (Edit sub-menu)
  2. 01:17:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern has no shape or intuitive spacing so it's hard to read, try making a shape with this circles. Plus the spacing increase too much, The last pattern is placed exactly the same in the timeline and it has minor spacing, So please keep spacing consistent.
  3. 01:37:877 (1,2,3) - This jumps are a bit unexpected, Please reduce the spacing.
  4. 02:07:043 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I really don't like how this pattern looks. It looks messy and it's easy to read, please try something like this.
  5. 02:26:543 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Oh wow, Try to avoid placing the new patterns right where the other notes were, For this one try something like this.
  6. 02:29:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It's the same situation here, Just try to move the notes away.
  7. 02:31:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Also, I'd use a repeat slider instead and leave those 1/4 streams for Insane.
Insane
  1. 01:43:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd keep this stream in a single row or change it for a [img=http://puu.sh/Nof]curve[/img] instead.
  2. 02:05:377 (1,2,3,4) - I still don't like this kind of patterns where the notes are under each other, Try fixing it.
  3. Some of the patterns are really hard to play and read for me, I guess this kind of difficulties are not for me.
I'm not fond on that the last diff, But the other diffs seemed really nice to me.
Topic Starter
wring
Thx star :D <Qrool val0108

valuable wrote:

small things.

Source : DECO*27

god 8-)
Thx advice and star :D <valuable

ErufenRito wrote:

FREAKING TAKE OUT AUDIO LEAD IN. THERES NO NEED FOR IT.
Waiting 6 seconds for the game to start, its not fun, and much less when you can barely skip it.
Thx advice!

Gonzvlo wrote:

General
  1. A suggestion: Before ranking, ask the BAT (who will rank this) to place the title here: 00:16:043 - It will look pretty neat. Fine!
  2. The Lead in is not necessary at all, Please remove it , The Mp3 already has some seconds before the music starts. Fixed
  3. The "Normal" diff seemed easy enough for me, So I won't suggest to map an easier diff, However if somebody thinks Normal is too hard, you should map an easier diff.
  4. Why is "Comboburst" an empty file?
Deleted

Normal
  1. 00:08:877 (1,2,3,4) - Move (4) some grids away so (1) won't cover it.Fixed
  2. 00:32:877 (2,3,1,2) - Just sayin', ^no change
  3. 00:37:877 (1) - Random New Combo, Remove it~Fixed
  4. 01:37:210 (1) - This is not following the correct rhythm, It should be splitted like this.Fixed
  5. 01:43:877 (1) - Give this some more spacing, While playing I had the impression that I had to hit that earlier.no change.I don't think it's so serious.
  6. 02:33:210 (2,1) - You should correctly stack the end of these 2 sliders, Otherwise it looks odd.Fixed
  7. 02:42:544 (1) - Remove one repeat. (Yup, that repeat is unnecessary).Fixed
Hard
  1. 00:45:210 (2) - I didn't expect this 0.5x at all, Try 0.75 instead. If you want to make that beautiful slider bigger after using 0.75, use the scale function (Edit sub-menu)sorry no change
  2. 01:17:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern has no shape or intuitive spacing so it's hard to read, try making a shape with this circles. Plus the spacing increase too much, The last pattern is placed exactly the same in the timeline and it has minor spacing, So please keep spacing consistent.Fixed
  3. 01:37:877 (1,2,3) - This jumps are a bit unexpected, Please reduce the spacing.Fixed
  4. 02:07:043 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I really don't like how this pattern looks. It looks messy and it's easy to read, please try something like this.Fixed
  5. 02:26:543 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Oh wow, Try to avoid placing the new patterns right where the other notes were, For this one try something like this. Fixed
  6. 02:29:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It's the same situation here, Just try to move the notes away.Fixed
  7. 02:31:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Also, I'd use a repeat slider instead and leave those 1/4 streams for Insane. Fixed, but remain the stream.
Insane
  1. 01:43:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd keep this stream in a single row or change it for a [img=http://puu.sh/Nof]curve[/img] instead.Fixed
  2. 02:05:377 (1,2,3,4) - I still don't like this kind of patterns where the notes are under each other, Try fixing it.Fixed
  3. Some of the patterns are really hard to play and read for me, I guess this kind of difficulties are not for me.
I'm not fond on that the last diff, But the other diffs seemed really nice to me.
Thx mod and star :) <Gonzvlo
Thite
あーるこ :oops:
nimi
Hello >w<
/me looks at (Full Ver.) and smiles *oo*~ Love this song <3

General
I'm not sure, but shouldn't Vocaloid be the source? If yes, remove it from tags.

Normal
01:43:877 (1) - blue tick here sounded a little off for me D: I'd make it up to the white tick (http://puu.sh/O50)

And lol, that's all I could find D: Really good map, have a star ^-^
Topic Starter
wring

Wiinter wrote:

Hello >w<
/me looks at (Full Ver.) and smiles *oo*~ Love this song <3

General
I'm not sure, but shouldn't Vocaloid be the source? If yes, remove it from tags.umm...I think "DECO*27" is one source of this, so I left it.

Normal
01:43:877 (1) - blue tick here sounded a little off for me D: I'd make it up to the white tick (http://puu.sh/O50) Fixed

And lol, that's all I could find D: Really good map, have a star ^-^
Thx mod and star :D
kanpakyin
Yo..Time to mod ;)

[General]
Fine for me>_<

[Normal]
00:26:877(2)-[nazi]Make it more beautiful?feel weird of slider now
00:35:877(4)-New combo here?Than.New combo of 00:36:543(6) too
00:44:543(X)-This spinner is too long..It's bad to newbie
00:53:877(2)-[Nazi]1 grid down may better?
01:17:210(1)-Weird rhythm for me..well.Fell free to change or not
01:37:210(1.2)-Will make confuse to the newbie
02:10:543(x)-Remove finish

[Hard]
00:09:710(1~4)-2 grid left
00:47:210(2)-No need to decrease volume
01:31:710(4)-Weird rhythm
01:37:210(1~4)-Not suggest to jump here..It's quite sudden
02:53:210(1)-Why change the slider speed duffenly?It is not necessary here...If you really need to change it..0.7x might better than now?
02:55:877(1)-^
02:58:543(1)-^

[Insane]
00:18:710(2.4)-Make it more symmetrical
00:45:210(1~)-Make some slider in these pettern?remember it is suggestion only ;)
01:11:210(1~4)-Highly not suggest 1/2 notes on 1/4 notes
02:53:210(1~6)Why the spacing are inconsistent?I know what you want to do..But it is really necessary?
05:55:877(1~6)^

That's all Star**
Topic Starter
wring

kanpakyin wrote:

Yo..Time to mod ;)

[General]
Fine for me>_<

[Normal]
00:26:877(2)-[nazi]Make it more beautiful?feel weird of slider now no
00:35:877(4)-New combo here?Than.New combo of 00:36:543(6) too no
00:44:543(X)-This spinner is too long..It's bad to newbie no, I think drain is low.
00:53:877(2)-[Nazi]1 grid down may better? fixed
01:17:210(1)-Weird rhythm for me..well.Fell free to change or not no change
01:37:210(1.2)-Will make confuse to the newbie fixed
02:10:543(x)-Remove finish fixed

[Hard]
00:09:710(1~4)-2 grid left no
00:47:210(2)-No need to decrease volume increase little
01:31:710(4)-Weird rhythm fixed
01:37:210(1~4)-Not suggest to jump here..It's quite sudden umm...sorry, no change
02:53:210(1)-Why change the slider speed duffenly?It is not necessary here...If you really need to change it..0.7x might better than now?
02:55:877(1)-^
02:58:543(1)-^ fixed

[Insane]
00:18:710(2.4)-Make it more symmetrical fixed
00:45:210(1~)-Make some slider in these pettern?remember it is suggestion only ;) umm...no chnge
01:11:210(1~4)-Highly not suggest 1/2 notes on 1/4 notes no chnage
02:53:210(1~6)Why the spacing are inconsistent?I know what you want to do..But it is really necessary?
05:55:877(1~6)^ sorry no change, I think it's not so bad.

That's all Star**
Thx mod and star :D <kanpakyin
Leorda
Konnichiwa

General
I think silence sliderticks may be unrankable

Normal
00:26:877 (2) - The slider seems odd for me~
00:34:377 (1,2) - Move further away from 00:32:877 (2), because it's overlapped, but just suggestion
00:56:377 (1,2) - Move further away from 00:55:210 (4) to prevent to mixing the pattern
01:20:377 (5) - X:168 | Y:280, look upper-right to know what I mean, also, sorry for nazi modding
02:05:877 (2,3,4) - It doesn't looks like a wave slider, try make it wave slider, this slider is looks like parallel
02:48:544 (2,3) - It doesn't looks like a wave slider, try make it wave slider, this slider is looks like parallel

Hard
00:47:377 (1) - Should new combo to prevent any spinner bug
00:53:710 (1) - Move further away from 00:52:543 (2)? To prevent to mixing pattern?
01:57:210 (1) - Should new combo to prevent any spinner bug
02:13:377 (1) - ^
02:24:043 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO, it confusing for me

03:02:710 (1) - Should new combo to prevent any spinner bug

Insane
00:47:460 (1) - Should new combo to prevent any spinner bug
01:56:627 (1) - ^
02:16:043 (1) - ^


Great
Topic Starter
wring

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa

General
I think silence sliderticks may be unrankable ok , deleted

Normal
00:26:877 (2) - The slider seems odd for me~ fixed
00:34:377 (1,2) - Move further away from 00:32:877 (2), because it's overlapped, but just suggestion no change
00:56:377 (1,2) - Move further away from 00:55:210 (4) to prevent to mixing the pattern fixed
01:20:377 (5) - X:168 | Y:280, look upper-right to know what I mean, also, sorry for nazi modding looks good! fixed
02:05:877 (2,3,4) - It doesn't looks like a wave slider, try make it wave slider, this slider is looks like parallel fixed
02:48:544 (2,3) - It doesn't looks like a wave slider, try make it wave slider, this slider is looks like parallel fixed

Hard
00:47:377 (1) - Should new combo to prevent any spinner bug
00:53:710 (1) - Move further away from 00:52:543 (2)? To prevent to mixing pattern?
01:57:210 (1) - Should new combo to prevent any spinner bug
02:13:377 (1) - ^
02:24:043 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO, it confusing for me

03:02:710 (1) - Should new combo to prevent any spinner bug all fixed

Insane
00:47:460 (1) - Should new combo to prevent any spinner bug
01:56:627 (1) - ^
02:16:043 (1) - ^
all fixed

Great
Thx mod and star :) <Leorda
Suzully
star~ ;)
m i z u k i
:oops:
KiriNoMorii
:)
Garven
That mp3 is rather poor quality. D:

Try this one:
http://puu.sh/1r2y

Offset 2491
Change ALL timing sections -53 ms

You can select all points by shift + click on all points in the timing and control points box.


Then go to here and set -53


Don't forget to double check all of your notes for snapping (including slider ends), full resubmit, then call me back for some modding. :3
rui
tanoshii:)
YaMaO04
:)
Ryafuka
nice map :)
Kyonko Hizara
:)
Copter-kun
Short mod

Insane

02:53:543 (3), (4) It looks awkward and doesn't fit well.
02:56:210 (3), (4) ^

Hard

Nicely mapped

Normal

Nice again

I don't care about kudos... so it's your choice
Topic Starter
wring

Garven wrote:

That mp3 is rather poor quality. D:

Try this one:
http://puu.sh/1r2y

Offset 2491
Change ALL timing sections -53 ms

You can select all points by shift + click on all points in the timing and control points box.


Then go to here and set -53


Don't forget to double check all of your notes for snapping (including slider ends), full resubmit, then call me back for some modding. :3
Thank you new mp3<3
I notice lately.....sorry and sorry :cry:


Copter-kun wrote:

Short mod

Insane

02:53:543 (3), (4) It looks awkward and doesn't fit well.
02:56:210 (3), (4) ^

sorry I think it is a little jump patterns

Hard

Nicely mapped

Normal

Nice again

I don't care about kudos... so it's your choice
Rigeru_old
:)
Z666ful
AT LAAAAASSTTTT!! FULLL VER!!! WRING FTW!!! XD :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) 8-)
phonic
Nice Song!!!!!


Good Beat Map :)


Star!!!!!!!!!!! ;) ;) ;)
Garven
[General]
Remove audio from video file please.

[Normal]
00:09:657 (2,3) - This rhythm necessary?
00:32:824 (2,1,2) - This overlap is kind of eh
00:37:157 (2) - New combo here, not 00:36:824 -
00:44:491 (1) - Hrm... instead of just a giant spinner, maybe map through it? maybe a rhythm like this?

01:53:824 (1) - Same thing as earlier
03:02:158 (1) - This spinner just plays awkwardly. I recommend you try something else here.
In general the patterns were a little bland and the hit sounding felt at times random. I'd take a good look at this map and see what you've learned and see if you can apply some changes to your map.

[Hard]
In this difficulty I am finding that you've used a lot of strong patterns, but the general flow from pattern to pattern is shaky at best. Try to have the patterns have a smooth transition to each other so that the map plays better.
The grey combo color gets a little difficult to see at parts with the video on.
01:43:824 (2) - This section doesn't make sense to have at .5x It makes for an awkward transition to 01:53:157 (3) -
02:21:157 - Start kiai here
02:30:157 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Seems fairly difficult for a Hard
02:58:158 (4,1) - Spacing
Some of the same weird rhythms in this difficulty that were in the Normal when you consider the spinner use.

[Insane]
01:33:157 - Extend break to here. Though it is weird that you mapped through this part in the Normal/Hard.

01:49:657 (1,2,3,4,5) - This spacing is D:
01:50:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:15:990 (1) - Eh, just delete this
02:21:157 - Start kiai here
02:53:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This spacing is so strange.
02:55:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Get some more mods on this! And take a good look at your Normal.
phonic
Hi

-General-
Please change the name of BG of it

-Insane-

Hp-1 OR-1

00:23:157 (5) 1Grid down
00:49:990 (4) new combo
01:20:824 (4) ^
02:31:324 (5) ^
Love
fml I should continue mapping this on taiko
Otaku_MQ
my favorite song from vocaloid hope this can be rank :(
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