[Easy]
00:26:626 (3,4) - poor overlap, which you should avoid using to make your map clear to read.
00:40:626 (4,1) - If you really want this map become better, please blanket all slider.
00:47:426 - be careful with the slider end. big tick mainly contain strong beat sound, which you cannot put slider end here. Easy and Normal usually use 2 big ticks per one nc. Please do not put slider end at the nc position, like 00:47:426 - .
(ref:
p/4694342)
suggestion:
I am really a free modder. I found that this Easy diff is totally the same with
KanaRin's Version in terms of rhythm, Except 00:41:026 - ~ 00:50:626 - . I don't know why..... I hope it is okay by chance.
[Hard]
Same as Easy diff, please pay more attention on the overlapping.
00:04:826 (3,1) - 00:25:826 (3,1) - etc.
If you care about the looking of patterns, you can use more blankets
00:16:226 (2,3) - 00:43:826 (4,1) - etc.
00:37:026 - you can try this also, I think it is better if you stack slider 5 and next slider 1. Just a little suggestion, fix it optionally.
00:42:426 (4,1) - misleading ds, you use constant ds for the previous part, and it is un-predictable that you suddently make a jump
00:56:626 (1) - spinner start at 00:56:526 - , if you heard carefully, there is no sound at 00:56:626 - but 00:56:526 - . Also, spinner only need 1/4 spacing for Hard diff, it is note-before-spinner pattern, which is very common to do so in mapping.
[Insane]
00:02:826 (1,2) - again, pay attention on overlapping.
00:26:026 (3) - ctrl+g for better flowing.
00:28:026 (4,5,6) - this kind of triple really weird...
Insane is more free in mapping, then I think it is acceptable for me. But if you want to rank it, I think you need more eyes, seems the quality not that high.