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Kana Nishino - Darling

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Nickelony
402 posts
Joined January 2013
Nickelony
from #modreqs

[General]

I think the kiai time is a little bit too long, try to make it shorter.

[Marianna's Easy]

00:08:797 (4) - this slider is touching this circle: 00:08:422 (3) - and it's breaking the blanket
00:23:047 (2,3) - it's touching again, please fix :P
00:41:422 (2,3) - fix blanket

the rest is fine ;)

[Kitty's Normal]

00:59:797 (4) - the 2nd curve is not perfect round, try to use a hitcircle to make it rounder, like this: http://puu.sh/osSQq.jpg (remember to remove the hitcircle if finished!)

nice diff!!! :o

[My Dear]

00:10:297 (1,2,3) - the reverse arrow breaks the flow, I recommend to do something like this: http://puu.sh/osTG9.jpg
00:13:297 (1) - this wave doesn't fit the blanket, try this: http://puu.sh/osTKp.jpg
00:28:859 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:00:922 (4,1) - ^
00:32:797 (1,3) - these sliders are touching, which doesn't look good, try this: http://puu.sh/osTV5.jpg
01:02:422 (4) - try this: http://puu.sh/osU2K.jpg looks better

rest is fine. :)

That's all, good luck!
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Nickelony wrote:

from #modreqs

[General]

I think the kiai time is a little bit too long, try to make it shorter. i will check this

[My Dear]

00:10:297 (1,2,3) - the reverse arrow breaks the flow, I recommend to do something like this: http://puu.sh/osTG9.jpg i Think is good with this, i follow the Vocal's moment

00:13:297 (1) - this wave doesn't fit the blanket, try this: http://puu.sh/osTKp.jpg Fixed !
00:28:859 (2,3) - fix blanket Fixed !
01:00:922 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:32:797 (1,3) - these sliders are touching, which doesn't look good, try this: http://puu.sh/osTV5.jpg
01:02:422 (4) - try this: http://puu.sh/osU2K.jpg looks better Reeealy better :D

rest is fine. :)

That's all, good luck!
very thanks Nicke ♥
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
overall, this map is really good and calm to play plus the song is already good. so don't expect my mod to be long.

[Darling]
  1. 00:14:047 (2,1) - I saw you pay attention to blanket so I mention this one. it's not a good blanket yet. (move 2's tail to right a bit). also 00:18:547 (3) and goes on. please check blankets on your map again.
  2. 00:24:359 (2,3,4,1,2) - why it's suddenly short spacing? I don't feel like the song going that way.
  3. 00:25:859 (2) - spread to this? more fit with vocal. you also did like this at 00:22:859 (2,3,4) which sounds really good.
  4. 00:28:297 (1,2,3) - why you make the spacing inconsistent? idk if it's intentional. not that different in gameplay , agreed, but better if you make them consistent. apply to all same case.
  5. 00:35:422 (4) - increase spacing. so short.
  6. 00:52:297 (1) - ^
  7. overall, it's really a great diff. just make it more polish by fixing all blanket and inconsistent spacing the whole map.
[Kitty]
  1. 00:14:797 (1) - remove NC, you NC per every two stanza.
  2. 00:29:797 (1) - ^
  3. 00:42:922 (1) - I highly recommend you to replace this note to somewhere closer to the center for being friendly to normal-player and make it easier to hit after the spinner.
[marianna]
  1. 00:23:797 (3) - move second point (sorry that don't know what is it called) to 446|341 for more blanket. I mention this because it's almost touch and pretty noticeable.
  2. 00:29:797 (1) - remove NC, you NC per every two stanza.
  3. 00:34:297 (1) - idk if this still a case recently-mapping. blanket would solve if you wanna be safe. (overlapped makes beginner hard to read) << this reason.
    00:35:797 (1) - remove NC, you NC per every two stanza.
  4. 00:52:297 (1) - blanket is off (noticeable)
  5. 00:59:797 (2) - same as 00:34:297 (1) - would be great if you discuss this with BN or QAT. if it's fine, fine then.
  6. 01:04:297 (5,1) - switch NC here actually.
  7. 01:05:797 (1,2,3,1) - this pattern is more friendly to beginner tbh, less confusing.
nice mapset. only thing that bug me is normal has CS 3 but hard CS 5. the gap is pretty large imo. beware of that. good luck !
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
http://puu.sh/ot2wC/0c1b1a81fa.osu

Some fixed~
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

P A N wrote:

overall, this map is really good and calm to play plus the song is already good. so don't expect my mod to be long.

[Darling]
  1. 00:14:047 (2,1) - I saw you pay attention to blanket so I mention this one. it's not a good blanket yet. (move 2's tail to right a bit). also 00:18:547 (3) and goes on. please check blankets on your map again. All FIxed
  2. 00:24:359 (2,3,4,1,2) - why it's suddenly short spacing? I don't feel like the song going that way. Fixed
  3. 00:25:859 (2) - spread to this? more fit with vocal. you also did like this at 00:22:859 (2,3,4) which sounds really good. sure
  4. 00:28:297 (1,2,3) - why you make the spacing inconsistent? idk if it's intentional. not that different in gameplay , agreed, but better if you make them consistent. apply to all same case.I think is good like mine
  5. 00:35:422 (4) - increase spacing. so short.Ya
  6. 00:52:297 (1) - ^Ya²
  7. overall, it's really a great diff. just make it more polish by fixing all blanket and inconsistent spacing the whole map. Thanks !

nice mapset. only thing that bug me is normal has CS 3 but hard CS 5. the gap is pretty large imo. beware of that. good luck !
smau5
133 posts
Joined October 2014
smau5
random from #modreqs
@kitty's normal
00:46:297 (1) - how about making this a slider 2times repeat slider, i think it doesnt match with the part flow
00:52:297 (1) - this one too
00:53:797 (2) - make this a slider 1/1 slider and then a circle at 00:54:547
00:55:297 (1) - slider repeat 2 times
00:59:797 (4) - same
01:04:297 (1) - same

i feel like the chorus it's more groovy and long sliders does't fit.
EarwormS
10 posts
Joined January 2014
EarwormS
Hello! -From ur m4m in #modreqs
I'm a rookie modder.
Here is my mod~

Marianna's Easy
Some suggestions:
00:08:797 (4) - UnWhistled from sliderhead (Sound like the singer's voice
00:59:797 (2) - Move up a bit. Make 00:58:297 (1,2) - better. Like this


Kitty's Normal
Suggest OD3
01:04:297 (1) - make this two turning points fit with the drumbeats(own opinion

My Dear
00:13:297 (1) - slider tail~
00:30:172 (2) - & 00:42:172 (2) - add a Finish

>Nice song and nice maps.
>I cant give more suggestions because those maps are better than mine.
>Good luck!
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Disagree all mods etc. P A N, MkGuh, squirrelpascals, AmigoDoChroome, and Nickelony's mod! (Seriously, i feel sick & tired with IRC so can't respond all mods ;w;)

CS = I better used 3 than 3.5 or 4, it's really distrub! if QAT & BN say same, i keep to used 3
Long Slider = I following the vocal
Not Curve = Trying used other flow
00:11:797 (4,1) = It's overlap, not really hard :>

Ataraxia ask me to make normal is maximal 1.90- star rating and i thing 1.72 it's hard for me!
I put long slider because it's simple & clean to rank :3

Kitty's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42359
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 55297
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Darling
TitleUnicode:Darling
Artist:Kana Nishino
ArtistUnicode:Kana Nishino
Creator:Ataraxia
Version:Kitty's Normal
Source:
Tags:gokugohan12468 fabiojhon Hoen KittyAdventure Marianna kaitlin japan record award with love short ver version cut -wwwww kaitlin japan record award
BeatmapID:954154
BeatmapSetID:443078

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"KittyAdventure.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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31297,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
43297,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
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Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

EarwormS wrote:

Hello! -From ur m4m in #modreqs
I'm a rookie modder.
Here is my mod~

My Dear
00:13:297 (1) - slider tail~ Already A Tail
00:30:172 (2) - & 00:42:172 (2) - add a Finish
Its a good idea, but i wanna to follow with simple drums clap, and the finish is not good with the drum

>Nice song and nice maps.
>I cant give more suggestions because those maps are better than mine.
>Good luck!
Thanks !
Hitorikko
301 posts
Joined August 2013
Hitorikko
General
diff spread is not good. you need to make the normal diff harder. try targeting 2-2.1 star diff.

Marianna's Easy
00:13:297 (1) - bad flow ( try ctrl+H and rotate it by -90 )
00:23:047 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:35:422 (2,3) - ^
00:41:422 (2,3) - ^
00:47:797 (2,3,1) - this flow is bad IMO. why not just follow the flow of the slider ?
00:56:797 (2) - ctrl+H ?
00:59:797 (2,1,2) - bad flow
01:06:922 (4) - NC here
01:07:297 (1) - remove NC

Kitty's Normal
00:08:797 (2) - NC
00:17:797 (2) - ^
00:31:297 (1) - ctrl+J for better flow
00:33:922 (4) - off grid :?
00:35:797 (3,1) - stack properly
00:54:922 (3,1) - fix blanket

My Dear
00:10:297 (1,3) - overlap
00:46:297 (1,4) - stack properly
00:52:297 (1,3) - ^

Nice song ! Good Luck !
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Hitorikko wrote:

General
diff spread is not good. you need to make the normal diff harder. try targeting 2-2.1 star diff. or a advanced diff :D


My Dear
00:10:297 (1,3) - overlap Done
00:46:297 (1,4) - stack properly Fixed
00:52:297 (1,3) - ^ ^

Nice song ! Good Luck !
Thanks !
Hitorikko
301 posts
Joined August 2013
Hitorikko

Ataraxia wrote:

or a advanced diff :D
you can also do that. but, their will still be problem with the diff spread cos total number of notes in easy is 71 and normal and normal is 83. :o 12 notes difference is not good. you really need to make the normal diff harder IMO
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna

Hitorikko wrote:

you can also do that. but, their will still be problem with the diff spread cos total number of notes in easy is 71 and normal and normal is 83. :o 12 notes difference is not good. you really need to make the normal diff harder IMO
You see, we want the advanced
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Hitorikko wrote:

Ataraxia wrote:

or a advanced diff :D
you can also do that. but, their will still be problem with the diff spread cos total number of notes in easy is 71 and normal and normal is 83. :o 12 notes difference is not good. you really need to make the normal diff harder IMO
Very Thanks , is not a reeaaaal problem x.x but the advanced diff is real good, now, Is Cs 3, 3 ,4 and 5 Correct .
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
I never say to change cs is 3,4 <___<
Well, like before i say, Ataraxia already tell me to make normal diff with 1.90 star rating, i mean this is calm and beautiful song, i can't make it with cs 3+, but it's already hard for newbie players!
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia
I Don't think necessary 2 stars normal, because of the music, is calm and relaxing, for this, i want a "easy normal"

So, in chose to do a advanced diff, its the real soluction and the spreads its real good now :)
Doj
232 posts
Joined March 2014
Doj
Most of these mods are probably gonna be cosmetic because it's pretty consistent already

Marianna's Easy
  1. 00:27:547 (3,1) - You can make this look better by doing this

    SPOILER
  2. 01:01:297 (1,2) - You can apply the above suggestion to this too
  3. 01:04:297 (1) - I don't think this slider shape fits how smooth all your others are.

    Nazi blanket fixes
  4. 00:52:297 (1) -
  5. 00:35:797 (3) -
Kitty's Normal
  1. 00:44:797 (3,4,5) - I don't think that (4) fits where it is. It'll sounds and play much better if it were stacked on 00:46:297 (1) - instead.
  2. 00:52:297 (1) - fix blankettt
  3. 00:55:297 (1) - ^
Marixia's Advanced
  1. 00:10:297 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern could be improved. Maybe if you made it something like this


  2. 00:56:797 (1) - new combo
  3. 01:02:797 (1) - new combo
My Dear
  1. One of the patterns for your kiai time is kinda weird imo Like 00:51:172 (2,3,4,5) - and 00:54:172 (2,3,4) - and 00:57:172 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:03:172 (2,3,4,5) - I think a better pattern would be something like this


  2. 00:30:734 (3) - mmm I don't like how this note is stacked under the other two when there's a gap in between them. I think placing it elsewhere would work better.
This mapset is pretty solid imo. Good luck!
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
@Doj
No changes
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Doj wrote:

Most of these mods are probably gonna be cosmetic because it's pretty consistent already

My Dear
  1. One of the patterns for your kiai time is kinda weird imo Like 00:51:172 (2,3,4,5) - and 00:54:172 (2,3,4) - and 00:57:172 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:03:172 (2,3,4,5) - I think a better pattern would be something like this .


  2. 00:30:734 (3) - mmm I don't like how this note is stacked under the other two when there's a gap in between them. I think placing it elsewhere would work better. .
This mapset is pretty solid imo. Good luck!
Thanks !
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
Marianna, will be great if you reply mods properly. Thanks.
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey
From m4m queue

  • Marianna's Easy
  1. 00:58:297 (1,2) - You did a great job on blankets in this diff, I think you can improve this obvious place as well, right?

    Kitty's Normal
  2. 00:11:797 (4) - 00:17:797 (2) - to keep consistency, please fix the spacing to 1.1. 1.03 or 1.05 is a bit incorrect
  3. 00:29:797 (4) - have a NC to stress the change of the music?

    Marixia's Advanced
  4. 00:48:172 - 00:49:672 - 00:54:172 - miss a clap?
  5. 01:00:547 - addtion=soft then clap it?
  6. 01:06:734 (2) - Sampleset=drum, then add a finish?

Totally fine to me, good luck :)
Perklone
86 posts
Joined January 2014
Perklone
M4M :D

Marixia's Advanced
00:30:922 (3) - add a note like this ?
01:02:609 (4) - move the slider 1 tick earlier and add a reverse arrow like this?

01:06:734 (1) - NC?
01:07:109 - i think this would add to the beat

My Dear
Shouldn't CS4 would be more appropiate for this level?
00:21:359 (2) - Slider could be raised just a bit.
00:59:797 (1,2,3,4) - curved would be beautiful IMO like this?

i only can do a little bit :P still learning.
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

[-R1] wrote:

M4M :D

Marixia's Advanced
00:30:922 (3) - add a note like this ?And move the slider one tick back? in not want to follow the vocal in this part

The rest is Marianna's Part.

My Dear
Shouldn't CS4 would be more appropiate for this level?Are no problem to Make a High CS in a hard, since you not force the map, the DS are low and constant , so don't problem
00:21:359 (2) - Slider could be raised just a bit.Fixed !
00:59:797 (1,2,3,4) - curved would be beautiful IMO like this?Realy Beautiful!

i only can do a little bit :P still learning.
don't worry, its nice sugestions, Thanks !
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Marixia's Advanced

[*]00:48:172 - 00:49:672 - 00:54:172 - miss a clap? Wow, Thanks
[*]01:00:547 - addtion=soft then clap it?Its Marianna part but Really see good, so in applied
[*]01:06:734 (2) - Sampleset=drum, then add a finish?I Left to marianna choose[/list][/notice]

Totally fine to me, good luck :) [/quote]

Thanks !
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna

P A N wrote:

Marianna, will be great if you reply mods properly. Thanks.
I'm Lazy, Thanks.
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
All fixed about Kitty's normal on @Frey 's mod (Yup i have permission to do this)

osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:Kana Nishino
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Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
Hi~ the M4M

[General :]
  1. Metadata : Artist : 西野カナ (http://www.nishinokana.com/disco/archive/?SECL-1551)
  2. Timing : Ok
  3. AiMod : Ok
  4. SB : /
  5. Other: You put 2 times "kaitlin japan record award" on tags, that's useless. Also can you explain me the -wwwww tag ?

[Mapping / Rhythm :]

- Marianna's Easy :

  1. Spinner are goooooooooooood.
  2. Check your blankets on this diff and should be fine.
- Kitty's Normal :

  1. I'm quite sad than CS is the same as Easy. Maybe increase it by 0.5 or smth like that (but not more than 3.5 plsssss).
  2. 00:11:797 (4,1) - Tbh it could be really hard to read for a newbie, the overlap is quite huge and even NC is not enough imo.
  3. 00:35:422 (2) - It would be lovely for flow if you could move it to 332:256.
  4. 00:52:297 (1,2) - Was a nice blanket try, but no try again. Same for 00:54:922 (3,1) - .
- Marixia's Advanced :

  1. 00:07:297 (1,2) - Lol dem anchor points. Are they really that necessairy ? XD
  2. 00:26:422 (3) - Could it have the same shape than 00:25:672 (2) - ? Same for 00:27:172 (2,3) - .
  3. 00:39:922 (5) - Put the end of it at center of 00:40:297 (1) - pls.
  4. 00:41:797 (2,1) - Did you tried to stack them ?
  5. Why everyone have problem with blankets ? (ex : 01:04:859 (2,3) - )
- My Dear :

  1. 00:11:422 - This sound is really strong, but you make it play passively. I suggest you to switch it with 00:11:609 (5) - (like this http://puu.sh/oLSWp/4f8807b0cf.jpg&#41;.
  2. 00:46:859 (3,4) - Could you blanket both ?
  3. 00:51:734 (5,1) - Why a such low spacing when the restart of vocal is quite strong ? It makes no sense. It just looks like you was blockek by the top of the grind and you reduce spacing to put it here. Pls fix that and use at least 1.30x spacing :c
  4. 00:56:422 (4,1) - Tbh this pattern looks awful and quite random, so what about this instead http://puu.sh/oLTlb/441d623ebf.jpg ? (I put AR0 to show the entire pattern don't worry).

[Hitsound :]
  1. Looks fine.

Not a bad map, maybe try to catch some more mods to clean stupid nazi stuff and call me back~
Mukyu~
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ the M4M

[Mapping / Rhythm :]

- Marianna's Easy :

  1. Spinner are goooooooooooood.
  2. Check your blankets on this diff and should be fine. Sorry but Blankets dont make changes ingame
- Kitty's Normal :

  1. I'm quite sad than CS is the same as Easy. Maybe increase it by 0.5 or smth like that (but not more than 3.5 plsssss). Fixed
  2. 00:11:797 (4,1) - Tbh it could be really hard to read for a newbie, the overlap is quite huge and even NC is not enough imo. Fixed
  3. 00:35:422 (2) - It would be lovely for flow if you could move it to 332:256. Fixed
  4. 00:52:297 (1,2) - Was a nice blanket try, but no try again. Same for 00:54:922 (3,1) - .
- Marixia's Advanced :

  1. 00:07:297 (1,2) - Lol dem anchor points. Are they really that necessairy ? XD Yup xD
  2. 00:26:422 (3) - Could it have the same shape than 00:25:672 (2) - ? Same for 00:27:172 (2,3) - .
  3. 00:39:922 (5) - Put the end of it at center of 00:40:297 (1) - pls. No changes ingame~
  4. 00:41:797 (2,1) - Did you tried to stack them ? Ataraxia fix this xD
  5. Why everyone have problem with blankets ? (ex : 01:04:859 (2,3) - ) Because players do not look the blankets
Kitty is in trouble, I have permission to do so

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144,284,22297,6,0,P|100:260|60:268,1,50.000000298023,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,220,22672,2,0,P|48:196|48:144,1,50.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,128,23047,2,0,L|132:124,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,68,23797,2,0,P|224:116|200:196,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,216,24359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,216,24547,2,0,B|268:216|268:216|320:232,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,25297,6,0,P|404:224|388:168,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,148,25859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,116,26047,2,0,L|208:112,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,60,26797,2,0,L|124:180,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,204,27359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,252,27547,2,0,P|60:320|88:368,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,348,28297,6,0,P|199:300|192:251,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,200,28859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,168,29047,2,0,B|305:176|305:176|381:164,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,68,29797,5,2,0:0:0:0:
197,80,30172,2,0,P|153:144|225:268,1,200.000001192092,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,348,31297,6,0,P|76:324|20:332,2,100.000000596046,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,251,32422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,300,32797,2,0,P|352:276|408:284,2,100.000000596046,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,384,33922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,344,34297,6,0,P|488:276|396:180,1,200.000001192092,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,256,35422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,172,35797,2,0,B|212:148|168:168|168:168|136:160|136:160|100:180|40:168,1,200.000001192092,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,64,36922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
66,171,37297,6,0,L|74:283,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,328,38047,2,0,L|171:228,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,164,38797,2,0,P|316:152|372:172,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,124,39547,2,0,P|468:184|452:228,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
256,192,40297,12,2,41797,0:0:0:0:
448,68,42922,5,2,0:0:0:0:
388,160,43297,6,0,P|344:112|340:48,2,100.000000596046,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,236,44422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,304,44797,2,0,P|316:288|256:308,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,324,45359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,324,45547,2,0,L|232:196,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,132,46297,6,0,P|100:180|128:56,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,52,47797,2,0,P|268:108|264:164,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,140,48547,2,0,P|385:90|413:49,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,128,49297,6,0,L|500:260,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,244,50047,2,0,L|378:343,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,50797,2,0,P|256:244|264:180,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,132,51547,2,0,B|100:132|100:132|52:112,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,212,52297,6,0,B|68:228|88:276|88:276|148:272|148:272|160:364|264:368,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,53797,2,0,B|304:232|352:256|352:256|400:280|464:244,1,200.000001192092,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,156,54922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,64,55297,6,0,B|408:20|324:44|300:100|300:100|240:60|240:116|160:72,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,152,56797,2,0,P|88:212|116:268,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,57359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,296,57547,2,0,B|272:292|272:292|316:308,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,344,58297,6,0,B|396:276|396:276|424:232,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,204,58859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,204,59047,2,0,P|416:140|424:84,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,64,59797,2,0,B|260:80|260:80|178:73|178:73|88:104,1,200.000001192092,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,196,60922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,284,61297,6,0,P|216:280|268:240,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,272,62047,2,0,P|340:216|276:168,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,84,62797,2,0,L|220:80,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,44,63547,2,0,L|152:160,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,216,64297,6,0,B|108:268|172:256|172:256|140:300|172:364|172:364|208:340|280:356,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,244,65797,2,0,P|232:188|192:168,1,100.000000596046,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,66734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,56,66922,2,0,L|172:52,1,50.000000298023,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,28,67297,5,6,0:0:0:0:
Mercusheigan
281 posts
Joined December 2012
Mercusheigan
Oia esse menino ganhando icon de BN :3

gz ata, reta final agora :D
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna

Mercusheigan wrote:

Oia esse menino ganhando icon de BN :3

gz ata, reta final agora :D
É BN Star xD
Ataraxia
673 posts
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Ataraxia

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ the M4M

[General :]
  1. Metadata : Artist : 西野カナ (http://www.nishinokana.com/disco/archive/?SECL-1551)
  2. Timing : Ok
  3. AiMod : Ok
  4. SB : /
  5. Other: You put 2 times "kaitlin japan record award" on tags, that's useless. Also can you explain me the -wwwww tag ?

[Mapping / Rhythm :]

- Marianna's Easy :

  1. Spinner are goooooooooooood.
  2. Check your blankets on this diff and should be fine.
- Kitty's Normal :

  1. I'm quite sad than CS is the same as Easy. Maybe increase it by 0.5 or smth like that (but not more than 3.5 plsssss).
  2. 00:11:797 (4,1) - Tbh it could be really hard to read for a newbie, the overlap is quite huge and even NC is not enough imo.
  3. 00:35:422 (2) - It would be lovely for flow if you could move it to 332:256.
  4. 00:52:297 (1,2) - Was a nice blanket try, but no try again. Same for 00:54:922 (3,1) - .
- Marixia's Advanced :

  1. 00:07:297 (1,2) - Lol dem anchor points. Are they really that necessairy ? XD
  2. 00:26:422 (3) - Could it have the same shape than 00:25:672 (2) - ? Same for 00:27:172 (2,3) - Sure, fixed.
  3. 00:39:922 (5) - Put the end of it at center of 00:40:297 (1) - pls.
  4. 00:41:797 (2,1) - Did you tried to stack them ? LOL
  5. Why everyone have problem with blankets ? (ex : 01:04:859 (2,3) - )
- My Dear :

  1. 00:11:422 - This sound is really strong, but you make it play passively. I suggest you to switch it with 00:11:609 (5) - (like this http://puu.sh/oLSWp/4f8807b0cf.jpg&#41;.
  2. 00:46:859 (3,4) - Could you blanket both ?
  3. 00:51:734 (5,1) - Why a such low spacing when the restart of vocal is quite strong ? It makes no sense. It just looks like you was blockek by the top of the grind and you reduce spacing to put it here. Pls fix that and use at least 1.30x spacing :c
  4. 00:56:422 (4,1) - Tbh this pattern looks awful and quite random, so what about this instead http://puu.sh/oLTlb/441d623ebf.jpg ? (I put AR0 to show the entire pattern don't worry).

All Fixed nozhomi
[Hitsound :]
  1. Looks fine.

Not a bad map, maybe try to catch some more mods to clean stupid nazi stuff and call me back~
Mukyu~
Yes, Very thanks ! i will get more mods !
Ataraxia
673 posts
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Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Mercusheigan wrote:

Oia esse menino ganhando icon de BN :3

gz ata, reta final agora :D
DELICIA DE STAR
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
4,225 posts
Joined July 2013
Ascendance
you stole the tags from our ranked ctb set and forgot to take out the aliases of the mapper (-wwwww, kaitlin)... nice -_ -
if you're gonna steal at least do it the right way wew
igorsprite
623 posts
Joined September 2015
igorsprite
Kitty's Normal

00:40:297 (1) - Esse spinner deveria começar em 53,7% e terminar em 55,7%

01:05:797 (2,3,4,1) - ficaria melhor assim http://prnt.sc/b26c49 http://prnt.sc/b26ckf

a taxa de tick ficaria melhor 1 em vez de 2

o OD ficaria melhor se fosse 3 por causa de umas partes mais confusas, HP ficaria melhor em 3 porque os sliders são muito grandes

00:38:797 (3) - NC aqui
achei bem feio por isso estou fazendo um modd


Tentei deixar o mais organizado possivel :?

Me nota ;-;
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Ataraxia
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Ataraxia

Ascendance wrote:

you stole the tags from our ranked ctb set and forgot to take out the aliases of the mapper (-wwwww, kaitlin)... nice -_ -
if you're gonna steal at least do it the right way wew
lol really sorry ;-;
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
4,225 posts
Joined July 2013
Ascendance

Ataraxia wrote:

Ascendance wrote:

you stole the tags from our ranked ctb set and forgot to take out the aliases of the mapper (-wwwww, kaitlin)... nice -_ -
if you're gonna steal at least do it the right way wew
lol really sorry ;-;
<3 gl on rank
Kyouren
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Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Ataraxia: Please set my CS to 3.2 or 3.3
Bastionior
560 posts
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Bastionior
Pequenas sugestões pois ja está com star e o mod final fica com a nohzomi
My Dear

  1. 00:08:047 (2,3) - poderia substituir por algo clicavel, por incrivel que pareca essa foi as unicas notas que seguem apenas o vocal fora do ritmo, sendo que todas as outras seguem vocal e ritmo enfim preencha os tick vermelhos com notas, um exemplo de como elas seguem de forma bacana na timeline http://puu.sh/oMKv7.jpg.
  2. 00:08:797 (1,2) - a distancia entre essas notas está meio irregular, poderia só fixar a distancia do 00:09:547 (2) - ou arrumar a shape do 00:08:797 (1) - , enfim decida-se.
  3. 00:11:047 (3,4,5) - acho que fica melhor na ordem inversa, primeiro o slider e depois 2 notas consecutivas na frente imo pois segue o vocal.
  4. 00:13:297 (1) - hm creio que fica melhor transformando em um slider 1/1 e adicionando uma single note aqui 00:13:859 -
  5. 00:30:734 (3) - isso é confuso porque justamente começa no tick vermelho e as anteriores começam no tick branco, melhor sugestão seria: adicionar notas nesses pontos 00:30:547 - 00:31:109 - para seguir o vocal e não ter essa quebra.

Advanced
  1. 00:19:297 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - momento nazi, se vc perceber a sessão anterior e a proxima a seguir utiliza diferentes sequencias de notas nessa voce aplica a mesma sequencia(sabe: 1 nota, 1 slider 2/1 e um slider 1/2.) vai que tenha alguem chato que cite isso quando estiver qualified. Não é errado, mas poderia aleatoriezar q


apenas isso amore fora isso ta 10 o map e boa sorte
Ataraxia
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Ataraxia

Kalindraz wrote:

Pequenas sugestões pois ja está com star e o mod final fica com a nohzomi
My Dear

  1. 00:08:047 (2,3) - poderia substituir por algo clicavel, por incrivel que pareca essa foi as unicas notas que seguem apenas o vocal fora do ritmo, sendo que todas as outras seguem vocal e ritmo enfim preencha os tick vermelhos com notas, um exemplo de como elas seguem de forma bacana na timeline http://puu.sh/oMKv7.jpg. essa sessão inteira eu segui o vocal, ignorei o ritmo, nas outras partes , eu também segui mais o vocal e ignorei ritmo, e nessa parte e meio inviavel tentar usar ticks vermelhos pois vai ficar estranho ver varios Hits numa parte que ela segue 100% os beat. Mas otima sugestão
  2. 00:08:797 (1,2) - a distancia entre essas notas está meio irregular, poderia só fixar a distancia do 00:09:547 (2) - ou arrumar a shape do 00:08:797 (1) - , enfim decida-se. Dei uma resnap bem geral nessa sessao inteira, agora esta constante igualmente, acho que assim resolve isso então
  3. 00:11:047 (3,4,5) - acho que fica melhor na ordem inversa, primeiro o slider e depois 2 notas consecutivas na frente imo pois segue o vocal. como disse o mod na Nozhomi, eu deixei exatamente do jeito que ela falo por que se você escutar bem, vai perceber que aqui 00:11:047 (3,4) - Sao dois momentos "fortes" se fosse um slider nao faria sentido, é mais viavel ser tres clicaveis direto do que 2 clicados e uma pausa para o proximo beat :/
  4. 00:13:297 (1) - hm creio que fica melhor transformando em um slider 1/1 e adicionando uma single note aqui 00:13:859 - Creio que não, pois o vocal nessa parte é como algo que "diminui gradualmente" no tick vermelho 00:13:859 - ... Mas se fosse seguir o ritmo de fato seria 100% viavel, então otima sugestão
  5. 00:30:734 (3) - isso é confuso porque justamente começa no tick vermelho e as anteriores começam no tick branco, melhor sugestão seria: adicionar notas nesses pontos 00:30:547 - 00:31:109 - para seguir o vocal e não ter essa quebra.Eu entendo que pode ser confuso, tanto que ja teve 3 mods falando disso, eu quero deixar isso desse jeito pois se você "sentir o ritmo" você vai perceber como é bom do jeito que esta, Pois sao dois beats que passam para gente a impressão de "finalizado" e seguindo esse ritmo você não vai errar ou ter problemas em se confundir, e se for vocal vai quebrar toda Sessao que segui o ritmo. Mas como estou preocupado com isso, eu vou pesquisar mais sobre esse negocio

Advanced
  1. 00:19:297 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - momento nazi, se vc perceber a sessão anterior e a proxima a seguir utiliza diferentes sequencias de notas nessa voce aplica a mesma sequencia(sabe: 1 nota, 1 slider 2/1 e um slider 1/2.) vai que tenha alguem chato que cite isso quando estiver qualified. Não é errado, mas poderia aleatoriezar qSe o cara falar isso num collab eu vou bater nesse retardado pode printa,isso é um collab e o jeito de mappear vai de pessoa para pessoa, se alguem reclamar disso vai ser alguem desesperado pra dar DQ em qualquer coisa que ver, não faz sentido isso



apenas isso amore fora isso ta 10 o map e boa sorte
Valeu Kalindo, otima sugestões <3
te amo
Ataraxia
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Ataraxia

KittyAdventure wrote:

Ataraxia: Please set my CS to 3.2 or 3.3
CS 3.3 Now !
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