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Kana Nishino - Darling

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Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Fixed all etc. DeRandom Otaku's mod because it's already blanket but used distance snap!
Thank you for mod~ <3

Upgrade! :3

Kitty's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42359
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 55297
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Darling
TitleUnicode:Darling
Artist:Kana Nishino
ArtistUnicode:Kana Nishino
Creator:Ataraxia
Version:Kitty's Normal
Source:
Tags:gokugohan12468 fabiojhon Hoen KittyAdventure Marianna kaitlin japan record award with love short ver version cut -wwwww kaitlin japan record award
BeatmapID:954154
BeatmapSetID:443078

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"KittyAdventure.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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43297,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
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Combo3 : 0,255,255
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Mekki
1,793 posts
Joined November 2014
Mekki
I'll prob mod it soon. This song is love ♥

Hey, as I ''promised'' :3

[Marianna's Easy]
  1. 00:08:797 (4) - Remove your NC combo here, doesn't fit your comboing pattern. NOTE: same here 00:11:797 (1) -
  2. 00:35:797 (1) - I don't hear a cymbal sound here for having a finish. Just remove it, it sounds useless. And same for NC, remove it from there too!
  3. 00:38:047 (2) - Movement is very umconfortable to play here, the position that (2) it is compared to (1) makes a bad flow, especially for beginners. Try using something softer like that > http://puu.sh/ooxcY/2bbfe86658.jpg
  4. 00:46:297 (1) - It'd be good if slider body weren't completely covered by (3), as it can confuse beginners due to heavy overlap.
  5. 00:59:797 (2) - You missed a clap at the slider tail (end).
  6. 01:01:297 (3) - Put NC here to be consistent with your comboing and remove it here 01:02:797 (1).
Nice!

[Kitty's Normal]
  1. Why you don't try using CS 3,5? It'd fill the gap with Hard (that is CS 5) better.
  2. Set slider tick rate to 1. Being on 2 makes non sense on this song, as you are giving unecessary combo and score for players.
  3. 00:07:297 (1,2) - I really can't understand what you are trying to follow with those long sliders, first of all, you are ignoring a lot of important beats. Second, they doesn't fit the gap to Hard very well. As you can see, vocal is ending 1/1 earlier, so that means 00:08:047 (1) - here. shortening both sliders 1/1 and then add a note would be a much better idea.
  4. 00:11:797 (4,1) - Slider head is being completely covered by (4)'s tail. That's very bad, keep in mind that this is a Normal, you should avoid causing extra confusing to beginners :)
  5. 00:14:797 (4) - This NC shouldn't be here, as represented by your 2 stanzas comboing pattern.
  6. 00:42:922 (1) - For a normal diff with this BPM, 2 beats after spinner is necessary, not just 1. Delete this note, or finish the spinner here 00:41:797.
  7. 00:53:797 (2,3,4) - You could follow rhythm much better on this part using something like that http://puu.sh/ooyyE/aa49177f9d.jpg You are losing so many important beats with those long sliders :(
Well, apart from almost all 3/1 and 4/1 sliders, this diff seems pretty nice. Great job!

[My Dear]
  1. 00:03:172 (2) - Why you don't try softening the shape of this slider to look like (1)? It'd make visual more stable.
  2. 00:52:297 (1,2,3) - This pattern looks very unpolished with every aspect of the map. First because I wasn't expecting the slider pointing at this angle, it feels so sudden... And... It breaks the flow D: And second, this overlap doesn't seem proposital and it's a bit bad :l Why you don't try something like that? http://puu.sh/ooz3H/e1b6dbc64d.jpg Or, if you still insist on having it pointed to another angle, try that http://puu.sh/oozc8/1a3dd6256a.jpg
  3. 00:17:234 (3,1) - Oh please, blanket could be clearly improved here. http://puu.sh/oozkY/1724635180.jpg
Nice job with that! Overall it's a good set GL!
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

MkGuh wrote:

I'll prob mod it soon. This song is love ♥

Hey, as I ''promised'' :3

[My Dear]
  1. 00:03:172 (2) - Why you don't try softening the shape of this slider to look like (1)? It'd make visual more stable.
  2. 00:52:297 (1,2,3) - This pattern looks very unpolished with every aspect of the map. First because I wasn't expecting the slider pointing at this angle, it feels so sudden... And... It breaks the flow D: And second, this overlap doesn't seem proposital and it's a bit bad :l Why you don't try something like that? http://puu.sh/ooz3H/e1b6dbc64d.jpg Or, if you still insist on having it pointed to another angle, try that http://puu.sh/oozc8/1a3dd6256a.jpg
  3. 00:17:234 (3,1) - Oh please, blanket could be clearly improved here. http://puu.sh/oozkY/1724635180.jpg
Nice job with that! Overall it's a good set GL!
Wow MkGuh, Very thanks, i fixed all
Trynna
714 posts
Joined May 2013
Trynna
[Marianna's Easy]

00:52:297 (1) - blanket a bit off :c
btw beautiful diff

[My Dear]

00:02:422 (3,1,2) - eu pessoalmente tentaria descolar essas notas um pouquinho
00:13:297 (1) - http://puu.sh/orkB3/b79c41c326.jpg me atrevo a dizer que uma nota assim deixaria mais espontâneo
00:33:172 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/orkDs/7fc04672d5.jpg acho que algo assim não afetaria muito a jogabilidade e deixaria um tanto quanto mais esteticamente bonito
00:40:672 (2,3) - x: 249 y: 309 (lembrando de ajustar 00:41:234 (4) - depois caso for mudar)
squirrelpascals
982 posts
Joined March 2015
squirrelpascals
M4M!

General
• The artist name in the ranked version of the set is Nishino Kana, not vice versa

My Dear
• 00:06:547 (3,1) - Decrease spacing? It's still a calm part

• 00:08:797 (1) - move to x240 y242? (puts 3 on the slidertail)

• 00:27:359 (2) - Curve/angle this a little more?

• 00:30:734 (3,1) - Decrease this spacing

• 00:32:797 (1,2,3) - Make 3 align with 1 better, like this? http://imgur.com/RIbotYw.png

Kitty Normal
• 00:16:297 (1,2) - You can blanket here if you wanted to

• 00:19:859 (2,3) - I would generally not recommend stacking in Normal. It could be more consistent with these patterns 00:25:859 (2,3) anyways

• 00:59:797 (4) - Make this two sliders? One at 00:59:797 and another at 01:00:547 would be nice

• 01:02:797 (3,4) - Why not curve these like 01:01:297 (1,2) ?

Marianna Easy
• 00:23:047 (2,3) - Make this blanket look nicer? (Adjust 2nd slider node)

• 00:41:422 (2,3) - Blanket here

• 00:44:797 (3,1) - The overlap of 3 doesn't read well for new players

• 00:51:922 (4,1) - Adjust sliderend of 1 to make a better blanket

Well mapped you guys!
Good luck! :)
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia
[My Dear]

00:02:422 (3,1,2) - eu pessoalmente tentaria descolar essas notas um pouquinho Opa
00:13:297 (1) - http://puu.sh/orkB3/b79c41c326.jpg me atrevo a dizer que uma nota assim deixaria mais espontâneo Opa²
00:33:172 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/orkDs/7fc04672d5.jpg acho que algo assim não afetaria muito a jogabilidade e deixaria um tanto quanto mais esteticamente bonito Opa³
00:40:672 (2,3) - x: 249 y: 309 (lembrando de ajustar 00:41:234 (4) - depois caso for mudar) e Opa4 (n tinha o 4 menor ;c)
valeu <3 otimas sugestoes
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

squirrelpascals wrote:

M4M!

General
• The artist name in the ranked version of the set is Nishino Kana, not vice versa But the "real" correct is Kana Nishino, is the correct metadata

My Dear
• 00:06:547 (3,1) - Decrease spacing? It's still a calm part I Follow the Distance snap :p

• 00:08:797 (1) - move to x240 y242? (puts 3 on the slidertail) uh.. yes

• 00:27:359 (2) - Curve/angle this a little more? Yes

• 00:30:734 (3,1) - Decrease this spacing but i follow the DS...

• 00:32:797 (1,2,3) - Make 3 align with 1 better, like this? http://imgur.com/RIbotYw.png Fixed !


Well mapped you guys!
Good luck! :)
Thanks !
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Will check tomorrow!
AmigoDoChroome
228 posts
Joined September 2014
AmigoDoChroome
oi fabio m4m dos parça; https://osu.ppy.sh/b/956030

Easy
00:15:172 (2) - stack estranha
00:19:297 (1) - x236 y288
00:28:297 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988887

Normal
cs 4?
00:10:672 (2) - move to x288 y304
00:15:547 (3) - replace it with a simple curved slider
00:17:797 (2) - x444 y224
00:39:547 (4) - ctrl shift r; +4

Hard
00:04:109 (1) - ctrl >
00:16:297 (1) - distancia forçada
00:21:922 (3,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988949
00:23:797 (1) - ctrl g; duas vezes ctrl <
00:51:172 (2,3,5) - perto demais

boa sorte com o mapa~
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

AmigoDoChroome wrote:

oi fabio m4m dos parça; https://osu.ppy.sh/b/956030


Hard
00:04:109 (1) - ctrl > Nah
00:16:297 (1) - distancia forçada Opa
00:21:922 (3,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988949 Eu estou fazendo um Flow Linear, e isso quebraria o flow inteiro do mapa, e não é necessario tanto assim :p
00:23:797 (1) - ctrl g; duas vezes ctrl < Gostei, mas isso quebraria o mapa todo, pois so ocorreria apenas essa vez, eu fiz tudo seguido e bonitinho, mas achei daora essa sugestão :D
00:51:172 (2,3,5) - perto demais Corrigi"da"

boa sorte com o mapa~
Valeu Jc das tampa
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
http://puu.sh/oskvD/5b64dc063f.osu

:3~
Nickelony
402 posts
Joined January 2013
Nickelony
from #modreqs

[General]

I think the kiai time is a little bit too long, try to make it shorter.

[Marianna's Easy]

00:08:797 (4) - this slider is touching this circle: 00:08:422 (3) - and it's breaking the blanket
00:23:047 (2,3) - it's touching again, please fix :P
00:41:422 (2,3) - fix blanket

the rest is fine ;)

[Kitty's Normal]

00:59:797 (4) - the 2nd curve is not perfect round, try to use a hitcircle to make it rounder, like this: http://puu.sh/osSQq.jpg (remember to remove the hitcircle if finished!)

nice diff!!! :o

[My Dear]

00:10:297 (1,2,3) - the reverse arrow breaks the flow, I recommend to do something like this: http://puu.sh/osTG9.jpg
00:13:297 (1) - this wave doesn't fit the blanket, try this: http://puu.sh/osTKp.jpg
00:28:859 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:00:922 (4,1) - ^
00:32:797 (1,3) - these sliders are touching, which doesn't look good, try this: http://puu.sh/osTV5.jpg
01:02:422 (4) - try this: http://puu.sh/osU2K.jpg looks better

rest is fine. :)

That's all, good luck!
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Nickelony wrote:

from #modreqs

[General]

I think the kiai time is a little bit too long, try to make it shorter. i will check this

[My Dear]

00:10:297 (1,2,3) - the reverse arrow breaks the flow, I recommend to do something like this: http://puu.sh/osTG9.jpg i Think is good with this, i follow the Vocal's moment

00:13:297 (1) - this wave doesn't fit the blanket, try this: http://puu.sh/osTKp.jpg Fixed !
00:28:859 (2,3) - fix blanket Fixed !
01:00:922 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:32:797 (1,3) - these sliders are touching, which doesn't look good, try this: http://puu.sh/osTV5.jpg
01:02:422 (4) - try this: http://puu.sh/osU2K.jpg looks better Reeealy better :D

rest is fine. :)

That's all, good luck!
very thanks Nicke ♥
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
overall, this map is really good and calm to play plus the song is already good. so don't expect my mod to be long.

[Darling]
  1. 00:14:047 (2,1) - I saw you pay attention to blanket so I mention this one. it's not a good blanket yet. (move 2's tail to right a bit). also 00:18:547 (3) and goes on. please check blankets on your map again.
  2. 00:24:359 (2,3,4,1,2) - why it's suddenly short spacing? I don't feel like the song going that way.
  3. 00:25:859 (2) - spread to this? more fit with vocal. you also did like this at 00:22:859 (2,3,4) which sounds really good.
  4. 00:28:297 (1,2,3) - why you make the spacing inconsistent? idk if it's intentional. not that different in gameplay , agreed, but better if you make them consistent. apply to all same case.
  5. 00:35:422 (4) - increase spacing. so short.
  6. 00:52:297 (1) - ^
  7. overall, it's really a great diff. just make it more polish by fixing all blanket and inconsistent spacing the whole map.
[Kitty]
  1. 00:14:797 (1) - remove NC, you NC per every two stanza.
  2. 00:29:797 (1) - ^
  3. 00:42:922 (1) - I highly recommend you to replace this note to somewhere closer to the center for being friendly to normal-player and make it easier to hit after the spinner.
[marianna]
  1. 00:23:797 (3) - move second point (sorry that don't know what is it called) to 446|341 for more blanket. I mention this because it's almost touch and pretty noticeable.
  2. 00:29:797 (1) - remove NC, you NC per every two stanza.
  3. 00:34:297 (1) - idk if this still a case recently-mapping. blanket would solve if you wanna be safe. (overlapped makes beginner hard to read) << this reason.
    00:35:797 (1) - remove NC, you NC per every two stanza.
  4. 00:52:297 (1) - blanket is off (noticeable)
  5. 00:59:797 (2) - same as 00:34:297 (1) - would be great if you discuss this with BN or QAT. if it's fine, fine then.
  6. 01:04:297 (5,1) - switch NC here actually.
  7. 01:05:797 (1,2,3,1) - this pattern is more friendly to beginner tbh, less confusing.
nice mapset. only thing that bug me is normal has CS 3 but hard CS 5. the gap is pretty large imo. beware of that. good luck !
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
http://puu.sh/ot2wC/0c1b1a81fa.osu

Some fixed~
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

P A N wrote:

overall, this map is really good and calm to play plus the song is already good. so don't expect my mod to be long.

[Darling]
  1. 00:14:047 (2,1) - I saw you pay attention to blanket so I mention this one. it's not a good blanket yet. (move 2's tail to right a bit). also 00:18:547 (3) and goes on. please check blankets on your map again. All FIxed
  2. 00:24:359 (2,3,4,1,2) - why it's suddenly short spacing? I don't feel like the song going that way. Fixed
  3. 00:25:859 (2) - spread to this? more fit with vocal. you also did like this at 00:22:859 (2,3,4) which sounds really good. sure
  4. 00:28:297 (1,2,3) - why you make the spacing inconsistent? idk if it's intentional. not that different in gameplay , agreed, but better if you make them consistent. apply to all same case.I think is good like mine
  5. 00:35:422 (4) - increase spacing. so short.Ya
  6. 00:52:297 (1) - ^Ya²
  7. overall, it's really a great diff. just make it more polish by fixing all blanket and inconsistent spacing the whole map. Thanks !

nice mapset. only thing that bug me is normal has CS 3 but hard CS 5. the gap is pretty large imo. beware of that. good luck !
smau5
133 posts
Joined October 2014
smau5
random from #modreqs
@kitty's normal
00:46:297 (1) - how about making this a slider 2times repeat slider, i think it doesnt match with the part flow
00:52:297 (1) - this one too
00:53:797 (2) - make this a slider 1/1 slider and then a circle at 00:54:547
00:55:297 (1) - slider repeat 2 times
00:59:797 (4) - same
01:04:297 (1) - same

i feel like the chorus it's more groovy and long sliders does't fit.
EarwormS
10 posts
Joined January 2014
EarwormS
Hello! -From ur m4m in #modreqs
I'm a rookie modder.
Here is my mod~

Marianna's Easy
Some suggestions:
00:08:797 (4) - UnWhistled from sliderhead (Sound like the singer's voice
00:59:797 (2) - Move up a bit. Make 00:58:297 (1,2) - better. Like this


Kitty's Normal
Suggest OD3
01:04:297 (1) - make this two turning points fit with the drumbeats(own opinion

My Dear
00:13:297 (1) - slider tail~
00:30:172 (2) - & 00:42:172 (2) - add a Finish

>Nice song and nice maps.
>I cant give more suggestions because those maps are better than mine.
>Good luck!
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Disagree all mods etc. P A N, MkGuh, squirrelpascals, AmigoDoChroome, and Nickelony's mod! (Seriously, i feel sick & tired with IRC so can't respond all mods ;w;)

CS = I better used 3 than 3.5 or 4, it's really distrub! if QAT & BN say same, i keep to used 3
Long Slider = I following the vocal
Not Curve = Trying used other flow
00:11:797 (4,1) = It's overlap, not really hard :>

Ataraxia ask me to make normal is maximal 1.90- star rating and i thing 1.72 it's hard for me!
I put long slider because it's simple & clean to rank :3

Kitty's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42359
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 55297
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Darling
TitleUnicode:Darling
Artist:Kana Nishino
ArtistUnicode:Kana Nishino
Creator:Ataraxia
Version:Kitty's Normal
Source:
Tags:gokugohan12468 fabiojhon Hoen KittyAdventure Marianna kaitlin japan record award with love short ver version cut -wwwww kaitlin japan record award
BeatmapID:954154
BeatmapSetID:443078

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"KittyAdventure.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

EarwormS wrote:

Hello! -From ur m4m in #modreqs
I'm a rookie modder.
Here is my mod~

My Dear
00:13:297 (1) - slider tail~ Already A Tail
00:30:172 (2) - & 00:42:172 (2) - add a Finish
Its a good idea, but i wanna to follow with simple drums clap, and the finish is not good with the drum

>Nice song and nice maps.
>I cant give more suggestions because those maps are better than mine.
>Good luck!
Thanks !
Hitorikko
301 posts
Joined August 2013
Hitorikko
General
diff spread is not good. you need to make the normal diff harder. try targeting 2-2.1 star diff.

Marianna's Easy
00:13:297 (1) - bad flow ( try ctrl+H and rotate it by -90 )
00:23:047 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:35:422 (2,3) - ^
00:41:422 (2,3) - ^
00:47:797 (2,3,1) - this flow is bad IMO. why not just follow the flow of the slider ?
00:56:797 (2) - ctrl+H ?
00:59:797 (2,1,2) - bad flow
01:06:922 (4) - NC here
01:07:297 (1) - remove NC

Kitty's Normal
00:08:797 (2) - NC
00:17:797 (2) - ^
00:31:297 (1) - ctrl+J for better flow
00:33:922 (4) - off grid :?
00:35:797 (3,1) - stack properly
00:54:922 (3,1) - fix blanket

My Dear
00:10:297 (1,3) - overlap
00:46:297 (1,4) - stack properly
00:52:297 (1,3) - ^

Nice song ! Good Luck !
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Hitorikko wrote:

General
diff spread is not good. you need to make the normal diff harder. try targeting 2-2.1 star diff. or a advanced diff :D


My Dear
00:10:297 (1,3) - overlap Done
00:46:297 (1,4) - stack properly Fixed
00:52:297 (1,3) - ^ ^

Nice song ! Good Luck !
Thanks !
Hitorikko
301 posts
Joined August 2013
Hitorikko

Ataraxia wrote:

or a advanced diff :D
you can also do that. but, their will still be problem with the diff spread cos total number of notes in easy is 71 and normal and normal is 83. :o 12 notes difference is not good. you really need to make the normal diff harder IMO
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna

Hitorikko wrote:

you can also do that. but, their will still be problem with the diff spread cos total number of notes in easy is 71 and normal and normal is 83. :o 12 notes difference is not good. you really need to make the normal diff harder IMO
You see, we want the advanced
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Hitorikko wrote:

Ataraxia wrote:

or a advanced diff :D
you can also do that. but, their will still be problem with the diff spread cos total number of notes in easy is 71 and normal and normal is 83. :o 12 notes difference is not good. you really need to make the normal diff harder IMO
Very Thanks , is not a reeaaaal problem x.x but the advanced diff is real good, now, Is Cs 3, 3 ,4 and 5 Correct .
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
I never say to change cs is 3,4 <___<
Well, like before i say, Ataraxia already tell me to make normal diff with 1.90 star rating, i mean this is calm and beautiful song, i can't make it with cs 3+, but it's already hard for newbie players!
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia
I Don't think necessary 2 stars normal, because of the music, is calm and relaxing, for this, i want a "easy normal"

So, in chose to do a advanced diff, its the real soluction and the spreads its real good now :)
Doj
232 posts
Joined March 2014
Doj
Most of these mods are probably gonna be cosmetic because it's pretty consistent already

Marianna's Easy
  1. 00:27:547 (3,1) - You can make this look better by doing this

    SPOILER
  2. 01:01:297 (1,2) - You can apply the above suggestion to this too
  3. 01:04:297 (1) - I don't think this slider shape fits how smooth all your others are.

    Nazi blanket fixes
  4. 00:52:297 (1) -
  5. 00:35:797 (3) -
Kitty's Normal
  1. 00:44:797 (3,4,5) - I don't think that (4) fits where it is. It'll sounds and play much better if it were stacked on 00:46:297 (1) - instead.
  2. 00:52:297 (1) - fix blankettt
  3. 00:55:297 (1) - ^
Marixia's Advanced
  1. 00:10:297 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern could be improved. Maybe if you made it something like this


  2. 00:56:797 (1) - new combo
  3. 01:02:797 (1) - new combo
My Dear
  1. One of the patterns for your kiai time is kinda weird imo Like 00:51:172 (2,3,4,5) - and 00:54:172 (2,3,4) - and 00:57:172 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:03:172 (2,3,4,5) - I think a better pattern would be something like this


  2. 00:30:734 (3) - mmm I don't like how this note is stacked under the other two when there's a gap in between them. I think placing it elsewhere would work better.
This mapset is pretty solid imo. Good luck!
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
@Doj
No changes
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Doj wrote:

Most of these mods are probably gonna be cosmetic because it's pretty consistent already

My Dear
  1. One of the patterns for your kiai time is kinda weird imo Like 00:51:172 (2,3,4,5) - and 00:54:172 (2,3,4) - and 00:57:172 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:03:172 (2,3,4,5) - I think a better pattern would be something like this .


  2. 00:30:734 (3) - mmm I don't like how this note is stacked under the other two when there's a gap in between them. I think placing it elsewhere would work better. .
This mapset is pretty solid imo. Good luck!
Thanks !
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
Marianna, will be great if you reply mods properly. Thanks.
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey
From m4m queue

  • Marianna's Easy
  1. 00:58:297 (1,2) - You did a great job on blankets in this diff, I think you can improve this obvious place as well, right?

    Kitty's Normal
  2. 00:11:797 (4) - 00:17:797 (2) - to keep consistency, please fix the spacing to 1.1. 1.03 or 1.05 is a bit incorrect
  3. 00:29:797 (4) - have a NC to stress the change of the music?

    Marixia's Advanced
  4. 00:48:172 - 00:49:672 - 00:54:172 - miss a clap?
  5. 01:00:547 - addtion=soft then clap it?
  6. 01:06:734 (2) - Sampleset=drum, then add a finish?

Totally fine to me, good luck :)
Perklone
86 posts
Joined January 2014
Perklone
M4M :D

Marixia's Advanced
00:30:922 (3) - add a note like this ?
01:02:609 (4) - move the slider 1 tick earlier and add a reverse arrow like this?

01:06:734 (1) - NC?
01:07:109 - i think this would add to the beat

My Dear
Shouldn't CS4 would be more appropiate for this level?
00:21:359 (2) - Slider could be raised just a bit.
00:59:797 (1,2,3,4) - curved would be beautiful IMO like this?

i only can do a little bit :P still learning.
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

[-R1] wrote:

M4M :D

Marixia's Advanced
00:30:922 (3) - add a note like this ?And move the slider one tick back? in not want to follow the vocal in this part

The rest is Marianna's Part.

My Dear
Shouldn't CS4 would be more appropiate for this level?Are no problem to Make a High CS in a hard, since you not force the map, the DS are low and constant , so don't problem
00:21:359 (2) - Slider could be raised just a bit.Fixed !
00:59:797 (1,2,3,4) - curved would be beautiful IMO like this?Realy Beautiful!

i only can do a little bit :P still learning.
don't worry, its nice sugestions, Thanks !
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Marixia's Advanced

[*]00:48:172 - 00:49:672 - 00:54:172 - miss a clap? Wow, Thanks
[*]01:00:547 - addtion=soft then clap it?Its Marianna part but Really see good, so in applied
[*]01:06:734 (2) - Sampleset=drum, then add a finish?I Left to marianna choose[/list][/notice]

Totally fine to me, good luck :) [/quote]

Thanks !
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna

P A N wrote:

Marianna, will be great if you reply mods properly. Thanks.
I'm Lazy, Thanks.
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
All fixed about Kitty's normal on @Frey 's mod (Yup i have permission to do this)

osu file format v14

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Artist:Kana Nishino
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Creator:Ataraxia
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Tags:gokugohan12468 fabiojhon Hoen KittyAdventure Marianna kaitlin japan record award with love short ver version cut -wwwww kaitlin japan record award
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Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
Hi~ the M4M

[General :]
  1. Metadata : Artist : 西野カナ (http://www.nishinokana.com/disco/archive/?SECL-1551)
  2. Timing : Ok
  3. AiMod : Ok
  4. SB : /
  5. Other: You put 2 times "kaitlin japan record award" on tags, that's useless. Also can you explain me the -wwwww tag ?

[Mapping / Rhythm :]

- Marianna's Easy :

  1. Spinner are goooooooooooood.
  2. Check your blankets on this diff and should be fine.
- Kitty's Normal :

  1. I'm quite sad than CS is the same as Easy. Maybe increase it by 0.5 or smth like that (but not more than 3.5 plsssss).
  2. 00:11:797 (4,1) - Tbh it could be really hard to read for a newbie, the overlap is quite huge and even NC is not enough imo.
  3. 00:35:422 (2) - It would be lovely for flow if you could move it to 332:256.
  4. 00:52:297 (1,2) - Was a nice blanket try, but no try again. Same for 00:54:922 (3,1) - .
- Marixia's Advanced :

  1. 00:07:297 (1,2) - Lol dem anchor points. Are they really that necessairy ? XD
  2. 00:26:422 (3) - Could it have the same shape than 00:25:672 (2) - ? Same for 00:27:172 (2,3) - .
  3. 00:39:922 (5) - Put the end of it at center of 00:40:297 (1) - pls.
  4. 00:41:797 (2,1) - Did you tried to stack them ?
  5. Why everyone have problem with blankets ? (ex : 01:04:859 (2,3) - )
- My Dear :

  1. 00:11:422 - This sound is really strong, but you make it play passively. I suggest you to switch it with 00:11:609 (5) - (like this http://puu.sh/oLSWp/4f8807b0cf.jpg&#41;.
  2. 00:46:859 (3,4) - Could you blanket both ?
  3. 00:51:734 (5,1) - Why a such low spacing when the restart of vocal is quite strong ? It makes no sense. It just looks like you was blockek by the top of the grind and you reduce spacing to put it here. Pls fix that and use at least 1.30x spacing :c
  4. 00:56:422 (4,1) - Tbh this pattern looks awful and quite random, so what about this instead http://puu.sh/oLTlb/441d623ebf.jpg ? (I put AR0 to show the entire pattern don't worry).

[Hitsound :]
  1. Looks fine.

Not a bad map, maybe try to catch some more mods to clean stupid nazi stuff and call me back~
Mukyu~
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ the M4M

[Mapping / Rhythm :]

- Marianna's Easy :

  1. Spinner are goooooooooooood.
  2. Check your blankets on this diff and should be fine. Sorry but Blankets dont make changes ingame
- Kitty's Normal :

  1. I'm quite sad than CS is the same as Easy. Maybe increase it by 0.5 or smth like that (but not more than 3.5 plsssss). Fixed
  2. 00:11:797 (4,1) - Tbh it could be really hard to read for a newbie, the overlap is quite huge and even NC is not enough imo. Fixed
  3. 00:35:422 (2) - It would be lovely for flow if you could move it to 332:256. Fixed
  4. 00:52:297 (1,2) - Was a nice blanket try, but no try again. Same for 00:54:922 (3,1) - .
- Marixia's Advanced :

  1. 00:07:297 (1,2) - Lol dem anchor points. Are they really that necessairy ? XD Yup xD
  2. 00:26:422 (3) - Could it have the same shape than 00:25:672 (2) - ? Same for 00:27:172 (2,3) - .
  3. 00:39:922 (5) - Put the end of it at center of 00:40:297 (1) - pls. No changes ingame~
  4. 00:41:797 (2,1) - Did you tried to stack them ? Ataraxia fix this xD
  5. Why everyone have problem with blankets ? (ex : 01:04:859 (2,3) - ) Because players do not look the blankets
Kitty is in trouble, I have permission to do so

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Mercusheigan
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Joined December 2012
Mercusheigan
Oia esse menino ganhando icon de BN :3

gz ata, reta final agora :D
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