TicClick wrote:

Hard
00:39:128 (2) - isn't it too far? should be alright
00:52:733 (6) - whistle for the end? k
00:53:431 (1) - hm. Why there is a whistle for slider's beginning? It should be placed on its end. alright
00:54:128 (3) - the same as ^. If you agree with this, 00:54:826 (1) - remove whistle done
01:11:570 (1) - oh, that was unexpected changed

Backfire wrote:

Taiko
00:00:408 (1) - finish
00:01:628 - Finish
00:03:198 - Finish
00:04:452 - Finish
00:22:035 (128,129,130) - All finishes

GOD DAMNITT YOU FIGURE IT OUT.

I have no idea. This map is beyond repair IMO.

17:01 <_Gezo_> : ...
17:01 <_Gezo_> : wut
17:01 <_Gezo_> : 00:04:452 - Finish
17:01 <_Gezo_> : typo ?
17:02 <_Gezo_> : it's 1/8+4ms late if you talked about the 21
17:02 <_Gezo_> : 00:04:419 (21) - 
17:02 <Backfire> : yeah
17:02 <Backfire> : Im sorry
17:02 <_Gezo_> : np
17:02 <Backfire> : that happens.
17:02 <_Gezo_> : fixed
17:03 <_Gezo_> : and for 22.035
17:03 <_Gezo_> : 00:22:035 (128,130,132) - 1/1 finishes ?
17:03 <Backfire> : I suppose thats what I was talking about?
17:03 <_Gezo_> : because 1/2 are weird and 132 has a cymbal crash :P
17:03 <Backfire> : hold on.
17:04 <Backfire> : Hmm
17:04  *_Gezo_ is editing (U2 Akiyama - Mystic Oriental Love Consultation)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24830]
17:04 <_Gezo_> : ..;
17:04 <_Gezo_> : it was this one. xD
17:04 <Backfire> : lol.
17:04 <Backfire> : 00:22:793 - 
17:04 <Backfire> : right there sweety.
17:04 <_Gezo_> : 33*
17:05 <Backfire> : ;w;
17:07 <_Gezo_> : Well
17:07  *_Gezo_ is watching (U2 Akiyama - Mystic Oriental Love Consultation)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24830] [Gezo's Taiko Oni] 
17:07 <_Gezo_> : I prefer not putting finishes in that kind of map
17:09 <Backfire> : ...
17:09 <Backfire> : e-e
17:10 <Backfire> : Damnitt gezo
17:10 <Backfire> : can you like
17:10 <Backfire> : say you changed something at least
17:10 <Backfire> : I need some kd
17:10 <Backfire> : lol
17:10 <Backfire> : I can look at it again
17:11 <Backfire> : I found something
17:12 <Backfire> : :x
17:12 <_Gezo_> : ?
17:12 <Backfire> : 01:11:570 - 
17:12 <Backfire> : starting right here
17:12 <Backfire> : make it go
17:12 <Backfire> : d dk dk kd dk dk stream
17:12 <Backfire> : I mean
17:12 <Backfire> : what
17:12 <Backfire> : d dk dk stream
17:12 <Backfire> : ><
17:13 <_Gezo_> : d dk 3/4
17:13 <Backfire> : eh?
17:13 <_Gezo_> : d_dk_dk_dk_
17:13 <_Gezo_> : blank = no note
17:13 <Backfire> : yes
17:13 <Backfire> : It felt empty without it.
17:13 <_Gezo_> : but I wanted 1111 notes ;~;
17:14 <Backfire> : Aww.
17:14 <Backfire> : Well playability over novelty
17:14 <_Gezo_> : gotta remove some notes in overmapped part
17:14 <Backfire> : Like what?
17:14 <_Gezo_> : as my taiko is pretty old
17:14 <Backfire> : ah
17:15 <_Gezo_> : I feel stupid
17:15 <_Gezo_> : 01:21:338 (17) - 
17:15 <Backfire> : Why?
17:15 <Backfire> : that should be a clap
17:15 <Backfire> : o-o
17:15 <_Gezo_> : I already did what you said here
17:16 <Backfire> : yeah
17:16 <Backfire> : lol
17:16 <_Gezo_> : delicious number
17:16 <Backfire> : but you forgot to in the other part.
17:16 <_Gezo_> : 1118
17:16 <_Gezo_> : +7 = 1125
17:16 <_Gezo_> : yay
17:16 <Backfire> : ;w;
17:16 <_Gezo_> : what other part ?
17:17 <Backfire> : Nothing
17:17 <_Gezo_> : starting from 02:33:373 (155) - ?
17:17 <Backfire> : No no I was
17:17 <Backfire> : its
17:17 <_Gezo_> : wait no
17:17 <Backfire> : neverming.
17:17 <Backfire> : mind*
17:18 <Backfire> : Hey you know this part
17:18 <Backfire> : 02:46:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 
17:18 <Backfire> : remove number 3 =w=
17:18 <_Gezo_> : wait
17:18  *_Gezo_ is editing (Hiro feat. Sweet little 30's - Heaven is a '57 metallic gray(gimmix))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29444]
17:18 <Backfire> :  What
17:21  *Backfire pokes
17:21 <_Gezo_> : Fixing your mod
17:22 <Backfire> : alright ;~;

ziin wrote:

[saten]
You might want to remap this. IDK. It's not up to your usual quality.

Hellzero wrote:

02:22:384 (5) - ^ huh?

TicClick wrote:

Easy
01:12:966 (1) - make it.. umm.. wider,
01:20:640 (3) - oh. ^
01:27:617 (2) - straight edge?

pieguy1372 wrote:

impossiblexu's Easy:

01:04:594 (3) - new combo Fixed

ziin wrote:

[impossiblexu]
01:20:640 (3) - looks bad to have start and end so close together

IceBeam wrote:

[Saten's Hard]
a bit low OD for a hard difficulty,increase by 1(2)? if possible, I would like to use this OD.

00:38:954 (7) - looks a bit weird make the spacing similar to previous objects,please done
00:57:617 (5) - add a new combo mark here or rebuild the pattern,as the distance between (4) and (5) looks similar to (5) & (6)
This thing confused me,I thought there's another 1/2 jump and was about to missclick done
01:17:849 (3) - mirror this slider from 01:18:198 (4)? it'd look better,otherwise 4-th looks a bit odd and out of pattern done
01:28:140 (1) - place it under 01:28:140 (1) please,it looks much better if it's symmetrical I didn't get this one
01:46:280 (4) - covered by the slider,but at least it's readable and expected,so..ok ok

Saten-san wrote:

IceBeam wrote:

[b]01:28:140 (1) - place it under 01:28:140 (1) please,it looks much better if it's symmetrical I didn't get this one

SPOILER

IceBeam wrote:

I meant something like this:

SPOILER

The whole pattern is symmetrical,but the (6)-th object looks a bit out
Well,it's minor,so up to you

IceBeam wrote:

[impossiblexu's Easy]
00:08:082 (3) - I really don't like to see such sliders,especially in easier diffs.
Personally,simple plain sliders like 00:05:291 (4) look better.anyway,I think these tiny holdups affect the gameplay and beginners might not read it well and get a sliderbreak..

I won't point such sliders throughout the map,but I hope you will follow my suggestion and fix all of them or at least the most..

00:10:001 (2) - why not to extend it up to 00:10:524? it'll be easier to read,and the rhytm will be more consistent Fixed
00:14:361 (3) - I'dd add a finish here and after each 1 downbeat (long white tick)
soo,like this:
00:17:152 (1) - here
00:19:942 (1) - ^
00:25:524 (1) - ^ and so on

00:15:059 (4) - 1 grid up and right to make it symmetrical?
00:43:663 (3) - Add finishes to both notes?
01:53:431 (3) - 1 grid up
01:54:128 (5) - 1 grid up and right to make a perfect square shape

It's fine gameplay wise,but those finishes would improve hitsounds,they're a bit raw atm :<

1. 00:14:361 (3) - NC this, the majority of your combo are new combo on each 2 stanzas but not for this one here
2. 01:27:617 (2) - I suggest to made the slider end on x:128 y:264. I think the straight angle slider is not very appealing and how it touches 4 make the whole pattern looks crumpled
3. 01:49:942 (2) - (Nazi) try moving the 2 red anchors on the middle of the slider a little bit to the right (using grid lv4 move them 1 grid right) to make them also move the slider so it in a straight line with the previous slider

1. 01:22:559 (2) - the repeat sounds very awkward cause I don't hear any beat on the particular place. It's better if you use a long slider start from 01:22:559 to 01:23:082 or you can remove the repeat then add a circle at 01:23:082
2. 01:26:221 (6) - remove the finish, it doesn't suit the current position (the finish is more suitable in 01:26:919 imo)

1. 00:10:524 (1,2) - This stack has been shoot down by A BAT before because this are basically stack 0 which is unrankable. So please re-position it
2. 01:04:594 (1) - finish?

1. 3 unsnapped object!!
2. 00:07:209 (37) - big don is more suitable here
3. 00:08:779 (45) - ^
4. 00:14:361 (83,84,85) - kkd is more suited here
5. 01:40:175 (86,87,88,89,90) - you should add finish on these just like on 00:22:035 (128,129,130,131,132)
6. 01:54:826 (186) - big don
7. 02:29:361 (128,129) - change to katsu to follow the increasing pace on the music?
8. 02:31:106 (139) - make this a big don/katsu too. This will balance the rhythm on 02:30:757 (137) and it also fit the finish on the music
9. 02:42:442 (1) - this spinner should start on 02:42:355 cause most of your spinner are directly after the stream but this is the only one that's not

1. 00:11:221 (3) - why do you use 50% on this? it doesn't make any difference and the music doesn't indicate any rising or lowering volume
2. 00:45:059 (1) - finish this
3. 00:24:826 (7,8,9) - this totally break the flow, not only because of the jump but also because how it goes from below to up which is against the flow from the previous objects. I suggest to CTRL+R 00:24:826 (7,9)

IceBeam wrote:

[Saten's Hard]
00:57:617 (5,6) - same and btw in case of previous jump you should add new combo or increase a distance between them,as I pointed out earlier
something like this would be perfect:

SPOILER

Done

IceBeam wrote:

27 unsnapped objects

also..

01:24:041

02:42:181

IceBeam wrote:

[Insane]
01:28:140 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ты не исправил это? может все же лучше в одном направлении крутить? Мне больше нравится так, а то когда сильный flow иногда заносит (:

Hellzero wrote:

maybe, cuz i'm loser orz

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
00:57:442 (7,1) - Kind of a big jump, and doesn't flow very well I guess it didn't, fixed
01:22:035 (3,4) - I'd like a little more spacing between these. Left/right 2 grids looks good. done~
01:28:140 (1) - This is really pushing it for a hard difficulty. Way soon after a very short spinner. I guess you're right ;w;

Garven wrote:

[General]
The BG looks kinda low quality with all those artifacts replace BG
Tick rate 2 fits best with this song ok

[Normal]
00:34:245 (1) - This spinner was... kind of awkwardly placed. Especially since you don't follow up with similar usage during same parts of the music. remapped

[Insane]
AR -1 no
OD +1 added (not 2 OD cuz map have many streams and not so hight bpm. IMO it more fit)

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:16:628 (5) - Looks like you accidentally set this slider a little too long for some reason. wtf... fixed

[Saten]
Why did you increase the AR? Bring it back to 7. And while you're at it, increase OD to at least 6. fixed