jericho2442 wrote:

Colour 1 and 3 feel waaay too close tbh, i would try and make them easier to notice the colour change tbh

Easy
00:10:089 (1,2,3) - due to the shape of this pattern it makes the timing on the (3) extremely hard to read, maybe try to use a position whats easier to read, if you need a way of doing it just say Hmmm... could U give me a hand with doing this pattern more readable, please?:)
00:20:423 (1,2) - timing here breaks your flow and plays really bad, it plays and flows to the music MUCH better if you remove then (2) then move the (1) to start at 00:20:756 Fixed^^
01:02:423 (4) - new combo here to help split the music better Fixed^^
01:11:089 (5) - new combo for same reason Fixed^^
01:17:089 (3) - new combo Fixed^^

jericho2442 wrote:

Aleks' Sliders
00:30:923 (2) - New combo here so it follows the combo pattern before it fixed
00:50:756 (4) - new combo here fixed
00:52:423 (1,2) - put the new combo on the (2) insted fixed
01:00:423 (3) - new combo to help show the break in the pattern fixed
01:02:423 (5,1) - the stacking of the slider here really dont work good, its very annoying to read the timing here, i would advise to respace and move the slider so its easier to read Length of map ~1min. I think it's not a huge problem.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~Aleks' Sliders~
01:02:428 (3,1) - This is pretty confusing imo. I wouldn't mind it being in something like a Hard but this is a Normal so I'd suggest you to unstack it. fixed

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hello old bubble~


~Insane~
00:41:928 (2,3,4) - I think this spacing is a little bit too extreme but... oh well, it's passable >:
00:57:428 (1) - This is very very tricky, I suggest you move this away so the reverse arrow can be completely visible...
01:03:095 (3) - New Combo here to mark the spacing change.
01:03:928 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Again, very very tricky, probably because you can't see the numbers in any of them besides (6). If you move (7,9,11) a grid up it's way better to read.

Not so bad I guess, but [Insane] dissapointed me a bit at the end ;x
ok, I changed insane a bit. I hope now it looks better.
Also fixed spacing mistake o.o

Call me when you fix these~

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~ShiroKitty's Easy~
00:43:928 (1,1,1,1) - This is probably too nazi but these slider shapes bug me too much x3; If you delete the 3rd anchor point (the one that's making the "M" line, I think it looks way better =x (Before - After) fixed^^
01:07:761 (4) - Make it parallel to (3)? fixed^^

James2250 wrote:

-I know I bubbled this previously but some things I noticed

ShiroKitty's Easy:
00:51:928 (1,1) - I would either fix the stacking on this or move them to a different pattern fixed
00:54:594 (1,3) - you might as well avoid overlaps like this too fixed

Aleks' Sliders:
00:34:761 (1,1) - mirror these instead? fixed
00:44:261 (1) - start this at 00:44:094 fixed
01:13:594 (1) - start this at 01:13:428 fixed

Hard:
00:10:761 (3,1) - switch new combo fixed
00:21:428 (4) - new combo fixed
00:43:928 (8,1) - switch new combo to make this easier for players to read? NC fixed but i really dont know how it make more easier for players to read

Insane:
00:33:261 (6,1) - switch new combo? fixed
00:44:095 (1,2,13,14) - I would expect these to be aligned to follow the pattern of the whole combo fixed
00:48:095 (7) - give this a new combo to match the other stack and makes it easier to read imo fixed
00:46:595 (16,1) - switch new combo fixed
00:49:261 (6,1) - ^ fixed
01:02:761 (1,2) - kind of an unexpected jump here I think hope the new combo will help players to read it

Nothing too major to check up on, call me back after you have gone through it all

it took only 6 months for rank

h3k1ru wrote:

it took only 6 months for rank, too fast :P