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any34
sdfhfjfj
Reiji-RJ
Инсейн отличный
Звезда :3
Kamure
By Mod Request:

Easy
00:00:249 (1) - remove this
00:43:915 (1,1,1,1) - I don't suggest to use these sliders, so change them

hmmm, great....

Star....
Hushu_old
General:
Good song choice ;)
I think you've put a lot of effort into this! Very well!!

Hard:
0:01:249 - Make it go untill 0:01:582
0:01:748 - Note?
0:01:915 - ^
0:03:582 - ^
0:05:915 - ^
0:08:748 - Make it go untill 0:08:998
0:16:582 - Note
0:25:249 - No whistle sound
0:36:415 - Note
0:39:082 - ^
0:48:582 - Remove circle
0:48:748 - Put 1/2 snap erilier
0:50:582 - Note

Insane:
0:27:915 - Make it go untill 0:28:165 then repeat once
0:28:582 - Add slider till 0:28:915
0:30:748 - Unrepeat, move to 0:30:915
0:44:248 - So cool till the fallowing slider o_0
Saten
It looks fine, I just got one suggestion here

Easy
The approach Rate seems so slow D:
Might consider increasing it with 2 perhaps?


Anyway, Star~
Topic Starter
Hellzero

Hushu wrote:

General:
Good song choice ;)
I think you've put a lot of effort into this! Very well!!

Hard:
0:01:249 - Make it go untill 0:01:582 no
0:01:748 - Note?no
0:01:915 - ^no
0:03:582 - ^no
0:05:915 - ^no
0:08:748 - Make it go untill 0:08:998no
0:16:582 - Noteno
0:25:249 - No whistle sound
0:36:415 - Note ok
0:39:082 - ^ ok
0:48:582 - Remove circle ok
0:48:748 - Put 1/2 snap erilier ok
0:50:582 - Note ok

Insane:
0:27:915 - Make it go untill 0:28:165 then repeat once | 0:28:582 - Add slider till 0:28:915 interesting^^ changed but in another
0:30:748 - Unrepeat, move to 0:30:915 i think slider 00:30:582 - 00:30:915 better, changed
0:44:248 - So cool till the fallowing slider o_0 fix
Thank you very much. Great mod^^

chamelepeace710 wrote:

By Mod Request:

Easy
00:00:249 (1) - remove this ok, but why?
00:43:915 (1,1,1,1) - I don't suggest to use these sliders, so change them but i like it ;_;

hmmm, great.... thx

Star....

Saten-san wrote:

It looks fine, I just got one suggestion here

Easy
The approach Rate seems so slow D: I think so too
Might consider increasing it with 2 perhaps? ok


Anyway, Star~ thx
Zorlok_
Можно мне сделать изи? Или тайко дифу Это конечно было бы лучше :3
Yusu Aoi
Thank U Hellzero for fixing my diff! :)
Niva
Mod request via Forum PM

[General]
-> Offset : 82 (I'm not sure if placing notes before the first offset is allowed)

[ShiroKitty's Easy]
-> For me this is Easy diff is quite hard. Maybe you can change some circles to slider, but you don't have to change this.
00:25:248 (1) - One grid up and three grids right?
00:32:581 (4,5,6) - Change to repeating slider? (Looks ugly in play mode)
01:05:748 (1) - Please just use one hitsound here, using two at once sounds weird xD

[Aleks' sliders]
-> Change difficulty name to [Aleks' Sliders]?
Other than that, very nice diff, I can't find any problems :D

[Hard]
-> Using finish and clap at once sounds weird for me...
00:11:248 (4) - New combo maybe? (Because a jump is placed here)
00:36:248 (1,2) - Add clap at slider end?
00:38:915 (1) - ^, also add clap at (3)?
00:51:915 (10) - Add finish?

[Insane]
-> Add some clap hitsounds to the stream?
00:16:415 (1) - Hard to read. Also, I don't think a new combo here is required.

[Insane] is lovely, and I admire how this beatmap is fun while the filesize is only 1.4MB :)
Star!
AlMod
звезд☆нул
Dotsu
Hi~

My suggestions:

[General]


  • Offset should be about 94
[ShiroKitty's Easy]
This diff is a bit hard for easy.

  • 00:03:748 (4): Consider moving the whistle to 5 (And also the same part following)
    00:10:415 (2,3,4,5,6,7): Too hard
    00:12:415 (1): Add clap here
    00:15:082 (1): ^
    00:17:748 (1): ^
    00:20:415 (1): ^
    00:21:745 (2): Remove this clap
    01:03:248 (6,7,8): Move these notes 1/2 back
    01:04:582 (8): If you have moved this silder 1/2 back,add clap at the beginning and the end
    01:08:415 : Add a circle
    01:16:748 (1): Spinner end here
    01:17:248 (1): Use finish instead of clap at the end
[Aleks' sliders]
Hitsounds during Kiai Time are a bit random,doen’t sound very good.

  • 00:34:081 (5): You needn’t use soft hitsound,normal hitsound sounds good here
    00:44:081 (1): Spinner starts here
    00:48:478 (1): Add whistle here
    00:55:082 (1): Add clap at the beginning and the end
    00:55:915 (2,3): Remove Claps at the beginning
    01:03:082 (1): Add clap at the end
    01:04:748 (2): Move this clap to 01:05:081 (3)
    01:06:749 – 01:03:248 : Claps aren’t in right place. Move these claps 1/2 forward
    01:13:582 (1): This spinner is too long
[Hard]


  • 00:01:248 – 00:16:748 00:20:749 – 00:21:415 : Claps aren’t in right place. Move these claps 1/2 forward
    00:24:082 (4): Add clap at the end
    00:25:748 (5): Add clap here
    00:29:415 (1): Add clap at the end
    00:45:415 (1): Remove claps or use whistle
    00:47:415 (1): Remove this clap
    00:49:478 (4): Clap
    00:50:748 (7): New combo
    01:02:582 (1): Remove clap at the end
    01:05:748 (1,3): Add clap (2,4): Remove clap
    01:16:082 : Add a slider here and end at 01:16:915, the spinner starts at 01:17:082 end at
    01:07:415 (1): Remove this clap
[Insane]


  • 00:01:915 - 00:30:082 00:37:415 – 00:41:249 : Claps aren’t in right place. Move these claps 1/2 forward
    00:27:915 (8): Weird slider
    00:46:582 (15): Remove this clap
    00:49:249 (6): ^
    00:51:915 (1): ^
    00:53:082 (2,3): This jump is too sudden
Awesome~

☆ STAR ☆
nante
[General]
Offset: 93

seems like it's in previous mod

[Easy]
Approach rate -1 or -2
consider replacing all full + 1/2 beats with a short slider. For example here 00:14:415 (3,4). With 180 BMP it's too fast for normal
00:00:082 (1) - finish 1st slider here 00:00:915
00:01:248 (2) - add a slider ending at 00:02:415
00:03:748 (4) - remove whistle
00:24:417 (2) - add a note
00:27:084 (2) - ^
00:29:750 (2) - ^

[Aleks' sliders]
00:09:082 (3) - unwhistle

[Hard]
01:09:082 (3) - 1 grid left, 1 grid up

[Insane]
seems fine
Topic Starter
Hellzero

Nivalis wrote:

Mod request via Forum PM

[General]
-> Offset : 82 (I'm not sure if placing notes before the first offset is allowed)

[Hard]
-> Using finish and clap at once sounds weird for me... I'm not good in hitsounds :(
00:11:248 (4) - New combo maybe? (Because a jump is placed here) fixed
00:36:248 (1,2) - Add clap at slider end? ok
00:38:915 (1) - ^, also add clap at (3)? ok
00:51:915 (10) - Add finish? ok

[Insane]
-> Add some clap hitsounds to the stream? hm... may be added
00:16:415 (1) - Hard to read. Also, I don't think a new combo here is required. fixed

[Insane] is lovely, and I admire how this beatmap is fun while the filesize is only 1.4MB :) ^_^
Star!
thx

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~

My suggestions:

[General]


  • Offset should be about 94 fixed
[Hard]


  • 00:01:248 – 00:16:748 00:20:749 – 00:21:415 : Claps aren’t in right place. Move these claps 1/2 forward fixed
    00:24:082 (4): Add clap at the end ok
    00:25:748 (5): Add clap here ok
    00:29:415 (1): Add clap at the end ok
    00:45:415 (1): Remove claps or use whistle ok
    00:47:415 (1): Remove this clap ok
    00:49:478 (4): Clap ok
    00:50:748 (7): New combo ok
    01:02:582 (1): Remove clap at the end ok
    01:05:748 (1,3): Add clap (2,4): Remove clap ok
    01:16:082 : Add a slider here and end at 01:16:915, the spinner starts at 01:17:082 end at 01:17:093 ok, but i think slider end at 01:17:093 better
    01:07:415 (1): Remove this clap ok
[Insane]


  • 00:01:915 - 00:30:082 00:37:415 – 00:41:249 : Claps aren’t in right place. Move these claps 1/2 forward fidex
    00:27:915 (8): Weird slider fixed
    00:46:582 (15): Remove this clap ok
    00:49:249 (6): ^ ok
    00:51:915 (1): ^ ok
    00:53:082 (2,3): This jump is too sudden it's insane :<
Awesome~

☆ STAR ☆
thx

nante wrote:

[General]
Offset: 93

seems like it's in previous mod

[Hard]
01:09:082 (3) - 1 grid left, 1 grid up fixed

[Insane]
seems fine
thx
Aleks719

Nivalis wrote:

[Aleks' sliders]
-> Change difficulty name to [Aleks' Sliders]? Why? oO
Other than that, very nice diff, I can't find any problems :D thx

impossiblexu wrote:

[Aleks' sliders]
Hitsounds during Kiai Time are a bit random,doen’t sound very good. hitsounds in kiai are fixed

  • 00:34:081 (5): You needn’t use soft hitsound,normal hitsound sounds good here ok, there are many people, who says that. fixed
    00:44:081 (1): Spinner starts here nope
    01:06:749 – 01:03:248 : Claps aren’t in right place. Move these claps 1/2 forward nope, but fixed at my sense
    01:13:582 (1): This spinner is too long I tried to map it. But it sounds bad. nope.
[Aleks' sliders]
00:09:082 (3) - unwhistle nope
Download: Fumei Na Aatisuto - Heavy Metal Anthem (Hellzero) [Aleks' sliders].osu
Yusu Aoi
I fixed all, the modders said^^

and here is my diff ^^ I hope, it's easier now^^
Thx all:)

Download: Fumei Na Aatisuto - Heavy Metal Anthem (Hellzero) [ShiroKitty's Easy].osu
Shandro
звезда!
потому что у тебя стояла СС на аве :D
Xcenon
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winber1
Insane

00:44:093(x) - add a note? makes more sense to me
00:48:593(x) - ^
00:55:760(that solo part..) - oh man... this is some damn bestial timing. I guess you did a good job on it. (Timing felt a little off when i was playing the song and then i realized why it was off. The guitar part doesn't really like you :/) just a comment.
01:02:760(1) - start combo on the next note?


ShiroKitty's

00:57:260(1) - i'd rather have this start at 00:57:093
00:59:927(1) - i'd rather have this start at 00:59:760
01:13:427(spinner) - maybe do something instead of use spinner? ... seems boring

Nice map :D
Couldn't find much.. (I'm also tired atm... getting so busy these past few days/weeks D:)

Star~
Topic Starter
Hellzero

winber1 wrote:

Insane

00:44:093(x) - add a note? makes more sense to me added
00:48:593(x) - ^ nope
00:55:760(that solo part..) - oh man... this is some damn bestial timing. I guess you did a good job on it. (Timing felt a little off when i was playing the song and then i realized why it was off. The guitar part doesn't really like you :/) just a comment.
01:02:760(1) - start combo on the next note? nope
Thx for modding
ziin
I'm sorry, I don't particularly like the song, and it's quite well modded so there's no "errors" I can find.

First three difficulties I can't help. I actually played the slider one without looking at the name, and thought 10 seconds in "okay, when am I gonna get a circle?" :lol:

[insane]
this is quite difficult, have you thought about using some slider changes on the long sliders? Either slower or faster, just something to catch you off guard.
00:19:927 (5) - I don't like this note.
00:34:760 (1) - nazi up 1 grid
00:41:260 (1,2,3,4) - big jumps or fast sliders?
00:42:927 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I don't like the clap, and this stream could go all the way to beat 1.
I can't follow the guitar solo stream at all, and the real guitar part is unmappable. See if you like slightly spread apart 6th note repeating sliders on these notes:
00:56:593 -
00:56:982 -
00:57:371 -
00:57:760 -
00:58:149 -
00:58:538 -
01:13:427 (1) - slider on the first beat of all these combos?
thekillerhjkhjk
[insane]

eeeeeh its ok, but im not sure if i like the streaming

[hard]
01:14:427 (1,2) - (suggestion) change these to regular notes? it gives the part more variety

[Aleks' sliders]

..... yeah im not modding something thats all sliders with three spinners. sorry, it just seems pointlessly unrankable to me


[shirokitty's easy]

great!

nice mapping overall, but... all slider difficulty?? really??

star for the other three
Lesjuh
Sorry for the late mod!

Offset 90

Insane
00:56:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Really hard to time your clicks in this stream. Start with two beats on 1/4 and then place 5 kicksliders with eacht 5 beats also on 1/4. After that a 9 beat stream.
01:10:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Difficulty jump. Complete beatmap is on 1.0x distance spacing and then there is this part all of sudden.

Aleks
Etna difficulties are unrankable. Delete this difficulty or give it some notes.

Easy
The slider speed is really too high for an easy difficulty
01:13:427 (1) - End this spinner @ 01:17:093
01:17:260 (1) - Start this spinner @ 01:17:427
Aleks719

Lesjuh wrote:

Sorry for the late mod!

Aleks
Etna difficulties are unrankable. Delete this difficulty or give it some notes.
Hi, Lesjuh ! I asked #modhelp about rankable of sliders diffs. So, It's rankable.
hackSL
Звезда
Nice map
Yusu Aoi
Sorry for late fixing but I had problems with my computer ;/ :(..
I removed only the spinner that winber1 said, and replaced it with notes. and started the last spinner in the way that Lesjuh said ^^ Thx to all^^

Download: Fumei Na Aatisuto - Heavy Metal Anthem (Hellzero) [ShiroKitty's Easy].osu
Mastodonio
здоров) я так и думал,что кто-нибудь обязательно проигнорирует правила моего modding queue :) ну да ладно уж,раз из России - то промодю.

Короче,у тебя разрешение БГ картинки на один пиксель меньше чем надо. у тебя 1023 на 767,а надо 1024 на 768

Shirokitty's easy:
00:00:090 - this slider doesn't sound good here. my advice - delete this slider and put a circle in : 00:01:089. sounds much better. or don't put this circle,just start the beats from that slider in : 00:01:256
00:30:089 - 2 grids up
01:02:423 - 3 grids left
01:04:423 - delete one repeat slider here

Aleks's Sliders:
ничего плохого не могу сказать - классно сделано ;) если песня тупо из слайдеров - ранкабл,то значит норм.

Hard:
00:06:089 - закончи этот слайдер в : 00:06:589
00:16:756 - закончи этот слайдер в : 00:17:256

конец классно сделан)


Insane:
офигенно сделано ;) даже сказать не могу ничего. приятно видеть,что люди из России такие мапы бабахают.

Звезда! :)
Topic Starter
Hellzero

Giorgos wrote:

здоров) я так и думал,что кто-нибудь обязательно проигнорирует правила моего modding queue :) ну да ладно уж,раз из России - то промодю. Ой, бегло прочитал и не заметил 3 пункт :)

Короче,у тебя разрешение БГ картинки на один пиксель меньше чем надо. у тебя 1023 на 767,а надо 1024 на 768 Не существенно, но если не будет лень то исправилю.

Aleks's Sliders:
ничего плохого не могу сказать - классно сделано ;) если песня тупо из слайдеров - ранкабл,то значит норм. ранкбл, ранкбл :)

Hard:
00:06:089 - закончи этот слайдер в : 00:06:589 fixed
00:16:756 - закончи этот слайдер в : 00:17:256 fixed

конец классно сделан)


Insane:
офигенно сделано ;) даже сказать не могу ничего. приятно видеть,что люди из России такие мапы бабахают.

Звезда! :)
Спасибо
-kevincela-
Here's my mod :D

[ShiroKitty's mEasy]
Nothing.

[Aleks' sliders]
D: A diff with only sliders D:
Other that,nothing.

[Hard]
00:28:423(3):Put it under the slider 2
00:45:089(3):^
00:45:423(1):Remove the clap at the end of the slider
00:56:756(2):CTRL+R?
01:08:423(5):Put it under the slider 4

[Insane]
Normal circle size?
For the rest,this is awesome D:

Star~
Cyril Scarlet
about map i don't have skill for nazi xd

but i think Artist is maybe not currect ????

becuz Fumei Na Aatisuto is mean "Unknown Artist" in japanese lol


I'm try to search Artist's name but can't find it yet. xd

maybe try to ask Japanese again for Artist name is better.
orioncomet
for the artist of this song i found that it's "Takahasi Naoya" (from mp3 that i have it said Takahasi Naoya is the artist)
i don't have any more detail because i don't know the song very well,
but i know that there've many peoples who made the music for album Shijou Saikyou no Deshi Kenichi Original Soundtrack
if you want to use who made the song as artist then just use Joe Rinoie
Rukario
Shiro:
00:51:923 (1) - Move this a bit away to avoid slider overlap. But watch out that your slider doesn't overlap with the HP Bar or the score.

Aleks:
Huh this has a higher Slider Velocity than Hard. Next time please watch that this doesn't happen because now it's too late to fix that^^

Hard:
00:41:589 (1) - I don't like the beginning of this jump. Maybe put it like a bit higher between 4 and 3 of that combo.

Hmm neat mapset.
Yusu Aoi
Topic Starter
Hellzero

-kevincela- wrote:

Here's my mod :D
[Hard]
00:28:423(3):Put it under the slider 2 ok
00:45:089(3):^ no
00:45:423(1):Remove the clap at the end of the slider ok
00:56:756(2):CTRL+R? no
01:08:423(5):Put it under the slider 4 ok

Rukarioman wrote:

Hard:
00:41:589 (1) - I don't like the beginning of this jump. Maybe put it like a bit higher between 4 and 3 of that combo. fixed
Change artist. Thx S i R i R u and orioncomet.
h3k1ru

Giorgos wrote:

здоров) я так и думал,
ну да ладно уж,
Короче,
если песня тупо из слайдеров
даже сказать не могу ничего.

Звезда! :)
sorry, cant resist >.<
Garven
As per your request:

[General]
Get your wallpaper to 1024x768. Sounds dumb, I know, but please get it there.

[WhiteNeko's Easy]
The AR is waaaay too slow compared to the slider velocity. Maybe increase AR/OD by two, HP drain by 1 or 2
00:01:256 (1,2,3) - Hrm... might be better to have 2 and 3 at 00:02:756 (2) - and 00:03:423 (3) - But only if you plan on following this rhythm for awhile. If you want to stick with the offbeat drums, I really recommend you change that starting slider.
00:10:756 (3,4) - Hrm... odd rhythm to throw out there. Maybe do these two as a slider, or the 4, 5, and 6 as a repeat slider.
01:04:423 (7) - I'm wary of kick sliders like this in Easy diffs. It's hard for the new players to tell when it is going to end, and a note so soon afterward will most probably lead to a bad miss and some disorientation. Please try something else here.

[Alek's sliders] -> Alek's Sliders
Another one of these, eh?
00:22:756 (1) - =_=
00:44:256 (1) - *Looks at diff title*
00:48:089 (1) - I don't like how this gets off rhythm.
00:51:756 (4) - End this at 00:51:923 - with a finish at the end?
01:00:256 - I keep wanting a beat here. :/

[Hard]
00:41:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - <3
00:45:423 (1) - Don't like how this goes off-rhythm like in Alek's diff.

[Insane]
00:05:089 (4,5) - Eh, Control + R these. Plays better to me.

Love that face-melting guitar solo. Easy need work, though.
narakucrimson

Lesjuh wrote:

Etna difficulties are unrankable. Delete this difficulty or give it some notes.
Well, I didn't know that, but if he says so, then add some circles ò.ó.


Also, the circle size seems to be greater than the slider size (that is, the diameter of the circle is greater than the width of the slider. I'd suggest you to make the hitcirle & hitcircle overlay a bit smaller.


And I don't have anything else to say, I think.

Good work with the mapping :D

You have my star!
Topic Starter
Hellzero

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
Get your wallpaper to 1024x768. Sounds dumb, I know, but please get it there. done

[Hard]
00:41:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - <3 <3
00:45:423 (1) - Don't like how this goes off-rhythm like in Alek's diff. remake

[Insane]
00:05:089 (4,5) - Eh, Control + R these. Plays better to me. hm... agree

Love that face-melting guitar solo. Easy need work, though.
Garven thx for modding.
narakucrimson thx u for star ^^
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. snap the sections for KIAI
  2. audio lean-in: 1.0s for Easy/Hard. and keep the others'
[Insane]:
  1. 00:42:923 (5) - newcombo
  2. 00:53:423 (4) - ^
  3. 00:54:506, 00:54:589 (T) - add note, start the spinner at 00:54:673
  4. 00:58:423 (10,11,12) - keep the spacing here, so it's x0.5
  5. 00:59:923 (1,2,3) - spacing issue
[Alek's sliders]:
  1. 01:12:923 (3) - why soft-whistles...
star~

btw Touhou skin... did you asked Cyclone x_X?
Aleks719

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[Alek's sliders] -> Alek's Sliders ok, Aleks' Sliders
Another one of these, eh?
00:22:756 (1) - =_= what? You want rename it like "No notes"? It sounds ugly
00:44:256 (1) - *Looks at diff title*
00:48:089 (1) - I don't like how this gets off rhythm. Sorry, I disagree here
00:51:756 (4) - End this at 00:51:923 - with a finish at the end? k, fix
01:00:256 - I keep wanting a beat here. :/ sorry, nope
Aleks:
Huh this has a higher Slider Velocity than Hard. Next time please watch that this doesn't happen because now it's too late to fix that^^
Hi, Rukario! Hard was made later than my diff. Sorry, but there is no my mistake here.
Well, I didn't know that, but if he says so, then add some circles ò.ó.
Are you know about etna sliders? Pleeease find it in Terms Glossary.MY DIFF IS NOT ETNA SLIDERS! asdfghjkl;

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. snap the sections for KIAI ok, fixed
  2. audio lean-in: 1.0s for Easy/Hard. and keep the others' ok, fixed


[Alek's sliders]:
  1. 01:12:923 (3) - why soft-whistles...Ok, ok, Normal-whistles sounds good tooo here
Thanks for your modding! Orz

Download: Joe Rinoie - Heavy Metal Anthem (Hellzero) [Aleks' Sliders].osu
Topic Starter
Hellzero
Colin Hou thx u for modding. All fixed.
btw Touhou skin... did you asked Cyclone x_X?
No :( But I asked now. I await his reply.
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