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[gay's extra]
  1. 00:15:019 (5,1) - isn't it too close? 00:26:945 (6,1) - another similar parts has more big distance.
[collab]
  1. 00:05:516 (3,1) - I can't understand this anti-jump. 00:06:261 (1) - this has pretty strong sound. you can put this by stack, overlap, or jump. anyway this anti-jump is very weird.
  2. 00:10:733 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - what happened this nc cycle? 00:11:106 (1) - del nc will better? imo
  3. 00:15:205 (1,2,3) - put jump between 1-2 and put ds 1.0 between 2-3 will better? use same distance using as 00:18:187 (1,2,3,4) - here
GL :)
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SkyFlame
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Kawashiro wrote:

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[gay's extra]
  1. 00:15:019 (5,1) - isn't it too close? 00:26:945 (6,1) - another similar parts has more big distance.
[collab]
  1. 00:05:516 (3,1) - I can't understand this anti-jump. 00:06:261 (1) - this has pretty strong sound. you can put this by stack, overlap, or jump. anyway this anti-jump is very weird.
    Fixed
  2. 00:10:733 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - what happened this nc cycle? 00:11:106 (1) - del nc will better? imo
    Fixed
  3. 00:15:205 (1,2,3) - put jump between 1-2 and put ds 1.0 between 2-3 will better? use same distance using as 00:18:187 (1,2,3,4) - here
    OK
GL :) thanks!

Thanks for mod!
Akitoshi
@Gayshiro hell ye buffed up a bit, thanks w

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YoWuzUp
from #modreqs
(Just some suggestions)

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Easy
00:44:646 (3,1) - Would like to see these blanketed, I'd just move 3 to the right a bit.
01:18:932 (2,3) - Another pair I'd like to see a blanket on.

Akitoshi's Extra
01:09:988 (4) - Feel like this note is a little high up.
01:24:895 (4) - And possibly this one as well.
Also, I think the light blue combo color color is too close to the color of the water/sky in the background, so it should be changed.

Even though it's not required, You should see about having some spinners in your mapset. In the words of Pishifat, maps without spinners tend to have "stagnant" leaderboards, or something like that.

And... that's it! That's all I can see anyway. Hope this helped!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

YO_WUZ_UP wrote:

from #modreqs
(Just some suggestions)

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Easy
00:44:646 (3,1) - Would like to see these blanketed, I'd just move 3 to the right a bit. Decided to just make this a straight slider instead because that way i dont mess up the distance snap
01:18:932 (2,3) - Another pair I'd like to see a blanket on. My intention here wasn't to blanket, also it would mess up distance snap


Even though it's not required, You should see about having some spinners in your mapset. In the words of Pishifat, maps without spinners tend to have "stagnant" leaderboards, or something like that. I would like to include spinners but i dont hear any sections of the song that require spinners.

And... that's it! That's all I can see anyway. Hope this helped!
Thanks for mod!
Akitoshi

YO_WUZ_UP wrote:

Akitoshi's Extra
01:09:988 (4) - Feel like this note is a little high up. don't worry, it's not offscreen.
01:24:895 (4) - And possibly this one as well. same, btw you can see the area of specific notes/objects in right-top area
Also, I think the light blue combo color color is too close to the color of the water/sky in the background, so it should be changed. idk changed a bit

Even though it's not required, You should see about having some spinners in your mapset. In the words of Pishifat, maps without spinners tend to have "stagnant" leaderboards, or something like that. there's no long notes that worth for spinners on this song so ye
i also fixed some cringe sliders and stuff, thanks!

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Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Akitoshi wrote:

i also fixed some cringe sliders and stuff, thanks!

Updated, thanks!

By the way i copied your hitsounds on to my maps if that's ok. i gave you credit for hitsounding :D
July - San
hiii! From Mod req!
NM

Okay Let's see here...

Mmmm...I'm Not sure, it's this a bug but... The bpm its Conflict with Easy Diff..

please put a bpm on easy..


NORMAL

00:31:603 (1) - (Add Hitsound "Finish", maybe sounds better)

01:11:851 (1) - (Add Hitsound "Finish")

01:26:758 (1) - (This too)

HARD

00:16:696 (1,2) - (That Looks Weird, please change this)

00:55:640 (1) - (This too..)

01:05:889 (1) - (add Hitsound "Finish")

01:11:851 (1) - ("Finish" Too)

01:18:373 (3) - does not keep pace

01:35:702 (1) - (Add "Finish")

Sorry For the short Mod, Good Map,
The rest of Diffs "Insane" and "Akitoshi's Sky" are perfect (In my opinion..)

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

July - San wrote:

hiii! From Mod req!
NM

Okay Let's see here...

Mmmm...I'm Not sure, it's this a bug but... The bpm its Conflict with Easy Diff..

please put a bpm on easy..



LOL what the how did that happen hahaha ok fixed

NORMAL

00:31:603 (1) - (Add Hitsound "Finish", maybe sounds better) Ok

01:11:851 (1) - (Add Hitsound "Finish") Ok

01:26:758 (1) - (This too) Ok

HARD

00:16:696 (1,2) - (That Looks Weird, please change this) This seems fine to me

00:55:640 (1) - (This too..) ^

01:05:889 (1) - (add Hitsound "Finish") Ok

01:11:851 (1) - ("Finish" Too) Ok

01:18:373 (3) - does not keep pace Not sure what you mean by this

01:35:702 (1) - (Add "Finish") Ok

Sorry For the short Mod, Good Map,
The rest of Diffs "Insane" and "Akitoshi's Sky" are perfect (In my opinion..) Thanks!!

Good Luck!

THANKS FOR MOD!!
fieryrage
heya, from modreqs

akitoshi
  1. 00:10:733 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - since these are less potent notes maybe make these just repeat sliders instead? it honestly is fine the way it is right now but it would be a better way to introduce the stream, i feel
  2. 00:16:323 (3) - silence slider end? nothing lands on it so kinda seems pointless having it loud
    same goes for 00:19:305 (4) - this, 00:28:249 (4) - and this
  3. 00:31:230 (4) - wouldn't it make more sense rhythmically to have this end on the red tick and add a note on the blue tick?
  4. 00:58:808 (2,3) - this is really the only angle in the map that doesn't flow into the slider, i.e. 01:01:789 (2,3) - similar rhythm here flows a lot better into the slider than this, maybe move 3 up a bit?
  5. 01:22:659 (2,3) - doing something similar to 01:21:354 (2,3) - would make this look more aesthetically pleasing (and you can also have that sick double blanket, too)
insane
  • ar 8.5 would fit spread a lot better here, jumping from an AR 7 hard to AR 9 insane is a pretty big gap
  1. 00:02:348 (2,4) - eeehh aesthetically these are kinda too close for comfort imo i'd space blankets like this out a bit more
  2. 00:07:566 (4,1) - imperfect blanket asdfasdfd
  3. 00:08:870 (4,1) - there should be more emphasis on the jump here, as it is right now there isn't any despite being essentially a different pattern and on a downbeat as well
  4. 00:10:361 (3,4) - conversely i have no clue why this is spaced out more than the rest of the jumps in this, this has the same rhythm as the ones before it and doesn't really need any extra emphasis considering the jumps prior don't space out gradually
    if you were to keep the jump as is though, 00:10:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - moving this down a bit would make this flow a lot better, something like this overlapping with 00:10:174 (2) - or something
  5. 00:14:087 (1) - unneeded nc
    00:39:429 (1) - same thing happens here
  6. 00:14:087 (1,2) - also this has a biiit too much emphasis on the bass drum, moving it down and to the right a bit would work a lot better imo
  7. 00:20:795 (3) - wait why does the sv increase here? nothing changes in the rhythm at all to warrant it much less in the middle of a pattern
  8. 00:21:727 (5,6) - this doesn't really get any emphasis due to the low spacing, i'd space out a bit more
  9. 00:22:659 (1,2) - making the sliderheads/tails aligned would be cool here
  10. 00:23:777 (3,1) - could be spaced out more to emphasize the new pattern
  11. 00:24:429 (4,5) - this is misaligned
  12. 00:33:094 (1,2,3,4) - having a linear pattern like this after jumps feels awkward and out of place, space out this pattern a bit more in general so it feels a lot less linear (like add a jump or two, basically)
  13. 01:07:752 (3,4,5,6,7) - this is a REALLY big spacing change for what you're trying to do here, moving 01:07:752 (3) - to form a triangle or something with 01:07:379 (1,2) - would help a lot considering it's not emphasized as much as it should be right now
  14. 01:09:429 (1) - wot
  15. 01:10:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - compared to the rest of the jump patterns this is like really tiny, space this out more
  16. 01:24:895 (4) - ctrl+g? would give more emphasis to the snare here
  17. 01:29:180 (4,5) - sort of a similar situation although this should probably be spaced out a bit more for the snare drum
  18. 01:33:466 (1) - remove this nc to keep consistency with the nc placement (and 01:33:280 (2,1) - this blanket is misaligned as well btw)
    it would make more sense to nc 01:34:211 (3) - this, remove nc on 01:34:956 (1) - this and nc 01:35:702 (3) - this to keep the downbeat nc thing consistent in general, idk why the pattern changes in the last few seconds tbh
  19. 01:34:211 (3,4) - up until this point you never stacked in the entire map, this would be better as a jump to keep consistency
  20. 01:38:311 (9,1) - feels like this should be spaced out from the triple a lot more than it is currently since it's the climax of the song
hard
  • od 5 for a hard? od 6 at the very least would be better here (and ar would also be better off increased but it's not entirely necessary)
  1. 00:24:895 (3,4,5,6) - this is borderline unreadable, 00:24:149 (1) - the repeat slider before it has 4 repeats, so having 4 repeats on 00:25:081 (5) - would make more sense
  2. 00:27:131 (1,2) - why is the distance half of 00:25:640 (1,2) - stuff like this? should probably just be kept consistent
  3. 00:38:684 (4,5) - kind of a complicated rhythm, probably would be better to just have a circle on the white tick and have the main slider end on the blue tick instead
  4. 00:55:081 (3,4) - random ds change, would be much better off being consistent with the rest of the map (even if it is emphasized more, it is a hard after all)
  5. 01:13:156 (4,1) - kickslider should just be a circle here tbh
  6. 01:19:118 (5,1) - the stacks were okay for the other parts but this just flows weird, i wouldn't stack here
  7. 01:22:286 (1,2) - really weird flow going on here, wouldn't it be better to have the second slider on the other side?
    same thing 01:25:267 (1,2) - here
  8. 01:38:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the amount of DS changes here is really unnecessary, 01:38:684 (1,2,3,4) - this should be one consistent DS at the very least
gl o/
Akitoshi

fieryrage wrote:

heya, from modreqs

akitoshi
  1. 00:10:733 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - since these are less potent notes maybe make these just repeat sliders instead? it honestly is fine the way it is right now but it would be a better way to introduce the stream, i feel this is to tilt DT farmers with long-ass streams bpm isn't that high so I still think current one is fine
  2. 00:16:323 (3) - silence slider end? nothing lands on it so kinda seems pointless having it loud
    same goes for 00:19:305 (4) - this, 00:28:249 (4) - and this yes
  3. 00:31:230 (4) - wouldn't it make more sense rhythmically to have this end on the red tick and add a note on the blue tick? i'm mapping vocals for this section but i'll consider it
  4. 00:58:808 (2,3) - this is really the only angle in the map that doesn't flow into the slider, i.e. 01:01:789 (2,3) - similar rhythm here flows a lot better into the slider than this, maybe move 3 up a bit? tried sth
  5. 01:22:659 (2,3) - doing something similar to 01:21:354 (2,3) - would make this look more aesthetically pleasing (and you can also have that sick double blanket, too) uhH it's already blanketd tho
Thanks boiiiiiiiiiiii

also ye u can copy hitsounds w

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Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

fieryrage wrote:

heya, from modreqs

insane
  • ar 8.5 would fit spread a lot better here, jumping from an AR 7 hard to AR 9 insane is a pretty big gap Yea
  1. 00:02:348 (2,4) - eeehh aesthetically these are kinda too close for comfort imo i'd space blankets like this out a bit more Fixed
  2. 00:07:566 (4,1) - imperfect blanket asdfasdfd Fixed
  3. 00:08:870 (4,1) - there should be more emphasis on the jump here, as it is right now there isn't any despite being essentially a different pattern and on a downbeat as well Fixed

  4. 00:10:361 (3,4) - conversely i have no clue why this is spaced out more than the rest of the jumps in this, this has the same rhythm as the ones before it and doesn't really need any extra emphasis considering the jumps prior don't space out gradually
    if you were to keep the jump as is though, 00:10:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - moving this down a bit would make this flow a lot better, something like this overlapping with 00:10:174 (2) - or something Changed this part out
  5. 00:14:087 (1) - unneeded nc Ok i un-NC'd the last note and put NC on the slider cuz i hear a change in the song so i emphasized it with an NC
    00:39:429 (1) - same thing happens here ^
  6. 00:14:087 (1,2) - also this has a biiit too much emphasis on the bass drum, moving it down and to the right a bit would work a lot better imo Wasn't sure which one you wanted me to move but i guess i tried something here
  7. 00:20:795 (3) - wait why does the sv increase here? nothing changes in the rhythm at all to warrant it much less in the middle of a pattern
    Fixed
  8. 00:21:727 (5,6) - this doesn't really get any emphasis due to the low spacing, i'd space out a bit more Ok, and i also had it change flow for emphasis too
  9. 00:22:659 (1,2) - making the sliderheads/tails aligned would be cool here Not really sure what you mean; unless you mean this ? If yea then i will change it for sure cuz i agree but i'll leave it for now
  10. 00:23:777 (3,1) - could be spaced out more to emphasize the new pattern Tried something
  11. 00:24:429 (4,5) - this is misaligned Remapped
  12. 00:33:094 (1,2,3,4) - having a linear pattern like this after jumps feels awkward and out of place, space out this pattern a bit more in general so it feels a
    lot less linear (like add a jump or two, basically) Fixed
  13. 01:07:752 (3,4,5,6,7) - this is a REALLY big spacing change for what you're trying to do here, moving 01:07:752 (3) - to form a triangle or something with 01:07:379 (1,2) - would help a lot considering it's not emphasized as much as it should be right now Ok i tried
  14. 01:09:429 (1) - wot Lol maybe too far? lowered spacing here
  15. 01:10:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - compared to the rest of the jump patterns this is like really tiny, space this out more Ok
  16. 01:24:895 (4) - ctrl+g? would give more emphasis to the snare here Good idea
  17. 01:29:180 (4,5) - sort of a similar situation although this should probably be spaced out a bit more for the snare drum Ok
  18. 01:33:466 (1) - remove this nc to keep consistency with the nc placement (and 01:33:280 (2,1) - this blanket is misaligned as well btw)
    it would make more sense to nc 01:34:211 (3) - this, remove nc on 01:34:956 (1) - this and nc 01:35:702 (3) - this to keep the downbeat nc thing consistent in general, idk why the pattern changes in the last few seconds tbh Fixed
  19. 01:34:211 (3,4) - up until this point you never stacked in the entire map, this would be better as a jump to keep consistency Ok
  20. 01:38:311 (9,1) - feels like this should be spaced out from the triple a lot more than it is currently since it's the climax of the song Ok
hard
  • od 5 for a hard? od 6 at the very least would be better here (and ar would also be better off increased but it's not entirely necessary) Ok,
    bumped up AR and OD
  1. 00:24:895 (3,4,5,6) - this is borderline unreadable, 00:24:149 (1) - the repeat slider before it has 4 repeats, so having 4 repeats on 00:25:081 (5) - would make more sense Fixed
  2. 00:27:131 (1,2) - why is the distance half of 00:25:640 (1,2) - stuff like this? should probably just be kept consistent Fixed
  3. 00:38:684 (4,5) - kind of a complicated rhythm, probably would be better to just have a circle on the white tick and have the main slider end on the blue tick instead did something
  4. 00:55:081 (3,4) - random ds change, would be much better off being consistent with the rest of the map (even if it is emphasized more, it is a hard after all) Ok
  5. 01:13:156 (4,1) - kickslider should just be a circle here tbh Ok
  6. 01:19:118 (5,1) - the stacks were okay for the other parts but this just flows weird, i wouldn't stack here Ok
  7. 01:22:286 (1,2) - really weird flow going on here, wouldn't it be better to have the second slider on the other side?
    same thing 01:25:267 (1,2) - here I want to change up the flow so it keeps the flow from becoming stale
  8. 01:38:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the amount of DS changes here is really unnecessary, 01:38:684 (1,2,3,4) - this should be one consistent DS at the very least Ok
gl o/ Thanks!


Thanks for mod!
Xinnoh
Akitoshi’s Sky
bg 😫💦
00:56:572 (6,7) - Can you make this clearer it’s a ¼ gap, smaller spacing would help (holy shit google docs auto formats the fraction o.O)
pp mapping smh

Insane
Your mapping looks ok, but aesthetics need to be polished in general.
00:02:535 (3,5) - Sliders like these, I’d prefer if they were a bit less curved. If you take a look at Akitoshi’s diff, he mainly uses sliders that are very straight, with occasional curving. It’s just looks better in modern mapping. Your mapping after 00:14:087 (1) - seems to follow this idea well.
Another general thing is overuse of blankets. I really don’t think they add much. Arranging objects by general spacing works better in my opinion.
00:04:771 (1,3) - at least use copy paste lol
00:04:771 (1) - You’re using the bottom a bit much, you can move this to the top right for more space usage.
00:07:752 (1,2,3,4) - This part doesn’t look very nice. Sliders are different curves, blankets are off, spacing isn’t too consistent.
00:17:814 (4) - Move this right a bit, there’s too much emphasis on 4 compared to 1
00:33:094 (1) - why is this a bezier curve lol
00:35:143 (2,3,4) - Spacing is a bit large here, no need to have large jumps for little sound
00:45:392 (1,1) - Again, aesthetics are really lacking. Use more copy paste to have better consistency with slider shapes.
00:55:640 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This should not have large spacing when the only instrument is vocal, reduce spacing between objects by a lot
00:58:994 (2) - Really not a fan of using ½ circles a lot when there are room for sliders, but that’s my opinion.
01:05:889 (1,2,3,4) - Four different slider shapes are used, which doesn’t make it look nice. Use more copy paste again.
01:34:956 (5,1,4) - Overlaps have little/no pattern to them here.

Gonna stop there because I’m going to assume the other diffs are similar, aesthetics are the main thing I think needs fixing right now. You need to still improve on how you arrange objects, what kind of slider shapes you use, and how to keep them consistent with each other. You could ask Akitoshi for help on specific things to fix, since he’s great with making maps look pretty. (or heck you could take a lazy route and just ask him to improve visuals for you xP) Getting a couple more mods wouldn't hurt either. You could try calling me back in a couple weeks after you think the set has improved enough.
Akitoshi

Sinnoh wrote:

Akitoshi’s Sky
bg 😫💦 mMMmmMMm flat chests are the best
00:56:572 (6,7) - Can you make this clearer it’s a ¼ gap, smaller spacing would help (holy shit google docs auto formats the fraction o.O) ok
pp mapping smh i-i put many streams for tilting dt players, b-baka///

Gonna stop there because I’m going to assume the other diffs are similar, aesthetics are the main thing I think needs fixing right now. You need to still improve on how you arrange objects, what kind of slider shapes you use, and how to keep them consistent with each other. You could ask Akitoshi for help on specific things to fix, since he’s great with making maps look pretty. (or heck you could take a lazy route and just ask him to improve visuals for you xP) Getting a couple more mods wouldn't hurt either. You could try calling me back in a couple weeks after you think the set has improved enough. we discussed something thank
thanks bby uwu

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Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Sinnoh wrote:

Insane
Gonna stop there because I’m going to assume the other diffs are similar, aesthetics are the main thing I think needs fixing right now. You need to still improve on how you arrange objects, what kind of slider shapes you use, and how to keep them consistent with each other. You could ask Akitoshi for help on specific things to fix, since he’s great with making maps look pretty. (or heck you could take a lazy route and just ask him to improve visuals for you xP) Getting a couple more mods wouldn't hurt either. You could try calling me back in a couple weeks after you think the set has improved enough.

OK, Akitoshi and I discussed a lot of points that you addressed, we also touched up a bit on aesthetics. I remapped quite a bit, trying to apply all of the stuff you mentioned. Thanks for mod!

Also updated Akitoshi's diff
Arphimigon
Sorry I'm late!

Lab Aesthetics Mod!
Results given in [x, y] formats
[Akitoshi's Sky]
Object at 00:32:535 - should be placed at: [410, 113] currently at: [414, 114] to blanket slider body at time 00:31:976 -
Object at 00:36:075 - should be placed at: [346, 302] currently at: [345, 303] to move in line with slider at time 00:35:702 -
Object at 00:45:951 - should be placed at: [288, 38] currently at: [289, 39] to move in line with slider at time 00:45:392 -
Object at 00:47:628 - should be placed at: [148, 157] currently at: [152, 157] to blanket slider body at time 00:48:000 -
[Easy]
Nothing Detected!
[Hard]
Object at 00:16:323 - should be placed at: [408, 233] currently at: [412, 232] to blanket slider body at time 00:16:696 -
Object at 00:21:168 - should be placed at: [147, 277] currently at: [145, 274] to blanket slider body at time 00:21:727 -
Object at 00:44:833 - should be placed at: [121, 209] currently at: [123, 206] to blanket slider body at time 00:44:274 -
Object at 01:04:957 - should be placed at: [329, 298] currently at: [329, 301] to blanket slider body at time 01:04:398 -
Object at 01:31:417 - should be placed at: [390, 253] currently at: [388, 251] to blanket slider body at time 01:31:603 -
[Insane]
Object at 00:50:236 - should be placed at: [145, 293] currently at: [146, 294] to move in line with slider at time 00:49:864 -
[Normal]
Object at 00:51:354 - should be placed at: [261, 95] currently at: [262, 96] to move in line with slider at time 00:52:472 -
Stacked stuff will likely be off, so if those give wrong results, you can ignore those.
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Arphimigon wrote:

Sorry I'm late!

Lab Aesthetics Mod!
Results given in [x, y] formats

[Easy]
Nothing Detected!
[Hard]
Object at 00:16:323 - should be placed at: [408, 233] currently at: [412, 232] to blanket slider body at time 00:16:696 -
Object at 00:21:168 - should be placed at: [147, 277] currently at: [145, 274] to blanket slider body at time 00:21:727 -
Object at 00:44:833 - should be placed at: [121, 209] currently at: [123, 206] to blanket slider body at time 00:44:274 -
Object at 01:04:957 - should be placed at: [329, 298] currently at: [329, 301] to blanket slider body at time 01:04:398 -
Object at 01:31:417 - should be placed at: [390, 253] currently at: [388, 251] to blanket slider body at time 01:31:603 -
[Insane]
Object at 00:50:236 - should be placed at: [145, 293] currently at: [146, 294] to move in line with slider at time 00:49:864 -
[Normal]
Object at 00:51:354 - should be placed at: [261, 95] currently at: [262, 96] to move in line with slider at time 00:52:472 -
Stacked stuff will likely be off, so if those give wrong results, you can ignore those.
Fixed all

Thanks for mod!
Stack
nm mod from my queue


General

unused hitsounds: drum-hitclap.wav / drum-hitfinish.wav / drum-hitwhistle.wav / soft-hitclap.wav

Akitoshi is -Laura- now so you may want to change the gd name and add that to the tags

Easy

00:10:733 (1,2,3,4) - music gets a constant 1/4 added in the background so using the same rhythm as what you used for 00:07:752 (1,2,3,4) - isn't very representative.
You could use this rhythm https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/1O7xzJaE for example to switch it up

00:14:087 - there is like no hs'ing here and everything is relying on the drum hitnormal which also doesn't fit very well cause it sounds really heavy contrasting the song too much.
would stay with the soft sampleset or use custom ones instead

00:19:677 (1,2,3,4) - vs 00:13:715 (1,2,3,4) - this is pretty much the same vocal rhythm so you could map these the same way to show their similarity

00:25:640 (1) - music gets more intense from hereon but rhythm density lower, would try and map those 2/1 sliders differntly to resolve this

00:26:013 (2,1) - same here as previously that these could use the same rhythm to show similarity between vocal phrases in the song

00:26:013 (2) - also could place claps on second and fourth white tick in each measure as that perfectly fits the drum sounds there

01:08:870 (1) - Here again, the rhythm changes from what it was previously doing at 00:56:944 (1) - and 00:59:926 (1) - Keeping it consistent is way more logical to play.

01:38:684 (1) - Try to make it so the sounds land perfectly on the red anchors as the corner for 01:39:243 - is too late and the corner for 01:39:802 - is too early
Normal

objects in this diff are almost all in the centre if you crl+a which makes for not much overall movement and a cluttered feeling

sv in this diff should be somewhere inbetween the Easy and the Hard to make for a nicer progression instead of just reusing the one for easy

00:50:982 (1,2,3,4) - vs 00:52:472 (5,6) - patterning like this makes it seem like something has changed in the song while the song just stays the same here, would choose a different rhythm which could be repeated throughout this part to show this

00:56:944 (1,2) - vs 00:59:926 (1,2,3) - rhythmic inconsistencies, some vocals are mapped on red while others are skipped

01:05:889 (5,1) - downbeat should be NC'd here instead of right after, would also start the pattern for the next section on 01:05:889 (5) - by making the rhythm more like this https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/UL2oVSHO as this also shows the vocals getting less frequent towards the end

01:13:901 (6) - every other time this part of the rhythm is mapped you map it as 1/1 + a circle but here its a 3/2 for which I don't see the reason as the vocals also peak at 01:14:274 -
Hard

00:18:000 - normally you map all vocals with some kind of object but here you skip over one, suggest mapping a circle or at least making it somewhat played

00:21:168 (1,2) - Normally you dont make the next object after a slider with this weird movement/overlap back to the right, would just place it somewhere in the direction of where the slider was pointing

00:35:702 (4) - this object feels like its a circle because you ran out of space to put down a slider here as that would fit way better and be more consistent with previous rhythm choices, with some reorganizing you could still make this a slider

00:44:274 (3,4) - the (4) is relatively weak so I suggest ctrl+g'ing this rhythm to follow vocals better

00:49:864 (2,3) - same thing here as above that it would be a lot better for the vocals to ctrl+g this

00:50:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the current rhythm isn't following anything in the music really as the drums are loudest on every white tick and the background instrument plays on these ticks https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/E0JgzM0m (bookmarked spots)
something like https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/mFzFomZB would work well or if it is too intense you can simplify some spots of it to 1/1 like 00:50:982 (1) -

01:01:417 (1,2) - vs 01:10:361 (1,2) - the use of these 3/4 sliders in the kiai isnt all that consistent, at spots like I just pointed out for example.
would make it consistent or just try to avoid them entirely

01:22:286 (1,2) - emphasis of the drums here is mostly on the white ticks so ctrl+g here would fit it better

01:29:553 (5,6,1) - triple for the guitar isn't really audible unless I'm deaf, seems more like one fits between these 01:28:994 (3,4) -

01:36:075 (2) - would avoid ending the tail on these super loud red ticks, would at least make them clickable when those sounds show up

01:38:777 - really loud drum here on blue, would not map the guitar pitch increase (?) and instead map the drums
^ 01:39:243 (4) - same here would also somehow make blue tick represented even if only by using a reverse
Insane

00:11:479 (6) - could NC this too so you have 2 NC's every downbeat during the 1/4's

00:25:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - In this section a lot of the jumps switch between the drums and the vocals while just making all vocals clickable and mapping the jumps to those would feel way better.
00:27:131 (1) - this part for example could be mapped like this https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/v27lExRP following mostly vocals instead of having jumps that feel like filler rhythm mostly like 00:30:112 (1,2,3,4,5) -
This problem also repeats itself a lot during the kiai

00:35:702 (5,1) - almost all other pattern follow implied sliderflow in this section but this one stands out for no reason and players will more likely play this like https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/0i1TlxRA which isn't really the intention I feel

00:47:628 (1,1) - NC is not necessary here as it still with with 00:46:883 (2,3) - for the vocals

00:49:305 (3,4,5) - large 1/2 gaps like this make this section feel pretty intense while the music is generally calm and only ramps up on 00:50:982 (1) - so would keep spacing low until that point

00:55:640 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - lowering spacing here gives a way nicer contrast with the jumps before cause those had drums, if you just compare these 2 you can here that the jumps before this have way more impact to each note

00:57:317 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this all rotates the same clockwise direction, would add some direction changes so the movement doesnt get annoying

00:58:994 (2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:00:485 (2,3,4,5,6) - sliders for vocals would make the rhythm feel better instead of feeling more like filler like I said at the start for 00:25:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

01:09:429 (1) - NC here should also be removed as you just NC'd for the downbeat
Akitoshi's Sky

00:13:342 (5) - could increase spacing a bit more for these last couple of notes as the pitch also increases there

00:50:982 (1,2,3) - mapping the first triangle like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10790171 would make movement between triangle the same which is pretty good as all triangles represent the same sounds

01:02:535 (4,5) - would change up the rhythm here and place a 1/2 instead of what you do previously to give more contrast between this and the circle only part for the vocals

01:38:684 (1,2,3) - could space these out like https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/9IFqOpnP to differentiate them from the triples you used for the guitar

gl with the map!
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

Gottagof4st wrote:

nm mod from my queue


General

unused hitsounds: drum-hitclap.wav / drum-hitfinish.wav / drum-hitwhistle.wav / soft-hitclap.wav

Akitoshi is -Laura- now so you may want to change the gd name and add that to the tags
Added -Laura- to tags, but this map was made while the name was still Akitoshi, so I'll leave the discretion to change the diff name up to him.

Easy

00:10:733 (1,2,3,4) - music gets a constant 1/4 added in the background so using the same rhythm as what you used for 00:07:752 (1,2,3,4) - isn't very representative.
You could use this rhythm https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/1O7xzJaE for example to switch it up Fixed

00:14:087 - there is like no hs'ing here and everything is relying on the drum hitnormal which also doesn't fit very well cause it sounds really heavy contrasting the song too much.
would stay with the soft sampleset or use custom ones instead

00:19:677 (1,2,3,4) - vs 00:13:715 (1,2,3,4) - this is pretty much the same vocal rhythm so you could map these the same way to show their similarity

00:25:640 (1) - music gets more intense from hereon but rhythm density lower, would try and map those 2/1 sliders differntly to resolve this

00:26:013 (2,1) - same here as previously that these could use the same rhythm to show similarity between vocal phrases in the song

00:26:013 (2) - also could place claps on second and fourth white tick in each measure as that perfectly fits the drum sounds there

01:08:870 (1) - Here again, the rhythm changes from what it was previously doing at 00:56:944 (1) - and 00:59:926 (1) - Keeping it consistent is way more logical to play.

01:38:684 (1) - Try to make it so the sounds land perfectly on the red anchors as the corner for 01:39:243 - is too late and the corner for 01:39:802 - is too early
Normal

objects in this diff are almost all in the centre if you crl+a which makes for not much overall movement and a cluttered feeling

sv in this diff should be somewhere inbetween the Easy and the Hard to make for a nicer progression instead of just reusing the one for easy

00:50:982 (1,2,3,4) - vs 00:52:472 (5,6) - patterning like this makes it seem like something has changed in the song while the song just stays the same here, would choose a different rhythm which could be repeated throughout this part to show this

00:56:944 (1,2) - vs 00:59:926 (1,2,3) - rhythmic inconsistencies, some vocals are mapped on red while others are skipped

01:05:889 (5,1) - downbeat should be NC'd here instead of right after, would also start the pattern for the next section on 01:05:889 (5) - by making the rhythm more like this https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/UL2oVSHO as this also shows the vocals getting less frequent towards the end

01:13:901 (6) - every other time this part of the rhythm is mapped you map it as 1/1 + a circle but here its a 3/2 for which I don't see the reason as the vocals also peak at 01:14:274 -
Hard

00:18:000 - normally you map all vocals with some kind of object but here you skip over one, suggest mapping a circle or at least making it somewhat played

00:21:168 (1,2) - Normally you dont make the next object after a slider with this weird movement/overlap back to the right, would just place it somewhere in the direction of where the slider was pointing

00:35:702 (4) - this object feels like its a circle because you ran out of space to put down a slider here as that would fit way better and be more consistent with previous rhythm choices, with some reorganizing you could still make this a slider

00:44:274 (3,4) - the (4) is relatively weak so I suggest ctrl+g'ing this rhythm to follow vocals better

00:49:864 (2,3) - same thing here as above that it would be a lot better for the vocals to ctrl+g this

00:50:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the current rhythm isn't following anything in the music really as the drums are loudest on every white tick and the background instrument plays on these ticks https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/E0JgzM0m (bookmarked spots)
something like https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/mFzFomZBwould work well or if it is too intense you can simplify some spots of it to 1/1 like 00:50:982 (1) -

01:01:417 (1,2) - vs 01:10:361 (1,2) - the use of these 3/4 sliders in the kiai isnt all that consistent, at spots like I just pointed out for example.
would make it consistent or just try to avoid them entirely

01:22:286 (1,2) - emphasis of the drums here is mostly on the white ticks so ctrl+g here would fit it better

01:29:553 (5,6,1) - triple for the guitar isn't really audible unless I'm deaf, seems more like one fits between these 01:28:994 (3,4) -

01:36:075 (2) - would avoid ending the tail on these super loud red ticks, would at least make them clickable when those sounds show up

01:38:777 - really loud drum here on blue, would not map the guitar pitch increase (?) and instead map the drums
^ 01:39:243 (4) - same here would also somehow make blue tick represented even if only by using a reverse
Insane

00:11:479 (6) - could NC this too so you have 2 NC's every downbeat during the 1/4's

00:25:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - In this section a lot of the jumps switch between the drums and the vocals while just making all vocals clickable and mapping the jumps to those would feel way better.
00:27:131 (1) - this part for example could be mapped like this https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/v27lExRP following mostly vocals instead of having jumps that feel like filler rhythm mostly like 00:30:112 (1,2,3,4,5) -
This problem also repeats itself a lot during the kiai

00:35:702 (5,1) - almost all other pattern follow implied sliderflow in this section but this one stands out for no reason and players will more likely play this like https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/0i1TlxRA which isn't really the intention I feel

00:47:628 (1,1) - NC is not necessary here as it still with with 00:46:883 (2,3) - for the vocals

00:49:305 (3,4,5) - large 1/2 gaps like this make this section feel pretty intense while the music is generally calm and only ramps up on 00:50:982 (1) - so would keep spacing low until that point

00:55:640 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - lowering spacing here gives a way nicer contrast with the jumps before cause those had drums, if you just compare these 2 you can here that the jumps before this have way more impact to each note

00:57:317 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this all rotates the same clockwise direction, would add some direction changes so the movement doesnt get annoying

00:58:994 (2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:00:485 (2,3,4,5,6) - sliders for vocals would make the rhythm feel better instead of feeling more like filler like I said at the start for 00:25:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

01:09:429 (1) - NC here should also be removed as you just NC'd for the downbeat
Akitoshi's Sky

00:13:342 (5) - could increase spacing a bit more for these last couple of notes as the pitch also increases there

00:50:982 (1,2,3) - mapping the first triangle like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10790171 would make movement between triangle the same which is pretty good as all triangles represent the same sounds

01:02:535 (4,5) - would change up the rhythm here and place a 1/2 instead of what you do previously to give more contrast between this and the circle only part for the vocals

01:38:684 (1,2,3) - could space these out like https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/9IFqOpnP to differentiate them from the triples you used for the guitar

gl with the map!


Updating this throughout the day

Wtf double post
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

Gottagof4st wrote:

nm mod from my queue


General

unused hitsounds: drum-hitclap.wav / drum-hitfinish.wav / drum-hitwhistle.wav / soft-hitclap.wav

Akitoshi is -Laura- now so you may want to change the gd name and add that to the tags changed

Easy

00:10:733 (1,2,3,4) - music gets a constant 1/4 added in the background so using the same rhythm as what you used for 00:07:752 (1,2,3,4) - isn't very representative.
You could use this rhythm https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/1O7xzJaE for example to switch it up Fixed

00:14:087 - there is like no hs'ing here and everything is relying on the drum hitnormal which also doesn't fit very well cause it sounds really heavy contrasting the song too much.
would stay with the soft sampleset or use custom ones instead

00:19:677 (1,2,3,4) - vs 00:13:715 (1,2,3,4) - this is pretty much the same vocal rhythm so you could map these the same way to show their similarity Fixed

00:25:640 (1) - music gets more intense from hereon but rhythm density lower, would try and map those 2/1 sliders differently to resolve this Ok

00:26:013 (2,1) - same here as previously that these could use the same rhythm to show similarity between vocal phrases in the song Sure

00:26:013 (2) - also could place claps on second and fourth white tick in each measure as that perfectly fits the drum sounds there

01:08:870 (1) - Here again, the rhythm changes from what it was previously doing at 00:56:944 (1) - and 00:59:926 (1) - Keeping it consistent is way more logical to play. Fixed

01:38:684 (1) - Try to make it so the sounds land perfectly on the red anchors as the corner for 01:39:243 - is too late and the corner for 01:39:802 - is too early Changed it from a long slider to something more rhythm sensible


Normal

objects in this diff are almost all in the centre if you crl+a which makes for not much overall movement and a cluttered feeling Increased AR to remove some of the "clutter feeling"

sv in this diff should be somewhere in between the Easy and the Hard to make for a nicer progression instead of just reusing the one for easy Ok

00:50:982 (1,2,3,4) - vs 00:52:472 (5,6) - patterning like this makes it seem like something has changed in the song while the song just stays the same here, would choose a different rhythm which could be repeated throughout this part to show this Fixed

00:56:944 (1,2) - vs 00:59:926 (1,2,3) - rhythmic inconsistencies, some vocals are mapped on red while others are skipped Fixed

01:05:889 (5,1) - downbeat should be NC'd here instead of right after, would also start the pattern for the next section on 01:05:889 (5) - by making the rhythm more like this https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/UL2oVSHO as this also shows the vocals getting less frequent towards the end Fixed

01:13:901 (6) - every other time this part of the rhythm is mapped you map it as 1/1 + a circle but here its a 3/2 for which I don't see the reason as the vocals also peak at 01:14:274 - Fixed

Ok so I ended up remapping most of this after increasing the SV, because spacing and timing were all off, but I fixed mostly everything said in here


Hard

00:18:000 - normally you map all vocals with some kind of object but here you skip over one, suggest mapping a circle or at least making it somewhat played Ok

00:21:168 (1,2) - Normally you dont make the next object after a slider with this weird movement/overlap back to the right, would just place it somewhere in the direction of where the slider was pointing Looks fine and plays fine to me

00:35:702 (4) - this object feels like its a circle because you ran out of space to put down a slider here as that would fit way better and be more consistent with previous rhythm choices, with some reorganizing you could still make this a slider Doesn't seem having a circle here makes a HUGE impact, also hard to reorganize without sacrificing play-ability and aesthetics

00:44:274 (3,4) - the (4) is relatively weak so I suggest ctrl+g'ing this rhythm to follow vocals better Sure

00:49:864 (2,3) - same thing here as above that it would be a lot better for the vocals to ctrl+g this Sure

00:50:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the current rhythm isn't following anything in the music really as the drums are loudest on every white tick and the background instrument plays on these ticks https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/E0JgzM0m (bookmarked spots)
something like https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/mFzFomZBwould work well or if it is too intense you can simplify some spots of it to 1/1 like 00:50:982 (1) - Fixed

01:01:417 (1,2) - vs 01:10:361 (1,2) - the use of these 3/4 sliders in the kiai isnt all that consistent, at spots like I just pointed out for example.
would make it consistent or just try to avoid them entirely Removed the extra circle at 01:10:361 (1,2) - but vocals here match the 3/4 slider IMO

01:22:286 (1,2) - emphasis of the drums here is mostly on the white ticks so ctrl+g here would fit it better
I agree!

01:29:553 (5,6,1) - triple for the guitar isn't really audible unless I'm deaf, seems more like one fits between these 01:28:994 (3,4) - Fixed

01:36:075 (2) - would avoid ending the tail on these super loud red ticks, would at least make them clickable when those sounds show up I think its fine because i want to keep consistent with 01:32:721 (1,2,3,4) - for readability and consistency (Also the sound on the red tick seems like a continuation of the same guitar sound so i wanted to make it a slider to represent that continuum)

01:38:777 - really loud drum here on blue, would not map the guitar pitch increase (?) and instead map the drums
^ 01:39:243 (4) - same here would also somehow make blue tick represented even if only by using a reverse I want this section to be consistent with the rest of the mapset, also mapping according to the guitar pitch increase helps to appropriate the hard difficulty.


Insane

00:11:479 (6) - could NC this too so you have 2 NC's every downbeat during the 1/4's Ok

00:25:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - In this section a lot of the jumps switch between the drums and the vocals while just making all vocals clickable and mapping the jumps to those would feel way better.
00:27:131 (1) - this part for example could be mapped like this https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/v27lExRP following mostly vocals instead of having jumps that feel like filler rhythm mostly like 00:30:112 (1,2,3,4,5) -
This problem also repeats itself a lot during the kiai Fixed

00:35:702 (5,1) - almost all other pattern follow implied sliderflow in this section but this one stands out for no reason and players will more likely play this like https://gottagof4st.s-ul.eu/0i1TlxRA which isn't really the intention I feel I felt this part needed to be emphasized so i made something that played differently

00:47:628 (1,1) - NC is not necessary here as it still with with 00:46:883 (2,3) - for the vocals Ok

00:49:305 (3,4,5) - large 1/2 gaps like this make this section feel pretty intense while the music is generally calm and only ramps up on 00:50:982 (1) - so would keep spacing low until that point Did something

00:55:640 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - lowering spacing here gives a way nicer contrast with the jumps before cause those had drums, if you just compare these 2 you can here that the jumps before this have way more impact to each note Ok

00:57:317 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this all rotates the same clockwise direction, would add some direction changes so the movement doesnt get annoying Fixed

00:58:994 (2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:00:485 (2,3,4,5,6) - sliders for vocals would make the rhythm feel better instead of feeling more like filler like I said at the start for 00:25:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -Fixed

01:09:429 (1) - NC here should also be removed as you just NC'd for the downbeat Fixed


gl with the map!

Thanks for mod!
Stack
edited that one link btw, cause i forgot a space, it should be way more clear now

Also, consistency is good when used to express similar parts in the music but you are making things consistent which should be different as the song also does something different
Your comment for the jumps on the insane also doesnt really fit as it generally has a higher amount of consecutive circles than the current top diff. laura is pretty much doing exactly what i proposed in the insane which is to map jumps to vocals, so take a look there to see how much more that rhythm fits the song
Anyway, if there are anymore weird things you could also just pm me ingame cause i may not have noticed this otherwise
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Gottagof4st wrote:

edited that one link btw, cause i forgot a space, it should be way more clear now

Also, consistency is good when used to express similar parts in the music but you are making things consistent which should be different as the song also does something different
Your comment for the jumps on the insane also doesnt really fit as it generally has a higher amount of consecutive circles than the current top diff. laura is pretty much doing exactly what i proposed in the insane which is to map jumps to vocals, so take a look there to see how much more that rhythm fits the song
Anyway, if there are anymore weird things you could also just pm me ingame cause i may not have noticed this otherwise

Ok, I looked into ways of rearranging the filler jumps, and the only ways i could think of is changing them into 1/1's which actually turned out probably to be better lol. Thanks again for mod!
Usaha
insane
00:47:628 (4,5) - this is unrankable because the repeat is covered, you have to change ur pattern.
01:22:100 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm doesnt feel like ur following the song because its just circle spam, if u were to make 01:22:100 (6,1) - 01:22:659 (3,4) - into sliders, the head of 5 should be on where the end currently is and fill in the 1/2 gaps with circles
01:30:858 (6,1) - this rhythm should be ctrl+g
01:36:261 (4,4) - should put more emphasis on these notes because the song is louder

other issues are just minor aesthetics stuff that doesnt really matter, set is pretty clean
Topic Starter
SkyFlame
Mod

Hanasaka Yui wrote:

insane
00:47:628 (4,5) - this is unrankable because the repeat is covered, you have to change ur pattern. I don't see this anywhere in the ranking criteria

01:22:100 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm doesnt feel like ur following the song because its just circle spam, if u were to make 01:22:100 (6,1) - 01:22:659 (3,4) - into sliders, the head of 5 should be on where the end currently is and fill in the 1/2 gaps with circles uhh tried but no thx, rhythm is still fine here as nothing major stands out to me

01:30:858 (6,1) - this rhythm should be ctrl+g This is fine, wanted to keep rhythm scheme same with 01:31:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

01:36:261 (4,4) - should put more emphasis on these notes because the song is louder Ok

other issues are just minor aesthetics stuff that doesnt really matter, set is pretty clean Thanks!

Sorry for late reply, was studying for finals. Thanks for mod!
Usaha
the slider reverse is unrankable
Topic Starter
SkyFlame

Hanasaka Yui wrote:


the slider reverse is unrankable


Ok updated thanks!
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