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loveFantasy
麻痺啊我對著一個offline的你 irc mod了20分鐘, 我好想去死

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19:55 <loveFantasy> : *sigh*
19:55 <loveFantasy> : 我發現你這張還有許多可mod的地方
19:55 <_Kiva> : 卧槽..
19:55 <_Kiva> : 是啊..
19:56 <_Kiva> : 我自己看了一遍发现了很多
19:56 <_Kiva> : ._.
19:56 <loveFantasy> : 可以只mod hard么www 我最喜歡hard
19:56 <_Kiva> : ._. 嗯
19:56 <loveFantasy> : 00:14:487 (9,1) - 我覺得(9)的音效移到(1)上,
19:57 <loveFantasy> : 00:37:053 (3) - 覺得頭也下finish
19:59 <loveFantasy> : 00:40:779 (1) - 我覺得這個slider和SB fade非常的搭
19:59 <loveFantasy> : 你可以考慮第二段的sb fade in/out 也改用slider
20:00 <loveFantasy> : 01:53:858 (9) - 稍微inconsistent
20:00 <loveFantasy> : 02:06:073 (6) - 往左上移一點, 折彎, 現在太醜
20:01 <loveFantasy> : 02:13:112 (1) - 音效有點Orz
20:02 <loveFantasy> : 02:40:427 (1) - SB的白圈歪了
20:02 <loveFantasy> : 03:04:861 (4) - Orz shape
20:03 <loveFantasy> : 03:20:181 (1) - 加一個一樣的SB白圈?
20:03 <loveFantasy> : [Colours] Code加 SliderBorder : 224,224,224 to所有難度
20:04 <loveFantasy> : 01:14:310 - 這邊SB在幹嘛??? 無法理解
20:07 <loveFantasy> : 你要找個MAT或BAT問問看 image dimensioner
20:08 <loveFantasy> : 他做的有一些超標的 但是是用來rotate的 我不確定是不是rankable
20:08 <loveFantasy> : 大概沒其他問題了
20:09 <loveFantasy> : 00:24:424 (1) - 你這個轉盤搞笑的遮了一堆sb effect你知道嗎 233
20:09 <loveFantasy> : 人家做得很辛苦w
Snowy Dream
Hi
杯具帝泥嚎
Yumeko Yuki
The storyboard is fantastic
change offset and resnap some circles

Download: Kozato snow - Rengetsu Ouka (_Kiva) [Yuki YukI].osu
HakuNoKaemi
00:32:912 (3,1,2) - move "1" 1 gird right,and make the "2" around "1" more better
00:46:990 - add a circle
01:07:685 (2) - volume down
01:16:794 (1) - remove whistle,add a circle at 01:17:622 with whistle Slider + 1/2( Beat Blaketed around (3))
01:42:465 (2) - 2 gird left,don't care about spacing 2 grid upped to (as Spacing in 01:40:817 (1,2,1,2) - become more equal and obtaining better graphical effect)
01:45:778 (2) - 2 gird right^
02:17:666 (2) - ctrl+r , -11
02:19:322 (4) - ctrl+r , 11
? what the 11 and -11 mean?
02:22:635 (2,1) - I dislike the overlap
02:54:096 (2,3) - try to make them symmetrical
03:14:798 (2,3,4) - 1 gird left


Naz'd some other things

Download: Kozato snow - Rengetsu Ouka (_Kiva) [Haku's Easy].osu
sherrie__fay
._.其实我只是来打星的
这个SB让我各种纠结
tsuka
人参短暂 恋爱吧少女!
Yumeko Yuki
00:47:611 (1) - add a clap now
and resnap some circles

Download: Kozato snow - Rengetsu Ouka (_Kiva) [Yuki YukI].osu
wiza
:)
MathiasXII
Okay seriously guys this map needs to be bubbled/ranked now. <3

So what's going on ?!
HakuNoKaemi

MathiasXII wrote:

Okay seriously guys this map needs to be bubbled/ranked now. <3

So what's going on ?!
James should've recheck
Topic Starter
_Kiva

MathiasXII wrote:

Okay seriously guys this map needs to be bubbled/ranked now. <3

So what's going on ?!
Hmm.. this has been bubbled and poped. most of problems are fixed.
just having little problem for rechecking here..maybe
MisakaMikoto
要有一颗少女心
zsr123
:)
Snowy Dream
Q.Q
Topic Starter
_Kiva

Snowy Dream wrote:

Q.Q
TAT
Mystica
QAQ 少女你的还没rank么 姐妹曲在看着你啊
Topic Starter
_Kiva

Mystica wrote:

QAQ 少女你的还没rank么 姐妹曲在看着你啊
哭了._. 还没RANK可能是因为少女心❤不够
LKs
Topic Starter
_Kiva

LKs wrote:

[attachment=0:270c2]Kozato snow - Rengetsu Ouka (_Kiva) [LKs].osu[/attachment:270c2]
+U
0.0 下的好大气
Regou
:D
abalee
Yuki:
01:47:330 (8) - isn't snapped...

Outa:
03:16:040 (5,6) - too close I think.

Easy:
01:07:693 (2) - decrease the volume to 70% seems better to me.

我對於為什麼某些地方要加紅線有點不理解,既沒有BPM 或 time signature change,也不是offset修正.例如54444ms和107441ms這兩條.

還有就是不要將紅線和綠線放在同一個時間點上,一條紅線就足夠了.
Topic Starter
_Kiva

abalee wrote:

Yuki:
01:47:330 (8) - isn't snapped... -FIXED

Outa:
03:16:040 (5,6) - too close I think. -FIXED

Easy:
01:07:693 (2) - decrease the volume to 70% seems better to me. -FIXED

我對於為什麼某些地方要加紅線有點不理解,既沒有BPM 或 time signature change,也不是offset修正.例如54444ms和107441ms這兩條.

還有就是不要將紅線和綠線放在同一個時間點上,一條紅線就足夠了.
目前是使用的CNF给出的TIMING 全部是为了OFFSET修正 没有红线的话打起来会有误差感

Fixed.
Thanks 阿爸
HakuNoKaemi
You can do that mod for me :3
Easy:
01:07:693 (2) - decrease the volume to 70% seems better to me. oki
Snowy Dream
ranked!
Topic Starter
_Kiva

Snowy Dream wrote:

ranked!
thanks snowy :3
Kotone
這圖咋還沒rank
Miu Matsuoka
Star~ 8-)
Takos
lovely song and map
take mys star :D
Beuchi
Hi~ :)

Storyboard Mod

~Thoughts and Suggestions~
- Lovely storyboard, very sweet~ I like how you made different versions of it to every diff :P
- At the very beginning of the song, I think the pulse of bg2 should start at 00:01:445, it looks better imo o3o
- It's highly recommended that you fade the background image of your map when you're using full screen images most of the time. The background image gives the SB Load a full 1x if you keep it active, and if you're using a lot of images at the same time, it would cause lag for the player.

~Issues and Adjustments~
- SAKURA BIG, sakura and sakura_b are actually the same image, but two of them are scaled down/cropped, why don't you use just one of them? Besides this, the max size for storyboard elements is 800x600px, so I recommend you to use sakura_b.

00:27:944 - You have bg1 and bg1_sp and I actually can't see any effect because bg1 is at full opacity so it doesn't really make any sense to have both at the same time... Also, please make Black fade earlier, this part has a 4x SB load and the black image isn't doing anything when the sky is on the screen.
02:54:510 - The load here goes up to 8,13x, but there isn't so many to worry about since scaling things breaks the counter. Still, like I said before I'd recommend you to fade the background and use images with the correct resolution (since SAKURA BIG and sakura_b are the same image you won't have so many problems with this) to decrease the lag, if there's any.

Haku's Easy
01:27:982 - No sakura leaves in this diff? :c
03:20:519 - No moon effect in this diff? :c

Ren
01:20:943 - No ring bursts in this diff? :c
01:27:982 - No sakura leaves in this diff? :c
01:48:993 - You have 2 copies of bg1 going on at the same time, remove one of them.
02:14:043 - You have bg2 and bg4 active at the same time. Since it seems you aren't using it anymore, you should fade it earlier, when bg2 appears.
03:20:519 - No moon effect in this diff? :c

Ouka
01:20:943 - No ring bursts in this diff? :c
01:27:982 - No sakura leaves in this diff? :c
01:48:993 - You have 2 copies of bg1going on at the same time, remove one of them.
02:14:043 - You have bg2 and bg4 active at the same time. Since it seems you aren't using it anymore, you should fade it earlier, when bg2 appears.
02:27:178 - bg2 disappears suddenly, you should fade it. Remember that in CTB mode the spinners aren't opaque~

Snowy
01:20:632 - bg3-b appears suddenly in the screen, you should fade it. Remember that in CTB mode spinners aren't opaque~
03:20:519 - No moon effect in this diff? :c

Yuki YukI
02:54:406 - 9.26x Load ;~; Fortunately, you can decrease the load by 2x if you remove the background image. If you set the Background Color as black in the beatmap options, you can use the background for the storyboard instead of adding another image to it.
03:20:519 - No moon effect in this diff? :c

General Mod

~General~
- About the 3 Insanes thing... I'm not really sure what to say, I guess I'd pass [Ouka] as Hard, but it seems a bit too hard imo, let's see what other modders say =x
- What are all those timing sections used for? There is no signature change and you don't really need to reset the metronome since it follows the same rythm, so right now they're useless and should be deleted. Also, I'm not sure about that BPM...
- What is spinnerspin2 used for? As long as I know, it isn't used for anything in a skin, so you should remove it.

~Haku's Easy~
01:02:725 (1,1,1) - Make the spacing even here? If you notice, the two last notes are closer than the first one is of the second.

~Ren~
00:28:358 (2,1) - Please, don't add jumps in easier diffs! >.<
00:38:709 (2) - The reverse arrow is kinda hidden with the hitburst. I'd let it pass if this were a Hard or something harder but I wouldn't do it in a Normal... :/
00:40:365 (5,1) - Please, don't add jumps in easier diffs! >.<
00:50:716 (3) - Move to the upper side of (2)? It doesn't break the spacing that way.
01:06:865 (1,2,3) - Decrease the volume here, it sounds too loud.
01:25:911 (3) - Fix spacing (compare (1,2) with (2,3) to see)
02:15:596 (1) - Why does the spacing suddenly get bigger here?
02:46:431 (3) - I'd move this away since the slider body is almost hidden...
02:46:845 (4) - Fix spacing.
02:53:682 (1) - Please, don't add jumps in easier diffs! Maybe unstack (6) to make the space even?

~Ouka~
- AR-1? The difference between the easier diff and this one is quite big (and the harder diff has AR7). I also don't get why the OD is like half of the AR >:

01:07:072 (1,2,3,4,5) - Decrease the volume here, it sounds too loud.
03:07:345 (6) - New Combo?

~Taiko Collab~
- I'd decrease the volume of the notes, they're too loud most of the time >.<

~Snowy~
- I'd decrease the volume of the notes, they're too loud most of the time >.<

02:02:760 (2,3,5) - Stack the endpoints/circles properly here!

~Yuki YukI~
- Any reason why there's a capital I at the end?
- OD-1? This one's up to you.

Nice map, but [Ren] needs a bit more of improvement :c
Good luck~
*star*
Topic Starter
_Kiva
FEEDBACK:

Beuchi-chan wrote:

General Mod

~General~
- About the 3 Insanes thing... I'm not really sure what to say, I guess I'd pass [Ouka] as Hard, but it seems a bit too hard imo, let's see what other modders say =x
-- - Ouka is considered as a HARD

- What are all those timing sections used for? There is no signature change and you don't really need to reset the metronome since it follows the same rythm, so right now they're useless and should be deleted. Also, I'm not sure about that BPM...
-- As mentioned from other MAT/BAT , these timing sections are needed due to there is tiny "offset jump" in the song and CNF has given me his suggestions for this timing.

- What is spinnerspin2 used for? As long as I know, it isn't used for anything in a skin, so you should remove it.
-- OK

~Ren~
Fixing in Progress

~Ouka~
- AR-1? The difference between the easier diff and this one is quite big (and the harder diff has AR7). I also don't get why the OD is like half of the AR >:
AR 8 gives a much better feeling for game play , i decreased OD as I dont want to it to be considered as a Insane

Fixing in Progress
Thank you so much beuchi chan :D :D
Beuchi

_Kiva wrote:

AR 8 gives a much better feeling for game play , i decreased OD as I dont want to it to be considered as a Insane
Decreasing difficulty settings just to make the difficulty easier is not a good thing to do. Right now, if you play from the easiest diff to the hardest, the jump of difficulty from Ren to Ouka is really high, and the high AR just makes it worse. If Ouka is meant to be a Hard, it feels way more natural with AR7.

Just my opinion...
Topic Starter
_Kiva

Beuchi-chan wrote:

_Kiva wrote:

AR 8 gives a much better feeling for game play , i decreased OD as I dont want to it to be considered as a Insane
Decreasing difficulty settings just to make the difficulty easier is not a good thing to do. Right now, if you play from the easiest diff to the hardest, the jump of difficulty from Ren to Ouka is really high, and the high AR just makes it worse. If Ouka is meant to be a Hard, it feels way more natural with AR7.

Just my opinion...
Seems you are quite right :D..
AR -1 in Ouka
Fixed all from your mod in Ren
Lowered Taiko volume by 10%
Waiting for other mapper's response
HakuNoKaemi
~Haku's Easy~
01:02:725 (1,1,1) - Make the spacing even here? If you notice, the two last notes are closer than the first one is of the second.
The first are distant 1 Stanza in the Tmeline, the last is distant half Stanza from the Second, it's for this that I did this...

But thank for the mod :3
KanaRin
其實Taiko有點東有可以Mod

嘛不用的話就Star算了~
Topic Starter
_Kiva

KanaRin wrote:

其實Taiko有點東有可以Mod

嘛不用的話就Star算了~
:) :) Give Mod la~
KanaRin
Mod完了~
改不改就wmf定了XD

My Rating: 9.3 / 10
KayeSara
做的太好~nice map
ReviveFullHP
我是来送星星的
Curisu
樱花~

bpm=144.906?(就一根红线?
测了很多遍...

mod
[Haku]
00:20:905 (3) - new combo?
00:27:944 - 00:32:705 add whistle at the 2nd/4th white line?
00:36:225 (1) - clap?
01:09:349 (3) - finish?
01:12:662 (2,3,4) - ^
01:15:974 (3) - ^
01:18:458 (2,3) - ^

[KagamineRen]
00:33:947 (5) - clap?
00:34:569 (1) - finish
00:37:467 (7) - remove finish
00:40:779 - finish
00:47:197 - clap?
01:25:497 - clap
01:54:479 (1) - suggest that don't use spin.
02:16:838 - clap
02:19:943 - ^?
02:40:427 - Sc2 finish
02:42:083 - ^
02:43:740 - ^
02:45:396 - ^
02:47:052 - ^
02:48:708 - ^
02:50:364 (1,2) - ^
03:00:720 - clap
03:09:415 - clap

[Ouka]
00:04:757 (3) - reduce 1/4?
00:22:975 - clap
00:23:389 - ^
00:24:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sc1 ; 00:24:631 (1,3,5) - finish
00:33:740 (5) - clap?
00:34:154 (7) - clap?
00:43:264 (9) - ctrl+r?
00:47:611 (2) - clap?
00:52:580 - +circle?
01:14:318 (1) - vol-5
01:23:634 (1) - remove nc ; 01:24:255 (3) - nc
01:30:052 - +circle
01:42:887 - clap? ; 01:43:508 (1,3) - clap?
01:52:616 - clap?
01:52:823 - clap
01:56:757 (3) - ^
01:59:448 (4) - .....strange shape...
02:20:150 - Sfinish
02:20:772 - Sc1finish
02:26:361 - +circle ; 02:26:361 (1) - reduce 1/2 and move to 02:26:568
02:58:857 - clap
03:06:517,03:06:724 - Sc2finish
03:06:931 - Sc1finish
03:12:935 - clap
03:20:181 (1) - 1grid up(lv4)

[雪天使之梦(误]
怎么hitsound那么少...
00:53:615 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 离2稍微近一点 看着怪怪的
00:56:100 (1) - 改成3/4slider+白线circle?
01:02:725 (1,5,9) - clap?
01:14:318 - finish
01:37:505 (7) - new combo
01:40:817 (6,1) - 交换new combo
01:46:614 (2) - 小声点?刺耳
02:03:795 (5) - 没和前面重叠
02:07:108 (6) - 突然停下...坑爹
02:26:361 (2) - 小声些..理由同
02:29:662 (7) - clap
02:37:115 (9) - clap
02:39:599 - clap
02:40:013 - ^
02:40:220 - ^
02:40:427 (5) - finish
02:44:257 - +circle?
02:51:192 - clap
02:52:021 - ^
02:52:435 - ^
02:52:849 - ^
02:53:682 - Sc1finish
03:01:548 (5) - 没对齐1末尾?

[Yuki~~]
00:03:515 (4) - 直接把3 ctrl+H吧 不用ctrl+J
00:13:659 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - ddkkddkkdd
00:33:326 (7) - ctrl+r
01:36:056 (1) - 稍微有点小坑爹了...间距缩小一些?
01:42:680 (1,2) - 这里的0.5x意义是?
01:46:821 (5,6,7,8,9) - 5和6不等距呢02:39:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 微曲线排列?
sry 4 super looooooooooooooooong mod
star
Mystica
每看一次都要蛋疼一次
继续kds star
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