pieguy1372 wrote:

Yumeko's Ouka:

00:27:524 - Add a note?
00:36:426 (9) - New combo
00:39:524 (5) - Add a New Combo
00:40:773 (1) - Remove this New Combo and put it on (2). Also, I'm not sure I quite like how this goes. I'd recommend moving (2) to where this slider starts, and possibly shortening this slider by 1/8.
00:41:809 (4) - Somewhat confusing (perhaps shorten it by 1/2 and add a note where the slider ends)
00:44:500 (6) - Add a New Combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo
01:27:564 (8) - Add a New Combo here and remove it from (1)
01:29:220 (6) - ^
01:34:187 (11) - ^
01:36:050 (5) - Too close to (4). Also, new combo?
01:39:155 (7) - Add a New Combo here and remove it from (1)
01:41:018 (1) - Remove this New Combo
01:42:674 (1,2,3) - Too close to each other (somewhat confusing)
02:00:681 (5) - Add a New Combo here and remove it from (1)
02:02:337 (10) - ^
02:03:993 (6) - ^
02:05:649 (3) - ^
02:08:960 (7) - ^
02:10:616 (7) - ^
02:13:928 (11) - ^
02:15:376 (5) - Add a New Combo here
02:16:825 (1) - Remove this New Combo
02:17:239 (3) - Add a New Combo
02:20:551 (9) - Add a New Combo here and remove it from (1)
02:22:207 (7) - ^

Colin Hou wrote:

[Yumeko's Ouka]:

1. 01:36:050 (5) - new combo fixed
2. plz map to the end, this is really an excellent work and you should finish this done but maybe not well as before
3. 00:52:771 (1) - start this at 00:52:884 and add note here. fixed
4. 01:39:983 (2) - you can notice its end is not correctly placed under (1). adjust this slider with your shift button down can fix this. fixed
5. 02:12:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - more smoothly? fixed

soulfear wrote:

這樣的BPM大丈夫?

soulfear wrote:

這樣的BPM大丈夫?

DragonSparta wrote:

Gatsu
00:16:353 (3) - Move this nearer to 4
00:18:001 (1,1,1,1) - Move them nearer to each other
00:29:545 (1) - Unrankable slider...cannot see the reverse sign
00:38:664 (1) - Move this closer to the previous note
Bad Diff. There are notes too far from each other

Agree
I havent spent any time on this diff yet
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Star~

ZHSteven wrote:

awesome arrangement and hitsound~
Like it very much~
just take note:

For ddd519's Koi:
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I don't know this is acceptable or not but... It is better not do like this...
It will make the whole map playing like "relax" mod..
if you want to reduce the star rate, my suggest is just change some of the stream into slider+note+slider.
Streams in this diff make it insane..

Star~

sico91212 wrote:

[Yumeko's Ouka]
first. you should resnap all notes after changed timing!
and HP Drain Rate is 8, your should add more combo set
so here is my modding without combo mod(all diff)
00:02:268 - no break
00:35:598 - haaaa....
01:36:050 (1) - hmmmm.....
01:43:501 - ehhhhh...
02:31:522 - distance!
02:23:862 (1) - it too long,i lost so many HP about |--------------------------------------------------------| this much HP in HDR 8. you could add note here (02:27:174 -)and spinner end in blue line

Please mod all diffs EXCEPT 3.5star

soulfear wrote:

歌名:Rengetsu Ouka

sico91212 wrote:

你的BPM和offset实在让我无法接受，但我暂时也没办法确定正确的timing.这歌似乎有ddr3的bms，我会试着找找。

sico91212 wrote:

BPM测定软件是渣，pokie的BPM在无变奏处都需要两个offset来修减误差，而且我手测结果也和它相去甚远，这结果让我不能接受

Insane
Interesting choice of hitsounds.
00:02:889 (x) - add note
00:02:992 (x) - ^
00:11:791 (2) - replace 1/4 early
00:49:680 (5) - finish at start sounds bad, change it.
~2:17 - 2:26 - sounds like techno. fun :3
02:46:742 (2) - add note

winber1 wrote:

Insane[/b]

00:44:500(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing between some combos are different than others. I'm not sure if they supposed to look kinda weird(at least in my opinion) like that, but maybe you could make it more symmetrical. I'm mostly speaking of combo 3 tho.
00:49:675(5) - i don't think you should slience this
00:52:367(6) - 1 grid down?
01:30:665(1) - combo may work better if you delete this new combo and add a new combo at 01:31:701
02:01:922(5..etc) - whistle sounds a little weird to me lol. I kind of just like the more simple and calm hitsounds of Yumeko's Ouka (just a comment tho).
02:52:021(1,2,3,4,5,6) - i will probably get 300's if i just continuously press the notes in a regular 1/4 beat fashion, but still, this triplet grouping doesn't fit in my opinion.
02:54:815(6) - i would much rather have this slider start 1/4 beat later. In other words, switch the timing of combo 7 and 6 around.
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winber1 wrote:

Yumeko's Ouka

02:00:262(red timing section) - does not seem to be needed... i think is necessary....
02:31:522(3) - i would rather this spacing be more correct fixed
02:54:294(3,4,5) - looks readable, but the time of when you need to actually press the note is not very clear in my opinion, cuz the music doesn't go along with these triplet type things. thanks for suggestion
Awesome hitsounds :3
and nice map

dksslqj wrote:

[ddd519]
HR +4
AR +1
CR +1
orz biggest circle cize doesn't fit this song

_Kiva wrote:

Ok look
In my song theres a change in bpm
it is so tiny that we cant find a perfect one
here's the song
just notice at my second red line
theres the change

Koi Gatsu Ouka
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24765

MathiasXII wrote:

EDIT : Download the new mp3 here, put your old MP3 somewhere safe, remove the offset change in your beatmap in Osu!, and send me feedback . Oh and don't hesitate if we're on the right track, but it still needs a slight change. I saved it in editable format.

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Wiinter wrote:

Yumeko's Ouka
01:36:878 (4) - new combo fixed

senaya wrote:

[Yumeko's Ouka]
03:00:298 (1) - finish or clap? add clap
03:02:782 (5,6) - add something at these? I've tried clap, but I think it doesn't fit thanks for suggestion

_Kiva wrote:

MathiasXII wrote:

EDIT : Download the new mp3 here, put your old MP3 somewhere safe, remove the offset change in your beatmap in Osu!, and send me feedback . Oh and don't hesitate if we're on the right track, but it still needs a slight change. I saved it in editable format.

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I have try to put the new mp3 in, and sounds like you have changed the whole offset ,which causes all sound effects become delayed
as you said the bpm hasnt change. so it remains at 144.913
I have tryed to use 145 , but sounds bit too fast
the second offset (120266) is the main problem . the second red time line is set for re-adjust this tiny change but i still not sure if 120266 is accurate or not
as long as other players thinks it is sounds alright XD

MathiasXII wrote:

Oh and BTW, in insane : 01:59:662, I doubt that part will ever be rankable XD There's a slider and two notes all tangled. Probably something you didn't notice.

(As long as the timing is really small and players would notice much )