My first impression of your map was that your map is too old-style.
If you want to rank this mapset (and further mapsets you'll make), You'll need to change your mapping style.
Here are some examples of old-style maps :
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/18682https://osu.ppy.sh/b/36547https://osu.ppy.sh/b/86996and examples of recent-style maps :
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/495590https://osu.ppy.sh/b/781124https://osu.ppy.sh/b/716269https://osu.ppy.sh/b/782310take a look of those, compare, and find out what's the general differences of them.
Old maps
-patterns are quiet inconsistent even when the music is same/repeating.
-use pretty random DS(distance snap) changes regardless of whether the music/beat is strong or not.
-make lots of polygonal patterns (or some gimmicky ones) not considering the flow.
-switches between slider/circles randomly (without good reason).
Recent maps
-use DS changes where the beat goes strong/the mapper wants to highlight.
-rarely use continuous circles (like more than 4) unless it's a part where the mapper is emphasizing, and make good & enjoyable combination of sliders and circles.
-^ when using continuous circles, the flow is more back&forth-y rather than straight.
You can see
this is much more comfortable and even enjoyable to play than
this or
this -use blanket patterns very frequently
This is a short example I made :
http://puu.sh/oogpJ/b2ee3b0f34.osz- the whole map is ctrl+c,v of blanket patterns, but with some little changes like rotating or ctrl+G
- 00:06:000 (1,2,3,4) - I used slower SV and easier patterns where I feel the music is weak.
- notice how 00:07:800 (1,2,3) - 00:09:600 (1,2,3) - is easier than previous 00:00:600 (1,2,3) - 00:02:400 (1,2,3) - ones
- I made this 00:06:600 (2) - and 00:07:500 (4) - this clickable but not here 00:13:800 - and 00:14:700 - by using repeating slider where the music is weaker.
So, what I want to say is:
-make patterns considering the music
-make jump patterns back & forthy rather than staright or polygonal (except triangles, since they are queit back & forth-y imo)
-using some blanket patterns would be nice!(
t/208596 this topic will help)
mmm, here's the thing: I actually kinda made the whole thing to be old style-ish because i kinda like some of the older maps (you can kill me if you want ) but since you mentioned the style may lead to problems when i try ranking stuff, i changed some stuff just so the map does not feel that much like the old stuff. Thanks for the tips and for the example