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TeddyLoid feat. Bonjour Suzuki - Pipo Password

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Kyubey
osu! Alumni
3,097 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Kyubey
Battle
[General]
Could turn off widescreen support even though it doesn't do anything lol well okay
[Insane]
01:13:492 (4,5) - mm if you have something like this, why not make it kinda seem like's it's trying to accomplish a patternish thing like 00:13:658 (8,1) - ? moved earlier note a little
I think I know how people feel like when they mod some low diff spreads for low bpm now lol
Cryptic
[340's Hard]
  1. OD 8 on a hard...? OD 7 please? sorry i forgot to change it for him, changed to 6
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:825 (6,7,1) - Why are two of the softest drums getting the largest jumps? I mean, it flows well but it just feels weird. to build up some tense, decreasing spacing feels more weird to me
  2. 00:31:158 (1,1) - You can blanket the one better obligatory okay
  3. 01:03:658 - 01:03:742 - Map the triplet, I dare you. okay, mapped in the beginning too
  4. 01:08:825 (6,7,8) - This pattern kind of looks and feels weird to me. I think either the 7 should be a slider and you get rid of the 8, or you should move the 8 higher to be kind of between the slider-end of the 6 and the 9. imo stack looks better here, and i did the almost same thing 01:19:492 - here

    Thats all I found for this diff~!
I love this song, and the set is really nice as well. Good luck~!
Thanks!
340
330 posts
Joined January 2014
340
Battle

Battle wrote:

[Hard]
00:12:825 (3) - I think it would be better to remove the repeat and make 00:13:158 - clickable instead, the sound on that tick kinda feels meh when it's just on the end of a repeat slider ok
00:14:825 (6) - ^ Same kinda of reasoning, plus, 7 being on blue ticks is ew (Yes, I realize this is 180 bpm basically) but the beat on the white tick is strong, and you have it on a repeat end while you make passive beats clickable so I don't see why you wouldn't want to change that i like this moment as it is, plus i don't really know how to place this objects on playfield
00:46:492 (5,1,2,3) - Meh, I really feel like this spacing is pretty confusing, the spacing for 5->1 is very similar to 1->2 but the pauses in between notes are very different, some clarity would be nice here uhhh okay
01:08:325 (2,3,4,5) - I have to say, it's kinda weird how you made like, the thumps 3,4 have large spacing while you made 5 have less spacing. imo you should make it reversed, since 5 is louder and more emphasized in the music (at least to me) ok

Cryptic

Cryptic wrote:

[340's Hard]
  1. OD 8 on a hard...? OD 7 please? seems like you didn't update the mapset :S
  2. 00:53:492 (1,2) - Maybe un-overlap these a bit? i don't really see a reason why
  3. 00:59:158 (1,2,3,4) - The difference in distance snapping here is really weird, make it a square not like, a rectangle how did you even notice this lol. applied
  4. 01:12:492 (3,4,5) - Maybe make DS consistent here? ok

Link: http://f.s-ul.eu/lApXiMxL
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
"Battle"
[Normal]
Maybe increase stack leniency to make it stack? Things like 00:23:158 (4,1) - can be quite difficult to read with this low SL okay
00:09:658 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hm, maybe simplify the rhythm a little bit, the introduction of 1/4 is good, but I feel like this rhythm should be reserved to only be clicked once, and that's at the start of the kiai, but then again people may colplain about structure lol sorry, but i prefer my rhythm :<

00:33:825 (4) - I think what you did for 00:24:825 (2,3) - works better in this case, since there's vocals going on on the red tick okay
00:34:825 (5) - You should make this two circles or something (like a circle then a slider) because like, she's inhaling on the downbeat, and it's a pretty loud inhale okay
00:36:158 (3) - Maybe end on red tick and make white tick clickable to better follow vocal? okay

"Cryptic"
[EruJazz's Easy]
[ryuu's Normal]
  1. 00:09:658 (1) - Same thing I mentioned for the easy, should a Normal diff have a starting point so far from the center? i don't think so ~
  2. 00:10:825 (4) - This slider feels really unnecessary and sounds a bit awkward in my opinion. The sound its mapped to is really quiet and seems a bit too quiet for a normal, but I wouldn't be opposed to the 00:10:658 (3) - being a repeating slider instead. i still prefer my rhythm :<
  3. 00:31:158 (1) - I think this sounds better extended to the red tick. okay
  4. 00:39:158 - Super strong beat here I think should be accented in some way. okay
  5. 01:12:158 (1,2) - Feels better as a repeating slider. okay

    This looks pretty nice as well.

thanks for modding!
Lasse
Beatmap Nominator
3,596 posts
Joined June 2011
Lasse
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[general]
putting whistles on those sounds like 01:09:158 (7) - would be really nice
why do most of the diffs have a soft finish on 01:12:492 (1) - there is nothing in the music that would fit with
=> usage of soft-finishes for 01:12:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - seems a bit weird actually, since the only cymbal seems to be on 01:13:658 -
soft-sliderslide2 should probably be silenced like the other one

[insane]
00:33:825 (7) - spacing this would make sense with how you spaced vocals on 00:32:825 (2,3,4) - etc.
00:56:325 - and00:58:992 - could actually be replaced with a 1/16 repeat lol. hitwindows is fine anyways since it's 90bpm. think it would work really well
00:59:825 (3) - would work well with some more emphasis than 2 and 4 for the snare. making the square into a rectangle woudl do that without affecting following pattern

[elvis]
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/194910
slighty higher hp just so it's between the highest diff and irre's?
00:58:825 (8) - buzzing sound only seems to start on the blue tick so splitting it like http://i.imgur.com/MCro7iX.jpg would work better
01:01:492 (1) - why no acute angle for this 2=>1 jump like all others in the pattern (even though I'd havbe no idea where to put it then lol)
01:01:825 (1,1,2) -could you manually stack this or sth? autostack makes it look stupid, there are some more in the chorus and it's pretty noticeable with that ar

[irre]
00:16:992 - as sliderend while 00:17:492 (2) - is pretty much the same but mapped clickable?
00:26:492 - muting this doesn't really work that well since the sound is way stronger than 00:24:158 - , if you actually keep it silencing 00:29:492 - would make it more consistent (but that wouldnt make much sense to me)
00:46:992 (3,4,5) - rip http://lasse.s-ul.eu/m0futz9R
00:56:325 - no 1/16 buzzsliders on this diff either :(
01:01:658 (4) - spacing it like 01:00:992 (4) - would work better since suddenly stacking that sound seems really strange
01:18:492 (1,1,1) - why ncspam?

[340]
01:17:658 (7) - sudden higher spacing for this seems unfitting with the music and it's also the only time you do it it seems
01:23:158 - could really delay the spinner and use a note here cause it feels so empty right now

[normal]
00:36:158 (3) - wave is really off and for such a slow/long slider is pretty noticeable while playing

[erujazz]
00:18:492 (2) - spacing difference is kinda noticeable here and doesn't look nice, even if it has no impact on read-/playability
Kyubey
osu! Alumni
3,097 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Kyubey
Lasse
[general]
putting whistles on those sounds like 01:09:158 (7) - would be really nice whistle is inaudible with that clap actually, and i don't really understand what to emphasize there so i don't feel like placing it
why do most of the diffs have a soft finish on 01:12:492 (1) - there is nothing in the music that would fit with
=> usage of soft-finishes for 01:12:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - seems a bit weird actually, since the only cymbal seems to be on 01:13:658 -
soft-sliderslide2 should probably be silenced like the other one all these finishes there build tense up and i like how it sounds

[insane]
00:33:825 (7) - spacing this would make sense with how you spaced vocals on 00:32:825 (2,3,4) - etc. increased
00:56:325 - and00:58:992 - could actually be replaced with a 1/16 repeat lol. hitwindows is fine anyways since it's 90bpm. think it would work really well that thing doesn't sound appealing to me, i prefer simple rhythms in that part, just like how simple is that part in music itself
00:59:825 (3) - would work well with some more emphasis than 2 and 4 for the snare. making the square into a rectangle woudl do that without affecting following pattern rectangle isn't that appealing visually as square and changes actually nothing imo
Thanks!
340
330 posts
Joined January 2014
340
applied everything from Lasse's mod

Link: http://f.s-ul.eu/a47H7qSd
Kobold84
Global Moderator
1,201 posts
Joined September 2013
Kobold84
простите меня, Ирре и Модератор.

[insane]
00:44:158 (4,5,6,7) - ну вот здесь можно было бы и под вокал замаппать! http://kobold.s-ul.eu/ol1FdHNC.png — что-нибудь вроде такого сделать.

[pepvis]
будь человеком, сделай ар8.
00:17:825 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ну что это такое.

[normal]
00:10:658 (3,4) - очень сложно играть такие паттерны, по сути это же 180 бпм.
01:03:992 (3,4) - да.
01:17:492 (1,2) - да.

[easy]
00:25:825 (3) - I'm not really sure you should use such a short reverse slider in easy with a low bpm and slow song. You could easily change it to normal slider.
00:45:825 (4) - same.
00:51:158 (3) - something something.
00:59:158 (1) - asdf
01:00:492 (2) - although I love this one.
FCL
1,478 posts
Joined July 2014
FCL
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  • [Insane]
  1. 00:10:825 (8) - мне кажется этот вистл тут лишним, звучит он как-то так себе в комбинации с нормал семплами здесь, без него как-то лучше
  2. 00:21:825 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - вот тут я не совсем уверен, но оффсет немного сбит. Следуешь ты тут вокалу и такое чувство, что вокал идет немного быстрее. Вот тут особенно сильно чувствуется 00:28:158 (2,3,4) -
  3. 00:49:158 (3) - просто нази предложение переместить на 363 290. Выглядит красивее, т.к. образует таким образом почти ровный угол в 90 градусов
  4. 00:50:158 (7,8) - как-то слишком близко находятся, не очень красиво выглядит. Чуть дальше отодвинуть 00:50:492 (8) - было бы неплохо
  5. 00:59:825 (3,4) - вот тут мне кажется можно более ровнее линию сделать для идеального квардрата
  6. 01:04:158 (9) - так же как и ранее, звучит не очень на фоне нормалов
  7. 01:17:825 (1,3) - тоже достаточно близко, можно было немного раздвинуть

  • [Elvis]
  1. ар 7.5 это не шутка? серьезно, лично мне трудно понять что тут происходит с таким ар'ом
  2. 00:20:658 (3) - тут ,кажется, должен быть нормал клап, а не драм
  3. 00:21:158 (1,2,3,4) - а вот тут мне больше нравится вариант с четырьмя нормал клапами (по сути как ты делал раньше). Звучит хорошо и песне соответствует
  4. 00:45:158 (4) - может нормал семпсет добавить для похожих нот? Без него звучит как-то пусто чтоли
  5. 00:56:325 (1) - также могу предложить добавить драм семлсеты для подобных 1/16 слайдеров, звучит довольно классно
  6. 01:01:825 (1) - этот бы слайдертик как-то заглушить. Может поставить тут default soft и просто заглушить тик зелеными линиями?
  7. 01:08:158 - не очень нравится как ты пропускаешь ноту здесь, мне она кажется довольно сильной
  8. 01:18:825 - ^
  9. 01:24:158 (1) - эту ноту почти не слышно здесь, я бы рекомендовал увеличить громкость только для это ноты до процентов 60% примерно
  10. 01:24:825 (1,1,1) - можно сделать убывающий эффект, смотрелось бы прекрасно http://puu.sh/orzfE/5ae61a627f.jpg

  • [Irre]
  1. 00:12:325 (4,5) - just you could make their more neat http://puu.sh/orzos/7fcdc811a1.jpg
  2. 00:25:158 (3) - maybe add a whistle? Vocal at this place feels pretty strong
  3. 00:32:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4) - this part doesn't hitsounded lol. Even If you made it intentionally this part feels really weird at least without whistles who would cool fit with vocal
  4. 00:45:158 (6,1) - you could make this blanket more neat
  5. 01:01:658 (4) - Don't like stack here since he's can breaking the flow. But anyway if you want to keep it, you should stack 01:01:158 (1,2) - cuz they have similar sounds too
  6. 01:14:325 (4,1) - blanket pls
  7. 01:20:492 (2,4) - intentionally unstacked?

  • [3 4 0]
  1. 00:40:158 (6) - я конечно понимаю. что ты пытаешься следовать вокалу, но конкретно тут игнорирование двух последующих битов выглядит как-то странно. 1/4 репит вместо круга выглядел бы гораздо лучше
  2. 00:44:492 (3) - на 239 285 для красоты
  3. 00:48:492 (2) - на 74 242 для бланкета
  4. 01:01:825 (5) - я бы нк поставил, так как у тебя кончается секция со слайдерами + начинается сильный бит
  5. 01:20:158 (1) - стакни с концом 01:18:492 (2) - для красоты


  • [ryuu]
  1. сказать мне особо нечего, разве что стоит лишние зеленые линии удалить

  • [erujazz]
  1. fine
Kyubey
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Kyubey
Kobold84
[insane]
00:44:158 (4,5,6,7) - ну вот здесь можно было бы и под вокал замаппать! http://kobold.s-ul.eu/ol1FdHNC.png — что-нибудь вроде такого сделать. если честно, слайдер, заканчивающийся на бит, тут странно звучит для меня
FCL
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:10:825 (8) - мне кажется этот вистл тут лишним, звучит он как-то так себе в комбинации с нормал семплами здесь, без него как-то лучше скучновато без него, как по мне
  2. 00:21:825 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - вот тут я не совсем уверен, но оффсет немного сбит. Следуешь ты тут вокалу и такое чувство, что вокал идет немного быстрее. Вот тут особенно сильно чувствуется 00:28:158 (2,3,4) - ну, вокалы — это довольно расплывчатая вещь, их нормально не затаймишь, так что пусть будет как-то так, с одной линией
  3. 00:49:158 (3) - просто нази предложение переместить на 363 290. Выглядит красивее, т.к. образует таким образом почти ровный угол в 90 градусов подвинул
  4. 00:50:158 (7,8) - как-то слишком близко находятся, не очень красиво выглядит. Чуть дальше отодвинуть 00:50:492 (8) - было бы неплохо чуть подвинул
  5. 00:59:825 (3,4) - вот тут мне кажется можно более ровнее линию сделать для идеального квардрата но тут и так идеальный квадрат, я копипастом ноты тут делал и поворотом на 90 градусов
  6. 01:04:158 (9) - так же как и ранее, звучит не очень на фоне нормалов тоже скучновато
  7. 01:17:825 (1,3) - тоже достаточно близко, можно было немного раздвинуть угу
Спасибо!
340
330 posts
Joined January 2014
340
FCL

FCL wrote:

  • [3 4 0]
  1. 00:40:158 (6) - я конечно понимаю. что ты пытаешься следовать вокалу, но конкретно тут игнорирование двух последующих битов выглядит как-то странно. 1/4 репит вместо круга выглядел бы гораздо лучше изменил
  2. 00:44:492 (3) - на 239 285 для красоты изменил
  3. 00:48:492 (2) - на 74 242 для бланкета изменил
  4. 01:01:825 (5) - я бы нк поставил, так как у тебя кончается секция со слайдерами + начинается сильный бит изменил
  5. 01:20:158 (1) - стакни с концом 01:18:492 (2) - для красоты при игре этого ну совсем не видно, да и мне лень

Link: http://f.s-ul.eu/5lK8JHuZ
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
Kobold84
[normal]
00:10:658 (3,4) - очень сложно играть такие паттерны, по сути это же 180 бпм. да :с
01:03:992 (3,4) - да. да :с
01:17:492 (1,2) - да. да :с

FCL
  • [ryuu]
  1. сказать мне особо нечего, разве что стоит лишние зеленые линии удалить а я давно всё удалила о.о если где-то не увидела, укажи, пожалуйста

спасибо!
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
1
osu file format v14

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Title:Pipo Password
TitleUnicode:Pipo Password
Artist:TeddyLoid feat. Bonjour Suzuki
ArtistUnicode:TeddyLoid feat. ボンジュール鈴木
Creator:Kyubey
Version:Irre's Insane
Source:宇宙パトロールルル子
Tags:space uchuu patrol luluco ending ed tv size tvsize evilelvis ErunamoJAZZ 340 ryuu irreversible
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fixed all~
ErunamoJAZZ
osu! Alumni
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ErunamoJAZZ
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Fixed all spacing.

Kobold84, I think repeats are slow and very easy to read so, those will does not have problem 8-)


Thank you for mods!
Natteke desu
2,487 posts
Joined August 2012
Natteke desu
no changes from my side tho (except hp drain suggestion), because i disagree with every point mentoined, as for aibat stuff, kyubey said that it's outdated so i don't have to worry about this, thanks for mods people
Namki
1,281 posts
Joined November 2014
Namki
Прив, не стал трогать хай диффы, ибо смысла нет.
Easy
  1. 00:13:158 (2,3) - ctrl+g, because of 00:13:825 - this upbeat.
  2. No video in this diff.
  3. 00:31:158 (4,5) - 1/1 slider and circle at big white tick instead, you can also add whistle here 00:31:158 (4) - imo fits good. And finish or clap here 00:31:158 (4) - .
Normal
  1. 00:13:492 (3) - либо я чего-то не понимаю, но почему тут финиш стоит, разве он подходит, какой-нибудь софт свисток лучше подошел бы.
    00:15:492 (3) - ну да, и тут тоже.
    Ну не знаю, всё выглядит как-то слишком хорошо, я, конечно, мог бы написать всякую нази херню, но кому это нужно...
Hard
  1. 00:13:492 (1,2) - мне кажется, слайдер будет получше здесь звучать.
  2. 00:40:158 (6) - а вот здесь заместо репита предлагаю поставить 1/2 слайдер.
  3. 00:59:158 (1,2,3,4) - на них можно клап поставить.
  4. 01:22:992 - пропустил же бит.
Ну що тут сказати
Не понимаю, почему Алексей просит меня помодить его мапки.
Удачи~
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
qb, поставишь там софт-висл? два раза
спасибо

и спасибо намки тоже
ErunamoJAZZ
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ErunamoJAZZ
00:13:158 (2,3) - done
00:31:158 (4,5) - Not agree.
and sorry about video, I redownloaded again >_<


Thanks Namki :3!

http://puu.sh/ouoNk/966307ec25.zip
340
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Namki

Namki wrote:

выглядит как-то слишком хорошо, я, конечно, мог бы написать всякую нази херню, но кому это нужно...[/list]

Hard
  1. 00:13:492 (1,2) - мне кажется, слайдер будет получше здесь звучать. и так вполне неплохо, как по мне
  2. 00:40:158 (6) - а вот здесь заместо репита предлагаю поставить 1/2 слайдер. ну неее, этот ударный слишком громкий, чтобы его просто так пропускать
  3. 00:59:158 (1,2,3,4) - на них можно клап поставить. клапы не ставил, решил сделать как у кьюбея, но спасибо за наводку
  4. 01:22:992 - пропустил же бит. как по мне, он какой-то незначительный, лучше будет без его выделения

Link: http://f.s-ul.eu/NNKXPeEx
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,416 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
единственное, что смущает — внезапное обилие финишей абсолютно на всех дифках на киаи, зачем? слишком резкий звук для того, что происходит (и даже не знаю, что здесь воспринимается мною хуже, дефолтные мягкие финиши или те, которые у Элвиса и Ирре)
Kyubey
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Topic Starter
Kyubey
Лично мне нравится, как они напряжение нагоняют в серединке киая, под паттерны на инсейне с увеличенным спейсингом.
Natteke desu
2,487 posts
Joined August 2012
Natteke desu
asd
osu file format v14

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Version:Elvis' Insane
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Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Yoges
Heyy hope you don't mind me modding first since this is probably the only free time I'll have in weeks.

[EJay's Ez]
  1. 00:09:658 - I don't think that should end on the white tick it should end on the 1/4 after it because it has a more prominent sound, you could even do a repeat like this. Some might say "but that ends on a 1/4... you cant have 1/4 in Ez diffs". Well consider the same thing from the slider's frame of reference. The note itself begins on a 1/4 so to it the 1/4 on the end isn't a 1/4, its a 1/2. If you're not going to follow my suggestion then I suggest that you at least mute the slider end to make it sound better. (or do both)
  2. 00:52:491 - I don't see why you decided not to put a note there. Seems rather unfitting and empty.

[ryuugu's Normal]
  1. 00:09:658 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try a rhythm like this for the beginning, it's much more intuitive and plays nicer.
  2. 00:39:492 (4,5) - I don't think the way they're angled looks good, like if this was a harder diff where you had the freedom to space them more then they would be fine but since you can't it just looks weird because they're so close together. You should just make them parallel.
  3. 01:04:825 - I'd prefer if that was clickable because the vocals are a bit strong
  4. 01:09:492 (1,2) - The two sliders here don't feel right because the vocals do not pair. Some parts are more prominent than others. Use rhythm like this instead, It'll follow the vocals much better.


[420's Hard]
  1. No complaints looks perfect to me


[CS5's Insane]
  1. 00:19:158 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Maybe use a different rhythm towards the end? Around like 00:20:826 (2,1,2) - ? Because from 00:18:158 (3) - to 00:23:825 (3) - the rhythm is just 1/2. Like it's just 5 and a half seconds of 1/2 for my fingers which gets a bit boring.
  2. 01:23:158 (2) - Emmm... No pls. It's overly slow and boring for me like nothing's preventing you from continuing to follow the vocals which would be a wiser choice in my book.

[Elvi's Insane]
  1. AR 8.5 please?
  2. 00:20:158 - This entire section with the stack notes is super unclear for me to read. This is probably because of your spacing. You're just stacking the notes regardless of how much time passes between them. I'd suggest using manual stacks with different spacings for the different notes. Like a 1/2 would be spaced more than a 1/4 etc. it'd be much easier to follow that way. Other then that the diff looks fine.

[Insane]
  1. All G 4 me
Natteke desu
2,487 posts
Joined August 2012
Natteke desu
1/4 manual stack, 1/4 manual stack, 1/2 auto stack, 1/4 auto stack, same goes for the second half of the part you mentoined

ar will stay as it is
ErunamoJAZZ
osu! Alumni
2,693 posts
Joined August 2012
ErunamoJAZZ

Yoges wrote:

[EJay's Ez]
  1. 00:09:658 - I don't think that should end on the white tick it should end on the 1/4 after it because it has a more prominent sound, you could even do a repeat like this. Some might say "but that ends on a 1/4... you cant have 1/4 in Ez diffs". Well consider the same thing from the slider's frame of reference. The note itself begins on a 1/4 so to it the 1/4 on the end isn't a 1/4, its a 1/2. If you're not going to follow my suggestion then I suggest that you at least mute the slider end to make it sound better. (or do both)
    I know the more accurate rhythm is in blue tick, but it feels inappropriate for a easy because spacing is very different and I think this could be confuse for new players. Your suggestion with repeats will not work fine in a easy imo, for me that could be fine in normal diffs, but not in easy diffs (except if does not exist "any other" alternative, but here is not the case).
  2. 00:52:491 - I don't see why you decided not to put a note there. Seems rather unfitting and empty. because 1) In easy diffs is good idea keep relaxing seccions. 2) I feels it appropriate here.
Thank you anyway n.n
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
Yoges
[ryuugu's Normal]
  1. 00:09:658 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try a rhythm like this for the beginning, it's much more intuitive and plays nicer. thank u
  2. 00:39:492 (4,5) - I don't think the way they're angled looks good, like if this was a harder diff where you had the freedom to space them more then they would be fine but since you can't it just looks weird because they're so close together. You should just make them parallel. okay
  3. 01:04:825 - I'd prefer if that was clickable because the vocals are a bit strong okay
  4. 01:09:492 (1,2) - The two sliders here don't feel right because the vocals do not pair. Some parts are more prominent than others. Use rhythm like this instead, It'll follow the vocals much better. thank u
ugu
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love this map :roll:
Kyubey
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Wafu
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Wafu
[General]
  1. I guess the video quality could be better, it's really pixelated all over, while you still have a lot of space you could potentially use. You may want to try this one. I am not forcing anything, just, why not using something that'll look better.
  2. Is there any meaning of tvsize tag, if it consists of two previous tags, therefore doing nothing?
[EruJazz's Easy]
  1. 00:09:658 (1) - I would end this slider on 00:10:158 - or 00:10:658 - as these spots are the main sounds in such a drum pattern and ending it on a minor one doesn't sound that well. It's a blue tick, but still, you can use the first option. I'd say the second option is better, even though the time between next object is little lower, should be fairy playable though.
  2. 00:21:825 (1,2) - The gap between these two objects is too high. I think you probably wanted some little pause, but if you mapped 00:27:158 (1,2) - like this, there's essentially no reason to keep the first one completely unmapped.
  3. 01:09:825 (1,3) - That's a little, just personal opinion, but I don't really like shapes of these sliders with three points in center. They look like having some weird bump in the middle, maybe it could work better if replaced with regular wave slider with red anchor rather than three white anchors.
  4. When it comes to hitsounds, this difficulty had really some poor gaps. I'd welcome if slidertick hitsounds were used, that would fill really big amount of skipped hitsounds and the map could sound really well with them.
[ryuu's Normal]
  1. 01:05:825 (4,5) - I don't think the distance should be that different from other objects, most likely a spacing mistake, because I don't see any thing that would indicate the change.
[340's Hard]
  1. 00:32:492 (2,1) - The new combo seems to be set improperly. It's musically the same as 00:21:825 (1) - and in addition, the first note starts a new variation, making it more appropriate for a new combo.
  2. 00:32:492 (2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I'd say this part is way too much about the vocals. I am not saying mapping vocals is wrong, but you definitely ignore many important sounds, especially kick drums and those parts feel really empty. Such as 00:33:658 - 00:35:158 - 00:36:325 - 00:36:658 - . Mapping them would make a some variety between the calm part and the part with drums, that would be a little bit more unique and fun to play. Also 00:38:158 (2,3) - seems really out of the song. It maps exactly the least significant parts of this part in my opinion and mapping it to those foreground instruments would offer you many good rhythms, which sound much better than this one.
  3. The map style itself is quite good to be honest, but if you'd limit those vocal-based rhythms, I would probably not have to point out much. At this point, it lacks the emphasis on drums, but is instead on soft instruments such as vocals. If that's how you intended the map to look, then I'm a little bit disappointed, but if you keep the same style and map it a little bit more into important instruments, I'll be more than satisfied.
[Irre's Insane]
  1. 00:23:158 (1) - The new combo doesn't fit that much to me. Sometimes you seem to stick to music, sometimes you seem to stick to vocals, but this only makes logic with a pattern that you put into a map, which doesn't make much sense to me. Moreover, there's essentially no reason to put such a big jump on 00:22:825 (3,1) - . I undestand that you put jumps on places like 00:11:825 (2) - because the clap asks for it, it stands out a lot in the song, so why not making it stand out even in map, but this part sounds very calm, if not almost silent, but it still has a big focus on it.
  2. 00:25:158 (3,1) - Just the same scenario as above.
  3. 00:28:158 (2,1) - Same as above.
  4. 00:33:158 (3,4,5) - 00:35:825 (3,4,5) - These have a problem when it comes to the jump too. What is special in this part are the drums - these just came in, these are what makes the part unique. Jumps on vocal, which was there even before, in the same form makes it inconsistent and doesn't make sense with the song's intensity.
  5. 00:38:158 (1,2) - This sounds really out of place because you're putting strong sounds in the middle of slider, but soft sounds are right on the parts of slider which you interact with. It plays and fits the music more if 00:38:158 (1) - is mapped as a 1/2 slider, because that way it at least ends on quite significant synth on 00:38:492 - and then 00:38:825 (2) - can be moved on 00:38:658 - to emphasize a little softer synth, but end on 00:39:158 - , which is equivalent for the first synth when it comes to the impact. Then, 00:39:325 - will be ignored, which makes a lot of sense, because you cannot tell any sound that's landing on this timestamp. Obviously, you can say there is "something", but no sound with a peak is present here.
  6. 00:46:492 (2) - There are many snares in the background which you mapped, however, this seems to be the only one that is not using any kind of a jump, which would be cool, because you did so in other cases such as 00:43:825 (2) - 00:45:158 (6) - 00:47:825 (1) - 00:49:158 (2) - 00:50:492 (6) - 00:53:158 (3) -
  7. Hitsounds seem to be done a little bit immaturely here. The beginning was cool, but you started to use a lot of kicks when there was literally nothing that would indicate that in the song, such as 00:16:992 - 00:17:492 (2) - 00:24:992 (2) - 00:25:492 (1,2) - 00:29:825 (4) - 00:49:158 (2) - 00:50:492 (6) - 00:51:825 - Be sure to check similar things.
[Elvis' Insane]
  1. I want you to look at the kick hitsounds as I already recommended in last point of Irre's difficulty. Many of them don't fit to actual arrangement of the song and sound really loud if it doesn't follow the real sound properly.
  2. 01:13:325 (3) - I am not quite sure, but since this is the only Normal whistle used in the map and it doesn't sound that great if it's use only once, I must assume that it was placed by a mistake.
  3. 00:12:325 (6,1) - First of all, I think if you want to place a new combo here, you should do that on the first note as the musical pattern which brings some change or diversity starts on 00:12:325 (6) - . Second thing is that 00:12:325 (6,1) - is identic with 00:12:825 (3) - while 00:13:158 (4) - is completely different from these two. For this reason, I recommend to put the new combo to 00:12:325 (6) - and then make it a 1/2 slider. That will ensure some logic between 00:12:825 (3) - . And in the and, you could transform 00:13:158 (4) - into circles due to having the heavy snare on the beginning and to differenciate it from the previous sliders. I also thing that you should not add a jump on 00:12:658 (2) - , but 00:12:325 (1) - , because currently it's on a hi-hat, which is barely audible, so that makes a little bit less sense.
    Example
  4. 00:17:825 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I know that you probably wanted to give a player some challenge, but with the amount of stacks you use, this is already overexaggerated pattern. I feel like the attempt is to create a map challenging by decreasing its readability rather than increasing the note density or using more difficult rhythms and patterns, which I am not really a big fan of.
  5. 00:21:825 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You could maybe use some sliders in this part, because stacks that look all very similar over and over may be a little bit boring and lazy, but let's assume you want to keep that for whatever reason - Then, I don't understand why 00:32:492 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - , which has more things to map and is much stronger, but the previous part requires you to be quicker and more accurate, while here, you jump into a very chilly part of map, instead of the opposite, so it would be more proper according to the song.
  6. 00:58:825 (1) - This is quite a lot out. These drums start on 00:58:992 - in the song or somewhere around that, we cannot probably tell accurately whether it's this place, because I cannot guess whether it's 1/16, but probably yes, however, it definitely isn't there bofere that timestamp. You should just map the second half of the slider.
  7. The kiai however is quite cool, there are some random jumps, but not that random so I'd want to point it out as much as these things. Cool otherwise.
I currently don't want to point out anything on Insane, because its current statement doesn't seem much problematic to me.

I would welcome if everyone also checked their hitsounds, some, which I already mentioned were off quite a lot, but there are still potential places to improvment, I like the pick of hitsounds, but the placement can be a little bit more polished.
I am not planning to push this forward YET, I will see how the map changes after this mod, eventually after some time, but don't worry, I'll be checking it out, no need to call me. I'll do my bussiness once and if I feel it's ready and obviously, I'll be trying to help if I see it's having the correct direction. In overall, it's a good map that shouldn't be thrown away. Good job.
Last edited by Wafu , edited 3 times in total.
Gero
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Gero
Poke me back after apply Wafu's mod.
ryuu
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ryuu
oh. yes. thank u!
ErunamoJAZZ
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ErunamoJAZZ

Wafu wrote:

[EruJazz's Easy]
  1. 00:09:658 (1) - I would end this slider on 00:10:158 - or 00:10:658 - as these spots are the main sounds in such a drum pattern and ending it on a minor one doesn't sound that well. It's a blue tick, but still, you can use the first option. I'd say the second option is better, even though the time between next object is little lower, should be fairy playable though. That was my first approach, but I felt it was not appropriate for a Easy diff, because its feels inconsistent. Finishing in 00:10:492 - is better imho.
  2. 00:21:825 (1,2) - The gap between these two objects is too high. I think you probably wanted some little pause, but if you mapped 00:27:158 (1,2) - like this, there's essentially no reason to keep the first one completely unmapped. Sorry, Im not agree. This pause feels very appropriate for me, since song is veeery calmly here.
  3. 01:09:825 (1,3) - That's a little, just personal opinion, but I don't really like shapes of these sliders with three points in center. They look like having some weird bump in the middle, maybe it could work better if replaced with regular wave slider with red anchor rather than three white anchors. lol, not change.
  4. When it comes to hitsounds, this difficulty had really some poor gaps. I'd welcome if slidertick hitsounds were used, that would fill really big amount of skipped hitsounds and the map could sound really well with them. Maybe, but personally, I dislike slidertick hitsounding u.u
Thanks.
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Wafu

Wafu wrote:

[340's Hard]
  1. 00:32:492 (2,1) - The new combo seems to be set improperly. It's musically the same as 00:21:825 (1) - and in addition, the first note starts a new variation, making it more appropriate for a new combo. yeah, fixed it somehow
  2. 00:32:492 (2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I'd say this part is way too much about the vocals. I am not saying mapping vocals is wrong, but you definitely ignore many important sounds, especially kick drums and those parts feel really empty. Such as 00:33:658 - 00:35:158 - 00:36:325 - 00:36:658 - . Mapping them would make a some variety between the calm part and the part with drums, that would be a little bit more unique and fun to play. Also 00:38:158 (2,3) - seems really out of the song. It maps exactly the least significant parts of this part in my opinion and mapping it to those foreground instruments would offer you many good rhythms, which sound much better than this one. as i think, that's gonna be a mess for a newbie player if i'd map every beat on a calm part. calm part should play calm at least at easy difficulties imo. also i fixed the last thing which you mentioned about slider that is out of the song
  3. The map style itself is quite good to be honest, but if you'd limit those vocal-based rhythms, I would probably not have to point out much. At this point, it lacks the emphasis on drums, but is instead on soft instruments such as vocals. If that's how you intended the map to look, then I'm a little bit disappointed, but if you keep the same style and map it a little bit more into important instruments, I'll be more than satisfied.

Link: http://f.s-ul.eu/MHaQC38R
Kyubey
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Kyubey
There are "tv size tvsize" tags because "tv size" search doesn't include results with "tvsize" and vise versa.
About video — I don't want to change it, since the map become really huge with that (+10MB), it's not like we are trying to watch perfect quality video while playing, so current one should be enough.
Thanks for modding.
Irreversible
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Irreversible

Wafu wrote:

[Irre's Insane]
  1. 00:23:158 (1) - The new combo doesn't fit that much to me. Sometimes you seem to stick to music, sometimes you seem to stick to vocals, but this only makes logic with a pattern that you put into a map, which doesn't make much sense to me. Moreover, there's essentially no reason to put such a big jump on 00:22:825 (3,1) - . I undestand that you put jumps on places like 00:11:825 (2) - because the clap asks for it, it stands out a lot in the song, so why not making it stand out even in map, but this part sounds very calm, if not almost silent, but it still has a big focus on it. no fixes
  2. 00:25:158 (3,1) - Just the same scenario as above.
  3. 00:28:158 (2,1) - Same as above. no fixes
  4. 00:33:158 (3,4,5) - 00:35:825 (3,4,5) - These have a problem when it comes to the jump too. What is special in this part are the drums - these just came in, these are what makes the part unique. Jumps on vocal, which was there even before, in the same form makes it inconsistent and doesn't make sense with the song's intensity. Same as above, I map to the vocals emotions and not to the drums o_O
  5. 00:38:158 (1,2) - This sounds really out of place because you're putting strong sounds in the middle of slider, but soft sounds are right on the parts of slider which you interact with. It plays and fits the music more if 00:38:158 (1) - is mapped as a 1/2 slider, because that way it at least ends on quite significant synth on 00:38:492 - and then 00:38:825 (2) - can be moved on 00:38:658 - to emphasize a little softer synth, but end on 00:39:158 - , which is equivalent for the first synth when it comes to the impact. Then, 00:39:325 - will be ignored, which makes a lot of sense, because you cannot tell any sound that's landing on this timestamp. Obviously, you can say there is "something", but no sound with a peak is present here. ?
  6. 00:46:492 (2) - There are many snares in the background which you mapped, however, this seems to be the only one that is not using any kind of a jump, which would be cool, because you did so in other cases such as 00:43:825 (2) - 00:45:158 (6) - 00:47:825 (1) - 00:49:158 (2) - 00:50:492 (6) - 00:53:158 (3) - nice catch
  7. Hitsounds seem to be done a little bit immaturely here. The beginning was cool, but you started to use a lot of kicks when there was literally nothing that would indicate that in the song, such as 00:16:992 - 00:17:492 (2) - 00:24:992 (2) - 00:25:492 (1,2) - 00:29:825 (4) - 00:49:158 (2) - 00:50:492 (6) - 00:51:825 - Be sure to check similar things.
Sorry to deny so much, but I think you've missed the concept of my map.. I map to the vocals emotion. I tried to adjust hitsounds a bit, would be good to get more feedback maybe

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Natteke desu
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Joined August 2012
Natteke desu

Wafu wrote:

[Elvis' Insane]
  1. I want you to look at the kick hitsounds as I already recommended in last point of Irre's difficulty. Many of them don't fit to actual arrangement of the song and sound really loud if it doesn't follow the real sound properly.
    Well, they wasn't supposed to follow any sample of the song at the first place, i tried to bring something new to the song and since i like what i got at the end i have to deny, sorry
  2. 01:13:325 (3) - I am not quite sure, but since this is the only Normal whistle used in the map and it doesn't sound that great if it's use only once, I must assume that it was placed by a mistake.
    there were more, this whistle was used in pruporse of finishing hitsounding pattern so i'd keep it
  3. 00:12:325 (6,1) - First of all, I think if you want to place a new combo here, you should do that on the first note as the musical pattern which brings some change or diversity starts on 00:12:325 (6) - . Second thing is that 00:12:325 (6,1) - is identic with 00:12:825 (3) - while 00:13:158 (4) - is completely different from these two. For this reason, I recommend to put the new combo to 00:12:325 (6) - and then make it a 1/2 slider. That will ensure some logic between 00:12:825 (3) - . And in the and, you could transform 00:13:158 (4) - into circles due to having the heavy snare on the beginning and to differenciate it from the previous sliders. I also thing that you should not add a jump on 00:12:658 (2) - , but 00:12:325 (1) - , because currently it's on a hi-hat, which is barely audible, so that makes a little bit less sense.
    Okay, firstly, new combo was used mostly on design purporses me being nazi about geometry, as for jump, you can hear like vocalist sighs 00:12:158 - here and since d e s i g n t h i n g s, i decided to go in a bit other way than increasing distant snap exactly at this point, i emphasised it a bit later 00:12:492 (1) - here, what could look strange for the first sight, but i do believe it works fine, it's just uncommon, as for rhythm changes, sorry i don't really think 1/2 would fit because main idea here was mapping hi-hats, since this part of the song is somehow intense, either i can't agree on 00:13:158 (4) - because i'd like to keep vocals emphasised as well as hi-hats
    Example
  4. 00:17:825 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I know that you probably wanted to give a player some challenge, but with the amount of stacks you use, this is already overexaggerated pattern. I feel like the attempt is to create a map challenging by decreasing its readability rather than increasing the note density or using more difficult rhythms and patterns, which I am not really a big fan of.
    Personally i don't find it any challenging, maybe a bit harder to read than something more common, but not really much so i'd like to keep it.
  5. 00:21:825 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You could maybe use some sliders in this part, because stacks that look all very similar over and over may be a little bit boring and lazy, but let's assume you want to keep that for whatever reason - Then, I don't understand why 00:32:492 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - , which has more things to map and is much stronger, but the previous part requires you to be quicker and more accurate, while here, you jump into a very chilly part of map, instead of the opposite, so it would be more proper according to the song.
    Circle stacks were made on pruporses of emphasising synth, which hardly works well with sliders in my opinion, when the reason behind sliders is shitton of circles would be too much and my intention of present second half of this part as some kind of "bridge" for upcoming more intensive part
  6. 00:58:825 (1) - This is quite a lot out. These drums start on 00:58:992 - in the song or somewhere around that, we cannot probably tell accurately whether it's this place, because I cannot guess whether it's 1/16, but probably yes, however, it definitely isn't there bofere that timestamp. You should just map the second half of the slider.
    I'd agree on this point if making stuff http://puu.sh/p3hql/be365f5b0f.jpg like this wasn't that awkward to play as it is (that 1/16or not even 1/16 can't say myself but i think it is stuff starts from 00:58:992- as i hear it. I guess i need more opinions about that one
  7. The kiai however is quite cool, there are some random jumps, but not that random so I'd want to point it out as much as these things. Cool otherwise.
Thanks for mod! We got different opinions about this song it seems
Kyubey
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I guess, everything is updated then.
Wafu
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Wafu

Irreversible wrote:

Sorry to deny so much, but I think you've missed the concept of my map.. I map to the vocals emotion. I tried to adjust hitsounds a bit, would be good to get more feedback maybe
You don't need to apologize for not fixing stuff, just pointing out that I didn't understand concept of your map is nothing you should mention when it comes to responding to issues. And to your reason, "I map to the vocals emotion" - First of all, emotion or intensity? Making to emotion would essentially make no sense as it's almost impossible to detect any emotion unless the voice sounds like suffering or happiness, but none of emotions usually tell you whether it deserves a jump or not. You most likely mean intensity of the voice. If that's what you really map, then that means 00:33:158 (3,4,5) - doesn't make sense, because 00:33:492 (4,5) - are almost equally intense, 00:33:492 (4) - however has much smaller jump. Then 00:36:492 (5,6,7) - 00:33:825 (5,6,7) - are mapped exactly the same way, while 00:36:492 (5,6,7) - is much more lively, previous is somehow fading out when it comes to intensity and the accent, but the latter one is more like fading in when it comes to intensity, accent, pitch etc.

I'm not saying that you should fix everything I said nor fix anything at all - it's your map, not mine. I just find it unfair when I mention something with logical statement, but I get a reason that is based on the fact that the mapper thinks that I do things different way, I feel things different way or that it's mapper's style. I am not exactly saying that against Irre, but in overall against any mapper that is doing it. Like I understand it in case of minor things like pattern shapes, then I obviously mention only my opinion if I don't feel comfortable with it and the mapper can say "My style, sorry", that's fine, but in cases when the argument is based on logic, jumping over it with "It's my style that you didn't understand properly" is really discouraging the modder.

It's your choice whether you follow vocals or not. I didn't say that you must map it to instruments, I mentioned why that would be more appropriate and why it is not that appropriate to do it the current way. It's self-contradiction to claim your map depends on vocals, yet you still follow only minimal amount of its intensity and ignore the rest that is different and is mapped exactly the same way or is exactly the same but is mapped completely different.

I don't want to argue, but before you make a conclusion about modder not understanding anything, think about the fact that maybe you really did something insensible. Everyone is able to ask modder (we have in-game chat and PMs) if he understood the whole concept of the map rather than using it as a conclusion and denial for most of things.
Irreversible
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Irreversible
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Reconsidered the big jump. Didn't read this point properly, rest remains the same.
Kyubey
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Check these hitsounds irre, you may want to add some volume changes
2
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