Megpoid GUMI - Sorry For Being a Closet Otaku

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IceBeam
Kay let's see.

Tags in Hard diff are completely different to others,moreover,you should add nicknames of guest mappers.Please,fix it.

[SG's Easy]
00:39:922 - Whistle fits really well here.
00:40:297 (1) - Finish?
00:55:290 (1) - ^
01:01:287 (1) - ^
01:07:284 (1) - ^
01:13:281 (1) - ^
01:19:278 (1) - ^
Oh well..you really should add more hitsounds,not just only finishes,but others too,it's ranking criteria.
01:58:258 (1,1,1,1) - It's combo spamming,please,fix.
02:34:427 (1) - Awesome,but..it's Easy,I'm not sure if it's rankable stuff..moreover,(2)-nd is just out of any rhytm.If you still want to keep this slider,continue it to 02:36:864,and (2)-nd must be placed at 02:37:239.
02:48:858 (1) - Remove NC?
03:48:828 - Nah,uggly,please silence it.

[Normal]
00:38:423 (9,10) - Stack it properly?
01:04:098 - Prolly it'd be hard for Normal diff,but I'd add a note,sounds much better.
01:17:966 - Add a note?
01:51:137 - Sounds bad,silence/use soft sampleset here?
Hey,not bad,just the only thing that bugs me is flow.Anti-direction plays not that good,really.

[Hard]
00:39:547 - Silence/use soft sampleset/finish hitsound.
00:51:541 - Why not to add a note here?
02:04:255 - Add finish/whistle?
02:28:056 (1) - Oh,it's too close to previous object,please place it farther or at least stack with 02:27:306 (6).
03:47:703 - Whistle?

Quite solid for the first map.
Also,song is just awesome.
Good luck and have my star.
Topic Starter
iMuffin

IceBeam wrote:

Kay let's see.

Tags in Hard diff are completely different to others,moreover,you should add nicknames of guest mappers.Please,fix it.

[SG's Easy]
00:39:922 - Whistle fits really well here.
00:40:297 (1) - Finish?
00:55:290 (1) - ^
01:01:287 (1) - ^
01:07:284 (1) - ^
01:13:281 (1) - ^
01:19:278 (1) - ^
Oh well..you really should add more hitsounds,not just only finishes,but others too,it's ranking criteria.
01:58:258 (1,1,1,1) - It's combo spamming,please,fix.
02:34:427 (1) - Awesome,but..it's Easy,I'm not sure if it's rankable stuff..moreover,(2)-nd is just out of any rhytm.If you still want to keep this slider,continue it to 02:36:864,and (2)-nd must be placed at 02:37:239.
02:48:858 (1) - Remove NC?
03:48:828 - Nah,uggly,please silence it.leaving this to SG

[Normal]
00:38:423 (9,10) - Stack it properly?fixed
01:04:098 - Prolly it'd be hard for Normal diff,but I'd add a note,sounds much better.
01:17:966 - Add a note?decided against those
01:51:137 - Sounds bad,silence/use soft sampleset here?should be fixed
Hey,not bad,just the only thing that bugs me is flow.Anti-direction plays not that good,really.will work on the flow later lol

[Hard]
00:39:547 - Silence/use soft sampleset/finish hitsound.fixed
00:51:541 - Why not to add a note here?added
02:04:255 - Add finish/whistle?done
02:28:056 (1) - Oh,it's too close to previous object,please place it farther or at least stack with 02:27:306 (6).stacked
03:47:703 - Whistle?whistle it is

Quite solid for the first map.
Also,song is just awesome.
Good luck and have my star.
Thanks for the mod
Tatsuo
Recheck.

[Easy]
02:34:427 (1) - You like messing with new players, don't you? Lol.

[Normal]
00:48:918 (8) - Align with 4,5.
It's better, I'll give you that. But it's so linear. You need to add some patterns.
However this difficulty is ok the way it is.

[Hard]
00:51:916 - Personally I would extend this to 00:54:915. It sounds better that way.
Eh, it's okay.

Well... yeah okay. Star.
Topic Starter
iMuffin

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Recheck.

[Easy]
02:34:427 (1) - You like messing with new players, don't you? Lol.

[Normal]
00:48:918 (8) - Align with 4,5.fixed
It's better, I'll give you that. But it's so linear. You need to add some patterns.
However this difficulty is ok the way it is.ty <3

[Hard]
00:51:916 - Personally I would extend this to 00:54:915. It sounds better that way.extended....hawt
Eh, it's okay.thanks?

Well... yeah okay. Star.
SapphireGhost
No, I don't like messing with new players...

but I did.
And kill kill kill the stupid .osb

Download: Megpoid GUMI - Sorry For Being a Closet Otaku (iMuffin) [SapphireGhost's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
iMuffin
re uploaded with changes ~
Charles445

SapphireGhost wrote:

And kill kill kill the stupid .osb
197 bytes doesn't warrant a fullsubmit, unless you are talking about something else.
pieguyn
General:

-Add SapphireGhost to the tags on all diffs

SapphireGhost's Easy:

00:25:305 (1) - Not symmetrical
00:41:796 (1) - Remove the new combo?
01:06:909 (5) - Align with (4)
01:06:909 (5) - Repeat hidden by hitburst
01:15:529 (1) - Remove this new combo and put it on (2)
01:32:771 (1) - Not symmetrical
01:46:264 (1) - ^
01:55:260 (5) - New combo
01:58:258 (1) - Align with (7)
01:59:008 (2,1,2) - Too close to the previous notes
02:04:255 (5) - New combo
02:13:251 (4) - New combo?
02:22:246 (4,5) - Not symmetrical, and new combo on (4)
02:27:868 (1) - Remove this new combo and put it on (2)
02:47:733 (5) - Not symmetrical
03:07:973 (5) - New combo and remove it from 03:09:472 (1)
03:08:723 (6) - Align with (5)
03:19:218 (5) - New combo
03:43:206 (1) - Not symmetrical
03:42:081 (5) - Align with (4)?

Normal:

-Your combos are generally too long...I'd recommend splitting the combos that go up to 10 or so into two combos.

01:38:018 (3) - Too far from (2)
01:39:892 (8) - Too far from (7)
01:46:077 (7) - Too far from (6)
01:48:138 (9) - Align with (8)
01:49:263 (1) - End it 1/4 later
01:59:382 (4,5,6) - It would be nice if this was equidistant from (2) and (3)
02:03:880 (11) - Ends at an odd position. Also, perhaps put a spinner in the pause afterward?
02:22:059 (5) - End it 1/2 later
02:28:056 (1) - Align with (6)
02:29:930 (3) - Align with (2)
02:31:991 (2) - Align with (1)
02:52:793 (11) - Ends at an odd position. Perhaps put a note here and make the pause afterward a spinner?
03:07:036 (6) - Ends at an odd position. Perhaps end it 1/2 earlier and put a note at 03:07:973?
03:09:285 (11) - Odd slider. Perhaps move it 1/2 later and put a note where it starts?
03:11:159 (3) - Too far from (2), but in this case it may be fine
03:11:909 (4) - Too close to (3)
03:14:345 (4) - Align with (3)
03:14:345 (4,5) - I think the note should be where (4) is and the slider should end where (5) is
03:15:844 - Add a note
03:19:030 (5) - Align with (4)
03:43:580 (1) - Not symmetrical
03:46:204 (1) - End it a beat earlier?

Hard:

00:28:303 (7) - New combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo
00:31:302 (8) - ^
01:04:847 (3,4,5) - Right one level 3 grid
01:10:095 (6) - New combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo
01:12:156 (6,7,8) - Left one level 3 grid
01:48:888 (1) - End it 1/2 later?
02:10:065 (8) - New combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo
02:14:937 (6) - Out
02:22:059 (6) - New combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo
03:05:912 (5) - Align with (4)
03:07:036 (1) - Not symmetrical
03:19:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/56841 (be sure to move (7) and fix the spacing if you do this)
03:20:529 (7) - Not symmetrical
03:29:712 (3) - Too close to 2. I recommend moving (3) and (4) to the left and making them symmetrical about the x-axis.

MM's Taiko: Fine

Nice map and awesome song/video. :) *stars*
Topic Starter
iMuffin
thanks for the mods and star
SapphireGhost
RandomJibberish
Hi
General
Set tick rate 2 on all diffs

Hard
00:31:302 (1) - It's a bit awkward how this points over the rest of the combo. Point it towards the top right?
03:07:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks pretty clustered - something this might be better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57177
03:19:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This also seems a bit like it's all in one place :P

Normal
This diff gets a bit square at times - try using some more interesting patterns?
02:04:068 (1) - End 1/2 later
02:22:996 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm doesn't seem to be following much :/
03:46:204 (1) - End 1/1 earlier

Saphireghost's Easy
You shouldn't be so scared of using red ticks in easy diffs - You're probably making it more confusing than it would be if you followed the vocals properly :P
01:10:282 (1) - random spinner out of nowhere much
02:31:242 (1) - Maybe end 1/2 earlier?

Good map.
Topic Starter
iMuffin

RandomJibberish wrote:

Hi
General
Set tick rate 2 on all diffs I never really likes Slider tick 2

Hard
00:31:302 (1) - It's a bit awkward how this points over the rest of the combo. Point it towards the top right?did that
03:07:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks pretty clustered - something this might be better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57177
03:19:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This also seems a bit like it's all in one place :Pi like those two combos lol

Normal
This diff gets a bit square at times - try using some more interesting patterns?you are now the third person to say that and a MAT so i'll fix it XD
02:04:068 (1) - End 1/2 laterdone
02:22:996 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm doesn't seem to be following much :/fixed
03:46:204 (1) - End 1/1 earlierdone

Saphireghost's Easy
You shouldn't be so scared of using red ticks in easy diffs - You're probably making it more confusing than it would be if you followed the vocals properly :P
01:10:282 (1) - random spinner out of nowhere much
02:31:242 (1) - Maybe end 1/2 earlier?i'll let SG take that one

Good map.
Thanks for the mod~
JoJo
Gumi~~>w<~
SapphireGhost
To add some flavor to this otherwise completely boring post, I made a star.png that lets me score songs out of ten.
By the way, anyone who is about to write

"omg this is gumi star"

Was just saved around half a minute by me.

<- you know this is epic

Download: Megpoid GUMI - Sorry For Being a Closet Otaku (iMuffin) [SapphireGhost's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
iMuffin

SapphireGhost wrote:

To add some flavor to this otherwise completely boring post, I made a star.png that lets me score songs out of ten.
By the way, anyone who is about to write

"omg this is gumi star"

Was just saved around half a minute by me.

<- you know this is epic
added that guest difficulty
Yunacat
I like this song/mapset!

The only thing I can really mod is Taiko. I don't see anything really wrong with the notes (love it actually) but in the settings, lower OD by 2. For Taiko specific maps you should use the center because OD effects the accuracy to actually hit the notes, and it should be balanced.

Oh also *star*! :3
marksman666
[General]
Add tag 'MMzz'

[MM's Taiko]
Delete Kiai except 1st Kiai time since other 2 are not used :3
00:52:291 (1) - Delete finish
01:03:910 (50) - ^
01:15:904 (50) - ^



Whatever :3

edit. aguu
KiriNoMorii
Star~ :)
MMzz
Larto
Overall:
Your preview times are all different. Most of them anyways. Fix that!

This is the laziest video I've ever seen. You could just make a storyboard that is smaller in filesize, does the same, AND looks prettier. Get S i r i r u or someone like that.

MM's Taiko:
Add a lead-in.
You also have unsnapped notes!

Easy:
03:46:391 (1) - That finish at the end sounds so dumb. SO DUMB D=
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