Megpoid GUMI - Sorry For Being a Closet Otaku

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iMuffin

dkun wrote:

Hard
00:32:239 (11) - Align with 8, looks better.
00:33:176 (5) - Make this align with 1? Looks like you were going for a shape here.
00:41:047 (1,2,3) - 3 is off.
00:48:168 (8) - Align with 5.
02:18:311 (8,9,10) - What the hell? Align.
02:22:059 (6) - This slider looks a bit, eh.
02:24:308 (14) - Align with 12
02:59:352 (10) - Off from 9, re-align.
^ - Fix the rest according with snap.
03:25:589 (2,3,4,5) - Re-align.
03:28:213 (1,2,3,4) - You could go with making this a square. Just a suggestion.

Normal
00:32:426 (4) - Out of alignment with 1,2,3.
00:48 (4,5,6,7,8) - Re-align 8, maybe in a form like this? http://puu.sh/Sa0
02:01:444 (1-10) - I'm pretty sure 1-4/7-10 could be aligned better to look prettier. But this is just me. EX: http://puu.sh/Sa4
02:33:397 (4,5,6) - Re-align. http://puu.sh/Sa6
03:11:159 (3) - Align with 1.

I have no problems with the Easy/Taiko.

To end this overall, good job!
got all that done haha
was too lazy to respond to everything XD
SapphireGhost
Oh yeah so I was updating the guest diff and STUFF

Download: Megpoid GUMI - Sorry For Being a Closet Otaku (iMuffin) [SapphireGhost's Easy].osu
Charles445
Normal
A lot of the map is boxy, I.E. going straight left up right and down.
Add some more curves in their placement, right angles are ok in mdoeration.
01:10:095 Make the 5 not touch the 4
01:41:766 (2,3,4) These are noticably not straight, and even if they were meant to be curvy it's inconsistent
03:08:535 The 11 should be under the 8, would look nice
03:37:209 This combo is confusing as poop

Hard
00:32:239 Put that 11 under the 8's reverse point and reposition the 1
00:59:225 4 touching 6 is ooglay
01:00:537 Those 3 are under the slider, doesn't look that good
01:42:891 A bit weird
01:47:388 Make this slider not touch the other
03:07:036 The 1 shouldn't touch the 3
03:19:218 That 5 would look nice in the middle
Topic Starter
iMuffin

Charles445 wrote:

Normal
A lot of the map is boxy, I.E. going straight left up right and down.
Add some more curves in their placement, right angles are ok in mdoeration.i'll fix those when i have more time
01:10:095 Make the 5 not touch the 4
01:41:766 (2,3,4) These are noticably not straight, and even if they were meant to be curvy it's inconsistent
03:08:535 The 11 should be under the 8, would look nice
03:37:209 This combo is confusing as poopfixed all those

Hard
00:32:239 Put that 11 under the 8's reverse point and reposition the 1done
00:59:225 4 touching 6 is ooglayfixed
01:00:537 Those 3 are under the slider, doesn't look that gooddone
01:42:891 A bit weirdonly a bit
01:47:388 Make this slider not touch the otherdone
03:07:036 The 1 shouldn't touch the 3fixed
03:19:218 That 5 would look nice in the middlekept that the way it was
ty for the mod <3
Zelos
Oh god I muSt have really spaced if I missed all that.
IceBeam
Kay let's see.

Tags in Hard diff are completely different to others,moreover,you should add nicknames of guest mappers.Please,fix it.

[SG's Easy]
00:39:922 - Whistle fits really well here.
00:40:297 (1) - Finish?
00:55:290 (1) - ^
01:01:287 (1) - ^
01:07:284 (1) - ^
01:13:281 (1) - ^
01:19:278 (1) - ^
Oh well..you really should add more hitsounds,not just only finishes,but others too,it's ranking criteria.
01:58:258 (1,1,1,1) - It's combo spamming,please,fix.
02:34:427 (1) - Awesome,but..it's Easy,I'm not sure if it's rankable stuff..moreover,(2)-nd is just out of any rhytm.If you still want to keep this slider,continue it to 02:36:864,and (2)-nd must be placed at 02:37:239.
02:48:858 (1) - Remove NC?
03:48:828 - Nah,uggly,please silence it.

[Normal]
00:38:423 (9,10) - Stack it properly?
01:04:098 - Prolly it'd be hard for Normal diff,but I'd add a note,sounds much better.
01:17:966 - Add a note?
01:51:137 - Sounds bad,silence/use soft sampleset here?
Hey,not bad,just the only thing that bugs me is flow.Anti-direction plays not that good,really.

[Hard]
00:39:547 - Silence/use soft sampleset/finish hitsound.
00:51:541 - Why not to add a note here?
02:04:255 - Add finish/whistle?
02:28:056 (1) - Oh,it's too close to previous object,please place it farther or at least stack with 02:27:306 (6).
03:47:703 - Whistle?

Quite solid for the first map.
Also,song is just awesome.
Good luck and have my star.
Topic Starter
iMuffin

IceBeam wrote:

Kay let's see.

Tags in Hard diff are completely different to others,moreover,you should add nicknames of guest mappers.Please,fix it.

[SG's Easy]
00:39:922 - Whistle fits really well here.
00:40:297 (1) - Finish?
00:55:290 (1) - ^
01:01:287 (1) - ^
01:07:284 (1) - ^
01:13:281 (1) - ^
01:19:278 (1) - ^
Oh well..you really should add more hitsounds,not just only finishes,but others too,it's ranking criteria.
01:58:258 (1,1,1,1) - It's combo spamming,please,fix.
02:34:427 (1) - Awesome,but..it's Easy,I'm not sure if it's rankable stuff..moreover,(2)-nd is just out of any rhytm.If you still want to keep this slider,continue it to 02:36:864,and (2)-nd must be placed at 02:37:239.
02:48:858 (1) - Remove NC?
03:48:828 - Nah,uggly,please silence it.leaving this to SG

[Normal]
00:38:423 (9,10) - Stack it properly?fixed
01:04:098 - Prolly it'd be hard for Normal diff,but I'd add a note,sounds much better.
01:17:966 - Add a note?decided against those
01:51:137 - Sounds bad,silence/use soft sampleset here?should be fixed
Hey,not bad,just the only thing that bugs me is flow.Anti-direction plays not that good,really.will work on the flow later lol

[Hard]
00:39:547 - Silence/use soft sampleset/finish hitsound.fixed
00:51:541 - Why not to add a note here?added
02:04:255 - Add finish/whistle?done
02:28:056 (1) - Oh,it's too close to previous object,please place it farther or at least stack with 02:27:306 (6).stacked
03:47:703 - Whistle?whistle it is

Quite solid for the first map.
Also,song is just awesome.
Good luck and have my star.
Thanks for the mod
Tatsuo
Recheck.

[Easy]
02:34:427 (1) - You like messing with new players, don't you? Lol.

[Normal]
00:48:918 (8) - Align with 4,5.
It's better, I'll give you that. But it's so linear. You need to add some patterns.
However this difficulty is ok the way it is.

[Hard]
00:51:916 - Personally I would extend this to 00:54:915. It sounds better that way.
Eh, it's okay.

Well... yeah okay. Star.
Topic Starter
iMuffin

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Recheck.

[Easy]
02:34:427 (1) - You like messing with new players, don't you? Lol.

[Normal]
00:48:918 (8) - Align with 4,5.fixed
It's better, I'll give you that. But it's so linear. You need to add some patterns.
However this difficulty is ok the way it is.ty <3

[Hard]
00:51:916 - Personally I would extend this to 00:54:915. It sounds better that way.extended....hawt
Eh, it's okay.thanks?

Well... yeah okay. Star.
SapphireGhost
No, I don't like messing with new players...

but I did.
And kill kill kill the stupid .osb

Download: Megpoid GUMI - Sorry For Being a Closet Otaku (iMuffin) [SapphireGhost's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
iMuffin
re uploaded with changes ~
Charles445

SapphireGhost wrote:

And kill kill kill the stupid .osb
197 bytes doesn't warrant a fullsubmit, unless you are talking about something else.
pieguyn
General:

-Add SapphireGhost to the tags on all diffs

SapphireGhost's Easy:

00:25:305 (1) - Not symmetrical
00:41:796 (1) - Remove the new combo?
01:06:909 (5) - Align with (4)
01:06:909 (5) - Repeat hidden by hitburst
01:15:529 (1) - Remove this new combo and put it on (2)
01:32:771 (1) - Not symmetrical
01:46:264 (1) - ^
01:55:260 (5) - New combo
01:58:258 (1) - Align with (7)
01:59:008 (2,1,2) - Too close to the previous notes
02:04:255 (5) - New combo
02:13:251 (4) - New combo?
02:22:246 (4,5) - Not symmetrical, and new combo on (4)
02:27:868 (1) - Remove this new combo and put it on (2)
02:47:733 (5) - Not symmetrical
03:07:973 (5) - New combo and remove it from 03:09:472 (1)
03:08:723 (6) - Align with (5)
03:19:218 (5) - New combo
03:43:206 (1) - Not symmetrical
03:42:081 (5) - Align with (4)?

Normal:

-Your combos are generally too long...I'd recommend splitting the combos that go up to 10 or so into two combos.

01:38:018 (3) - Too far from (2)
01:39:892 (8) - Too far from (7)
01:46:077 (7) - Too far from (6)
01:48:138 (9) - Align with (8)
01:49:263 (1) - End it 1/4 later
01:59:382 (4,5,6) - It would be nice if this was equidistant from (2) and (3)
02:03:880 (11) - Ends at an odd position. Also, perhaps put a spinner in the pause afterward?
02:22:059 (5) - End it 1/2 later
02:28:056 (1) - Align with (6)
02:29:930 (3) - Align with (2)
02:31:991 (2) - Align with (1)
02:52:793 (11) - Ends at an odd position. Perhaps put a note here and make the pause afterward a spinner?
03:07:036 (6) - Ends at an odd position. Perhaps end it 1/2 earlier and put a note at 03:07:973?
03:09:285 (11) - Odd slider. Perhaps move it 1/2 later and put a note where it starts?
03:11:159 (3) - Too far from (2), but in this case it may be fine
03:11:909 (4) - Too close to (3)
03:14:345 (4) - Align with (3)
03:14:345 (4,5) - I think the note should be where (4) is and the slider should end where (5) is
03:15:844 - Add a note
03:19:030 (5) - Align with (4)
03:43:580 (1) - Not symmetrical
03:46:204 (1) - End it a beat earlier?

Hard:

00:28:303 (7) - New combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo
00:31:302 (8) - ^
01:04:847 (3,4,5) - Right one level 3 grid
01:10:095 (6) - New combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo
01:12:156 (6,7,8) - Left one level 3 grid
01:48:888 (1) - End it 1/2 later?
02:10:065 (8) - New combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo
02:14:937 (6) - Out
02:22:059 (6) - New combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo
03:05:912 (5) - Align with (4)
03:07:036 (1) - Not symmetrical
03:19:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/56841 (be sure to move (7) and fix the spacing if you do this)
03:20:529 (7) - Not symmetrical
03:29:712 (3) - Too close to 2. I recommend moving (3) and (4) to the left and making them symmetrical about the x-axis.

MM's Taiko: Fine

Nice map and awesome song/video. :) *stars*
Topic Starter
iMuffin
thanks for the mods and star
SapphireGhost
RandomJibberish
Hi
General
Set tick rate 2 on all diffs

Hard
00:31:302 (1) - It's a bit awkward how this points over the rest of the combo. Point it towards the top right?
03:07:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks pretty clustered - something this might be better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57177
03:19:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This also seems a bit like it's all in one place :P

Normal
This diff gets a bit square at times - try using some more interesting patterns?
02:04:068 (1) - End 1/2 later
02:22:996 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm doesn't seem to be following much :/
03:46:204 (1) - End 1/1 earlier

Saphireghost's Easy
You shouldn't be so scared of using red ticks in easy diffs - You're probably making it more confusing than it would be if you followed the vocals properly :P
01:10:282 (1) - random spinner out of nowhere much
02:31:242 (1) - Maybe end 1/2 earlier?

Good map.
Topic Starter
iMuffin

RandomJibberish wrote:

Hi
General
Set tick rate 2 on all diffs I never really likes Slider tick 2

Hard
00:31:302 (1) - It's a bit awkward how this points over the rest of the combo. Point it towards the top right?did that
03:07:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks pretty clustered - something this might be better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57177
03:19:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This also seems a bit like it's all in one place :Pi like those two combos lol

Normal
This diff gets a bit square at times - try using some more interesting patterns?you are now the third person to say that and a MAT so i'll fix it XD
02:04:068 (1) - End 1/2 laterdone
02:22:996 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm doesn't seem to be following much :/fixed
03:46:204 (1) - End 1/1 earlierdone

Saphireghost's Easy
You shouldn't be so scared of using red ticks in easy diffs - You're probably making it more confusing than it would be if you followed the vocals properly :P
01:10:282 (1) - random spinner out of nowhere much
02:31:242 (1) - Maybe end 1/2 earlier?i'll let SG take that one

Good map.
Thanks for the mod~
JoJo
Gumi~~>w<~
SapphireGhost
To add some flavor to this otherwise completely boring post, I made a star.png that lets me score songs out of ten.
By the way, anyone who is about to write

"omg this is gumi star"

Was just saved around half a minute by me.

<- you know this is epic

Download: Megpoid GUMI - Sorry For Being a Closet Otaku (iMuffin) [SapphireGhost's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
iMuffin

SapphireGhost wrote:

To add some flavor to this otherwise completely boring post, I made a star.png that lets me score songs out of ten.
By the way, anyone who is about to write

"omg this is gumi star"

Was just saved around half a minute by me.

<- you know this is epic
added that guest difficulty
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