Megpoid GUMI - Sorry For Being a Closet Otaku

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Tatsuo
Finally, I got around to modding this shit.
Sorry Muffy

[Overall]
There are TWO .osb's in your song folder. Get rid of both please.
Preview points for the map isn't set. Set one please. May I suggest 02:07:254?

[Easy]
02:34:240 (1) - What? For an easy? I would think not.
03:48:828 (2) - No. Remove this.
This is a good difficulty.

[Normal]
00:38:423 (x) - Add a note here, like on the end of the slider.
00:38:610 (x) - ^

00:49:480 - Move this to 00:49:293, and make it end at 00:52:291, with a finish. Also consider using soft-hit to make the spinner end sound better. Add a break after?
00:56:227 (4) - Ugly slider, make it look better.
01:08:970 (4) - This sounds off with the singing.. Look at the easy guest difficulty to see what he did during these times that sound off. Just listen and you will find them. This is just one of them
03:13:033 (1) - This will confuse people, since some will see the approaching circle and think it only rebounds once, but it rebounds twice. Consider making it less confusing.
03:46:204 - Extend this by 1/2 on the timeline.
This difficulty needs work.

[Hard]
00:35:799 (5) - Ugly slider, pretty it up.
00:43:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix your spacing.
00:55:196 - Make your Kiai time start at 00:55:290.
01:16:841 (5) - Make this slider more curvy. Fix the points.
02:10:627 (9,10,11,12) - During gameplay, these get covered by the HP bar. Move them someplace else.
This difficulty needs work too. There's alot of sliders that need prettying up. And some spacing needs to get fixed. If you tried, you can look through the map and spot them easily (because they aren't just one grid off, they are a couple to several grids off, which makes it look ugly.)

[Taiko]
I don't mod Taiko.

No star. Fix what I've said and I'll come back and recheck.
Topic Starter
iMuffin

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Finally, I got around to modding this shit.
Sorry Muffy

[Overall]
There are TWO .osb's in your song folder. Get rid of both please.
Preview points for the map isn't set. Set one please. May I suggest 02:07:254?did those

[Easy]
02:34:240 (1) - What? For an easy? I would think not.
03:48:828 (2) - No. Remove this.
This is a good difficulty.i'll leave this to SG

[Normal]
00:38:423 (x) - Add a note here, like on the end of the slider.
00:38:610 (x) - ^
done
00:49:480 - Move this to 00:49:293, and make it end at 00:52:291, with a finish. Also consider using soft-hit to make the spinner end sound better. Add a break after?done
00:56:227 (4) - Ugly slider, make it look better.it is prettified
01:08:970 (4) - This sounds off with the singing.. Look at the easy guest difficulty to see what he did during these times that sound off. Just listen and you will find them. This is just one of themI'm gonna keep it the way it is <3
03:13:033 (1) - This will confuse people, since some will see the approaching circle and think it only rebounds once, but it rebounds twice. Consider making it less confusing.less confusing away!
03:46:204 - Extend this by 1/2 on the timeline.done
This difficulty needs work.I worked on it

[Hard]
00:35:799 (5) - Ugly slider, pretty it up.done
00:43:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix your spacing.done
00:55:196 - Make your Kiai time start at 00:55:290.done
01:16:841 (5) - Make this slider more curvy. Fix the points.fixed it
02:10:627 (9,10,11,12) - During gameplay, these get covered by the HP bar. Move them someplace else.moved
This difficulty needs work too. There's alot of sliders that need prettying up. And some spacing needs to get fixed. If you tried, you can look through the map and spot them easily (because they aren't just one grid off, they are a couple to several grids off, which makes it look ugly.)worked on it and made it pretty

[Taiko]
I don't mod Taiko.

No star. Fix what I've said and I'll come back and recheck.
I fixed all that stuff tasty baby <3 also did neko's two mods
dkun
Hard
00:32:239 (11) - Align with 8, looks better.
00:33:176 (5) - Make this align with 1? Looks like you were going for a shape here.
00:41:047 (1,2,3) - 3 is off.
00:48:168 (8) - Align with 5.
02:18:311 (8,9,10) - What the hell? Align.
02:22:059 (6) - This slider looks a bit, eh.
02:24:308 (14) - Align with 12
02:59:352 (10) - Off from 9, re-align.
^ - Fix the rest according with snap.
03:25:589 (2,3,4,5) - Re-align.
03:28:213 (1,2,3,4) - You could go with making this a square. Just a suggestion.

Normal
00:32:426 (4) - Out of alignment with 1,2,3.
00:48 (4,5,6,7,8) - Re-align 8, maybe in a form like this? http://puu.sh/Sa0
02:01:444 (1-10) - I'm pretty sure 1-4/7-10 could be aligned better to look prettier. But this is just me. EX: http://puu.sh/Sa4
02:33:397 (4,5,6) - Re-align. http://puu.sh/Sa6
03:11:159 (3) - Align with 1.

I have no problems with the Easy/Taiko.

To end this overall, good job!
Topic Starter
iMuffin

dkun wrote:

Hard
00:32:239 (11) - Align with 8, looks better.
00:33:176 (5) - Make this align with 1? Looks like you were going for a shape here.
00:41:047 (1,2,3) - 3 is off.
00:48:168 (8) - Align with 5.
02:18:311 (8,9,10) - What the hell? Align.
02:22:059 (6) - This slider looks a bit, eh.
02:24:308 (14) - Align with 12
02:59:352 (10) - Off from 9, re-align.
^ - Fix the rest according with snap.
03:25:589 (2,3,4,5) - Re-align.
03:28:213 (1,2,3,4) - You could go with making this a square. Just a suggestion.

Normal
00:32:426 (4) - Out of alignment with 1,2,3.
00:48 (4,5,6,7,8) - Re-align 8, maybe in a form like this? http://puu.sh/Sa0
02:01:444 (1-10) - I'm pretty sure 1-4/7-10 could be aligned better to look prettier. But this is just me. EX: http://puu.sh/Sa4
02:33:397 (4,5,6) - Re-align. http://puu.sh/Sa6
03:11:159 (3) - Align with 1.

I have no problems with the Easy/Taiko.

To end this overall, good job!
got all that done haha
was too lazy to respond to everything XD
SapphireGhost
Oh yeah so I was updating the guest diff and STUFF

Download: Megpoid GUMI - Sorry For Being a Closet Otaku (iMuffin) [SapphireGhost's Easy].osu
Charles445
Normal
A lot of the map is boxy, I.E. going straight left up right and down.
Add some more curves in their placement, right angles are ok in mdoeration.
01:10:095 Make the 5 not touch the 4
01:41:766 (2,3,4) These are noticably not straight, and even if they were meant to be curvy it's inconsistent
03:08:535 The 11 should be under the 8, would look nice
03:37:209 This combo is confusing as poop

Hard
00:32:239 Put that 11 under the 8's reverse point and reposition the 1
00:59:225 4 touching 6 is ooglay
01:00:537 Those 3 are under the slider, doesn't look that good
01:42:891 A bit weird
01:47:388 Make this slider not touch the other
03:07:036 The 1 shouldn't touch the 3
03:19:218 That 5 would look nice in the middle
Topic Starter
iMuffin

Charles445 wrote:

Normal
A lot of the map is boxy, I.E. going straight left up right and down.
Add some more curves in their placement, right angles are ok in mdoeration.i'll fix those when i have more time
01:10:095 Make the 5 not touch the 4
01:41:766 (2,3,4) These are noticably not straight, and even if they were meant to be curvy it's inconsistent
03:08:535 The 11 should be under the 8, would look nice
03:37:209 This combo is confusing as poopfixed all those

Hard
00:32:239 Put that 11 under the 8's reverse point and reposition the 1done
00:59:225 4 touching 6 is ooglayfixed
01:00:537 Those 3 are under the slider, doesn't look that gooddone
01:42:891 A bit weirdonly a bit
01:47:388 Make this slider not touch the otherdone
03:07:036 The 1 shouldn't touch the 3fixed
03:19:218 That 5 would look nice in the middlekept that the way it was
ty for the mod <3
Zelos
Oh god I muSt have really spaced if I missed all that.
IceBeam
Kay let's see.

Tags in Hard diff are completely different to others,moreover,you should add nicknames of guest mappers.Please,fix it.

[SG's Easy]
00:39:922 - Whistle fits really well here.
00:40:297 (1) - Finish?
00:55:290 (1) - ^
01:01:287 (1) - ^
01:07:284 (1) - ^
01:13:281 (1) - ^
01:19:278 (1) - ^
Oh well..you really should add more hitsounds,not just only finishes,but others too,it's ranking criteria.
01:58:258 (1,1,1,1) - It's combo spamming,please,fix.
02:34:427 (1) - Awesome,but..it's Easy,I'm not sure if it's rankable stuff..moreover,(2)-nd is just out of any rhytm.If you still want to keep this slider,continue it to 02:36:864,and (2)-nd must be placed at 02:37:239.
02:48:858 (1) - Remove NC?
03:48:828 - Nah,uggly,please silence it.

[Normal]
00:38:423 (9,10) - Stack it properly?
01:04:098 - Prolly it'd be hard for Normal diff,but I'd add a note,sounds much better.
01:17:966 - Add a note?
01:51:137 - Sounds bad,silence/use soft sampleset here?
Hey,not bad,just the only thing that bugs me is flow.Anti-direction plays not that good,really.

[Hard]
00:39:547 - Silence/use soft sampleset/finish hitsound.
00:51:541 - Why not to add a note here?
02:04:255 - Add finish/whistle?
02:28:056 (1) - Oh,it's too close to previous object,please place it farther or at least stack with 02:27:306 (6).
03:47:703 - Whistle?

Quite solid for the first map.
Also,song is just awesome.
Good luck and have my star.
Topic Starter
iMuffin

IceBeam wrote:

Kay let's see.

Tags in Hard diff are completely different to others,moreover,you should add nicknames of guest mappers.Please,fix it.

[SG's Easy]
00:39:922 - Whistle fits really well here.
00:40:297 (1) - Finish?
00:55:290 (1) - ^
01:01:287 (1) - ^
01:07:284 (1) - ^
01:13:281 (1) - ^
01:19:278 (1) - ^
Oh well..you really should add more hitsounds,not just only finishes,but others too,it's ranking criteria.
01:58:258 (1,1,1,1) - It's combo spamming,please,fix.
02:34:427 (1) - Awesome,but..it's Easy,I'm not sure if it's rankable stuff..moreover,(2)-nd is just out of any rhytm.If you still want to keep this slider,continue it to 02:36:864,and (2)-nd must be placed at 02:37:239.
02:48:858 (1) - Remove NC?
03:48:828 - Nah,uggly,please silence it.leaving this to SG

[Normal]
00:38:423 (9,10) - Stack it properly?fixed
01:04:098 - Prolly it'd be hard for Normal diff,but I'd add a note,sounds much better.
01:17:966 - Add a note?decided against those
01:51:137 - Sounds bad,silence/use soft sampleset here?should be fixed
Hey,not bad,just the only thing that bugs me is flow.Anti-direction plays not that good,really.will work on the flow later lol

[Hard]
00:39:547 - Silence/use soft sampleset/finish hitsound.fixed
00:51:541 - Why not to add a note here?added
02:04:255 - Add finish/whistle?done
02:28:056 (1) - Oh,it's too close to previous object,please place it farther or at least stack with 02:27:306 (6).stacked
03:47:703 - Whistle?whistle it is

Quite solid for the first map.
Also,song is just awesome.
Good luck and have my star.
Thanks for the mod
Tatsuo
Recheck.

[Easy]
02:34:427 (1) - You like messing with new players, don't you? Lol.

[Normal]
00:48:918 (8) - Align with 4,5.
It's better, I'll give you that. But it's so linear. You need to add some patterns.
However this difficulty is ok the way it is.

[Hard]
00:51:916 - Personally I would extend this to 00:54:915. It sounds better that way.
Eh, it's okay.

Well... yeah okay. Star.
Topic Starter
iMuffin

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Recheck.

[Easy]
02:34:427 (1) - You like messing with new players, don't you? Lol.

[Normal]
00:48:918 (8) - Align with 4,5.fixed
It's better, I'll give you that. But it's so linear. You need to add some patterns.
However this difficulty is ok the way it is.ty <3

[Hard]
00:51:916 - Personally I would extend this to 00:54:915. It sounds better that way.extended....hawt
Eh, it's okay.thanks?

Well... yeah okay. Star.
SapphireGhost
No, I don't like messing with new players...

but I did.
And kill kill kill the stupid .osb

Download: Megpoid GUMI - Sorry For Being a Closet Otaku (iMuffin) [SapphireGhost's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
iMuffin
re uploaded with changes ~
Charles445

SapphireGhost wrote:

And kill kill kill the stupid .osb
197 bytes doesn't warrant a fullsubmit, unless you are talking about something else.
pieguyn
General:

-Add SapphireGhost to the tags on all diffs

SapphireGhost's Easy:

00:25:305 (1) - Not symmetrical
00:41:796 (1) - Remove the new combo?
01:06:909 (5) - Align with (4)
01:06:909 (5) - Repeat hidden by hitburst
01:15:529 (1) - Remove this new combo and put it on (2)
01:32:771 (1) - Not symmetrical
01:46:264 (1) - ^
01:55:260 (5) - New combo
01:58:258 (1) - Align with (7)
01:59:008 (2,1,2) - Too close to the previous notes
02:04:255 (5) - New combo
02:13:251 (4) - New combo?
02:22:246 (4,5) - Not symmetrical, and new combo on (4)
02:27:868 (1) - Remove this new combo and put it on (2)
02:47:733 (5) - Not symmetrical
03:07:973 (5) - New combo and remove it from 03:09:472 (1)
03:08:723 (6) - Align with (5)
03:19:218 (5) - New combo
03:43:206 (1) - Not symmetrical
03:42:081 (5) - Align with (4)?

Normal:

-Your combos are generally too long...I'd recommend splitting the combos that go up to 10 or so into two combos.

01:38:018 (3) - Too far from (2)
01:39:892 (8) - Too far from (7)
01:46:077 (7) - Too far from (6)
01:48:138 (9) - Align with (8)
01:49:263 (1) - End it 1/4 later
01:59:382 (4,5,6) - It would be nice if this was equidistant from (2) and (3)
02:03:880 (11) - Ends at an odd position. Also, perhaps put a spinner in the pause afterward?
02:22:059 (5) - End it 1/2 later
02:28:056 (1) - Align with (6)
02:29:930 (3) - Align with (2)
02:31:991 (2) - Align with (1)
02:52:793 (11) - Ends at an odd position. Perhaps put a note here and make the pause afterward a spinner?
03:07:036 (6) - Ends at an odd position. Perhaps end it 1/2 earlier and put a note at 03:07:973?
03:09:285 (11) - Odd slider. Perhaps move it 1/2 later and put a note where it starts?
03:11:159 (3) - Too far from (2), but in this case it may be fine
03:11:909 (4) - Too close to (3)
03:14:345 (4) - Align with (3)
03:14:345 (4,5) - I think the note should be where (4) is and the slider should end where (5) is
03:15:844 - Add a note
03:19:030 (5) - Align with (4)
03:43:580 (1) - Not symmetrical
03:46:204 (1) - End it a beat earlier?

Hard:

00:28:303 (7) - New combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo
00:31:302 (8) - ^
01:04:847 (3,4,5) - Right one level 3 grid
01:10:095 (6) - New combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo
01:12:156 (6,7,8) - Left one level 3 grid
01:48:888 (1) - End it 1/2 later?
02:10:065 (8) - New combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo
02:14:937 (6) - Out
02:22:059 (6) - New combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo
03:05:912 (5) - Align with (4)
03:07:036 (1) - Not symmetrical
03:19:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/56841 (be sure to move (7) and fix the spacing if you do this)
03:20:529 (7) - Not symmetrical
03:29:712 (3) - Too close to 2. I recommend moving (3) and (4) to the left and making them symmetrical about the x-axis.

MM's Taiko: Fine

Nice map and awesome song/video. :) *stars*
Topic Starter
iMuffin
thanks for the mods and star
SapphireGhost
RandomJibberish
Hi
General
Set tick rate 2 on all diffs

Hard
00:31:302 (1) - It's a bit awkward how this points over the rest of the combo. Point it towards the top right?
03:07:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks pretty clustered - something this might be better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57177
03:19:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This also seems a bit like it's all in one place :P

Normal
This diff gets a bit square at times - try using some more interesting patterns?
02:04:068 (1) - End 1/2 later
02:22:996 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm doesn't seem to be following much :/
03:46:204 (1) - End 1/1 earlier

Saphireghost's Easy
You shouldn't be so scared of using red ticks in easy diffs - You're probably making it more confusing than it would be if you followed the vocals properly :P
01:10:282 (1) - random spinner out of nowhere much
02:31:242 (1) - Maybe end 1/2 earlier?

Good map.
Topic Starter
iMuffin

RandomJibberish wrote:

Hi
General
Set tick rate 2 on all diffs I never really likes Slider tick 2

Hard
00:31:302 (1) - It's a bit awkward how this points over the rest of the combo. Point it towards the top right?did that
03:07:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks pretty clustered - something this might be better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57177
03:19:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This also seems a bit like it's all in one place :Pi like those two combos lol

Normal
This diff gets a bit square at times - try using some more interesting patterns?you are now the third person to say that and a MAT so i'll fix it XD
02:04:068 (1) - End 1/2 laterdone
02:22:996 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm doesn't seem to be following much :/fixed
03:46:204 (1) - End 1/1 earlierdone

Saphireghost's Easy
You shouldn't be so scared of using red ticks in easy diffs - You're probably making it more confusing than it would be if you followed the vocals properly :P
01:10:282 (1) - random spinner out of nowhere much
02:31:242 (1) - Maybe end 1/2 earlier?i'll let SG take that one

Good map.
Thanks for the mod~
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