1. Welcome To The Dying World (6,75 stars, 1863 notes)

Aeril wrote:

waow really fun map, barely passed it

[Dead]

1. 01:23:284 (1,2) - this one is fine with me because it can be used to emphasize the guitar notes but it is just 1/4 notes xd I agree, fixed
2. 01:44:163 (1,2) - okay, unless your trying to use the bass in the bg to do this, this one doesnt make since to me, theyre drum hits not guitar so they dont extend pass the beat but you used 1/8 sliders on them. i suggest just using circles Fine for me, but I'll listen more opinions
3. 01:48:215 (3) - no beat behind note, delete y
4. 02:04:230 (1,2,1,2,1) - really like this pattern even if it is hard to hit ;p
5. 02:14:367 (7,8,9) - imo spacing between 7/8 should = 8/9 okay, did constant spacing between their lol
6. 02:16:192 (1,2,3) - triggered, this is 1/4, use 1/8 sliders if you want but dont use hitcircles on beats that dont exist I feel that the song has sound at yellow tick (he also had sound heretofore). Yes I could use 1/8 slider instead, but I want to do the next part more interesting and peculiarly prepar a player to 208 bpm stream part
7. 02:24:298 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 04:51:000 (2) - this is 1/4 lol no, I always hear 1/6 guitar here

Aeril wrote:

waow really fun map, barely passed it

[Dead]

1. my hand is dead now lol
2. 00:17:815 (13,14,1) - maybe increase the spacing starting at 13 to emphasize the high note? good idea
3. 00:23:153 - isn't this part 1/6 drumbeats? lol yes(
4. 00:30:484 (3) - why is this 1/8? 00:30:484 (3) - drum starts with 3 1/6 notes here and then plays 1/2 notes fixed @_@
5. 00:33:423 (5) - why is this also 1/8? its straight up 1/4 notes from what i hear
6. 00:33:423 (5) - ^
7. 00:37:072 (1) - ^
8. 00:38:085 (1) - ^
9. 00:42:545 (5) - ^
10. 00:48:625 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these are all 1/6 notes not 1/4;;
11. 00:53:691 (10) - maybe make a kickslider because there is a beat on 00:53:793 - k
12. 01:03:014 (5) - delete, no drum hit behind it k
13. 01:15:886 (2) - ^ ^
14. 01:16:088 (4) - ^^
15. 01:18:622 (5) - isnt this just 1/4 notes not 1/8
16. 01:20:649 (1) - ^
17. 03:13:932 (1,2,3) - woah really like how this is mapped
18. 05:08:287 (5) - also 1/4
19. 05:10:314 (1) - ^
20. 05:11:936 (1) - ^
21. 05:12:949 (1) - ^

-Kanzaki wrote:

hi


01:25:007 (2,2) - 02:04:331 (2,2) - Totally not fitting to place circles here. It's good idea that you try to prevent the difference but execution is poor. The notes you should emphasize are only 01:24:906 (1,1) - so i would make 2 1/4 sliders instead. disagree with that, I didn't emphasized these notes, they have pretty less spacing as previous notes with nc's, so anyway it's fine and supported by song

02:16:192 (1,2,3) - 02:24:298 (1,2,3) - Why? listen with %25 please, i don't understand? guitar has 1/8 rhythm here, it's peculiar to vektor songs (cosmic cortex has same triplets and this map has ranked status)

02:37:169 (5) - What does this actually follow? sure, it's follow to nothing. fixed

03:59:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could you put this somewhere cleaner its a pain to read since the rhythm change. hmm, I haven't idea to do it more readable

Nah i don't wanna make flow and other stuff mod generally map is fine there are some overmaps which are totally not necessary that are doesn't effect the map so much, so maybe consider not using them

1. 00:03:424 (1) - tbh i would only use circles in this intro cause yea. It's not relatively that fast bpm and the guitar is going full 1/2 in the intro
2. 00:05:045 (8,1) - swap nc's. Since the "new part" starts at 00:05:045 (8) -
3. 00:06:059 (3) - don't hitsound this with a clap since it's not a snare.
4. 00:06:667 (1) - kinda ehh to skip a triple here when you usually map them
5. 00:19:640 (1) - kinda inconsistent to not map that 1/6 when you sometimes map it and sometimes don't
6. 00:39:909 (1) - i kinda got the idea that red combocolors were for 1/8?
7. 00:40:922 (1) - and green for 1/6
8. 00:48:220 (1) - tbh this stream is really unexpected and feels super overdone with this spacing. And the streamshape isn't really all that beautiful D:
9. 00:57:137 (1) - imo you should emphasize this with spacing since it's a super audible sound
10. 00:57:745 (3) - ^
11. 01:22:271 (5) - two kicksliders would fit the song better imo
12. 02:42:995 (1) - the player usually expects the nc to be on the white tick (sometimes on the red) so this is kinda random. Also the music doesn't really support the bluetick nc
13. 02:45:086 (1) - why did you nc on this kickslider when you didn't nc on a kickslider before
14. 02:45:230 (1) - lol then there is a nc here xd
15. 02:47:971 (1,2,3) - your nc'ing on these seems to be kinda random. Like sometimes you nc every single triple and sometimes they are in groups of two or something. Consistency would be nice!!
16. 02:57:778 (1) - imo you are too concentrated on mapping those downbeats as klickable objects. And in this song it sounds kinda bad tbh since the guitar is mostly on that red tick. It also sounds super random to end this on that snare and that guitar hold sound DDDD: I'd prefer for you to remake the rythms here. Skipping downbeats isn't really that big of a deal in songs like this
17. 03:13:932 (1,2) - mapping this like this feels kinda random to play. This would feel a lot better to play and it's not as confusing
18. 03:19:702 (1) - wanna be consistent with your spacing?

1. 01:24:095 (1) - i don't really understand why you would do this here since the song doesn't really do anything amazing. also the nc seems kinda useless
2. also using higher ds here seems kinda inconsistent tbh
3. 01:29:165 (6) - tbh i'd want that downbeat clickable cause of that guitar and since it's a downbeat and all lol
4. 01:33:827 (3) - you know that the drums are going full manmode here with those 1/8 stuff
5. 01:48:317 (1) - super useless nc!!!
6. 02:10:311 (1) - this might be kinda awkward to play
7. 03:43:067 (5,7) - this overlap looks super awkward!!!
8. 03:44:653 (6) - shouldn't this one be the slider?
9. 03:59:509 (1) - might be kinda confusing since not a lot people are able to sightread this stuff but it might be ok since the spacing is so big
10. 04:05:278 (1) - this will also now confuse the player since this has almost the same spacing as those 1/3 stuff before DDD:
11. 04:08:163 (9,1) - o yea forgot to mention but swapping nc's for these would seem more logical
12. 04:17:610 (1) - same as waji's parts. NC on blue tick is super confusing!!! It also doesn't really fit the song!!!
13. 04:19:918 (1) - pls
14. 04:31:456 (2) - ok this is also really confusing. The song doesn't do anything to support this
15. 04:47:394 (1) - the earlier streams look fine but here it starts to look kinda sloppy and you stopped with those sharp turns

Maakkeli wrote:

hi!!!!!

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1. 01:24:095 (1) - i don't really understand why you would do this here since the song doesn't really do anything amazing. also the nc seems kinda useless you can listen carefully, seems drums are a bit harder than before
2. also using higher ds here seems kinda inconsistent tbh
3. 01:29:165 (6) - tbh i'd want that downbeat clickable cause of that guitar and since it's a downbeat and all lol oh sure
4. 01:33:827 (3) - you know that the drums are going full manmode here with those 1/8 stuff 1/6 maybe lol? I agree, but seems I wanted map guitar here, so it isn't looks bad for rhythm imo
5. 01:48:317 (1) - super useless nc!!! lol
6. 02:10:311 (1) - this might be kinda awkward to play maybe, but I hope it's also fun for playing
7. 03:43:067 (5,7) - this overlap looks super awkward!!! but not for me
8. 03:44:653 (6) - shouldn't this one be the slider? maybe yes, but i still can't be siure
9. 03:59:509 (1) - might be kinda confusing since not a lot people are able to sightread this stuff but it might be ok since the spacing is so big okay fixed
10. 04:05:278 (1) - this will also now confuse the player since this has almost the same spacing as those 1/3 stuff before DDD: but it much less spacing, should be fine
11. 04:08:163 (9,1) - o yea forgot to mention but swapping nc's for these would seem more logical well
12. 04:17:610 (1) - same as waji's parts. NC on blue tick is super confusing!!! It also doesn't really fit the song!!! sure xd
13. 04:19:918 (1) - pls
14. 04:31:456 (2) - ok this is also really confusing. The song doesn't do anything to support this did something lol
15. 04:47:394 (1) - the earlier streams look fine but here it starts to look kinda sloppy and you stopped with those sharp turns did some changes

ye mostly this seems kinda fine to me. Imo waji's intro would need a visual rework (like the first 15-16 seconds) since it looks kinda ehh to me but I'm not that big on visuals
hmmm.... I have kinda mixed feelings about this map, like in a way I really like it and in a way I would rework a lot of stuff. I kinda feel like I have a lot more to say but I don't know how to say it lol
In the meantime have some stars