滋滋
滋磁不如来摸一下呀~sahuang wrote:
滋滋
现在更新了sahuang wrote:
好啊
Placehold
没时间==而且冰果说他的diff没更新bpm不准什么的?
thanks for modWooWooWoo wrote:
HI ^^ M4M( my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/447367 )GeneralI like this mapset. I really do not know about break between 0.97 stars and 1.94, but i think it's ok/ that's okNormalNothing to say. Good JobHardGood Luck with map!!What about OD is 5? For example, for me it's hard to play: thats unexpected jamps without strong beat Zzzz. My acc is ~80% on this diff. So decrease OD for good game is real. will consider it later
01:16:240 (2,3,4) - i think it's overmapped. No need for this triple. there is drum
01:21:940 (2,3) - Good moment for slider. Just try it. Looks better notes are better
01:11:740 (3) - no reason for this jump. Constant spasing is awesome here. drum sound
01:12:340 (1) - ^ same about this slider
01:21:940 (2) - NICE moment for triple. Add circle here 01:22:090 then it will be real overmap
01:24:940 (1) - Bad circle. You should do something with him. Hard to read, hard to play, jump is just huge. I think it's ok
00:43:540 (1) - use 1.2 spacing after slider for this circle. It's really better. heavy sound, so i do a jump
其他的之后一起回Garden wrote:
好听
[General]
no fix prefer current patternsGarden wrote:
[Shad0w1and's Yozora]
- 00:56:740 (3) - 00:57:040 (4) - 都ctrlg比较顺手,和后面的排列也比较一致
- 01:22:540 (1,2) - 每组都ctrlg,这里给一个往上的趋势会好打很多
MoeAsuka wrote:
[Shad0w1and's Yozora]
00:49:840 (1,2,3) - 这里既然要包起来的话还是用弯曲的滑条比较好 感觉差不多
00:52:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉现在这样不是很人性 建议三角跳*2,好像也更适合节奏一点 不用了,这个实际上是最好打的梗
01:22:540 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ 不改
yf_bmp wrote:
[General]
红线的完全错了,是3/4的100bpm,作图的时候应该开1/4
100肯定不对,要么是现在这样,要么就是200的6/8,100重音都不对
PataMon摸够了就不用再找了吧 这大概是这两天最后一次看Hollow Wings wrote:
m4mShad0w1and's Yozora
- 00:47:140 (1,2) - 这边的音都是随机的,随便加音容易被艹。。。 再看看。。感觉不是点击的话勉强能接受
- 00:48:940 (1) - 尾巴甩到上面去,这样00:48:940 (1,2) - 的间距才能拉大。 棒极了
- 00:51:340 (2) - 即使想要维持对称。。。这个间距柑橘打起来比较难受,理由同上。 不改
- 01:11:440 (2) - 放到122,76附近去。 不了
- 像01:22:540 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种1/6跳那么大,就更应该好好考虑1/2和1/1怎么跳,现在更多的只是感觉那里顺手就摆那里,ds完全没考虑的样子,打起来也会怪怪的。 降低了一点点DS
MoeAsuka wrote:
[Normal]
00:19:240 (4) - 加一丁点弯曲啊 好看 好
00:45:490 (1) - 我记得好像normal转盘结束后两拍内不能放东西,弯一个3拍的神滑条来代替吧 这个bpm的话,应该不会有问题
Garden wrote:
好听
[General][Normal]
- e n gap可能有问题 anyway 唔……
[Hard]
- 00:32:740 (4,5,6) - 感觉这里全1/2滑条vocal拆太散了,或许考虑http://puu.sh/oBYr5/39022cf7b3.jpg,排版上可能也更有余裕一点 有道理,但改起来也比较麻烦,感觉现在这样也是可以的
- 00:39:340 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ http://puu.sh/oBYx3/8968ce5233.jpg
- 01:16:240 (2,3,4) - 01:19:990 (2,3) - 好像没有overmap的必要,全diff就这里出现比较突兀,而且spacing已经够难了,当然也可能有音我耳机坏了.. 虽然这里并没有overmap,但是三连全删了
Lily Bread wrote:
as request
[Hard]
好好思考一下kiai里的三连什么时候跟什么时候不跟吧,你现在这样我觉得不算是有结构的节奏 三连全删了
其它没什么问题
gl
yf_bmp wrote:
[Hard]
00:35:440 (2,1) - 细节 唔……没看懂T_T
[Reki] wrote:
好6的bpm
[Hard]
节奏:
1. 01:02:740 (5,6) - 第一感觉这个明显overmap了,仔细听了一下,01:02:740 - 01:03:040 - 还是有隐约的琴的声音的,但是很弱。看了一下其他的摸也提到了这个问题,我提出两个可能的解决方案:
A.加入一个比较柔和的normal音效。 一开始感觉这是overmap,对我来说是因为normal的音量相比于bgm太强了,而且你的其他自定义音效相比之下音量和强度都要弱很多。所以我觉得可以换个normal,把整体的音效的音量稍微提高一点,01:02:740 (5,6) - 就不会显得那么突兀。而且,可以让其他的音效更出色一些。(现在其他音效已经弱的不太感受的到了。)调整了一下音量和音效
B.选择一些bgm更强的地方。比如 00:51:340 - 00:51:490 - 00:51:640 - 我觉得这种地方其实蛮合适下3连或者短滑条什么的。(而且我觉得挺有必要的,不然显得节奏好生硬)这里还是保留
2.01:16:240 (2) - 有点overmap http://puu.sh/oC6zW/d71958f4eb.jpg 直接这样,或者 http://puu.sh/oC6BF/0ac9a80663.jpg (滑条尾降点音量)
不是很确定:( 00:45:490 (1) - 其实我觉得这个转盘开始的时间有点点奇怪,可以往后面挪一点) 这种note后接转盘实际意思就是给重音一个可以打的东西(因为转盘开头没音效也没打击感),然后尽快接一个转盘(因为不能同时),还是挺常见的
排列:
1. 00:23:740 (1,2,3,4) - 虽然是合理的,但是鉴于这么柔和的曲风,觉得不要变ds比较好。(而且全曲只有这里用了吧) 这个难度ds还是有不少变化的,很多重音都会远
2.00:34:540 (1,2,3) - 同上,有点怪怪的
不懂easy和normal qwq
Good Luck with map!!
谢谢各位~Hollow Wings wrote:
m4mHard
- hitnormal的音量太大了,建议调低一点。 没动音量,但是换成虾抖难度的soft-hitnormal音效了
- 01:16:240 (2,3,4) - 和01:19:540 (1,2,3) - ,全图就这俩stream,介于你这个是hard,要不就直接都改成滑条,这样你mapset也不容易被挑一点。。。 三连全删了
- 总体没啥问题,不过柑橘太过爽巴平,没有做梗的痕迹或者说依旧没有给人有种故意要去摆什么的感觉,在保持目前这种节奏和排版的质量下努力去搞一些花样试试吧。 嘛,以后慢慢来喽~
怎么才能像HW一样屌啊哎,好好的一个神作,第二季被做成了后宫,简直了。。。Normal
- 00:45:490 (1,1) - 似乎要2/1的gap呢,不过介于bpm那么低,或许不改也行。嗯这个bpm应该没问题
- 别的好像没啥,柑橘还行。
good luck
谢摸~Hakurei Yoru wrote:
M4M
[Normal]
01:15:040 (3,5) - 叠好 嗯
好看 nice
[Hard]
01:01:540 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5053955 大概这样好一下,目前是4的距离有点偏了 唔,感觉1.8不算大的,还有不少2+,这里重音远点应该没问题
01:09:640 (1) - NC必要不大,这里有引导线会更好 嘛,一个正三角给个nc嘛,影响不大
00:21:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - 对于全图大部分的地方,这里弧度相对太平了一点…… 唔……好细致,不过这次改起来也有点麻烦,感觉不算特别需要改,先保留
00:43:540 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这……比副歌还跳,然后也是太直了,可玩性不是很好。 这里其实还好,首先只有三个(1)跳了,其次sv1的2.0X相当于sv1.2的1.67,副歌大量比1.67大的,并没有比副歌大。形状的话还是觉得现在这样比较漂亮
厉害厉害 加油
谢摸~DMTfarc wrote:
from m4m req
这个BPM真是666666
[Normal]
不错
[Hard]good luck
00:22:840 (4,5) - DS hard不会死压ds的,重音就跳
00:24:640 (2,3) - ^
01:07:240 (2,3) - ^
01:14:140 (1,2) - 对称更好看 这里我是考虑声音高低
01:05:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个梗不错,我拿走了 233
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谢谢lfj~jonathanlfj wrote:
[General]
offset -5ms 我姑且觉得现在还算准0.0比如00:56:140 (1) - 00:59:740 (4) - 这类鼓声,要是继续减offset感觉似乎会更奇怪>_<
把游戏制作商Aquaplus加到tag里面吧 好
[Normal]
00:16:540 (1,2) - 没包好 其实本来没想包。如果觉得不好看的话,那改吧
01:13:840 (7,1) - 这里flow有点别扭,01:14:140 (1) - 逆时针旋转一下 改了一下
[Hard]
00:30:340 (2) - 试试 x:356 y:160 这里姑且考虑了音高高低和上下的位置关系,虽然不够明显,不过还是保留吧
01:02:140 (3,4,5) - 这里flow不是很舒服,01:02:740 (5) - 建议你换个方向摆 好
01:21:940 (2,3) - 间距再远一点保证连01:22:540 (4) 的舒畅性 好
http://puu.sh/oGV5T/6ed6f9415b.zipjonathanlfj wrote:
[Shad0w1and's Yozora]
可以用HP6,drain并不会太快 5.5
00:47:140 (1) - 这个是1/8 这个肯定不是1/8,我本来想略过最后几个音保持统一。既然你说了snap问题,那我改成实际的...感觉有点坑。
00:47:740 (2) - 这里可以改成1/6滑条接个圈在00:48:040 (圈上放clap) 上面那个改的比较坑,这个就善良点保留了,clap加上了
00:54:340 (1,2,3) - 间距没弄好 尽力了
01:03:790 (2) - 可以叠到01:04:240 (4) 尾巴上 不了
01:19:990 (2,3) - 这两个可以不用叠在滑条尾巴上,拿出来能增加flow的顺滑性 故意切断的,下一句歌词本来想加大间距找不到位置放故意砍断motion
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456,328,38140,5,4,0:0:0:0:
364,276,39040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,324,39940,1,4,0:0:0:0:
180,276,40840,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,360,41740,2,0,P|56:324|16:248,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,43540,2,0,P|75:128|86:42,2,150,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,46240,6,0,P|281:203|356:199,2,150,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,88,48940,5,4,0:0:0:0:
280,48,49840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,88,50740,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,176,51640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,280,52540,2,0,P|376:336|296:356,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,356,54340,2,0,P|133:333|81:280,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,176,56140,5,4,0:0:0:0:
148,96,57040,2,0,L|312:96,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,172,58840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,172,59740,1,4,0:0:0:0:
420,264,60640,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,296,61540,2,0,L|164:344,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,340,63340,5,4,0:0:0:0:
128,252,64240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,180,65140,2,0,P|48:104|80:36,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,72,66940,2,0,P|260:60|340:72,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,32,68740,2,0,P|456:92|456:200,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,220,70540,6,0,P|368:300|388:372,2,150,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,174,73240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,68,74140,2,0,P|392:88|356:176,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,264,75940,2,0,P|240:276|176:236,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,336,77740,6,0,P|80:284|76:208,2,150,2|8|0,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:3:0:0:
232,356,80440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,268,81340,2,0,P|280:195|228:140,1,150,2|8,0:3|0:0,0:3:0:0:
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256,192,84940,12,0,89440,0:0:0:0:
谢谢!jonathanlfj wrote:
ok
thanks a lot!Kyubey wrote:
Simple map, I can't see any errors here, so I'll just push it forward.